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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Golden Yellow (Star), Flame Red (Willpower), Light Purple (Dusk), Dark Blue (Sorcerer), Manila Orange (Crow), and Lime Green (Servo).
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Golden Yellow (Star), Flame Red (Willpower), Light Purple (Dusk), Dark Blue (Sorcerer), (Sorcerer), Manila Orange (Crow), and Lime Green (Servo).
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* DeadpanSnarker: Goes through a DeconReconSwitch involving the trope.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Goes through a DeconReconSwitch involving the trope.So much of one that she'll eventually get ''[[ThePollyanna Rio]]'' into doing it sometimes.
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* TheSnarkKnight: [[{{Deconstructed}} She acts the way she does mostly because of the fear of facing her shortcomings.]]
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* TheSnarkKnight: [[{{Deconstructed}} She acts the way she does mostly because of the fear of facing Using sarcasm helps keep her shortcomings.]]from worrying about her flaws.
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* DeadpanSnarker: As the series progresses; Roxy's style of humor is a bit contagious to him.
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* DeadpanSnarker: As the series progresses; Roxy's style of humor [[GotMeDoingIt is a bit contagious to him.him]].
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Raised by a family of performing acrobats, Merle is a prepubescent youth whom Leila babysat as a toddler. Soft spoken, well mannered, and carefree, she prefers to smile in the face of adversity. As the non-Kinetic hero Crow, she is highly agile and hits as hard as she does fast.
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Averted, she worked herself [[strike: into the hospital]] ''to near death '''several times''''' to get stronger.
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* GenkiGirl
* HardWorkHardlyWorks:Averted, Averted; she worked often works herself [[strike: into the hospital]] ''to near death '''several times''''' hospital, or even ''near death'', to get stronger.
* HardWorkHardlyWorks:
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* ParentalAbandonment
* PluckyGirl: She promised herself she would get through her parents' deaths.
* PluckyGirl: She promised herself she would get through her parents' deaths.
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* ParentalAbandonment
* PluckyGirl: She promised herself she would get through her parents' deaths.MyParentsAreDead: [[PluckyGirl But she's making the best of it.]]
* PluckyGirl: She promised herself she would get through her parents' deaths.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Golden Yellow (Star), Flame Red (Willpower), Light Purple (Dusk), Dark Blue (Sorcerer), (Sorcerer), Manila Orange (Crow), and Lime Green (Servo).
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* HeroicWillpower: Literally his superpower.
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* HeroicWillpower: Literally his superpower.HeroicWillpower
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A kid about Merle's age, Tom (as many call him) is a Kinetic with super intelligence along with the ability of sound and vibrations. After a tragic accident leaving him in a wheelchair, he was left bitter and envious. Eventually he meets with Merle and, upon learning her secret identity, is forced against his will by Leila to join them and keep the team secret.
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A kid about Merle's age, Tom (as many call him) is a Kinetic with super intelligence along with the ability of sound and vibrations. After a tragic accident leaving him in a wheelchair, he was left bitter and envious. Eventually he meets with Merle and, upon learning her secret identity, is forced against his will by Leila to join them and keep the team secret.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Golden Yellow (Star), Flame Red (Willpower), Light Purple (Dusk), Dark Blue (Sorcerer), Manila Orange (Crow), and Lime Green (Servo).
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* EmbarrassingMiddleName
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* EmbarrassingMiddleNameEmbarrassingMiddleName: [[spoiler: Lindsay.]]
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Yellow (Star), Red (Willpower), Purple (Dusk), Blue (Sorcerer), Orange (Crow), and Green (Servo).
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** Tom: Mother is an Israeli-American Jew; Father is a German Texan.
** Tom: Mother is an Israeli-American Jew; Father is a German Texan.
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!!Star Lass (Roxanne Kaizen)
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A kid about Merle's age, Tom (as many call him) is a Kinetic with super intelligence along with the ability of sound and vibrations. After a tragic accident leaving him in a wheelchair, he was left bitter and envious. Eventually he meets with Merle and, upon learning her secret identity, is forced against his will by Leila to join them and keep the team secret.
* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Sky Blue (Astra), Crimson (Lucy), Pale Green (Ashley), Brown (Luther), Vivid Violet (Caitlin), and Silver (N-Droid).
* {{Evil Counterpart}}s: A bit rough, but...
** Anti Lass to Star Lass.
** Capt. Latex to Willpower.
** Dusk Woman to Biocide.
** Dragon to Necromancer.
** Killspot to Crow.
** N-Droid to Sonic Servo.
* {{Evil Counterpart}}s: A bit rough, but...
** Anti Lass to Star Lass.
** Capt. Latex to Willpower.
** Dusk Woman to Biocide.
** Dragon to Necromancer.
** Killspot to Crow.
** N-Droid to Sonic Servo.
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!!Anti Lass (Astra Null, real name [[spoiler:Sable Kaizen]])
A Celestian who came to Earth to find the Kaizens. Once she meets Roxy, she introduces herself and tells her story of when her cruel family left her behind some years ago. She later takes over OzCo and reinvigorates it into NullCorp. [[spoiler: In truth, she is Roxy's believed-to-be-dead younger sister, who was forced to survive by learning how to become a no-nonsense entrepreneur/mogul and resorting to immoral actions.]]
A Celestian who came to Earth to find the Kaizens. Once she meets Roxy, she introduces herself and tells her story of when her cruel family left her behind some years ago. She later takes over OzCo and reinvigorates it into NullCorp. [[spoiler: In truth, she is Roxy's believed-to-be-dead younger sister, who was forced to survive by learning how to become a no-nonsense entrepreneur/mogul and resorting to immoral actions.]]
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* BigBad: For parts 1 and 2.
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* BigBad: For parts 1 and 2.The first.
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!!Luther Pen Dragon (pronounced Dray-gahn)
* BreathWeapon: Depending on what type of food he eats:
** Spicy: PlayingWithFire
** Minty: AnIcePerson
** Sweet: NonElemental
** Liquid: MakingASplash
** Sour: ShockAndAwe
** Bitter: ExtraOreDinary
** Salty: DishingOutDirt
* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Cares deeply for Anti Lass.
* TheDragon: Taken as figuratively and literally as possible.
* GeniusBruiser
* LargeAndInCharge: Subverted when it's learned he takes orders from Anti Lass.
* LawfulEvil
* LightningBruiser: His dragon form.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent
* ScaledUp
* UndyingLoyalty: Only to Anti Lass.
!!Captain Latex (Lucy [=DeMonk=])
* BreathWeapon: Depending on what type of food he eats:
** Spicy: PlayingWithFire
** Minty: AnIcePerson
** Sweet: NonElemental
** Liquid: MakingASplash
** Sour: ShockAndAwe
** Bitter: ExtraOreDinary
** Salty: DishingOutDirt
* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Cares deeply for Anti Lass.
* TheDragon: Taken as figuratively and literally as possible.
* GeniusBruiser
* LargeAndInCharge: Subverted when it's learned he takes orders from Anti Lass.
* LawfulEvil
* LightningBruiser: His dragon form.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent
* ScaledUp
* UndyingLoyalty: Only to Anti Lass.
!!Captain Latex (Lucy [=DeMonk=])
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* BreathWeapon: Depending on what type of food he eats:
** Spicy: PlayingWithFire
** Minty: AnIcePerson
** Sweet: NonElemental
** Liquid: MakingASplash
** Sour: ShockAndAwe
** Bitter: ExtraOreDinary
** Salty: DishingOutDirt
* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Cares deeply for Anti Lass.
* TheDragon: Taken as figuratively and literally as possible.
* GeniusBruiser
* LargeAndInCharge: Subverted when it's learned he takes orders from Anti Lass.
* LawfulEvil
* LightningBruiser: His dragon form.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent
* ScaledUp
* UndyingLoyalty: Only to Anti Lass.
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!!Killspot (Caitlin Cassidy)
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* BreathWeapon: Depending on what type of food he eats:
** Spicy: PlayingWithFire
** Minty: AnIcePerson
** Sweet: NonElemental
** Liquid: MakingASplash
** Sour: ShockAndAwe
** Bitter: ExtraOreDinary
** Salty: DishingOutDirt
* BruiserWithASoftCenter: Cares deeply for Anti Lass.
* TheDragon: Taken as figuratively and literally as possible.
* GeniusBruiser
* LargeAndInCharge: Subverted when it's learned he takes orders from Anti Lass.
* LawfulEvil
* LightningBruiser: His dragon form.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent
* ScaledUp
* UndyingLoyalty: Only to Anti Lass.
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!!N-Droid
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* OlderThanTheyLook: She's 24 in her debut chapter (26 as of Spring 2011) yet looks no older than 18.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite appearing to be in her early 20s, she's two years younger than Roxy.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite appearing to be in her early 20s, she's two almost 2 years younger than Roxy.
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A ruthless CorruptCorporateExecutive who, for reasons unknown, has found pleasure in causing pain and misery while profiting from it. Leila, once a friend from high school, looked up to her until she showed her true colors.
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A ruthless CorruptCorporateExecutive who, for reasons unknown, has found pleasure in causing pain and misery while profiting from it. Leila, who once a friend from high school, looked up to her until she showed while in high school, sees her true colors.
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* GoodParents: Pretty much all of the main characters' parents are good people, but a few are rather... eccentric. However, it's also deconstructed in that about half of them are dead.
* InformedLoner: While she feels comfort in not being surrounded by people, she also doesn't want to be ''entirely'' friendless.
* LonersAreFreaks: Some people she met at high school often asked if she was this kind of person. She may subconsciously believe this, which is why she wants at least one person to consider her a friend.
* SociallyAwkwardHero
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* BookDumb: In a handful of ways, he's actually smarter than Roxy. School work isn't one of them.
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* BookDumb: In a handful of ways, he's he might actually be smarter than Roxy. School work isn't one of them.
* CoolLoser: Though left out as a kid, after entering high school, he made friends easily; Aware of Roxy's plight however, he didn't want to be completely associated with them and make her feel alone again.
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* MadArtist: Not evil, though.
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* MoralityPet: Responsible for making Roxy feel more accepting.
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* ThePollyanna: A male example.
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* ThePollyanna: ObfuscatingStupidity: While he's not very smart, he instinctually picks up on a few things others don't. A male example.major example is that he actually understands Roxy more than he understands himself, but he doesn't want her to know; he's worried that she'll dread him for knowing her more than herself.
* ThePollyanna
* ThePollyanna
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* KnightInSourArmor
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** {{Dandere}}
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* {{Flight}}
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* {{Flight}}FlyingBrick
** {{Flight}}
** SuperStrength
** ThePowerOfTheSun[=/=]LightTheWay
** {{Flight}}
** SuperStrength
** ThePowerOfTheSun[=/=]LightTheWay
* HairOfGold: [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Deep down inside.]]
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* SuperStrength
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* MasterOfIllusion
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The main character of the series, Roxy (as she's called) starts the series having just graduated from high school. Super-strong, super-sharp, and super-snarky, she dealt with the stupidity of others on her own for years. That is until Rio came along; but his family soon moved away and she ended up becoming an antisocial IceQueen until he returned at the start of her senior year. However, despite her cold exterior, she has a dormant desire to help others in need; as Star Lass, she does just that.
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The main character of the series, Roxy (as she's called) starts the series having just graduated from high school. Super-strong, super-sharp, and super-snarky, she dealt with the stupidity of others on her own for years. That is until Rio came along; but his family soon moved away before he got through to her and she still ended up becoming an antisocial IceQueen until he returned at the start of her senior year. However, despite her mostly cold exterior, she has a dormant desire to help others in need; as Star Lass, she does just that.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Goes through a DeconReconSwitch with it.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Goes through a DeconReconSwitch with it.involving the trope.
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* HeroicWillpower: He amplifies his teammates' powers the more he takes damage while not giving up.
* InvisibleMan
* InvisibleMan
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* HeroicWillpower: He amplifies Literally his teammates' powers the more he takes damage while not giving up.
* InvisibleMansuperpower.
* InvisibleMan
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* ThePollyanna: A male example.
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* ThePollyanna: A male example.
example.
* SuperEmpowering: Type 3.
* SuperEmpowering: Type 3.
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* VocalEvolution: If the series ever gets to have voices (doubtful). She initially speaks in a low, monotone voice not unlike {{Daria}}'s; About halfway through, however, her voice gives more signs of emotion in certain situations.
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* VocalEvolution: If the series ever gets to have voices (doubtful). She initially speaks in a low, monotone voice not unlike {{Daria}}'s; About halfway through, however, her voice gives becomes slightly higher and sounds more signs of emotion in certain situations.
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* AmbiguouslyAutistic
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* DeadpanSnarker
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* DeadpanSnarkerDeadpanSnarker: Goes through a DeconReconSwitch with it.
* DefrostingIceQueen
* DyingAlone: Her greatest fear, though she would never admit it.
* DefrostingIceQueen
* DyingAlone: Her greatest fear, though she would never admit it.
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* IJustWantToHaveFriends
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* LoveHurts: Denies her feelings for Rio; she's afraid that if she admits to loving him, something bad will happen.
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* TheSnarkKnight: Blames herself for not having enough courage to befriend others outside of the internet (excluding Rio).
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* TheSnarkKnight: Blames herself for not having enough courage to befriend others outside [[{{Deconstructed}} She acts the way she does mostly because of the internet (excluding Rio).fear of facing her shortcomings.]]
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* VocalEvolution: If the series ever gets to have voices (doubtful). She initially speaks in a low, monotone voice not unlike {{Daria}}'s; About halfway through, however, her voice gives more signs of emotion in certain situations.
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A ruthless CorruptCorporateExecutive who, for reasons unknown, has found pleasure in causing pain and misery while profiting from it.
it. Leila, once a friend from high school, looked up to her until she showed her true colors.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Crossed it somewhere between polluting the town because it cost money to invest in anti-pollutant equipment and ordering a hit on the Dawsons because she held a grudge on the father for not marrying her.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Crossed it somewhere between polluting the town because it cost money taking advantage of her former friend to invest in anti-pollutant equipment expand her company and ordering a hit on the Dawsons because she held a grudge on the father for not marrying her.
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* CompleteMonster: Has all of Anti Lass' bastardry but none of her magnificence. She even ordered Kill Spot to assassinate Merle along with her parents and didn't pay her for anything less; eventually, she reveals that anyone who gets in her way, even a child, would be killed. Even if they just provoke her.
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* CompleteMonster: Has all of Anti Lass' bastardry but none of her magnificence. She even ordered Kill Spot to assassinate Merle along with her parents and didn't pay her for anything less; eventually, she reveals that anyone who gets in her way, even a child, would be killed. Even if they just provoke her.CompleteMonster -> EvillyAffable: As the series progresses.
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!!Sorcerer (Scott Macbeth)
Leila's friend, whose parents took her in after Leila's were killed, Scott was intrigued by magic ever since he could remember, which was due to his then-dormant Kinetic power of magic. Having left after high school to train, he meets up with Leila 8 years later and takes up her offer on becoming a paranormal detective for Leila's side project of finding more on her parent's killers. As the Sorcerer, he deals with the arcane oddities that lurk within the city.
Leila's friend, whose parents took her in after Leila's were killed, Scott was intrigued by magic ever since he could remember, which was due to his then-dormant Kinetic power of magic. Having left after high school to train, he meets up with Leila 8 years later and takes up her offer on becoming a paranormal detective for Leila's side project of finding more on her parent's killers. As the Sorcerer, he deals with the arcane oddities that lurk within the city.
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Leila's friend, whose parents took her in after Leila's were killed, Scott was intrigued by magic ever since he could remember, which was due to his then-dormant Kinetic power of magic. Having left after high school to train, he meets up with Leila 8 years later and takes up her offer on becoming a paranormal detective for Leila's side project of finding more on her parent's killers. As the
* {{Expy}}: Of [[TheVentureBros Dr. Orpheus]] (ability wise) and [[TeamFortress2 the Demoman]] (ethnically wise; [[ItsBeenDone unintentionally at first]], but WordOfGod [[SureWhyNot decided to keep it]]).
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* TheRedMage: Skilled at healing and attack magic; however, he’s unable to attack while casting magic…
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* {{Necromancer}}: [[ShapedLikeItself Naturally.]]
* TheRedMage: Skilled at healing and attack magic; however, he’s unable to attack whilecasting magic…casting, also leaving him a...
* TheRedMage: Skilled at healing and attack magic; however, he’s unable to attack while
* SoulBrotha: Averted, [[{{Pun}} despite how appropriate it would be]].
* SoulPower
* SoulPower
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* Expy: To {{Deadpool}}, sans the fourth wall breaking.
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: To {{Deadpool}}, sans the fourth wall breaking.
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* RebelliousSpirit
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* JerkassFacade -> NoSocialSkills: Acts bitter toward others to cover her antisocial behavior.
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* BookDumb: In many ways, he's smarter than Roxy. School work isn't one of them.
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* BookDumb: In many a handful of ways, he's actually smarter than Roxy. School work isn't one of them.
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* BrilliantButLazy: Inverted; he's not very smart, but makes up for it by being a hard worker.
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* BrilliantButLazy: Inverted; he's Inverted. He's not very smart, but makes up for it by being a hard worker.
* DeadpanSnarker: As the series progresses; Roxy's style of humor is a bit contagious to him.
* FragileSpeedster: Though not a superpower, he has amazing speed. The same cannot be said for his strength...
** GlassCannon: ...Unless his will is strong enough. However, it's mostly his offense that goes up; his defense, less so.
** GlassCannon: ...Unless his will is strong enough. However, it's mostly his offense that goes up; his defense, less so.
* PerkyGoth: Though she wears various clothes for different occasions, she maintains this as her causal wear.
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* ArbitrarySkepticismArbitrarySkepticism: Brushes briefly with this, unsure if things like ghosts and aliens exist. Leila [[LampshadeHanging shows a brief savvy side just to point out the flaw in his belief]].
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** Roxy: Mother is a Celestian; father is Japanese.
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** Roxy: Mother is a Celestian; Celestian (alien); father is Japanese.
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The main character of the series, Roxy (as she's called) starts the series having just graduated from high school. Super-strong, super-sharp, and super-snarky, she dealt with the stupidity of others on her own for years and ended up alienating all her friends, leaving her an antisocial IceQueen. However, despite her cold exterior, she has a dormant desire to help others in need; as Star Lass, she does just that.
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The main character of the series, Roxy (as she's called) starts the series having just graduated from high school. Super-strong, super-sharp, and super-snarky, she dealt with the stupidity of others on her own for years years. That is until Rio came along; but his family soon moved away and she ended up alienating all her friends, leaving her becoming an antisocial IceQueen.IceQueen until he returned at the start of her senior year. However, despite her cold exterior, she has a dormant desire to help others in need; as Star Lass, she does just that.
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Roxy's best, and pretty much only, friend. Rio (as he goes by) has a near parallel personality to her, ostracized not by choice, but rather due to his [[{{Determinator}} scrappy attitude]], eccentric quirkiness, and odd habits. Despite that, he and Roxy have a strong kinship as he was the first person she befriended on Earth. After moving away before she entered high school and not coming back until the start of her senior year, Rio promised himself he would do everything he could to stop her from being alone again. As the superhero Willpower, he differs from other Kinetics by not using visible strength, [[TheHeart but strength from within his heart]].
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Roxy's best, and pretty much only, friend. Rio (as he goes by) has a near parallel personality to her, ostracized not by choice, but rather due to his [[{{Determinator}} scrappy attitude]], eccentric quirkiness, and odd habits. Despite that, he and Roxy have a strong kinship as he was the first person she befriended on Earth. After moving away before she entered high school and not coming back until the start of her senior year, back, Rio promised himself he would do everything he could to stop her from being alone again. As the superhero Willpower, he differs from other Kinetics by not using visible strength, [[TheHeart but strength from within his heart]].
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Averted, she worked herself [[strike: into the hospital]] ''to near death '''several times''''' to get her CharlesAtlasSuperpower.
* HugeSchoolgirl: Between two arcs, she grows a whole foot from her original 4'3".
* HugeSchoolgirl: Between two arcs, she grows a whole foot from her original 4'3".
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Averted, she worked herself [[strike: into the hospital]] ''to near death '''several times''''' to get her CharlesAtlasSuperpower.
* HugeSchoolgirl: Between two arcs, she grows a whole foot from her original 4'3".stronger.
* HugeSchoolgirl: Between two arcs, she grows a whole foot from her original 4'3".
* LightningBruiser
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* PintsizedPowerhouse: Subverted, as she’s 5'3 after her growth spurt.
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: In one of the arcs, when she started going through puberty.
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* YouFightLikeACow
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Yellow (Star), Purple (Dusk), Red (Willpower), Blue (Sorcerer), Green (Servo), and Orange (Crow)
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Leila is Choleric, Scott is Melancholic, Merle is Sanguine, and Tom is Phlegmatic
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Leila is Choleric, Scott is Melancholic, Merle is Sanguine, and Tom is Phlegmatic
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Yellow (Star), Purple (Dusk), Red (Willpower), Purple (Dusk), Blue (Sorcerer), Green (Servo), and Orange (Crow)
(Crow), and Green (Servo).
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Leila is Choleric, Scott is Melancholic, Merle is Sanguine, and Tom isPhlegmaticPhlegmatic.
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Leila is Choleric, Scott is Melancholic, Merle is Sanguine, and Tom is
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Yellow (Star), Purple (Dusk), Red (Willpower), Blue (Sorcerer), Green (Servo), and Orange (Crow)
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Leila is Choleric, Scott is Melancholic, Merle is Sanguine, and Tom is Phlegmatic
* GoodParents: Pretty much all of the main characters' parents are good people, but a few are rather... eccentric. However, it's also deconstructed in that about half of them are dead.
* MultinationalTeam: Exaggerated.
** Roxy: Mother is a Celestian; father is Japanese.
** Rio: Mother is Puerto Rican; father was Brazilian-American.
** Tom: Mother is an Israeli-American Jew; Father is a German Texan.
** Leila: Mother was an Arab American; Father was an Egyptian American.
** Scott: Mother is African-Canadian; Father is a Mulatto from Scotland.
** Merle: Mother was Indian-American; Father was a Native American.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Inverted with Roxy and Rio; played straight with Leila and Scott.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Roxy/Merle and Leila
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Leila is Choleric, Scott is Melancholic, Merle is Sanguine, and Tom is Phlegmatic
* GoodParents: Pretty much all of the main characters' parents are good people, but a few are rather... eccentric. However, it's also deconstructed in that about half of them are dead.
* MultinationalTeam: Exaggerated.
** Roxy: Mother is a Celestian; father is Japanese.
** Rio: Mother is Puerto Rican; father was Brazilian-American.
** Tom: Mother is an Israeli-American Jew; Father is a German Texan.
** Leila: Mother was an Arab American; Father was an Egyptian American.
** Scott: Mother is African-Canadian; Father is a Mulatto from Scotland.
** Merle: Mother was Indian-American; Father was a Native American.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Inverted with Roxy and Rio; played straight with Leila and Scott.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Roxy/Merle and Leila
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Roxy's best (and pretty much only) friend. Rio (as he goes by) has a near parallel personality to her, ostracized not by choice, but rather due to his [[{{Determinator}} scrappy attitude]], eccentric quirk, and odd habits. Despite that, he and Roxy have a strong kinship as he was the first person she befriended on Earth. After moving back during her senior year, Rio promised himself he would do everything he could to stop her from being alone again. As the superhero Willpower, he differs from other kinetic not by using visible strength, [[TheHeart but strength from within his heart]].
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Roxy's best (and best, and pretty much only) only, friend. Rio (as he goes by) has a near parallel personality to her, ostracized not by choice, but rather due to his [[{{Determinator}} scrappy attitude]], eccentric quirk, quirkiness, and odd habits. Despite that, he and Roxy have a strong kinship as he was the first person she befriended on Earth. After moving away before she entered high school and not coming back during until the start of her senior year, Rio promised himself he would do everything he could to stop her from being alone again. As the superhero Willpower, he differs from other kinetic Kinetics by not by using visible strength, [[TheHeart but strength from within his heart]].
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Leila's friend, whose parents took her in after Leila's were killed, Scott was intrigued by magic ever since he could remember, which was due to his then-dormant kinetic power of magic. Having left after high school to train, he meets up with Leila 8 years later and takes up her offer on becoming a paranormal detective for Leila's side project of finding more on her parent's killers. As the Sorcerer, he deals with the arcane oddities that lurk within the city.
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Leila's friend, whose parents took her in after Leila's were killed, Scott was intrigued by magic ever since he could remember, which was due to his then-dormant kinetic Kinetic power of magic. Having left after high school to train, he meets up with Leila 8 years later and takes up her offer on becoming a paranormal detective for Leila's side project of finding more on her parent's killers. As the Sorcerer, he deals with the arcane oddities that lurk within the city.
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* MasterOfIllusions
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* MasterOfIllusionsMasterOfIllusion
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* GirlFriday: A male example.
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* DragonRider: Often flies on Dragoon in his dragon form.
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* FriendToAllChildren: Most of her crime made money she spends to benefit children.
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* {{Teleportation}}
* MadWithPower
* MadWithPower
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* NobleDemon
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite appearing to be in her early 20s, she's the same age as Roxy.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite appearing to be in her early 20s, she's the same age as two years younger than Roxy.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Wanted revenge for the death of Tempus, but unknowingly made a deal with a cosmic demon.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Wanted revenge for the death of Tempus, her beloved, but unknowingly made a deal with a cosmic demon.
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* NonActionGuy: To an extent; his HeroicWillpower
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* NonActionGuy: To an extent; his HeroicWillpower extent.
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* AuthorAvatar: Her general personality is similar to the creators.
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* AuthorAvatar: Her general personality is similar to the creators.creator's.