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* TitleCharacter: Parvana is the titled "Breadwinner".
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* CheerfulChild
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%%(missing context) * CheerfulChild
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[[caption-width-right:300:''"When I was young, Parvana, I knew what peace felt like. Children went to school, women went to university. All day empires forgot about us, for a while at least."'']]
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[[caption-width-right:300:''"When I was young, Parvana, I knew what peace felt like.like, here in the city. Children went to school, women went to university. All day empires forgot about us, for a while at least."'']]
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[[caption-width-right:300:''"When I was young, Parvana, I knew what peace felt like. Children went to school, women went to university. All day empires forgot about us, for a while at least."'']]
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[[caption-width-right:300:''"You wasted my time teaching me things of no worth. I have joined the Taliban! And now, I fight the enemies of Islam!"'']]
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* DadTheVeteran: Fought the Soviets alongside the Mujahideen, an experience that cost him his leg.
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* DadTheVeteran: Fought the [[UsefulNotes/SovietInvasionofAfghanistan Soviets alongside the Mujahideen, Mujahideen]], an experience that cost him his leg.
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* NiceGuy: Is kind and polite to everyone he meets, even Idrees (until he starts harassing Parvana, that is).
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* NiceGuy: Is kind and polite to everyone he meets, even Idrees (until [[AbhorrentAdmirer Idrees]](until he starts harassing Parvana, that is).
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: His son, Sulayman, was killed by a bomb he mistook for a toy.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: His [[spoiler:His son, Sulayman, was killed by a bomb he mistook for a toy.]]
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: It's easy to miss, but in his final scene, he glances at the moon, for which his late wife is named for, suggesting that he feels he had done right by her spirit and would join her soon.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: It's easy to miss, but in his final scene, [[spoiler: he glances at the moon, for which his late wife is named for, suggesting that he feels he had done right by her spirit and would join her soon.soon]].
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: It's implied he was very kind and cheerful when alive, [[spoiler:and died picking up a toy in the streets]].
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: It's implied he was very kind and cheerful when alive, [[spoiler:and died picking up a toy "toy" in the streets]].
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The family’s youngest child, a toddler.
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* GrumpyBear: At the beginning of the story, Parvana dismisses her father’s storytelling and resigns herself to her responsibilities. After her PromotionToParent and exploration of the outside world as a boy, she gradually grows in confidence, conviction, and even cheerfulness.
* TookALevelInIdealism: At the beginning of the story, Parvana dismisses her father’s storytelling and resigns herself to her responsibilities. After her PromotionToParent and exploration of the outside world as a boy, she gradually grows in confidence, conviction, and even cheerfulness.
* TookALevelInKindness: Caring for the family and disguising herself as a boy to work makes her much more cheerful and nice.
* TookALevelInKindness: Caring for the family and disguising herself as a boy to work makes her much more cheerful and nice.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Caring for the family and disguising herself as a boy to work makes her much more cheerful and nice.
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* {{Foil}}: To Parvana. Parvana starts off as a GrumpyBear before CharacterDevelopment, lives in a loving household in which she's also a DaddysGirl, and spends most of the film trying to reunite with her father. Shauzia is ThePollyanna but she's on the verge of a breakdown, lives in an abusive household with a horrible father who she desperately wants to get away from.
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* {{Foil}}: To Parvana. Parvana starts off as a GrumpyBear pessimist before CharacterDevelopment, lives in a loving household in which she's also a DaddysGirl, and spends most of the film trying to reunite with her father. Shauzia is ThePollyanna but she's on the verge of a breakdown, lives in an abusive household with a horrible father who she desperately wants to get away from.
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->'''Voiced by:''' Shaista Latif
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->'''Voiced by:''' Shaista Latif
Latif (English), Creator/TanjaSchmitz (German)
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* RapunzelHair: Before she cuts it short.
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* RapunzelHair: Soraya's hair reaches down past her waist.
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Dewicked trope
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* AdultFear: She constantly worries for her family’s safety throughout the film. The fact that she’s completely unable to work or protect them under Taliban law just makes it worse.
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* AntiVillain: A Taliban member who nonetheless tries his best to do good within it.
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* InformedAttribute: When she cuts her hair and cross dresses as “Aatish”, her mother says that she looks JUST like Sulayman. However, if the way Sulayman that is presented in the cardboard animation is how he really looks, then this would make no sense. In Parvana’s story, Sulayman is shown as having very curly hair, a unibrow, dark brown eyes, and a gap in between his two front teeth. Parvana, on the other hand, has straight hair, normal eyebrows, green eyes, and normal two front teeth.
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* InformedAttribute: When she cuts her hair and cross dresses as “Aatish”, her mother says that she looks JUST like Sulayman. However, if the way Sulayman that is presented in the cardboard animation is how he really looks, then this would make no sense. In Parvana’s story, Sulayman is shown as having very curly hair, a unibrow, dark brown eyes, and a gap in between his two front teeth. Parvana, on the other hand, has straight hair, normal eyebrows, green eyes, and normal two front teeth.
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* DisappearedDad: Downplayed, justified, and deconstructed. Nurullah is a very much an attentive father but was unjustifiably thrown into prison by a petty Idrees. And since he was the only adult male of his family, his wife and children initially struggle to survive until Parvana decides to pretend to be a boy.
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* DisappearedDad: Downplayed, justified, and deconstructed. Nurullah is a very much an attentive father but was unjustifiably thrown into prison by a petty [[EvilIsPetty petty]] Idrees. And since he was the only adult male of his family, his wife and children initially struggle to survive until Parvana decides to pretend to be a boy.
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* BigBad: The closest the film has to one, despite his small screen time, as it was him who arrested Nurullah and drove the film's plot.
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* WouldHitAGirl: [[spoiler:Chases Parvana and Shauzia with a machine gun, fully intending to kill them.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: [[spoiler:Chases Parvana and Shauzia with a machine gun, an assault rifle, fully intending to kill them.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: [[spoiler:Chases Parvana and Shauzia with a machine gun, fully intending to kill them [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil or worse .]]]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: [[spoiler:Chases Parvana and Shauzia with a machine gun, fully intending to kill them [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil or worse .]]]]them.]]
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* BeardOfEvil
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* BeardOfEvilBeardOfEvil: He has a long black beard to make him look creepier as you can see in the right picture.
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* IcyGrayEyes: The only other character besies Idrees with cold grey eyes, which further highlights his cruelty.
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* IcyGrayEyes: The only other character besies besides Idrees with cold grey eyes, which further highlights his cruelty.
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* InformedAttribute: When she cuts her hair and cross dresses as “Aatish”, her mother says that she looks JUST like Sulaymaniyah. However, if the way Sulaymaniyah that is presented in the cardboard animation is how he really looks, then this would make no sense. In Parvana’s story, Sulayman has very curly hair, dark brown eyes, and a gap in between his two front teeth. Parvana, on the other hand, has straight hair, green eyes, and normal two front teeth.
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* InformedAttribute: When she cuts her hair and cross dresses as “Aatish”, her mother says that she looks JUST like Sulaymaniyah. Sulayman. However, if the way Sulaymaniyah Sulayman that is presented in the cardboard animation is how he really looks, then this would make no sense. In Parvana’s story, Sulayman has is shown as having very curly hair, a unibrow, dark brown eyes, and a gap in between his two front teeth. Parvana, on the other hand, has straight hair, normal eyebrows, green eyes, and normal two front teeth.
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* InformedAttribute: When she cuts her hair and cross dresses as “Aatish”, her mother says that she looks JUST like Sulaymaniyah. However, if the way Sulaymaniyah that is presented in the cardboard animation is how he really looks, then this would make no sense. In Parvana’s story, Sulayman has very curly hair, dark brown eyes, and a gap in between his two front teeth. Parvana, on the other hand, has straight hair, green eyes, and normal two front teeth.
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* TraumaCongaLine: The poor girl goes through a lot in a short period of time. [[spoiler: She loses her father because of an incident involving her not marrying a cruel boy, her mother gets beaten with Parvana getting beat up herself not long after, she has to crossdress as a boy in order to support the family, she almost gets caught and killed by the boy who had her father arrested in the first place, she has to explain to her friend why she has to leave without her, she briefly loses the rest of her family because of her Cousin, and last but not least, she and her father nearly die while escaping him from prison as an airstrike is going on.]]
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->'''Voiced by:''' Saara Chaudry
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->'''Voiced by:''' Saara Chaudry
Chaudry (English), Creator/GolshiftehFarahani (French)
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* DisappearedDad: Downplayed, justified, and deconstructed. Nurullah is a very much am attentive father but was unjustifiably thrown into prison by a petty Idrees. And since he was the only adult male of his family, his wife and children initially struggle to survive until Parvana decides to pretend to be a boy.
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* DisappearedDad: Downplayed, justified, and deconstructed. Nurullah is a very much am an attentive father but was unjustifiably thrown into prison by a petty Idrees. And since he was the only adult male of his family, his wife and children initially struggle to survive until Parvana decides to pretend to be a boy.
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* CryingLittleKid: To be fair, if ''you'' were living under the Taliban, you’d probably be crying all the time, too. Parvana tells him her stories to soothe him and help him go to sleep.
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* CryingLittleKid: ProneToTears: To be fair, if ''you'' were living under the Taliban, you’d probably be crying all the time, too. Parvana tells him her stories to soothe him and help him go to sleep.
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* {{Moe}}
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Idrees does not get along with his fellow Talibs, who think of him as too rowdy and annoying for his own good. There's no objection to his being [[spoiler: sent off for war, since dying is probably the best thing he can do for the Taliban]].