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Class:''Ghost Paladin''
*ArtificialHuman: Mentions having an inventor.
*NinjaPirateRobotZombie: Ghost robot prince.
*NonStandardCharacterDesign
*OurGhostsAreDifferent
*RealMenWearPink
*SealedGoodInACan: Joined the protagonists side as soon as his treasure chest was opened.
*WarriorPrince
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* ButtMonkey: She got nothing for christmas.
* ButtMonkey: She got nothing for christmas.
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Class: ''Impurity Soldier''
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*DarkerAndEdgier: Everything about him.
*HiredGun: He's the only mercenary that will actually work for money.
*CoolSword
*DarkerAndEdgier: Everything about him.
*HiredGun: He's the only mercenary that will actually work for money.
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!!Laularukyrumo
Class: ''Stone Dragon''
* OurDragonsAreDifferent
* RuleOfCool: It has laser cannons for arms and jetpacks for wings.
!!Laularukyrumo
Class: ''Stone Dragon''
* OurDragonsAreDifferent
* RuleOfCool: It has laser cannons for arms and jetpacks for wings.
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: What they appeared for.
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Class: ''Mage Lord''
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** One user [[http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=121809.msg4296468#msg4296468 suspected]] that freeformschooler was intentionally making those "mistakes" to confuse the readers. Later, he [[http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=121809.msg4484453#msg4484453 confirmed it.]] Yaos' official gender remains unrevealed.
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* {{Evil Counterpart}}: {{Designated Villain}}: Despite being the owner of dungeon and the main character in the title, we've never seen him do anything directly villainous. [[spoiler:He even HELPS Ciro by selling potions in Dungeon Level 3!]]
* {{EvilLaugh}}: "HEAGHEAGHHEAH" and so on. May just be a particularly violent cough.
* {{EvilCounterpart}}: {{Word of God}} says he was planned to be this originally.
* {{EvilLaugh}}: "HEAGHEAGHHEAH" and so on. May just be a particularly violent cough.
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freeform messed up Yaos\'s gender! Let\'s go point this out!
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Class: ''Morale Supporter''
* {{Expy}}: Of [[TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime Navi]]
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Class: ''Pyro Crafter''
Class: ''Morale Supporter''
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Class: ''Pyro Crafter''
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Class: ''Aberrant Exile''
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* {{Jerkass}}
* {{Killed Off For Real}}
* {{Ritual Magic}}
* {{Sir Swears A Lot}}
* {{We Hardly Knew Ye}}
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* [[spoiler:{{The Heartless}}: Chief is an Illborn.]]
!!Wilford
* {{Asshole Victim}}
* [[{{City Guards}} City Guard]]
* {{Killed Off For Real}}
* {{Posthumous Character}}: A minor example, he appears in Al's flashback.
* {{Weapon Of Choice}}: {{BFS}}
* {{We Used to Be Friends}}: Until Al threw him into an {{Acid Pool}}. How friendly they were is debatable.
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* [[{{City Guards}} City Guard]]
* {{Killed Off For Real}}
* {{Posthumous Character}}: A minor example, he appears in Al's flashback.
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* {{We Used to Be Friends}}: Until Al threw him into an {{Acid Pool}}. How friendly they were is debatable.
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* {{Ritual Magic}}
* {{Sir Swears A Lot}}
* {{We Hardly Knew Ye}}
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* {{We Hardly Knew Ye}}
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* {{Weapon Of Choice}}: {{BFS}}
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* {{Boss Subtitles}}: Electric Guardian's Last Resort
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Class: ''Lying Creator''
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* SquishyMage: First played straight, especially given the loss of Max HP to power Blood Magic. Later on, subverted, due to the amount of max HP bought to power Blood Magic that wasn't immediately used.
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* [[spoiler:{{Heel Face Turn}}]]: [[spoiler: [[FaceHeelTurn For a little while anyways]]
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* {{Moe}} : While YMMV, many readers find her to be very endearing.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: After Al killed one of her Searchbots, she mailed him a bomb powerful enough to knock out the Warrens's power supply.
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