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* ShoutOut: Whiz-Kid declares on turning the new Breakworld bullet into a BFG is how he has a giant space gun. "[[Film/DieHard Ho. Ho. Ho.]]"
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* ShoutOut: Whiz-Kid declares on turning the new Breakworld bullet Wiz Kid ends up quoting ''Film/DieHard'' after transforming a HumongousMecha into an equally-large {{BFG}}:
-->''"Now I have aBFG is how he has a giant space gun. "[[Film/DieHard Ho. Ho. Ho.]]"planet-sized super-gun. Ho, ho, ho."''
-->''"Now I have a
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Khora of the Burning Heart, having grown up in a nigh-literal hellscape where every day was a battle for survival. She doesn't realize that someone declaring themselves a warrior is ''not'' ground to immediately chuck a knife in their face.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Khora of the Burning Heart, having grown up in a nigh-literal hellscape where every day was a battle for survival. She doesn't realize that someone declaring themselves a warrior is ''not'' ground grounds to immediately chuck a knife in their face.
