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* AbusiveParents: He psychologically abuses his son James, condescendingly calling him Devil Bags and telling him he's the most wicked person in the world. At one point he took James to an office Christmas party and forgot him there until January.
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* AbusiveParents: He psychologically abuses his son James, condescendingly calling him Devil Bags and Bags, refusing to be seen in public with him, not speaking to him for months on end, telling him he's an "evil outsider" and one of the most wicked person people in the world.world, giving him [[MyNewGiftIsLame half a bottle of wine and a basket of knives]] for his birthday, threatening to have Ron beat him up...the list goes on. At one point he took James to an office Christmas party and forgot him there until January.
* TheAlcoholic: At a pub, Harry mocks Mavis for ordering a single gin and tonic and orders himself a ''pint'' of Jack Daniel's.
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* BerserkButton: Seeing one of Voldemort's numerous cooking shows on TV.
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* TheBrute: The powerfully built Neville is able to shove Jules aside "like a rocking horse".
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* ClusterFBomb: In an argument with Malfoy, has a meltdown, complaining at length about how she's "in the shit", her life is "shitty" and she's "fucking fucked".
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* ClosetGeek: Is popular, attractive and sociable, but loves video games and seems to have an encyclopedic knowledge of anime.
* FieryRedhead: Spouts vitriol at her dad for ignoring her.
* GamerChick: Obsessed with the latest expansions of ''Turbine Simulator''.
* FieryRedhead: Spouts vitriol at her dad for ignoring her.
* GamerChick: Obsessed with the latest expansions of ''Turbine Simulator''.
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* BigStupidDoodooHead: Calls Mavis a "fubsy-wubsy".
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* NonchalantDodge: Casually dodges punches thrown at him by both Jules and Ron, seeming to find the attacks more amusing than seriously threatening.
* NonchalantDodge: Casually dodges punches thrown at him by both Jules and Ron, seeming to find the attacks more amusing than seriously threatening.
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* AbusiveParents: His daughter Rose calls him out for being more interested in "getting shitfaced with the ManChild Who Lived" than spending time with his teenage daughter.
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* TheSlacker: Harry's boss asks him to do some paperwork.
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-->'''Harry''': Not a chance! ''[waves his wand, causing the papers to fly around the room]'' [[SophisticatedAsHell Now go to hell, please]]. I'm done. [[SarcasmMode Thank you for your interest!]] ''[walks out of the room and doesn't return all day]''
-->'''Boss''': Take care of this, would you, Harry?
-->'''Harry''': Not a chance! ''[waves his wand, causing the papers to fly around the room]'' [[SophisticatedAsHell Now go to hell, please]]. I'm done. [[SarcasmMode Thank you for your interest!]] ''[walks out of the room and doesn't return all day]''
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Harry's first seen creeping into the neighbour's garden, where he lies on the grass and cries all night for no reason that he can put his finger on.
* MoodSwinger: Harry occasionally becomes very angry, or bursts into tears, with apparently very little provocation.
* MoodSwinger: Harry occasionally becomes very angry, or bursts into tears, with apparently very little provocation.
* DoesNotLikeShoes: Her first appearance has her walking barefoot through the Forbidden Forest for no established reason. [[UnusuallyUninterestingSight None of the other characters seem to notice or care]].
* TheAlcoholic: Admits to being one in Chapter 2.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Malfoy insults her, she ''rips off his eyes and nose and turns the rest of his face into a gory mess''. Then she blackmails him into allowing him to have Ron and co. to party in his mansion.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Malfoy insults her, she [[DisproportionateRetribution ''rips off his eyes and nose and turns the rest of his face into a gory mess''. mess'']]. Then she blackmails him into allowing him to have allowing Ron and co. to party in his mansion.
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* DistinguishingMark: Has a crescent moon shaped scar on her cheek, which bleeds during chapter 2.
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* DeadAllAlong:[[spoiler: It turns out that Mitsuko Burselfly was possessed by Morgan le Fay, and died when she attempted to kill Hermione. Her amulet filled with blood and polyjuice potion had a curse that upon death would switch the outward appearence and clothing of the parties involved, making Hermione the new Mitsuko- problem was, Hermione's allergy to magic left her in a permanent state of dissociation with reality, turning her into 'No One in Particular'.]]
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* AdaptationalJerkass: He's become much more jaded and cynical over the years. He happily gets into a fight with his former friend Ron, and also abuses his children because he resents them for being happier than him. He does eventually try to stop being like this, and it turns out that [[spoiler: When he defeated Voldemort, a soul transfer took from Harry and gave Voldemort several of his positive traits.]]
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* AdaptationalJerkass: He's become much more jaded and cynical over the years. He happily gets into a fight with his former friend Ron, and also abuses his children because he resents them for being happier than him. He does eventually try to stop being like this, and it turns out that [[spoiler: When when he defeated Voldemort, a soul transfer took from Harry and gave Voldemort several of his positive traits.]]
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* TheFaceless: He always wears a wooden mask for some reason.
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* TheFaceless: He always wears a wooden mask for some reason.to protect him from patronus charms. During the costume party, his costume is just taking it off, but everyone is obsessed with finding out who he dressed as- and even who he is.
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Harry's ex-wife who betrayed him to the Death Eaters some time ago.
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* DomesticAbuse: His wife, Hannah Abbott, is apparently having a bad time with him, and she tries to flirt with Joules because of that.
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* DomesticAbuse: His wife, Hannah Abbott, is apparently having a bad time with him, and she tries to flirt with Joules Jules because of that.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: He's become much more jaded and cynical over the years. He happily gets into a fight with his former friend Ron, and also abuses his children because he resents them for being happier than him. He does eventually try to stop being like this, and it turns out that [[spoiler: When he defeated Voldemort, a soul transfer took from Harry and gave Voldemort several of his positive traits.]]
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Harry Potter's long lost cousin and Ron's lover who goes by a variety of masculine names.
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* DeadAllAlong:[[spoiler: It turns out that Mitsuko Burselfly was possessed by Morgan le Fay, and died when she attempted to kill Hermione. Her amulet filled with blood and polyjuice potion had a curse that upon death would switch the outward appearence and clothing of the parties involved, making Hermione the new Mitsuko- problem was, Hermione's allergy to magic left her in a permanent state of dissociation with reality, turning her into 'No One in Particular']]
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* RetiredMonster: He hasn't really become much better of a person better over the years.
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* JerkWithTheHeartOfGold: Some of his snobbiness is still there, but he's a lot less malicious than he used to be, and, unlike Harry, he genuinely loves his son.
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* JerkWithTheHeartOfGold: Some of his snobbiness is still there, but he's a lot less malicious than he used to be, and, unlike Harry, he genuinely loves his son.
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Another Ministry worker, who moonlights an evil wizard and a head of a Death Eater-esque gang.
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Another Ministry worker, who moonlights as an evil wizard and a head of a the Death Eater-esque gang.gang.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Oh yes! He's bad enough to make Harry look like a refined gentleman.
* DomesticAbuse: His wife, Hannah Abbott, is apparently having a bad time with him, and she tries to flirt with Joules because of that.
* {{Jerkass}}: Is an absolute asshole to everyone he sees.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Oh yes! He's bad enough to make Harry look like a refined gentleman.
* DomesticAbuse: His wife, Hannah Abbott, is apparently having a bad time with him, and she tries to flirt with Joules because of that.
* {{Jerkass}}: Is an absolute asshole to everyone he sees.
Dementor-turned-human who works for Neville.
* TheDogBitesBack: Attempted. He tries to get back at Neville for bullying him, exclaiming "I've had just about enough, you old [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch bitch]]!" before trying to punch him. It fails.
* TheFaceless: He always wears a wooden mask for some reason.
* JustFriends: He rejects Hannah's advances in favor of this.
* TheDogBitesBack: Attempted. He tries to get back at Neville for bullying him, exclaiming "I've had just about enough, you old [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch bitch]]!" before trying to punch him. It fails.
* TheFaceless: He always wears a wooden mask for some reason.
* JustFriends: He rejects Hannah's advances in favor of this.
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Ron's teen daughter.
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Ron's teen daughter.daughter, who's pissed at her dad for neglecting her.
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The former "boy-who-lived" who works at a boring job in the Ministry and muses about his GloryDays.
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* LoveInterest: To Ron.
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Yukihira" aka No One In Particular]]
Harry Potter's long lost cousin and Ron's lover who goes by a variety of masculine names.
* IHaveManyNames: All of which are references to various forms of media.
* LoveInterest: ToRon.Ron... kind of.
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* ReallyGetsAround: Let's say, she doesn't limit herself to just Ron.
* MsFanservice: The fic goes to greatlengthlength to describe her astounding beauty.
* ShoutOut: Soma Yukihira is the main character from Manga/FoodWars. Ron is even called out for not getting the reference.
** Eventually, Soma confesses that her "real name" is Soma Cruz... which is the name of {{Franchise/Castlevania}} character. Ron is, once again, ridiculed for missing out on this reference as well.
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* ShoutOut: Soma Yukihira is the main character from Manga/FoodWars. Ron is even called out for not getting the reference.
** Eventually, Soma confesses that her "real name" is Soma Cruz... which is the name of {{Franchise/Castlevania}} character. Ron is, once again, ridiculed for missing out on this reference as well.
Another Hogwards retiree, a successful musician who runs him own music studio.
Apparantly died in the GreatOffscreenWar... or did she?
Harry's ex-wife who betrayed him to the Death Eaters some time ago.
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* AbusiveParents: He psychologically abuses his son James, condescendingly calling him Devil Bags and telling him he's the most wicked person in the world. At one point he took James to an office Christmas party and forgot him there until January.
Harry Potter's long lost cousin and Ron's lover who goes by variety of masculine names.
* LoveInterest: To Ron.
* NakedFirstImpression: Showed up to Joules like this.
* MsFanservice: The fic goes to great length
* LoveInterest: To Ron.
* NakedFirstImpression: Showed up to Joules like this.
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* BadassBeard: Ron is a tough, muscular man with a big beard.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite her mannerisms, her genuinely cares about Harry and his friends.
* JustFriends: She rebuffs Harry's advances in this fashion.
* LadySwearsalot: She's definitely the most potty-mouthed of the cast. She swears 3 times in a row in her opening scene.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Malfoy insults her, she ''rips off his eyes and nose and turns the rest of his face into a gory mess''. Then she blackmails him into allowing him to have Ron and co. to party in his mansion.
* SexySecretary: Her attractiveness is noticed by more than several fellas in the fic.
* StatuesqueStunner: She's very thin and tall, even taller than Harry. He even compares her to a "big, long, sexy spider".
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite her mannerisms, her genuinely cares about Harry and his friends.
* JustFriends: She rebuffs Harry's advances in this fashion.
* LadySwearsalot: She's definitely the most potty-mouthed of the cast. She swears 3 times in a row in her opening scene.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Malfoy insults her, she ''rips off his eyes and nose and turns the rest of his face into a gory mess''. Then she blackmails him into allowing him to have Ron and co. to party in his mansion.
* SexySecretary: Her attractiveness is noticed by more than several fellas in the fic.
* StatuesqueStunner: She's very thin and tall, even taller than Harry. He even compares her to a "big, long, sexy spider".
* {{Jerkass}}: He's about as pleasant as you'd expect.
* RetiredMonster: He hasn't really become much better of a person better over the years.
* RetiredMonster: He hasn't really become much better of a person better over the years.
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