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* TheDreaded: After gaining a reputation as a violent vigilante, even Mr. Range becomes scared of the Crimson Bolt.
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* TheDreaded: After gaining a reputation as a violent vigilante, even Mr. Range (a notorious drug lord that Jacques' men are intimidated by) becomes scared of the Crimson Bolt.
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* LoserProtagonist: He's a mentally-disturbed nobody who becomes a violent vigilante with a laughably bad costume as a way of coping with losing his wife.
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* LoserProtagonist: He's a mentally-disturbed nobody who becomes a violent vigilante with a laughably bad badly sewn costume as a way of coping with losing his wife.wife leaving him.
* RealMenLoveJesus: A lifelong devout Christian who believes that God has chosen him to make the world safer through physical force.
* ManicPixieDreamGirl: Is much more lively and fun loving than the serious and reserved Frank (whom she has an obsessive crush on).
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* DomesticAbuser: To Sarah, who he gets back on drugs. [[spoiler:And ultimately gives her up for Mr. Range to rape.]]
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* DomesticAbuser: To Sarah, who he gets back on drugs. [[spoiler:And ultimately gives pimps her up for Mr. Range to rape.]]
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* LackOfEmpathy: Feels absolutely no sympathy for Frank when Sarah has an affair with him.
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* LackOfEmpathy: Feels absolutely no sympathy for Frank when Sarah has an affair with him.him, nor did he care about Sarah.
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* RedIsHeroic / RedIsViolent: As the [[MeaningfulName Crimson]] Bolt, Frank is a costumed vigilante with a red costume. However, he's also a violent AntiHero prone to DisproportionateRetribution.
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* RedIsHeroic / RedIsViolent: As the [[MeaningfulName Crimson]] Bolt, Frank is a costumed vigilante with a red costume.dressed in red. However, he's also a violent AntiHero prone to DisproportionateRetribution.
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* RedIsHeroic / RedIsViolent: As the [[MeaningfulName Crimson]] Bolt, Frank is a costumed vigilante with a red costume. However, he's also become a violent AntiHero prone to DisproportionateRetribution.
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* RedIsHeroic / RedIsViolent: As the [[MeaningfulName Crimson]] Bolt, Frank is a costumed vigilante with a red costume. However, he's also become a violent AntiHero prone to DisproportionateRetribution.
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* RedIsHeroic/RedIsViolent: As the [[MeaningfulName Crimson]] Bolt, Frank is a costumed vigilante with a red costume. However, he's also become a violent AntiHero prone to DisproportionateRetribution.
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* RedIsHeroic/RedIsViolent: RedIsHeroic / RedIsViolent: As the [[MeaningfulName Crimson]] Bolt, Frank is a costumed vigilante with a red costume. However, he's also become a violent AntiHero prone to DisproportionateRetribution.