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* MakingASplash: As an undine changeling, she is gifted with water magic.
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* MakingASplash: As an undine changeling, she is gifted with water magic.magic.
* MeaningfulName: Comes from the French for sea, mar.
* PetTheDog: Towards the end of the first story [[spoiler: when Leon had pissed off all the male changelings, Mary (who wasn't offended by his comments about the changeling process), quickly followed after him and apologized for them.]]
* MeaningfulName: Comes from the French for sea, mar.
* PetTheDog: Towards the end of the first story [[spoiler: when Leon had pissed off all the male changelings, Mary (who wasn't offended by his comments about the changeling process), quickly followed after him and apologized for them.]]
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* BeserkButton: He really hates it when mundane people bring up the moral ambiguity of the changeling process.
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* BeserkButton: He really hates it when mundane people bring up the moral ambiguity of the changeling process.
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* KatanasAreBetter: Her weapon of choice.choice.
*OfficialCouple: With Pete.
* MakingASplash: As an undine changeling, she is gifted with water magic.
*OfficialCouple: With Pete.
* MakingASplash: As an undine changeling, she is gifted with water magic.
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* Acrofatic: She maybe curvy, but she is incredibly agile.
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* Acrofatic: {{Acrofatic}}: She maybe curvy, but she is incredibly agile.
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* Acrofatic: She maybe curvy, but she is incredibly agile.
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**KatanasAreBetter: Her weapon of choice.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: With Ash, Leon, and Herman.
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An undine changeling, she is Pete's girlfriend.
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An undine changeling, she is Pete's girlfriend.
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* ManChild: The least mature of the changelings.
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* LizardFolk: His appearance envokes this, with his elongated torso and log tail.
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* LizardFolk: His appearance envokes this, with his elongated torso and log long tail.
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* VitrolicBestBuds: With Ash, Leon, and Herman.
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* VitrolicBestBuds: VitriolicBestBuds: With Ash, Leon, and Herman.
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* BrokenBird: While the changeling's all have pretty tragic back stories, it's implied that Ray was almost raped by a pedophile priest before he was taken to the magus world.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He's crude, rude, violent, and pervy; but he certainly knows right from wrong, and he certainly won't let anything hurt his friends.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He's crude, rude, violent, and pervy; but he certainly knows right from wrong, and he certainly won't let anything hurt his friends.friends.
*MeaningfulName: Comes from Ray-o-vac, a brand of batteries.
*RedOniBlueOni: The volatile red to Ash's calculating blue.
* ShockAndAwe: Knows a fair amount of electric magic, given that he's a thundhare changeling.
* VitrolicBestBuds: With Ash, Leon, and Herman.
*MeaningfulName: Comes from Ray-o-vac, a brand of batteries.
*RedOniBlueOni: The volatile red to Ash's calculating blue.
* ShockAndAwe: Knows a fair amount of electric magic, given that he's a thundhare changeling.
* VitrolicBestBuds: With Ash, Leon, and Herman.
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* HairRaisingHare: Has floppy rabbit ears and is a complete lunatic.
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* HairRaisingHare: Has floppy rabbit ears and is a complete lunatic.lunatic.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He's crude, rude, violent, and pervy; but he certainly knows right from wrong, and he certainly won't let anything hurt his friends.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He's crude, rude, violent, and pervy; but he certainly knows right from wrong, and he certainly won't let anything hurt his friends.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Well he certainly likes to watch, especially Pete and Mary as shown in the second story.
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* AxCrazy: Ray is always the first to go charging into a fight.
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A thundhare changeling, Ray is the heavy hitter of the group. He was also the one that helped Pete create the Forsaken Children.
*BladeOnAStick: His preferred weapon.
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*RedOniBlueOni: The blue to Ray's red.
*RedOniBlueOni: The blue to Ray's red.
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*MultiArmedAndDangerous: In his true form, he has six arms ending in clawed hands.
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*KillItWithFire: Fire magic comes naturally to Ash as a salamander changeling.
*OnlySaneMan: Of all the changeling's in the group, he's the most normal.
*KillItWithFire: Fire magic comes naturally to Ash as a salamander changeling.
*OnlySaneMan: Of all the changeling's in the group, he's the most normal.
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!!Ash
A salamander changeling and pete's oldest friend, he is the group's strategist.
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*OfficialCouple: With Mary.
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*DishingOutDirt: Being a gnome changeling, earth magic comes naturally.
*DropTheHammer: His preferred weapon.
*MeaningfulName: "Pete" comes from the word peat, a type of soil formed from decomposing plants in swamps.
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* ShoutOut: The scene where he [[spoiler: tears the arm off of a plate giant]] is based on the climax of the fight between [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]] and Grendel.
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* ShoutOut: The scene where he [[spoiler: tears the arm off of a plate giant]] is based on the climax of the fight between [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]] and Grendel.Grendel.
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A gnome changeling who founded the Forsaken Children, Pete is a natural born leader.
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A gnome changeling who founded the Forsaken Children, Pete is a natural born leader.
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* ShoutOut: The scene where he [[spoiler: tears the arm off of a plate giant]] is based on the climax of the fight between [[Literature/{{Beowulf}}]] [[Literature/{{Beowulf}} Beowulf]] and Grendel.
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Originally a college student in Los Angeles, Leon becomes a knight when he meets the Forsaken Children.
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*ShoutOut: The scene where he [[spoiler: tears the arm off of a plate giant]] is based on the climax of the fight between [[Literature/{{Beowulf}}]] and Grendel.
Originally a college student in Los Angeles, Leon becomes a knight when he meets the Forsaken Children.
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*KnightInShiningArmor: What he becomes by the end of the first story.
*ShoutOut: The scene where he [[spoiler: tears the arm off of a plate giant]] is based on the climax of the fight between [[Literature/{{Beowulf}}]] and Grendel.
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