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* RomanticTwoGirlFrienship: She enjoys spending time with Asami.
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** Mako discussed this to him and told him fiction is getting into his head too much, and it turns out Bolin was right
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** Mako discussed this to him and told him fiction is getting into his head too much, and it turns out Bolin was right much
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* GenreSavvy: Subverted since Bolin's fantasies tend to be improbable and he whatever secret he guessed correctly was out of sheer luck. He listens to radio dramas he imagines his adventures as being in one.
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* GenreSavvy: Subverted since Bolin's fantasies tend to be improbable and he whatever secret he guessed correctly was out of sheer luck. He listens loves listening to radio dramas and he imagines his adventures as being in one.
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* WideEyedIdealist: He's enamored with the heroic tales of Aang's Team Avatar and loves listening wishes to radio dramas.
be like them.
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* GenreSavvy: Subverted since Bolin's fantasies tend to be improbable and he whataver secrets he guessed correctly was our of sheer luck. Because he listens to radio dramas he imagines his adventures as being in one.
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* GenreSavvy: Subverted since Bolin's fantasies tend to be improbable and he whataver secrets whatever secret he guessed correctly was our out of sheer luck. Because he He listens to radio dramas he imagines his adventures as being in one.
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* GenreSavvy: Subverted since Bolin's fantasies tend to be improbable and he whataver secrets he guessed correctly was our of sheer luck. Because he listens to radio dramas he imagines his adventures as being in one.
** He was able to guess that Korra was the Avatar, a princess, and kidnapped by evil guardians because he thinks that's how stories go
** Mako discussed this to him and told him fiction is getting into his head too much, and it turns out Bolin was right
** He was able to guess that Korra was the Avatar, a princess, and kidnapped by evil guardians because he thinks that's how stories go
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* AscendedFanboy: Bolin is a fan of Aang's Team Avatar. He told Korra stories about them causing her to doubt what the Red Lotus had told her. When Korra was taken by the group, Bolin dubs Mako, Asami and himself as the new Team Avatar.
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: After the Red Lotus stormed Asami's mansion Korra is back under their control and needed help from her friends.]]
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: After the Red Lotus stormed Asami's mansion during Chapter Thirteen and Fourteen, they placed Korra is back under their control and needed control. Despite telling her friends not to go after her, they immediately sought help from her friends.to save her.]]
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* StockholmSyndrome: Korra may not be aware she was kidnapped, but she does feel imprisoned by the Red Lotus. Despite that, she feels a strong sense of loyalty to them even after she runs away. This is strongly illustrated during Chapter Fourteen. In Chapter Sixteen, she admits that she loved all her teachers, including Ming-Hua who treated Korra cruelly.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFrienship: She enjoys spending time with Asami.
* StockholmSyndrome: Korra may not be aware she was kidnapped, but she does feel imprisoned by the Red Lotus. Despite that, she feels a strong sense of loyalty to them even after she runs away.
** This is strongly illustrated during ChapterFourteen. Fourteen where [[spoiler:even after Zaheer slaps her which causes her to bleed and have trouble with her vision, she apologizes to Zaheer about running away, and becomes happy that they think she is ready for her first assignment.]]
** In Chapter Sixteen, she admits that sheloved not only loves her friends, but she loves all her teachers, including Ming-Hua Ming-Hua, who treated Korra cruelly.
* StockholmSyndrome: Korra may not be aware she was kidnapped, but she does feel imprisoned by the Red Lotus. Despite that, she feels a strong sense of loyalty to them even after she runs away.
** This is strongly illustrated during Chapter
** In Chapter Sixteen, she admits that she
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* TrainingFromHell: What the Red Lotus put her through.
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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Subverted because she remembers meeting Korra, but she does not clearly remember all the details as vividly as Korra does.
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* FriendlessBackground:
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* FriendlessBackground: Due to her father being overprotective, Asami was home schooled and never made any real friends before meeting Korra, Bolin, and Mako.
* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Subverted because she remembers meeting Korra, but she does not clearly remember all the details as vividly as Korra does. This allows Korra to trick Asami into thinking that Korra did not use waterbending and only used firebending to keep Asami warm, so she would not suspect she is the Avatar. [[spoiler:It isn't until after the Red Lotus recapture Korra and Asami realizes that Korra's teachers represent a different element that she realizes she did see Korra use waterbending and is the Avatar.]]
* FriendlessBackground: Due to her father being overprotective, Asami was home schooled and never made any real friends before meeting Korra, Bolin, and Mako.
* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Subverted because she remembers meeting Korra, but she does not clearly remember all the details as vividly as Korra does. This allows Korra to trick Asami into thinking that Korra did not use waterbending and only used firebending to keep Asami warm, so she would not suspect she is the Avatar. [[spoiler:It isn't until after the Red Lotus recapture Korra and Asami realizes that Korra's teachers represent a different element that she realizes she did see Korra use waterbending and is the Avatar.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Says this during Chapter Fourteen.Fourteen [[spoiler:after the Red Lotus kidnap Korra and Asami realizes that Korra is the Avatar. She realizes that if she told other people she saw Korra use two elements at once when they were children, she could have helped save Korra from her fate years ago.]]
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* SpoiledSweetRomanticTwoGirlFriendship: Asami loves spending time with Korra. Mako even lampshades Asami is Korra's best friend.
* SpoiledSweet: Despite being rich, she treats others very well, especially her friends. She allows Korra to live with her and gets Mako and Bolin a new place to live.
* SpoiledSweet: Despite being rich, she treats others very well, especially her friends. She allows Korra to live with her and gets Mako and Bolin a new place to live.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Without the LoveTriangle from canon, his better qualities are more noticable.noticeable.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDoIDidWhatIHadToDo: He uses this as his reasoning for a few of his actions.
** He tells Asami he committed a number of crimes to help keep himself and Bolin alive.
** He tortures a [[spoiler: member of the Red Lotus]], so they can help [[spoiler:Korra and learn what they plan on doing with her. In the process, he learns of their plans to kidnap her parents.]]
** He tells Asami he committed a number of crimes to help keep himself and Bolin alive.
** He tortures a [[spoiler: member of the Red Lotus]], so they can help [[spoiler:Korra and learn what they plan on doing with her. In the process, he learns of their plans to kidnap her parents.]]
* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:After learning of the Red Lotus' plan to kidnap Korra's parents to force her cooperation if she doesn't want to kill anyone. He and Bolin manage to locate and free Korra's parents.]]
* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Part of the reason, he tries saving Korra during their first meeting. Ironically, she ends up saving him on at least on occasion instead.
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: At the beginning of the story, he got easily convinced into taking a dangerous human trafficking job without guaranteed paypay. If Korra had not been there to save him, he would have been arrested.
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* BrokenTears: [[spoiler:In Chapter Fifteen, after Korra refuse to kill Unalaq and is nearly killed by the Red Lotus, Kuvira makes note that Korra is crying during their attempt to capture her.]]
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* BrokenTears: [[spoiler:In Chapter Fifteen, after Korra refuse refused to kill Unalaq and is nearly killed by the Red Lotus, Kuvira makes note that Korra is crying during their attempt to capture her.]]
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* MadeOfIron: [[spoiler: In Chapter Fifteen, Korra is injured due to being hit twice by a combustion bolt from P'Li and is still able to fight off the metal-bender police (who have Lin and Kuvira with them) despite not having learned how to metal-bend.]]
* MadeOfIron: [[spoiler: In Chapter Fifteen, Korra is injured due to being hit twice by a combustion bolt from P'Li and is still able to fight off the metal-bender police (who have Lin and Kuvira with them) despite not having learned how to metal-bend.]]
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* GoodIsNotSoft: Towards gang members
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* MadeOfIron: [[spoiler: In Chapter Fifteen, Korra is injured due to almost being killed by the Red Lotus, including being hit twice by a combustion bolt from P'Li and is still able to fight off the metal-bender police (who have Lin and Kuvira with them) despite not having learned how to metal-bend.]]
* MadeOfIron: [[spoiler: In Chapter Fifteen, Korra is injured due to almost being killed by the Red Lotus, including being hit twice by a combustion bolt from P'Li and is still able to fight off the metal-bender police (who have Lin and Kuvira with them) despite not having learned how to metal-bend.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Dishes these out with remarkable regularity when not fighting against her Red Lotus teachers. [[spoiler: Notable victims have included characters who were able to give Korra trouble in canon such as Desna, Eska, Unalaq, and Kuvira.]]
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* GenreSavvy: She is able to remain under the radar from the Red Lotus for a while because she was careful. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Korra relaxes her guard too much later on which allows the Red Lotus to eventually find her.]]
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* GenreSavvy: She is able to remain under the radar from the Red Lotus for a while because she was careful. And despite being aware that the Red Lotus haven't been entirely truthful with her, she knows that the Avatar is bound to have enemies and keeps her identity as the Avatar secret. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Korra relaxes her guard too much later on which allows the Red Lotus to eventually find her. She is also seen bending different elements on separate occassions which alerts the White Lotus and Red Lotus to her presence in Republic City.]]
* MadeOfIron: [[spoiler: In Chapter Fifteen, Korra is injured due to being hit twice by a combustion bolt from P'Li and is still able to fight off the metal-bender police (who have Lin and Kuvira with them) despite not having learned how to metal-bend.]]
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* StockholmSyndrome: Korra may not be aware she was kidnapped, but she does feel imprisoned by the Red Lotus. Despite that, she feels a strong sense of loyalty to them even after she runs away. This is strongly illustrated during Chapter Fourteen.
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* StockholmSyndrome: Korra may not be aware she was kidnapped, but she does feel imprisoned by the Red Lotus. Despite that, she feels a strong sense of loyalty to them even after she runs away. This is strongly illustrated during Chapter Fourteen. In Chapter Sixteen, she admits that she loved all her teachers, including Ming-Hua who treated Korra cruelly.
* KickTheDog: Her relationship with Korra is the opposite of Korra's relationship with Ghazan.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Inflicts it upon a Red Lotus member during Chapter 14 to find out what their plans are for Korra.]]
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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Inflicts [[spoiler: ColdBloodedTorture:]] Inflicts it upon a Red Lotus member during Chapter 14 to find out what their plans are for Korra.]]
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* BaddassInDistress: [[spoiler: After the Red Lotus stormed Asami's mansion Korra is back under their control and needed help from her friends.]]
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* BaddassInDistress: [[spoiler: After the Red Lotus stormed Asami's mansion Korra is back under their control and needed help from her friends.]]
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* WideEyedIdealist - enamored with the heroic tales of Aang's Team Avatar and loves listening to radio dramas.
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* WideEyedIdealist - TheDulcineaEffect: In Chapter 4, Bolin helped Korra without hesitation when she was being harassed by a gang despite Mako's warning and him not knowing who she is
* WideEyedIdealist: He's enamored with the heroic tales of Aang's Team Avatar and loves listening to radio dramas.
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* FriendToAllChildren: After Mako is hired to work at Future Industries and they move into a new home, Bolin takes up a job as a Babysitter.
* FriendToAllChildren: After Mako is hired to work at Future Industries and they move into a new home, Bolin takes up a job as a babysitter.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: At the beginning of the story, he got easily convinced into taking a dangerous human trafficking job without guaranteed pay
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: At the beginning of the story, he got easily convinced into taking a dangerous human trafficking job without guaranteed pay
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* GoodIsNotSoft: Towards gang members
* HonorAmongThieves: Planned to return Asami's precious pendant upon seeing it has a picture of her mother
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* AFriendToAllChildren: After Mako is hired to work at Future Industries and they move into a new home, Bolin takes up a job as a Babysitter.
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* TheChosenOne: Being the Avatar involves being this.
* FishOutOfWater: She appears to be this even more so than her canon counterpart.
* FishOutOfWater: She appears to be this even more so than her canon counterpart.
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* FishOutOfWater: Shortly after arriving inFriendlessBackground: Besides Naga, Korra had no friends while growing up. Ghazan and to a lesser extent P'li were the closest humans Korra had to friends with the Red Lotus.
* IWillFindYou: Korra's main objectives for running away from the Red Lotus is to find Asami and Aang. She soon finds out that Aang is already dead without knowing she is his reincarnation, but she is successful in meeting Asami again.
* IWillFindYou: Korra's main objectives for running away from the Red Lotus is to find Asami and Aang. She soon finds out that Aang is already dead without knowing she is his reincarnation, but she is successful in meeting Asami again.
* InSpiteOfANail: Korra still runs away from her guardians to head towards Republic City and has Naga. However, her objectives are different.
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: She is kidnapped by the Red Lotus because she's the Avatar.
* GenreSavvy: She is able to remain under the radar from the Red Lotus for a while because she was careful. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Korra relaxes her guard too much later on which allows the Red Lotus to eventually find her.]]
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: She is kidnapped by the Red Lotus because she's the Avatar.
* GenreSavvy: She is able to remain under the radar from the Red Lotus for a while because she was careful. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Korra relaxes her guard too much later on which allows the Red Lotus to eventually find her.]]
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* StockholmSyndrome: Korra may not be aware she was kidnapped, but she does feel imprisoned by the Red Lotus. Despite that, she feels a strong sense of loyalty to them even after she runs away.
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* StockholmSyndrome: Korra may not be aware she was kidnapped, but she does feel imprisoned by the Red Lotus. Despite that, she feels a strong sense of loyalty to them even after she runs away.
away. This is strongly illustrated during Chapter Fourteen.
* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: While she likes to fight, she does not mind wearing a dress.
* TrainingFromHell: What the Red Lotus put her through.
* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: While she likes to fight, she does not mind wearing a dress.
* TrainingFromHell: What the Red Lotus put her through.
* FriendlessBackground:
* BigBrotherInstinct: He always looks out for his younger brother Bolin.
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* ScarsAreForever: He has a few on his body.
* AFriendToAllChildren: After Mako is hired to work at Future Industries and they move into a new home, Bolin takes up a job as a Babysitter.
* BrokenPedestal: They become this to Korra over the course of the story as she learns more about the lies and half truths they told her about. They officially become this after the events of [[spoiler:Chapters Fourteen and Fifteen when they kill Yujin, nearly kill her friends, and nearly kill her after she fails to kill Unalaq.]]
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* VillainHasAPoint: While Korra becomes somewhat disillusioned by their teachings over the course of the story, she does know they also had a number of good points too.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Korra notes that he is right about some of the problems plaguing the world even though he has lied about a few other things.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Korra notes that he is right about some of the problems plaguing the world world, such as inequality and corruption, even though he has lied about a few other things.
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[Gives this to Mako after she sees him conduct torture on a Red Lotus member.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[Gives [[spoiler:Gives this to Mako after she sees him conduct torture on a Red Lotus member.]]
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!!Avatar Korra
A young teenage girl who was kidnapped by the Red Lotus when she was only three years old before the While Lotus could confirm her identity as the Avatar. She was kidnapped
A young teenage girl who was kidnapped by the Red Lotus when she was only three years old before the While Lotus could confirm her identity as the Avatar. She was kidnapped
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A young teenage girl who was kidnapped by the Red Lotus when she was only three years old before the While Lotus could confirm her identity as the Avatar. She was kidnapped
* AFriendInNeed: [[spoiler:Despite being easily overpowered by the Red Lotus during their first encounter, Asami, Bolin, and Mako resolve to do what they can to save Korra without hesitation.]]
* TrueCompanions: Even though they meet each other under different circumstances, they still become good friends with each other. [[spoiler:Bolin, Asami, and Mako declare themselves the new Team Avatar shortly after Korra is kidnapped by the Red Lotus and resolve to rescue her.]]
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!!Avatar Korra
A young teenage girl who was kidnapped by the Red Lotus when she was only three years old before the While Lotus could confirm her identity as the Avatar. She was kidnapped along with many other children from her tribe. After the Red Lotus discovered she was the Avatar, they took her and left the other children to be found by the search party.
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* TrueCompanions: Even though they meet each other under different circumstances, they still become good friends with each other. [[spoiler:Bolin, Asami, and Mako declare themselves the new Team Avatar shortly after Korra is kidnapped by the Red Lotus and resolve to rescue her.]]
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!!Avatar Korra
A young teenage girl who was kidnapped by the Red Lotus when she was only three years old before the While Lotus could confirm her identity as the Avatar. She was kidnapped along with many other children from her tribe. After the Red Lotus discovered she was the Avatar, they took her and left the other children to be found by the search party.
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* ForWantOfANail: Korra is kidnapped by the Red Lotus in this story when she was a child rather than being under the protection of the White Lotus.
* FishOutOfWater: Shortly after arriving in
* [[IgnorantOfHisOwnIgnorance Ignorant Of Her Own Ignorance]]: The Red Lotus kept a lot of relevant information regarding the Avatar secret from her, including the fact that she is the reincarnation of Aang and the other Avatars preceding her.
* FishOutOfWater: Shortly after arriving in
* [[IgnorantOfHisOwnIgnorance Ignorant Of Her Own Ignorance]]: The Red Lotus kept a lot of relevant information regarding the Avatar secret from her, including the fact that she is the reincarnation of Aang and the other Avatars preceding her.
* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Delivers one to Mako after witnessing him torture a member of the Red Lotus.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[Gives this to Mako after she sees him conduct torture on a Red Lotus member.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Inflicts it upon a Red Lotus member during Chapter 14 to find out what their plans are for Korra.]]
* GoodIsNotSoft: [[spoiler:He is willing to conduct torture to gain information.]]
* GoodIsNotSoft: [[spoiler:He is willing to conduct torture to gain information.]]
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* AffablyEvil: As in canon, though he switches between this and FauxAffablyEvil sometimes.
* BigBad
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* KickTheDog: Has done this a few times in the story.
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* EvilMentor
* KickTheDog: Has done this a few times in the story.
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* AffablyEvil: As in canon, though he switches between this and FauxAffablyEvil sometimes.
* BigBad
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* PetTheDog: Just about sums up his relationship with Korra.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Is the most moral member of the Red Lotus.
* PetTheDog: Just about sums up his relationship with Korra.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Is the most moral member of the Red Lotus.
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!!Ming-Hua
* Artificial Limbs: As in canon, she uses waterbending to create some.
* Ax-Crazy
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* Artificial Limbs: As in canon, she uses waterbending to create some.
* Ax-Crazy
* SadisticTeacher
* ForWantOfANail: In this story, Korra is kidnapped by the Red Lotus prior to the White Lotus confirming her identity. As a result of the Red Lotus making their move first, Korra had fewer people to protect her, and the Red Lotus were successful.
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!!P'Li
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* ApologeticAttacker: [[spoiler: To Korra after Zaheer orders her to shoot through Korra in order to kill Unalaq.]]
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Her recommendation to keep the pro-bending arenas under Red Lotus surveillance in case Korra visited them[[spoiler: is what eventually allowed them to track Korra down.]]
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Her recommendation to keep the pro-bending arenas under Red Lotus surveillance in case Korra visited them[[spoiler: is what eventually allowed them to track Korra down.]]
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* ApologeticAttacker: [[spoiler: To AffablyEvil: As in canon, though he switches between this and FauxAffablyEvil sometimes.
* BigBad
* EvilMentor
* KickTheDog: Has done this a few times in the story.
* ManipulativeBastard
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Her recommendation to keepnotes that he is right about some of the pro-bending arenas under Red Lotus surveillance in case Korra visited them[[spoiler: is what eventually allowed them to track Korra down.]]
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problems plaguing the world even though he has lied about a few other things.
* BigBad
* EvilMentor
* KickTheDog: Has done this a few times in the story.
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** He allows Korra to keep Naga after she finds her, and he seems to take pity on the fact Naga lost her mother.
** He did not kill Naga during Chapter Fourteen and simply restrained her.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Is the most moral member of the Red Lotus and by far the nicest to Korra.
* PetTheDog: Just about sums up his relationship with Korra.
** He convinces Zaheer not to leave Korra out alone in the cold after she loses a sparing match with him.
** He allows Korra to keep Naga after she finds her, and he seems to take pity on the fact Naga lost her mother.
** He did not kill Naga during Chapter Fourteen and simply restrained her.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Is the most moral member of the Red Lotus and by far the nicest to Korra.
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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Subverted because she remembers meeting Korra, but she does not clearly remember all the details as vividly as Korra does.
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