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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Figures out very quickly that [[spoiler: Nihilus is ''way'' out of her league after he effortlessly blocks her attack and sends her flying with Force Lightning and makes a run for it. Its the reasons why she's the only survivor of Cinders group.]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Figures out very quickly that [[spoiler: Nihilus is ''way'' out of her league after he effortlessly blocks her attack and sends her flying with Force Lightning and makes a run for it. Its the reasons why she's the only survivor of Cinders group.]]
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* MasterOfIllusion: Her Semblance allows her to create hallucinations. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for her Nihilus has the ability to sense danger and as such has difficulty in seeing through her illusions.]]
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* AdmiringTheAbomination: Is deeply impressed by Nihilus power and is eager to get her hands on it.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Her hair is green.
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* BewareMyStingerTail: The Death Stalker has a giant scorpion tail which it uses to attack the heroes in "Initiation".
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* ScaryScorpions: The Death Stalker.
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* TooPowerfulToLive: The terentatek is a nigh-unstoppable killing machine capable of tanking almost any attack, is strong enough to one-shot nearly every character in the setting, fighter on Remnant, possesses a natural immunity to the Force (and magic by extension), and is an ImplacableMan bent on killing Jaune. Had it not perished in the chapter where it debuts, it would have likely become a major focus of the story and would have would've quickly overshadowed Nihilus's spirit Nihilus as the biggest threat to the story.setting and shifted the story's focus away from Nihilus's corrupting influence on Jaune.
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* NighInvulnerability: The amount of punishment that this ''thing'' can take is unreal. Despite going up against super-powered opponents who are used to fighting monsters and fight on an entirely different level than the Jedi, the terentatek is able to survive everything that Glynda Goodwitch, Team JNPR, and Team RWBY try to throw at it. Unlike the natives of Remnant, the terentatek doesn't have Aura as an excuse for how it's able to tank so much damage and the only explanation ever given is that it has highly durable natural armor. Getting slammed in the face by Nora's Magnhild barely fazes it. Bullets, bladed weapons, and grenades are likewise ineffective. Having boulders and ice rocks smashed on its head only leaves it stunned for a few seconds. It even continues standing after being peppered with hundreds of Dust rounds fired from a 20mm chain gun, followed by a barrage of aircraft-mounted missiles. It's because of this invulnerability that even after Jaune and Glynda finally kill it, the remaining members of Teams RWBY and JNPR continue shooting at its corpse just to MakeSureHesDead.
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* NighInvulnerability: The amount of punishment that this ''thing'' thing can take is unreal. Despite going up against super-powered opponents who are used to fighting monsters and fight on an entirely different level than the Jedi, the terentatek is able to survive everything that Glynda Goodwitch, Team JNPR, and Team RWBY try to throw at it. Unlike the natives of Remnant, the terentatek doesn't have Aura as an excuse for how it's able to tank so much damage and the only explanation ever given is that it has highly durable natural armor. Getting slammed in the face by Nora's Magnhild barely fazes it. Bullets, bladed weapons, and grenades are likewise ineffective. Having boulders and ice rocks smashed on its head only leaves it stunned for a few seconds. It even continues standing after being peppered with hundreds of Dust rounds fired from a 20mm chain gun, followed by a barrage of aircraft-mounted missiles. It's because of this invulnerability that even after Jaune and Glynda finally kill it, the remaining members of Teams RWBY and JNPR continue shooting at its corpse just to MakeSureHesDead.
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* SpeakIllOfTheDead: [[spoiler:After Cinder's plan fails and she is killed, he doesn't hesitate to call her a petulant child who wasn't ready for the responsibility that was given to her. Salem chastises him for this and warns him to not be so disrespectful to dead.]]
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* AdaptationalWimp: Downplayed. She never gets the full power of the Fall Maiden like her canon counterpart [[spoiler:since Nihilus indirectly causes her to commit suicide before she is able to kill Amber.]] That being said, she is still extremely skilled with her half-Maiden abilities and is able to prove a match for [[spoiler:Darth Nihilus]].
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* AdaptationalWimp: Downplayed. She never gets the full power of the Fall Maiden like her canon counterpart [[spoiler:since Nihilus indirectly causes her to commit suicide before she is able to kill Amber.]] That being said, she is still extremely skilled with her half-Maiden abilities and is able to prove a match hold her own against [[spoiler:Nihilus]] for [[spoiler:Darth Nihilus]].a short period of time.
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[[Characters/JauneArcLordOfHungerMainCharacters Main Characters]] | [[Characters/JauneArcLordOfHungerSupportingCharacters Supporting Characters]] | '''Antagonists''' ([[Characters/JauneArcLordOfHungerDarthNihilus Darth Nihilus]]) | [[Characters/JauneArcLordOfHungerTheGalaxy The Galaxy]] | [[Characters/JauneArcLordOfHungerOtherCharacters Other Characters]]-] ]]]]
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* BullyingTheDragon: [[spoiler:He expresses an eagerness to fight Darth Nihilus even after watching footage of him tearing through a dozen Huntsmen and pulling down an airship from the sky. Even Salem considers the idea foolish and straight-up tells Tyrian that he would've died had he gotten his wish.]]
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* BullyingTheDragon: BullyingADragon: [[spoiler:He expresses an eagerness to fight Darth Nihilus even after watching footage of him tearing through a dozen Huntsmen and pulling down an airship from the sky. Even Salem considers the idea foolish and straight-up tells Tyrian that he would've died had he gotten his wish.]]
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* MinorMajorCharacter: In the story, Adam only appears for a single chapter where he's treated like a VillainOfTheWeek [[spoiler:who is killed to establish how much stronger Nihilus has become after absorbing the Wyvern]]. He plays a far more pivitol role in Blake's backstory as her abusive ex-lover and his role as the leader of the White Fang makes him an important political figure in-universe.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler:His death aboard Ironwood's flagship is treated with little fanfare and the story treats it offhandedly.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Her death is treated like this as she is killed trying to protect Cinder from Nihilus and spends her dying moments desperately reaching her hand out to Cinder's unconscious body.]]
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* TheGhost: Is only mentioned so far.
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* EvilLearnsOfOutsideContext: [[spoiler:At the end of the story, she learns of Darth Nihilus' existence from Cinder's footage and is so impressed by his power that she puts her original plans on hold while sending out her minions to dig up any information they can find about the Mask of Nihilus.]]
* TheGhost:Is Since she canonically doesn't appear until the end of Volume 3, she doesn't make an appearance [[spoiler:until the epilogue]] and the reader only mentioned so far.hears about her from other characters.
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* TheGhost: Has only been He's mentioned once so far.in "Vytal" by Cinder when she compares him with Jaune [[spoiler:under the Dark Side's influence]].
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* SlasherSmile: Delivers one when Salem tells him to bring her the new Fall Maiden ([[spoiler:Ruby]]) and gives him permission to kill anyone that gets in his way.
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* {{Gaslighting}}: He did this a lot to Blake while the two were in a relationship, physically abusing her then apologizing before eventually denying that the abuse ever happened.
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