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* BunniesForCuteness: A half Cloud Chaser Hare, Mei Lin comes equipped with rabbit ears and cuteness to spare as noted by characters in universe that are shocked by how comforting and friendly she is.
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* BunniesForCuteness: A half Due to her Cloud Chaser Hare, Hare lineage, Mei Lin comes equipped with rabbit ears and cuteness to spare as noted by characters in universe that are shocked by how comforting and friendly she is.
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* LongRangeFighter: She fights exclusively with a bow and arrow.
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* IconicItem: She's never goes anywhere without her long white scarf. It's later revealed that she got the scarf from [[spoiler:Taduk right after she Ascended and took on human form]].
* LongRangeFighter: She fightsexclusively mostly with a bow and arrow.
* LongRangeFighter: She fights
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* TheNicknamer: She gives nicknames to everyone she's close to.
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* TheNicknamer: She gives nicknames to almost everyone she's close to.she meets. She uses cutesy names for the people she likes and insulting ones for the people she doesn't.
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* AffectionateNickname: Her family and friends usually call her Mila, while Mei Lin calls her Mi-Mi.
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* AffectionateNickname: Her family and friends usually call her Mila, while Mei Lin calls her Mi-Mi.
* InSeriesNickname: Her family and friends usually call her Mila
* AffectionateNickname: Mei Lin calls him Huu-Huu, while Adujan calls him Big Huu.
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* OutOfFocus: He hasn't been seen much after Sanshu. [[spoiler:This is because he is training himself by ignoring the whispers of the Spectres. He knows that coming into contact with Rain will cause them to disappear, which he wishes to avoid.]]
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* OutOfFocus: He hasn't been seen much after Sanshu. [[spoiler:This is because he is training himself by ignoring the whispers of the Spectres. He knows that coming into As such, he avoids contact with Rain will cause them others when possible to disappear, which he wishes to avoid.avoid anyone else being affected by the Spectres he's already attracted.]]
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[[folder:Adujan/[[spoiler:Du Min Yan]]]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Mei Lin calls her Yan-Yan.
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* HappilyAdopted: Officially adopted by [[spoiler:Du Min Gyu]], which brought her to tears of joy.
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* HappilyAdopted: Officially adopted by [[spoiler:Du Min Gyu]], Gyu]] and given the name [[spoiler:Du Min Yan]], which brought her to tears of joy.
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* InSeriesNickname: Sometimes called Yan by her close friends and Yan-Yan by [[TheNicknamer Mei Lin]].
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* InSeriesNickname: Sometimes called Yan by her close friends friends. [[spoiler:This stops being a nickname after she's adopted by Du Min Gyu and Yan-Yan by [[TheNicknamer Mei Lin]]. renamed Du Min Yan.]]
* PutOnABus: She temporarily leaves the story after she's adopted, [[spoiler:as she needs to move to Central to be with her new grandfather]].
* AffectionateNickname: Mei Lin calls her Li-Li.
* AffectionateNickname: Mei Lin calls him Baa-Baa.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Charok is noted by Li Song to be a powerful warrior; by the Bekhai's standards, he is only average.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Charok is noted by Li Song several non-Bekhai to be a powerful warrior; by the Bekhai's standards, he is only average.
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* RedBaron: He is famed as the Medical Saint, possibly the greatest Healer in the Empire.
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* RedBaron: He is famed as the Medical Saint, possibly the greatest Healer in the Empire.
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* AffectionateNickname: Mei Lin calls her Nai-Nai.
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* WildHair: Rain comments that Dagen's wild and messy hair and beard makes him look like a bandit rather than a Khishig. [[spoiler:Based on the memory Rain sees, it's implied that he stopped grooming himself after the deaths of his wife and children.]]
