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* BerserkButton: Hurt Klaus in his presence, and you will die.
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* PapaWolf: "James's [BerserkButton] would be pretty much the Papa Wolf trope. If he's there and you try to hurt Klaus, you a dead man kiddo XD" - AuthorHis Berserk Button doubles as this.
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* HeroWorshipper: Crystal Eye gets this treatment from the majority of Dellville, much to Klaus' irritation.
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Crystal Eye
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* HeartTrauma: After the accident, Klaus' heart problems stopped, and as a result, he feels invincible and cocky.
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* RideTheLightning: Lightning's first power. With it, he could hide in a light bulb, although the bulb itself quickly shatters under the current.
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* [[spoiler: [[Really700YearsOld Really 300 Years Old]]: Daniel was actually born during the Salem Witch Trials, according to his origin story, making him around 300 or so years old.]]
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* BadassBookworm: He's more than capable of protecting himself and others, if necessary; he's actually a very good fighter, believe it or not.
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* CoolUncle: To Klaus. He is the sort of uncle that would always get cool stuff for his nephew, and he was the one Andy would go to if there was something he really needed comforting about or if he really needed to let off some steam.
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* CoolUncle: To Klaus.Andy. He is the sort of uncle that would always get cool stuff for his nephew, and he was the one Andy would go to if there was something he really needed comforting about or if he really needed to let off some steam.
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''One of the Melfton's caretakers. Edwin chooses to act more or less as a butler for James and Klaus (at least, Edwin prefers to be deemed 'butler'. After all, it sounds fancier!), though he will in fact help Diane keep an eye on Klaus if she needs him to, assuming he's available.''
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[[caption-width-right:171:Edwin]]''One of the Melfton's caretakers. Edwin chooses to act more or less as a butler for James and Klaus (at least, Edwin prefers to be deemed 'butler'. After all, it sounds fancier!), though he will in fact help Diane keep an eye on Klaus if she needs him to, assuming he's available.''
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''One of the Melfton's caretakers. Diane's main job is helping James take care of his son; some examples being giving the boy drives when told and watching him when he's left home alone, if she's there. She helped a lot when Klaus was just a baby, as well.''
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[[caption-width-right:171:Diane]]''One of the Melfton's caretakers. Diane's main job is helping James take care of his son; some examples being giving the boy drives when told and watching him when he's left home alone, if she's there. She helped a lot when Klaus was just a baby, as well.''
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''The ringleader of 'The Clique'. Katrine takes the most part in making Andy and Kailey's lives as miserable as possible; and when rich-boy Klaus picked them over her and her popular group, she made sure that she'd go to extra lengths to make his life twice as miserable as theirs.''
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[[caption-width-right:171:Katrine]]''The ringleader of 'The Clique'. Katrine takes the most part in making Andy and Kailey's lives as miserable as possible; and when rich-boy Klaus picked them over her and her popular group, she made sure that she'd go to extra lengths to make his life twice as miserable as theirs.''
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''The classic brawn of the Clique, Brandon is practically Katrine's right-hand man; his main job being beating up anyone who apposes her.''
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[[caption-width-right:171:[[labelnote:As Crystal Eye]]http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/crystal_eye_6948.png[[/labelnote]]]]''Daniel's a near-perfect role model for Klaus and his friends. His study habits are in top condition, as are his grades, and he's not a stranger when it comes to social life. However, how often he gets into trouble is quite the problem, as are his habits of being late for nearly everything. When a new superhero comes to town, Daniel can't help but disapprove. After all, he claims, there's a fine line between helping others and being reckless.''
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[[caption-width-right:171:Klaus' dad]]''Raising a child on your own can be difficult; especially when that child is Klaus. James' overprotective side can't help but show through, blocking off his son to anything that could be of danger to him the best that he can... '''Especially''' his lab. Not that the boy ever listens, anyhow... And some people actually WONDER why James is never not stressed...?''
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* HeartTrauma: After the accident, Klaus' heart problems stopped, and as a result, he feels invisible and cocky.
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* SpidersAreScary: {{InvertedTrope Inverted}}. Josh actually loves spiders, to the point where the author's {{MyLittlePonyFirendshipIsMagic Ponysona}} for the character bears a spider for a Cutie Mark.
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* LonelyRichKid: Played with. Klaus is one, but he doesn't apply to the usual rich kid tropes.
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''Josh has been working with Dr Melfton and Dr Arcson for years now; ever since he met the pair, really. The pair appreciate his contribution, even though he isn't the kind of person many feel comfortable around. He stays quiet during conversation, seeming to 'examine' the situation, most of the time. Unless, of course, he begins to get impatient... Something that happens often in the lab, when Arnold needs to help James out with some 'fatherhood advice'.''
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''Andy is one of Klaus' best friends. He's always been by Klaus' side ever since the rich boy had picked him and his other best friend Kailey over the 'popular' group of their school, known as 'The Clique'. So when Klaus shares with his two best friends that he's going to be a superhero, Andy doesn't hesitate to try his best to help him get through it... And so far, it seems as though Klaus needs as much help as he can get.''
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''Andy's uncle Arnold has always been there for James. They were friends ever since their days in elementary school, and in later years they were allied with Josh as well. For as long as he lives, Arnold will always try to keep his friend's heads up high.''
''One of the Melfton's caretakers. Edwin chooses to act more or less as a butler for James and Klaus (at least, Edwin prefers to be deemed 'butler'. After all, it sounds fancier!), though he will in fact help Diane keep an eye on Klaus if she needs him to, assuming he's available.''
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''Even as the son of famous scientist Dr James Melfton, Klaus could very well lead a better life. His grades have never been the best. His few friends' impopularity cause him a deal of bullying. And, even though his father makes plenty of money, he's lucky to even own a bike, which doesn't help at all when you have the absolute need to live in the fast lane. But when his curiosity of his father's lab gets him into an accident that should've very well cost him his life, he suddenly finds himself with extraordinary, electricity-based powers. And, more importantly (in his mind, at least), his powers grant him more speed than he's ever dreamed of.''
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