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A mathemagician initially in the service of Jorg's grandfather and uncle, then the caliph Ibn Fayed, but ultimately on his own side.
A mathemagician initially in the service of Jorg's grandfather and uncle, then the caliph Ibn Fayed, but ultimately on his own side.
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A mathemagician
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* ConsummateProfessional: Despite his true nature and ambition he apparently still did an excellent job for many years as Morrow's steward, with no one ever complaining about him neglecting duty or shorting anyone of their dues which implies he's either this trope or an [[PragmaticVillainy evil pragmatist]].
* TreacherousAdvisor: He serves Morrow for enough years to make himself appear loyal before revealing his nature as a ManipulativeBastard
* TreacherousAdvisor: He serves Morrow for enough years to make himself appear loyal before revealing his nature as a ManipulativeBastard
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* TreacherousAdvisor: He serves Morrow for enough years to make himself appear loyal before revealing his nature as a ManipulativeBastard
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A mathemagician and fellow of Qalasadi who befriends Jorg on the ship ride to Afrique.
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Another data ghost made from the memory of the Builders.
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A mathemagician initially in the
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* ConsummateProfessional: Despite his true nature and ambition he apparently still did an excellent job for many years as Morrow's steward, with no one ever complaining about him neglecting duty or shorting anyone of their dues which implies he's either this trope or an [[PragmaticVillainy evil pragmatist]].
* TreacherousAdvisor: He serves Morrow for enough years to make himself appear loyal before revealing his nature as a ManipulativeBastard
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Another data ghost made from the memory of the Builders.
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* TreacherousAdvisor: He serves Morrow for enough years to make himself appear loyal before revealing his nature as a ManipulativeBastard
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Another data ghost made from the memory of the Builders.
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* TheFace / TheCharmer: He's the most charming member in the group, and whenever Jorg wants someone to think well of them, he sends Makin.
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* TheFace / TheCharmer: TheFace: He's the most charming member in the group, and whenever Jorg wants someone to think well of them, he sends Makin.
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* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice: He lets himself be killed so that he can reunite with William and repair reality.]]
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* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: He lets himself be killed so that he can reunite with William and repair reality.]]
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* VillainousParentalInstinct / PapaWolf: After the [[spoiler: birth of his son, Jorg murders a bunch of guards, his cousin, the ''pope'', and a lot of other people in order to keep him safe. In the end, his son is the driving force behind his HeroicSacrifice.]]
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* VillainousParentalInstinct / PapaWolf: VillainousParentalInstinct: After the [[spoiler: birth of his son, Jorg murders a bunch of guards, his cousin, the ''pope'', and a lot of other people in order to keep him safe. In the end, his son is the driving force behind his HeroicSacrifice.]]
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* AffablyEvil | FauxAffablyEvil: Jorg zigzags between the two.
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* AffablyEvil | FauxAffablyEvil: AffablyEvil: Jorg zigzags between this and FauxAffablyEvil, as he's almost always his witty, joking self, but whether or not he actually means it varies on the two. moment.
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* MasterSwordsman: The best in the brotherhood at least. The others are surprised when Makin met someone [[AlwaysABiggerFish even better than him]].
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* MasterSwordsman: The best in the brotherhood at least. The others are surprised when Makin met someone [[AlwaysABiggerFish [[AlwaysSomeoneBetter even better than him]].
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* FacialHorror: His face is described like a wet, half-melting wax.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: He's Lundis' brother.
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* MrExposition: He's the largest source of knowledge regarding the builders within the story.
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* MrExposition: He's the largest source of knowledge regarding the builders within the story. {{Lampshaded}} by Jorg, who wondered if he simply likes the sound of his own voice.
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* KillAllHumans: Michael is a part of the faction who believes the only way to fix their almost broken realty is by killing all humans.
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* KillAllHumans: Michael is a part of the faction who believes the only way to fix their almost broken realty reality is by killing all humans.
