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* SheCleansUpNicely: As seen when she puts on the dress Kohei buys for her at the end of her route.
* {{Tsundere}}: She's a Type B, in this case the trigger is just Kohei being present in the room, [[JerkAss though its not difficult to understand why..]]
* {{Tsundere}}: She's a Type B, in this case the trigger is just Kohei being present in the room, [[JerkAss though its not difficult to understand why..]]
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* LoveAtFirstSight: She's been in love with Kohei since they were children. She even gave him his FirstKiss within moments of their first meeting to cheer him up.
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* MomentKiller: A combination of situations 3 & 4 occurs during Nanase's H-Scene, Nanase is too nervous to go through with it, so just when it seems they are about to start, she clicks on the television and blurts out "OH LOOK SUMO WRESTLING IS ON, I LOVE SUMO WRESTLING." Kohei just sighs and tries to steer thing back on course.
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* MomentKiller: A combination of situations 3 & 4 occurs during Nanase's H-Scene, Nanase is her H-Scene: She's too nervous to go through with it, so just when it seems they are about to start, she clicks on the television and blurts out "OH LOOK SUMO WRESTLING IS ON, I LOVE SUMO WRESTLING." Kohei just sighs and tries to steer thing things back on course.
** On Mayu's route, Mayu constantly pulling her hair because it reminds her of her ferret.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Nanase is a Type B, in this case the trigger is just Kohei being present in the room, [[JerkAss though its not difficult to understand why..]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Nanase is She's a Type B, in this case the trigger is just Kohei being present in the room, [[JerkAss though its not difficult to understand why..]]
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* NoNameGiven: The game itself never names the childhood friend she's been waiting for. Supplemental materials reveal it to be Tsukasa.
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[[folder:Natsuki Shimizu]]
!!Natsuki Shimizu
!!!Voiced by: Creator/YukaImai
[[quoteright:589:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/onenatsuki.png]]
A heroine unique to the Platform/Playstation1 port of the original visual novel. She has pink hair, blue eyes, and wears glasses.
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* CanonForeigner: Inverted. She does not return for the 2023 remake.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: She sees Kohei as an older brother figure.
* RescueRomance: Kohei saves her from getting hit by a car at their first meeting.
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[[folder:Natsuki Shimizu]]
!!Natsuki Shimizu
!!!Voiced by: Creator/YukaImai
[[quoteright:589:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/onenatsuki.png]]
A heroine unique to the Platform/Playstation1 port of the original visual novel. She has pink hair, blue eyes, and wears glasses.
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* CanonForeigner: Inverted. She does not return for the 2023 remake.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: She sees Kohei as an older brother figure.
* RescueRomance: Kohei saves her from getting hit by a car at their first meeting.
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* EasilyForgiven: Mizuka is quick to forgive him for everything, even ploys that go ''way'' beyond his usual teasing and pranks in the common route.
* JerkAssRealization: He realizes he was about to go way too far and cross an InUniverse MoralEventHorizon in Mizuka's route with his NearRapeExperience ploy. Mizuka still forgives him because he put a stop to it before it could go too far even though he refuses to forgive himself for letting it get that far in the first place.
* PoorCommunicationKills: He's basically tricked into confessing to Mizuka in her route and certainly wasn't expecting her to take it seriously. This leaves him embittered because telling her it was meant to be a joke confession would have hurt her feelings, so he does increasingly-mean things to try and drive her away instead, which culminates with bringing in a random guy to try and ''rape'' her!
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* NearRapeExperience: Kohei plans to have her raped by an anonymous person but decides that this is a bad idea. This is the good route.
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* NearRapeExperience: Kohei plans to have her raped by an anonymous person in order to show her what a rotten person he really is so she'll break up with him, but decides that this is a bad idea.idea and stops it before it can go too far. This is the good route.
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* SpitTake: Kohei asking her about her love life in her route causes her to spit out her drink in surprise.
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* SelfImposedChallenge: InUniverse, he attempts to return Misaki's library books in complete darkness in order to better understand what it's like for her after having lost her sight. Dropping the books, getting disoriented, and knocking things over immediately helps him realize how difficult it can be.
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* BerserkButton: One of the few things that makes her angry is trying to touch the ribbon in her hair. The story offers no explanation as to why though.
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* {{Expy}}: Inverted. Yohei Sunohara from ''VisualNovel/{{Clannad}}'' is a dead ringer for him.
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* {{Expy}}: Inverted. Yohei Youhei Sunohara from ''VisualNovel/{{Clannad}}'' is a dead ringer for him.
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[[caption-width-right:228:"Forever exists..."]]
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[[caption-width-right:256:"I'm just joking~"]]
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[[caption-width-right:220:"...!" I'll do my best!]]
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* {{Expy}}: Inverted. Yohei Sunohara from ''VisualNovel/{{Clannad}}'' is a dead ringer for him.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Treated this way by the game itself. She is the only heroine who doesn't have a required encounter in the common route. Unless the player is aiming for Mizuka's route, they won't even learn she exists.
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* SweetTooth: He internally reveals that he has a much larger one than anyone may expect, but he's got nothing on Akane.
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* CerebusRetcon: Misaki decides to take her revenge on Kohei for running into her at the start of her route and not responding to her by saying "Who are you?" when he walks up to the roof, little did she know that he was in the middle of a breakdown because he actually '''was''' being forgotten by everyone, and she was the last one that would remember him.
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* CerebusRetcon: Misaki decides to take her revenge on Kohei for running into her at the start of her route and not responding to her by saying "Who are you?" when he walks up to the roof, little roof. Little did she know that he was in the middle of a breakdown because he actually '''was''' ''was'' being forgotten by everyone, everyone and she was the last one that would remember him.
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: In her route, she's the only one who remembers Kohei starting in mid-February and that realization keeps him from crossing the DespairEventHorizon while also giving him the determination to stick around as long as possible for her sake.
* CompanionCube: She goes into a panic if she's not carrying the sketchbook that Kohei loaned to her when they were children and will drop everything to return and retrieve it even if it would make more sense to wait until morning or complete an errand first due to it simply being forgotten rather than lost and she knows where to find it. Ultimately this makes her panic when Kohei secretly retrieves the book and leaves a note to apologize for forgetting his original promise more impactful.
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: How Kohei initially claims to feel about her, but it turns out he was in denial and trying to cope with the fact they'd be separated.
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: How Kohei initially claims to feel about her, but it turns out he was in denial and trying to cope with the fact they'd be separated.separated once he disappears.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Kohei from the beginning right to the end, setting the trend for Key heroes who in subsequent stories.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Kohei from the beginning right to the end, setting the trend for Key heroes who in subsequent stories.
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* FacelessProtagonist: Played straight in most event [=CGs=] but averted in SD panel moments throughout the story.
* HeavySleeper: Even more so than just NotAMorningPerson as he can't go a single day in school without falling asleep in class at some point.
* HeavySleeper: Even more so than just NotAMorningPerson as he can't go a single day in school without falling asleep in class at some point.
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* FacelessProtagonist: Played straight in most event [=CGs=] but averted in SD panel moments throughout the story.
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* HeavySleeper: Even more so than just NotAMorningPerson as he can't go a single day in school without falling asleep in class at some point. In Misaki's route, he falls asleep during class one day and doesn't wake up until the next morning!
* HeavySleeper: Even more so than just NotAMorningPerson as he can't go a single day in school without falling asleep in class at some point. In Misaki's route, he falls asleep during class one day and doesn't wake up until the next morning!
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* ObliviousToLove: Kohei during Nanase's route, he can't understand why she is disappointed when he takes her to cheap Ramen restaurant to try this new ramen on Christmas eve. He does eventually get it when she runs out crying.
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* ObliviousToLove: Kohei during Nanase's Rumi's route, he can't understand why she is disappointed when he takes her to cheap Ramen ramen restaurant to try this its new ramen on Christmas eve. He does eventually get it when she runs out crying.
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* WhamEpisode: Late in the game, Kohei ends up remembering the full extent of his DarkandTroubledPast, and the deal he made to erase himself from the real world in order to live in a blissful eternity. The plot takes a sharp turn towards DarkerAndEdgier and TearJerker territory from here on out, with Kohei realizing that he has a very limited time left in the real world, and the rest of the cast beginning to forget about him. In the bad endings, he's unable to stop or mitigate this turn of events, and ends up disappearing from the real world entirely.%%Invoked
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* WhamEpisode: Late in the game, Kohei ends up remembering the full extent of his DarkandTroubledPast, and the deal he made to erase himself from the real world in order to live in a blissful eternity. The plot takes a sharp turn towards DarkerAndEdgier and TearJerker territory from here then on out, with Kohei realizing that he has a very limited time left in the real world, world and the rest of the cast beginning to forget about him. In the bad endings, he's unable to stop or mitigate this turn of events, and ends up disappearing from the real world entirely.%%Invoked
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* HatesBeingTouched: Kohei's initial attempt at leading her somewhere by taking her hand causes her to recoil in horror, giving it this appearance. Turns out it was more about ''where'' he wanted to take her versus outright being touched.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Kohei's initial attempt at leading her somewhere by taking her hand causes her to recoil in horror, giving it this appearance. Turns Averted in that it turns out it was more about ''where'' he wanted to take her versus outright being touched.
* ItsNotYouItsMe: She's never had a boyfriend as, since losing her sight, she's felt she would only be a burden and an inconvenience to anyone she fell in love with. Kohei calls her out on this by using her own words of, "If that's your only reason, then I'm going to be really mad," against her.
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Misaki's best friend and classmate. Playing Mio's route also reveals her to be the Theater Club President.
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Introduced as Misaki's best friend and classmate. Playing But she has a larger role in Mio's route also when that reveals her to be the Theater Club President.
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* CloudCuckoolandersMinder: She's basically the same as Mizuka when dealing with Kohei when it comes to putting up with Misaki's antics.
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* CloudCuckoolandersMinder: She's basically the same as Mizuka when dealing with Kohei when it comes to putting up with Misaki's antics.antics when the two are together.
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* SecretlyDying: He's hiding an illness that keeps him from attending school very often. Kohei finds his obituary in the paper a month after their final meeting in his route.
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!!!Voiced by: Creator/ArashiTsunami (PC), Creator/SoichiroHoshi ([=PS1=]),
Creator/ShogoSakata (Remake)
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!!!Voiced by: Creator/ArashiTsunami (PC), Creator/SoichiroHoshi ([=PS1=]),
([=PS1=]), Creator/ShogoSakata (Remake)
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* IllBoy: Kohei learns after their last meeting that he was slowly dying during their time together and passes on a month later.
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* IGaveMyWord: His reason for sticking around until the end on Misaki's route: He promised to see her graduate.
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* TruthInTelevision: Misaki's surprised reactions to suddenly being touched without warning are why it's a good idea to never touch a blind person without an invitation or permission, and to let them know where.
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* TranquilFury: She doesn't raise her voice, but she's clearly angry at Kohei when he suggests he did nothing more than waste her time with their impromptu Christmas party. As she was enjoying every moment otherwise and just being together, she calls him out for thinking that way.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Kohei's initial attempt at leading her somewhere by taking her hand causes her to recoil in horror.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Kohei's initial attempt at leading her somewhere by taking her hand causes her to recoil in horror.horror, giving it this appearance. Turns out it was more about ''where'' he wanted to take her versus outright being touched.
