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* FatalFlaw: She just can't admit defeat in her hotheadedness and stubbornness, and it's her DetrimentalDetermination that ends up costing her [[spoiler:her fellow nobles' friendship]].
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* ShadowArchetype: After seeing how willing Vera is to ruin her own life to have her revenge, Jade starts wondering if she could end up the same if she allowed her own desire for revenge dictate her every action.
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!!Jesekiel Bexley
Vera Bexley's late grandfather who served as a soldier under two queens before Weira. After he retired and Phobos took over, he was hunted down by the Mogriff alpha Metalbeak and killed as retribution for all the Mogriffs he had killed as a soldier. His death set Vera on her path of revenge against the Mogriffs and Metalbeak in particular -- a revenge she's determined to achieve after ten years of waiting.
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!!Jesekiel Bexley
Vera Bexley's late grandfather who served as a soldier under two queens before Weira. After he retired and Phobos took over, he was hunted down by the Mogriff alpha Metalbeak and killed as retribution for all the Mogriffs he had killed as a soldier. His death set Vera on her path of revenge against the Mogriffs and Metalbeak in particular -- a revenge she's determined to achieve after ten years of waiting.
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* InnateNightVision: One of the advantages of her transformation is the ability to see well in the dark.
* InnateNightVision: Her keen eyesight enables her to see in darkness.
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* WouldntHurtAChild: When he killed Vera's grandfather, he ordered the little Vera to be left be since he didn't want to be a killer of children like the Nest Butcher.
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* BadassNormal: She's a gracefully agile woman soldier who fares against the Razor Khan better than most of the other rebels at Cavigor.
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* TheUnfettered: [[spoiler:To achieve her revenge, she will attempt to commit genocide on a whole race, renounce her loyalty to Elyon and desert her army when they won't siege Snowpoint anymore, deceive her closest friends, throw them under the bus once she considers them to be a hindrance or is unable to make them obey her anymore, or push herself forward without caring if it'll cost her her own life.]]
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* TragicKeepsake: The black ribbon she wears in her hair turns out to have been a part of the dress her grandfather was planning to gift her with on the day he was killed before it was [[KickTheDog ripped in half by a Mogriff as a warning not to mess with them]].
* TheUnfettered: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:To achieve her revenge, she will attempt to commit genocide on a whole race, renounce her loyalty to Elyon and desert her army when they won't siege Snowpoint anymore, deceive her closest friends, throw them under the bus once she considers them to be a hindrance or is unable to make them obey her anymore, or push herself forward without caring if it'll cost her her ownlife.life. All her sacrifices only lead to her being imprisoned, emotionally unstable and [[NeverMyFault unable to admit she brought it on herself]].]]
She ends up imprisoned, vengeance denied
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* TheUnfettered: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:To achieve her revenge, she will attempt to commit genocide on a whole race, renounce her loyalty to Elyon and desert her army when they won't siege Snowpoint anymore, deceive her closest friends, throw them under the bus once she considers them to be a hindrance or is unable to make them obey her anymore, or push herself forward without caring if it'll cost her her own
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The commander-in-chief of the army besieging Snowpoint.
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Though 35 years old, he's relatively young to command an army the size of the northern army. Though he likes to think his militaristic dedication and aptitude for warfare enabled that, he knows the major reason to be the rebels' lack of people properly qualified (in other words, having a formal military training and serving in Phobos' army before defecting to Elyon's side) for the task.
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Though 35 years old, he's relatively young to command an army the size of the northern army. Though he likes to think his militaristic dedication and aptitude for warfare enabled that, he knows the major reason to be the rebels' lack of people properly qualified (in other words, having both a formal military training and serving in Phobos' army before defecting to Elyon's side) experience) for the task.
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** Though he's not considered a strategist like Raythor, he proves himself capable of engaging in cunning warfare when he's put in charge of assaulting Cavigor in the sequel. Not only he's wise enough not to immediately take over the subterranean prison that's harder to defend than besiege, but he deals such a devastating surprise attack on Vathek's relief force that he forces them inside the prison themselves.
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** Though he's not considered a strategist like Raythor, he proves himself capable of engaging in cunning warfare when he's put in charge of assaulting Cavigor in the sequel. Not only he's wise enough not to immediately take over the subterranean prison that's harder to defend than besiege, but he deals such a devastating surprise attack on Vathek's greater relief force that he forces them inside to be trapped in the prison themselves.
themselves. [[spoiler:He soon successfully takes over the prison by having the Razor Khan open the gates for the main army while a reserve force enter through a SecretUndergroundTunnel at the same time.]]
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* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Played with. He fights with an ax, but he tries to act professionally despite his anger at the rebels' disrespectful attitude, smells a rat about the story of Jade being Phobos' creation when he fights the Shadowkhan, and tries to prevent Caleb from impulsively focusing all the effort in protecting Elyon by stating that she can defend herself with her powers and the castle's defenses must not be abandoned.
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* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Played with. He fights with an ax, but he tries to act professionally despite his anger at the rebels' disrespectful attitude, smells a rat about the story of Jade being Phobos' creation when he fights the Shadowkhan, and tries to prevent Caleb from impulsively focusing all the effort defenders' efforts in protecting Elyon by stating that she can defend herself with her powers and the castle's defenses must not be abandoned.
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Though 35 years old, he's relatively young to command an army the size of the northern army. Though he likes to think his militaristic dedication and aptitude for warfare enabled that, he knows the major reason to be the rebels' lack of people properly qualified (in other words, having a formal military training and serving in Phobos' army before defecting to Elyon's side) for the task.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes, including a team of {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band]] as their TokenGoodTeammate. As she tries to stay alive and find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body]]. Though being away from home weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by ruining her main antagonizers' lives and helping her team's original EvilOverlord master back to power, she makes it clear that [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe she's doing the latter only to repay back to the one person who has treated her with more kindness than anyone else from the start]] and only for as long as that's what he wants. When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her. Though terrifying when furious, she's capable of showing mercy to enemies who [[KnowWhenToFoldEm understand when it's better to surrender]] or admit their wrongdoings, though she has to invoke PragmaticVillainy to explain some of her merciful acts.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes, including a team of {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band]] as their TokenGoodTeammate. As she tries to stay alive and find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body]]. Though being away from home her loved ones weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by ruining her main antagonizers' lives and helping her team's original EvilOverlord master back to power, she makes it clear that [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe she's doing the latter only to repay back to the one person who has treated her with more kindness than anyone else from the start]] and only for as long as that's what he wants. When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her. Though terrifying when furious, she's capable of showing mercy to enemies who [[KnowWhenToFoldEm understand when it's better to surrender]] or admit their wrongdoings, though she has to invoke PragmaticVillainy to explain some of her merciful acts.
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* HiddenDepths: Frost is a DumbMuscle, but he makes in the tenth chapter of ''Kage'' several observations about [[FullCircleRevolution the Rebels]] and voices the possibility of them eventually hiring bounty hunters if they can't catch the Knights themselves. [[DumbassHasAPoint Raythor cannot help but agree with those points.]] Yan Lin also notes in worry how resourceful Frost was to arrive on Earth unnoticed.
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** Frost is a DumbMuscle, but he makes in the tenth chapter of ''Kage'' several observations about [[FullCircleRevolution the Rebels]] and voices the possibility of them eventually hiring bounty hunters if they can't catch the Knights themselves. [[DumbassHasAPoint Raythor cannot help but agree with those points.]] Yan Lin also notes in worry how resourceful Frost was to arrive on Earthunnoticed.unnoticed.
** Though he's not considered a strategist like Raythor, he proves himself capable of engaging in cunning warfare when he's put in charge of assaulting Cavigor in the sequel. Not only he's wise enough not to immediately take over the subterranean prison that's harder to defend than besiege, but he deals such a devastating surprise attack on Vathek's relief force that he forces them inside the prison themselves.
** Frost is a DumbMuscle, but he makes in the tenth chapter of ''Kage'' several observations about [[FullCircleRevolution the Rebels]] and voices the possibility of them eventually hiring bounty hunters if they can't catch the Knights themselves. [[DumbassHasAPoint Raythor cannot help but agree with those points.]] Yan Lin also notes in worry how resourceful Frost was to arrive on Earth
** Though he's not considered a strategist like Raythor, he proves himself capable of engaging in cunning warfare when he's put in charge of assaulting Cavigor in the sequel. Not only he's wise enough not to immediately take over the subterranean prison that's harder to defend than besiege, but he deals such a devastating surprise attack on Vathek's relief force that he forces them inside the prison themselves.
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* GoodIsNotNice: In ''Shadows over Meridian, she [[WhatTheHellHero harshly calls Will and Elyon out of making Jade an enemy]] and bluntly tells Elyon that if not for Nerissa's machinations, they wouldn't have interfered with Phobos and Meridian in the first place.
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* GoodIsNotNice: In ''Shadows over Meridian, Meridian'', she [[WhatTheHellHero harshly calls Will and Elyon out of making Jade an enemy]] and bluntly tells Elyon that if not for Nerissa's machinations, they wouldn't have interfered with Phobos and Meridian in the first place.
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* GoodIsNotNice: In ''Shadows over Meridian, she [[WhatTheHellHero harshly calls Will and Elyon out of making Jade an enemy]] and bluntly tells Elyon that if not for Nerissa's machinations, they wouldn't have interfered with Phobos and Meridian in the first place.
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* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Played with. He fights with an ax, but he tries to act professional despite his anger at the rebels' disrespectful attitude, smells a rat about the story of Jade being Phobos' creation when he fights the Shadowkhan, and tries to prevent Caleb from impulsively focusing all the effort in protecting Elyon by stating that she can defend herself with her powers and the castle's defenses must not be abandoned.
* LastStand: When Caleb and the rest of the rebels prioritize Elyon's safety by abandoning Granik and the rest of the Guard to repel the Shadowkhan alone, he rightly anticipates he won't see sunrise again and leads his men to protect the castle as best as they can, losing his life in the process.
!!Warden of Cavigor
The warden of Cavigor's prison.
* LastStand: When Caleb and the rest of the rebels prioritize Elyon's safety by abandoning Granik and the rest of the Guard to repel the Shadowkhan alone, he rightly anticipates he won't see sunrise again and leads his men to protect the castle as best as they can, losing his life in the process.
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The warden of Cavigor's prison.
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* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Played with. He fights with an ax, but he tries to act professional professionally despite his anger at the rebels' disrespectful attitude, smells a rat about the story of Jade being Phobos' creation when he fights the Shadowkhan, and tries to prevent Caleb from impulsively focusing all the effort in protecting Elyon by stating that she can defend herself with her powers and the castle's defenses must not be abandoned.
abandoned.
* LastStand: When Caleb and the rest of the rebels prioritize Elyon's safety by abandoningGranik and the rest of the Guard to repel the Shadowkhan alone, he Granik rightly anticipates he won't see sunrise again and leads his men to protect the castle as best as they can, losing his life in the process.
!!Warden !!Erec, son of Cavigor
The warden of Cavigor's prison.Eret
A Royal Guard under Granik.
* LastStand: When Caleb and the rest of the rebels prioritize Elyon's safety by abandoning
The warden of Cavigor's prison.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Though he openly shows hostility towards the heroes he blames for his comrades and captain's deaths, Elyon admits he has every right to be angry at Caleb's abandonment of them and disillusioned with her record as a queen. His ArmorPiercingQuestion about her ignorance regarding Meridian also motivates her to do her homework about her kingdom so that she can live up to her promises of doing better.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes, including a team of MagicalGirlWarriors, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band]] as their TokenGoodTeammate. As she tries to stay alive and find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body]]. Though being away from home weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by ruining her main antagonizers' lives and helping her team's original EvilOverlord master back to power, she makes it clear that [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe she's doing the latter only to repay back to the one person who has treated her with more kindness than anyone else from the start]] and only for as long as that's what he wants. When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her. Though terrifying when furious, she's capable of showing mercy to enemies who [[KnowWhenToFoldEm understand when it's better to surrender]] or admit their wrongdoings, though she has to invoke PragmaticVillainy to explain some of her merciful acts.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes, including a team of MagicalGirlWarriors, {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band]] as their TokenGoodTeammate. As she tries to stay alive and find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body]]. Though being away from home weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by ruining her main antagonizers' lives and helping her team's original EvilOverlord master back to power, she makes it clear that [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe she's doing the latter only to repay back to the one person who has treated her with more kindness than anyone else from the start]] and only for as long as that's what he wants. When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her. Though terrifying when furious, she's capable of showing mercy to enemies who [[KnowWhenToFoldEm understand when it's better to surrender]] or admit their wrongdoings, though she has to invoke PragmaticVillainy to explain some of her merciful acts.
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A blue Galhot, a captain in the Royal Guard and a .
* BrutishCharacterBrutishWeapon: Played with. He fights with an ax, but he tries to act professional despite his anger at the rebels' disrespectful attitude, smells a rat about the story of Jade being Phobos' creation when he fights the Shadowkhan, and tries to prevent Caleb from impulsively focusing all the effort in protecting Elyon by stating that she can defend herself with her powers and the castle's defenses must not be abandoned.
* LastStand: When Caleb and the rest of the rebels prioritize Elyon's safety by abandoning Granik and the rest of the Guard to repel the Shadowkhan alone, he rightly anticipates he won't see sunrise again and leads his men to protect the castle as best as they can, losing his life in the process.
!!Warden of Cavigor
The warden of Cavigor's prison.
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* LastStand: When Caleb and the rest of the rebels prioritize Elyon's safety by abandoning Granik and the rest of the Guard to repel the Shadowkhan alone, he rightly anticipates he won't see sunrise again and leads his men to protect the castle as best as they can, losing his life in the process.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes, including a team of MagicalGirlWarriors, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band]] as their TokenGoodTeammate. As she tries to stay alive and find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body]]. Though being away from home weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by ruining her main antagonizers' lives and helping her team's original EvilOverlord master back to power, she makes it clear that [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe she's doing the latter only to repay back to the one person who has treated her with more kindness than anyone else from the start]] and only for as long as that's what he wants. When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her. Though terrifying when furious in combat, she's capable of showing mercy to enemies who understand when it's better to surrender or admit their wrongdoings, though she has to invoke PragmaticVillainy to explain some of her merciful acts.
When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes, including a team of MagicalGirlWarriors, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band]] as their TokenGoodTeammate. As she tries to stay alive and find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body]]. Though being away from home weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by ruining her main antagonizers' lives and helping her team's original EvilOverlord master back to power, she makes it clear that [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe she's doing the latter only to repay back to the one person who has treated her with more kindness than anyone else from the start]] and only for as long as that's what he wants. When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her. Though terrifying when furious in combat, furious, she's capable of showing mercy to enemies who [[KnowWhenToFoldEm understand when it's better to surrender surrender]] or admit their wrongdoings, though she has to invoke PragmaticVillainy to explain some of her merciful acts.
When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes, including a team of MagicalGirlWarriors, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band]].band]] as their TokenGoodTeammate. As she tries to stay alive and find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body]]. Though being away from home weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by seeking retribution and
ruining her main antagonizers' lives and helping her team's original EvilOverlord master back to power, she makes it clear that [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe she's doing the latter only to repay back to the one person who has treated her with more kindness than anyone else from the start]] and only for as long as that's what he wants. When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her. Though terrifying when furious in combat, she's capable of showing mercy to enemies who understand when it's better to surrender or admit their wrongdoings, though she has to invoke PragmaticVillainy to explain some of her merciful acts.
When the heroes finally realize [[CreateYourOwnVillain how their unjust treatment of her made her their enemy]], they attempt to find a way to reason and make amends with her.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes heroes, including a team of MagicalGirlWarriors, want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her [[HeroWithBadPublicity publicly labeled as a monster monster]] in order to [[ForcedIntoEvil force her to take refuge in a villainous band. band]]. As she tries to stay alive and she's haunted by find her way home, she attempts to resist the temptations of [[EnemyWithin her conscious dark side side]] who's trying to [[SplitPersonalityTakeover take control over her mind and body.
body]]. Though being away from home weights down on her, she keeps up her adventurous and perky nature, which helps her villainous teammates take a liking to her. Though she finally [[SplitPersonalityMerge accepts her darker side]] and [[ThenLetMeBeEvil decides to act like the villain everyone treats her as]] by seeking retribution and
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* DarkMagicalGirl: She's a fundamentally heroic preteen girl who's been banished by a spiteful enemy away from her friends and family into a foreign universe where most of the heroes want to either capture or kill her due to the dark powers she gained in the bargain. An egomaniacal sorceress, who wants to make use of her powers, has her publicly labeled as a monster in order to force her to take refuge in a villainous band. and she's haunted by her conscious dark side who's trying to take control over her mind and body.
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* JackOfAllStats: While her Oni physique technically makes her a LightningBruiser, she's not the strongest, fastest or most durable being around. She initially doesn't have as much of raw magical power like the Guardians or Elyon, but neither is she as dependent on it as they are thanks to her previous experience with martial arts and {{Guile Hero}}ism. Though she quickly becomes adept at using her katana and shurikens in combat, she's not a MasterSwordsman, and a regular soldier with more experience in swordsmanship can put her on defensive.
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* JackOfAllStats: While her Oni physique technically makes her a LightningBruiser, she's not the strongest, fastest or most durable being around. She initially doesn't have as much of raw magical power like the Guardians or Elyon, but neither is she as dependent on it as they are thanks to her previous experience with martial arts and {{Guile Hero}}ism. Though she quickly becomes adept at using her katana and shurikens in combat, she's not a MasterSwordsman, and a regular soldier with more experience in swordsmanship can put her on defensive.
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* TookALevelInKindness: By the time of the sequel, he's on more friendly terms with Jade than he was in the beginning.
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* JackOfAllStats: While her Oni physique technically makes her a LightningBruiser, she's not the strongest, fastest or most durable being around. She initially doesn't have as much of raw magical power like the Guardians or Elyon, but neither is she as dependent on it as they are thanks to her previous experience with martial arts and {{Guile Hero}}ism. Though she quickly becomes adept at using her katana and shurikens in combat, she's not a MasterSwordsman, and a regular soldier with more experience in swordsmanship can put her on defensive.
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* TwoGirlsToATeam: Jade and Miranda are the only females of the team.
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* KungFuWizard: She makes use of her martial art skills along with her enhanced physical abilities and shadow magic.
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* HeroesPreferSwords: She fights with a black sword because she considers the art of swordsmanship more noble and less barbaric than archery. While she's an arrogant elitist, she has her code of honor and loyalty.
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* HeroesPreferSwords: She fights with a black sword because she considers believes the art of swordsmanship to be more fitting of a noble and less barbaric than the more "barbaric" archery. While she's an arrogant elitist, she has her code of honor and loyalty.
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* MasterSwordswoman: She chose to dedicate herself to learning swordsmanship which she considers more noble and less barbaric than archery.
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* MasterSwordswoman: She In contrast to the rest of the Sky Hunters, she chose to dedicate herself to learning swordsmanship which she considers more noble and less barbaric than archery.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's arrogant even to her friends and very critical of Vera ([[JerkassHasAPoint not without good reason, though]]), but she's also logical, has a soft spot for Caroline and tries to ensure Vera won't end up getting everyone killed for nothing.
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* HeroesPreferSwords: She fights with a black sword because she considers the art of swordsmanship more noble and less barbaric than archery. While she's an arrogant elitist, she has her code of honor and loyalty.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's arrogant even to herfriends friends, bigoted towards Passlings and Mogriffs, and very critical of Vera ([[JerkassHasAPoint not without good reason, though]]), but she's also logical, rational and loyal, has a soft spot for Caroline and tries to ensure Vera won't end up getting everyone killed for nothing.
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* LoyalToThePosition: He follows the established chain of command in the northern army and respects Vera's leader position over the Sky Hunters even though he agrees with Amelia that Vera isn't Vera's personal enmity towards the best candidate for the job.Mogriffs makes her too volatile to be an effective leader.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: For all her arguing with Alan, she's willing to fight for him as much as she's ready to fight for the rest of her friends.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: VitriolicBestBuds:
** For all her arguing with Alan, she's willing to fight for him as much as she's ready to fight for the rest of her friends.
** [[spoiler:The ending of her friendship with Vera is made tragic by Amelia's confession that for all their disagreements, she believed she could trust her hardheaded rival to have her back before Vera proved herself a traitor.]]
** For all her arguing with Alan, she's willing to fight for him as much as she's ready to fight for the rest of her friends.
** [[spoiler:The ending of her friendship with Vera is made tragic by Amelia's confession that for all their disagreements, she believed she could trust her hardheaded rival to have her back before Vera proved herself a traitor.]]
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* TheMedic: Sofia is Snowpoint's head healer, and Maya is following in her footsteps. Before being forced to take refuge in Snowpoint, they used to run a clinic in Endfield and were able to enjoy a tolerable life since Sofia was probably the only one with true medical training in the north until Phobos was overthrown.
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* TheMedic: Sofia is Snowpoint's head healer, and Maya is following in her footsteps. Before being forced to take refuge in Snowpoint, they used to run a clinic in Endfield and were able to enjoy a tolerable life since due to Sofia was probably being likely the only one with true medical training in the north until Phobos was overthrown.
overthrown.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Lampshaded with Sofia; after she proves herself to be willing to assert herself to soldiers to ensure her patients' well-being, Caroline asks if healers aren't supposed to be patient and gentle, Sofia answers that while it is so, tough love is sometimes required when dealing with more hardheaded patients.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Lampshaded with Sofia; after she proves herself to be willing to assert herself to soldiers to ensure her patients' well-being, Caroline asks if healers aren't supposed to be patient and gentle, gentle. Sofia answers that while it is so, tough love is sometimes required when dealing with more hardheaded patients.
* LeeroyJenkins: Amelia and Philip have an issue with Vera's tendency to include full charges in her battle plans.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: After years of preparing to have a chance to get her revenge, she gives her more sensible comrades a hard time by needing coercion to abandon the fight against the Mogriffs and their powerful Shadowkhan allies. [[spoiler:She ends up defying her superiors' direct orders and deceives her friends into embarking on a suicide mission to find and kill Metalbeak. She ultimately abandons them when they all decide to [[KnowWhenToFoldEm throw in the towel]] and runs off to get her revenge without caring for her own life.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: After years a decade of preparing to have for a chance to get her revenge, she gives her more sensible comrades a hard time by needing coercion to abandon the fight against the Mogriffs and their powerful Shadowkhan allies. [[spoiler:She ends up defying her superiors' direct orders and deceives her friends into embarking on a suicide mission to find and kill Metalbeak. She ultimately abandons them when they all decide to [[KnowWhenToFoldEm throw in the towel]] and runs off to get her revenge without caring for her own life.]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: Her beloved grandfather's death at Metalbeak's hands is driving her desire to kill him and the rest of the Mogriffs.
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* YouKilledMyFather: Her beloved grandfather's death at Metalbeak's hands claws is driving her desire to kill him and the rest of the Mogriffs.
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* TranslatorBuddy: He serves to translate his Lurden commander's speech to those who don't understand.
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* TranslatorBuddy: He serves to translate his Lurden commander's speech to those who don't understand.
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* CoolOldLady: Sofia is a kind old healer who's willing to advice and enlist the aid of her fellow healer Caroline despite the girl being from the enemy camp, but she's also willing to threaten her side's soldiers with her changeling powers to ensure the well-being of her patients.
* FantasticRacism: Sofia appears to have her own strong opinions about serpentine shapeshifters like Cedric and doesn't like them to be mixed up with spider changelings. Maya speculates her mother's attitude is rooted in the fact that she had a bad relationship with one of them before meeting Maya's father.
* FantasticRacism: Sofia appears to have her own strong opinions about serpentine shapeshifters like Cedric and doesn't like them to be mixed up with spider changelings. Maya speculates her mother's attitude is rooted in the fact that she had a bad relationship with one of them before meeting Maya's father.
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* CoolOldLady: Sofia is a kind old healer who's willing to advice advise and enlist the aid of her fellow healer Caroline despite the girl being from the enemy camp, but she's also willing to threaten her side's soldiers with her changeling powers to ensure the well-being of her patients.
patients' well-being.
* FantasticRacism: Sofia appears to have her own strong opinions about serpentine shapeshifters like Cedric and doesn't like them to be mixed up with spider changelings. Cedric's reputation not helping the general view on changelings may have something to do with it, but Mayaspeculates suspects her mother's attitude is rooted in the fact that she mother may have had a bad relationship with one of them before meeting Maya's father.another snake shapeshifter.
* FantasticRacism: Sofia appears to have her own strong opinions about serpentine shapeshifters like Cedric and doesn't like them to be mixed up with spider changelings. Cedric's reputation not helping the general view on changelings may have something to do with it, but Maya
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* TheMedic: Sofia is Snowpoint's head healer, and Maya is following in her footsteps. Before being forced to take refuge in Snowpoint, Sofia they used to own run a clinic in Endfield.Endfield and were able to enjoy a tolerable life since Sofia was probably the only one with true medical training in the north until Phobos was overthrown.
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!!Telonio
A soldier at Snowpoint.
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A soldier at Snowpoint.
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* TranslatorBuddy: He serves to translate his Lurden commander's speech to those who don't understand.
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A mother and daughter who're both spider changelings and serve as healers in Snowpoint.
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* CoolOldLady: Sofia is a kind old healer who's willing to advice and enlist the aid of her fellow healer Caroline despite the girl being from the enemy camp, but she's also willing to threaten her side's soldiers with her changeling powers to ensure the well-being of her patients.
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* LightIsGood: Both of them have white hair in their human forms and white fur in their spider forms, and they're much nicer when compared to the more embittered Miranda whose human hair and spider fur are black.
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* IcyBlueEyes: They both have this eye color and can be threatening with their spider forms when they want to.
* LightIsGood: Both of them have white hair in their human forms and white fur in their spider forms, and they're much nicer when compared to the more embittered Miranda whose human hair and spider fur are both black.
* LightIsGood: Both of them have white hair in their human forms and white fur in their spider forms, and they're much nicer when compared to the more embittered Miranda whose human hair and spider fur are both black.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Lampshaded with Sofia; after she proves herself to be willing to assert herself to soldiers to ensure her patients' well-being, Caroline asks if healers aren't supposed to be patient and gentle, Sofia answers that while it is so, tough love is sometimes required when dealing with more hardheaded patients.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Like Miranda,she's they're capable of alternating between a human form and a spider form.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Like Miranda,
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!!Maya
AFriendlyNeighborhoodSpider: When compared to their fellow spider changeling Miranda, Sofia and Sofia's daughter who helps Maya are friendly people who've been driven to Phobos' side by racist people and would just want to live in peace.
* LightIsGood: Both of them have white hair in their human forms and white fur in their spider forms, and they're much nicer when compared to the more embittered Miranda whose human hair and spider fur are black.
* TheMedic: Sofia is Snowpoint's head healer, and Maya is following in hermother as a healer footsteps. Before being forced to take refuge in Snowpoint.
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*VoluntaryShapeshifting:ProjectileWebbing: They are capable of shooting webbing out of their mouths like Miranda, and they've devised a way to use it to cast broken limps.
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!!Maya
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* GiantSpider: Her alternate form is a giant spider-like creature, though she has four grown human limbs instead of eight legs, and four blue eyes. She can also shoot web from her mouth.
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* TheHighQueen: She's learning to be one. She's one, and she's dismayed for losing the more fun part of being a royal. Learning of how badly she's messed up leads to her deciding she seriously needs to grow up as a ruler in ''Shadows over Meridian''.
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!!Warden of Cavigor
The warden of Cavigor's prison.
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!!Warden of Cavigor
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!!Warden of Cavigor
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!!Warden of Cavigor
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* KnightTemplar: Like the Warden, he believes that by murdering all their defenseless prisoners, he's doing what's necessary to protect Meridian from Phobos. He also accuses the more heroic rebels of being too gutless by keeping Phobos and his minions alive, and claims Elyon and the past queens would see the wisdom of finishing off the enemy so that they can't be a threat anymore.
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* KnightTemplar: Like the Warden, he believes that by murdering all their defenseless prisoners, he's doing what's necessary to protect Meridian from Phobos. He also accuses the more heroic rebels of being too gutless by for keeping Phobos and his minions alive, and claims Elyon and the past queens would see the wisdom of finishing off the enemy so that they can't be a threat anymore.
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* WardensAreEvil: He's the Warden's lieutenant in Cavigor and wholehearted agrees with his plan to murder all their prisoners rather than risk them being released and recruited by Frost.
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* WardensAreEvil: He's the Warden's lieutenant in Cavigor and wholehearted wholeheartedly agrees with his plan to murder all their prisoners rather than risk them being released and recruited by Frost.
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* KnightTemplar: She [[NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist considers herself a righteous crusader who'll finally put an end to the Mogriffs' threat over innocent people, but even her closest friends can see that she's really driven by revenge more than anything]]. Anyone failing to see things her way and enable her obsessive quest, like [[spoiler:Elyon, her military superiors and fellow nobles in the Sky Hunters]], is a weakling too spineless to do what's needed by her book, and she refuses to listen to the Mogriffs' justifications that Metalbeak killed her grandfather because he killed numerous Mogriffs with glee and that the past queens' attempts to take their ancestral lands has led to them attacking people.
* TheLeader: She's the unofficial leader of the Sky Hunters and is of the Headstrong variety.
* TheLeader: She's the unofficial leader of the Sky Hunters and is of the Headstrong variety.
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* KnightTemplar: She [[NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist considers herself a righteous crusader who'll finally put an end to the Mogriffs' threat over innocent people, but even her closest friends can see that she's really driven by revenge more than anything]]. Anyone failing to see things her way and enable her obsessive quest, like [[spoiler:Elyon, her military superiors and fellow nobles in the Sky Hunters]], is a weakling too spineless to do what's needed by her book, and she refuses to listen to the Mogriffs' justifications that Metalbeak killed her grandfather because he killed numerous Mogriffs with glee for being a brutal Mogriff killer and that the past queens' attempts to take their ancestral lands has led to them attacking people.
by force is a large part of the reason for their hostility.
* TheLeader: She's the unofficial leader of the SkyHunters Hunters, and is of the Headstrong variety.
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* PintSizedPowerhouse: A short child with SuperStrength.
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* BadassNormal: He's an apparently normal human who, despite his insanity, is a dangerous fighter unafraid of getting almost eaten alive by his shadow serpent on a regular basis and can beat a Shadowkhan in a dance duel by sword swallowing a dagger thrown at him.
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* TheUnfettered: [[spoiler:To achieve her revenge, she will sacrifice attempt to commit genocide on a whole race, renounce her faithfulness loyalty to Elyon, Elyon and desert the army, her army when they won't siege Snowpoint anymore, deceive her closest friends, throw them under the bus once she considers
considers them to be a hindrance or is unable to make them obey her anymore, or push herself forward without caring if it'll cost her her own life.]]
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* KnightTemplar: She [[NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist considers herself a righteous crusader who'll finally put an end to the Mogriffs' threat over innocent people, but even her closest friends can see that she's really driven by revenge more than anything.anything]]. Anyone failing to see things her way and enable her obsessive quest, like [[spoiler:Elyon, her military superiors and fellow nobles in the Sky Hunters]], is a weakling too spineless to do what's needed by her book, and she refuses to listen to the Mogriffs' justifications that Metalbeak killed her grandfather because he killed numerous Mogriffs with glee and that the past queens' attempts to take their ancestral lands has led to them attacking people.
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just wants to wipe out all the Mogriffs because some of them killed her grandfather.
just wants to wipe out all the Mogriffs because some of them killed her grandfather.
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* KnightTemplar: She considers herself a righteous crusader who'll finally put an end to the Mogriffs' threat over innocent people, but even her closest allies friends can see that she's really driven by revenge more than anything.
just wantsanything. Anyone failing to wipe out all see things her way and enable her obsessive quest, like [[spoiler:Elyon, her military superiors and fellow nobles in the Mogriffs because some of them Sky Hunters]], is a weakling too spineless to do what's needed by her book, and she refuses to listen to the Mogriffs' justifications that Metalbeak killed her grandfather.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Though she detests the Mogriffs, she shares Tinsley's opinion agrees with Tinsley that harming defenseless hatchlings and eggs feels like an overstep.dishonorable.