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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Delta may be goofy and hate hurting people, but she’s still a Dungeon. Push her too far and she’ll start acting like one. [[spoiler: The Spider Queen and Marrow found this out the hard way.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Delta may be goofy and hate hurting people, but she’s still a Dungeon. Push her too far and she’ll start acting like one. [[spoiler: The Spider Queen and Marrow found this out the hard way.way, and the Fairplay company is learning.]]
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* CosmicMotifs: In the Pygmy Myconids' religion and the astral plane, Delta is represented by a sun -- a warm, nurturing and benevolent life-giver.
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* CosmicMotifs: In the Pygmy Myconids' religion and the astral plane, Delta is represented by a sun -- a warm, nurturing nurturing, and benevolent life-giver.
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* IdentityAmnesia: The price Delta took for a second life was her name. She can't remember her past life, such as her family or her original name. However, she does remember cultural references.
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* IdentityAmnesia: The price Delta took paid for a second life was her name. She can't remember her past life, such as her family or her original name. However, she does remember cultural references. [[spoiler:As she's been growing stronger and reconnecting with the others taken from her original world, she's been regaining more memories.]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler:As the first floor boss]], Fran dislikes leaving his room as it's very uncomfortable a feeling. But when the third level is under assault by [[spoiler:the remnants of the Silence]], Fran bravely descends in order to duel Captain Levix.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler:As the first floor boss]], Fran dislikes leaving his room as it's very uncomfortable a feeling.uncomfortable. But when the third level is under assault by [[spoiler:the remnants of the Silence]], Fran bravely descends in order to duel Captain Levix.
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* HiddenDepths: Discusses the concept with Kemy who staunchly maintains looks are deceiving, while he points that sometimes, what you see is what you get.
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* LineOfSightName: He's the tallest of the frog tribesmen and decided it was good enough a characteristic for a name.
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* LineOfSightName: He's by far the tallest biggest of the frog tribesmen and decided it that was good enough a characteristic for a name.
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* TheDreaded: The town elders and several of the inhabitants are this to the rest of the world. It’s been described as a place where the most dangerous people went to be forgotten.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: The only female goblin in Delta's dungeon.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: The only female goblin in Delta's dungeon. Quite possibly the only female goblin in the world.
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* LethalChef: He only can prepare troll soup, and Fera had to kill the result when it attempted to escape the pot. It's later used to wage ''chemical warfare'' against the undead army assaulting the third floor.
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* LethalChef: He only can prepare troll soup, and Fera had to kill the result when it attempted to escape the pot. It's later used to wage ''chemical warfare'' against the undead army assaulting the third floor.
floor. Jeb is so bad that [[spoiler:when he’s taken on a [[ItMakesSenseInContext dungeon tutoring expedition]], the ''mindless copy'' temporarily left in his place is ''better'' at cooking.]]
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!! King Jellagon
* FluffyTheTerrible: Starts out as the most peaceful and easy of Delta’s bosses to date [[spoiler:and becoming progressively more dangerous as challengers act with greed or violence on his floor.]]
* FluffyTheTerrible: Starts out as the most peaceful and easy of Delta’s bosses to date [[spoiler:and becoming progressively more dangerous as challengers act with greed or violence on his floor.]]
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: A lot of what Delta manages to accomplish involves things that she didn’t know were possible, her assistant menu (Nu) didn’t know were possible, and even the ''system itself'' didn’t know were possible.
