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* VagueAge: The first issue takes place over the course of 18-19 years, starting before Laura's conception and ending on what is presumably her 18th birthday. During that time, Laura herself is the only character who visibly ages. The second issue takes place over the course of less than a day.
** Hellhound's only physical change is that, when Laura is 5, Hellhound has a pair of horns that weren't there three years earlier. Even her hair length stays fairly consistent.
** Sarah's hair starts off short and spiky, staying like that from before Laura's conception to when Laura is 5. By the time Laura is 10, Sarah's hair is neck-length, and it stays that way until [[spoiler: her death.]]
** Hellhound's only physical change is that, when Laura is 5, Hellhound has a pair of horns that weren't there three years earlier. Even her hair length stays fairly consistent.
** Sarah's hair starts off short and spiky, staying like that from before Laura's conception to when Laura is 5. By the time Laura is 10, Sarah's hair is neck-length, and it stays that way until [[spoiler: her death.]]
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* IGotBigger: The first half of Issue 1 shows Laura's birth, then shows her at age 2, 5, 10, 17, and finally 18.
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* BlackSheep: Strangely enough, ''Herbert'' is a {{Downplayed}} example of this. Out of him, Sarah, Laura, and Gavrill, he's the only one who never develops a sense of empathy, and he's the only one whose devotion to Mephicthton never falters.
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* UnholyMatrimony: Herbert and Sarah are a married couple trying to create a vessel for the demon Mephicthton.
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* VillainousParentalInstinct: Sarah develops this as Laura grows up. Herbert…not so much.
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* PromotionToParent: Laura has to take care of Gavrill after [[spoiler: Sarah's death.]]
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* PermissiveParents: Herbert has Hellhound teach Laura to fight from a young age. Justified, since he’s planning to sacrifice her to a demon.
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* ParentsAsPeople: We're introduced to Herbert and Sarah before they have Laura, and they both go through CharacterDevelopment.
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* ParentsAsPeople: We're introduced to Herbert and Sarah before they have Laura, and they both go Laura. She goes through CharacterDevelopment.CharacterDevelopment, but he doesn't.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Herbert and Hellhound have no problem hurting Speed Weasel and try to use her as a demonic sacrifice in Laura's place.
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* WouldHurtAChild: WouldHurtAChild:
** Herbertand Hellhound have no problem hurting Speed Weasel and try tries to use her Gavrill as a demonic sacrifice in Laura's place.place.
** Hellhound inflicts serious injuries on Laura during their training, which started when Laura was no older than ten.
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** Hellhound inflicts serious injuries on Laura during their training, which started when Laura was no older than ten.
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* RedIsViolent: Laura is just as violent as [[ComicBook/{{X23}} her]] [[ComicBook/ScarletWitch namesakes]], if not more so.
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* RedIsViolent: RedIsViolent:
** Laura is just as violent as [[ComicBook/{{X23}} her]] [[ComicBook/ScarletWitch namesakes]], if not moreso.so.
** Like Laura, Wyndham's powers are red, and he's more than capable of holding his own in a fight.
** Laura is just as violent as [[ComicBook/{{X23}} her]] [[ComicBook/ScarletWitch namesakes]], if not more
** Like Laura, Wyndham's powers are red, and he's more than capable of holding his own in a fight.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Herbert and Hellhound have no problem injuring and even killing Speed Weasel.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Herbert and Hellhound have no problem injuring and even killing hurting Speed Weasel.Weasel and try to use her as a demonic sacrifice in Laura's place.
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18 years prior in this world, the 22nd attempt of the occult/scientific sect known as the Evolutionaries to create a vessel for the demonic Mephicthton had failed. Co-lead scientist Sarah Kinney posed the theory she and her lover Herbert Wyndham needed to stop trying to create a perfect specimen, but instead make something flawed. To this end, Sarah herself decided to conceive their next subject. Combining their best enchantments and enhancements, Sarah was impregnated and gave birth to a mutant girl, whom Sarah named Laura.
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* DeliverUsFromEvil: Downplayed. The birth of Laura caused Sarah to gradually become more empathetic, while Herbert did not follow suit.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Speed Weasel gets this from Quicksilver.
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* ArchnemesisDad: Dr. Herbert Wyndham is this to Laura.
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* SummonBiggerFish: Laura defeats Herbert by [[spoiler: calling upon the spirits of those who died for his madness to destroy him.]]
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* {{Necromancy}}: Laura's Novis Sed Hexorcismus spell is this.
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* BigNo: Herbert has one after [[spoiler: Laura obliterates Hellhound.]]
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Laura kills a snake and tries to eat its guts. [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior At the age of ''two''.]]
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** Laura kills a snake and tries to eat itsguts. [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior At the guts at age of ''two''.]]2.
** Gavrill demands to be called Speed Weasel, then demonstrates her SuperSpeed when asked why.
** Laura kills a snake and tries to eat its
** Gavrill demands to be called Speed Weasel, then demonstrates her SuperSpeed when asked why.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Laura kills a snake and tries to eat its guts. [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior At the age of ''two''.]]
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* ParentsAsPeople: We're introduced to Herbert and Sarah before they have Laura, and they both go through CharacterDevelopment.
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''[cut to Laura laying on the her back, very much alive despite her arms and legs having been cut off.
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''[cut to Laura laying on the her back, very much alive despite her arms and legs having been cut off.]''
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* WouldHurtAChild: Herbert and Hellhound have no problem injuring and even killing Speed Weasel.
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* {{Determinator}}: Weapon Hex when she has to save Speed Weasel from being sacrificed.
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* GilliganCut: When Herbert and Hellhound are preparing to sacrifice Speed Weasel:
-->'''Gavrill:''' My sister is gonna kick your butts.\\
'''Hellhound:''' Your sister is ''dead''.\\
''[cut to Laura laying on the her back, very much alive despite her arms and legs having been cut off.
-->'''Gavrill:''' My sister is gonna kick your butts.\\
'''Hellhound:''' Your sister is ''dead''.\\
''[cut to Laura laying on the her back, very much alive despite her arms and legs having been cut off.
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* {{BFS}}: Like Magik, Hellhound has a massive blue magical sword.
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-->'''Gavrill (to Hellhound):''' What's with that sword? [[BFS It's so big.]] You think people are gonna drive by and not see it? Hey, the big weird store called - they want their sword back. It's big.
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-->'''Gavrill (to Hellhound):''' What's with that sword? [[BFS [[{{BFS}} It's so big.]] You think people are gonna drive by and not see it? Hey, the big weird store called - they want their sword back. It's big.
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* XCalledTheyWantTheirYBack: Speed Weasel is a ''snarky'' hyperactive child.
-->'''Gavrill (to Hellhound):''' What's with that sword? [[BFS It's so big.]] You think people are gonna drive by and not see it? Hey, the big weird store called - they want their sword back. It's big.
-->'''Gavrill (to Hellhound):''' What's with that sword? [[BFS It's so big.]] You think people are gonna drive by and not see it? Hey, the big weird store called - they want their sword back. It's big.
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* KickTheDog: Herbert [[spoiler: uses Hex Marks the Spot to make Laura kill Sarah.]]
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** Herbert [[spoiler: uses Hex Marks the Spot to make Laura kill Sarah.]]
** Hellhound [[spoiler: kills Bavel.]]
** Herbert [[spoiler: uses Hex Marks the Spot to make Laura kill Sarah.]]
** Hellhound [[spoiler: kills Bavel.]]
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* TrainingFromHell: Hellhound puts Weapon Hex through this.
