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* HatedByAll: Thirteen years as a JerkAss who can't be punished because his telepathy is that important to the Hive can do this to a person. It's clear that none of the other telepaths like him, and many members of his unit can't stand him either.
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* HatedByAll: Thirteen years as a JerkAss who can't be punished because his telepathy is that important to the Hive can do this to a person. It's clear that none of the other telepaths like him, and many members of his unit can't stand him either. One of the members of his own Tactical team apparently attempted to stab him, managing to draw blood but not much more than that.
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* JerkAss: He takes out his anger at his flaky telepathy on his team. It is strongly implied that he was stabbed by a member of his own team. [[spoiler:Becomes much more so when he declares war on Amber over her role in Olivia's reset and her usage of the Light Angel codename.]]
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* JerkAss: He takes out his anger at his flaky telepathy on his team. It team, to the point where it is strongly implied that he was stabbed by a member one of the members of his own team. Tactical team tried to stab him after being pushed too far. [[spoiler:Becomes much more so when he declares war on Amber Amber, nominally over her role in Olivia's reset and her usage of the Light Angel codename.]]
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FirstPersonPerspective narrator and protagonist. She has no idea what she'll be good at or what use the Hive will find for her as she goes into Lottery, only to discover that she is an (exceptionally rare) full telepath.
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FirstPersonPerspective narrator and protagonist. She has no idea what she'll be good at or what use the Hive will find for her as she goes into Lottery, only to discover that she is an (exceptionally rare) full telepath. ID number 2514-0172-912.
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* CaneFu: Forge picks up that the ebony cane that Wilder uses is clearly designed to be a weapon in addition to its use as a support.
* RespectedByTheRespected: Wilder's status as a living legend is cemented when Adika unhesitatingly lets him take command of Amber's defense in a crisis, where he had previously refused to hand it off to anyone else including his own deputies or Claire's final strike team leader even if that meant letting someone else take charge of a crucial strike.
* RespectedByTheRespected: Wilder's status as a living legend is cemented when Adika unhesitatingly lets him take command of Amber's defense in a crisis, where he had previously refused to hand it off to anyone else including his own deputies or Claire's final strike team leader even if that meant letting someone else take charge of a crucial strike.
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* CaneFu: Forge picks up that the ebony ebony-handled cane that Wilder uses is clearly designed to be a weapon in addition to its use as a support.
* RespectedByTheRespected: Wilder's status as a living legend is cemented when Adika unhesitatingly lets him take command of Amber's defense in acrisis, where he crisis. Adika had previously refused to hand it off to let anyone else command the defenses - including his own deputies or Claire's final strike team leader - even if that meant letting someone else had to take charge of a crucial strike. strike.
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A member of Amber's strike team. [[spoiler:Gets kicked out of the unit for repeated failures and goes full wild bee, planning to kill Adika and Amber.]]
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A member of Amber's strike team. [[spoiler:Gets kicked out of the unit for repeated failures and goes full wild bee, planning to kill Adika and Amber.]]team with a rough relationship with his brother, who was imprinted as a strike team leader.
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Initial candidate for Amber’s liaison team leader. Fired just before the unit went operational due to FantasticRacism against telepaths. [[spoiler:Venus, in Jupiter’s group of saboteurs.]]
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Initial candidate for Amber’s liaison team leader. Fired just before the unit went operational due to FantasticRacism against telepaths. [[spoiler:Venus, in Jupiter’s group of saboteurs.]]
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Amber's father. He was raised on Level 14, but ended up on Level 27, working on breeding Comfort Cats. [[spoiler:He was a duty child of Claire's oldest child, given up for adoption.]]
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Amber's father. He was raised on Level 14, but ended up on Level 27, working on breeding Comfort Cats. [[spoiler:He was a duty child of Claire's oldest child, given up for adoption.]]
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Amber’s younger brother by five years; he goes to teen level just after Amber’s Lottery. [[spoiler:A borderline telepath, possibly due to being Claire's great-grandson.]]
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Amber’s younger brother by five years; he goes to teen level just after Amber’s Lottery. [[spoiler:A borderline telepath, possibly due to being Claire's great-grandson.]]
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The Hive's Gold Commander, in charge of the defense of the Hive against both internal and external enemies. [[spoiler:Married to Ambassador Paula, younger sibling of Elliott, as of ''Adversary'']]
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The Hive's Gold Commander, in charge of the defense of the Hive against both internal and external enemies. [[spoiler:Married to Ambassador Paula, younger sibling of Elliott, as of ''Adversary'']]
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Head of Hive Politics, a Level 1 Senior Ambassador. He is the oldest of six Duty Children, and was an avid surfer on Teen Level. [[spoiler:Head of the Council of Gaia, the secret council that runs the Hive.]]
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Head of Hive Politics, a Level 1 Senior Ambassador. He is the oldest of six Duty Children, and was an avid surfer on Teen Level. [[spoiler:Head of the Council of Gaia, the secret council that runs the Hive.]]
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A legendary Strike Team leader from Claire's unit, and [[spoiler:Amber and Gregas's great-grandfather]]. Despite being in his nineties and walking with a cane, he is still considered a deadly combatant.
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Admiral Tregarth's wife, who came in as driftwood from a French-speaking Hive's Sea Farm. She acts as a general troubleshooter for the Sea Farm, as well as working on the ships sometimes to help out. [[spoiler:Formerly known as Celandine, the woman that Morton kidnapped and tried to force to love him.]]
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Admiral Tregarth's wife, who came in as driftwood from a French-speaking Hive's Sea Farm. She acts as a general troubleshooter for the Sea Farm, as well as working on the ships sometimes to help out. [[spoiler:Formerly known as Celandine, the woman that Morton kidnapped and tried to force to love him.]]
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: [[spoiler: Keith]] is admittedly an unreliable source, but he describes her as having been drawn to the darkness in him just as he was drawn to the light in her.
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* ShadowArchetype: Inverted. As a troublesome telepath that the Hive was able to actually get under control by posting him for trade and forcing him to use his sole transfer to exit the trading system, he's basically what Keith could have been if the Hive wasn't in so dire need of every telepath that they're forced to let him run rampant.
* ShadowArchetype: Inverted. As a troublesome telepath that the Hive was able to actually get under control by posting him for trade and forcing him to use his sole transfer to exit the trading system, he's basically what Keith could have been if the Hive wasn't in so dire need of every telepath that they're forced to let him run rampant.
* CharacterDevelopment: Surprisingly, while he's still a deeply unpleasant person when he reappears, he's mostly content with his new life, aware enough of consequences to stop bullying people and playing cruel pranks, and he cares deeply enough for his cleaning robots to risk getting into trouble to get them needed help.
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: He followed everyone in his corridor back to their home levels so he could tell where they were from.
* SpannerInTheWorks: By tracking Amber down at New Year to try to get help for his robots that are getting "sick," he causes her unit to discover Prospero's groupette room early and forced the mastermind to change their plans on the fly.
* StalkerWithoutACrush: He followed everyone in his corridor back to their home levels so he could tell where they were from.
* StalkerWithoutACrush: He followed everyone in his corridor back to their home levels so he could tell where they were from.
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* Jerkass: What he comes across as in Lucas's recollections of him prior to his abandonment of his family and subsequent reset. Mention is made of him pointedly grumbling about language details cluttering up his imprint and how primitive the Hive's electrical items are, not because he was actually bothered by those things but just as a way of emphasizing his inherent superiority as someone the Hive found valuable enough to pay to bring in from another Hive.
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* Jerkass: JerkAss: What he comes across as in Lucas's recollections of him prior to his abandonment of his family and subsequent reset. Mention is made of him pointedly grumbling about language details cluttering up his imprint and how primitive the Hive's electrical items are, not because he was actually bothered by those things but just as a way of emphasizing his inherent superiority as someone the Hive found valuable enough to pay to bring in from another Hive.
* RedHerring: Initially seen as a possible suspect in a poisoning attack on the visiting Telepath Unit, since she was one of the few people who knew about the furniture delivery with enough time to have interfered with it and who isn't nearby enough for Amber to read her mind and eliminate her as a suspect, up until the team realizes that the attacker [[spoiler: must have used a drone.]]
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* Determinator: Despite her traumatic injury, having her claustrophobia triggered, and being afraid of nosies, she gives permission for her mind to be read so the security unit can hurry up and find the person who is setting traps before more people get hurt, and she unhesitatingly puts herself on the line to help the investigation even while personally struggling with the loss of her dream of being a sea captain. [[spoiler: This foreshadows her lottery result as a future Sea Farm Admiral, since such a vital post would have to go to someone who is not just intelligent and loyal but brave and resilient enough to handle it.]]
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* Determinator: {{Determinator}}: Despite her traumatic injury, having her claustrophobia triggered, and being afraid of nosies, she gives permission for her mind to be read so the security unit can hurry up and find the person who is setting traps before more people get hurt, and she unhesitatingly puts herself on the line to help the investigation even while personally struggling with the loss of her dream of being a sea captain. [[spoiler: This foreshadows her lottery result as a future Sea Farm Admiral, since such a vital post would have to go to someone who is not just intelligent and loyal but brave and resilient enough to handle it.]]
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* Jerkass: What he comes across as in Lucas's recollections of him prior to his abandonment of his family and subsequent reset. Mention is made of him pointedly grumbling about language details cluttering up his imprint and how primitive the Hive's electrical items are, not because he was actually bothered by those things but just as a way of emphasizing his inherent superiority as someone the Hive found valuable enough to pay to bring in from another Hive.
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*TookALevelInKindness: Being reset and put on medication may have cost him his imprint and over sixty levels of status, but it also seems to have made him a more pleasant person and a much better father to his subsequent five children than he ever was to Lucas.
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* CommonalityConnection: Bonds with Eli over them both having recently suffered a major injury to a limb.
* Determinator: Despite her traumatic injury, having her claustrophobia triggered, and being afraid of nosies, she gives permission for her mind to be read so the security unit can hurry up and find the person who is setting traps before more people get hurt, and she unhesitatingly puts herself on the line to help the investigation even while personally struggling with the loss of her dream of being a sea captain. [[spoiler: This foreshadows her lottery result as a future Sea Farm Admiral, since such a vital post would have to go to someone who is not just intelligent and loyal but brave and resilient enough to handle it.]]
* Determinator: Despite her traumatic injury, having her claustrophobia triggered, and being afraid of nosies, she gives permission for her mind to be read so the security unit can hurry up and find the person who is setting traps before more people get hurt, and she unhesitatingly puts herself on the line to help the investigation even while personally struggling with the loss of her dream of being a sea captain. [[spoiler: This foreshadows her lottery result as a future Sea Farm Admiral, since such a vital post would have to go to someone who is not just intelligent and loyal but brave and resilient enough to handle it.]]
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Amber has a fear of heights, and a fear of nosies. She also has a fear of Outside, especially the ‘truesun’, [[spoiler:until the implant from Genex is removed]]. She, of course, has to deal with all of those.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Amber has a fear of heights, and a fear of nosies. She also has a fear of Outside, especially the ‘truesun’, [[spoiler:until the implant imprint from Genex is removed]]. She, of course, has to deal with all of those.
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* DeadGuyJunior: She decides to have a pair of embryos from her late husband implanted, and to have his children before marrying Adika.
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* HasAType: In the discussion about teen games, Lucas realizes that she is irresistably attracted to dominant, risk-taking men. Her teen level boyfriend was so involved with teen games that she reached Colonel in two of them, she was married to a member of Keith's strike team within two months of her Lottery, and after her husband's death, her BelligerentSexualTension with Adika starts up almost immediately after he arrives at Hive Futura.
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* HasAType: In the discussion about teen games, Lucas realizes that she is irresistably irresistibly attracted to dominant, risk-taking men. Her teen level boyfriend was so involved with teen games that she reached Colonel in two of them, she was married to a member of Keith's strike team within two months of her Lottery, and after her husband's death, her BelligerentSexualTension with Adika starts up almost immediately after he arrives at Hive Futura.
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: She decides to have a pair of embryos from her late husband implanted, and to have his children before marrying Adika.
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* TraumaButton: Buzz is deeply traumatized by having Franklin suddenly appear in front of her.
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* TraumaButton: Anything related to Franklin, the murderer she encountered and survived as a child. It's mildly played for laughs when Forge has to dye his hair a similar shade of blond to Franklin's while undercover and Buzz is deeply traumatized by having declares that "certain things aren't going to happen" until he dyes it back, but seeing Franklin suddenly appear in front of her.himself causes her to spiral.
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* RupturedAppendix: Amber at first thought he'd been stabbed. He feels it's part of the reason he didn't end up as a strike team leader, as he was recovering when Adika made the decision.
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* RupturedAppendix: Amber at first thought he'd been stabbed. He feels it's part of the reason he didn't end up as a strike deputy team leader, as he was recovering when Adika made the decision.
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!Other members of Amber's team
[[folder:Fran]]
Initial candidate for Amber’s liaison team leader. Fired just before the unit went operational due to FantasticRacism against telepaths. [[spoiler:Venus, in Jupiter’s group of saboteurs.]]
[[folder:Fran]]
Initial candidate for Amber’s liaison team leader. Fired just before the unit went operational due to FantasticRacism against telepaths. [[spoiler:Venus, in Jupiter’s group of saboteurs.]]
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A former member of Claire's Strike Team, brought back to help bolster Amber's
[[folder:Fran]]
Initial candidate for Amber’s liaison team leader. Fired just before
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* FaceHeelTurn: Was tasked by Jupiter with [[spoiler:stabbing Amber.]]
* FalseFriend: Tries to run a telepath’s liaison team while hating telepaths.
* NiceToTheWaiter: The 'Rude to the Waiter' version. Fran tells Amber not to bother being nice to a mere Level 57 Law Enforcement Office Cleaner (Hannah).
* TheResenter: Was bypassed for Sapphire’s liaison team, and spent the next twenty-five years building up a dislike of telepaths.
* FalseFriend: Tries to run a telepath’s liaison team while hating telepaths.
* NiceToTheWaiter: The 'Rude to the Waiter' version. Fran tells Amber not to bother being nice to a mere Level 57 Law Enforcement Office Cleaner (Hannah).
* TheResenter: Was bypassed for Sapphire’s liaison team, and spent the next twenty-five years building up a dislike of telepaths.
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* FaceHeelTurn: Was tasked by Jupiter with [[spoiler:stabbing Amber.]]
* FalseFriend: Tries to runUncertifiedExpert: He knows many fine points of Hiveist theology, and led Hiveist ceremonies in Claire's unit, but insists that his doing so is technically a telepath’s liaison team while hating telepaths.
* NiceToTheWaiter: The 'Rude to the Waiter' version. Fran tells Amberbreach of doctrine as he's not to bother being nice to imprinted as a mere Level 57 Law Enforcement Office Cleaner (Hannah).
* TheResenter: Was bypassed for Sapphire’s liaison team, and spent the next twenty-five years building up a dislike of telepaths.Ministrant.
* FalseFriend: Tries to run
* NiceToTheWaiter: The 'Rude to the Waiter' version. Fran tells Amber
* TheResenter: Was bypassed for Sapphire’s liaison team, and spent the next twenty-five years building up a dislike of telepaths.
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[[folder:Sofia]]
A Level 1 Mural Painter that Amber invites into the unit, partly to liven the place up but mostly so she can resume her relationship with Matias.
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[[folder:Fran]]
Initial candidate for Amber’s liaison team leader. Fired just before the
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* EccentricArtist: Hates having people watch her paint, and threatens to throw paint at them until they leave. Even the telepath.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Dated Matias on Teen Level, and thought they'd be separated after Lottery. Amber finds out and convinces Sofia to come join the unit, and Matias and Sofia resume their relationship shortly thereafter.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Dated Matias on Teen Level, and thought they'd be separated after Lottery. Amber finds out and convinces Sofia to come join the unit, and Matias and Sofia resume their relationship shortly thereafter.
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* EccentricArtist: Hates having people watch her paint, and threatens FaceHeelTurn: Was tasked by Jupiter with [[spoiler:stabbing Amber.]]
* FalseFriend: Tries tothrow paint at them until they leave. Even run a telepath’s liaison team while hating telepaths.
* NiceToTheWaiter: The 'Rude to thetelepath.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Dated Matias on Teen Level, and thought they'd be separated after Lottery.Waiter' version. Fran tells Amber finds out not to bother being nice to a mere Level 57 Law Enforcement Office Cleaner (Hannah).
* TheResenter: Was bypassed for Sapphire’s liaison team, andconvinces Sofia to come join spent the unit, and Matias and Sofia resume their relationship shortly thereafter.next twenty-five years building up a dislike of telepaths.
* FalseFriend: Tries to
* NiceToTheWaiter: The 'Rude to the
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Dated Matias on Teen Level, and thought they'd be separated after Lottery.
* TheResenter: Was bypassed for Sapphire’s liaison team, and
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[[folder:Emili]]
Lucas's deputy. In a relationship with Rothan. Notably, only imprinted as a deputy tactical commander as Lottery did not feel she could handle the strain of being a lead tactical commander full-time.
Lucas's deputy. In a relationship with Rothan. Notably, only imprinted as a deputy tactical commander as Lottery did not feel she could handle the strain of being a lead tactical commander full-time.
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Lucas's deputy. In a
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* MissionControl: When Lucas isn't available or is out with Amber's team, Emili takes over as tactical commander.
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* HighSchoolSweethearts: Dated Matias on Teen Level, and thought they'd be separated after Lottery. Amber finds outwith Amber's team, Emili takes over as tactical commander.and convinces Sofia to come join the unit, and Matias and Sofia resume their relationship shortly thereafter.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Dated Matias on Teen Level, and thought they'd be separated after Lottery. Amber finds out
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[[folder:Kareem]]
A member of the tactical team. Twenty-five years ago, he was a Tactical Commander when he called a strike wrong. Seventeen people died, and he was unable to continue as a commander.
A member of the tactical team. Twenty-five years ago, he was a Tactical Commander when he called a strike wrong. Seventeen people died, and he was unable to continue as a commander.
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A member of the
[[folder:Emili]]
Lucas's deputy. In a relationship with Rothan. Notably, only imprinted as a deputy tactical
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* MyGreatestFailure: Not the failed strike that killed seventeen people - quitting as tactical leader afterwards, and handing the job over to somebody who wasn't as good. He estimates that hundreds of people died because of that.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Not the failed strike that killed seventeen people - quitting MissionControl: When Lucas isn't available or is out with Amber's team, Emili takes over as tactical leader afterwards, and handing the job over to somebody who wasn't as good. He estimates that hundreds of people died because of that.commander.
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[[folder:Gideon]]
A member of the tactical team. He's seventy years old, and initially started in Claire's unit. Father of two of Claire's duty children. He was brought back to give long-term perspective to the team.
A member of the tactical team. He's seventy years old, and initially started in Claire's unit. Father of two of Claire's duty children. He was brought back to give long-term perspective to the team.
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A member of the tactical team.
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* CoolOldGuy: Gives good advice to Amber and Lucas, and the rest of the team.
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* CoolOldGuy: Gives good advice to Amber MyGreatestFailure: Not the failed strike that killed seventeen people - quitting as tactical leader afterwards, and Lucas, and handing the rest job over to somebody who wasn't as good. He estimates that hundreds of the team.people died because of that.
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[[folder:Beckett]]
A Lottery-mate of Lucas, and formerly on Keith's tactical team with him. The best pattern analyst in the Hive. Moves to Amber's team after Keith fires him to hurt Lucas. Likely autistic, and has a Comfort Cat (named [=CeeCee=]) to help keep his anxieties in check.
A Lottery-mate of Lucas, and formerly on Keith's tactical team with him. The best pattern analyst in the Hive. Moves to Amber's team after Keith fires him to hurt Lucas. Likely autistic, and has a Comfort Cat (named [=CeeCee=]) to help keep his anxieties in check.
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* HollywoodAutism: Subverted. While he is never formally labeled as autistic, his symptoms and abilities are much more in line with reality. He has focus issues, strong objections to people breaking rules, sensory-processing issues, and strong aversion to change.
* SensoryOverload: He has a sensory-processing disorder, causing all sensory inputs to be much stronger. When Amber reads his mind while finding him, she hears a loud thumping noise; when she reads Lucas's mind in the same location, she finds it's a quietly-dripping water tap. He normally wears special headphones and glasses when outside controlled areas.
* SensoryOverload: He has a sensory-processing disorder, causing all sensory inputs to be much stronger. When Amber reads his mind while finding him, she hears a loud thumping noise; when she reads Lucas's mind in the same location, she finds it's a quietly-dripping water tap. He normally wears special headphones and glasses when outside controlled areas.
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* HollywoodAutism: Subverted. While he is never formally labeled as autistic, his symptoms and abilities are much more in line with reality. He has focus issues, strong objections CoolOldGuy: Gives good advice to people breaking rules, sensory-processing issues, and strong aversion to change.
* SensoryOverload: He has a sensory-processing disorder, causing all sensory inputs to be much stronger. WhenAmber reads his mind while finding him, she hears a loud thumping noise; when she reads Lucas's mind in and Lucas, and the same location, she finds it's a quietly-dripping water tap. He normally wears special headphones and glasses when outside controlled areas.rest of the team.
* SensoryOverload: He has a sensory-processing disorder, causing all sensory inputs to be much stronger. When
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!Other telepaths
[[folder:Morton]]
The oldest active telepath, approximately 40 years older than Amber.
[[folder:Morton]]
The oldest active telepath, approximately 40 years older than Amber.
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[[folder:Morton]]
A Lottery-mate of Lucas, and formerly on Keith's tactical team with him. The
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* TheAtoner: After what happened to Celandine, he became focused on propriety and not abusing the authority he has as a telepath. He takes this to extremes, disdaining Sapphire for her informal relationships.
* UnrequitedLoveLastsForever: He still mourns Celandine, forty years after her death.
* UnrequitedLoveLastsForever: He still mourns Celandine, forty years after her death.
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* TheAtoner: After what happened to Celandine, HollywoodAutism: Subverted. While he became focused on propriety is never formally labeled as autistic, his symptoms and not abusing abilities are much more in line with reality. He has focus issues, strong objections to people breaking rules, sensory-processing issues, and strong aversion to change.
* SensoryOverload: He has a sensory-processing disorder, causing all sensory inputs to be much stronger. When Amber reads his mind while finding him, she hears a loud thumping noise; when she reads Lucas's mind in theauthority he has as same location, she finds it's a telepath. quietly-dripping water tap. He takes this to extremes, disdaining Sapphire for her informal relationships.
* UnrequitedLoveLastsForever: He still mourns Celandine, forty years after her death.normally wears special headphones and glasses when outside controlled areas.
* SensoryOverload: He has a sensory-processing disorder, causing all sensory inputs to be much stronger. When Amber reads his mind while finding him, she hears a loud thumping noise; when she reads Lucas's mind in the
* UnrequitedLoveLastsForever: He still mourns Celandine, forty years after her death.
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[[folder:Sapphire]]
A telepath known for working hard and playing hard. She is twenty-five years older than Amber.
A telepath known for working hard and playing hard. She is twenty-five years older than Amber.
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A telepath known for working hard and playing hard. She is twenty-five
[[folder:Morton]]
The oldest active telepath, approximately 40 years older than Amber.
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* HasAType: Her strike team members are all tall, blond, blue-eyed, fair-skinned men with determined chins. Rumor is that about half of the strike team dyes their hair.
* ReallyGetsAround: Strongly implied that she has had several lovers among her strike team. She clears echoes through "physical love", so this may be necessary for her mental health.
* TheStoic: Unclear how much of this is her actual personality and how much is her trying to not expose herself before another telepath, but she shows no emotions when she talks to Amber.
* ReallyGetsAround: Strongly implied that she has had several lovers among her strike team. She clears echoes through "physical love", so this may be necessary for her mental health.
* TheStoic: Unclear how much of this is her actual personality and how much is her trying to not expose herself before another telepath, but she shows no emotions when she talks to Amber.
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* HasAType: Her strike team members are all tall, blond, blue-eyed, fair-skinned men with determined chins. Rumor is that about half of TheAtoner: After what happened to Celandine, he became focused on propriety and not abusing the strike team dyes their hair.
* ReallyGetsAround: Strongly implied that sheauthority he has had several lovers among her strike team. She clears echoes through "physical love", so as a telepath. He takes this may be necessary to extremes, disdaining Sapphire for her mental health.
informal relationships.
*TheStoic: Unclear how much of this is UnrequitedLoveLastsForever: He still mourns Celandine, forty years after her actual personality and how much is her trying to not expose herself before another telepath, but she shows no emotions when she talks to Amber.death.
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[[folder:Mira]]
A well-loved telepath, 17 years older than Amber. She has Down Syndrome or a similar disorder, which causes physical and mental limitations.
A well-loved telepath, 17 years older than Amber. She has Down Syndrome or a similar disorder, which causes physical and mental limitations.
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* FlowersOfFemininity: Her unit is filled with flowers, and when Amber sees her she's wearing a flower-print dress, standing next to a vase of flowers, with the wall behind her covered in flower images.
* HandicappedBadass: A significant genetic disorder that causes both physical and mental issues, but she’s also one of the Hive’s few telepaths, and is deeply loved by her team. Morton holds her up as an example Amber should emulate, as opposed to Sapphire or Keith. When we meet her, she is full of self-confidence and joy.
* HappilyMarried: She remarries Geo, her teen-level boyfriend, every Valentine, and is clearly totally in love with him.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Geo was her boyfriend on teen level, and they've been together ever since.
* HandicappedBadass: A significant genetic disorder that causes both physical and mental issues, but she’s also one of the Hive’s few telepaths, and is deeply loved by her team. Morton holds her up as an example Amber should emulate, as opposed to Sapphire or Keith. When we meet her, she is full of self-confidence and joy.
* HappilyMarried: She remarries Geo, her teen-level boyfriend, every Valentine, and is clearly totally in love with him.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Geo was her boyfriend on teen level, and they've been together ever since.
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* FlowersOfFemininity: HasAType: Her unit is filled strike team members are all tall, blond, blue-eyed, fair-skinned men with flowers, and when Amber sees her she's wearing a flower-print dress, standing next to a vase of flowers, with the wall behind her covered in flower images.
* HandicappedBadass: A significant genetic disorderdetermined chins. Rumor is that causes both physical and about half of the strike team dyes their hair.
* ReallyGetsAround: Strongly implied that she has had several lovers among her strike team. She clears echoes through "physical love", so this may be necessary for her mentalissues, health.
* TheStoic: Unclear how much of this is her actual personality and how much is her trying to not expose herself before another telepath, butshe’s also one of the Hive’s few telepaths, and is deeply loved by her team. Morton holds her up as an example Amber should emulate, as opposed to Sapphire or Keith. When we meet her, she is full of self-confidence and joy.
* HappilyMarried: She remarries Geo, her teen-level boyfriend, every Valentine, and is clearly totally in love with him.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Geo was her boyfriend on teen level, and they've been together ever since.shows no emotions when she talks to Amber.
* HandicappedBadass: A significant genetic disorder
* ReallyGetsAround: Strongly implied that she has had several lovers among her strike team. She clears echoes through "physical love", so this may be necessary for her mental
* TheStoic: Unclear how much of this is her actual personality and how much is her trying to not expose herself before another telepath, but
* HappilyMarried: She remarries Geo, her teen-level boyfriend, every Valentine, and is clearly totally in love with him.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Geo was her boyfriend on teen level, and they've been together ever since.
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[[folder:Keith]]
The youngest active telepath other than Amber. He is thirteen years older than Amber. His telepathy tends to flake out unpredictably, putting his team in danger.
The youngest active telepath other than Amber. He is thirteen years older than Amber. His telepathy tends to flake out unpredictably, putting his team in danger.
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The youngest active telepath other than Amber. He is thirteen
A well-loved telepath, 17 years older than Amber.
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* FlowersOfFemininity: Her unit is filled with flowers, and when Amber sees her she's wearing a flower-print dress, standing next to a vase of flowers, with the wall behind her covered in flower images.
* HandicappedBadass: A significant genetic disorder that causes both physical and mental issues, but she’s also one of the Hive’s few telepaths, and is deeply loved by her team. Morton holds her up as an example Amber should emulate, as opposed to Sapphire or Keith. When we meet her, she is full of self-confidence and joy.
* HappilyMarried: She remarries Geo, her teen-level boyfriend, every Valentine, and is clearly totally in love with him.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Geo was her boyfriend on teen level, and they've been together ever since.
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[[folder:Keith]]
The youngest active telepath other than Amber. He is thirteen years older than Amber. His telepathy tends to flake out unpredictably, putting his team in danger.
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* HandicappedBadass: A significant genetic disorder that causes both physical and mental issues, but she’s also one of the Hive’s few telepaths, and is deeply loved by her team. Morton holds her up as an example Amber should emulate, as opposed to Sapphire or Keith. When we meet her, she is full of self-confidence and joy.
* HappilyMarried: She remarries Geo, her teen-level boyfriend, every Valentine, and is clearly totally in love with him.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Geo was her boyfriend on teen level, and they've been together ever since.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Keith]]
The youngest active telepath other than Amber. He is thirteen years older than Amber. His telepathy tends to flake out unpredictably, putting his team in danger.
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* LadyInRed: Her love of tight, revealing, red dresses shows her forceful personality and blatant sexuality. When she wants to get back together with Forge, she puts on a red dress, commenting, "I think red suits me better than black."
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Couldn’t wait for Amber to leave for teen level so he could have her room.
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Couldn’t wait for Amber to leave for teen level so he could have her room. Once he finds out his SecretLegacy, he starts getting into everything in an attempt to help protect the Hive.
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* SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome: His sister is Level 1 and (allegedly) a researcher with her own lab. Until he finds out he's a borderline telepath and will also be Level 1, he's quite sure there is no way he can possibly compare.
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* TheChessmaster: Amber specifically thinks of him with those words, after seeing how he has manipulated both Adversary Aura and Hive England to get what he wants out of the investigation.
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Head of Hive Politics, a Level 1 Senior Ambassador. He is the oldest of six Duty Children, and was an avid surfer on Teen Level.
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Head of Hive Politics, a Level 1 Senior Ambassador. He is the oldest of six Duty Children, and was an avid surfer on Teen Level. [[spoiler:Head of the Council of Gaia, the secret council that runs the Hive.]]
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Lucas's father, who abandoned him at age 6. Shortly afterwards, he and a woman who is not Lucas's mother were both reset and lowered to Level 63. He was told afterwards that he had a head injury that caused memory loss and loss of his imprint, and to take medication to help him with his memory. The medication is actually a drug that removes whatever element of his personality made him do what caused him to be reset; in the process, he became a much nicer person and is a loving parent to his other five duty children.
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Lucas's father, who was traded from Hive Zurich. He abandoned him at age Lucas and left his wife when Lucas was 6. Shortly afterwards, he and a woman who is not Lucas's mother were both reset and lowered to Level 63. He was told afterwards that he had a head injury that caused memory loss and loss of his imprint, and to take medication to help him with his memory. The medication is actually a drug that removes whatever element of his personality made him do what caused him to be reset; in the process, he became a much nicer person and is a loving parent to his other five duty children. He is the nominal leader of the gathering of Hive Zurich emigrés, and given the nickname Prospero due to his oldest daughter being named Miranda.
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* ForbiddenLove: Downplayed. Eli was desperately in love with his Teen Level girlfriend, Becca, but despite being only a few months apart in age, those few months have a Lottery between them. Romance across Lottery years isn't forbidden but it's strongly advised against due to the older partner having to leave the younger one behind on Teen Level for at least another year.
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!Antagonists
'''This section contains unmarked spoilers for all books!'''
[[folder:Telepath]]
!!Elden
An agent from Hive Genex, sent to imprint Amber to request a transfer as soon as she completes Lottery.
'''This section contains unmarked spoilers for all books!'''
[[folder:Telepath]]
!!Elden
An agent from Hive Genex, sent to imprint Amber to request a transfer as soon as she completes Lottery.
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'''This section contains unmarked spoilers for all books!'''
[[folder:Telepath]]
!!Elden
An agent
[[folder:Adversary Aura]]
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The leader of the team sent by Hive Genex to
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!!!Provides examples of:
* AirVentPassageway: Uses the air vents and structural pillars to get around the Hive secretly.
* DespairEventHorizon: When he realizes that Amber has broken free of his control. His imprints are already dangerously large, and the realization breaks his mind.
* DistinguishingMark: Has a birthmark on his left cheek, which was where the genetic compatibility mark Hive Genex implants in children was removed so as not to give away that he was a spy.
* TrapMaster: Sets several traps for Amber and her team, using a three-year-old girl (also named Amber) as bait for the first one.
* WouldHurtAChild: Unsafely imprints Amber at age three, and uses another three-year-old girl as bait to trap Amber after she grows up.
* AirVentPassageway: Uses the air vents and structural pillars to get around the Hive secretly.
* DespairEventHorizon: When he realizes that Amber has broken free of his control. His imprints are already dangerously large, and the realization breaks his mind.
* DistinguishingMark: Has a birthmark on his left cheek, which was where the genetic compatibility mark Hive Genex implants in children was removed so as not to give away that he was a spy.
* TrapMaster: Sets several traps for Amber and her team, using a three-year-old girl (also named Amber) as bait for the first one.
* WouldHurtAChild: Unsafely imprints Amber at age three, and uses another three-year-old girl as bait to trap Amber after she grows up.
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*
* DespairEventHorizon: When he realizes that Amber has broken free of his control. His imprints are already dangerously large, and the realization breaks his mind.
* DistinguishingMark: Has a birthmark on his left cheek,
* TheDreaded: She was
* TrapMaster: Sets several traps for Amber and
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[[folder:Defender]]
!!Mars
Real name Martin. A pyromaniac from Jupiter's group of saboteurs. His job is setting a massive fire in Purple Zone, but he also burns the Security Unit that Fran had worked in, almost killing Lucas and Rothan, and killing the daughter of a member of Sapphire's strike team.
!!Mars
Real name Martin. A pyromaniac from Jupiter's group of saboteurs. His job is setting a massive fire in Purple Zone, but he also burns the Security Unit that Fran had worked in, almost killing Lucas and Rothan, and killing the daughter of a member of Sapphire's strike team.
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!!Mars
Real name Martin. A pyromaniac from Jupiter's group of saboteurs. His job is setting a massive fire in Purple Zone, but he also burns the Security Unit that Fran had worked in, almost killing Lucas
The Investigator sent by Joint Hive Treaty Enforcement to handle Hive England and
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Unlike everything we've heard about JHTE so far, he seems to be very fair and level-headed.
[[/folder]]
!Antagonists
'''This section contains unmarked spoilers for all books!'''
[[folder:Telepath]]
!!Elden
An agent from Hive Genex, sent to imprint Amber to request a transfer as soon as she completes Lottery.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Unlike everything we've heard about JHTE so far, he seems to be very fair and level-headed.
[[/folder]]
!Antagonists
'''This section contains unmarked spoilers for all books!'''
[[folder:Telepath]]
!!Elden
An agent from Hive Genex, sent to imprint Amber to request a transfer as soon as she completes Lottery.
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* AirVentPassageway: Uses the air vents and structural pillars to get around the Hive secretly.
* DespairEventHorizon: When he realizes that Amber has broken free of his control. His imprints are already dangerously large, and the realization breaks his mind.
* DistinguishingMark: Has a birthmark on his left cheek, which was where the genetic compatibility mark Hive Genex implants in children was removed so as not to give away that he was a spy.
* TrapMaster: Sets several traps for Amber and her team, using a three-year-old girl (also named Amber) as bait for the first one.
* WouldHurtAChild: Unsafely imprints Amber at age three, and uses another three-year-old girl as bait to trap Amber after she grows up.
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[[folder:Defender]]
!!Mars
Real name Martin. A pyromaniac from Jupiter's group of saboteurs. His job is setting a massive fire in Purple Zone, but he also burns the Security Unit that Fran had worked in, almost killing Lucas and Rothan, and killing the daughter of a member of Sapphire's strike team.
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!!!Provides examples of:
* DespairEventHorizon: When he realizes that Amber has broken free of his control. His imprints are already dangerously large, and the realization breaks his mind.
* DistinguishingMark: Has a birthmark on his left cheek, which was where the genetic compatibility mark Hive Genex implants in children was removed so as not to give away that he was a spy.
* TrapMaster: Sets several traps for Amber and her team, using a three-year-old girl (also named Amber) as bait for the first one.
* WouldHurtAChild: Unsafely imprints Amber at age three, and uses another three-year-old girl as bait to trap Amber after she grows up.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Defender]]
!!Mars
Real name Martin. A pyromaniac from Jupiter's group of saboteurs. His job is setting a massive fire in Purple Zone, but he also burns the Security Unit that Fran had worked in, almost killing Lucas and Rothan, and killing the daughter of a member of Sapphire's strike team.
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* TheTeetotaler: Adika does not drink or use any drugs at overnight clubs, because armed Strike Team members should never indulge in substances that affect their judgement, and their training and imprint mean that a Strike Team member is effectively never unarmed.
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The Hive's Gold Commander, in charge of the defense of the Hive against both internal and external enemies.
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The Hive's Gold Commander, in charge of the defense of the Hive against both internal and external enemies. [[spoiler:Married to Ambassador Paula, younger sibling of Elliott, as of ''Adversary'']]
* ButchLesbian: Downplayed. She's commander of the Hive's military and security services, a fighter pilot, typically seen wearing a Hive Defense uniform, and exclusively interested in women; however, she does have long hair, and we see her in a festival dress for New Year [[spoiler:and a lacy white wedding dress]].
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* PintsizedPowerhouse: She's tiny, a head smaller than Amber, and imprinted as leader of the Hive's military.
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* FieldPromotion: Suddenly promoted to Gold Commander at age 21 after Ryne retired and both of the other two people imprinted as Gold Commander (including Ryne's chosen successor) melted down under the stress.
* PintsizedPowerhouse: She's tiny, a head smaller than Amber, andimprinted as leader of the Hive's military.
* PintsizedPowerhouse: She's tiny, a head smaller than Amber, and
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* YoungAndInCharge: Promoted to Gold Commander at age 21 after Ryne retired and Ryne's chosen successor melted down under the stress, as did the only other person imprinted as Gold Commander.
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* YoungAndInCharge: Promoted to Became Gold Commander at age 21 after Ryne retired 21, and Ryne's chosen successor melted down under the stress, as did the is still only other person imprinted as Gold Commander.26.
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* CommitmentIssues: She's never been involved with someone for more than a couple weeks before.
* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: When she breaks up with Forge, she changes her hairstyle from loose curls to a much tighter, more formal look. When she realizes what happened and wants to get back together with him, she changes it back.
* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: When she breaks up with Forge, she changes her hairstyle from loose curls to a much tighter, more formal look. When she realizes what happened and wants to get back together with him, she changes it back.
* SignificantWardrobeShift: After the breakup with Forge, she changes from her previous tight, colorful dresses to serious black businesswear. When she is ready to offer to get back together again, she puts on one of her tight red dresses.
* TraumaButton: Buzz is deeply traumatized by having Franklin suddenly appear in front of her.
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! The Sea Farm
The Sea Farm is a separate installation from the main Hive; all Hives are required by treaty to maintain a Sea Farm with certain population numbers. It's almost entirely self-sufficient, and most people there don't go through Lottery, instead learning through apprenticeships.
The Sea Farm is a separate installation from the main Hive; all Hives are required by treaty to maintain a Sea Farm with certain population numbers. It's almost entirely self-sufficient, and most people there don't go through Lottery, instead learning through apprenticeships.
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Lucas's father, who abandoned him at age 6. Shortly afterwards, he and a woman who is not Lucas's mother were both reset and lowered to Level 63. He was told afterwards that he had a head injury that caused memory loss and loss of his imprint, and to take medication to help him with his memory. The
The Sea Farm
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!!Tropes applying to the Sea Farm as a whole:
* BornUnderTheSail: While the Sea Farm is about much more than fishing - it's intended to be entirely self-sufficient, with mining, farming, and herding - its culture is centered around the sea, with the leader bearing the title Admiral.
* CrazyPrepared: It's not widely known among the people there, but this is the whole purpose of the Sea Farms. They're meant to be places that can survive if the Hives collapse, so they keep alive knowledge of how to do things without all the Hive's technology.
[[folder:Admiral Tregarth]]
The leader of the Sea Farm. He's a bulky, sun-worn man in his 60s with a bushy grey beard, worried about the murders, the upcoming census, and whether the Hive will find him a successor in time.
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* BornUnderTheSail: While the Sea Farm is about much more than fishing - it's intended to be entirely self-sufficient, with mining, farming, and herding - its culture is centered around the sea, with the leader bearing the title Admiral.
* CrazyPrepared: It's not widely known among the people there, but this is the whole purpose of the Sea Farms. They're meant to be places that can survive if the Hives collapse, so they keep alive knowledge of how to do things without all the Hive's technology.
[[folder:Admiral Tregarth]]
The leader of the Sea Farm. He's a bulky, sun-worn man in his 60s with a bushy grey beard, worried about the murders, the upcoming census, and whether the Hive will find him a successor in time.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's devoted to the Sea Farm and its people, and willing to do whatever he needs to find the murderer in their midst.
* SeadogBeard: A distinct contrast from the normally clean-shaven Hive citizens.
* SeadogBeard: A distinct contrast from the normally clean-shaven Hive citizens.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's devoted MysteriousPast: We don't know exactly what he did to the Sea Farm and its people, and willing get himself reset, but it must have been horrible. Lucas refuses to do whatever he needs look in his secure record to find the murderer in their midst.
* SeadogBeard: A distinct contrast from the normally clean-shaven Hive citizens.out, especially since he can't be sure Keith hasn't modified it. He asks Melisande to lock it down such that he can never look.
* SeadogBeard: A distinct contrast from the normally clean-shaven Hive citizens.
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[[folder:Tressa]]
Admiral Tregarth's wife, who came in as driftwood from a French-speaking Hive's Sea Farm. She acts as a general troubleshooter for the Sea Farm, as well as working on the ships sometimes to help out. [[spoiler:Formerly known as Celandine, the woman that Morton kidnapped and tried to force to love him.]]
Admiral Tregarth's wife, who came in as driftwood from a French-speaking Hive's Sea Farm. She acts as a general troubleshooter for the Sea Farm, as well as working on the ships sometimes to help out. [[spoiler:Formerly known as Celandine, the woman that Morton kidnapped and tried to force to love him.]]
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Admiral Tregarth's wife, who came in as driftwood
The Sea Farm is a separate installation from the main Hive; all Hives are required by treaty to maintain a
!!Tropes applying to the Sea Farm as a whole:
* BornUnderTheSail: While the Sea Farm is about much more than fishing - it's intended to be entirely self-sufficient, with mining, farming, and herding - its culture is centered around the sea, with the leader bearing the title Admiral.
* CrazyPrepared: It's not widely known among the people there, but this is the whole purpose of the Sea Farms. They're meant to be places that can survive if the Hives collapse, so they keep alive knowledge of how to do things without all the Hive's technology.
[[folder:Admiral Tregarth]]
The leader of the Sea Farm. He's a bulky, sun-worn man in his 60s with a bushy grey beard, worried about the murders, the upcoming census, and whether the Hive will find him a successor in time.
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* BornUnderTheSail: While the Sea Farm is about much more than fishing - it's intended to be entirely self-sufficient, with mining, farming, and herding - its culture is centered around the sea, with the leader bearing the title Admiral.
* CrazyPrepared: It's not widely known among the people there, but this is the whole purpose of the Sea Farms. They're meant to be places that can survive if the Hives collapse, so they keep alive knowledge of how to do things without all the Hive's technology.
[[folder:Admiral Tregarth]]
The leader of the Sea Farm. He's a bulky, sun-worn man in his 60s with a bushy grey beard, worried about the murders, the upcoming census, and whether the Hive will find him a successor in time.
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* TheGhost: She's only available by voice communication until the end because she's out on a fishing boat. [[spoiler:She wanted to be away from Amber to make sure that Amber didn't see her past.]]
* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:For Morton. He believes Celandine is dead, and that it's his fault; he has become TheAtoner in response.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:When she came back from the Hive, Celandine took the name Tressa, meaning 'third', to indicate that this is the third part of her life.]]
* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:For Morton. He believes Celandine is dead, and that it's his fault; he has become TheAtoner in response.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:When she came back from the Hive, Celandine took the name Tressa, meaning 'third', to indicate that this is the third part of her life.]]
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* TheGhost: She's only available by voice communication until ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's devoted to the end because she's out on a fishing boat. [[spoiler:She wanted to be away from Amber to make sure that Amber didn't see her past.]]
* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:For Morton. He believes Celandine is dead,Sea Farm and that it's his fault; its people, and willing to do whatever he has become TheAtoner needs to find the murderer in response.]]
their midst.
*MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:When she came back SeadogBeard: A distinct contrast from the Hive, Celandine took the name Tressa, meaning 'third', to indicate that this is the third part of her life.]]normally clean-shaven Hive citizens.
* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:For Morton. He believes Celandine is dead,
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[[folder:Juniper]]
A young woman whose hand was mangled in an accident; Perran put her arm in a switched-off machine as a Halloween joke because he knew the machine was off, only to find that the switch had been tampered with.
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A young
Admiral Tregarth's wife, who came in as driftwood from a French-speaking Hive's Sea Farm. She acts as a general troubleshooter for the Sea Farm, as well as working on the ships sometimes to help out. [[spoiler:Formerly known as Celandine, the woman
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* ArtificialLimbs: She has an artificial hand to replace the one that had to be amputated.
* CareerEndingInjury: Her dreams of being a sea captain are destroyed by the loss of her hand.
* {{Claustrophobia}}: She grew up on the Sea Farm, and being in the Hive makes her feel closed-in and trapped.
* YoungAndInCharge: [[spoiler:She ends up imprinted as Sea Farm Admiral, Tregarth's long-awaited successor, and takes over as his deputy at the end of the book.]]
* CareerEndingInjury: Her dreams of being a sea captain are destroyed by the loss of her hand.
* {{Claustrophobia}}: She grew up on the Sea Farm, and being in the Hive makes her feel closed-in and trapped.
* YoungAndInCharge: [[spoiler:She ends up imprinted as Sea Farm Admiral, Tregarth's long-awaited successor, and takes over as his deputy at the end of the book.]]
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* ArtificialLimbs: She has an artificial hand to replace TheGhost: She's only available by voice communication until the one that had to be amputated.
* CareerEndingInjury: Her dreams of being a sea captain are destroyed by the loss of her hand.
* {{Claustrophobia}}: She grew upend because she's out on the Sea Farm, and being in the Hive makes her feel closed-in and trapped.
* YoungAndInCharge:a fishing boat. [[spoiler:She ends up imprinted as Sea Farm Admiral, Tregarth's long-awaited successor, wanted to be away from Amber to make sure that Amber didn't see her past.]]
* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:For Morton. He believes Celandine is dead, andtakes over as that it's his deputy at fault; he has become TheAtoner in response.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:When she came back from theend of Hive, Celandine took the book.name Tressa, meaning 'third', to indicate that this is the third part of her life.]]
* CareerEndingInjury: Her dreams of being a sea captain are destroyed by the loss of her hand.
* {{Claustrophobia}}: She grew up
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* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:When she came back from the
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[[folder:Cador]]
The head of Sea Farm Security, and down on himself because his team can't solve the ongoing crimes. He's overimpulsive and jumps to conclusions, causing problems.
The head of Sea Farm Security, and down on himself because his team can't solve the ongoing crimes. He's overimpulsive and jumps to conclusions, causing problems.
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The head of Sea Farm Security, and down on himself
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* LoweredRecruitingStandards: When the head of Sea Farm Security was killed, the best available candidate in the next Lottery was imprinted for the job, despite not being the ideal candidate.
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* LoweredRecruitingStandards: When ArtificialLimbs: She has an artificial hand to replace the head one that had to be amputated.
* CareerEndingInjury: Her dreams of being a sea captain are destroyed by the loss of her hand.
* {{Claustrophobia}}: She grew up on the SeaFarm Security was killed, the best available candidate Farm, and being in the next Lottery was Hive makes her feel closed-in and trapped.
* YoungAndInCharge: [[spoiler:She ends up imprintedfor as Sea Farm Admiral, Tregarth's long-awaited successor, and takes over as his deputy at the job, despite not being end of the ideal candidate.book.]]
* CareerEndingInjury: Her dreams of being a sea captain are destroyed by the loss of her hand.
* {{Claustrophobia}}: She grew up on the Sea
* YoungAndInCharge: [[spoiler:She ends up imprinted
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[[folder:Perran]]
A young man who caused Juniper's accident, not knowing the safeties had been disengaged.
A young man who caused Juniper's accident, not knowing the safeties had been disengaged.
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A young man who caused Juniper's accident, not knowing
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* TheAtoner: He realizes he can never make up LoweredRecruitingStandards: When the head of Sea Farm Security was killed, the best available candidate in the next Lottery was imprinted for what he's taken away from Juniper, and goes out as 'driftwood' so that they can both rebuild.the job, despite not being the ideal candidate.
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A technician responsible for repairing the Sea Farm's drones. His murder with a hammer triggers Amber's unit going out to the Sea Farm.
A technician responsible for repairing the Sea Farm's drones. His murder with a hammer triggers Amber's unit going out to the Sea Farm.
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* AssholeVictim: He wasn't liked very much, so when he's murdered, he's only missed because of his technical skills.
* EvilNerd: The best tech at the Sea Farm, but nobody liked him because he tended to say cruel things for fun. [[spoiler:He started setting traps for revenge.]]
* JustJokingJustification: The sort of person who'll say borderline-nasty things, then claim that they're being taken too seriously when people get offended.
* EvilNerd: The best tech at the Sea Farm, but nobody liked him because he tended to say cruel things for fun. [[spoiler:He started setting traps for revenge.]]
* JustJokingJustification: The sort of person who'll say borderline-nasty things, then claim that they're being taken too seriously when people get offended.
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* AssholeVictim: TheAtoner: He wasn't liked very much, so when realizes he can never make up for what he's murdered, he's only missed because of his technical skills.
* EvilNerd: The best tech at the Sea Farm, but nobody liked him because he tended to say cruel things for fun. [[spoiler:He started setting traps for revenge.]]
* JustJokingJustification: The sort of person who'll say borderline-nasty things, then claim that they're beingtaken too seriously when people get offended.away from Juniper, and goes out as 'driftwood' so that they can both rebuild.
* EvilNerd: The best tech at the Sea Farm, but nobody liked him because he tended to say cruel things for fun. [[spoiler:He started setting traps for revenge.]]
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A friend of Treeve's who used to work with him until he was caught stealing.
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* EvilNerd: The best tech at the Sea Farm, but nobody liked him because heknew tended to say cruel things for fun. [[spoiler:He started setting traps for revenge.]]
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A friend of Treeve's who used to work with him until he was caught stealing.
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* SecretLegacy: [[spoiler:She's Claire's great-granddaughter.]]
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* SecretLegacy: [[spoiler:She's Claire's great-granddaughter.the great-granddaughter of Claire, a powerful and dedicated telepath, and Wilder, considered to be the greatest Strike Team leader of all time.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Adika immediately changes his tune on staying behind to defend Amber when he hears that Wilder will be there. His willingness to leave Amber in Wilder's care in a threatening situation shows the incredible esteem he has for Wilder.
* TheChessmaster: His plans to make Amber and her team miserable involve a lot of long-term planning and preparation, with multiple attacks going on at once.
* SinisterShades: When he calls to demand Amber help him after New Year, he's wearing sunglasses; Amber assumes that he uses them to block out visual distractions while using his telepathy. Amber dislikes that they make it so she can't see the expression in his eyes.
* TheSociopath: His distancing has gotten so bad that he considers everyone else a mere toy to play with.
* TheSociopath: His distancing has gotten so bad that he considers everyone else a mere toy to play with.
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* SecretLegacy: [[spoiler:He's Claire's grandson, and apparently carries her telepathic genes, but they don't express in him for whatever reason.]]
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* SecretLegacy: [[spoiler:He's Claire's grandson, and apparently carries her telepathic genes, but they don't express in him for whatever reason. He's also the grandson of Wilder, considered to be the greatest Strike Team leader of all time.]]
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* SecretLegacy: [[spoiler: Claire's great-grandson, and a borderline telepath.]]
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* SecretLegacy: [[spoiler: Claire's great-grandson, [[spoiler:He's the great-grandson of Claire, a powerful and a borderline telepath.dedicated telepath, and Wilder, considered to be the greatest Strike Team leader of all time.]]
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! The Sea Farm
The Sea Farm is a separate installation from the main Hive; all Hives are required by treaty to maintain a Sea Farm with certain population numbers. It's almost entirely self-sufficient, and most people there don't go through Lottery, instead learning through apprenticeships.
The Sea Farm is a separate installation from the main Hive; all Hives are required by treaty to maintain a Sea Farm with certain population numbers. It's almost entirely self-sufficient, and most people there don't go through Lottery, instead learning through apprenticeships.
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* CaneFu: Forge picks up that the ebony cane that Wilder uses is clearly designed to be a weapon in addition to its use as a support.
* RetiredBadass: Wilder is lauded as the epitome of a Strike Team leader, to the point where Adika is willing to let him take charge of Amber's defense. He's in his nineties and walks with a cane, but still carries himself as a deadly fighter.
* YourDaysAreNumbered: Doctors have told him he's got three to nine months to live.
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! The Sea Farm
The Sea Farm is a separate installation from the main Hive; all Hives are required by treaty to maintain a Sea Farm with certain population numbers. It's almost entirely self-sufficient, and most people there don't go through Lottery, instead learning through apprenticeships.
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* RetiredBadass: Wilder is lauded as the epitome of a Strike Team leader, to the point where Adika is willing to let him take charge of Amber's defense. He's in his nineties and walks with a cane, but still carries himself as a deadly fighter.
* YourDaysAreNumbered: Doctors have told him he's got three to nine months to live.
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!!Keith
See 'Keith' under Other Telepaths.
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* TheBully: He picks on teens who came from lower levels, teases Casper, tells people's secrets, breaks into Amber's room, glues Forge into the ventilation system, and tries to scare people during the power outage.
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* TheBully: He picks on teens who came from lower levels, teases Casper, tells people's secrets, breaks into Amber's room, glues Forge into the ventilation system, and tries to scare people during the power outage. The job that makes him happy involves having a crew of robots at his beck and call, because he can't be trusted to be in charge of people.
* TheBusCameBack: Shows up in ''Adversary'' after not appearing since ''Perilous'' and only getting minor mentions in the interim.
* TheBusCameBack: Shows up in ''Adversary'' after not appearing since ''Perilous'' and only getting minor mentions in the interim.
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: He followed everyone in his corridor back to their home levels so he could tell where they were from.