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* ImprobableTaxonomySkills: She's very good at identifying flowers, even though she's blind.
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* ImprobableTaxonomySkills: She's Tamarin's very good at identifying flowers, even though she's blind.blind. She somehow does it by smelling them. While smell does provide some indication of which flower is, several flowers have a similar enough aroma for this to be realistic.
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* NoBloodTies: [=RainWings=] "don't do parents"; instead, they lay their eggs in a single large clutch, and then then all raise the resulting hatchlings together.
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* NoBloodTies: [=RainWings=] "don't do parents"; instead, they lay their eggs in a single large clutch, and then then they all raise the resulting hatchlings together.
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* EmancipatedChild: [=RainWings=] "don't do parents"; instead, they lay their eggs in a single large clutch, and then then all raise the resulting hatchlings together.
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* NoBloodTies: [=RainWings=] "don't do parents"; instead, they lay their eggs in a single large clutch, and then then all raise the resulting hatchlings together.
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* SuperStrength: After he learns he failed to kill Glory, he alters his [=NightWing=] form, Shapeshifter, to possess the strength of ten dragons.
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* SuperStrength: After he learns he failed to kill Glory, Kinkajou, he alters his [=NightWing=] form, Shapeshifter, to possess the strength of ten dragons.