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* SettleForSibling: When Clover turns him down, Clarence instead takes a like to Elsie. However it does seem to be quite genuine on Clarence's part.
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* SettleForSibling: When Clover turns him down, Clarence instead takes a like liking to Elsie. However it does seem to be quite genuine on Clarence's part.
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* CreatorsPest: In universe; Katy grows to detest Emma and Violet, the sisters who Amy loves hearing stories about, and so gleefully kills them off.
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* CreatorsPest: In universe; Katy grows to detest Emma and Violet, the sisters who Amy loves hearing stories about, and so gleefully kills them off.off in the next story she tells to her.
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Black Sheep cleanup, removing misuse and ZCE
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* BlackSheep: Elsie feels this way when she's younger, but it's Dorry who becomes this when he's older.
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* BlackSheep: Elsie feels this way as a child as she's at an awkward age that places her in the middle of the siblings, but she gets over this once she's older.
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Cool Loser TRS cleanup
, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.
, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.Deleted line(s) 186 (click to see context) :
* CoolLoser: Seen as dull by his own family, but Dorry is smart, gifted with clockwork and machinery and invents all manner of things as a child.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Clover's beautiful, soulful, blue eyes are noted various times to be her chief beauty.
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* DotingParent: To Little Rose.
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Overprotective Dad has been disambiguated
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* OverprotectiveDad: A mild example, but Dr Carr is mildly distressed when his daughters get married off, and laments that he should never have let them leave. He's determined that Johnnie gets to stay with him at least, and expresses concern that she grew up so beautiful. That said, Dr Carr does just want his children to be happy.
