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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler:She is only one word into her second attempt (the first failing because Mami deafened herself to stop hearing what she was saying) to [[BreakThemByTalking break Mami]] by [[AwfulTruth revealing the truth about Witches]] when Mami kills her.]]

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* MinorLivingAlone: Was the case with Mami, Kyoko, and Homura before Soulbonds put them in the custody of Madoka's parents. Sayaka isn't directly in the custody the same way but lives with them for simplicity sake.
** Before the series Mami was living alone in her apartment due to the death of her parents and her living relatives being half a world away. She very quickly jumps on moving in with the Kanames for a reason, and was supported by a pension that kept her well off.
** Homura is a orphan whose surgeries and eventually an apartment were paid for by charity. She had lived in an orphanage before, which was not a happy experience for her.
** Kyoko for the last year had lived on her own after the death of her parents, wandering from place to place with little money. After a gig with the Magius, she'd eventually shift towards Mami's apartment and later the Kaname residence.



* MinorLivingAlone: Before the series she was living alone in her apartment due to the death of her parents and her living relatives being half a world away. She very quickly jumps on moving in with the Kanames for a reason.


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* MinorLivingAlone: She lives alone in Mami's apartment, occasionally with an additional resident like Yuma or Kyoko, with Mami providing her with food and utilities. As her mother is abusive, everyone finds this a better arrangement.
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* StalkingIsLove: She learned this idea from Timeline 1 Madoka and has carried it forward, thinking nothing of following Hitomi home to sneak her a phone so she can call Kyosuke.

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* StalkingIsLove: She learned this idea from Timeline 1 Madoka and has carried it forward, forward to other timelines, thinking nothing of following Hitomi home to sneak her a phone so she can call Kyosuke.



* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: There are Magical Girls who gain the power to alter the future when they contract, stop time, read minds, and a myriad of other such abilities. Mami...naturally has a power that any Magical Girl can get via meeting a Coordinator.

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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: There are Magical Girls who gain the power to alter the future when they contract, stop time, read minds, and a myriad of other such abilities. Mami...naturally has a power that any Magical Girl can get via meeting a Coordinator. Coordinator that she routinely forgets she even has.



* NotInFrontOfTheKid: Kyoko replaces her swearing whenever she's around Nagisa or Yuma. [[LadySwearsALot Considering she's one of the most foul-mouthed characters]] around, this crops up a lot. After moving into the Kaname residence, she also does this around Tatsuya.

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* NotInFrontOfTheKid: Kyoko replaces her swearing whenever she's around Nagisa or Yuma. [[LadySwearsALot Considering she's one of the most foul-mouthed characters]] around, this crops up a lot. After moving into the Kaname residence, she also does applies this standard this around Tatsuya.



* UnkemptBeauty: Being a [[SatisfiedStreetRat Street Rat]] for a period of time means Kyoko only does the bare minimum upkeep on herself, but she's quite the pretty teen even without it. Her casually admitting she doesn't need to brush or even shampoo her long hair (only using hand soap if she wants to get out any smells) to keep it naturally smooth and flowing to the point she never gets bedhead, something she puts down to genetics since her mom and Momo were the same, is enough to leave all of her Soulmates speechless.

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* UnkemptBeauty: Being a [[SatisfiedStreetRat Street Rat]] for a period of time and before that being poor means Kyoko only does the bare minimum upkeep on herself, but she's quite the pretty teen even without it. Her casually admitting she doesn't need to brush or even shampoo her long hair (only using hand soap if she wants to get out any smells) to keep it naturally smooth and flowing to the point she never gets bedhead, something she puts down to genetics since her mom and Momo were the same, is enough to leave all of her Soulmates speechless.

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* CommonalityConnection: While many of them have wildly different personalities, there's a lot of overlap between them individually that comes into play in their relationships that ultimately are what help them connect and bond with each other.



* NotSoDifferent: While many of them have wildly different personalities, there's a lot of overlap between them individually that comes into play in their relationships that ultimately are what help them connect and bond with each other.
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* EvilStoleMyFaith: Homura used to be religious, having been raised in a Catholic orphanage. However the constant strife with the Incubators has long drained Homura's devotion, preferring to believe there is no God than that God might exist and allow the Incubators to act.

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* CombatPragmatist: Despite the group having three veteran Magical Girls and two who aspire to high moral ideals, they are not against using any trick in the book to win and all three veterans approve of Sayaka's (albeit failed) attempts to use a variety of tactics to try and tag Homura during her first training session.



* NotSoDifferent: While many of them have wildly different personalities, there's a lot of overlap between them individually that comes into play in their relationships that ultimately are what help them connect and bond with each other.



** According to Junko, there is a reason she specifically bothers Nakazawa when her romantic relationships go belly up, a 'long and sorid reason' that is apparently on Junko's list of stories to tell when its time to discuss the 'juicy stories' when she turns fifteen.

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** According to Junko, there is a reason she specifically bothers Nakazawa when her romantic relationships go belly up, a 'long and sorid reason' that is apparently on Junko's list of stories to tell when its time to discuss the 'juicy stories' when she her daughter turns fifteen.

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* FormerTeenRebel: Junko's first meeting with Kyoko suggests she was a delinquent in her youth.



* NoodleIncident: Offhand mentions of past romantic rants about breakups over napkin prep and specific tableware.

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** According to Junko, there is a reason she specifically bothers Nakazawa when her romantic relationships go belly up, a 'long and sorid reason' that is apparently on Junko's list of stories to tell when its time to discuss the 'juicy stories' when she turns fifteen.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: She was a very good older sister to Momo when she was alive. [[spoiler: The fact that Momo's death could even be blamed on Kyoko at all was what Kyubey ended up using to try and drive Kyoko into despair, choosing it over the horrible truths that most Magical Girls can't handle.]]

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* BigBrotherInstinct: BigSisterInstinct: She was a very good older sister to Momo when she was alive. [[spoiler: The fact that Momo's death could even be blamed on Kyoko at all was what Kyubey ended up using to try and drive Kyoko into despair, choosing it over the horrible truths that most Magical Girls can't handle.]]


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* GainingTheWillToKill: Mami notes to Madoka that Kyoko used to very staunchly against lethal force back when she was Mami's apprentice, Mami needing to explain to her that lethal force did have to be a (final) option on the table sometimes. After the death of her family and year separated from Mami, Kyoko is now willing to use lethal force on other Magical Girls.
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* StalkingIsLove: She learned this idea from Timeline 1 Madika and has carried it forward, thinking nothing of following Hitomi home to sneak her a phone so she can call Kyosuke.

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* StalkingIsLove: She learned this idea from Timeline 1 Madika Madoka and has carried it forward, thinking nothing of following Hitomi home to sneak her a phone so she can call Kyosuke.
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* UnkemptBeauty: Being a StreetRat for a period of time means Kyoko only does the bare minimum upkeep on herself, but she's quite the pretty teen even without it. Her casually admitting she doesn't need to brush or even shampoo her long hair (only using hand soap if she wants to get out any smells) to keep it naturally smooth and flowing to the point she never gets bedhead, something she puts down to genetics since her mom and Momo were the same, is enough to leave all of her Soulmates speechless.

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* UnkemptBeauty: Being a StreetRat [[SatisfiedStreetRat Street Rat]] for a period of time means Kyoko only does the bare minimum upkeep on herself, but she's quite the pretty teen even without it. Her casually admitting she doesn't need to brush or even shampoo her long hair (only using hand soap if she wants to get out any smells) to keep it naturally smooth and flowing to the point she never gets bedhead, something she puts down to genetics since her mom and Momo were the same, is enough to leave all of her Soulmates speechless.
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* UnkemptBeauty: Being a StreetRat for a period of time means Kyoko only does the bare minimum upkeep on herself, but she's quite the pretty teen even without it. Her casually admitting she doesn't need to brush or even shampoo her long hair (only using hand soap if she wants to get out any smells) to keep it naturally smooth and flowing to the point she never gets bedhead, something she puts down to genetics since her mom and Momo were the same, is enough to leave all of her Soulmates speechless.

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* StalkingIsLove: She learned this idea from Timeline 1 Madika and has carried it forward, thinking nothing of following Hitomi home to sneak her a phone so she can call Kyosuke.



* StalkingIsLove: Firmly believes it's okay to stalk someone if you're just trying to help them. The Overprotective sidestory shows the Timeline 1 version of her sneaking money into Homura's bag and chocolates into her locker, heavily patrolling the path between her apartment and school, and even climbing through the window into her apartment when she thinks she may have been kidnapped.



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* ArcVillain: They're the main villains of the second part of the story, taking over as the primary antagonists after [[spoiler: The Griefer's death.]]
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* PresentAbsence: Only Iroha remembers her, but echoes of her existence hang around her Soulmates everywhere, including spoiler: [[nightmares of her screaming.]]

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* PresentAbsence: Only Iroha remembers her, but echoes of her existence hang around her Soulmates everywhere, including spoiler: [[nightmares [[spoiler:nightmares of her screaming.]]

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* OriginalCharacter: One of story's wholly-original Magical Girls.



* OneSteveLimit: Has the same given name as one of Matsuri’s deceased teammates.

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* OneSteveLimit: Has Averted as she has the same given name as one of Matsuri’s deceased teammates.teammates.
* OriginalCharacter: One of story's wholly-original Magical Girls.



* OriginalCharacter: One of story's wholly-original Magical Girls.



* OriginalCharacter: One of story's wholly-original Magical Girls.



* OriginalCharacter: One of story's wholly-original Magical Girls, or Magical Boys in his case.



[[folder:The Ferroros]]
Mami's maternal family from Italy, she's not been able to see them since becoming both an orphan and a Magical Girl. The changes to her life since meeting her Soulmates has opened the door once more. Members include Mami's 'Nonna' Armina Ferroro, cousin Alessia Ferroro, her Soulmate Carlotta Volpe, and Uncle Umberto.

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[[folder:The Ferroros]]
Mami's maternal family from Italy, she's not been able to see them since becoming both an orphan

[[folder:Ui Tamaki]]
Iroha's little sister
and a Magical Girl. The changes to her life since meeting her Soulmates has opened the door once more. Members include Mami's 'Nonna' Armina Ferroro, cousin Alessia Ferroro, her Soulmate Carlotta Volpe, of Touka and Uncle Umberto.Nemu. By unknown means Ui vanished from everyone's memories, with her sister's restored memories of her driving her to find her.



* ForegoneConclusion: Thanks to Mel, Iroha knows she'll find Ui alive. The problem is that she also knows that to find her is to also find a great threat to Kamihama.
*MacGuffinSuperPerson: While Iroha isn't sure if she's a Magical Girl or not, only having Yachiyo's suspicions on the matter, her absence is having a negative effect on Touka and Nemu's health and souls.
* PresentAbsence: Only Iroha remembers her, but echoes of her existence hang around her Soulmates everywhere, including spoiler: [[nightmares of her screaming.]]
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[[folder:The Ferroros]]
Mami's maternal family from Italy, she's not been able to see them since becoming both an orphan and a Magical Girl. The changes to her life since meeting her Soulmates has opened the door once more. Members include Mami's 'Nonna' Armina Ferroro, cousin Alessia Ferroro, her Soulmate Carlotta Volpe, and Uncle Umberto.
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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: A healer who is the token good teammate of the Magius who devotes herself to helping the sick and injured with blond hair.

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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: A healer who is the token good teammate of the Magius who devotes herself to helping the sick and injured with blond hair. Even [[spoiler: her inner Witch, Arzt Kochen, is comparably nice, as instead of focusing on an inner darkness or failing like Candeloro, Homulilly, and Bella Donna, Artz mostly is fueled by the nagging feeling of Yuuri not doing ''enough'' to help people.]]



* NoSell: They were able to cancel out Sasa Yuuki's attempts to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy control them]]. According to Crossoverpairinglover, this was because she specifically tried to turn them against one another, which got hard-countered by their wish to never hate each other.

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* NoSell: They were able to cancel out Sasa Yuuki's attempts to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy control them]]. According to Crossoverpairinglover, this was them]] because she specifically tried to turn them against one another, which got hard-countered by their wish to never hate each other.


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* StupidEvil: Touka has a low opinion on her intelligence, and continuously trying to get the Amane's to attack each other was a failing strategy she kept using.

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* OldMaid: While she can still get a boyfriend, the relationships struggle and being the age of Madoka's parents, who have a fourteen year old daughter, makes her a little sensitive about it. Homura at one point outright thinks of her as an old maid in the context of how calling her that to her face would be something one only does if one has a death wish.



* AbusiveParents: By all accounts her mom is quite terrible to her. Part of the reason Mami lets her stay in her apartment is to keep away from her, knowing that Nagisa's mother won't try and retrieve her.



* RaisedByGrandparents: Not initially, but she's taken in by her grandparents after her mother's guilty verdict who are a vast improvement as guardians. Kyoko herself is still welcome around her for saving her.

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* RaisedByGrandparents: Not initially, but she's taken in by her grandparents after her mother's guilty verdict who are a vast improvement as guardians. Kyoko herself is still welcome around her for saving her.her from her mother's abuse.



** Touka and Nemu have no problem with Yuuri curing non-Magius members of their illnesses when she's not required to tend to them for personal reasons and fully respect Yuuri's ideals.

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** Touka and Nemu have no problem with Yuuri curing non-Magius members of their illnesses when she's not required to tend to them for personal reasons and fully respect Yuuri's ideals. Touka herself admits she thinks no one deserves to be sick.



* PsychologicalProjection: Can fall into this sometimes, such has having trouble understanding why Sasa Yuuki would hide her powers.

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* PsychologicalProjection: Can fall into this sometimes, such has having trouble understanding why Sasa Yuuki would hide her powers.powers because she couldn't imagine doing so herself.

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* MayflyDecemberRomance: The revelation of the immortality of Magical Girls puts this in play between Madoka and her Soulmates, and its a problem that Homura is aware that if they can't find another solution for, Madoka will contract rather than let it come to that, mostly because her mortality would take Homura, Mami, Kyoko, and Sayaka with them.

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* MayflyDecemberRomance: The revelation of the immortality of Magical Girls puts this in play between Madoka and her Soulmates, and its a problem that Homura is aware that if they can't find another solution for, Madoka will contract rather than let it come to that, mostly because her mortality would take down Homura, Mami, Kyoko, and Sayaka with them.her.



* HealingHands: As her wish directly relates to healing, Sayaka has both a boosted HealingFactor and her magical ability to heal others is much stronger than the average Magical Girl.

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* HealingHands: As her wish directly relates to healing, Sayaka has both a boosted HealingFactor and her magical ability to heal others is much stronger than the average Magical Girl. Kyoko outright says that Sayaka probably won't end up with any scars like most Magical Girls as a result.
* IAmNotPretty: She's in a bit of disbelief about being 'one of the hot ones' when some guys in school complain Madoka is getting them all.



* NiceGuy: Tomohisa doesn't seem to have a mean bone in his body. At worst he and Mami sometimes compete over kitchen space.

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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Junko is the family breadwinner and Tomihisa is the housekeeper. Junko drinks hard and Tomihisa grows tomatoes.
* NiceGuy: Tomohisa doesn't seem to have a mean bone in his body. At worst he and Mami sometimes compete over kitchen space. Kyoko outright pegs Madoka's trusting nature to him.



* ButtMonkey: He's the teacher's punching bag for some reason and often used as a joke in story, even [[spoiler: Candeloro]] will throw shade at him by suggesting Homura would beat him with a dead fish and consider it a good date with Madoka.

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* ButtMonkey: He's the teacher's punching bag for some reason and often used as a joke in story, in-story, even [[spoiler: Candeloro]] will throw shade at him by suggesting Homura would beat him with a dead fish and consider it a good date with Madoka.
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** Madoka is attracted to women, as is her mother whose bisexual.

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** Madoka is attracted to women, as is her mother whose bisexual.(who is bisexual).



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* CultureBlind: Homura knows very little pop culture, barely knowing what ''Star Wars'' is and having no idea what Sute's 'Shonen Manga' powers even are or what Sayaka meant in one timeline when she believed Homura to be a pod person. She's also the only one of the four talking who don't know anything about Alina Gray's art, something ''Yuma'' has heard of. She's more aware of Marvel comics, but that is seemingly due to dealing with a comicbook-themed Witch regularly. She does get a crash course in Shonen Manga from Sayaka after fighting Sute, enough to [[ItMakesSenseInContext to correct Sayaka that she's a Genin, not a Chunnin.]]

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* CultureBlind: Homura knows very little pop culture, barely knowing what ''Star Wars'' is and having no idea what Sute's 'Shonen Manga' powers even are or what Sayaka meant in one timeline when she believed Homura to be a pod person. She's also the only one of the four talking who don't know anything about Alina Gray's art, something ''Yuma'' has heard of. She's more aware of Marvel comics, but that is seemingly due to dealing with a comicbook-themed Witch regularly. She does get a crash course in Shonen Manga from Sayaka after fighting Sute, enough to [[ItMakesSenseInContext to correct Sayaka that she's a Genin, not a Chunnin.Chunin.]]



* UnknownRival: To Oriko and Kirika, as Homura, due to her experiences with Oriko in the various time loops where she's trying to kill Madoka has her registered as a priority target to eliminate to keep Madoka safe, which she's only putting off for now because Oriko is far away and currently commanding an army of Magical Girls that could seek vengeance. In this timeline, as Oriko's plans implicitly involve keeping the Mitakihara gang ''alive'', Oriko is confused on why her visions show her any attempt to directly speak with Madoka or Homura at the current time will end with her or Kirika shot.

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* UnknownRival: To Oriko and Kirika, as Homura, due to her experiences with Oriko in the various time loops where she's trying to kill Madoka has her registered as a priority target to eliminate to keep Madoka safe, which she's only putting off for now because Oriko is far away and currently commanding an army of Magical Girls that could seek vengeance. In this timeline, as Oriko's plans implicitly involve keeping the Mitakihara gang ''alive'', Oriko is confused on why her visions show her that any attempt to directly speak with Madoka or Homura at the current time will end with her or Kirika shot.



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* AllLovingHero: Madoka has a nearly infinite well of kindness and love for her friends, Soulmates, and everyone around her. Even [[spoiler: Candeloro and Homulilly]]. The only exception seems to be Akasuki, leaving Madoka's line at mass murderers [[spoiler: who kidnap her friends]].

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* AllLovingHero: Madoka has a nearly infinite well of kindness and love for her friends, Soulmates, and everyone around her. Even [[spoiler: Candeloro and Homulilly]]. [[EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes The only exception seems to be Akasuki, Akasuki]], leaving Madoka's line at mass murderers [[spoiler: who kidnap her friends]].



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* GodzillaThreshold: Mami generally avoids abusing her tendency to end school with gas leaks to only deal with Witch attacks. She never outright proactively cancels school. [[spoiler: She does when she realizes The Griefer has kidnapped Hitomi and they can't find her in a day.]] This is also the only reason she, or the others, tell Sayaka about this trend.

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* GodzillaThreshold: Mami generally avoids abusing her tendency to end school with gas leaks to only deal with Witch attacks. She never outright proactively cancels school. [[spoiler: She does school unless in the direst of situations, such as when she [[spoiler:she realizes The Griefer has kidnapped Hitomi and they can't find her in a day.]] This is also the only reason she, or the others, tell Sayaka about this trend.



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* GreenEyedMonster: {{Downplayed}}, but Sayaka finds herself increasingly put out upon realization that despite being Madoka's best friend and protector for most of their lives, she's now at best "second-place" in Madoka's life to her two Soulmates Mami and Homura, who can understand her on an even deeper level and are two veteran magical warriors more than capable of keeping her safe. She's beyond overjoyed when this no longer applies when she also becomes Madoka's Soulmate.

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* GreenEyedMonster: {{Downplayed}}, but Sayaka finds herself increasingly put out upon the realization that despite being Madoka's best friend and protector for most of their lives, she's now at best "second-place" in Madoka's life to her two Soulmates Mami and Homura, who can understand her on an even deeper level and are two veteran magical warriors more than capable of keeping her safe. She's beyond overjoyed when this no longer applies when she also becomes Madoka's Soulmate.



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* AbusiveParents: Downplayed, but Sayaka outright says they are the worst of their parents for a reason, and they basically [[spoiler: are the only ones to blame Hitomi for being kidnapped]].
* ArmoredClosetGay: Homura notes in some timelines that, despite how flustered girls loving girls can make Hitomi sometimes, Hitomi is not straight. This doesn't seem to be the case in all timelines, including the current one.
* BadassBookworm: Between her and her friends she gets the best grades despite her lack of time to study, and even considers [[spoiler: using a wish by Kyubey]] to get her parents to stop pressuring her into more high society classes to study more. When [[spoiler: she contracts and becomes a Magical Girl]], it doesn't take her long to figure out [[spoiler: how to essentially weaponize vacuums]].
* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: After contracting, Hitomi gains the power of teleportation, up to and including the power to strike enemies with the fundamental forces of nature by exploiting vacuums.]] Unfortunately for her [[spoiler: she trusted a serial killer with mind control powers]] and ends Chapter 11 in a bad place. Chapter 13 [[spoiler: sees her rescued from this place.]]
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Hitomi wanted her parents to lay off the extracurriculars, and they did. [[spoiler: Because they are absolutely furious with her for being kidnapped, clearly against her will, and vanishing with a large amount of unrecoverable money for two days.]]

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* AbusiveParents: Downplayed, but Sayaka outright says they are the worst of their parents for a reason, and they basically [[spoiler: are [[spoiler:are the only ones to blame Hitomi for being kidnapped]].
* ArmoredClosetGay: Homura notes in some timelines that, despite how flustered girls loving girls can make Hitomi sometimes, Hitomi is not straight. This flustering doesn't seem to be the case happen in all some timelines, including the current one.
* BadassBookworm: Between her and her friends she gets the best grades despite her lack of time to study, and even considers [[spoiler: using [[spoiler:using a wish by Kyubey]] to get her parents to stop pressuring her into more high society classes to study more. When [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she contracts and becomes a Magical Girl]], it doesn't take her long to figure out [[spoiler: how [[spoiler:how to essentially weaponize vacuums]].
* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After contracting, Hitomi gains the power of teleportation, up to and including the power to strike enemies with the fundamental forces of nature by exploiting vacuums.]] Unfortunately for her [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she trusted a serial killer with mind control powers]] and ends Chapter 11 in a bad place. Chapter 13 [[spoiler: sees [[spoiler:sees her rescued from this place.]]
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Hitomi wanted her parents to lay off the extracurriculars, and they did. [[spoiler: Because [[spoiler:Because they are absolutely furious with her for being kidnapped, clearly against her will, and vanishing with a large amount of unrecoverable money for two days.]]



* FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler: Akasuki forces her to try to kill Madoka and Sayaka, and ultimately ends up fighting Madoka's Soulmate Homura.]]

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* FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler: Akasuki [[spoiler:Akasuki forces her to try to kill Madoka and Sayaka, and ultimately ends up fighting Madoka's Soulmate Homura.]]



** Hitomi might be a popular and well off student, but the pressures that her parents are putting on her with all the extracurricular activities are starting to get at her. [[spoiler: Enough that Kyubey's offer of granting a wish seriously tempts her to use it to make her parents back off.]]

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** Hitomi might be a popular and well off student, but the pressures that her parents are putting on her with all the extracurricular activities are starting to get at her. [[spoiler: Enough [[spoiler:Enough that Kyubey's offer of granting a wish seriously tempts her to use it to make her parents back off.]]



* StressVomit: [[spoiler: Becoming a Magical Girl caused her to vomit up her dinner.]]
* TheUnreveal: While Homura has seen her Witch form in past timelines and [[spoiler: Hitomi does hear it talk to her in chapter 13]], ultimately what sort of Witch Hitomi would become is unseen and unspecified. The name of the Witch is known however, being Coppelia.
* UnwittingMuggleFriend: Following Sayaka becoming a secret keeper, she becomes this [[spoiler: until the end of chapter 10.]]
* WeakButSkilled: After Homura, she has the lowest raw magical power of the Mitakihara Middle School girls, and as such Kyubey often ignores her. [[spoiler: When contracted she gains the power to strike her targets with something approximating a ''vacuum bomb'' with only moderate experimentation with her teleportation powers and is so dangerous if she was to try and kill someone that Homura is best suited to handle her powers safely.]]

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* StressVomit: [[spoiler: Becoming [[spoiler:Becoming a Magical Girl caused her to vomit up her dinner.]]
* TheUnreveal: While Homura has seen her Witch form in past timelines and [[spoiler: Hitomi [[spoiler:Hitomi does hear it talk to her in chapter 13]], ultimately what sort of Witch Hitomi would become is unseen and unspecified. The name of the Witch is known however, being Coppelia.
* UnwittingMuggleFriend: Following Sayaka becoming a secret keeper, she becomes this [[spoiler: until [[spoiler:until the end of chapter 10.]]
* WeakButSkilled: After Homura, she has the lowest raw magical power of the Mitakihara Middle School girls, and as such Kyubey often ignores her. [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When contracted she gains the power to strike her targets with something approximating a ''vacuum bomb'' with only moderate experimentation with her teleportation powers and is so dangerous if she was to try and kill someone that Homura is best suited to handle her powers safely.]]



* YouAreGrounded: [[spoiler: Her parents basically put her under lockdown after she's rescued from Akasuki, blaming her for being kidnapped.]]

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* YouAreGrounded: [[spoiler: Her [[spoiler:Her parents basically put her under lockdown after she's rescued from Akasuki, blaming her for being kidnapped.]]



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* BerserkButton: The Uwasa of the Seance Shrine infuriates her due to playing with peoples’ emotions like how she did with her wish. [[spoiler: Bella Donna agreed]].

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* BerserkButton: The Uwasa of the Seance Shrine infuriates her due to playing with peoples’ emotions like how she did with her wish. [[spoiler: Bella [[spoiler:Bella Donna agreed]].



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* AchievementsInIgnorance: While transformed and completely out of her mind, Ren managed to set Rika up for [[spoiler: being able to merge with Bella Donna into a super mode]]. This was not intentional, and the required circumstances are ones that may not be able to be replicated.

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* AchievementsInIgnorance: While transformed and completely out of her mind, Ren managed to set Rika up for [[spoiler: being [[spoiler:being able to merge with Bella Donna into a super mode]]. This was not intentional, and the required circumstances are ones that may not be able to be replicated.



* ShrinkingViolet: Naturally quiet and nervous, even after a fair bit of work by Rika and her own experiences as a Magical Girl. Hinano outright uses her as a 'canary in the coal mine' as a result, as if she's not being scared by something, [[spoiler: like her Soulmate's fusion with Bella Donna]], then it can't be as bad as it might seem at first glance.

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* ShrinkingViolet: Naturally quiet and nervous, even after a fair bit of work by Rika and her own experiences as a Magical Girl. Hinano outright uses her as a 'canary in the coal mine' as a result, as if she's not being scared by something, [[spoiler: like [[spoiler:like her Soulmate's fusion with Bella Donna]], then it can't be as bad as it might seem at first glance.



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** Just ''what'' they are doing is uncertain, with the setting of the story having diverted or averted at least two of their major antagonists in the form of 'Yuuri' and Hijiri Kanna, greatly diverting their canon story .

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[[folder:Dr. Satomi]]
Touka's father, a well-respected medical doctor who is skilled at treating rare ailments in children.
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* GoodParents: Touka is very proud of how her father raised her, although he hasn't had as much of an opportunity to do so lately due to her being a Magical Girl without his knowledge.
* UnnamedParent: Never got a given name revealed even in canon, as everyone refers to him by his surname and title.
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* FalseReassurance: During Mami's confrontation with him after [[spoiler: Hitomi's kidnapping]], one of the statements he uses to butter Mami up is her saving of Michiru Kazusa and in turn her inspiring of other girls, telling her that 'when anyone speaks about Asurano City and its Magical Girls, that is all because of you saving a single girl’s life'. Given that the Pleiades Saints are considered TheDreaded, this is far less of a compliment as it seems at first glance and is more like Kyubey just planting seeds of distress to use later.

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* FalseReassurance: During Mami's confrontation with him after [[spoiler: Hitomi's [[spoiler:Hitomi's kidnapping]], one of the statements he uses to butter Mami up is her saving of Michiru Kazusa and in turn her inspiring of other girls, telling her that 'when anyone speaks about Asurano City and its Magical Girls, that is all because of you saving a single girl’s life'. Given that the Pleiades Saints are considered TheDreaded, this is far less of a compliment as it seems at first glance and is more like Kyubey just planting seeds of distress to use later.



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* AnimalMotifs: [[WickedWasps Wasps and hornets]]. Suzumebachi is the Japanese word for a wasp or hornet, her weapon is a ring that resembles a hornet's stinger, and like parasitoid wasps, she stings her enemies without mercy and takes over their bodies for her own benefit.



* VillainsWantMercy: Pulls this with [[spoiler: Mami]] when confronted, which quickly turns into a desperate [[spoiler:BreakThemByTalking moment]] as a last-ditch effort. At best this gets her a few more seconds [[spoiler:before Mami [[DeliberateInjuryGambit makes sure she can't hear]], and then makes sure Akasuki can't talk at all ever again]].



* VillainsWantMercy: Pulls this with [[spoiler: Mami]] when confronted, which quickly turns into a desperate [[spoiler:BreakThemByTalking moment]] as a last-ditch effort. At best this gets her a few more seconds [[spoiler:before Mami [[DeliberateInjuryGambit makes sure she can't hear]], and then makes sure Akasuki can't talk at all ever again]].



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[[folder: Kirika Kure]]
A somewhat strange girl who in many timelines is Oriko's partner in crime, utterly devoted to her as the Black Magical Girl and someone who Homura prefers to kill on sight. This time around she's Oriko's Soulmate and her own personal enforcer.

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[[folder: Kirika [[folder:Kirika Kure]]
A somewhat strange girl who in many timelines is Oriko's partner in crime, utterly devoted to her as the Black Magical Girl and someone who Homura prefers to kill on sight. This time around around, she's Oriko's Soulmate and her own personal enforcer.



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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Things didn't go as badly for her and the other canonical members of Folklore of Zero in Yukuni, thanks to the existence of Soulbonds meaning magic in general was more accepted.

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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Things didn't go as badly for her and the other canonical members of Folklore of Zero in Yukuni, thanks to the existence of Soulbonds meaning magic in general was more accepted. This in turn resulted in the group not forming, meaning Alexandra has a different reason for coming to Kamihama.



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* StartOfDarkness: WordOfGod implies she probably overworked herself to a point of corrupting her Soul Gem.

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* StartOfDarkness: WordOfGod implies she probably overworked herself to a point of corrupting her Soul Gem.
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Th Box Witch. A Witch who takes the form of a flying television with wings, Kirsten is one of the Witches who Homura has learned the origin and name of, but is too late to do anything about.

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* {{Expy}}: Suzumebachi has a very similar powerset to the Oriko character Sasa Yuuki, both being able to control other Magical Girls and Witches and being manipulator characters without raw power of her own. If anything, Suzumebachi is the sort of character that Sasa could become if allowed to run around for decades. As Homura does mention Sasa, it may be a case of ExpyCoexistence between the two.

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* {{Expy}}: Suzumebachi has a very similar powerset to the Oriko character Sasa Yuuki, both being able to control other Magical Girls and Witches and being manipulator characters without raw power of her own. If anything, Suzumebachi is the sort of character that Sasa could become if allowed to run around for decades. As Homura does mention Sasa, it may be and she's later shown as a Black Feather, its a case of ExpyCoexistence between the two.



* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: Membership of the Magius in the story have greatly expanded from their canonical ranks to include Oriko, Kirika, Yuuri, Arisa, Himena, and Alexandra, the latter two in canon joined the Neo-Magius first.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Its a group out to save Magical Girls from becoming Witches, but innocent people are hurt as part of their plans and the group is prone to cult-like methods of seeking this goal out.

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* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: Membership of the Magius in the story have greatly expanded from their canonical ranks to include Oriko, Kirika, Yuuri, Arisa, Sasa, Himena, and Alexandra, the latter two in canon joined the Neo-Magius first.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Its a group out to save Magical Girls from becoming Witches, but innocent people are hurt as part of their plans and the group is prone to cult-like methods of seeking this goal out.out and they are so convinced of their righteousness they are willing to do anything to get it.



* DaddysGirl: She ''adores'' her father.



* TokenGoodTeammate: Among the Magius, Oriko describes her as the nicest and most normal.

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* TokenGoodTeammate: Among the Magius, Magius leadership, Oriko describes her as the nicest and most normal.



* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: A healer who is the token good teammate of the Magius who devotes herself to helping the sick and injured with blond hair.



* NotSoHarmlessVillain: Kyoko finds them annoying and weak and Sasa outright ignored them as threats. They ultimately are the ones who take the latter down.



* TheStarscream: Attempted to take over the Wings of the Magius through brainwashing.

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* TheStarscream: Attempted to take over the Wings of the Magius through brainwashing. She was ultimately stopped before it got too far.


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* TheUnreveal: While Homura has seen her Witch form in past timelines and [[spoiler: Hitomi does hear it talk to her in chapter 13]], ultimately what sort of Witch Hitomi would become is unseen and unspecified.

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* TheUnreveal: While Homura has seen her Witch form in past timelines and [[spoiler: Hitomi does hear it talk to her in chapter 13]], ultimately what sort of Witch Hitomi would become is unseen and unspecified. The name of the Witch is known however, being Coppelia.



* JerkassRealization: After Mami's healing bettered his state to a point that surgical repairs of his injuries become not just possible, but guaranteed to succeed, Kyosuke leaves his funk and realizes he'd been a jerk to a lot of people, including Sayaka, Hitomi, and his nurses. He apologizes for this afterwards.



* ShipperOnDeck: Kyoko's parents apparently realized that she had a crush on Mami and approved of it, even to a point Pastor Sakura adjusted his sermons to not talk about bible quote about large families to avert [[IWantGrandkids pressuring Kyoko on something that two girls can't easily do.]]



* AdorableAbomination: Her doll form might be a Witch and thus the representation of suffering and pain and very dangerous, but Mami thinks it would make a very cute plushie for her younger charges.



* AdorableAbomination: While Mami doesn't know what Homulilly is, at best wondering if she's some of Id, she does think she's very huggable.




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* WasOnceAMan: Like all Witches, though Homura has deduced her name to be Noriko Chiasa from Mitakihara North High School.



[[folder:Walpurgisnacht]]
The Stage-constructing Witch. A massive Witch known as a living disaster that comes to Mitakihara at the end of Homura's timeloops. Though in the current timeline it may have different origins....

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[[folder:Walpurgisnacht]]
The Stage-constructing
[[folder: Gabriella]]
Gabriella, the Mail Carrier
Witch. A massive Witch known as a living disaster that comes to Mitakihara at the end of Homura's timeloops. Though long dead who appeared in the current timeline it may have different origins....Sakura family Church, but whose actions caused great sorrow to befall Kyoko.



* AlternateSelf: While there is always a Walpurgisnacht at the end of a time loop, this one seems to be different than the past ones that Homura has dealt with [[spoiler: given its ties to Soulbonds that did not exist originally.]]
* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: In this timeline, a Walpurgisnacht is the result of a Soulbond of Magical Girls becoming Witches, making it one to any Soulbonded group of Magical Girls.]]
* GreaterScopeVillain: With Kyubey as the overarching and broad looming threat, Walpurgisnacht is more of a looming natural disaster that is coming and cannot be avoided. Only prepared for.
* HeroKiller: It has killed many, many versions of Madoka, Mami, Sayaka, and Kyoko, as well as the odd other Magical Girl like Komaki and Hitomi.
* LegacyCharacter: There have been a few Witches with the title of Walpurgisnacht over the years, each a living disaster like the previous.
* NotSoInvincibleAfterAll: For all of Walpurgisnacht's nigh-apocalyptic power, Homura has managed to beat her at least twice throughout the timeloops with the help of other Magical Girls. [[BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu Unfortunately]], Homura has usually been the SoleSurvivor of such a showdown with maybe one other Magical Girl with her, and never in such a manner she could call it a PyrrhicVictory worth having. Homura's current plan in this final timeline is to either train up the Mitakihara gang for an EverybodyLives ending [[spoiler:or pray Walpurgisnacht goes to Kamihama so the Wings of the Magius can kill her through raw power or sheer number of bodies to throw at her.]]
* RomanticFusion: [[spoiler:A very dark example. A Walpurgisnacht is the result of the Witches of Soulbonded Magical Girls merging into a single cataclysmic entity. Given the fact said Magical Girls would be in romantic relationships, and how Candeloro expresses more than once the desire to join with Homulilly and Gretchen until they're no longer separated and they can't even tell where one ends and the others begin, it's clear the mutual love is still there, albeit heavily twisted in madness and despair.]]

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* AlternateSelf: While there is always a Walpurgisnacht at NoNameGiven: Kyoko only knows the end of a time loop, this one seems to be different than the past ones that Homura has dealt with [[spoiler: given its ties to Soulbonds that did Witch by appearance, not exist originally.]]
* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: In this timeline, a Walpurgisnacht is the result of a Soulbond of Magical Girls becoming Witches, making it one to any Soulbonded group of Magical Girls.]]
* GreaterScopeVillain: With Kyubey as the overarching and broad looming threat, Walpurgisnacht is more of a looming natural disaster that is coming and cannot be avoided. Only prepared for.
* HeroKiller: It has killed many, many versions of Madoka, Mami, Sayaka, and Kyoko, as well as the odd other Magical Girl like Komaki and Hitomi.
by name.
* LegacyCharacter: There have been PosthumousCharacter: Kyoko killed her about a few Witches with year before the title of Walpurgisnacht over the years, each a living disaster like the previous.
* NotSoInvincibleAfterAll: For all of Walpurgisnacht's nigh-apocalyptic power, Homura has managed to beat her at least twice throughout the timeloops with the help of other Magical Girls. [[BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu Unfortunately]], Homura has usually been the SoleSurvivor of such a showdown with maybe one other Magical Girl with her, and never in such a manner she could call it a PyrrhicVictory worth having. Homura's current plan in this final timeline is to either train up the Mitakihara gang for an EverybodyLives ending [[spoiler:or pray Walpurgisnacht goes to Kamihama so the Wings
events of the Magius can kill story.
* StartOfDarkness: WordOfGod implies she probably overworked herself to a point of corrupting
her through raw power or sheer number of bodies to throw at her.]]
* RomanticFusion: [[spoiler:A very dark example. A Walpurgisnacht is the result of the Witches of Soulbonded Magical Girls merging into a single cataclysmic entity. Given the fact said Magical Girls would be in romantic relationships, and how Candeloro expresses more than once the desire to join with Homulilly and Gretchen until they're no longer separated and they can't even tell where one ends and the others begin, it's clear the mutual love is still there, albeit heavily twisted in madness and despair.]]
Soul Gem.



!!Mitakihara Antagonists

[[folder: Kyubey]]
Mami's only companion for a large bulk of her three years as a Magical Girl. However unbeknownst to her, he's far from benevolent.

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!!Mitakihara Antagonists


[[folder: Kyubey]]
Mami's only companion for a large bulk
Kirsten]]
Th Box Witch. A Witch who takes the form
of her three years as a Magical Girl. However unbeknownst flying television with wings, Kirsten is one of the Witches who Homura has learned the origin and name of, but is too late to her, he's far from benevolent.do anything about.



* FamedInStory: Her time as an idol made her well known enough that Madoka knew of her, though her status as Magical Girl was only learned later.
* TheGhost: She's only discussed by Homura, her actual self isn't seen though by all accounts she's currently active.
* NoNameGiven: Homura doesn't know her Witch name, though she does know her original one.
* StartOfDarkness: According to Homura, having wished to be an idol created conflict between her wish and her original self as a recluse, and the stress eventually got to her.
* WasOnceAMan: Like all Witches. Homura discovered her name to have Hiroko Nako been during the time loops.

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[[folder:Walpurgisnacht]]
The Stage-constructing Witch. A massive Witch known as a living disaster that comes to Mitakihara at the end of Homura's timeloops. Though in the current timeline it may have different origins....
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* AlternateSelf: While there is always a Walpurgisnacht at the end of a time loop, this one seems to be different than the past ones that Homura has dealt with [[spoiler: given its ties to Soulbonds that did not exist originally.]]
* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: In this timeline, a Walpurgisnacht is the result of a Soulbond of Magical Girls becoming Witches, making it one to any Soulbonded group of Magical Girls.]]
* GreaterScopeVillain: With Kyubey as the overarching and broad looming threat, Walpurgisnacht is more of a looming natural disaster that is coming and cannot be avoided. Only prepared for.
* HeroKiller: It has killed many, many versions of Madoka, Mami, Sayaka, and Kyoko, as well as the odd other Magical Girl like Komaki and Hitomi.
* LegacyCharacter: There have been a few Witches with the title of Walpurgisnacht over the years, each a living disaster like the previous.
* NotSoInvincibleAfterAll: For all of Walpurgisnacht's nigh-apocalyptic power, Homura has managed to beat her at least twice throughout the timeloops with the help of other Magical Girls. [[BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu Unfortunately]], Homura has usually been the SoleSurvivor of such a showdown with maybe one other Magical Girl with her, and never in such a manner she could call it a PyrrhicVictory worth having. Homura's current plan in this final timeline is to either train up the Mitakihara gang for an EverybodyLives ending [[spoiler:or pray Walpurgisnacht goes to Kamihama so the Wings of the Magius can kill her through raw power or sheer number of bodies to throw at her.]]
* RomanticFusion: [[spoiler:A very dark example. A Walpurgisnacht is the result of the Witches of Soulbonded Magical Girls merging into a single cataclysmic entity. Given the fact said Magical Girls would be in romantic relationships, and how Candeloro expresses more than once the desire to join with Homulilly and Gretchen until they're no longer separated and they can't even tell where one ends and the others begin, it's clear the mutual love is still there, albeit heavily twisted in madness and despair.]]

[[/folder]]
!!Mitakihara Antagonists

[[folder: Kyubey]]
Mami's only companion for a large bulk of her three years as a Magical Girl. However unbeknownst to her, he's far from benevolent.
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* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: Membership of the Magius in the story have greatly expanded from their canonical ranks to include Oriko, Kirika, Yuuri, Arisa, and Himena, who in canon joined the Neo-Magius first.

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* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: Membership of the Magius in the story have greatly expanded from their canonical ranks to include Oriko, Kirika, Yuuri, Arisa, and Himena, who and Alexandra, the latter two in canon joined the Neo-Magius first.
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: She's had to deal with so many horrible things in the timelines that not a lot really makes her flinch. She's noticeably more annoyed at Mami and Madoka seeing the memory of her losing an arm to Charlotte because of them seeing her past mistake than the memory of losing an arm which she barely reacts to (especially compared to her past self, w7thho did not take the lost arm well at all.)

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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: She's had to deal with so many horrible things in the timelines that not a lot really makes her flinch. She's noticeably more annoyed at Mami and Madoka seeing the memory of her losing an arm to Charlotte because of them seeing her past mistake than the memory of losing an arm which she barely reacts to (especially compared to her past self, w7thho who did not take the lost arm well at all.)



* NoSell: They were able to cancel out Sasa Yuuki's attempts to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy control them]].

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* NoSell: They were able to cancel out Sasa Yuuki's attempts to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy control them]]. According to Crossoverpairinglover, this was because she specifically tried to turn them against one another, which got hard-countered by their wish to never hate each other.



* DidntSeeThatComing: Her plan was going well... until she targeted the exact three White Feathers who could notice and counter her magic.



!! The Uwasa

[[folder: The Uwasa of The Kamihama Monster Sightings]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Yachiyo and thus the first hint of something being off in Kamihama. It turned Kanagi, Ren, Meiyui, Karin, Hazuki, and possibly others into monsters before being destroyed by Yachiyo, Kanae, and Mel.

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!! The Uwasa

[[folder: The Uwasa Alexandra Kurusu]]
A Magical Girl from Yukuni who is part
of The Kamihama Monster Sightings]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Yachiyo and thus
the first hint Wings of something being off in Kamihama. It turned Kanagi, Ren, Meiyui, Karin, Hazuki, and possibly others into monsters before being destroyed by Yachiyo, Kanae, and Mel. the Magius.



* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Witch the Uwasa was based off of appeared in Act 2, while the Uwasa version appeared before the events of Act 1 in Soulmate.
* AdaptationSpeciesChange: This Uwasa is the story's version of a Witch that turned Kanagi into a vampire during the ''Halloween Castle of Prayers and Funerals ~ The Living are Bewildered, the Dead Are Silent '' event.
* SmallRoleBigImpact:
** Despite not appearing in person, the Uwasa's attacks on multiple teams in Kamihama became a major reason for the Magical Girls of the city to unite faster than in canon, and drew Yachiyo out of her isolation.
** Its turning of Ren into a Succubus would, by chance, lead to [[spoiler: Rika gaining a fusion mode with Bella Donna]].

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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Things didn't go as badly for her and the other canonical members of Folklore of Zero in Yukuni, thanks to the existence of Soulbonds meaning magic in general was more accepted.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Witch Canonically, she didn't get involved in anything Kamihama-related until after the Uwasa was based off Wings of appeared in Act 2, while the Uwasa version appeared before the events of Act 1 in Soulmate.
Magius fell.
* AdaptationSpeciesChange: This Uwasa is the story's version of a Witch that turned Kanagi into a vampire during the ''Halloween Castle of Prayers and Funerals ~ The Living are Bewildered, the Dead Are Silent '' event.
* SmallRoleBigImpact:
** Despite not appearing
TheGhost: Has yet to appear in person, although Touka has mentioned her.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: She was using her magic to protect
the Uwasa's attacks on multiple teams in Kamihama became a major reason for the Magical Girls Uwasa of the city to unite faster than in canon, Misery Rhyton, and drew Yachiyo Touka believes she would have saved it if a former Neo-Monzenbashi member hadn't screwed things up by attacking Iroha out of her isolation.
** Its turning of Ren into a Succubus would, by chance, lead to [[spoiler: Rika gaining a fusion mode with Bella Donna]].
revenge.



[[folder: The Uwasa of The Friendship Ending Staircase]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Iroha and Momoko's team, entirely offscreen.

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!! The Uwasa

[[folder: The Uwasa of The Friendship Ending Staircase]]
Kamihama Monster Sightings]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Iroha Yachiyo and Momoko's team, entirely offscreen.thus the first hint of something being off in Kamihama. It turned Kanagi, Ren, Meiyui, Karin, Hazuki, and possibly others into monsters before being destroyed by Yachiyo, Kanae, and Mel.



* KilledOffscreen: Defeated similarly to canon unseen.

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* KilledOffscreen: Defeated similarly AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Witch the Uwasa was based off of appeared in Act 2, while the Uwasa version appeared before the events of Act 1 in Soulmate.
* AdaptationSpeciesChange: This Uwasa is the story's version of a Witch that turned Kanagi into a vampire during the ''Halloween Castle of Prayers and Funerals ~ The Living are Bewildered, the Dead Are Silent '' event.
* SmallRoleBigImpact:
** Despite not appearing in person, the Uwasa's attacks on multiple teams in Kamihama became a major reason for the Magical Girls of the city
to canon unseen. unite faster than in canon, and drew Yachiyo out of her isolation.
** Its turning of Ren into a Succubus would, by chance, lead to [[spoiler: Rika gaining a fusion mode with Bella Donna]].



[[folder: The Uwasa of The Seance Shrine]]
A Uwasa who was attached to a shrine, it lured people in who sought to find those they loved and trapped them. Vulnerable only to curses, Magical Girls struggled against it.

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[[folder: The Uwasa of The Seance Shrine]]
A
Friendship Ending Staircase]]
The first
Uwasa who was attached to a shrine, it lured people in who sought to find those they loved encountered by Iroha and trapped them. Vulnerable only to curses, Magical Girls struggled against it.Momoko's team, entirely offscreen.



* HealingFactor: It can heal off practically anything a Magical Girl can do to it.
* NoSell: Being a wish-based creation, Magical Girls struggled to kill it. [[spoiler: A Magical Girl fused with her Witch had no such trouble]].

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* HealingFactor: It can heal off practically anything a Magical Girl can do KilledOffscreen: Defeated similarly to it.
* NoSell: Being a wish-based creation, Magical Girls struggled to kill it. [[spoiler: A Magical Girl fused with her Witch had no such trouble]].
canon unseen.


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[[folder: The Uwasa of The Seance Shrine]]
A Uwasa who was attached to a shrine, it lured people in who sought to find those they loved and trapped them. Vulnerable only to curses, Magical Girls struggled against it.
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* HealingFactor: It can heal off practically anything a Magical Girl can do to it.
* NoSell: Being a wish-based creation, Magical Girls struggled to kill it. [[spoiler: A Magical Girl fused with her Witch had no such trouble]].
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: She's had to deal with so many horrible things in the timelines that not a lot really makes her flinch. She's noticeably more annoyed at Mami and Madoka seeing the memory of her losing an arm to Charlotte because of them seeing her past mistake than the memory of losing an arm which she barely reacts to (especially compared to her past self, who did not take the lost arm well at all.)

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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: She's had to deal with so many horrible things in the timelines that not a lot really makes her flinch. She's noticeably more annoyed at Mami and Madoka seeing the memory of her losing an arm to Charlotte because of them seeing her past mistake than the memory of losing an arm which she barely reacts to (especially compared to her past self, who w7thho did not take the lost arm well at all.)



* DyingDeclarationOfHate: One of the core members gives one to the leadership of Kamihama as she expects to die. [[spoiler: Though instead she doppels]]

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* DyingDeclarationOfHate: One of the core members gives one to the leadership of Kamihama as she expects to die. [[spoiler: Though instead she doppels]]doppels.]]



* RevengeBeforeReason: One of their members ends up joining the Wings of the Magius, and according to Touka, her attempt to get revenge on Iroha ended up spoiling Alexandra's attempt to protect the Uwasa of the Misery Rhyton.



* DreamingTheTruth: While she hasn't realized it yet, her shared dreams with Nemu often involve them hearing [[spoiler:Ui screaming.]]



* PsychologicalProjection: Can fall into this sometimes, such has having trouble understanding why Sasa Yuuki would hide her powers.
* TechnicianPerformerTeamUp: The Technician to Nemu's Performer in the Magius. Once gave Nemu a bunch of technical advice about how to make a fortress Uwasa, only for Nemu to reply that she needed more story in order to properly pull it off.



* DreamingTheTruth: While she hasn't realized it yet, her shared dreams with Touka often involve them hearing [[spoiler:Ui screaming.]]



* TechnicianPerformerTeamUp: The Performer to Touka's Technician. Her magic depends on stories, so she wasn't very happy when Touka gave her an overload of technical information with no story when they were brainstorming a new Uwasa.



* TheGhost: Has not appeared in person yet, but is mentioned or referenced by Oriko and Kyoko at several points. Her voice is heard during Chapter 3, coordinating how to handle an impending Soul Seizure Nemu was about to have.



* MayflyDecemberRomance: She is a Magical girl and so can stop her aging, but Airi is human and will still age normally. Touka is trying to figure out a way to extend Airi's lifespan, though this is less of an immediate priority.



* NoSell: They were able to cancel out Sasa Yuuki's attempts to [[BrainwashedAndCrazy control them]].



!! The Uwasa

[[folder: The Uwasa of The Kamihama Monster Sightings]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Yachiyo and thus the first hint of something being off in Kamihama. It turned Kanagi, Ren, Meiyui, Karin, Hazuki, and possibly others into monsters before being destroyed by Yachiyo, Kanae, and Mel.

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!! The Uwasa

[[folder: The Uwasa of The Kamihama Monster Sightings]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Yachiyo
Sasa Yuuki]]
A former Black Feather from Kazamino who tried to brainwash her fellow Feathers
and thus take over the first hint Wings of something being off in Kamihama. It turned Kanagi, Ren, Meiyui, Karin, Hazuki, and possibly others into monsters before being destroyed by Yachiyo, Kanae, and Mel. the Magius.



* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Witch the Uwasa was based off of appeared in Act 2, while the Uwasa version appeared before the events of Act 1 in Soulmate.
* AdaptationSpeciesChange: This Uwasa is the story's version of a Witch that turned Kanagi into a vampire during the ''Halloween Castle of Prayers and Funerals ~ The Living are Bewildered, the Dead Are Silent '' event.
* SmallRoleBigImpact:
** Despite not appearing in person, the Uwasa's attacks on multiple teams in Kamihama became a major reason for the Magical Girls of the city to unite faster than in canon, and drew Yachiyo out of her isolation.
** Its turning of Ren into a Succubus would, by chance, lead to [[spoiler: Rika gaining a fusion mode with Bella Donna]].

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Witch TheStarscream: Attempted to take over the Uwasa was based off of appeared in Act 2, while the Uwasa version appeared before the events of Act 1 in Soulmate.
* AdaptationSpeciesChange: This Uwasa is the story's version of a Witch that turned Kanagi into a vampire during the ''Halloween Castle of Prayers and Funerals ~ The Living are Bewildered, the Dead Are Silent '' event.
* SmallRoleBigImpact:
** Despite not appearing in person, the Uwasa's attacks on multiple teams in Kamihama became a major reason for the Magical Girls
Wings of the city to unite faster than in canon, and drew Yachiyo out of her isolation.
** Its turning of Ren into a Succubus would, by chance, lead to [[spoiler: Rika gaining a fusion mode with Bella Donna]].
Magius through brainwashing.



[[folder: The Uwasa of The Friendship Ending Staircase]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Iroha and Momoko's team, entirely offscreen.

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[[folder: The Uwasa of The Friendship Ending Staircase]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Iroha and Momoko's team, entirely offscreen.
Himena Aika]]
A White Feather whose wish revived her boyfriend within her head.



* KilledOffscreen: Defeated similarly to canon unseen.

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* KilledOffscreen: Defeated similarly AdaptationalBadass: Has figured out how to canon unseen. give her boyfriend a way to interact with the world by letting him control her scarf. Canonically, Hiko just stays within Himena's head and doesn't really affect anything outside.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Canonically, she didn't get involved in anything Kamihama-related until after the Wings of the Magius fell.
* TheGhost: Has yet to appear in person, although several current and former members of the Wings of the Magius have mentioned her.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Her boyfriend being a separate mind within Himena's meant he wasn't affected by Sasa Yuuki's brainwashing, enabling them to figure it out and work against her.



[[folder: The Uwasa of The Seance Shrine]]
A Uwasa who was attached to a shrine, it lured people in who sought to find those they loved and trapped them. Vulnerable only to curses, Magical Girls struggled against it.

to:

!! The Uwasa

[[folder: The Uwasa of The Seance Shrine]]
A
Kamihama Monster Sightings]]
The first
Uwasa who was attached to a shrine, it lured people in who sought to find those they loved encountered by Yachiyo and trapped them. Vulnerable only to curses, Magical Girls struggled against it.thus the first hint of something being off in Kamihama. It turned Kanagi, Ren, Meiyui, Karin, Hazuki, and possibly others into monsters before being destroyed by Yachiyo, Kanae, and Mel.



* HealingFactor: It can heal off practically anything a Magical Girl can do to it.
* NoSell: Being a wish-based creation, Magical Girls struggled to kill it. [[spoiler: A Magical Girl fused with her Witch had no such trouble]].

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* HealingFactor: It can heal AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: The Witch the Uwasa was based off practically anything a Magical Girl can do to it.of appeared in Act 2, while the Uwasa version appeared before the events of Act 1 in Soulmate.
* NoSell: Being AdaptationSpeciesChange: This Uwasa is the story's version of a wish-based creation, Witch that turned Kanagi into a vampire during the ''Halloween Castle of Prayers and Funerals ~ The Living are Bewildered, the Dead Are Silent '' event.
* SmallRoleBigImpact:
** Despite not appearing in person, the Uwasa's attacks on multiple teams in Kamihama became a major reason for the
Magical Girls struggled of the city to kill it. unite faster than in canon, and drew Yachiyo out of her isolation.
** Its turning of Ren into a Succubus would, by chance, lead to
[[spoiler: A Magical Girl fused Rika gaining a fusion mode with her Witch had no such trouble]].Bella Donna]].


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[[folder: The Uwasa of The Friendship Ending Staircase]]
The first Uwasa encountered by Iroha and Momoko's team, entirely offscreen.
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* KilledOffscreen: Defeated similarly to canon unseen.
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[[folder: The Uwasa of The Seance Shrine]]
A Uwasa who was attached to a shrine, it lured people in who sought to find those they loved and trapped them. Vulnerable only to curses, Magical Girls struggled against it.
----
* HealingFactor: It can heal off practically anything a Magical Girl can do to it.
* NoSell: Being a wish-based creation, Magical Girls struggled to kill it. [[spoiler: A Magical Girl fused with her Witch had no such trouble]].
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-->''"I'd'' hate ''to teleport the wrong one away."''

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* TimeAbyss: While Kyubey will correct Sayaka when she says he's older than dirt, Kyubey's hivemind has been around for a long, ''long'' time.
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: She's had to deal with so many horrible things in the timelines that not a lot really makes her flinch. She's noticeably more annoyed at Mami and Madoka seeing the memory of her losing an arm to Charlotte because of them seeing her past mistake than the memory of losing an arm which she barely reacts to (especially compared compared to her past self, who did not take the lost arm well at all.)

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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: She's had to deal with so many horrible things in the timelines that not a lot really makes her flinch. She's noticeably more annoyed at Mami and Madoka seeing the memory of her losing an arm to Charlotte because of them seeing her past mistake than the memory of losing an arm which she barely reacts to (especially compared compared to her past self, who did not take the lost arm well at all.)
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* OrwellianRetcon:
** Her original title/name was The Collaborator, but after reader feedback it was changed to The Griefer due to the original name sounding more like an Archetype description than an Alias.
** Her last name was originally Suzembachi before changing to Suzumebachi.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: Especially when Madoka first meets her, Candeloro is pretty irritable towards her, but she's also the embodiment of Mami's loneliness and is fearful of the potential of dying after remembering her various deaths in past timelines and realizing just .

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* SourOutsideSadInside: Especially when Madoka first meets her, Candeloro is pretty irritable towards her, but she's also the embodiment of Mami's loneliness and is fearful of the potential of dying after remembering her various deaths in past timelines and realizing just .just how many times she has died during the time loops.

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