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* PoorCommunicationKills: Jupiter used to fake being mute because she believed this would make her elder sister focus her abuse on her and not Summanus. Even after revealing she can talk, Jupiter never tells Summanus how she really feels about her and in the present time ends up senselessly trying to murder her, so Yukito sees Jupiter as nothing more than a hysterical woman that he must kill.
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* MrFanservice: Before being turned into a man, Bertrand was just as attractive as a man as their AttractiveBentGender, being a towering, blonde {{Hunk}} with tan skin, muscular arms without his cape, and a partial white FormFittingWardrobe that shows off their pectorals.
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* MrFanservice: Before being turned into a man, woman, Bertrand was just as attractive as a man as their AttractiveBentGender, being a towering, blonde {{Hunk}} with tan skin, muscular arms without his cape, and a partial white FormFittingWardrobe that shows off their pectorals.
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* ImmuneToMindControl: She claims to be immune to brainwashing because of her obsession with Yukito... but it ends up being used as a means to brainwash her anyway via a wet dream that Kama Mara ''accidentally'' caused while trying to restrain Chiyomaru by the heel after being unable to hit her on the neck.
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* ImmuneToMindControl: She claims to be immune to brainwashing because of her obsession with Yukito... but it ends up while unknowingly already being used as a means to brainwash her anyway via a wet dream that ManchurianAgent since the previous night exactly because of that. Kama Mara had attacked Chiyomaru and ''accidentally'' caused brainwashed her with a wet dream about Yukito while just trying to restrain Chiyomaru by the heel with a PeoplePuppet string after being unable to hit her on the neck.
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* LoveRedeems: She would've been executed by her own children for deceiving them had at least Cyan not spared her upon realizing that she did care for them all.
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* PetTheDog: Gaia felt sorry about Jupiter and let her keep her memories of Summanus when both sisters were to be used as power sources for two orbital weapons.
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* ComplainingAboutRescuesTheyDontLike: Jupiter is portrayed as a StrawNihilist in a long monologue where she's looking after Summanus while bemoaning [[CrapsackWorld how nothing matters in the world]] and how she doesn't want Summanus' help. Despite admitting to Gaia that she does care about her wimpy older sister, in the far future Jupiter ends up impulsively impaling Summanus just for being unwillingly freed from her prison.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Summanus is desperate to save her sister Jupiter despite barely knowing who she is, and with Yukito's help manages to grant her enough power to awaken from the container she's trapped in. Then Jupiter turns out to be AxCrazy and so resentful towards Summanus that she impales her on the spot with a lightning-charged bundle of wires through her chest.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Summanus is desperate to save her sister Jupiter despite barely knowing who she is, and with Yukito's help manages to grant her enough power to awaken from the container she's trapped in. Then Jupiter turns out to be AxCrazy and a... complicated woman who '''doesn't want to be saved'', so resentful towards Summanus that she impales her poor Summanus on the spot with a lightning-charged bundle of wires through her chest.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Summanus has no memories of her past with Jupiter and only read a book's record of what they were once like, but it's heavily implied that the girl is a SealedEvilInACan who's the opposite of her sister. This is in fact confirmed the second Summanus saves Jupiter and hugs her.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Summanus has no memories of her past with Jupiter and only read a book's record of what they were once like, but it's heavily implied that the girl is a SealedEvilInACan who's the opposite of her sister. This is in fact confirmed the second Summanus saves She's ultimately revealed to be a TragicVillain like Dakini and Gaia.
* AndIMustScream: Jupiter was awake the whole time during the ages she spent trapped as a power source for a KillSat andhugs her.the Empite.
* AndIMustScream: Jupiter was awake the whole time during the ages she spent trapped as a power source for a KillSat and
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: She and Summanus avoided prostitution as children by being exploited for their powers instead, which left Jupiter CoveredWithScars. Then they were put through experiments that turned them into living weapons, with a picture of Jupiter in a book quite implying she loathed all of it. This caused Jupiter to feel murderous and IrrationalHatred for Summanus, thinking of her as a burden she shouldn't have protected.
* CainAndAbel: She executed her abusive older sister and is resentful enough towards Summanus to critically injure her [[UngratefulBitch just after being awakened]], muttering both times that she should've killed them sooner.
* CainAndAbel: She executed her abusive older sister and is resentful enough towards Summanus to critically injure her [[UngratefulBitch just after being awakened]], muttering both times that she should've killed them sooner.
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: She and Summanus avoided prostitution as children by being exploited for their powers instead, which left Jupiter CoveredWithScars. Then they were put through experiments that turned them into living weapons, with a picture of Jupiter in a book quite implying she loathed all of it. This caused Jupiter to feel murderous and IrrationalHatred for Summanus, thinking of Combined with her [[GoMadFromTheIsolation isolation as a burden she shouldn't have protected.
power source]] and a belief that both her and Summanus are better off dead, it leads to her attempting to kill Summanus and indiscriminately attacking everyone with her electric powers.
* CainAndAbel: She executed her abusive older sister andis resentful enough towards Summanus to ends up critically injure her injuring Summanus [[UngratefulBitch just after being awakened]], awakened]] despite loving her, muttering both times that she should've killed them sooner.
* CainAndAbel: She executed her abusive older sister and
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Much like Gaia, Summanus and Jupiter lived in poverty and had their power exploited by cultists led by their own older sister. Jupiter killed said sister in retaliation, revealing she had also hated Summanus the whole time for her weakness and lack of action as Jupiter ultimately took the brunt of the abuse they suffered. [[FromBadToWorse After all that]], both girls were experimented on and turned into weapons, which neatly explains why the single record of Jupiter has her glaring at the camera despite her normally being a stoic person.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Much like Gaia, Summanus and Jupiter lived in poverty and had their power exploited by cultists led by their own older sister. Jupiter killed said sister in retaliation, revealing she had also hated and then both her and Summanus the whole time for her weakness and lack of action as Jupiter ultimately took the brunt of the abuse they suffered. [[FromBadToWorse After all that]], both girls were experimented on and on, turned into weapons, weapons and used as power sources for a KillSat, which neatly explains why the single record of Jupiter has her glaring at the camera despite her normally being a stoic person.
* DeathOfPersonality: She views the amnesia suffered by the Archons as this. Despite wanting to die, Jupiter ironically hangs on to her memories of Summanus and ends up fully conscious while trapped for millenia as a power source for machinery. It is part of why Jupiter attempts to murder Summanus on sight, as she believes the girl already "died peacefully" from having her memories erased and doesn't want to see her still hanging around with amnesia as somebody's pawn.
* DeathSeeker: After being exploited to cause the apocalypse, Jupiter wants to either die or remain imprisoned and considers killing her own sister [[MercyKill an act of mercy]].
* DisproportionateRetribution: Jupiter actually wanted to remain imprisoned as a power source for the Empire the whole time Summanus was desperately looking for a way to save her, so she ends up reacting with extreme violence once she is freed by impaling Summanus and claiming it is what she should've done all along.
* GoodAllAlong: The story builds Jupiter up as being evil and murderously resentful of Summanus, only to establish she's a TragicVillain who does care for her sister but is [[BrokenBird so throughly traumatized]] that she wants both her and herself put out of their shared misery.
* DeathSeeker: After being exploited to cause the apocalypse, Jupiter wants to either die or remain imprisoned and considers killing her own sister [[MercyKill an act of mercy]].
* DisproportionateRetribution: Jupiter actually wanted to remain imprisoned as a power source for the Empire the whole time Summanus was desperately looking for a way to save her, so she ends up reacting with extreme violence once she is freed by impaling Summanus and claiming it is what she should've done all along.
* GoodAllAlong: The story builds Jupiter up as being evil and murderously resentful of Summanus, only to establish she's a TragicVillain who does care for her sister but is [[BrokenBird so throughly traumatized]] that she wants both her and herself put out of their shared misery.
* HumanizingTears: After Jupiter is introduced as being terribly dangerous, part of her backstory shows her breaking into tears upon admitting to Gaia that she loves Summanus and doesn't want to forget her. She's also seen crying when Loki awakened Summanus, not wanting her sister to be exploited by anyone again.
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* LivingBattery: Jupiter starts trapped unconscious, naked and helpless inside a life support system's container to feed energy into the Imperial City. Yukito convinces Summanus to make comics about Jupiter in order to boost her power and awaken her.
* MisplacedRetribution: Jupiter and Summanus' older sister abused them because of her miserable life as a prostitute, leading to Jupiter killing her and lashing out at Summanus for being helpless for a long time. She badly wounds Summanus on sight upon being awakened, claiming it's what she should've done all along.
* MisplacedRetribution: Jupiter and Summanus' older sister abused them because of her miserable life as a prostitute, leading to Jupiter killing her and lashing out at Summanus for being helpless for a long time. She badly wounds Summanus on sight upon being awakened, claiming it's what she should've done all along.
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* LivingBattery: Jupiter starts and Summanus were used as the power sources for the [[KillSat orbital weapons]] that malfunctioned and caused the apocalypse. She is introduced trapped unconscious, naked and helpless (but actually conscious all along) inside a life support system's container to feed energy into the Imperial City. Yukito convinces Summanus to make comics about Jupiter in order to boost her power and awaken her.
*MisplacedRetribution: Jupiter and Summanus' older sister abused them because of her miserable life KickTheDog: She's played up as a prostitute, leading to Jupiter killing her and lashing out at villain by impaling Summanus for with extreme prejudice and a look of contempt on her face [[DisproportionateRetribution just for]] being helpless for a long time. freed from the capsule she was willingly trapped on.
* MercyKill: She badly wounds Summanus on sight upon being awakened, claiming it's what she should've done allalong.along. It comes off as callous, but Jupiter believes both Summanus and herself are better off dead after everything they both suffered and did as living weapons. She also believes Summanus is already "dead" anyway because of her amnesia.
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* MercyKill: She badly wounds Summanus on sight upon being awakened, claiming it's what she should've done all
* PersonOfMassDestruction: Has terribly powerful lightning powers and ends up having no qualms about using them indiscriminately. Like with Gaia, Yukito immediately declares she must be killed for the threat she poses.
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The second Archon who appears in the spinoff. She's a temptress who brainwashes people via erotic dreams inflicted by wires that come out of her hands.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even she is disturbed by the RoomFullOfCrazy that the incestuous Chiyomaru sleeps on.
* OhCrap: She's comically shocked when Chiyomaru blocks her wires despite them being as fast as bullets. She then aims for the girl's heel just intending to restrain her and ''then'' it actually brainwashes her instead, leaving the temptress flabbergasted.
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* ImmuneToMindControl: She claims to be immune to brainwashing because of her obsession with Yukito.
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* ImmuneToMindControl: She claims to be immune to brainwashing because of her obsession with Yukito.Yukito... but it ends up being used as a means to brainwash her anyway via a wet dream that Kama Mara ''accidentally'' caused while trying to restrain Chiyomaru by the heel after being unable to hit her on the neck.
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* IdentityAmnesia: Gaia explains that every archon except for her had their memories of their past life erased.
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* IdentityAmnesia: Gaia explains that every archon except for her had their memories of their past life erased. Jupiter also appears to remember her past, as she immediately attempts to kill Jupiter on sight, claiming it's what she should've done all along.
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: She and Summanus avoided prostitution as children by being exploited for their powers instead, which left Jupiter CoveredWithScars. Then they were put through experiments that turned them into living weapons, with a picture of Jupiter in a book quite implying she loathed all of it. This caused Jupiter to feel murderous and IrrationalHatred for Summanus, thinking of her as a burden she shouldn't have protected.
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* DeathGlare: The first glimpse of what Jupiter is like is a book's picture of her glaring at the camera with a vacant gaze juxtaposed with one of Summanus giving a sweet and bashful look. It's then PlayedForLaughs right on the next page as Yukito slaps to a blackboard a poster of a cutesy doodle of Jupiter making the same face. And sure enough, the first thing Jupiter does in the story is injure Summanus with a deranged look on her face, which is [[FaceFramedInShadow framed in shadow]] for further creepiness.
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* DeathGlare: The first glimpse of what Jupiter is like Jupiter's personality is a book's picture of her vacantly glaring at the camera with a vacant gaze juxtaposed with one of Summanus giving a sweet and bashful look. It's then PlayedForLaughs right on the next page as Yukito slaps to a blackboard a poster of a cutesy doodle of Jupiter making the that same face. And sure enough, the first thing Jupiter does in the story is injure later gravely injures Summanus with a deranged look on her face, which is [[FaceFramedInShadow a deranged expression framed in shadow]] for further creepiness.shadow]], but her backstory makes all of this ironic by establishing she used to be a good and quiet child before her and Summanus' life went FromBadToWorse.
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* NotSoStoic: It is seen that she has a naturally gloomy demeanor and once faked being mute. Her expression turns to a look of contempt or twists into a psychotic glare whenever she's enraged.
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* NotSoStoic: It is seen that she has a naturally gloomy demeanor and once faked used to fake being mute. Her expression turns to a look of contempt or twists into a psychotic glare whenever she's enraged.
