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* BackupFromOtherworld: See Necromancy below.
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Laura can sense when Herbert uses Hex Marks the Spot on her before it takes effect. [[Unfortunatly, that's not enough to save her mother.]]
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Laura can sense when Herbert uses Hex Marks the Spot on her before it takes effect. [[Unfortunatly, [[spoiler: Unfortunately, that's not enough to save her mother.]]
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* {{Wingdinglish}}: Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. It appears to be the same language used by Scarlet Witch in the first issue of ''ComicBook/UncannyAvengers''.
** Here's an incomplete [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un cypher]] based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.
** Here's an incomplete [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un cypher]] based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.
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* {{Wingdinglish}}: Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. It appears to be the same language used by Scarlet Witch in the first issue of ''ComicBook/UncannyAvengers''.
and Loki for their spells.
** Here'san incomplete a [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un com/a/yHvH6hU cypher]] based on that lines up with examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.comic.
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* CypherLanguage: Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. It appears to be the same language used by Scarlet Witch in the first issue of ''ComicBook/UncannyAvengers''.
** Here's an incomplete [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un cypher]] based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.
** Here's an incomplete [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un cypher]] based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.
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* {{Wingdinglish}}: Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. It appears to be the same language used by Scarlet Witch in the first issue of ''ComicBook/UncannyAvengers''.
** Here's an incomplete [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un cypher]] based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.
** Here's an incomplete [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un cypher]] based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.
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* CypherLanguage: Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. It appears to be the same language used by Scarlet Witch in the first issue of ''ComicBook/UncannyAvengers''.
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* SelfAppliedNickname: Gavrill is the first to call herself Speed Weasel, and she repeatedly reminds people to call her it.
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* DoNotCallMePaul: Gavrill Kinney prefers to be called Speed Weasel.
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* DoNotCallMePaul: Downplayed. Gavrill Kinney prefers to be called Speed Weasel.Weasel, but she doesn't hate being called Gavrill, it's just a personal preference.
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* MySignificanceSenseIsTingling: Laura can sense when Herbert uses Hex Marks the Spot on her before it takes effect. [[Unfortunatly, that's not enough to save her mother.
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* StaticCharacter: Herbert has the chance to go through CharacterDevelopment, but he refuses to change his ways.
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** Here's an incomplete [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un Here's an incomplete cypher cypher]] based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.]]
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** [[https://imgur.com/a/caaj0un Here's an incomplete cypher based on examples found in this comic and ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', including Laura's back-up comic, ''Late Dinner''.]]
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* CypherLanguage: Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. Unlike their later use in ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', the translations in this book actually have consistency.
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* DependingOnTheWriter: Unlike their later use in ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', the translations of Laura's Lost Tongues in this book actually have consistency.
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* {{Conlang}}: A simple variant. Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. Unlike their later use in ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', the translations in this book actually line up correctly.
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* {{Conlang}}: A simple variant. CypherLanguage: Laura speaks in the Lost Tongues which, written out, are just English with the letters replaced by various symbols. Unlike their later use in ''ComicBook/SecretWarps'', the translations in this book actually line up correctly.have consistency.
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* SuperBreedingProgram: {{Inverted}}. After 22 attempts at creating a perfect vessel, all to which failed, Herbert and Sarah decided to deliberately create a flawed vessel in the hopes that Mephicthton would accept it. That vessel was named Laura.
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* BabysFirstWords: Laura's first word - which she said ''shortly after being born'' - was her name. '''In the [[LostLanguage Lost Tongues]]'''.
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* LoveIsAWeakness: ZigZagged. Herbert clearly loves Sarah,[[spoiler: though not enough to spare her life,]] yet he views her maternal love for Laura as an obstacle on their road to summoning Mephicthton.
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* LoveIsAWeakness: ZigZagged. Herbert clearly loves Sarah,[[spoiler: Sarah, [[spoiler: though not enough to spare her life,]] yet he views her maternal love for Laura as an obstacle on their road to summoning Mephicthton.
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* LoveIsAWeakness: ZigZagged. Herbert clearly loves Sarah,[[spoiler: though not enough to spare her life,]] yet he views her maternal love for Laura as an obstacle on their road to summoning Mephicthton.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Herbert and Sarah are a happy couple [[spoiler at the start of the first issue]].
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Herbert and Sarah are a happy couple [[spoiler at the start of the first issue]].
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* BecomingTheMask: A rare non-romantic example. Sarah deciding to carry and birth Laura herself is what leads to her eventual HeelFaceTurn.
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* LittleMissBadass: Speed Weasel is around 10 years old and has the combined powers of Quicksilver and Honey Badger/Scout.
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* PintSizedPowerhouse: Gavrill Kinney - sorry, [[InsistentTerminology Speed Weasel]]. She's around 10 years old and has helped her sister fight a demon.
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* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: [[spoiler: Laura]] is around eight years older than [[spoiler: Gavrill]].
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* SingleSexOffspring: Herbert and Sarah have two daughters.
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* VagueAge: The first issue takes place over the course of 18-19 years, starting before Laura's conception and ending on what is presumably her 18th birthday. Ironically, during that time, Laura herself is the only character who visibly ages. The second issue takes place over the course of less than a day.
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* VagueAge: The first issue takes place over the course of 18-19 years, starting before Laura's conception and ending on what is presumably her 18th birthday. The second issue takes place over the course of less than a day. Ironically, during that time, Laura herself is the only character who visibly ages. The second issue takes place over the course of less than a day.
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** Sarah's hair starts off short and spiky, staying like that from before Laura's conception to when Laura is 5. By the time Laura is 10, Sarah's hair is neck-length, and it stays that way until [[spoiler: her death.]]
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** Hellhound's only physical change is that, when Laura is 5, Hellhound has a pair of horns that weren't there three years earlier. Even her hair length stays fairly consistent.
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** Herbert Wyndham is the biggest offender, going through absolutely ''no physical changes'' during the two decades that pass over the course of Issue 1. Even his '''mohawk''' stays the same length. Justified, since he has an assortment of magical abilities, some of which could easily allow him to slow down his aging or stop it entirely.
