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(W.I.P.)
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!!!'''Weapons''': [[DropTheHammer Mallets]] and [[StuffBlowingUp Rocket Launchers]]
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* DropTheHammer: Her weapon in the Metaverse is a glowing, icy hammer whose head is about as big as her entire body.
* AnIcePerson: Uses Ice skills instead of Yusuke.
* AnIcePerson: Uses Ice skills instead of Yusuke.
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A 13-year old 1st year at Shujin who skipped grades due to his intelligence and primarily works as a hall monitor.
A 13-year old 1st year at Shujin who skipped grades due to his intelligence and primarily works as a hall monitor.
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* {{Unishment}}: The creators have described how Haru views her probation as this as shown in [[https://retrospring.net/@jazzily_/a/110156535887181753 this Retrospring]], as [[AbusiveParents her dad]] is more or less out of her life, as is her abusive spouse, and she instead is under the care of [[CoolOldGuy Sojiro]].
-->'''Jazzy''': i def think she finds her new life way warmer and more meaningful than her previous one!
-->'''Jazzy''': i def think she finds her new life way warmer and more meaningful than her previous one!
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Sumire is often depicted as doing rather weird things, like calling Akechi senpai even outside of the Metaverse (much to her sister's confusion) and believing that Dead Lobster could carry on the team's legacy should [[BlackComedy they all die in a Palace]].
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: As she takes the role of Futaba, she starts the story extremely depressed due to the death of a close family member (in this case, her sister Sae).
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* PerpetualFrowner: Has been shown frowning in every drawing of her so far. Not surprising, considering what she's gone through.
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-->''Lucky strike''
-->''Danger! High voltage!''
-->''Any way the wind blows''
-->''Après Moi, Le Déluge''
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* NotSoAboveItAll: [[https://twitter.com/jazlyn_jin/status/1635667853532872709 The concept art]] of Haru's [=LeBlanc=] attic room shows one where Crow is easily bribed to helping Haru via ''Featherman merch''.
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* VillainHasAPoint: As shown by [[https://twitter.com/crescentmoontea/status/1641425777693716483?s=46&t=8y0jigmjnGkhzbyjCQRXQQ this post]], even Haru admits that he has a point when his shadow insults her father.
-->'''Shadow Madarame''': Okumura? As in, ''the'' slimy, snivelling, conniving, sour-faced, unscrupulous, bootlicking Okumura?\\
'''Haru''': I see you're well acquainted.\\
'''Shadow Madarame''': (''Laughs'') I like this one!
-->'''Shadow Madarame''': Okumura? As in, ''the'' slimy, snivelling, conniving, sour-faced, unscrupulous, bootlicking Okumura?\\
'''Haru''': I see you're well acquainted.\\
'''Shadow Madarame''': (''Laughs'') I like this one!
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[[/folder]]
[[folder:XVII - The Moon]]
!!Kasumi Yoshizawa
Sumire's sister, who's also a gymnast like her.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: She's alive and well in this AU.
[[folder:XVII - The Moon]]
!!Kasumi Yoshizawa
Sumire's sister, who's also a gymnast like her.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: She's alive and well in this AU.
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[[folder:XVI - The Tower
!!Nozami Akechi
!!Nozami Akechi
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!!NozamiTower]]
!!Nozomi Akechi
!!Nozami
!!Nozomi Akechi
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[[folder:XVI - The Tower
!!Nozami Akechi
->''A quiet and unusual child who doesn't hesitate to speak her mind. Enjoys drawing and birds''
Jin Akechi's daughter.
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* OriginalCharacter: She's entirely original to the plot, with no real equivelent in the original story.
[[folder:XVI - The Tower
!!Nozami Akechi
->''A quiet and unusual child who doesn't hesitate to speak her mind. Enjoys drawing and birds''
Jin Akechi's daughter.
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* OriginalCharacter: She's entirely original to the plot, with no real equivelent in the original story.
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!!!'''Personas''': {{Main/Raiju}}, [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Cerberus]], [[Myth/EgyptianMythology Anubis]]
!!!'''Personas''': Morrigan, Crowley, Hereward
!!!'''Personas''': Oshichi, Kikuri-Hime, Suzaku
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!!!'''Personas''': Babel, Seraph, Adam
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!!!'''Personas''': [[{{Theatre/Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[{{Literature/Rapunzel}} Rapunzel]], [[Myth/ArthurianLegend Vivian]]
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!!!'''Personas''': Le Horla, D'Artagnan, Raoul
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!!!'''Personas''': Daphne, [[Myth/ClassicalMythology Medusa, Persephone]]
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A mysterious crow-like human who Haru and Sumire save from Madarame's Palace. In the real world, he's an actual crow, who is allowed residence in [=LaBlanc=] after a bit of convincing, provided he stays out of sight of the customers.
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A mysterious crow-like human who Haru and Sumire save from Madarame's Palace. In the real world, he's an actual crow, who is allowed residence in [=LaBlanc=] [=LeBlanc=] after a bit of convincing, provided he stays out of sight of the customers.
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The son of Fumiko and Atsuto Kurusu, two socialites who own a modeling company who forcibly engage him to Mika against his will in spite of him not being romantically interested in woman. He secretly works at [=LaBlanc=] in his spare time to get away from his family, teaches Haru about infiltration tools and seemingly knows more than he lets on…
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The son of Fumiko and Atsuto Kurusu, two socialites who own a modeling company who forcibly engage him to Mika against his will in spite of him not being romantically interested in woman. He secretly works at [=LaBlanc=] [=LeBlanc=] in his spare time to get away from his family, teaches Haru about infiltration tools and seemingly knows more than he lets on…
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* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:He doesn't take the fact that [[MissingMom his mom]] being alive and well that greatly.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite being the first target instead of the second, there isn't much that changes about Madarame's crimes or palace.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite being the first target instead of the second, as well as working at Shujin, there isn't much that changes about Madarame's crimes or palace.
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%%* PerversePuppet: Her boss form is a massive puppet version of herself with elongated limbs with an exposed heart as its weak point.
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The fourth major target. Similar to Futaba in canon, she's a manifestation of the SurvivorsGuilt and self-hatred due to the death of [[CoolBigSis her sister Sae Nijima]]. She has fallen into a deep depression to the point where she can't bring herself to take care of herself, letting herself slowly die.\\
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The fourth major target. Similar to Shadow Futaba in canon, she's a manifestation of the SurvivorsGuilt and self-hatred due to the death of [[CoolBigSis her sister Sae Nijima]]. She has fallen into a deep depression to the point where she can't bring herself to take care of herself, letting herself slowly die.\\
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* AbusiveParents: Both of them force Akira into an ArrangedMarriage with Mika [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain despite Akira being gay]], and they force him into various modeling jobs just for the sake of money. To emphasize this, Cognitive Akira is a unnaturally perfect doll in a box.
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* AbusiveParents: Both of them force Akira into an ArrangedMarriage with Mika [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain despite Akira being gay]], and they force him into various modeling jobs just for the sake of money. To emphasize this, Cognitive Akira is a an unnaturally perfect doll in a box.
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* OCStandIn: Almost nothing is known about Akira's parents in canon, and WordOfGod says that how the Kurusu's are depicted here are more or less how the author and artist interpret them in canon, albeit eviler.
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:From the author and artists' words on twitter, the Kurusu's aren't too different from their original timeline selves that Akira knew and is familiar with. In this story, Akira's fame as a model and their modelling agency gaining fame and prestige caused them to be greedier than their original selves and turn them into Palace rulers in this story.]]
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: Due to her AdaptationalAgnstDowngrade, and thus lacking her {{hikikomori}} phase, she is far more social active from the start.
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[[folder:In General]]
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* GenderEqualEnsemble: There are four male Palace Rulers (Madarame, Kobawakawa, Atsuto and Kamoshida) and four female ones (Nanami, Makoto, Fumiko and Wakaba).
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* GenderEqualEnsemble: There are four male Palace Rulers (Madarame, Kobawakawa, Atsuto and Kamoshida) and four female ones (Nanami, Makoto, Fumiko and Wakaba).
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: Due to her AdaptationalAgnstDowngrade, and thus lacking her {{hikikomori}} phase, she is far more social active from the start.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: In ''Persona 5'', she was one of the possible romance options for Joker. Here, she had a mutual crush on Shiho that she couldn't act on.