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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Three major characters use magic throughout the story. Each one has a unique color for almost all of their spells, and their colors symbolize something about their personality or role in the story:
** Garth: Yellow, symbolizing his childish innocence.
** Frank: Light blue, symbolizing his [[BlueIsHeroic heroism]]. Notably, the nicer and less self-centered he becomes throughout the story, the more he uses his powers.
** Vaugner: Lime green, symbolizing his [[SicklyGreenGlow sinister and duplicitous nature]].
** Garth: Yellow, symbolizing his childish innocence.
** Frank: Light blue, symbolizing his [[BlueIsHeroic heroism]]. Notably, the nicer and less self-centered he becomes throughout the story, the more he uses his powers.
** Vaugner: Lime green, symbolizing his [[SicklyGreenGlow sinister and duplicitous nature]].
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* TheDragon: Lockjaw is Vaugner's top enforcer, and seemingly the most intelligent of Vaugner's bug minions.
* TheDragon: Lockjaw is Vaugner's top enforcer, and seemingly the most intelligent of Vaugner's bug minions.
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* TheDragon: Lockjaw is Vaugner's top
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* LeanAndMean: Vaugner, the BigBad, is an unnaturally tall and skinny man.
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* DisappearedDad: Garth's dad ran away. He started another family in Florida, but Garth believes he left them as well.
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* PsychoPoodle: PlayedForLaughs. When Frank breaks into a house to catch a ghost, he is attacked by a poodle with the temperament of an AngryGuardDog. It bites him on the nose.
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* PsychoPoodle: PlayedForLaughs. When Frank breaks into a house to catch a ghost, he is attacked by a rather large poodle with the temperament of an AngryGuardDog. It bites him on the nose.
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* {{Revenge}}: Vaugner wants to kill Garth, regardless of whether-or-not he's an actual threat, because that's the best way he knows of to hurt Claire.
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* {{Revenge}}: Vaugner wants to kill Garth, regardless of whether-or-not he's an actual threat, because that's the best way he knows of to hurt Claire.Claire for "betraying" him by breaking up with him.
* SicklyGreenGlow: Vaugner, the BigBad, is frequently associated with the color lime green. It's the color of his magic, as well as the energy at his power plant.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never see Lockjaw again after he goes to Earth.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never see UncertainDoom: Lockjaw again is last seen getting transported to Earth, with the Plasmapod that brought him there crashing onto a golfer's cart in California. It's unclear what happened to him after this, but considering that he's a human-sized cockroach, it's unlikely that people are going to react too kindly to him.
* WonderfulWerewolf: Claire's uncle is a werewolf who works as a fortune teller in Ghostopolis. While hegoes to Earth.does briefly threaten violence when Frank presses his BerserkButton, he never actually harms anyone. Instead, he's just a nice old man who cares about his niece.
* WonderfulWerewolf: Claire's uncle is a werewolf who works as a fortune teller in Ghostopolis. While he
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* IChooseToStay: Happens to [[spoiler:Frank Grimes, as he is now a ghost after his HeroicSacrifice, so that he can be forever with his ghost girlfriend Claire.]]
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* IChooseToStay: Happens to [[spoiler:Frank Grimes, Gallows, as he is now a ghost after his HeroicSacrifice, so that he can be forever with his ghost girlfriend Claire.]]
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%% * CrystalDragonJesus: Joe, a mysterious Tuskagee pilot.
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%%* GentleGiant: Joe, the Tuskagee Airman who built Ghostopolis
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* GentleGiant: Joe, the Tuskagee Airman who built
* HealthyInHeaven: Ghosts can retain their physical impairments in the afterlife, but before being shepherded to what's heavily implied to be Heaven, all travelers are healed before entering.
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* LittlestCancerPatient: Garth is a young boy who is dying of an unspecified illness.
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* LittlestCancerPatient: Garth is a young boy who is dying of an unspecified terminal illness.[[spoiler: Fortunately it turns out that a cure will be discovered before it kills him, and he'll go on to start a family.]]
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* MissingMom: Garth's mom ran away.
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* MissingMom: MessianicArchetype: The architect of Ghostopolis, Joe, is implied to be Jesus Christ, what with his carpentry skills to construct the entirety of Ghostopolis, his stigmata wounds and [[spoiler:healing infirmed souls before shepherding them into what's implied to be Heaven.]]
* DisappearedDad: Garth'smom dad ran away.away. He started another family in Florida, but Garth believes he left them as well.
* DisappearedDad: Garth's
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* ObviousJudas: Played for laughs when the protagonists run into the ghost of Benedict Arnold; there's maybe a fraction of a second where it looks like he'll help them, than he immediately sells them out to the villains while standing right next to them. Towards the end of the book they run into him again and Frank makes sure to call him a jerk, to which Benedict says "sorry, but it's in my nature!".
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: The story opens with [[DownerBeginning Garth's mom visiting a fifth doctor to be told his condition is terminal.]]
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* DeaderThanDead: It's possible for a ghost to be disintegrated by immense energy or the rayguns Vaunger's forces use. This is treated like a second death.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Cecil looks approximately 10 years old, despite being the ghost of a 60-to-70-year old man.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Cecil looks approximately 10 years old, despite being the ghost of a 60-to-70-year old man. He gradually realizes his true age over the course of the story.
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%% * ThePowerOfHate: [[spoiler:The source of Vaugner's immense strength during his fight against Garth.]]
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* ResidualSelfImage: Ghosts can appear whatever age they want, literally only as old as they feel. Garth meets his grandfather who initially takes the form of a child, but after meeting him undergoes RapidAging until realizing his true age in the end.
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You don't sound too sure yourself
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* CoversAlwaysLie: The cover ''kind of'' makes it look like it'll be a supernatural western. It's not.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:In his gigantic form and with the help of Frank, Garth defeats the giant Vaugner, but at the cost of Frank's own lifem making him a ghost. However, now Frank can stick around with his ghost girlfriend, Claire, who takes over the late Bone King's role as the new Lord of the Afterlife. Also, it turns out Garth will be cured of his incurable disease, according to his future son, which means that he will be reunited with his mother back home]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:In his gigantic form and with the help of Frank, Garth defeats the giant Vaugner, but at the cost of Frank's own lifem life, making him a ghost. However, now Frank can stick around with his ghost girlfriend, Claire, who takes over the late Bone King's role as the new Lord of the Afterlife. Also, it turns out Garth will be cured of his incurable disease, according to his future son, which means that he will be reunited with his mother back home]].
