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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Meta-wise; [[spoiler: WordOfGod states that his secondary Thinker ability, which makes him practically untouchable, would be useless if he was outside ''Worm'''s story's setting and instead somewhere like the DC universe, where he would easily be defeated due to the lack of a Shard system. This is especially erroneous when WordOfGod also states that the Endbringer Tohu would be able to copy the powers of heroes in other Shardless worlds.]]
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Meta-wise; [[spoiler: WordOfGod [[spoiler:WordOfGod states that his secondary Thinker ability, which makes him practically untouchable, untouchable to parahumans, would be useless if he was outside ''Worm'''s story's setting and instead somewhere like the DC universe, where he would easily be defeated due to the lack of a Shard system. This is especially erroneous when WordOfGod also states that the Endbringer Tohu would be able to copy the powers of heroes in other Shardless worlds.system.]]
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[[folder:Jack Slash '''(Unmarked Spoilers)''']]
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[[folder:Jack Slash '''(Unmarked '''(Major Spoilers)''']]
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Meta-wise; [[spoiler: WordOfGod states that his secondary Thinker ability, which makes him practically untouchable, would be useless if he was outside ''Worm'''s story's setting and instead somewhere like the DC universe, where he would easily be defeated due to the lack of a Shard system. This is especially erroneous when WordOfGod also states that the Endbringer Tohu would be able to copy the powers of heroes in other Shardless worlds.]]
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* AxCrazy: All members of the Nine are some shade of this, but Jack as the leader and one of the founding members sets the example. As Theo lampshades it, Jack is little more than a petty and egomaniacal sociopath who did '''nothing''' his whole life other than spreading bloodshed, both by killing countless people himself and having other do absolutely horrible things.
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* AxCrazy: All members of the Nine are some shade of this, but Jack as the leader and one of the founding members sets the example. As Theo lampshades it, Jack is little more than a petty and egomaniacal sociopath who did '''nothing''' his whole life other than spreading bloodshed, both by killing countless people himself and having other others do absolutely horrible things.
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* TheCorrupter: His specialty, [[spoiler:and how he brings about the end of the world when he causes Scion's FaceHeelTurn]].
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* TheCorrupter: His specialty, specialty is breaking capes so that they will become their absolute worst selves, [[spoiler:and how he brings about the end of the world when he causes Scion's FaceHeelTurn]].
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* SeeminglyProfoundFool: Jack has an unnverving skill when it comes to analyzing and breaking parahumans mentally through pure charisma. However, [[spoiler:this is solely due to his secondary power feeding him the weaknesses of his parahuman victims. This power doesn't work on non-parahumans so he would come off as shallow and uncharismatic to them if he ever cared enough to interact with them]].
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* SeeminglyProfoundFool: Jack has an unnverving unnerving skill when it comes to analyzing and breaking parahumans mentally through pure charisma. However, [[spoiler:this is solely due to his secondary power feeding him the weaknesses of his parahuman victims. This power doesn't work on non-parahumans so he would come off as shallow and uncharismatic to them if he ever cared enough to interact with them]].
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* AxCrazy: All members of the Nine are some shade of this, but Jack as the leader and one of the founding members sets the example. As Theo lampshades it, Jack is little more than a petty and egomaniacal sociopath who did '''nothing''' his whole life other than spreading bloodshed, both by killing countless people himself and having other do absolutely horrible things.
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* HiddenDepths: Of the negative kind. With the reveal of the of his [[spoiler: second power, it becomes clear that Jack is neither a particulary competent supervillain nor a charismatic manipulator. It's heavily implied that he would have died long ago if it wasn't for the Broadcast ability, and ultimately is, as Theo puts it, "sad, pathetic killer with delusions of grandeur".]]
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* TheHeavy: Though Jack doesn't appear often, it's his destiny to set off the apocalypse that drives most of the plot, and stopping him becomes Taylor's primary motivation after she dethrones Coil.
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* TheHeavy: Though Jack doesn't appear often, is not the one who will directly end the world as predicted by Dinah, it's his destiny to set off the this apocalypse that drives most of the plot, and stopping him becomes Taylor's primary motivation after she dethrones Coil.
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* TheHeavy: Collectively with the Slaughterhouse Nine, they are the primary antagonists of the setting, but [[spoiler:Scion]] remains the series' true BigBad.
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* TheHeavy: Collectively with the Slaughterhouse Nine, they Nine; though Jack's roving band of serial killers are directly responsible for causing the end of the world, the sheer devastation wrought by the Endbringers around the globe makes them the ''de facto'' the primary antagonists of the setting, but at least until [[spoiler:Scion]] remains reveals himself as the series' true BigBad.BigBad in the final arcs.
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* ArcVillain: TheLeader of Slaughterhouse Nine and the main villain during their arcs.
* ClimaxBoss: [[spoiler:Jack's defeat directly instigates Scion's turn to villainy, beginning the end of the world and the climax of the story.]]
* TheHeavy: Though Jack doesn't appear often, it's his destiny to set off the apocalypse that drives most of the plot, and stopping him becomes Taylor's primary motivation after she dethrones Coil.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: As the story progresses, a lot of problems in the Wormverse are traced back to them. Dragon herself rates them as being on the same level as the Endbringers and the Slaughterhouse Nine in terms of their danger to the world. [[spoiler:However, they're knocked out of the BigBad role by Scion, and end up being more of an extremely amoral and [[MachiavelliWasWrong surprisingly ineffectual]] BigGood]].
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* GreaterScopeVillain: As the story progresses, a lot of problems in the Wormverse are traced back to them. Dragon herself rates them as being on the same level as the Endbringers and the Slaughterhouse Nine in terms of their danger to the world. [[spoiler:However, they're knocked out of the BigBad role by Scion, and end up being more of an extremely amoral and [[MachiavelliWasWrong surprisingly ineffectual]] attempt at being the BigGood]].
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* SeeminglyProfoundFool: Jack has an unnverving skill when it comes to analyzing and breaking parahumans mentally through pure charisma. However, [[spoiler:this is solely due to his secondary power feeding him the weaknesses of his parahuman victims. This power doesn't work on non-parahumans so he would come off as shallow and uncharismatic to them if he ever cared enough to interact with them]].
