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** UpToEleven: In the card game bonus chapter, she interrupts ForTheLulz.
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* GenreSavvy: Sometimes, but he verges on DangerouslyGenreSavvy and especially WrongGenreSavvy.
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!New characters:
!!Introduced in Part 1 (before Chapter 6):
[[folder:Musou]]
'''WARNING: The name Musou is narration-only! Canon-wise, he has NoNameGiven.'''
-> [[DesignatedHero The main character.]] A human who was out to Japan for a "Shrine Tour", he ends up finding the Outside World's Hakurei Shrine. Following a perturbation in the Great Barrier, he is haplessly taken in the barrier, and nearly dies, but Yukari takes the remains of his existence when the barrier has to be fixed. A TimeSkip later, he is found at the Moriya Shrine, but wanders away until Reimu and Marisa take upon themselves to train him at surviving, while Sanae investigates him under the guise of being Reimu's aide. After two weeks, he sets out for the Scarlet Devil Mansion to discover how he ended up in Gensokyo and... a lot of things happen.
!!Tropes associated with Musou:
* AuthorAvatar
* FailureHero: He hasn't won a single fight, while he lost a handful.
* FateWorseThanDeath: He wonders if he's trapped forever in nothingness in Chapter 1, and maintains his existence only by [[ThePowerOfHate the hate]] this fate generates in him.
* GenreSavvy: Sometimes, but he verges on DangerouslyGenreSavvy and especially WrongGenreSavvy.
* GratuitousJapanese: Spouts some on a regular basis.
* LeeroyJenkins: He thinks very little in fear of holding back his powers since he'd be in denial of those. In narration, he even namedrops Leeroy Jenkins when referring to his lack of thought in Chapter 8.
* MeaningfulName: Musou stands for ''unique'', tying in with the French title. It's also part of the Japanese title ''Musouhen'', meaning ''unique event''.
* NoNameGiven: Post-spiriting away. Hiding his real name under the alias Musou is the first thing he even does of the work. Post-spiriting away, he doesn't remember this alias and is referred to by this name only in narration.
* SinkOrSwimMentor: In chapter 1 [[FlashbackNightmare and 8]], the main character pulls this on himself, putting himself through a Spell Card from Flandre in order to learn how to dodge bullets. [[spoiler:He sinks, and dies.]]
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: And there's neither any possibility to escape, nor any desire to do so.
* WrongGenreSavvy: In chapter 1, he goes with {{Fanon}} Flandre, [[WrongGenreSavvy thinking]] she'll snap into OmnicidalManiac-ness at the slightest notice. It has nasty consequences, even though she doesn't do more than play one of her Spell Cards with him. Since he's then unable to fly or fire danmaku, she [[CurbStompBattle doesn't even take a hit]] and Meiling has to stop the "game" because the main character has already got hit far too much[[spoiler:, leading to his death.]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Luke Hakurei]]
-> Reimu's husband, he comes back at the beginning of the fiction after a nine-months travel to find his identity. [[StatusQuoIsGod He couldn't do this in time to come back to Gensokyo]].
!!Tropes associated with Luke:
* FriendToAllLivingThings: To most at least. He rescues Shumi after knocking her into the Misty Lake and hearing her cry.
* OnlySaneMan: To Reimu's GoodIsNotNice tendencies.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Nouwa Burensu]]
-> A particular spirit of unknown type that appeared in the Netherworld, confronting Musou and attacking everyone on sight. Her goal seems to be exterminationg everything, but she's far too weak for that.
!!Tropes associated with Nouwa:
* AltoVillainess
* AttentionWhore: Referred to as such in the bonus chapter, even by her own partner-in-intruding (known as "The Traveller") or by Reimu.
--> '''"The Traveller"''': "If you want to stare at someone, look Miss, she is the one wanting it after all."
--> '''Reimu:''' "Listen, you've wasted enough of Gensokyo's time with him or yourself! So you'll get down that table and play your damn card game with me."
* FromNobodyToNightmare: Sealed by Shingyoku in Chapter 4. She one-shots its three forms when she comes back in Chapter 6.
* GracefulLoser: Bonus-only. She reacts to her loss by laughing, and her first laugh that isn't an EvilLaugh. Out of the bonus, she's only lost by knock-away (Sanae) straight knockout (Remilia) or sealing (Shingyoku).
* GratuitousJapanese: See Musou.
* MeaningfulName: The Nou (usually written "noh") (能) is a form of tragic theatre, and '''wa''' (環) means wheel. The logic here being, her name is a metaphor for the '''breaking wheel'''. Despite there being a ''nou'' kanji meaning "angered" (惱), this isn't the transcription used, so the trope is thought to be subverted until the hidden torture meaning is discovered.
* MotiveDecay: In her first appearances, she solely existed to kill the main character and had no real trait aside her hatred of him, and everyone else. In her last appearance so far, she feels what she calls "a heart" growing in her, but tries to make this a DefiedTrope.
** UpToEleven: In the card game bonus chapter, she interrupts ForTheLulz.
* MotorMouth: In the card game bonus, she gives long talks about her cards and effects and stuff, complete with GameBreaker effects for added [[SmugSnake ego]]. Lampshaded mercilessly twice by Reimu.
--> "You sure like to listen to yourself talk, huh?"
--> "Please, end it soon..."
* ShoutOut: "ZA WARUDO!" is the line on which she enters the bonus's card game tournament.
* SuperSmoke: Her first apparition had her "materialize" from white smoke in front of the main character.
** SmokeOut: Inverted. She "smokes in" during the bonus.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Genma Uemashi]]
-> A demon from Makai, seen visiting Alice.
!!Tropes associated with Genma:
* AllThereInTheManual: She isn't namedropped in the fic. You can only know her name by reading side-material such as this page.
* TheDreaded: She knows Marisa for what she did in Makai.
* SunglassesAtNight: And indoors.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maki Aoyou]]
-> A wandering four-winged bird youkai. Also, a Mubana Academy escapee, she used to be a teacher there, but refers to it as a giant GildedCage.
!!Tropes associated with Maki:
* TheArtifact: From her short-lived guard career for the tengu, she keeps.
* BadassTeacher: Former teacher at Mubana Academy.
* ThePowerOfTheSun: Her sole Spell Card so far is called "Light ~ Solar Ray".
* StatuesqueStunner: Her height is listed by side materials as around 6'3" / 190 cm.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Dondeo Izayoi]]
-> A restaurant owner in the human village, he is married to [[NinjaMaid Sakuya Izayoi]]. His own painful story in Gensokyo is long over.
!!Tropes associated with Dondeo:
* StraightMan: To Remilia's whims.
* WeirdnessMagnet: To the Human Village. Being married to Sakuya, he attracts Remilia's visits in the Human Village.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shumi Kasei]]
-> A [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal fiery fairy]], also escaped from Mubana.
!!Tropes associated with Shumi:
* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Doesn't tolerate water, as Luke inadvertently sending her in the Misty Lake proved. She was a crying mess for the following eight hours.
* FieryRedhead
* PlayingWithFire
[[/folder]]
!!Introduced in Part 2 ~ Musou Mugen Densetsu (after Chapter 6):
[[folder:Makuu Sanjuya]]
-> A new shikigami who manifests in the form of a humanized crow. She's polite, but mysterious. While Ran thinks she's a shikigami of Yukari, she pledged allegiance to Ran herself, and is a rival of Chen's.
!!Tropes associated with Makuu:
* AffablyEvil: Under her polite servant façade, she reminds Chen of Nouwa.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maou Brimstone]]
-> A mysterious masked agent of Yumemi's, he doesn't have full control over the way he thinks or acts. Otherwise, he seems to be quite insane.
!!Tropes associated with Maou:
* MindControl: A victim of this.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: "Maou" stands for "demon king" as Chiyuri attests [[DeadpanSnarker in her way]].
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: On behalf of Yumemi, he was supposed to take out a kappa outpost. He scorched the entire area, and signed the act with a kanji for "evil spirit" (the "ma" in Maou).
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Hiirome]]
-> A mysterious human with fire powers. Little is known about him.
!!Tropes associated with Hiirome:
* CallBack: He notices Maou's "signature" as one to something related to another demon. This is a ShoutOut to Luke, who has the same kanji carved on his back.
* PlayingWithFire: He destroyed a drone by causing a fire in it, by a mere bat of an eyebrow.
[[/folder]]
!!Introduced in Part 1 (before Chapter 6):
[[folder:Musou]]
'''WARNING: The name Musou is narration-only! Canon-wise, he has NoNameGiven.'''
-> [[DesignatedHero The main character.]] A human who was out to Japan for a "Shrine Tour", he ends up finding the Outside World's Hakurei Shrine. Following a perturbation in the Great Barrier, he is haplessly taken in the barrier, and nearly dies, but Yukari takes the remains of his existence when the barrier has to be fixed. A TimeSkip later, he is found at the Moriya Shrine, but wanders away until Reimu and Marisa take upon themselves to train him at surviving, while Sanae investigates him under the guise of being Reimu's aide. After two weeks, he sets out for the Scarlet Devil Mansion to discover how he ended up in Gensokyo and... a lot of things happen.
!!Tropes associated with Musou:
* AuthorAvatar
* FailureHero: He hasn't won a single fight, while he lost a handful.
* FateWorseThanDeath: He wonders if he's trapped forever in nothingness in Chapter 1, and maintains his existence only by [[ThePowerOfHate the hate]] this fate generates in him.
* GenreSavvy: Sometimes, but he verges on DangerouslyGenreSavvy and especially WrongGenreSavvy.
* GratuitousJapanese: Spouts some on a regular basis.
* LeeroyJenkins: He thinks very little in fear of holding back his powers since he'd be in denial of those. In narration, he even namedrops Leeroy Jenkins when referring to his lack of thought in Chapter 8.
* MeaningfulName: Musou stands for ''unique'', tying in with the French title. It's also part of the Japanese title ''Musouhen'', meaning ''unique event''.
* NoNameGiven: Post-spiriting away. Hiding his real name under the alias Musou is the first thing he even does of the work. Post-spiriting away, he doesn't remember this alias and is referred to by this name only in narration.
* SinkOrSwimMentor: In chapter 1 [[FlashbackNightmare and 8]], the main character pulls this on himself, putting himself through a Spell Card from Flandre in order to learn how to dodge bullets. [[spoiler:He sinks, and dies.]]
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: And there's neither any possibility to escape, nor any desire to do so.
* WrongGenreSavvy: In chapter 1, he goes with {{Fanon}} Flandre, [[WrongGenreSavvy thinking]] she'll snap into OmnicidalManiac-ness at the slightest notice. It has nasty consequences, even though she doesn't do more than play one of her Spell Cards with him. Since he's then unable to fly or fire danmaku, she [[CurbStompBattle doesn't even take a hit]] and Meiling has to stop the "game" because the main character has already got hit far too much[[spoiler:, leading to his death.]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Luke Hakurei]]
-> Reimu's husband, he comes back at the beginning of the fiction after a nine-months travel to find his identity. [[StatusQuoIsGod He couldn't do this in time to come back to Gensokyo]].
!!Tropes associated with Luke:
* FriendToAllLivingThings: To most at least. He rescues Shumi after knocking her into the Misty Lake and hearing her cry.
* OnlySaneMan: To Reimu's GoodIsNotNice tendencies.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Nouwa Burensu]]
-> A particular spirit of unknown type that appeared in the Netherworld, confronting Musou and attacking everyone on sight. Her goal seems to be exterminationg everything, but she's far too weak for that.
!!Tropes associated with Nouwa:
* AltoVillainess
* AttentionWhore: Referred to as such in the bonus chapter, even by her own partner-in-intruding (known as "The Traveller") or by Reimu.
--> '''"The Traveller"''': "If you want to stare at someone, look Miss, she is the one wanting it after all."
--> '''Reimu:''' "Listen, you've wasted enough of Gensokyo's time with him or yourself! So you'll get down that table and play your damn card game with me."
* FromNobodyToNightmare: Sealed by Shingyoku in Chapter 4. She one-shots its three forms when she comes back in Chapter 6.
* GracefulLoser: Bonus-only. She reacts to her loss by laughing, and her first laugh that isn't an EvilLaugh. Out of the bonus, she's only lost by knock-away (Sanae) straight knockout (Remilia) or sealing (Shingyoku).
* GratuitousJapanese: See Musou.
* MeaningfulName: The Nou (usually written "noh") (能) is a form of tragic theatre, and '''wa''' (環) means wheel. The logic here being, her name is a metaphor for the '''breaking wheel'''. Despite there being a ''nou'' kanji meaning "angered" (惱), this isn't the transcription used, so the trope is thought to be subverted until the hidden torture meaning is discovered.
* MotiveDecay: In her first appearances, she solely existed to kill the main character and had no real trait aside her hatred of him, and everyone else. In her last appearance so far, she feels what she calls "a heart" growing in her, but tries to make this a DefiedTrope.
** UpToEleven: In the card game bonus chapter, she interrupts ForTheLulz.
* MotorMouth: In the card game bonus, she gives long talks about her cards and effects and stuff, complete with GameBreaker effects for added [[SmugSnake ego]]. Lampshaded mercilessly twice by Reimu.
--> "You sure like to listen to yourself talk, huh?"
--> "Please, end it soon..."
* ShoutOut: "ZA WARUDO!" is the line on which she enters the bonus's card game tournament.
* SuperSmoke: Her first apparition had her "materialize" from white smoke in front of the main character.
** SmokeOut: Inverted. She "smokes in" during the bonus.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Genma Uemashi]]
-> A demon from Makai, seen visiting Alice.
!!Tropes associated with Genma:
* AllThereInTheManual: She isn't namedropped in the fic. You can only know her name by reading side-material such as this page.
* TheDreaded: She knows Marisa for what she did in Makai.
* SunglassesAtNight: And indoors.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maki Aoyou]]
-> A wandering four-winged bird youkai. Also, a Mubana Academy escapee, she used to be a teacher there, but refers to it as a giant GildedCage.
!!Tropes associated with Maki:
* TheArtifact: From her short-lived guard career for the tengu, she keeps.
* BadassTeacher: Former teacher at Mubana Academy.
* ThePowerOfTheSun: Her sole Spell Card so far is called "Light ~ Solar Ray".
* StatuesqueStunner: Her height is listed by side materials as around 6'3" / 190 cm.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Dondeo Izayoi]]
-> A restaurant owner in the human village, he is married to [[NinjaMaid Sakuya Izayoi]]. His own painful story in Gensokyo is long over.
!!Tropes associated with Dondeo:
* StraightMan: To Remilia's whims.
* WeirdnessMagnet: To the Human Village. Being married to Sakuya, he attracts Remilia's visits in the Human Village.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shumi Kasei]]
-> A [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal fiery fairy]], also escaped from Mubana.
!!Tropes associated with Shumi:
* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Doesn't tolerate water, as Luke inadvertently sending her in the Misty Lake proved. She was a crying mess for the following eight hours.
* FieryRedhead
* PlayingWithFire
[[/folder]]
!!Introduced in Part 2 ~ Musou Mugen Densetsu (after Chapter 6):
[[folder:Makuu Sanjuya]]
-> A new shikigami who manifests in the form of a humanized crow. She's polite, but mysterious. While Ran thinks she's a shikigami of Yukari, she pledged allegiance to Ran herself, and is a rival of Chen's.
!!Tropes associated with Makuu:
* AffablyEvil: Under her polite servant façade, she reminds Chen of Nouwa.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Maou Brimstone]]
-> A mysterious masked agent of Yumemi's, he doesn't have full control over the way he thinks or acts. Otherwise, he seems to be quite insane.
!!Tropes associated with Maou:
* MindControl: A victim of this.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: "Maou" stands for "demon king" as Chiyuri attests [[DeadpanSnarker in her way]].
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: On behalf of Yumemi, he was supposed to take out a kappa outpost. He scorched the entire area, and signed the act with a kanji for "evil spirit" (the "ma" in Maou).
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Hiirome]]
-> A mysterious human with fire powers. Little is known about him.
!!Tropes associated with Hiirome:
* CallBack: He notices Maou's "signature" as one to something related to another demon. This is a ShoutOut to Luke, who has the same kanji carved on his back.
* PlayingWithFire: He destroyed a drone by causing a fire in it, by a mere bat of an eyebrow.
[[/folder]]
