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* SugarAndIcePersonality: Suvi can be quite supportive and sweet towards those she cares about, showing a strong protective streak towards Ame and Eursolon and acting as as surrogate CoolBigSis to Steel's children... but she's all cold steel against anyone who has wronged her or the Citadel, whether it's with her words or her magic.
* ActionMom: A mother to multiple children as well as Suvi's ParentalSubstitute, and an extremely powerful wizard.
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!! Suvirin KedberiketKedberiket / [[spoiler: The Wizard Sky]]
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* IKnowYourTrueName: Since knowing one's Name means to hold power over them, a graduate of the Citadel is ritually provided with a Name Cloak, erasing all mentions of its wielder's name from memory and replacing it instead with their Wizard Name. Only individuals who have received the wielder's original name in person, in written form can remember it, and even then, should they speak it out loud, any other individual to hear it, unless they too have received the name, will only hear the new one. As of the second arc, Suvi has received her new name: she is the Wizard [[spoiler: Sky]].
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* MeaningfulName: Wizard names beginning with "S" are hinted to hold a particularly high status. Appropriately, Suvi's Wizard Name is [[spoiler: Sky.]]
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* TheManTheyCouldntHang: Was hanged for treason.
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* TheUndead: There are rumors that he fled to Port Talon ''after'' being hanged for treason, and that he came back from the dead to take vengeance on those who still drew breath. While his motives are still unknown, the rest of the rumor is correct.
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The daughter of two wizards of the Imperial Citadel. As a child, Suvi was sent to live with the witch Grandmother Wren for a summer when her parents went off on a dangerous mission. After learning her parents died, Suvi returned to the Citadel to begin her own wizard training, rising through the ranks to become apprentice to the archmage himself. Now as an adult, she gets word that Grandmother Ren is dying, and on a trip to see her old caretaker and say goodbye one last time, gets thrust into a new adventure that will reunite her with old friends and lead her to uncover some powerful magical secrets.
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The daughter of two wizards of the Imperial Citadel. As a child, Suvi was sent to live with the witch Grandmother Wren for a summer when her parents went off on a dangerous mission. After learning her parents died, Suvi returned to the Citadel to begin her own wizard training, rising through the ranks to become an apprentice to one of the archmage himself. archmages. Now as an adult, she gets word that Grandmother Ren Wren is dying, and on a trip to see her old caretaker and say goodbye one last time, gets thrust into a new adventure that will reunite her with old friends and lead her to uncover some powerful magical secrets.
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* AchillesInHisTent: Petulantly refuses to help during [[spoiler: Naram's rampage]] as her pride was hurt by being insulted by Orima, scolded by Steel and having her prejudices regarding Spirits ignored by the party.
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* AchillesInHisTent: Petulantly refuses Having been unnecessary in [[spoiler: rescuing Ame and treating with Orima, then getting scolded by Steel for sneaking out of Port Talon to help do so]], she decides to stay in her room during [[spoiler: Naram's rampage]] as rampage]], not feeling she has anything to add. When [[spoiler: Orima's plants start to encroach on the city and Sergeant Laplo asks her pride was hurt by being insulted by Orima, scolded by Steel for help]], she is confronted with a situation where she feels both the ability and having her prejudices regarding Spirits ignored by obligation to help and rides to the party.city's defense.
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** She embarks on a journey with Ame to recover Wavebreaker without checking in with the Citadel or at least informing them of her whereabouts, causing Steel to assume she has been killed or captured.
** She blithely throws around her status as an apprentice archmage to try to get passage on a ship despite knowing that her country is actively at war, [[spoiler:causing an assassin to take interest and try to kill the party while they are at sea]].
** She does this again in episode 9, pursuing Ame outside the city walls despite Steel's direct orders to stay put. Steel is understandably furious and court-martials Suvi in response.
* TheEmpire: Is naively unaware that she is being groomed as a crony of an oppressive imperial force, though her experiences during the campaign seem to be opening her eyes somewhat.
* FantasticRacism: Believes the Spirits to be dangerous and barbaric, neglecting to help for much of [[spoiler: Naram's rampage]] because she felt her advice was not heeded regarding how uncontrollable Spirits could be.
* HairTriggerTemper: Suvi's sense of entitlement and immense magical talent have made her ill-equipped for diplomacy or empathy and she meets most obstacles with threats of violence if her authority is not recognised.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Xenophobia and elitism aside, Suvi does care for those she knows personally.
* LadyOfBlackMagic: She may only be an ''apprentice'' mage at the moment, but she's definitely on the way to becoming one of these. She's got the dignified and haughty attitude, the predilection for offensive magic, and definitely the [[IceQueen coldness]] down pat.
** She blithely throws around her status as an apprentice archmage to try to get passage on a ship despite knowing that her country is actively at war, [[spoiler:causing an assassin to take interest and try to kill the party while they are at sea]].
** She does this again in episode 9, pursuing Ame outside the city walls despite Steel's direct orders to stay put. Steel is understandably furious and court-martials Suvi in response.
* TheEmpire: Is naively unaware that she is being groomed as a crony of an oppressive imperial force, though her experiences during the campaign seem to be opening her eyes somewhat.
* FantasticRacism: Believes the Spirits to be dangerous and barbaric, neglecting to help for much of [[spoiler: Naram's rampage]] because she felt her advice was not heeded regarding how uncontrollable Spirits could be.
* HairTriggerTemper: Suvi's sense of entitlement and immense magical talent have made her ill-equipped for diplomacy or empathy and she meets most obstacles with threats of violence if her authority is not recognised.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Xenophobia and elitism aside, Suvi does care for those she knows personally.
* LadyOfBlackMagic: She may only be an ''apprentice'' mage at the moment, but she's definitely on the way to becoming one of these. She's got the dignified and haughty attitude, the predilection for offensive magic, and definitely the [[IceQueen coldness]] down pat.
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** She embarks on a journey with Ame to recover Wavebreaker without checking in with the Citadel or at least informing them of her whereabouts, [[spoiler: causing Steel to assume she has been killed or captured.
** She blithely throws aroundcaptured after her status as an apprentice archmage to try to get passage on a ship despite knowing that her country is actively at war, [[spoiler:causing an assassin to take interest and try to kill the party while they are at sea]].
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** She does this again [[spoiler: in episode 9, pursuing Ame outside the city walls despite Steel's direct orders to stay put. Steel is understandably furious and court-martials Suvi inresponse.
response.]]
* TheEmpire: Isnaively unaware that she is a loyal soldier to and being groomed as a crony of an oppressive imperial force, though her experiences during for leadership in the campaign seem Citadel, a group of wizard in service to be opening her eyes somewhat.
the Kehmsarazan Empire.
* FantasticRacism:Believes the Spirits to be dangerous and barbaric, neglecting to help for much of After witnessing [[spoiler: the destruction wreaked by Orima on the town of Lamry as a result of Naram's rampage]] because capture]], she felt her advice was not heeded regarding how uncontrollable Spirits could be.
develops this attitude towards Spirits, resenting their ability to visit the mortal world and wreak havoc without consequence.
* HairTriggerTemper: Suvi's sense of entitlement and immense magical talent have made her ill-equipped for diplomacy orempathy empathy, and she meets most obstacles with threats of violence if her authority is not recognised.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Xenophobia and elitism aside, Suvi does care for those she knowspersonally.
personally, especially her friends.
* LadyOfBlackMagic: She may only be an ''apprentice'' mage at the moment, but she's definitely on the way to becoming one of these. She's got the dignified and haughty attitude, the predilection for offensive magic, and definitely the [[IceQueen coldness]] down pat.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Suvi's sense of entitlement and immense magical talent have made her ill-equipped for diplomacy or
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Xenophobia and elitism aside, Suvi does care for those she knows
* LadyOfBlackMagic: She may only be an ''apprentice'' mage at the moment, but she's definitely on the way to becoming one of these. She's got the dignified and haughty attitude, the predilection for offensive magic, and definitely the [[IceQueen coldness]] down pat.
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* StaffOfAuthority: Her precious, precious Citadel Wizard's staff, which serves as both an [[MagicStaff arcane focus]] and a status symbol demonstrating her rank. She normally keeps it in a glamoured illusion to hide its value, but is all too happy to shatter that illusion in a dramatic display whenever she needs to pull rank on someone.
* StatuesqueStunner: Described by Aabria as being 183cm (6ft) and taller than a lot of the male human characters she meets.
* TantrumThrowing: Prone to this if things do not go her way or her authority is not recognised.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: As a child growing up with Ame and Eursulon under Grandma Wren's tutelage, Suvi was a headstrong but kind child. A decade of preferential treatment under a propagandistic fascist regime has altered Suvi's personality for the worse, but instances of the kind child she used to be do sometimes pop out, especially in her protectiveness of the rest of the party.
* StatuesqueStunner: Described by Aabria as being 183cm (6ft) and taller than a lot of the male human characters she meets.
* TantrumThrowing: Prone to this if things do not go her way or her authority is not recognised.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: As a child growing up with Ame and Eursulon under Grandma Wren's tutelage, Suvi was a headstrong but kind child. A decade of preferential treatment under a propagandistic fascist regime has altered Suvi's personality for the worse, but instances of the kind child she used to be do sometimes pop out, especially in her protectiveness of the rest of the party.
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* SelfMadeWoman: Related to the above, Suvi perceives herself as this and resents any implication that she receives preferential treatment or rose to her current position in the Citadel by anything other than her own merits. She begins to reconsider this stance after [[spoiler: Galani implies Steel treated Suvi preferentially by not giving her a harsher punishment for her actions in disobeying orders and later threatening to kill members of the Azure Battalion when they tried to arrest her, and almost blows up at her for it before realizing that Galani's life would be ruined if she had done the same thing.]]
* StaffOfAuthority: Herprecious, precious Citadel Wizard's staff, which serves as both an [[MagicStaff arcane focus]] and a status symbol demonstrating her rank. She normally keeps it in a glamoured illusion to hide its value, but is all too happy to shatter that illusion in a dramatic display whenever she needs to pull rank on someone.
* StatuesqueStunner: Described by Aabria as being 183cm (6ft) and taller than a lot of the male human characters shemeets.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: As a child growing up with Ame and Eursulon under Grandma Wren's tutelage, Suvi was a headstrong but kind child. A decade of preferential treatment under a propagandistic fascist regime has altered Suvi's personality for the worse, but instances of the kind child she used to be do sometimes pop out, especially in her protectiveness of the rest of theparty.
party.
* StaffOfAuthority: Her
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* SolitarySorceress: Aside from Ame, Ren lives by herself in her cottage outside of town. Before Ame came to live with her she would have been even more solitary.
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Mr Soup is the spirit of the stream that runs past Grandmother Ren's cottage. There is a shrine to him on the cottage grounds - a very accurate representation of him holding a arge bowl, into which libations are made. He uses his influence over the local area to find Ame her fox familiar.
* NatureSpirit: He is the spirit of the stream at Grandmother Ren's cottage.
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Mr Soup is the spirit of the stream that runs past Grandmother Ren's Wren's cottage. There is a shrine to him on the cottage grounds - a very accurate representation of him holding a arge bowl, into which libations are made. He uses his influence over the local area to find Ame her fox familiar.
* NatureSpirit: He is the spirit of the stream at GrandmotherRen's Wren's cottage.
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* TheChosenOne/LegacyOfTheChosen: Ame is the Witch of the World's Heart, a title she inherits from apprenticing under Grandmother Wren. There are only a handful of witches with titles like these in Umora, as some chose to die without training a replacement. Notably, Ame is the only one of that coven whose role is concerned with the happiness and wellbeing of people.
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* BigEater: Naturally, being the son of the Great Bear Spirit. Eursulon loves sampling the many delicacies of the Citadel, and has in a month become a regular customer of many vendors. Notably, he can eat a challenge stew meant for six people all by himself and still have room for snacks.
* TheExile: Eursulon took to the ways of the human world as a child and now cannot return to the spirit plane.
* TheExile: Eursulon took to the ways of the human world as a child and now cannot return to the spirit plane.
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* BigEater: For his size, at least. When it comes to his love of food, he has deluded himself into believing that he is as big and can eat as much as Eursulon, which is simply not true. He can still eat enough for his stomach to fully become a ball, though.
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* TheMentor: In addition to raising Suvi and guiding her through the hierarchy of the Citadel, once she learns the truth about Eursulon she begins training him the way of the sword.
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** She does this again in episode 9, pursuing Ame outside the city walls despite Steel's direct orders to stay put. Steel is understandably furious and court marshals Suvi in response.
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Berserk Button only applies if it isn't a reasonable thing to get angry about. Hiding ZCE until they are fleshed out.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: She has a tendency to make decisions on impulse without considering the potential consequences.
** She embarks on a journey with Ame to recover Wavebreaker without checking in with the Citadel or at least informing them of her whereabouts, causing Steel to assume she has been killed or captured.
** She blithely throws around her status as an apprentice archmage to try to get passage on a ship despite knowing that her country is actively at war, [[spoiler:causing an assassin to take interest and try to kill the party while they are at sea]].
** She does this again in episode 9, pursuing Ame outside the city walls despite Steel's direct orders to stay put. Steel is understandably furious and court marshals Suvi in response.
** She embarks on a journey with Ame to recover Wavebreaker without checking in with the Citadel or at least informing them of her whereabouts, causing Steel to assume she has been killed or captured.
** She blithely throws around her status as an apprentice archmage to try to get passage on a ship despite knowing that her country is actively at war, [[spoiler:causing an assassin to take interest and try to kill the party while they are at sea]].
** She does this again in episode 9, pursuing Ame outside the city walls despite Steel's direct orders to stay put. Steel is understandably furious and court marshals Suvi in response.
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* BerserkButton: Being lied to.
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* TheHedonist: Comes with being a freshly-sentient animal. The Fox does what he wants when he wants in pursuit of very simple goals. He even inspires this behavior in Ame a little, going off on his own to inspire her to chase him, along with her own desires in the process.
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*AllLovingHero: Naram is called an embodiment of the gentle seas and does a lot of good for people. He is able to calm his wrathful wife Orima, saved Eursulon from drowning as a baby, and taught humans how to live and thrive by the sea.
*CapturedSuperEntity: We meet him captured and imprisoned by Morrow and the wizards of the Callibell Chantry, who are harvesting his blood as a source of magical power.
*CapturedSuperEntity: We meet him captured and imprisoned by Morrow and the wizards of the Callibell Chantry, who are harvesting his blood as a source of magical power.
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* ChildEater: When the time comes that the Great Bear's children reach maturity, they must leave home and go out on their own or he will eat them.
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! Space Cram: Reasonable Hoop Dreams
!! Player Characters
[[folder:Cram Daniel]]
!! Cram Daniel
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
An ancient and powerful basketball wizard, who leads his compatriots in the fight against Nunya Bidness.
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[[folder:Slam Jamiels]]
!! Slam Jamiels
!!!Played by: Lou Wilson
A former golden retriever turned human, and Cram's trainer.
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[[folder:Clam Blamielle]]
!! Clam Blamielle
!!!Played by: Erika Ishii
A former rival of Cram's, now one of his last remaining allies in the war against Nunya Bidness.
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! Space Cram: Reasonable Hoop Dreams
!! Player Characters
[[folder:Cram Daniel]]
!! Cram Daniel
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
An ancient and powerful basketball wizard, who leads his compatriots in the fight against Nunya Bidness.
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[[folder:Slam Jamiels]]
!! Slam Jamiels
!!!Played by: Lou Wilson
A former golden retriever turned human, and Cram's trainer.
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[[folder:Clam Blamielle]]
!! Clam Blamielle
!!!Played by: Erika Ishii
A former rival of Cram's, now one of his last remaining allies in the war against Nunya Bidness.
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* AchillesInHisTent: Petulantly refuses to help during [[spoiler: Naram's rampage]] as her pride was hurt by being insulted by Orima, scolded by Steele and having her prejudices regarding Spirits ignored by the party.
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* AchillesInHisTent: Petulantly refuses to help during [[spoiler: Naram's rampage]] as her pride was hurt by being insulted by Orima, scolded by Steele Steel and having her prejudices regarding Spirits ignored by the party.
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* TheAlcoholic: A strong indication of Eursulon's waning connection with the spirit world is his reliance on human vices, in particular, alcohol. While he doesn't seem to be addicted physically, he clearly leans on alcohol as a coping mechanism and as a way of medicating his depression.
