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Changed Sagara's trope from being careful what she wished for into justified paranoia. It wasn't her wish for her offsprings to be subjugated by humans, but rather her fear.
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** This trait of her was one of the reasons she agreed to [[spoiler: the annihilation of the ancient human race, as Brahma told both her and Ananta that in the future they would stand equal to both gods and nastikas, and this meant the weaker suras would run the risk of being subjugated by them.]] Fast forward to the present and guess which are the members of her clan who are nothing but CannonFodder, [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor often at the hands of the current human race?]]
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** This trait of her was one of the reasons she agreed to [[spoiler: the annihilation of the ancient human race, as Brahma told both her and Ananta that in the future they would stand equal to both gods and nastikas, and this meant the weaker suras would run the risk of being subjugated by them.]] Fast forward to the present and guess which are the members of her clan who are nothing but CannonFodder, [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor [[ProperlyParanoid often at the hands of the current human race?]]
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* OppositesAttract: His relationship with Sagara isn't anything if not this. He's a tall, powerful, respected, somewhat [[TheStoic stoic]] nastika; Sagara is short, weak for her kind, hated by her clan, and only shows raw emotion. And yet, he was heads over heels in love with her.
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* OppositesAttract: His relationship with Sagara isn't anything if not this. He's a tall, powerful, respected, somewhat [[TheStoic stoic]] nastika; Sagara is short, weak for her kind, hated by her clan, and only shows raw emotion. And yet, he was heads over heels in love with her. [[spoiler: Interestingly, they also share one key bond: They were both created from the remnants of the name and soul of Manasa, another nastika, Though only Ananta and the Primerval Gods are aware of this. Sagara recieved remnants of her soul, and Manasvin the remnants of her name]].
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** But on the other hand, she was it's implied the universe only stayed quiet that long because Kali and the rest of the primervals didn't directly interfere as early.
* UsefulNotes/{{BetaTest}}: One of her most important roles. By being a Time Axis, abnormally powerful snake-like Nastika, she gave Ananta everything he needs to know about how to function when he inherits her role. It's implied she even had the same attributes as him, from Manasvin sharing them too, and his power based on a fragment of her name.
* UsefulNotes/{{BetaTest}}: One of her most important roles. By being a Time Axis, abnormally powerful snake-like Nastika, she gave Ananta everything he needs to know about how to function when he inherits her role. It's implied she even had the same attributes as him, from Manasvin sharing them too, and his power based on a fragment of her name.
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** But on the other hand, she was it's implied the universe only stayed quiet that long because Kali and the rest of the primervals didn't directly interfere as early. \n She also ended up growing berserk, necessating the involvement of three primervals to bring her down as everyone else combined were unable, and Ananta possibly unwilling. Ananta, at least thus far, managed to avoid being overcome by sins which allowed him to continue using time powers. And the one time he did try to destroy the universe, his survival instinct rewinded time to prevent it.
* UsefulNotes/{{BetaTest}}: One of her most important roles. By being a Time Axis, abnormally powerful snake-like Nastika, she gave Ananta everything he needs to know about how to function when he inherits her role. It's implied she even had the same attributes as him,from due Manasvin sharing them too, and his power being based on a fragment of her name.
* UsefulNotes/{{BetaTest}}: One of her most important roles. By being a Time Axis, abnormally powerful snake-like Nastika, she gave Ananta everything he needs to know about how to function when he inherits her role. It's implied she even had the same attributes as him,
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Was this in some ways to Ananta, and he was this to her in others.
** As a Time Axis, she managed to keep her hand hidden for seemingly longer then him, and the universe enjoyed greater prosperity. She also had little opposition most of the time, and managed to secure the aid of the only being stronger then her, that being Ananta himself.
**But on the other hand, she was it's implied the universe only stayed quiet that long because Kali and the rest of the primervals didn't directly interfere as early.
** As a Time Axis, she managed to keep her hand hidden for seemingly longer then him, and the universe enjoyed greater prosperity. She also had little opposition most of the time, and managed to secure the aid of the only being stronger then her, that being Ananta himself.
**But on the other hand, she was it's implied the universe only stayed quiet that long because Kali and the rest of the primervals didn't directly interfere as early.
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* CessationOfExistence: A particularly cruel version even by the standards of the story. Having been destroyed by Shiva's transcedental with the same name as the trope, her name and soul could never be rebuilt. Ananta begged the primervals, and they agreed to use the fragments of her name and soul to create two seperate nastikas, those being Manasvin and Sagara we already know from the Ananta clan. Ananta, heartbroken that the result was two Nastikas so different from his beloved, and tried to rewind time to before her death. But Shiva's transcedental could not be undone even by time travel, and by rewinding time, Ananta only cemented her lack of existence. In the new reality he created, Manasvin and Sagara were two normal nastikas created by the primervals for no particular reason, and not even the primervals knew who Manasa was. The only person who remembered her existence, her sacrifice and her importance was Ananta, who [[ShootTheShaggyDog inadvertently cemented her becoming forgotten by all]].
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Manasa. A Nastika from a timeline before the formation of Sura clans. Her very existence sheds light and raises questions on some key mysteries of the series. As she is a WalkingSpoiler, spoilers will be unmarked.
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Manasa. A Nastika from a timeline before the formation of Sura clans. Her very existence sheds light and raises questions on some key mysteries of the series. As she is a WalkingSpoiler, spoilers will be unmarked.unmarked, so readers are advised to avoid her folder until reading the 'In My Delusions' side story chapters.
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* Foreshadowing: Her having even existed at all had only the barest hints of foreshadowing. Namely Manasvin sharing Ananta's Sky and Earth attributes for reasons even 5th zen gods seemed confused about, and Ananta's weird relation to his clan and especially his treatment towards Sagara's obvious love for him.
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Her having even existed at all had only the barest hints of foreshadowing. Namely Manasvin sharing Ananta's Sky and Earth attributes for reasons even 5th zen gods seemed confused about, and Ananta's weird relation to his clan and especially his treatment towards Sagara's obvious love for him.
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Manasa. A Nastika from a timeline before the formation of Sura clans.
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Manasa. A Nastika from a timeline before the formation of Sura clans. Her very existence sheds light and raises questions on some key mysteries of the series. As she is a WalkingSpoiler, spoilers will be unmarked.
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* UsefulNotes/{{BetaTest}}: One of her most important roles. By being a Time Axis, abnormally powerful snake-like Nastika, she gave Ananta everything he needs to know about how to function when he inherits her role. It's implied she even had the same attributes as him, from Manasvin sharing them too, and his power based on a fragment of her name.
* Foreshadowing: Her having even existed at all had only the barest hints of foreshadowing. Namely Manasvin sharing Ananta's Sky and Earth attributes for reasons even 5th zen gods seemed confused about, and Ananta's weird relation to his clan and especially his treatment towards Sagara's obvious love for him.
* WalkingSpoiler: The biggest one in the series thus far. Just her existence implies a version of the universe where Suras had no biological clans, and her story sheds light on the Time Axis mechanic, the universe-destroying monster, and possibly what happens when a Time Axis is engulfed by sins.
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* UsefulNotes/{{BetaTest}}: One of her most important roles. By being a Time Axis, abnormally powerful snake-like Nastika, she gave Ananta everything he needs to know about how to function when he inherits her role. It's implied she even had the same attributes as him, from Manasvin sharing them too, and his power based on a fragment of her name.
* Foreshadowing: Her having even existed at all had only the barest hints of foreshadowing. Namely Manasvin sharing Ananta's Sky and Earth attributes for reasons even 5th zen gods seemed confused about, and Ananta's weird relation to his clan and especially his treatment towards Sagara's obvious love for him.
* WalkingSpoiler: The biggest one in the series thus far. Just her existence implies a version of the universe where Suras had no biological clans, and her story sheds light on the Time Axis mechanic, the universe-destroying monster, and possibly what happens when a Time Axis is engulfed by sins.
