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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After killing her husband and [[AmbiguousSituation his possible]] lover in a blind rage.
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* TheChessmaster:: He ''thinks'' he's one, anyway. His actual track record is hit-or-miss.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: A smug, manipulative, merciless zealot with an insult for everybody eventually joins the Party without fully shedding any of these traits.
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Large flying stinging bugs that can kill human beings.
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A species of giant leeches that paralyze their victims and lay eggs in their bodies.
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* BodyHorror: They paralyze and sedate their victims and put their larva in their bodies.
* FantasticDrug: Their sedating venom can be harvested into controlled dosages to get people high. It's actually a popular side-gig for Monster Hunters to sell after they kill them.
* FateWorseThanDeath: As parasites, they prefer for their victims to stay alive as long as possible while their young feast on their flesh. Even [[LackOfEmpathy ''Mad'']] feels sympathy for those caught up in their swamp.
* KnightOfCerebus: Monsters before them could be intimidating and creepy, but the Mother Leeches using their venom on Cardinal and almost laying eggs in him kicked off a consistently darker tone for the rest of the series; taking things from action/adventure to pure horror.
* MamaBear: A dark example; they paralyze other creatures, including humans, for their children; and fight anybody who tries to stop them.
* TheParasite: Comes with being leeches.
* FantasticDrug: Their sedating venom can be harvested into controlled dosages to get people high. It's actually a popular side-gig for Monster Hunters to sell after they kill them.
* FateWorseThanDeath: As parasites, they prefer for their victims to stay alive as long as possible while their young feast on their flesh. Even [[LackOfEmpathy ''Mad'']] feels sympathy for those caught up in their swamp.
* KnightOfCerebus: Monsters before them could be intimidating and creepy, but the Mother Leeches using their venom on Cardinal and almost laying eggs in him kicked off a consistently darker tone for the rest of the series; taking things from action/adventure to pure horror.
* MamaBear: A dark example; they paralyze other creatures, including humans, for their children; and fight anybody who tries to stop them.
* TheParasite: Comes with being leeches.
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* [[TheFool The Ofzblart]]: A hedonist turning revolutionary in a whim, who only seems to fall upward.
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: A violent version of one.
* OneWingedAngel: In her moth form.
* YouKilledMyFather: Why she wants to kill Trog.
* OneWingedAngel: In her moth form.
* YouKilledMyFather: Why she wants to kill Trog.
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!! Keltnin Savos / Freghk-Lihng-Ghaugh / The Rot Lord
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!! Keltnin Savos / Freghk-Lihng-Ghaugh / The Dirt King / The Rot Lord
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He's the creator of eldridge horror and God of Decay. When Mad meets him he just looks like some guy.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Worm and other followers of Jareth see them as a plague, with no regard for individual variations.
* HumansAreBastards: Seen as shallow and destructive by many other races.
* HumansAreBastards: Seen as shallow and destructive by many other races.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Despite being seen as plain-spoken and unwitty by herself and others, she has her moments.
-> Sareash: ''"It's Sareash. My name is Sareash"''
-> Trog: ''"Um, Trog. Still only Trog."''
-> Sareash: ''"It's Sareash. My name is Sareash"''
-> Trog: ''"Um, Trog. Still only Trog."''
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* CharacterDevelopment: Thanks to his failures to manipulate Sareash and the bravery of Cardinal, he starts to reconsider his stance on humanity.
* TheHeavy: He's only a hired hand in Lacturn's conspiracy, but he and Zavieeur are the first non-animal enemies the heroes direct fight.
* AboveGoodAndEvil: Doesn't see himself as so much "above" as "alien" to most humanoid morality.
* TheHeavy: He's only a hired hand in Lacturn's conspiracy, but he and Zavieeur are the first non-animal enemies the heroes direct fight.
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: With Worm, during his time in the League.
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A fairy god whose worshippers regard humanity as the source of all that's wrong in the world.
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* ThePowerOfHate: Feeds off of it; to his followers, hating your enemies is a sacred act.
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* GodOfEvil: His sees hatred as a virtue.
* ThePowerOfHate: Feeds off of it; to his followers, hating your enemies is a sacred act.
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* TheFundamentalist: A devout worshipper of Jerath.
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* TragicBigot: While he takes it too far, he has reasons for distrusting humanity given his backstory and what the Samaar did to the Goblins.
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Cardinal's enchanted, blood-red cloak that can transform into a ferocious monster.
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Cardinal's enchanted, blood-red cloak that can transform into summon the spirits of angry demons and become a ferocious monster.
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* RightHandAttackDog: Cardinal basically sics him on his enemies like one.
* TeamPet: Level of sentience is unclear, but it's kind of Cardinal's pet as well as his clothing.
* TeamPet: Level of sentience is unclear, but it's kind of Cardinal's pet as well as his clothing.
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* DumbMuscle: Their culture isn't as invested in science as the Bloodskulls, and are regarded as savages by them.
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* ForScience: Inventors are regarded with the highest esteem in their culture, even higher than the still-respected warriors.
* WarriorPoet: The ideal Bloodskull is a skilled and ruthless warrior who also can write poetry and is inquisitive about the world around them.
* WarriorPoet: The ideal Bloodskull is a skilled and ruthless warrior who also can write poetry and is inquisitive about the world around them.
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* FantasyCultureCounterpart: Their belief in the Dragon Gods has similarities to Abrahamic beliefs (lampshaded by Cardinal), and they physically resemble people from the Mediterranian, Middle East, or South Europe.
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* FantasyCultureCounterpart: FantasyCounterpartCulture: Their belief in the Dragon Gods has similarities to Abrahamic beliefs (lampshaded by Cardinal), and they physically resemble people from the Mediterranian, Middle East, or South Europe.
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* HistoricalConflictCounterpart: FantasyConflictCounterpart:
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!! Saama People
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!! Saama People
In General
!! Samaa People
The brown/tan-skinned people native to Samaar, who were exiled by the Alto 111 years ago to the dangerous island of Laskmeer.
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* FantasyCultureCounterpart: Their belief in the Dragon Gods has similarities to Abrahamic beliefs (lampshaded by Cardinal), and they physically resemble people from the Mediterranian, Middle East, or South Europe.
!! Samaa People
The brown/tan-skinned people native to Samaar, who were exiled by the Alto 111 years ago to the dangerous island of Laskmeer.
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* FantasyCultureCounterpart: Their belief in the Dragon Gods has similarities to Abrahamic beliefs (lampshaded by Cardinal), and they physically resemble people from the Mediterranian, Middle East, or South Europe.
Fair-skinned humans and current rulers of Alto-Samaar.
!! The Calde
!! The Calde
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A humanoid reptilian people who generally live in homogenous swamp communities in Laskmeer, though some individuals strike out to do business with other species.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: They're not evil, but they can come across this way to humans because their culture lacks abstract concepts like dignity, honor etc. They value family, the survival of their species, pragmatism, and politeness. It's to the extent where it's actually diffict to be angry at a Clokken assassin, because you really know it's not personal.
* LizardFolk: They resemble humanoid lizards.
* TheSpock: Driven primarily by pragmatism and efficiency.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: They're not evil, but they can come across this way to humans because their culture lacks abstract concepts like dignity, honor etc. They value family, the survival of their species, pragmatism, and politeness. It's to the extent where it's actually diffict to be angry at a Clokken assassin, because you really know it's not personal.
* LizardFolk: They resemble humanoid lizards.
* TheSpock: Driven primarily by pragmatism and efficiency.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Something common in all orc cultures; even the studious Bloodskulls, outside of their elite intellectuals, hold an esteem for battle and bravery.
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* FlatEarthAtheist: They reject any gods and embrace invention, despite living in a world surrounded by magic.
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The native inhabitants of Laskmeer, driven away or into hiding by the Saama. Small green people who are regarded by historians as cruel, but whose folk beliefs influence the current culture.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed. Treated this way in in-universe histories and stories; they were apparently a culture based around cruelty who worshipped a God of Decay; and the Saamar were defending themselves from attacks when they slaughtered them. However, everyone from the peasants to the King of Laskmeer takes heed of their folk stories, and when we see a clan of them in Drathe's backstory they're superstitious but benign, and honor their end of a treaty with her village.
* HistoricalConflictCounterpart:
** Like Europeans and Native Americans, they were nearly wiped out by foreign settlers and villainized by history as savage aggressors, while their folklore was still held in high esteem by said settlers.
** Like Australians and Aboriginies, the settlers were forced (as a penal colony in Australia and as a people-group exile in Laskmeer) by a more powerful government than them to go to an island widely seen as wild and dangerous, where they had conflicts with the Natives that ended with said exiles gaining most political power.
* HistoricalVillainUpgrade: As a culture, they're demonized as another monster that the people of Laskmeer had to put down. It's implied that this is widely victors writing history.
* TheRemnant: After the genocide, a few tribes still exist on the island.
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The native inhabitants of Laskmeer, driven away or into hiding by the Saama. Small green people who are regarded by historians as cruel, but whose folk beliefs influence the current culture.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed. Treated this way in in-universe histories and stories; they were apparently a culture based around cruelty who worshipped a God of Decay; and the Saamar were defending themselves from attacks when they slaughtered them. However, everyone from the peasants to the King of Laskmeer takes heed of their folk stories, and when we see a clan of them in Drathe's backstory they're superstitious but benign, and honor their end of a treaty with her village.
* HistoricalConflictCounterpart:
** Like Europeans and Native Americans, they were nearly wiped out by foreign settlers and villainized by history as savage aggressors, while their folklore was still held in high esteem by said settlers.
** Like Australians and Aboriginies, the settlers were forced (as a penal colony in Australia and as a people-group exile in Laskmeer) by a more powerful government than them to go to an island widely seen as wild and dangerous, where they had conflicts with the Natives that ended with said exiles gaining most political power.
* HistoricalVillainUpgrade: As a culture, they're demonized as another monster that the people of Laskmeer had to put down. It's implied that this is widely victors writing history.
* TheRemnant: After the genocide, a few tribes still exist on the island.
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!! Historical and Legendary Heroes
[[folder: King Aheerum]]
!! King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
[[folder: King Aheerum]]
!! King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
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The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
!! Alto People
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!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: See his father's entry.
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Elves]]
!!Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
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High Elves
!! Forest Elves
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!! Forest Elves
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!! General Turp Glurbob
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!! Captain Lodin
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!! Jackalfang Orcs
!! Bloodskull Orcs
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!! Historical and Legendary Heroes
[[folder: King Aheerum]]
!! King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
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!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
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!! General Turp Glurbob
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!! Characters Introduced in "The Tale of the Useless Prince"
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!! Captain Lodin
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The competent but unpopular Orcish leader of the Night Star Barrack. Joins the main party after the devastating battle with the Beast of the Gulch.
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The competent but unpopular Orcish leader of the Night Star Barrack.Barrak. Joins the main party after the devastating battle with the Beast of the Gulch.
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* NoSocialSkills: Despite being a competent leader, she's also gruff and un-charasmatic; making her barrack ripe for mutineers.
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! The Night Star Barrack
A clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters led by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
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! The Night Star Barrack
Barrak
A clan, or"Barrack", "Barrak", of Beast Hunters led by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
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The original leader of the Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.
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* Token White: When he joins the main party, he's the only fair-skinned member since Mad Crossbones left weeks before.
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* Token White: TokenWhite: When he joins the main party, he's the only fair-skinned member since Mad Crossbones left weeks before.
* UnresolvedSexualTension: With Sareash.
* UnresolvedSexualTension: With Sareash.
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!! The Red Cloak
Cardinal's enchanted, blood-red cloak that can transform into a ferocious monster.
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* ArsenalAttire: When Cardinal starts out, he lets the Cloak do most of his fighting.
* LivingClothes: How sentient they are is unclear, but they at least have some amount of animal instinct and loyalty to their master.
* UndyingLoyalty: To Cardinal.
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The crown princess of Aldroy, who wants to get out of the crownlands and see adventure.
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! Royal Family and Court
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! Aldroy Royal Family and Court
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Until the end of "House of Flies".
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Until the end of "House of Flies".Flies", where she's revealed to be good.
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* MentorOccupationalHazard: Sareash accidentally kills him while slaying the hornets.
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* PestController: Perhaps created the giant bugs that plague the realm.
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* PestController: Perhaps created Created the giant bugs that plague the realm.
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!! Beasts and Monsters
[[folder: Teratietus Loxineegus]]
!! Teratietus Loxineegus
The first giant bug Cardinal faces in "Web of Bones".
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* StarterVillain: For an amnesiac waking up in a cave, these things are deadly. If Cardinal were to encounter them in the series' current spot, they'd be cannon fodder.
[[folder: Teratietus Loxineegus]]
!! Teratietus Loxineegus
The first giant bug Cardinal faces in "Web of Bones".
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* StarterVillain: For an amnesiac waking up in a cave, these things are deadly. If Cardinal were to encounter them in the series' current spot, they'd be cannon fodder.
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!! Beasts and Monsters
[[folder: Teratietus Loxineegus]]
!! Teratietus Loxineegus
The first giant bug Cardinal faces in "Web Shadow League
A group ofBones".
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* StarterVillain: For an amnesiac waking up in a cave, these things are deadly. If Cardinal were to encounter them in the series' current spot, they'd be cannon fodder.skilled assassins for hire.
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[[folder: Worm]]
See "Main Party" above.
[[folder: Teratietus Loxineegus]]
!! Teratietus Loxineegus
A group of
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* StarterVillain: For an amnesiac waking up in a cave, these things are deadly. If Cardinal were to encounter them in the series' current spot, they'd be cannon fodder.
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See "Main Party" above.
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!! The Zarklago
A giant, cat-like beast; the first Cardinal actively fights.
!! The Zarklago
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Zavieeur]]
!!The Zarklago
Vslrischssch Zaiveeur Hrklsshssyk
Agiant, cat-like beast; [[LizardFolk Clokken]] member of the first Cardinal actively fights.Shadow Guild, and a pretty personable guy.
!!
A
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* PantheraAwesome
AffablyEvil: A skilled killer-for-hire, but also a great conversationalist who means every word he says.
* AntiVillain
* BecauseImGoodAtIt: The main reason he's an assassin.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Clokkens don't have concepts of glory, heroism, deceit, or hate like most other races. They simply wish for the survival of their people. This makes attempting to appeal to Zavieeur's "better nature" a fool's errand.
* DeaderThanDead: Ultimately annihilated by the Decay Beam.
* FriendlyEnemy: He regards Cardinal as his friend even as he has him [[JamesBondage tied up]], and the latter remarks that he finds it impossible to be offended.
* GrapplingHookGun: Wields two of them; they suit his reptilian flexibility.
* LizardFolk: The Clokkens.
* SimpleMindedWisdom: A strange variant; Zavieeur is quick-thinking in a fight, but as his POV chapters show, he thinks in single sentences and experiences base emotions. Because of this, he cuts through the bullshit and gives Cardinal some interesting things to think about.
* SmugSnake: Confidant that his fighting prowess and incantations will defeat the trio, and tells Cardinal as much as if it is scientific fact. Had Cardinal not just trained with a goddess, he might have been right...
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!! Gods and Angels
[[folder: Gamoriel]]
!! Gamoriel
A higher being with ambiguous intentions; often takes the form of a woman with blood-red hair.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: She seems to be a force for good and for tearing down oppressive hierarchies. Cardinal, narrating from the future, notes that she is "[[FallenAngel fallen]]".
* FallenAngel: "I DIDN'T SIMPLY FALL! THE DESCENT BECAME THAT WHICH CONCIEVED ME!"
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Implied throughout, and confirmed in "The Nature of the Beast" when she reveals her horrifying true self
* TheMentor: To Cardinal, teaching him magic.
* AntiVillain
* BecauseImGoodAtIt: The main reason he's an assassin.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Clokkens don't have concepts of glory, heroism, deceit, or hate like most other races. They simply wish for the survival of their people. This makes attempting to appeal to Zavieeur's "better nature" a fool's errand.
* DeaderThanDead: Ultimately annihilated by the Decay Beam.
* FriendlyEnemy: He regards Cardinal as his friend even as he has him [[JamesBondage tied up]], and the latter remarks that he finds it impossible to be offended.
* GrapplingHookGun: Wields two of them; they suit his reptilian flexibility.
* LizardFolk: The Clokkens.
* SimpleMindedWisdom: A strange variant; Zavieeur is quick-thinking in a fight, but as his POV chapters show, he thinks in single sentences and experiences base emotions. Because of this, he cuts through the bullshit and gives Cardinal some interesting things to think about.
* SmugSnake: Confidant that his fighting prowess and incantations will defeat the trio, and tells Cardinal as much as if it is scientific fact. Had Cardinal not just trained with a goddess, he might have been right...
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!! Gods and Angels
[[folder: Gamoriel]]
!! Gamoriel
A higher being with ambiguous intentions; often takes the form of a woman with blood-red hair.
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* FallenAngel: "I DIDN'T SIMPLY FALL! THE DESCENT BECAME THAT WHICH CONCIEVED ME!"
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Implied throughout, and confirmed in "The Nature of the Beast" when she reveals her horrifying true self
* TheMentor: To Cardinal, teaching him magic.
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!! Yellow Horned Dancers
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The Rot Lord]]
!!Yellow Horned Dancers
Keltnin Savos / Freghk-Lihng-Ghaugh / The Rot Lord
A legendary god of decay who the ancient goblins and later the people of Laskmeer blame for the monsters that plague their land.
!!
A legendary god of decay who the ancient goblins and later the people of Laskmeer blame for the monsters that plague their land.
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* TheSwarm: A swarm of deadly insects.
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!! Mother Leeches
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!! Mother Leeches
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!! Mother Leeches
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AffablyEvil: When Mad finally finds him, he welcomes him inside and offers him tea.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel's (his enemy's) ambiguous nature there might be more to him.
* BigBad
* ChaoticEvil: Only wants to cause death and decay; the life he creates are destructive bugs.
* GreaterScopeVillain
* PestController: Perhaps created the giant bugs that plague the realm.
* ThePigPen
* ShroudedInMyth
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!! Mother Leeches
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel's (his enemy's) ambiguous nature there might be more to him.
* BigBad
* ChaoticEvil: Only wants to cause death and decay; the life he creates are destructive bugs.
* GreaterScopeVillain
* PestController: Perhaps created the giant bugs that plague the realm.
* ThePigPen
* ShroudedInMyth
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[[folder: Valps]]
!! Valps
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!! Valps
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[[folder: Valps]]
Bal'zomest and Balsometh]]
!!Valps
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Bal’zomest
!! Balsometh
!!
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!! Balsometh
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[[folder: Corpse Beetles]]
!! Corpse Beetles
!! Corpse Beetles
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[[folder: Corpse Beetles]]
Brannuc]]
!!Corpse Beetles
Branuuc, the Mighty Armed God
!!
* TheAlcoholic: Said to drink all the time.
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[[folder: Beast of the Gulch]]
!! The Beast of the Gulch
!! The Beast of the Gulch
to:
[[folder: Beast of the Gulch]]
The Almighty]]
!! TheBeast of the GulchAlmighty
!! The
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[[/folder]]
!! The Shadow League
A group of skilled assassins for hire.
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[[folder: Worm]]
See "Main Party" above.
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[[folder: Worm]]
See "Main Party" above.
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[[folder: Zavieeur]]
!! Zavieeur
Vslrischssch Zaiveeur Hrklsshssyk is a [[LizardFolk Clokken]] member of the Shadow Guild, and a pretty personable guy.
!! Zavieeur
Vslrischssch Zaiveeur Hrklsshssyk is a [[LizardFolk Clokken]] member of the Shadow Guild, and a pretty personable guy.
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Vslrischssch Zaiveeur Hrklsshssyk is a [[LizardFolk Clokken]] member
A clan, or "Barrack", of
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* AffablyEvil: A skilled killer-for-hire, but also a great conversationalist who means every word he says.
* AntiVillain
* BecauseImGoodAtIt: The main reason he's an assassin.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Clokkens don't have concepts of glory, heroism, deceit, or hate like most other races. They simply wish for the survival of their people. This makes attempting to appeal to Zavieeur's "better nature" a fool's errand.
* DeaderThanDead: Ultimately is annihilated by the Decay Beam.
* FriendlyEnemy: He regards Cardinal as his friend even as he has him [[JamesBondage tied up]], and the latter remarks that he finds it impossible to be offended.
* GrapplingHookGun: Wields two of them; they suit his reptilian flexibility.
* LizardFolk: The Clokkens.
* SimpleMindedWisdom: A strange variant; Zavieeur is quick-thinking in a fight, but as his POV chapters show, he thinks in single sentences and experiences base emotions. Because of this, he cuts through the bullshit and gives Cardinal some interesting things to think about.
* SmugSnake: Confidant that his fighting prowess and incantations will defeat the trio, and tells Cardinal as much as if it is scientific fact. Had Cardinal not just trained with a goddess, he might have been right...
* AntiVillain
* BecauseImGoodAtIt: The main reason he's an assassin.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Clokkens don't have concepts of glory, heroism, deceit, or hate like most other races. They simply wish for the survival of their people. This makes attempting to appeal to Zavieeur's "better nature" a fool's errand.
* DeaderThanDead: Ultimately is annihilated by the Decay Beam.
* FriendlyEnemy: He regards Cardinal as his friend even as he has him [[JamesBondage tied up]], and the latter remarks that he finds it impossible to be offended.
* GrapplingHookGun: Wields two of them; they suit his reptilian flexibility.
* LizardFolk: The Clokkens.
* SimpleMindedWisdom: A strange variant; Zavieeur is quick-thinking in a fight, but as his POV chapters show, he thinks in single sentences and experiences base emotions. Because of this, he cuts through the bullshit and gives Cardinal some interesting things to think about.
* SmugSnake: Confidant that his fighting prowess and incantations will defeat the trio, and tells Cardinal as much as if it is scientific fact. Had Cardinal not just trained with a goddess, he might have been right...
to:
* AntiVillain
* BecauseImGoodAtIt: The main reason he's an assassin.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Clokkens don't have concepts of glory, heroism, deceit, or hate like most other races. They simply wish for the survival of their people. This makes attempting to appeal to Zavieeur's "better nature" a fool's errand.
* DeaderThanDead: Ultimately is annihilated by the Decay Beam.
* FriendlyEnemy: He regards Cardinal as his friend even as he has him [[JamesBondage tied up]], and the latter remarks that he finds it impossible to be offended.
* GrapplingHookGun: Wields two of them; they suit his reptilian flexibility.
* LizardFolk: The Clokkens.
* SimpleMindedWisdom: A strange variant; Zavieeur is quick-thinking in a fight, but as his POV chapters show, he thinks in single sentences and experiences base emotions. Because of this, he cuts through the bullshit and gives Cardinal some interesting things to think about.
* SmugSnake: Confidant that his fighting prowess and incantations will defeat the trio, and tells Cardinal as much as if it is scientific fact. Had Cardinal not just trained with a goddess, he might have been right...
[[folder: Drathe]]
!! Drathe
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!! Gods, Myths, and Historical Figures
[[folder: Gamoriel]]
!! Gamoriel
A higher being with ambiguous intentions; often takes the form of a woman with blood-red hair.
[[folder: Gamoriel]]
!! Gamoriel
A higher being with ambiguous intentions; often takes the form of a woman with blood-red hair.
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!!
A higher being with ambiguous intentions; often takes the form of a woman with blood-red hair.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: She seems to be a force for good and for tearing down oppressive hierarchies. Cardinal, narrating from the future, notes that she is "[[FallenAngel fallen]]".
* FallenAngel: "I DIDN'T SIMPLY FALL! THE DESCENT BECAME THAT WHICH CONCIEVED ME!"
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Implied throughout, and confirmed in "The Nature of the Beast" when she reveals her horrifying true self
* TheMentor: To Cardinal, teaching him magic.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Rot Lord]]
!! Keltnin Savos / Freghk-Lihng-Ghaugh / The Rot Lord
A legendary god of decay who the ancient goblins and later the people of Laskmeer blame for the monsters that plague their land.
----
* AffablyEvil: When Mad finally finds him, he welcomes him inside and offers him tea.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel's (his enemy's) ambiguous nature there might be more to him.
* BigBad
* ChaoticEvil: Only wants to cause death and decay; the life he creates are destructive bugs.
* GreaterScopeVillain
* PestController: Perhaps created the giant bugs that plague the realm.
* ThePigPen
* ShroudedInMyth
* FallenAngel: "I DIDN'T SIMPLY FALL! THE DESCENT BECAME THAT WHICH CONCIEVED ME!"
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Implied throughout, and confirmed in "The Nature of the Beast" when she reveals her horrifying true self
* TheMentor: To Cardinal, teaching him magic.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Rot Lord]]
!! Keltnin Savos / Freghk-Lihng-Ghaugh / The Rot Lord
A legendary god of decay who the ancient goblins and later the people of Laskmeer blame for the monsters that plague their land.
----
* AffablyEvil: When Mad finally finds him, he welcomes him inside and offers him tea.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel's (his enemy's) ambiguous nature there might be more to him.
* BigBad
* ChaoticEvil: Only wants to cause death and decay; the life he creates are destructive bugs.
* GreaterScopeVillain
* PestController: Perhaps created the giant bugs that plague the realm.
* ThePigPen
* ShroudedInMyth
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* FallenAngel: "I DIDN'T SIMPLY FALL! THE DESCENT BECAME THAT WHICH CONCIEVED ME!"
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Implied throughout, and confirmed in "The Nature of the Beast" when she reveals her horrifying true self
* TheMentor: To Cardinal, teaching him magic.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Rot Lord]]
!! Keltnin Savos / Freghk-Lihng-Ghaugh / The Rot Lord
A legendary god of decay who the ancient goblins and later the people of Laskmeer blame for the monsters that plague their land.
----
* AffablyEvil: When Mad finally finds him, he welcomes him inside and offers him tea.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel's (his enemy's) ambiguous nature there might be more to him.
* BigBad
* ChaoticEvil: Only wants to cause death and decay; the life he creates are destructive bugs.
* GreaterScopeVillain
* PestController: Perhaps created the giant bugs that plague the realm.
* ThePigPen
* ShroudedInMyth
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[[folder: Bal'zomest and Balsometh]]
!! Bal’zomest
!! Balsometh
!! Bal’zomest
!! Balsometh
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[[folder: Bal'zomest and Balsometh]]
Graggi Nucolt]]
!!Bal’zomest
!! Balsometh
Graggi Nucolt
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!!
!! Balsometh
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[[folder: Brannuc]]
!! Branuuc, the Mighty Armed God
!! Branuuc, the Mighty Armed God
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[[folder: Brannuc]]
Volstag]]
!!Branuuc, Volstag
The original leader of theMighty Armed God
Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.
!!
The original leader of the
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* TheAlcoholic: Said to drink all the time.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Almighty]]
!! The Almighty
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* {{God}} - Quite possibly the Abrahamic God, or someone similar; Gamoriel speaks of Him creating both Earth and Laskmeer.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Almighty]]
!! The Almighty
----
* {{God}} - Quite possibly the Abrahamic God, or someone similar; Gamoriel speaks of Him creating both Earth and Laskmeer.
to:
*
[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Almighty]]
!! The Almighty
----
* {{God}} - Quite possibly the Abrahamic God, or someone similar; Gamoriel speaks
* DeadToStartWith: Died years before the events of the series.
* DeathByRacism: See above.
* TragicBigot: Hinted at; he grew up in harsh lands under a treaty to honor foreign customs, and views other races outside humanity as more powerful and therefore more dangerous.
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!! Historical and Legendary Heroes
[[folder: King Aheerum]]
!! King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
----
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
[[folder: King Aheerum]]
!! King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
----
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
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[[folder:
!!
The
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* GiantSpider
* StarterVillain: For an amnesiac waking up in a cave, these things are deadly. If Cardinal were to
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
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[[folder: Prince Alcoor]]
!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
to:
[[folder: Prince Alcoor]]
Zarklago]]
!!Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
The Zarklago
A giant, cat-like beast; the first Cardinal actively fights.
!!
A giant, cat-like beast; the first Cardinal actively fights.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: See his father's entry.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: See his father's entry.
PantheraAwesome
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[[folder: General Turp Glurborn]]
!! General Turp Glurbob
!! General Turp Glurbob
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[[folder: General Turp Glurborn]]
Yellow Horned Dancers]]
!!General Turp Glurbob
Yellow Horned Dancers
!!
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[[/folder]]
!! The Night Star Barrack
A clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters led by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
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[[folder: Drathe]]
!! Drathe
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[[folder:
!!
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[[folder: Memeunta]]
!! Memeunta
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!! Memeunta
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[[folder: Memeunta]]
Valps]]
!!Memeunta
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Valps
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[[folder: Graggi Nucolt]]
!! Graggi Nucolt
!! Graggi Nucolt
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[[folder: Graggi Nucolt]]
Corpse Beetles]]
!!Graggi Nucolt
Corpse Beetles
!!
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: Volstag]]
!! Volstag
The original leader of the Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.
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[[folder:
!! Volstag
The original leader
!! The Beast of the Gulch
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* AssholeVictim: A xenophobe who picked a fight with a [[FantasticRacism wounded orc]] just because of his prejudice, and winded up getting killed.
* DeadToStartWith: Died years before the events of the series.
* DeathByRacism: See above.
* TragicBigot: Hinted at; he grew up in harsh lands under a treaty to honor foreign customs, and views other races outside humanity as more powerful and therefore more dangerous.
[[/folder]]
!! Characters Introduced in "The Tale of the Useless Prince"
[[folder: Captain Lodin]]
!! Captain Lodin
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* DeadToStartWith: Died years before the events of the series.
* DeathByRacism: See above.
* TragicBigot: Hinted at; he grew up in harsh lands under a treaty to honor foreign customs, and views other races outside humanity as more powerful and therefore more dangerous.
[[/folder]]
!! Characters Introduced in "The Tale of the Useless Prince"
[[folder: Captain Lodin]]
!! Captain Lodin
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[[folder: Davel]]
!! Davvel
!! Davvel
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!! Historical and Legendary Heroes
[[folder:Davel]]
King Aheerum]]
!!Davvel
King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
----
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Prince Alcoor]]
!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
[[folder:
!!
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
----
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Prince Alcoor]]
!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: See his father's entry.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: General Turp Glurborn]]
!! General Turp Glurbob
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[[/folder]]
!! Characters Introduced in "The Tale of the Useless Prince"
[[folder: Captain Lodin]]
!! Captain Lodin
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: Davel]]
!! Davvel
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: General Turp Glurborn]]
!! General Turp Glurbob
----
[[/folder]]
!! Characters Introduced in "The Tale of the Useless Prince"
[[folder: Captain Lodin]]
!! Captain Lodin
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: Davel]]
!! Davvel
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* MonsterHunter: His main source of income in Laskmeer.
* MonsterHunter: She becomes one after her exile, joining Mad and Cardinal.
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* ThePowerOfHate: Her sword, Valsrofen, is powered by this.
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* ThePowerOfHate: Her sword, Valsrofen, is powered by this.can only strike down someone/something its user truly hates.
* UnresolvedSexualTension: With Cardinal before they start dating; then later with Worm.
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The competent but unpopular Orcish leader of the Night Star Barrack.
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The competent but unpopular Orcish leader of the Night Star Barrack. Joins the main party after the devastating battle with the Beast of the Gulch.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Exiled from her homeland, briefly found love before it tragically fell apart.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Exiled from her homeland, then briefly found love before it tragically fell apart. Then targeted by who she thought was her best friend to be murdered and usurped as leader.
* MonsterHunter: Her upbringing as an orc made her one of the best in Lasmeer.
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!! The Rot Lord/
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!! Keltnin Savos / Freghk-Lihng-Ghaugh / The Rot Lord/
Lord
A legendary god of decay who the ancient goblins and later the people of Laskmeer blame for the monsters that plague their land.
A legendary god of decay who the ancient goblins and later the people of Laskmeer blame for the monsters that plague their land.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel's status as this might hint there's more to him.
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* AffablyEvil: When Mad finally finds him, he welcomes him inside and offers him tea.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel'sstatus as this (his enemy's) ambiguous nature there might hint there's be more to him.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: Seems to be the GreaterScopeVillain, but Gamoriel's
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Bal'zomest and Balsometh]]
[[folder: Bal'zomest and Balsometh]]
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!! King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to sleigh his traitorous son.
----
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
!! Prince Alcoor
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to sleigh his traitorous son.
----
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
!! Prince Alcoor
to:
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Brannuc]]
!!King Aheerum
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to sleigh his traitorous son.
----
* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
!! Prince Alcoor
Branuuc, the Mighty Armed God
[[folder: Brannuc]]
!!
The King who was given Valsrofen by Bal'zomest, to sleigh his traitorous son.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
!! Prince Alcoor
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!! General Turp Glurbob
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!! Branuuc, the Mighty Armed God
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!! General Turp Glurbob
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!! Branuuc, the Mighty Armed God
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Almighty]]
[[folder: The Almighty]]
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[[folder: The Night Star Barrack]]
A clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters led by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
A clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters led by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
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!! Historical and Legendary Heroes
[[folder: King Aheerum]]
!! King Aheerum
TheNight Star Barrack]]
A clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters ledKing who was given Valsrofen by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".Bal'zomest, to slay his traitorous son.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Prince Alcoor]]
!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
[[folder: King Aheerum]]
!! King Aheerum
The
A clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters led
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: His struggle with his son resembles that of [[Literature/BooksOfSamuel David and Absolom]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Prince Alcoor]]
!! Prince Alcoor, son of King Aheerum
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!! Drathe
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: General Turp Glurborn]]
!!
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[[/folder]]
!! The Night Star Barrack
A clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters led by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
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!! Memeunta
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[[folder: Drathe]]
!!Memeunta
Drathe
!!
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!! Graggi Nucolt
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: Memeunta]]
!!Graggi Nucolt
Memeunta
[[folder: Memeunta]]
!!
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!! Volstag
The original leader of the Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.
The original leader of the Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.
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[[/folder]]
[[folder: Graggi Nucolt]]
!!Volstag
The original leader of the Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.Graggi Nucolt
[[folder: Graggi Nucolt]]
!!
The original leader of the Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.
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* AssholeVictim: A xenophobe who picked a fight with a [[FantasticRacism wounded orc]] just because of his prejudice, and winded up getting killed.
* DeadToStartWith: Died years before the events of the series.
* DeathByRacism: See above.
* TragicBigot: Hinted at; he grew up in harsh lands under a treaty to honor foreign customs, and views other races outside humanity as more powerful and therefore more dangerous.
* DeadToStartWith: Died years before the events of the series.
* DeathByRacism: See above.
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!! Captain Lodin
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!!
The original leader of the Barrack, Drathe's father, who was killed by Trog.
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* AssholeVictim: A xenophobe who picked a fight with a [[FantasticRacism wounded orc]] just because of his prejudice, and winded up getting killed.
* DeadToStartWith: Died years before the events of the series.
* DeathByRacism: See above.
* TragicBigot: Hinted at; he grew up in harsh lands under a treaty to honor foreign customs, and views other races outside humanity as more powerful and therefore more dangerous.
[[/folder]]
!!Davvel
Characters Introduced in "The Tale of the Useless Prince"
[[folder: Captain Lodin]]
!! Captain Lodin
* DeadToStartWith: Died years before the events of the series.
* DeathByRacism: See above.
* TragicBigot: Hinted at; he grew up in harsh lands under a treaty to honor foreign customs, and views other races outside humanity as more powerful and therefore more dangerous.
[[/folder]]
!!
[[folder: Captain Lodin]]
!! Captain Lodin
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!! Davvel
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The characters of Paul Lang's ''Literature/KingdomsDisdain'' series and tie-in novellas.
Spoilers are unmarked.
Spoilers are unmarked.
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The characters of Paul Paul! Lang's ''Literature/KingdomsDisdain'' series and tie-in novellas.
Spoilers '''Except for folder labels, all spoilers are unmarked. UNMARKED.'''
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[[folder: Sareash]]
See "Main Party" above.
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!! Queen Velvet
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!! Lady Jenieer Solth, QueenVelvet]]
!! Queen Velvet
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!! Lady Jenieer Solth, Queen
!! Queen Velvet
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[[folder: Lady Solth]]
!! Lady Jenieer Solth, Queen of Ald
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[[folder: Lady Solth]]
!! Lady Jenieer Solth, Queen of Ald
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[[folder: Thermavorous]]
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* TheMentor: To Sareash growing up.
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[[folder: Malphum]]
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[[folder: Malphum]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Igrislid Dajame]]
[[folder: Igrislid Dajame]]
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!! Queen Velvet
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* MissingMom: Dead at the start of the series.
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[[folder: Queen Velvet]]
!! Queen Velvet
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* MissingMom: Dead at the start of the series.
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[[folder: Filsa the Seer]]
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[[folder: Beasts and Monsters]]
[[folder: Beasts and Monsters]]
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[[folder: Teratietus Loxineegus]]
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* StarterVillain: For an amnesiac waking up in a cave, these things are deadly. If Cardinal were to encounter them by * Book Six, they'd be cannon fodder.
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* StarterVillain: For an amnesiac waking up in a cave, these things are deadly. If Cardinal were to encounter them by * Book Six, in the series' current spot, they'd be cannon fodder.
fodder.
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[[folder: Zarklago]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Zarklago]]
[[/folder]]
[[Yellow Horned Dancers]]
[[Yellow Horned Dancers]]
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* TheSwarm: A swarm of deadly insects.
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[[folder: Mother Leeches]]
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[[folder: Valps]]
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[[folder: Corpse Beetles]]
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!! The Beast of the Gulch
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!! The Shadow
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[[folder: Worm]]
See "Main Party" above.
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* FallenAngel
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith
!! The Rot Lord
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith
!! The Rot Lord
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* FallenAngel
FallenAngel: "I DIDN'T SIMPLY FALL! THE DESCENT BECAME THAT WHICH CONCIEVED ME!"
*AFormYouAreComfortableWith
AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Implied throughout, and confirmed in "The Nature of the Beast" when she reveals her horrifying true self
* TheMentor: To Cardinal, teaching him magic.
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[[folder: The Rot Lord]]
!! The RotLord
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* TheMentor: To Cardinal, teaching him magic.
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[[folder: The Rot Lord]]
!! The Rot
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Edriemelech, known also as "Worm", is an assassin in the League of Shadows and the groups' first one-on-one human enemy. However, as of "The Nature of the Beast", circumstances led to him joining Sareash, Cardinal, and Trog.
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An Elven sorceror and assassin in the League of Shadows and the
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* {{Jerkass}}
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* {{Jerkass}}{{Jerkass}}: He's rude and condescending to enemies and allies alike.
* ThoseTwoBadGuys: With Zavieuur when they were in the League of Assassins.
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! Aldroy
[[folder: Royal Family and Court]]
[[folder: Royal Family and Court]]
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! Aldroy
[[folder:Royal Family and Court]]
Court
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[[folder: King Farmaldas]]
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[[folder: Queen Velvet]]
[[folder: Queen Velvet]]
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[[folder: Lady Solth]]
[[folder: Lady Solth]]
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* AffablyEvil
* AntiVillain: If the story were all from his point of view, it wouldn't be difficult to see him as the good guy. The prequel tie-in, "The Useless Prince", is based around this concept.
* ObfuscatingStupidity
* AntiVillain: If the story were all from his point of view, it wouldn't be difficult to see him as the good guy. The prequel tie-in, "The Useless Prince", is based around this concept.
* ObfuscatingStupidity
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* AffablyEvil
AffablyEvil: Genuinely charming and witty, even while leading a coup to kill the royals (which includes women and children).
* AntiVillain: If the story were all from his point of view, it wouldn't be difficult to see him as the good guy. The prequel tie-in, "The Useless Prince", is based around this concept. His methods are still extreme and cruel, but at least in that story, the monarchs he's facing are ''worse''.
*ObfuscatingStupidity BigBad: Leading the coup that sends Sareash on the run.
* ADayInTheLimelight: ''The Tale of the Useless Prince'' is all about his journey from an idle, hedonistic Governor's son to a violent revolutionary.
* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: As the son of a Governor, he had privileges but no purpose. He sets out on a boat to nowhere in particular and eventually embraces the goal of overthrowing the rich and monarchs.
* MightyWhitey: While race relations aren't the same in Laskmeer as in our realm, his story in ''Useless Prince'' still fits; the wealthy son of a nobleman shows up to a group of poor, oppressed revolutionaries (mostly made up of [[FantasticRacism non-human races]]), and within a few days leads them to victory.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: As a member of the council.
* AntiVillain: If the story were all from his point of view, it wouldn't be difficult to see him as the good guy. The prequel tie-in, "The Useless Prince", is based around this concept. His methods are still extreme and cruel, but at least in that story, the monarchs he's facing are ''worse''.
*
* ADayInTheLimelight: ''The Tale of the Useless Prince'' is all about his journey from an idle, hedonistic Governor's son to a violent revolutionary.
* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: As the son of a Governor, he had privileges but no purpose. He sets out on a boat to nowhere in particular and eventually embraces the goal of overthrowing the rich and monarchs.
* MightyWhitey: While race relations aren't the same in Laskmeer as in our realm, his story in ''Useless Prince'' still fits; the wealthy son of a nobleman shows up to a group of poor, oppressed revolutionaries (mostly made up of [[FantasticRacism non-human races]]), and within a few days leads them to victory.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: As a member of the council.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist
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* WellIntentionedExtremist
WellIntentionedExtremist: He's a radical revolutionary seeking to end monarchies, for the good of the people.
* WouldHurtAChild: Sareash is technically nineteen, but just barely grown and he's more than willing to have her killed.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Sareash is technically nineteen, but just barely grown and he's more than willing to have her killed.
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!Main Characters
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* TokenWhite: The only fair-skinned member of the main Party.
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* TokenWhite: The only fair-skinned member of the main Party.initial Main Three.
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! Aldroy
[[folder: Royal Family and Court]]
!! King Farmaldas of Aldroy
The King of Aldroy, regarded by most of the commoners as a loon because of his belief in The Rot Lord.
[[folder: Royal Family and Court]]
!! King Farmaldas of Aldroy
The King of Aldroy, regarded by most of the commoners as a loon because of his belief in The Rot Lord.
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Edriemelech, known also as "Worm", is an assassin in the League of Shadows and
!! King Farmaldas
The King of Aldroy, regarded by most
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* FantasyForbiddingFather: Although not so much due to wanting a specific life for his kid, but rather an (understandable) fear that his wreckless daughter will get herself killed trying to be a fighter.
* ProperlyParanoid: Prophecy or not, the way Sareash swings a sword at the beginning of "Ten Thousand Teeth" makes his worry about her trying to slay the Rot Lord understandable.
* UpperclassTwit: Regardless on whether or not the prophecies he believes are true, they distract him from conspiracies right under his nose and the plight of his people.
!! Queen Velvet
* ProperlyParanoid: Prophecy or not, the way Sareash swings a sword at the beginning of "Ten Thousand Teeth" makes his worry about her trying to slay the Rot Lord understandable.
* UpperclassTwit: Regardless on whether or not the prophecies he believes are true, they distract him from conspiracies right under his nose and the plight of his people.
!! Queen Velvet
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* FantasyForbiddingFather: Although DefeatMeansFriendship: Sareash spares his life, and though it's not so much due to wanting a specific life for his kid, but rather an (understandable) fear that his wreckless daughter will get herself killed trying to be a fighter.overnight switch, he eventually forms an alliance with her.
*ProperlyParanoid: Prophecy or not, EvilIsPetty: He doesn't just want to kill people; he wants to humiliate them for the way Sareash swings a sword at the beginning of "Ten Thousand Teeth" makes his worry about her trying to slay the Rot Lord understandable.slightest provacations.
*UpperclassTwit: Regardless FantasticRacism: Looks down on whether or not humans.
* FieryRedhead
* HeelFaceTurn: In "The Nature of theprophecies Beast", he's so put-off by Drathe summoning the Beast of the Gulch that he believes are true, they distract him sides with the heroes against it, and eventually joins them for real.
* HiddenDepths: In "Corpse Beetle", Sareash notes he looks serene when he is near death, and he comments, "You people took everything fromconspiracies right under me, and now you've come to claim my life." What this means is yet to be seen, but from the sound of it either humans or the Royals in particular may have caused his nose and StartOfDarkness.
* {{Jerkass}}
* NobleDemon: Cruel as he is, he has a code.
* SmugSnake: A lot more confident in his abilities than he should me.
* Token White: When he joins theplight main party, he's the only fair-skinned member since Mad Crossbones left weeks before.
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[[folder: Trog]]
!! Trog
The competent but unpopular Orcish leader ofhis people.
!! Queen Velvet
the Night Star Barrack.
*
*
* FieryRedhead
* HeelFaceTurn: In "The Nature of the
* HiddenDepths: In "Corpse Beetle", Sareash notes he looks serene when he is near death, and he comments, "You people took everything from
* {{Jerkass}}
* NobleDemon: Cruel as he is, he has a code.
* SmugSnake: A lot more confident in his abilities than he should me.
* Token White: When he joins the
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!! Trog
The competent but unpopular Orcish leader of
!! Queen Velvet
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* MissingMom: Dead at the start of the series.
!! Lady Jenieer Solth, Queen of Ald
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*
* DeathSeeker: Her desire to die is constantly at battle with her natural will to live.
* GreenEyedMonster: Due to her insecurity and self-loathing, she readily believed her husband would leave her for somebody else. It even turns out a lot like the [[Theatre/{{Othello}} trope namer]].
* NoSocialSkills: Despite being a competent leader, she's also gruff and un-charasmatic; making her barrack ripe for mutineers.
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! Aldroy
[[folder: Royal Family and Court]]
!!
The King of Aldroy, regarded by most of the commoners as a loon because of his belief in The Rot Lord.
* FantasyForbiddingFather: Although not so much due to wanting a specific life for his kid, but rather an (understandable) fear that his wreckless daughter will get herself killed trying to be a fighter.
* ProperlyParanoid: Prophecy or not, the way Sareash swings a sword at the beginning of "Ten Thousand Teeth" makes his worry about her trying to slay the Rot Lord understandable.
* UpperclassTwit: Regardless on whether or not the prophecies he believes are true, they distract him from conspiracies right under his nose and the plight of his people.
!! Queen Velvet
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* MissingMom: Dead at the start of the series.
!! Lady Jenieer Solth, Queen of Ald
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* ProperlyParanoid: Prophecy or not, the way Sareash swings a sword at the beginning of "Ten Thousand Teeth" makes his worry about her trying to slay the Rot Lord understandable.
* UpperclassTwit: Regardless on whether or not the prophecies he believes are true, they distract him from conspiracies right under his nose and the plight of his people.
!! Queen Velvet
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* MissingMom: Dead at the start of the series.
!! Lady Jenieer Solth, Queen of Ald
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!!
Vslrischssch Zaiveeur Hrklsshssyk is a [[LizardFolk Clokken]] member of the Shadow Guild, and a pretty personable guy.
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* EvilIsPetty
* FantasticRacism: Looks down on humans.
* FieryRedhead
* HiddenDepths: In "Corpse Beetle", Sareash notes he looks serene when he is near death, and he comments, "You people took everything from me, and now you've come to claim my life." What this means is yet to be seen, but from the sound of it either humans or the Royals in particular may have caused his StartOfDarkness.
* {{Jerkass}}
* SmugSnake
!! Zavieeur
Vslrischssch Zaiveeur Hrklsshssyk is a [[LizardFolk Clokken]] member of the Shadow Guild, and a pretty personable guy.
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* FantasticRacism: Looks down on humans.
* FieryRedhead
* HiddenDepths: In "Corpse Beetle", Sareash notes he looks serene when he is near death, and he comments, "You people took everything from me, and now you've come to claim my life." What this means is yet to be seen, but from the sound of it either humans or the Royals in particular may have caused his StartOfDarkness.
* {{Jerkass}}
* SmugSnake
!! Zavieeur
Vslrischssch Zaiveeur Hrklsshssyk is a [[LizardFolk Clokken]] member of the Shadow Guild, and a pretty personable guy.
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[[folder: Trog's Barrak]]
A clan of Beast Hunters that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
A clan of Beast Hunters that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
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[[folder: Trog's Barrak]]
The Night Star Barrack]]
Aclan clan, or "Barrack", of Beast Hunters led by Trog that Cardinal and Sareash join in "Sick Butterfly".
A
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!! Trog
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!! Trog
Drathe
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Exiled from her homeland, briefly found love before it tragically fell apart.
* DeathSeeker: Her desire to die is constantly at battle with her natural will to live.
* NoSocialSkills: Despite being a competent leader, she's also gruff and un-charasmatic; making her barrack ripe for mutineers.
!! Drathe
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* DeathSeeker: Her desire to die is constantly at battle with her natural will to live.
* NoSocialSkills: Despite being a competent leader, she's also gruff and un-charasmatic; making her barrack ripe for mutineers.
!! Drathe
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