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* GeniusBruiser: During the "Escape!" segment he analyzed Kaxo, Caiya, and Raize's personalities and formed a strategy to defeat them.
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* GeniusBruiser: During the "Escape!" segment he analyzed Kaxo, Caiya, and Raize's personalities and formed a strategy to defeat them.them.
* TheMole: According to Hali, the reason he was kicked out was because he was selling secrets to the KAS's enemies.
* TheMole: According to Hali, the reason he was kicked out was because he was selling secrets to the KAS's enemies.
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A former member of the Kirby Adventure Squad who got kicked out by Hali for selling top secret information. He's vowed to get revenge on her because of this.
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A former member of the Kirby Adventure Squad who got kicked out by Hali for for, according to Hali, selling top secret information. He's vowed to get revenge on her because of this.
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**DragonWithAnAgenda: His only goal is to get revenge on Hali for firing him. His boss, however, is more focused on destroying Division A. The real question is why he's affiliated with him in the first place.
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* NoticingTheFourthWall: He and Shadik seem to be the only characters who are aware they're in a fictional world.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: He freaks out whenever something major occurs that he didn't foresee.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: He freaks out whenever something major occurs that when he learns he didn't foresee.forsee [[spoiler:Keito's death]] in "Infiltration".
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* OnlySaneMan: He's probably the most level-headed among his teammates.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT harm Saia. If Kaxo finds out, you will most surely regret it.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT harm Saia. If Kaxo finds out, out you did, you will most surely regret it.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT harm Saia. If Kaxo finds out, you will most surely regret it.
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* SplitPersonality:
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: [[MemeticMutation DONUTS]]!!
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: [[MemeticMutation DONUTS]]!!
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: He was horrified to learn that [[spoiler:Zykan had killed Keito]].
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Second-in-command of Division A.
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* NumberTwoNumberTwo: He's the second-in-command of Division A.
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* SquishyWizard: His psychic powers have put him in a fragile physical state, so he doesn't leave the base very often.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: He freaks out whenever something major occurs that he didn't foresee.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Becomes more serious as the comic progresses though eventually decides he's being a bit too serious.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Becomes more serious as the comic progresses though he eventually decides he's being a bit too serious.
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A psychic advisor in the KAS who primarily works with Division A.
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A psychic with the power to see the future. Despite being an advisor in to all of the KAS who he primarily works with Division A.
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**And another one a few pages later:
-->'''Kirby''': So, once again, you think you can beat my squad of some of the strongest Kirbies in Dream Land with a few friends and a bit of monthly training?
-->'''Talzo''': STOP PICKING HOLES IN ALL OF MY LOGIC!!
-->'''Kirby''': So, once again, you think you can beat my squad of some of the strongest Kirbies in Dream Land with a few friends and a bit of monthly training?
-->'''Talzo''': STOP PICKING HOLES IN ALL OF MY LOGIC!!
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* CombatMedic: Step out of line, and you'll receive a hefty beating from her parasol.
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* CombatMedic: Step out of line, and you'll receive a hefty beating from her parasol.CombatMedic
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* TechnicalPacifist
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* RedOniBlueOni: The blue to Keito's red.
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* RedOniBlueOni: The red to Kirby's blue.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: [[http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1327180/jetting-across-the-ice-part-39/ Bananas]], apparently.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: [[http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1327180/jetting-across-the-ice-part-39/ Bananas]], apparently.
[[http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1729060/master-of-puppets-part-17/ apparently]].
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: [[http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1327180/jetting-across-the-ice-part-39/ Bananas]], apparently.
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--->'''Kirby''': It's pretty much teleportation, only it looks cooler.
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--->'''Kirby''': You think you can beat me with a few months of training? The one who destroyed Nightmare, Dark Matter, Zero (twice), Marx, Dark Mind, Drawcia, Dark Nebula, and Galacta Knight?
--->'''Talzo''': [[OhCrap ...ooooooh crap...]]
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* BadassBoast: Delivers one to Talzo in ''Jetting Across The Ice''.
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* BadassBoast: Delivers one to Talzo in ''Jetting "Jetting Across The Ice''.Ice".
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A member of Division a with [[SplitPersonality split personalities]]. In one of her personalities she is cheerful and intelligent. In her other she is an energetic child. Both of her personalities really like [[TrademarkFavoriteFood donuts]].
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A member of Division a A with [[SplitPersonality split personalities]]. In one of her personalities she is cheerful and intelligent. In her other she is an energetic child. Both of her personalities really like [[TrademarkFavoriteFood donuts]].
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* TheSmartGuy: Largely due to his psychic powers.
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* TheSmartGuy: Largely due to his psychic powers.powers.
!!Talzo
A former member of the Kirby Adventure Squad who got kicked out by Hali for selling top secret information. He's vowed to get revenge on her because of this.
* AntiVillain: All he wants is revenge on Hali for kicking him out and would prefer to leave Division A out of it.
* CurbStompBattle: Completely lays waste to the members of Division A in "Escape!". Then he runs into Kirby, who curb-stomps him in return.
* TheDragon: To whoever the red-eyes guy is.
* GeniusBruiser: During the "Escape!" segment he analyzed Kaxo, Caiya, and Raize's personalities and formed a strategy to defeat them.
!!Talzo
A former member of the Kirby Adventure Squad who got kicked out by Hali for selling top secret information. He's vowed to get revenge on her because of this.
* AntiVillain: All he wants is revenge on Hali for kicking him out and would prefer to leave Division A out of it.
* CurbStompBattle: Completely lays waste to the members of Division A in "Escape!". Then he runs into Kirby, who curb-stomps him in return.
* TheDragon: To whoever the red-eyes guy is.
* GeniusBruiser: During the "Escape!" segment he analyzed Kaxo, Caiya, and Raize's personalities and formed a strategy to defeat them.
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* TheSmartGuy: Largely due to his psychic powers.
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* PsychicPowers
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* TheSmartGuy: PsychicPowers
*TheSmartGuy: Largely due to his psychicpowers.
* PsychicPowerspowers.
*TheSmartGuy: Largely due to his psychic
* PsychicPowers
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* TechnicalPacifist:
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* TechnicalPacifist:TechnicalPacifist
!!Vezo
The newest recruit for Division A and the most frequent target of Kaxo's hostility.
* ButtMonkey: Often the target of Kaxo's bullying and other mishaps. He has been getting better though.
* MysteriousPast: So far we've met two Gims who apparently knew him at one point. [[spoiler:One of them currently works for Talzo]].
* TagalongKid
!!Shat'l
A psychic advisor in the KAS who primarily works with Division A.
*TheSmartGuy: Largely due to his psychic powers.
* PsychicPowers
!!Vezo
The newest recruit for Division A and the most frequent target of Kaxo's hostility.
* ButtMonkey: Often the target of Kaxo's bullying and other mishaps. He has been getting better though.
* MysteriousPast: So far we've met two Gims who apparently knew him at one point. [[spoiler:One of them currently works for Talzo]].
* TagalongKid
!!Shat'l
A psychic advisor in the KAS who primarily works with Division A.
*TheSmartGuy: Largely due to his psychic powers.
* PsychicPowers
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* SociopathicHero
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* SociopathicHeroSociopathicHero
!!Raize
*ShockAndAwe: Has a stored ability of plasma.
*TheSmartGuy
*TheStrategist
!!Shadik
A kirby from the Mirror World who serves as a liaison between that and the KAS. He has ability to teleport himself and others via his Shadow Jump technique.
* BigDamnHeroes: At one point in ''To The Tower'' he defeated Wiz and freed the other Division A members, all in ''three'' seconds.
* DarkIsNotEvil
* RuleOfCool: His Shadow Jump. As Kirby puts it:
--->'''Kirby''': It's pretty much teleportation, only it looks cooler.
* TheSpeechless
!!Saia
The healer for Division A. She's a kindhearted soul who always wants to help others, though not enough that it makes her incompetent.
* CombatMedic: Step out of line, and you'll receive a hefty beating from her parasol.
* TheChick
* TechnicalPacifist:
!!Raize
*ShockAndAwe: Has a stored ability of plasma.
*TheSmartGuy
*TheStrategist
!!Shadik
A kirby from the Mirror World who serves as a liaison between that and the KAS. He has ability to teleport himself and others via his Shadow Jump technique.
* BigDamnHeroes: At one point in ''To The Tower'' he defeated Wiz and freed the other Division A members, all in ''three'' seconds.
* DarkIsNotEvil
* RuleOfCool: His Shadow Jump. As Kirby puts it:
--->'''Kirby''': It's pretty much teleportation, only it looks cooler.
* TheSpeechless
!!Saia
The healer for Division A. She's a kindhearted soul who always wants to help others, though not enough that it makes her incompetent.
* CombatMedic: Step out of line, and you'll receive a hefty beating from her parasol.
* TheChick
* TechnicalPacifist:
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* SociopathicHeroSociopathicHero
!!Raize
*ShockAndAwe: Has a stored ability of plasma.
*TheSmartGuy
*TheStrategist
!!Shadik
A kirby from the Mirror World who serves as a liaison between that and the KAS. He has ability to teleport himself and others via his Shadow Jump technique.
* BigDamnHeroes: At one point in ''To The Tower'' he defeated Wiz and freed the other Division A members, all in ''three'' seconds.
* DarkIsNotEvil
* RuleOfCool: His Shadow Jump. As Kirby puts it:
--->'''Kirby''': It's pretty much teleportation, only it looks cooler.
* TheSpeechless
!!Saia
The healer for Division A. She's a kindhearted soul who always wants to help others, though not enough that it makes her incompetent.
* CombatMedic: Step out of line, and you'll receive a hefty beating from her parasol.
* TheChick
* TechnicalPacifist:
!!Raize
*ShockAndAwe: Has a stored ability of plasma.
*TheSmartGuy
*TheStrategist
!!Shadik
A kirby from the Mirror World who serves as a liaison between that and the KAS. He has ability to teleport himself and others via his Shadow Jump technique.
* BigDamnHeroes: At one point in ''To The Tower'' he defeated Wiz and freed the other Division A members, all in ''three'' seconds.
* DarkIsNotEvil
* RuleOfCool: His Shadow Jump. As Kirby puts it:
--->'''Kirby''': It's pretty much teleportation, only it looks cooler.
* TheSpeechless
!!Saia
The healer for Division A. She's a kindhearted soul who always wants to help others, though not enough that it makes her incompetent.
* CombatMedic: Step out of line, and you'll receive a hefty beating from her parasol.
* TheChick
* TechnicalPacifist:
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: [[spoiler:He doesn't bully kirbies for the fun of it, he does it to get them to prove themselves.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: [[spoiler:He doesn't bully kirbies for the fun of it, he does it to get them to prove themselves.themselves]].
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* PyroManic: He's a blood knight, and he has a stored ability of fire, so it shouldn't come as a surprise.
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* PyroManic: PyroManiac: He's a blood knight, and he has a stored ability of fire, so it shouldn't come as a surprise.
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--->'''Kirby''': You think you can beat me with a few months of training? The one who destroyed Nightmare Nightmare, Dark Matter, Zero (twice), Marx, Dark Mind, Drawcia, Dark Nebula, and Galacta Knight?
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* TheLeader: of Division A.
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* TheLeader: of Division A.A.
!!Keito
Second-in-command of Division A.
* TheLancer
* NumberTwo
* ShockAndAwe: Has a stored ability of beam.
!!Caiya
A member of Division a with [[SplitPersonality split personalities]]. In one of her personalities she is cheerful and intelligent. In her other she is an energetic child. Both of her personalities really like [[TrademarkFavoriteFood donuts]].
* AnIcePerson
* ActionGirl
* TheDitz: When she's in her stupid personality.
* TheSmartGuy: Half the time, at least.
* SplitPersonality:
!!Kaxo
* BloodKnight
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: [[spoiler:He doesn't bully kirbies for the fun of it, he does it to get them to prove themselves.
* PlayingWithFire: Has a stored ability of fire.
* PyroManic: He's a blood knight, and he has a stored ability of fire, so it shouldn't come as a surprise.
* SociopathicHero
!!Keito
Second-in-command of Division A.
* TheLancer
* NumberTwo
* ShockAndAwe: Has a stored ability of beam.
!!Caiya
A member of Division a with [[SplitPersonality split personalities]]. In one of her personalities she is cheerful and intelligent. In her other she is an energetic child. Both of her personalities really like [[TrademarkFavoriteFood donuts]].
* AnIcePerson
* ActionGirl
* TheDitz: When she's in her stupid personality.
* TheSmartGuy: Half the time, at least.
* SplitPersonality:
!!Kaxo
* BloodKnight
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: [[spoiler:He doesn't bully kirbies for the fun of it, he does it to get them to prove themselves.
* PlayingWithFire: Has a stored ability of fire.
* PyroManic: He's a blood knight, and he has a stored ability of fire, so it shouldn't come as a surprise.
* SociopathicHero
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!!Kirby
The founder of the KAS and leader of Division A.
*BadassBoast: Delivers one to Talzo in ''Jetting Across The Ice''.
--->'''Kirby''': You think you can beat me with a few months of training? The one who destroyed Nightmare Dark Matter, Zero (twice), Marx, Dark Mind, Drawcia, Dark Nebula, and Galacta Knight?
--->'''Talzo''': [[OhCrap ...ooooooh crap...]]
*CharacterDevelopment: Becomes more serious as the comic progresses though eventually decides he's being a bit too serious.
*ImplausibleFencingPowers: He once sliced an attack from Talzo ''in half''.
*TheLeader: of Division A.
The founder of the KAS and leader of Division A.
*BadassBoast: Delivers one to Talzo in ''Jetting Across The Ice''.
--->'''Kirby''': You think you can beat me with a few months of training? The one who destroyed Nightmare Dark Matter, Zero (twice), Marx, Dark Mind, Drawcia, Dark Nebula, and Galacta Knight?
--->'''Talzo''': [[OhCrap ...ooooooh crap...]]
*CharacterDevelopment: Becomes more serious as the comic progresses though eventually decides he's being a bit too serious.
*ImplausibleFencingPowers: He once sliced an attack from Talzo ''in half''.
*TheLeader: of Division A.
