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* [[spoiler: {{Beethoven Was an Alien Spy}}: In the book's epilogue, [[spoiler: it's revealed that he managed to escape being destroyed at the last minute to take possession of an unborn child from a different world at a different era. Named Adolf.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Beethoven Was an Alien Spy}}: In the book's epilogue, [[spoiler: it's epilogue,it's revealed that he managed to escape being destroyed escaped at the last minute to take possession of an unborn child from a different world at a different era. Named Adolf.]]



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* [[spoiler: CharacterDeath: Early on in the last stand.]]



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* MarriedToTheJob: She life begins and ends with the military; she's estranged from her only family, rarely sees her only friend, and the possibility that her soliders will reject her leadership sends her into a breakdown.

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* MarriedToTheJob: She Her life begins and ends with the military; she's estranged from her only family, rarely sees her only friend, and the possibility that her soliders will reject her leadership sends her into a breakdown.

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* FourStarBadass: General.
* LikeFatherLikeSon: She replaced her grandfather as the noble minded general of Baalria's army.

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* FourStarBadass: General.General who leads from the front.
*TheLeader: Type IV. Her subordinates are inspired by 'heart' in fighting for her country.
* LikeFatherLikeSon: She replaced her grandfather as the noble minded general of Baalria's Baalaria's army.


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*MarriedToTheJob: She life begins and ends with the military; she's estranged from her only family, rarely sees her only friend, and the possibility that her soliders will reject her leadership sends her into a breakdown.
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* MeaningfulRename: His full name is 'Finn Taurok' but he always referred to by his last name in first book. Now that he's a good guy, the narration switches to his first name. This means that he's on a FirstNameBasis [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall with the audience.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's done a better job ruling Baalaria than Gothon and doesn't hold his country's bad reputation against those that hold it.

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* MeaningfulRename: His full name is 'Finn Taurok' but he was always referred to by his last name in first book. Now that he's a good guy, the narration switches to his first name. This means that he's on a FirstNameBasis [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall with the audience.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's done a better job ruling Baalaria than Gothon and doesn't hold his country's bad reputation against those that hold it. dislike it because of Gothon's invasion.
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* [[spoiler: ThePowerOfLove: He uses this to temporarily overturn Mordack's control and then to exorcise the monster from his own body in addition to Zarracka's.]]

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* [[spoiler: ThePowerOfLove: He uses this to temporarily overturn Mordack's Mordak's control and then to exorcise the monster from his own body in addition to Zarracka's.]]



* MoralityChain: Revealed to have been this for Kalak all along. Once he dies, Mordack stirs, Kalak's marriage decays and he visists Zarracka for comfort.

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* MoralityChain: Revealed to have been this for Kalak all along. Once he dies, Mordack Mordak stirs, Kalak's marriage decays and he visists visits Zarracka for comfort.



* MoralityPet: Invoked by Fin. When he wants to prove that he's not evil he points to his loving wife.

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* MoralityPet: Invoked by Fin.Finn. When he wants to prove that he's not evil he points to his loving wife.
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* [[spoiler: RasputinianDeath: He's killed or exorcised three times in this book: the first time Kalak and Zarracka beat him up in the mindscape, then Kalak kissed the evil out of Zarracka (his back up body) then Rana scattered his physical remains into a thousand pieces with a hurricane gust. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurf.]]

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* [[spoiler: RasputinianDeath: He's killed or exorcised three times in this book: the first time Kalak and Zarracka beat him up in the mindscape, then Kalak kissed the evil out of Zarracka (his back up body) then Rana Kthonia scattered his physical remains into a thousand pieces with a hurricane gust. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurf.]]
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*AscendedExtra: From minor role in the first to one of the main heroes in the second. She gets as much screen time as Daniar.
*AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: She is more skilled and competent than any of her subordinates despite their greater age.
*BadassNormal: She can emulate Daniar's ThouShallNotKill philosophy despite lacking her dragokin durability, strength, and breath weapon.
*FourStarBadass: General.
*LikeFatherLikeSon: She replaced her grandfather as the noble minded general of Baalria's army.
*ImprobableAge: She's fifteen and she's a general.
*ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: She blames herself for her mother's death and the trauma this causes her allows Abyss leverage to break her psychologically.]]
*{{Nepotism}} According to her critics, the only reason she's a general is because her grandfather is the emperor.
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: After deciphering the weakness in [[spoiler: Abyss']] fighting style, she tells her opponent what this flaw says about them personally as they die.
*TheStoic: Comports herself in a calm and professional matter; it's a point of pride.
**NotSoStoic: [[spoiler: after Abyss {{Mind Rape}}s her]] and [[spoiler: when cheering for Benji.]]
*TragicKeepsake: Her teddy bear is scorched because it was caught in a house fire [[spoiler: and her mother died retrieving it.]]
*YouGoGirl: Averted; all her critics focus on her improbable age instead of her gender.
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*GoThroughMe: [[spoiler: This is how Daniar's duel with Taurok ends: Lydia placing herself in their midst and making them stop.]]
*[[spoiler: TheMole: Taurok placed her inside Daniar's group to mine intel but Lydia herself was unaware of this.]]
*TokenMiniMoe: She's an adorable little girl that Daniar fawns over.

!!The following tropes apply to her in ''Legacy Of the Dragokin''

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** [spoiler: Legacy of the Dragokin reveals that this was not her first time.]]

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** [spoiler: [[spoiler: Legacy of the Dragokin reveals that this was not her first time.]]



** Refusing to train Benji means he jumps into danger ''without'' skill necessary to get out of it or the self-disciple to stay out of it in the first place. This almost gets her and Lydia killed.
* OverProtectiveMom / FantasyForbiddingMom: She doesn't want Benji to follow in her foot steps so she does everything she can to keep him away from battle and danger. [[spoiler: Benji is not her first child; that one died because she jumped into battle while pregnant thus causing her to overcompensate.]]

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** Refusing to train Benji means he jumps into danger ''without'' the skill necessary to get out of it or the self-disciple to stay out of it in the first place. This almost gets her and Lydia killed.
** Refusing to tell Benji that his Aunt Zarracka is ''evil'' means said aunt had no problem convincing him that she was good and Daniar herself was the bad one. [[spoiler: This leds to the destruction of Final Shield and a lot of death.]]
* OverProtectiveMom / FantasyForbiddingMom: FantasyForbiddingMother: She doesn't want Benji to follow in her foot steps so she does everything she can to keep him away from battle and danger. [[spoiler: Benji is not her first child; that one died because she jumped into battle while pregnant thus causing her to overcompensate.]]



[[spoiler: ThePowerOfLove: He uses this to temporarily overturn Mordack's control and then to exorcise the monster from his own body in addition to Zarracka's.]]

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[[spoiler: *[[spoiler: ThePowerOfLove: He uses this to temporarily overturn Mordack's control and then to exorcise the monster from his own body in addition to Zarracka's.]]



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* SequelSuddenInstantDeathSyndrome: He dies sometime between the end of the first and the beginning of the second; presumably of old age.

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* SequelSuddenInstantDeathSyndrome: Sudden Sequel Death Syndrome: He dies sometime between the end of the first and the beginning of the second; presumably of old age.age. Kalak's problems start because of this.



!!The following tropes apply to her in Legacy of the Dragokin
* GameBreakingInjury: She is badly injuried at the start and then overuse her electric powers sends her into a comma. Because of that she is missing from many battles and the narration often notes that she is not at full strength.

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!!The following tropes apply to her in Legacy ''Legacy of the Dragokin
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* GameBreakingInjury: She is badly injuried at the start and then overuse of her electric powers sends her into a comma. Because of that she is missing from many battles and the narration often notes that she is not at full strength.



* HotConsort: Defied. Traditionally she would have been this but Finn changed the love so she can rule ''with'' him instead of ''next to'' him.

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* HotConsort: Defied. Traditionally she would have been this but Finn changed the love law so she can rule ''with'' him instead of ''next to'' him.



* TookALevelInKindess: She has a warmer and kinder personality here because she's no longer in bitter isolation and dropped the 'I hate men' mindset.

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* TookALevelInKindess: TookALevelInKindness: She has a warmer and kinder personality here because she's no longer in bitter isolation and dropped the 'I hate men' mindset.



!!The following tropes apply to him in Legacy of the Dragokin
* BadassGrandpa: Technically he always this but now his granddaughter is fifteen and his age comes up more often.

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!!The following tropes apply to him in Legacy ''Legacy of the Dragokin
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* BadassGrandpa: Technically he was always this but now his granddaughter is fifteen and his age comes up more often.often.
*HappilyMarried: Coments about how lucky he is to have Rana for his wife are common.



* OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame: Inverted. Lucia is slender, skilled with magic, avoids fighting, and holds little interest in gold or industry. Thus, he's closer to an elf than a tradiitonal dwarf. Whether all dwarves are like this is unknown because he's the only one in the setting

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* OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame: Inverted. Lucia is slender, skilled with magic, avoids fighting, and holds little interest in gold or industry. Thus, he's closer to an elf than a tradiitonal traditional dwarf. Whether all dwarves are like this is unknown because he's the only one in the setting



** ''Legacy of the Dragokin gives her two more: 1. She's wants to have children but can't because she's sterile; 2. After her mom died eeveryone focused on Daniar and ignored her.

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** ''Legacy of the Dragokin gives her two more: 1. [[spoiler: She's wants to have children but can't because she's sterile; 2. After her mom died eeveryone everyone focused on Daniar and ignored her. ]]



*HannibalLecture: From within her custom cell she taunts Kalak about his failing marriage and attempts to seduce her way into his heart.



*[[spoiler: LoveRedeems: Benji's affection kicks off her ultimate HeelFaceTurn.]]



* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Accepting a power boost from Mordak]] transforms her ice weapon into flying ice daggers and increases her strength above dragokin levels.]]

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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Accepting a power boost from Mordak]] transforms her ice weapon into flying ice daggers and increases her strength above dragokin levels.]]



!!The following tropes apply to it/him in Legacy of the Dragokin
* [[spoiler:BodySurfing is how he has always survived but now he can plan for it. He offered Zarracka power because it would allow him to make her his backup body. He hoped to do this to the BigBad but the heroes anticipated that it and prevented it.]]
* HumanityEnsuses HumanityIsInfectious: Spending ten years in a human's mind absorbing emotions and watching him interact has allowed this mindless weapon to develop a sense-of-Self.

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!!The following tropes apply to it/him in Legacy ''Legacy of the Dragokin
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* [[spoiler:BodySurfing is how [[spoiler:BodySurf: How he has always survived but now he can plan for it. He offered Zarracka power because it would allow him to make her his backup body. He hoped to do this to the BigBad but the heroes anticipated that it and prevented it.]]
* HumanityEnsuses HumanityIsInfectious: Spending ten years in a human's mind absorbing emotions and watching him interact has allowed this mindless weapon to develop a sense-of-Self.



* [[spoiler: RasputinDeath: He's killed or exorcised three times in this book. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurfing.]]

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* [[spoiler: RasputinDeath: RasputinianDeath: He's killed or exorcised three times in this book.book: the first time Kalak and Zarracka beat him up in the mindscape, then Kalak kissed the evil out of Zarracka (his back up body) then Rana scattered his physical remains into a thousand pieces with a hurricane gust. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurfing.BodySurf.]]
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* [[spoiler: RasputinDeath: He's killed or exorcised three times in this book. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurfing.

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* [[spoiler: RasputinDeath: He's killed or exorcised three times in this book. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurfing. ]]
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* [[spoiler: BodySurfing: How he has always survived but now he can plan for it. He offered Zarracka power because it would allow him to make her his backup body. He hoped to do this to the BigBad but the heroes anticipated that it and prevented it.]]

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* [[spoiler: BodySurfing: How [[spoiler:BodySurfing is how he has always survived but now he can plan for it. He offered Zarracka power because it would allow him to make her his backup body. He hoped to do this to the BigBad but the heroes anticipated that it and prevented it.]]



* [[spoiler: RasputinDeath: He's killed and/or exorcised three times in this book. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurfing.

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* BadassGrandpa: Technically he always this but now his granddaughter is fifteen and his age comes up more often.

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* BadassGrandpa: Technically he always this but now his granddaughter is fifteen and his age comes up more often.often.
*MeaningfulRename: His full name is 'Finn Taurok' but he always referred to by his last name in first book. Now that he's a good guy, the narration switches to his first name. This means that he's on a FirstNameBasis [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall with the audience.]]
*ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's done a better job ruling Baalaria than Gothon and doesn't hold his country's bad reputation against those that hold it.
*RetiredBadass: He stepped down as general in favor of his granddaughter because he's running the empire now.



* MissFanservice: Her first outfit is a low-cut dress. Her second is a ChainmailBikini. This lampshaded by many people

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** ''Legacy of the Dragokin gives her two more: 1. She's wants to have children but can't because she's sterile; 2. After her mom died eeveryone focused on Daniar and ignored her.


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!!!The following tropes apply to her in ''Legacy of the Dragokin''
*AndThenWhat: She has no idea what to do with herself after her revenge is accomplished. [[spoiler: Becoming a better mother for Benji than Daniar gives her a new purpose.]]
*[[spoiler: BecomingTheMask: She pretended to be Benji's sympathetic 'Auntie Zarracka' to enlist his help escaping and ultimately became genuinely fond of him.]]
*[[spoiler: BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: First spares Benji and later wants to adopt him because he helped her escape and said he wished she were his mother instead of Daniar.]]
*[[spoiler: HeelFaceTurn: She joins the battle against the BigBad without a devious agenda and later volunteers to go back to her cell. She's as surprised as anyone.]]
*MindControl: [[spoiler: Thanks to Mordak]] she develops this power.
*TailorMadePrison: She has a custom made cell to negate her ice powers. It has successfully held her for ten years.
*TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Accepting a power boost from Mordak]] transforms her ice weapon into flying ice daggers and increases her strength above dragokin levels.]]


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!!The following tropes apply to it/him in Legacy of the Dragokin
*[[spoiler: BodySurfing: How he has always survived but now he can plan for it. He offered Zarracka power because it would allow him to make her his backup body. He hoped to do this to the BigBad but the heroes anticipated that it and prevented it.]]
*HumanityEnsuses HumanityIsInfectious: Spending ten years in a human's mind absorbing emotions and watching him interact has allowed this mindless weapon to develop a sense-of-Self.
*GrandTheftMe: He does this to Kalak in both books but it's more prominent here.
*LadyAndKnight: Becomes a black knight for dark lady Zarracka; he calls her 'my dear' and says he'll be her protector. [[spoiler: He's simply playing into her ego; she's nothing but a spare body to him.]]
*TheEmpath: It's because of his empathy that he can manipulate others.
*NotQuiteDead: He's been dormant in Kalak's mind for ten years.
*[[spoiler: RasputinDeath: He's killed and/or exorcised three times in this book. The two from the previous book brings the grand total up to five. Justified by a combination of YouKillItYouBoughtIt and BodySurfing.
*SuddenlyVoiced: Instead of a walking weapon he's sentient. He explains this after Kalak expresses surprise that he can talk.
*TookALevelInBadass: Formerly he was mindless but now he's sentinent and developed psychic powers.

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* BadassPrincess: And famous for it!

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* BadassPrincess: And famous Famous in-universe for it!enforcing her dad's law.



* FlyingBrick: Daniar's use of this trope is justified: She is a dragokin, a human blessed by a dragon god with dragon-like powers, and what are dragons know for besides flying, breathing fire, and being very strong?

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* FlyingBrick: Daniar's use of this trope is justified: She is a dragokin, a human blessed by a dragon god with dragon-like powers, and what are dragons know for besides flying, breathing fire, and being very strong? great strength?



* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Famous for enforcing the law and delivering justice in her dad's kingdom

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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Famous for enforcing the law and delivering justice in her dad's kingdomkingdom.



**[spoiler: Legacy of the Dragokin reveals that this was not her first time.]]





!! The following apply to her in ''Legacy of the Dragokin''

*DemotedToExtra: Downplayed. She used to be ''the'' hero but now she's one among many and has less screentime.
*LoveRuinsTheRealm: Inverted. She's so focused on running her kingdom she neglected her husband.
*MamaBear: The one thing guaranteed to bring on the fury is attacking her son, Benji.
*NiceJobBreakingItHero:
**Refusing to kill Jihidain is the reason she is still around to cause trouble.
**Refusing to train Benji means he jumps into danger ''without'' skill necessary to get out of it or the self-disciple to stay out of it in the first place. This almost gets her and Lydia killed.
*OverProtectiveMom / FantasyForbiddingMom: She doesn't want Benji to follow in her foot steps so she does everything she can to keep him away from battle and danger. [[spoiler: Benji is not her first child; that one died because she jumped into battle while pregnant thus causing her to overcompensate.]]
*PregnantBadass: A flashback reveals she was this at one point. [[spoiler: Deconstructed as a belly wound killed the fetus.]]




!!The following applies to him in Legacy of the Dragokin

*[[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil: Allows Mordak to resume control over his body to escape certain doom by drowning.]]
*[[spoiler: FightingFromTheInside: He's gotten better at this since the last book. He can come out and hold control for a brief period at a time whenever Daniar or Benji are in trouble.]]
*HotConsort: Britanian laws says there can only be one monarch which means he does little except look handsome next to Daniar.
*PapaWolf: Just as protective of Ben as Daniar.
[[spoiler: ThePowerOfLove: He uses this to temporarily overturn Mordack's control and then to exorcise the monster from his own body in addition to Zarracka's.]]




!!The following applies to him in Legacy of the Dragokin

*MoralityChain: Revealed to have been this for Kalak all along. Once he dies, Mordack stirs, Kalak's marriage decays and he visists Zarracka for comfort.
*SequelSuddenInstantDeathSyndrome: He dies sometime between the end of the first and the beginning of the second; presumably of old age.



* BlowYouAway: Rana's BreathWeapon is the ability to exhale hurricane force breath. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".

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* BlowYouAway: Rana's BreathWeapon is the ability to exhale hurricane force breath. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".




!!The following tropes apply to her in Legacy of the Dragokin
*GameBreakingInjury: She is badly injuried at the start and then overuse her electric powers sends her into a comma. Because of that she is missing from many battles and the narration often notes that she is not at full strength.
*HappilyMarried: Her hook up with Taurok started as infatuation but now she's clearly in love with him.
*HeroicRROD: Final Shield requires a tremendous amount of power to get started; she was bleeding from her orfices by the time it was ready.
*HotConsort: Defied. Traditionally she would have been this but Finn changed the love so she can rule ''with'' him instead of ''next to'' him.
*MoralityPet: Invoked by Fin. When he wants to prove that he's not evil he points to his loving wife.
*TookALevelInKindess: She has a warmer and kinder personality here because she's no longer in bitter isolation and dropped the 'I hate men' mindset.



* OurElvesAreBetter: They're called 'shadori', and have purple skin. He doesn't put on airs and in fact it's the opposite. His human soldiers think they're better than him and don't want to be lead by him.

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* OurElvesAreBetter: They're called 'shadori', and have purple skin. He doesn't put on airs and in fact it's the opposite. His human soldiers think they're better than him and don't want to be lead led by him.


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*BadassGrandpa: Technically he always this but now his granddaughter is fifteen and his age comes up more often.
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* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead: Mordack kills her and yet she comes back to help out on two occasions.]]

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* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead: Mordack Mordak kills her and yet she comes back to help out on two occasions.]]



* FreudianExcuse: She was spoiled by her mother and then banished for [[spoiler: seeking attention by]] summoning an emperor ghoul in the capital. The only reason she started working for Gothon is because she was living in a city that he conquered.

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* FreudianExcuse: She was spoiled by her mother and then banished for [[spoiler: seeking attention by]] summoning an emperor ghoul ghul in the capital. The only reason she started working for Gothon is because she was living in a city that he conquered.



* WhereIWasBornAndRazed: Pre-story she summoned an emperor class fire ghoul [[spoiler: in a desperate bid for hero-style praise and attention]] that almost trashed Britannia's capital. In the main narrative she is vital in Baalaria's victory over said capital.

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* WhereIWasBornAndRazed: Pre-story she summoned an emperor class fire ghoul ghul [[spoiler: in a desperate bid for hero-style praise and attention]] that almost trashed Britannia's capital. In the main narrative she is vital in Baalaria's victory over said capital.
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* [[spoiler: {{Beethoven Was an Alien Spy}}: In the book's epilogue, [[spoiler: it's revealed that he managed to escape being destroyed at the last minute to take possession of an unborn child from a different world at a different era. Named Adolf.]]]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Beethoven Was an Alien Spy}}: In the book's epilogue, [[spoiler: it's revealed that he managed to escape being destroyed at the last minute to take possession of an unborn child from a different world at a different era. Named Adolf.]]]]]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: Lots of 'die on your feet then live on your knees' sort of lines from him. Whether he believes this himself or is just using it as propaganda is up for debate.

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* HonorBeforeReason: Lots of 'die 'better to die on your feet then than live on your knees' sort of lines from him. Whether he believes this himself or is just using it as propaganda is up for debate.



* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: Apparently there was a miscommuncation. [[spoiler: Yusef was under the impression that the cavalry would be killed but the infantry spared because they were little more than farmers with pitchforks; the cavalry would go first and then the infantry would give up and Gothon would 'let them go'.]] Gothon's plan was all or nothing. [[spoiler: He gave the entire the army chance to surrender and join him and face no further aggression from him. Kazem turned this down on principle and the entire Eastern Alliance was slaughtered.]]

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* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: Apparently there was a miscommuncation. [[spoiler: Yusef was under the impression that the cavalry would be killed but the infantry spared because they were little more than farmers with pitchforks; the cavalry would go first and then the infantry would give up and Gothon would 'let them go'.]] Gothon's plan was all or nothing. [[spoiler: He gave the entire the army the chance to surrender and join him and face no further aggression from him. Kazem turned this down on principle and the entire Eastern Alliance was slaughtered.]]
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* HeManWomanHater: A strange example. He grew up surrounded by female soldiers, idolizes his warrior queen mother and has a great relationship with his sister (who has actually seen more combat then him) but doesn't take BadassPrincess Daniar seriously and for some reason thinks women care about nothing but shopping and pinning flowers to their dresses. [[spoiler: WordOfGod says this is part of his JerkAssFacade because he felt insecure among so many strong women when he himself had never seen combat.]]

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* HeManWomanHater: A strange example. He grew up surrounded by female soldiers, idolizes his warrior queen mother and has a great relationship with his sister (who has actually seen more combat then than him) but doesn't take BadassPrincess Daniar seriously and for some reason thinks women care about nothing but shopping and pinning flowers to their dresses. [[spoiler: WordOfGod says this is part of his JerkAssFacade because he felt insecure among so many strong women when he himself had never seen combat.]]
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* MacguffinBoy: Emperor Gothon makes it clear early on that his reason for conquering Britannia was to capture Ben. [[spoiler: He thinks its because Ben's soul can save his dying wife, but its acutally because Kazebar wants the boy's latent power to travel between worlds.]]

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* MacguffinBoy: Emperor Gothon makes it clear early on that his reason for conquering Britannia was to capture Ben. [[spoiler: He thinks its it's because Ben's soul can save his dying wife, but its it's acutally because Kazebar wants the boy's latent power to travel between worlds.]]



* SupportingProtagonist: Its his story but Daniar gets the limelight. He lampshades this in the bonus art at the end, where he complains to the author and artist about how he is a 'bit character in his own story'.

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* SupportingProtagonist: Its It's his story but Daniar gets the limelight. He lampshades this in the bonus art at the end, where he complains to the author and artist about how he is a 'bit character in his own story'.



* TheHero: She leads the group, she fights the battles, she has the HeroicSpirit. Its lampshaded by Ben in the bonus art how she gets the 'meaty story lines' despite not being TheProtagonist.

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* TheHero: She leads the group, she fights the battles, she has the HeroicSpirit. Its It's lampshaded by Ben in the bonus art how she gets the 'meaty story lines' despite not being TheProtagonist.



* PlayingWithFire: Its her BreathWeapon.

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* PlayingWithFire: Its her Her BreathWeapon.



** [[spoiler: JerkassFacade. Its a mask to compensate for inner toughness. He's actually an {{Adorkable}} self-depricating MommasBoy.]]

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** [[spoiler: JerkassFacade. Its It's a mask to compensate for inner toughness. He's actually an {{Adorkable}} self-depricating MommasBoy.]]



* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: She lived in a desolate mountain cave for years yet she's still a knock-out beauty. [[JustifiedTrope However]], the narration notes that 'dust itself was afraid to touch it (her dress)'. Its possible she used her ShockAndAwe powers to create a DirtForcefield.

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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: She lived in a desolate mountain cave for years yet she's still a knock-out beauty. [[JustifiedTrope However]], the narration notes that 'dust itself was afraid to touch it (her dress)'. Its It's possible she used her ShockAndAwe powers to create a DirtForcefield.



* ChainmailBikini: Justified. Its a 'strip down version' she made because she didn't want to wear the normal and all covering version in a desert. The other solders are completely covered.

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* ChainmailBikini: Justified. Its It's a 'strip down version' she made because she didn't want to wear the normal and all covering version in a desert. The other solders are completely covered.



* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: How Gothon rewards her for failing twice over. [[spoiler: throwing her, tied up, into a pit with a giant monster. The monster in question was a herbivore and thus harmless. All it did was scare her shitless, make her beg for her life, and ruin her dress with its slobber.]]

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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: How Gothon rewards her for failing twice over. over by [[spoiler: throwing her, tied up, into a pit with a giant monster. The monster in question was a herbivore and thus harmless. All it did was scare her shitless, make her beg for her life, and ruin her dress with its slobber.]]



* ClingyJealousGirl: As soon as they meet, she throws petty insults at Daniar and pulls Kalak away from her. Ritchie says she's like this with every girl Kalak has contact with. He thinks its BigSisterInstinct but by insisting that Kalak never has to have a child (and thus, never have sex with another woman) she borders IncestSubtext

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* ClingyJealousGirl: As soon as they meet, she throws petty insults at Daniar and pulls Kalak away from her. Ritchie says she's like this with every girl Kalak has contact with. He thinks its it's BigSisterInstinct but by insisting that Kalak never has to have a child (and thus, never have sex with another woman) she borders IncestSubtext

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* TheHeart: This is his functional role in the group; emotional support.



* TheHeart: This is his functional role in the group; emotional support.
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* BlowYouAway: Rana's BreathWeapon is the ability to exhale hurricane force breath. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".



* SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".

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* SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".*
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*WolverineClaws: His weapon of choice but [[GoodOldFisticuffs he's no slouch barehanded.]]
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* [[spoiler: YouKillItYouBought: Can invoke this on anyone that defeats it.]]

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* [[spoiler: YouKillItYouBought: YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Can invoke this on anyone that defeats it.]]
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* TheBrute: A mindless killing machine created by Lucia. It's sole purpose is to fight.
* EvilCounterpart: To Kalak; a BloodKnight. [[spoiler: The possibility of turning into this monster horrifies him.]]
*[[spoiler:HeroKiller: Erowin; nearly Daniar and Kalak.]]
*[[spoiler: YouKillItYouBought: Can invoke this on anyone that defeats it.]]
*TheVoiceless: Never says a word.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: After serving his role in the plot, he disapears and is never heard from again.

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: After serving his role in the plot, he disapears and is never heard from again. [[spoiler: WordOfGod says he was going to have a HeelRealization and comitt suicide by walking into a sand worm pit, but cut it out because it was too depressing after the moment of hope with Rana.]]

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* SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".



* SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".

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* SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon. Hinted to be quite powerful as Zarracka states she can "knock back entire legions with just a sneeze".
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* SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon.

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* SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon.
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* Superbreath: Her BreathWeapon.

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* Superbreath: SuperBreath: Her BreathWeapon.

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