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* {{Adorkable}}: Is this.
%Can't find the right trope* AntiClimaxReveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married someone he barley knows, work, as Star Fall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on Star Fall, before she stops him and says they she want to at least become friends with him, before their married in a week.

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* {{Adorkable}}: Is this.
%Can't find the right trope* AntiClimaxReveal:
When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married to someone he barley knows, knows work, as Star Fall is. All he can do is make a few febal feeble passes on Star Fall, before she stops him and says they that she want to at least become friends with him, before their married in a week.

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* BadassBookworm: Scholar, magic student, spy, CombatMedic, and the [[SmartGuy Smart Girl]], all she needs is some kung fu and her badass resume will be complete.



* SelfMadeOrphan: Heavily implied.



* UsedToBeASweetKid: She used to be an innocent filly with a loving family, who liked dancing... until her talent showed up.



* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Charisma, [[spoiler: After it's revealed that her talent is constantly telling her to kill literally everyone she comes in contact with, destroying any hope she may have ever had about having a normal life and relationship. It's also revealed that she used to have a happy normal life, with loving parents before her Glyph showed up, revealing that she was a born killer. Even worse, it's implied that something may have drove her into killing her parents.]]

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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Charisma, [[spoiler: After it's revealed that her talent is constantly telling her to kill literally everyone she comes in contact with, destroying any hope she may have ever had about having a normal life and relationship. It's also revealed that she used to have a happy normal life, with loving parents before her Glyph showed up, revealing that she was a born killer. Even worse, it's implied that she got it, after something may have drove her into killing her parents.own brother.]]
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Charisma, [[spoiler: After it's revealed that her talent is constantly telling her to kill literally everyone she comes in contact with, destroying any hope she may have ever had about having a normal life and relationship. It's also revealed that she used to have a happy normal life, with loving parents before her Glyph showed up, revealing that she was a born killer. Even worse, it's implied that something may have drove her into killing her parents.]]

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* DangerouslyGenreSavy: He predicted someone would try a BigDamnHeros moment, because he knows this is ''not'' his story.

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* DangerouslyGenreSavy: DangerouslyGenreSavvy: He predicted someone would try a BigDamnHeros moment, because he knows this is ''not'' his story.



* FauxAffiablyEvil: He comes off as friendly and polite stallion, but he is anything but.

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* FauxAffiablyEvil: FauxAffablyEvil: He comes off as friendly and polite stallion, but he is anything but.



* CryForTheDevil: After finding out that the talent she's had for most of her life,[[spoiler: is constantly telling her to kill everyone around her]], whether she wants to or not. It's kind of hard to say she she ever had a chance of being anything, other then the psychopathic killer she is today.



* IronicNaming: Being a deranged killer, Charisma is not exactly the most charismatic of ponies.

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* AnArmAndALeg: Charisma severs one of her legs to lore Rainbow Dash into their rematch.



* OddFriendship: With Calumn.



* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: In a world with talents like magic and even killing, his talent that always points him in the right direction, doesn't sound too impressive. But it is.

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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: SympathyForTheDevil: He feels that Charisma was never a bad pony at heart, but forces outside her control were what made her the monster she is.
* TooKinkyToTorture: He used to go out with Charisma.
* * WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway/ HeartIsAnAwesomePower::
In a world with talents like magic and even killing, his talent that always points him in the right direction, doesn't sound too impressive. But it is.



* HeroicBSOD:

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* HeroicBSOD: After he starts questioning the morality of what he does.



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The leader of the Royal Secret Service and an adviser to the King.

* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Zigzagged. She admits that she is partially responsible for molding Charisma from a dangerous and unstable filly, into an even more dangerous and unstable mare, because she was useful at the time. But, she also points out that she did make ''some'' efforts to help her and that they are all products of their world.
* TheRealist: She does try to do good, but knows she must be willing to take the less honorable path sometimes in a CrapSackWorld.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: She has been shown to be a pragmatic and even ruthless leader, yet is still one of the more understanding and considerate characters in the story.
* SympathyForTheDevil: To Charisma. Though she makes it clear that Charisma '''still''' needs to be taken out, regardless of any sympathy she has for her.



* [[spoiler: Body Horror: Her transformation into Umbra involves her bones, tendons, mussels, and flesh, all graphically rearranging.]]

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* [[spoiler: Body Horror: BodyHorror: Her transformation into Umbra involves her bones, tendons, mussels, and flesh, all graphically rearranging.]]



* [[spoiler: Mind Hive: Share's one with Umbra.]]

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* [[spoiler: Mind Hive: MindHive: Share's one with Umbra.]]



* JerkassHasAPoint: Her reason you suck speech to the nobles and the one about the ponies [[WeHaveBecomeComplacent becoming weak]] are not that far off.



* DangerouslyGenreSavy: He predicted someone would try a BigDamnHeros moment, because he knows this is ''not'' his story.



* StrawNihilist: Heavily implied in chapter 29.

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* StrawNihilist: Heavily implied Revealed in chapter 29.29:
--> Max Cash: I knew someone would come. I knew it not because I had planned for you to be here, or because I'm somehow in control of these grand events. No, I knew it because I hadn't planned for it. I knew it because I'm not in control. This isn't my story. I'm not the hero, but neither am I the villain. I'm just like you, in fact. Just like them. I'm a puppet. I'm just another fucking plaything for the real villains. Freedom is a joke, and choice is an illusion. In the end there's only a hoofful of ponies who can honestly say that they've ever actually had one, and most of them never even realized it. Me? I want to be one of them. I want myself to matter. But I can't ever do that unless those same forces that are pulling the strings want to let me. I am at their mercy, just like every other sucker in the whole damn universe. You know how I feel about that? I hate it.



* TroublingUnchildLikeBehavior: Max apparently murdered the father of three of his classmates, to see how very similar ponies reacted to a problem ForScience.



Max's personal body guard and Blaze's ex girl-friend. Charisma is a former member of the Solor Kingdom's special forces and very skilled combatant, with a talent specifically for killing. On the surface, she appears as a fairly innocent pink Pegasus, but underneath is a psychotic killer who's constantly being told by her talent, how to kill everyone in her immediate vicinity.

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Max's personal body guard and Blaze's ex girl-friend. Charisma is a former member of the Solor Solar Kingdom's special forces and very skilled combatant, with a talent specifically for killing. On the surface, she appears as a fairly innocent pink Pegasus, but underneath is a psychotic killer who's constantly being told by her talent, how to kill everyone in her immediate vicinity.



* IronicNaming: Being a deranged killer, Charisma is not exactly the most charismatic of ponies.
* JerkAss: She can be very cruel when she wants to be.



* OneWingedAngel: After her second fight with Rainbow, she accesses "The Rainbow Power"... but unlike the show, this version is a little more intimidating.



* BadAss: He put '''Charisma''' on the defensive.

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* BadAss: He BadAss/ RetiredBadass: Despite being retired from the military, he managed to put '''Charisma''' on the defensive.



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The War Goddess and most feared being in post-Schism Equestra. After being temperately put out commission, by Celestia and Luna [[spoiler: Sadly, through a HeroicSacrifice.]] Umbra is believed to be one of the causes of the Schism, but her true origins are a complete mystery.

-> '''Umbra:''' AT MY WEAKEST, I HAVE DEFEATED YOU BEST!!!

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The War Goddess and most feared being in post-Schism Equestra. Equestria. After being temperately temporarily put out commission, commission by Celestia and Luna Luna, [[spoiler: Sadly, sadly, through a HeroicSacrifice.]] HeroicSacrifice]], Umbra is believed to be one of the causes of the Schism, but her true origins are a complete mystery.

-> '''Umbra:''' AT MY WEAKEST, At My Weakest, I HAVE DEFEATED YOU BEST!!!
Fought Three Of Your Best, And They Did Not Impress.



* TheAssimilator: Can absorb any pony and bring them back as her undead mooks.

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* TheAssimilator: Can absorb any pony pony's ashes and bring them back as her undead mooks.



* TheDreaded: She makes Charisma look like a minor announce.

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* TheDreaded: She makes Charisma look like a minor announce.nuisance.



* NighInvulnerable: At her wakened state, it takes an incredible amount of repeated hits, just to get her to back off.
* NoIndoorVoice: "ALWAYS SPEAKS TO PONIES LIKE THIS!!!!

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* NighInvulnerable: At her wakened weakened state, it takes an incredible amount of repeated hits, just to get her to back off.
* NoIndoorVoice: "ALWAYS ALWAYS SPEAKS TO PONIES LIKE THIS!!!!THIS!!!!
* OmnicidalManiac: Plans to turn the world to ashes.



--> To call your selves noble, is laughable. You claim to worship Celestia. Yet when I look into your precious little sun loving faces, I do not see ponies she would be proud of. Just look at you now: You trample those weaker under hoof, in hopes of buying yourself another breath of life. Craven beast, who hope is as empty as your hearts.
* OmnicidalManiac: Plans to turn the world to ashes.
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--> To call your selves noble, is laughable. Call Yourselves Noble Is Laughable. You claim to worship Celestia. Claim To Worship Celestia, Yet when When I look into your precious little sun loving faces, Look Into Your Precious, Little, Sun-Loving Faces, I do not see ponies she would be proud of. Do Not See Ponies She Would Be Proud Of. Just look at you now: Look At You trample those weaker under hoof, in hopes of buying yourself another breath of life. Now: You Trample Those Weaker Underhoof In The Hope Of Buying Yourself Another Breath Of Life. Craven beast, who hope Beasts, That Hope Is As Empty As Your Hearts.
* TheSocialDarwinist: She
is as empty as your hearts.
* OmnicidalManiac: Plans to turn the world to ashes.
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greatly displeased by how weak ponykind has become in the Royal Canterlot Voice.her absence. She judges all of ponykind unworthy of life for this reason.


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* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength: A variation. She does know what she's capable of. It's just that modern ponies have become weaker over time, so she doesn't know how strong in comparison to them she is.

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* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength: A variation. She does know what she's capable of. of: It's just that modern ponies have become weaker over time, so she doesn't know how strong in comparison to them she is.



* HealingFactor: She heals incredibly fast, compared to modern ponies.
* InstantExpert: Picks up on modern Solar, shockingly fast. It's implied that this has to do with whatever brought her here.

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* HealingFactor: She heals incredibly fast, fast compared to modern ponies.
* InstantExpert: Picks up on modern Solar, Solar shockingly fast. It's implied that this has to do with whatever brought her here.



* SuperStrength

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* SuperStrengthSuperStrength: She's stronger than most modern ''Earth'' Ponies.



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* BadAss: Is able to completely tear a pony in half.

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* BadAss: {{Badass}}: Is able to completely tear a pony in half.



** He knew [[spoiler: Twinkle was Umbra the whole time.]] It's also implied that he knows more about the elements that he's telling.

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** He knew [[spoiler: Twinkle was Umbra the whole time.]] time]]. It's also implied that he knows more about the elements that than he's telling.



* TheMentor: Becomes this for the whole dragon race, after the schism. He also helped Twinkle Shine, mentor Star Fall.

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* TheMentor: Becomes this for the whole dragon race, after the schism. He also helped Twinkle Shine, Shine mentor Star Fall.



* TookAlevelInCynicism: Not as obvious as other examples, but it's clear, that this Spike is not as idealistic as he once was.

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* TookAlevelInCynicism: Not as obvious as other examples, but it's clear, clear that this Spike is not as idealistic as he once was.



* ShellShockedVeteran: Not shown at first, but our favorite little dragon, has definitely seen a lot of action in his life.

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* ShellShockedVeteran: Not shown at first, but our favorite little dragon, dragon has definitely seen a lot of action in his life.



** HandicappedBadass: He has a debilitating condition, that causes his magic to slowly weaken over time. This also causes him to have intense headaches, that hinder his physical ability. Does that stop him, from going out in the field and fighting Cash's {{Mooks}}?
* FantasticRacism: Like most ponies, he doesn't view changlings in a very positive light. This makes it especially aggravating, when he's partnered up with Traduse: a changeling.
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Compared to Traduse, he uses a much simpler fighting style.

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** HandicappedBadass: He has a debilitating condition, condition that causes his magic to slowly weaken over time. This also causes him to have intense headaches, migraines that hinder his physical ability. Does that stop him, him from going out in the field and fighting Cash's {{Mooks}}?
* FantasticRacism: Like most ponies, he doesn't view changlings in a very positive light. This makes it especially aggravating, aggravating when he's partnered up with Traduse: a changeling.
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Compared to Traduse, he uses a much simpler fighting style.
changeling.



* {{Foil}}: To his partner Traduse. While he's an honest cop, who hates all the secret agent, cloak and dagger stuff, she's a changing and secret agent. This puts them at conflict at first.

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* GoodOldFisticuffs: Compared to Traduse, he uses a much simpler fighting style.
* {{Foil}}: To his partner Traduse. While he's an honest cop, cop who hates all the secret agent, cloak and dagger stuff, she's a changing and a secret agent. This puts them at conflict at first.



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* VoiceOfTheLegion: Can speak in the Royal Canterlot Voice.

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* %* VoiceOfTheLegion: Can speak in the Royal Canterlot Voice.



* WarGod: Believed to be this, by modern ponies.

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* WarGod: Believed to be this, this by modern ponies.



* TradeMarkFavoriteFood: Chocolate and Cookies.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: One of the reasons he has gotten away so far. He even outright says that even if he does get taking to justice, he has the funds and connections to stall for an entire decade, while his people do whatever necessary to get him out. [[spoiler: This was after marching his private army into a senator's mansion and killing multiple cops.]]

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* TradeMarkFavoriteFood: TrademarkFavoriteFood: Chocolate and Cookies.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: One of the reasons he has gotten away so far. He even outright says that even if he does get taking to justice, jailed, he has the funds and connections to stall for an entire decade, while his people do whatever necessary to get him out. [[spoiler: This was after marching his private army into a senator's mansion and killing multiple cops.]]



->'''Star Fall:''' The three of us can out run her. You and Astrid can over power her. But NONE of us, can out fight her.

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->'''Star Fall:''' The three of us can out run outrun her. You and Astrid can over power her. But NONE of us, us can out fight her.



* CombatPragmatist: Her tactics include everything from throwing decoy knives to distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.
* DanceBattler: She laminates on how similar her fights are to the dances she did as a filly.

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* CombatPragmatist: Her tactics include everything from throwing decoy knives to distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, wing to throw her off balance.
* DanceBattler: She laminates ruminates on how similar her fights are to the dances she did as a filly.



* BladeOnaStick: Chooses to wheeled a spear.

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* BladeOnaStick: BladeOnAStick: Chooses to wheeled a spear.



* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Some how, Charisma almost killing her on sight, didn't clue her in on how dangerous she and Max were.

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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Some how, Somehow, Charisma almost killing her on sight, sight didn't clue her in on how dangerous she and Max were.



* AntiClimax Reveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married someone he barley knows, work, as Star Fall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on Star Fall, before she stops him and says they she want to at least become friends with him, before their married in a week.

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* AntiClimax Reveal: %Can't find the right trope* AntiClimaxReveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married someone he barley knows, work, as Star Fall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on Star Fall, before she stops him and says they she want to at least become friends with him, before their married in a week.



* LaserGuidedKarma: Tries to Murder Blaze over costing him a customer. [[spoiler: This gets him left for dead, while in the storm he abandoned all his customers in.]]
* TheRival: Apparently has a long grudge against Blaze. Likely, because Blaze warns his customers how trust worthy Silas is.

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* LaserGuidedKarma: Tries to Murder murder Blaze over costing him a customer. [[spoiler: This gets him left for dead, while in the storm he abandoned all his customers in.]]
* TheRival: Apparently has a long grudge against Blaze. Likely, Likely because Blaze warns his customers how trust worthy trustworthy Silas is.



* TheAlcoholic: Drinks his heart away, while in his hotel suite

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* TheAlcoholic: Drinks his heart away, away while in his hotel suite



* KilledOffForReal: Used as a sacrifice [[spoiler:to retrieve the element of honesty.]]

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* KilledOffForReal: Used as a sacrifice [[spoiler:to retrieve the element of honesty.]]honesty]].



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* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.



* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.

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* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.



* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A griffon.



* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler:After fully tapping into the Element of Loyalty, she puts is more scary than before. And that's saying something!]]



* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.



* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.

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* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.



* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus-unicorn.
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* MagnificentBastard: Has a long and well laid out plan, and is in complete control most of the time. But, he's not afraid to improvise.



* VillainSue: Some commentators have started to debate on this, considering his plans mostly go off without a hitch and when something does go wrong, he makes it seem like a minor set back, and is very quick to adjust. [[spoiler: Finally subverted in chapter 29.]]

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* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arranged marriage, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents,]] all because she was born with a magical talent. Oh, and her SubstituteParentalFigure [[spoiler:turns out to be Nightmare Umbra.]]

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* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arranged marriage, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents,]] all because she was born with a magical talent. Oh, and her SubstituteParentalFigure ParentalSubstitute figure [[spoiler:turns out to be Nightmare Umbra.]]









* HeelFaceTurn: Implied. Not only did he date PhsycoForHire Charisma, but he also seems to know Cash personally. He also tries to get Charisma to go along, but fails.
* LegacyCharacter: Many readers beleave he's this, to Pinkie.

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* HeelFaceTurn: Implied. Not only did he date PhsycoForHire PsychoForHire Charisma, but he also seems to know Cash personally. He also tries to get Charisma to go along, but fails.
* LegacyCharacter: Many readers beleave believe he's this, to Pinkie.



* MindRape: Though benevalent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.

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* MindRape: Though benevalent(ish), benevolent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.






After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intellegent dragon, as well, as one of the most influentual creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renouned artist--not to assume he's not dangerouse on the battlefield -- credited for teaching generousity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

* AmbiguousRelationshipStatus: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
* BadAss: Is able to littarly tear a pony in half.

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After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intellegent intelligent dragon, as well, as one of the most influentual influential creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renouned renowned artist--not to assume he's not dangerouse dangerous on the battlefield -- credited for teaching generousity generosity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

* AmbiguousRelationshipStatus: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
* BadAss: Is able to littarly completely tear a pony in half.



* BeserkButton: Don't mess with his friends or hurt baby dragons, or else he'll KILL you.

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* BeserkButton: BerserkButton: Don't mess with his friends or hurt baby dragons, or else he'll KILL you.



* {{Determinator}}: He will never stop fighting, until he litterally can't.
* FriendsWithCthulhu: [[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* JadedGlasses: Not obvious at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.
* GeniusBruiser: He's highly intelegent. Also, he can litterly rip you in half.
* GotThereTheOldFashionedWay: He's been around for a thousand years.

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* {{Determinator}}: He will never stop fighting, until he litterally can't.
no longer can.
* FriendsWithCthulhu: DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: [[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* JadedGlasses: JadeColoredGlasses: Not obvious at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.
* GeniusBruiser: He's highly intelegent. intelligent. Also, he can litterly rip you in half.
* GotThereTheOldFashionedWay: He's been around for a thousand years.
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* InstantAwsomeJustAddDragons

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* InstantAwsomeJustAddDragonsImpliedLoveInterest: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons



* KnowsMoreThenTheyLetOn: He knew [[spoiler: Twinkle was Umbra the whole time.]] It's also implied that he knows more about the elements that he's telling.
* HiddenDepths: Aparrently, he's a world renowned sculpter and archetect.
* LightningBruiser: Is suprisingly agile for a dragon.

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* KnowsMoreThenTheyLetOn: HiddenDepths: Apparently, he's a world renowned sculptor and architect.
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He knew [[spoiler: Twinkle was Umbra the whole time.]] It's also implied that he knows more about the elements that he's telling.
* HiddenDepths: Aparrently, he's a world renowned sculpter and archetect.
* LightningBruiser: Is suprisingly surprisingly agile for a dragon.



* TookAlevelInCynicism: Not as obviouse as other examples, but it's clear, that this Spike is not as iddealistic as he once was.
* TookTheLongWayAround: How he got to the future.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Not shown at first, but our favorite little dragon, has definatley seen a lot of action in his life.
* Shrouded In mystery: Not only is very little is known about what happened to him, between past and pressent Equistria, but he's definatley not telling much about what he really knows.

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* TookAlevelInCynicism: Not as obviouse obvious as other examples, but it's clear, that this Spike is not as iddealistic idealistic as he once was.
* TookTheLongWayAround: TheSlowPath: How he got to the future.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Not shown at first, but our favorite little dragon, has definatley definitely seen a lot of action in his life.
* [[ShroudedInMyth Shrouded In mystery: Mystery]]: Not only is very little is known about what happened to him, between past and pressent present Equistria, but he's definatley definitely not telling much about what he really knows.



A changeling agent for the Lunar Republic and Straff's right hand girl. She's partenered with Lt. Hard Boiled, who she(much to his charging) quickly takes a liking to.

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A changeling agent for the Lunar Republic and Straff's right hand girl. She's partenered partnered with Lt. Hard Boiled, who she(much to his charging) quickly takes a liking to.
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* FemeFatale: Has elements of this.
* GenreShift: Her and Hard Boiled's segments have a lot of BuddyCop in them, along with plenty of FilmNoir.

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* FemeFatale: FemmeFatale: Has elements of this.
* GenreShift: Her and Hard Boiled's segments have a lot of BuddyCop BuddyCopShow in them, along with plenty of FilmNoir.






* [[spoiler: BitchInSheep'sClothing: It's apparent from the beginning, that she has great disdain for Rainbow Dash, who she sets out to prove is a fraud. But she pretends to be a kind and welcoming pony.]]

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* [[spoiler: BitchInSheep'sClothing: BitchInSheepsClothing: It's apparent from the beginning, that she has great disdain for Rainbow Dash, who she sets out to prove is a fraud. But she pretends to be a kind and welcoming pony.]]



* [[spoiler: Corrupt GrandVisor: Is this to the King.]]



* [[spoiler: MasterManipulator: She's been secretly shaping the kingdom's history from the beginning.]]

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* [[spoiler: MasterManipulator: EvilChancellor: Is this to the King.]]
* [[spoiler: ManipulativeBastard:
She's been secretly shaping the kingdom's history from the beginning.]]















A powerful magic talented unicorn from the Lunar Republic and one of the main antagonist, Max is shown to be brilliant, polite, and highly ambitious, if eccentric character. But he is not to be underestimated by his demeanor: Max is a VERY ruthless and cunning. He has aquired great wealth from both legal and illegal ventures, as well as a lot of powerful connection. He has also been shown to very sadistic and shows many characteristics associated with sociopaths. Despite their best efforts, Cash and his plans have remained an enigma to everyone: including his closest operative.

* ArmourPiercingQuestion: With the help of [[spoiler: the Element of Loyalty,]] Max is basically able to weaponize this trope. Simply asking someone what they truly want, and to just allow one little betrayal, is enough to send them into HeroricBOSD.
* AxCrazy: When he throws away the Affiably Evil demeanor. [[spoiler: He orders the death of an entire town, including the children, with a sadistic smile on his face.]]
* BadBoss: Perfectly willing to send his own henchmen to thier deaths.

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A powerful magic talented unicorn from the Lunar Republic and one of the main antagonist, Max is shown to be brilliant, polite, and highly ambitious, if eccentric character. But he is not to be underestimated by his demeanor: Max is a VERY ruthless and cunning. He has aquired acquired great wealth from both legal and illegal ventures, as well as a lot of powerful connection. He has also been shown to very sadistic and shows many characteristics associated with sociopaths. Despite their best efforts, Cash and his plans have remained an enigma to everyone: including his closest operative.

* ArmourPiercingQuestion: With the help of [[spoiler: the Element of Loyalty,]] Max is basically able to weaponize this trope. Simply asking someone what they truly want, and to just allow one little betrayal, is enough to send them into HeroricBOSD.
HeroicBSOD.
* AxCrazy: When he throws away the Affiably Evil AffablyEvil demeanor. [[spoiler: He orders the death of an entire town, including the children, with a sadistic smile on his face.]]
* BadBoss: Perfectly willing to send his own henchmen to thier their deaths.



* ButForMeItWasTuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: driving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but he can't even remember her name.



* FauxAffiably Evil: He comes off as friendly and polite stallion, but he is anything but.
* ForgotOneDetail: How Calumn figures out, his story is fake.
* ForMeItWasTuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: driving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but he can't even remember her name.
* ForTheEvulz: He definatley does way more evil things, than he has to.
* JerkWithAHeartOfAJerk: Any time it looks like Cash is about to show a sympathetic side, he's sure to it end in way that further solidifies what a scumbag he is.

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* FauxAffiably Evil: FauxAffiablyEvil: He comes off as friendly and polite stallion, but he is anything but.
* ForgotOneDetail: How Calumn figures out, his story is fake.
* ForMeItWasTuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: driving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but
ForTheEvulz: He definitely does way more evil things, than he can't even remember her name.has to.
* ForTheEvulz: He definatley does way more evil things, than he has to.
ImposterForgotOneDetail: How Calumn figures out, his story is fake.
* JerkWithAHeartOfAJerk: JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Any time it looks like Cash is about to show a sympathetic side, he's sure to it end in way that further solidifies what a scumbag he is.



* MoreThanMindRape: He uses a combination of his "social skills" and [[spoiler: The invertered element of loyalty to do this]] to corrupt ponies.

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* MoreThanMindRape: MoreThanMindControl: He uses a combination of his "social skills" and [[spoiler: The invertered inverted element of loyalty to do this]] to corrupt ponies.



* SlasherSmile/StepforedSmiler: Switches between these.

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* SlasherSmile/StepforedSmiler: SlasherSmile/StepfordSmiler: Switches between these.



* VillainousBreak Down: Is starting to have a major one.

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* VillainousBreak Down: VillainousBreakdown: Is starting to have a major one.



* YouHaveOutLivedYourUseFullness: He doesn't even try to hide the fact, that he'll do this to everyone. [[spoiler: Including his only friend.]]


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* YouHaveOutLivedYourUseFullness: YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: He doesn't even try to hide the fact, that he'll do this to everyone. [[spoiler: Including his only friend.]]







* BecouseYouWereNiceToMe: Possibly the reason she cares for Trail Blazer.
* BeserkButton: Not even '''Max''' is allowed to bring up her parents.

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* BecouseYouWereNiceToMe: BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Possibly the reason she cares for Trail Blazer.
* BeserkButton: BerserkButton: Not even '''Max''' is allowed to bring up her parents.



* CombatDance: She laminates on how similar her fights are to the dances she did as a filly.



* DanceBattler: She laminates on how similar her fights are to the dances she did as a filly.



* DavidVsGalioth: A rare villainous example: She faces [[spoiler: Astrid, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, all of whom, vastly out-power her.]]

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* DavidVsGalioth: DavidVsGoliath: A rare villainous example: She faces [[spoiler: Astrid, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, all of whom, vastly out-power her.]]



* ImpoweredBadass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]

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* ImpoweredBadass: EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]



* PetTheDogMoment: Tries to give Melody genuinely helpful advice, on how to advance her career as a body guard.

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* PetTheDogMoment: PetTheDog: Tries to give Melody genuinely helpful advice, on how to advance her career as a body guard.



* RewardedAsATraderDeserves: Heavily implied to be her eventual fate.

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* RewardedAsATraderDeserves: RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Heavily implied to be her eventual fate.







* BigDamnHeroesMoment: When she [[spoiler: saves HB and Traduce.]]

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* BigDamnHeroesMoment: BigDamnHeroes: When she [[spoiler: saves HB and Traduce.]]



* HorribleJudge Of Character: Some how, Charisma almost killing her on sight, didn't clue her in on how dangerous she and Max were.

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* HorribleJudge Of Character: HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Some how, Charisma almost killing her on sight, didn't clue her in on how dangerous she and Max were.



* SanitySlipage: Is a babbling mess.

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* SanitySlipage: SanitySlippage: Is a babbling mess.












* GamblingMan: Was one.
* HumanSacrafic: Well, pony anyway.

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* GamblingMan: TheGamblingAddict: Was one.
* HumanSacrafic: HumanSacrifice: Well, pony anyway.



* PostmortemCharacter: His death kicks off the story.
* SmallRole,BigImpact: His murder is what [[spoiler: frees Rainbow Dash, gives control of Loyalty to Cash, and the motivation for Hard Boiled's entrance into the story.]]

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* PostmortemCharacter: PosthumousCharacter: His death kicks off the story.
* SmallRole,BigImpact: SmallRoleBigImpact: His murder is what [[spoiler: frees Rainbow Dash, gives control of Loyalty to Cash, and the motivation for Hard Boiled's entrance into the story.]]






* AntiClimaticReveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married someone he barley knows, work, as Star Fall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on Star Fall, before she stops him and says they she want to at least become friends with him, before their married in a week.
* ArrangedMarrige: With Star Fall.

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* AntiClimaticReveal: AntiClimax Reveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married someone he barley knows, work, as Star Fall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on Star Fall, before she stops him and says they she want to at least become friends with him, before their married in a week.
* ArrangedMarrige: ArrangedMarriage: With Star Fall.













* FantasyCultureEquivalent: He gives off a Russian vibe.

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* FantasyCultureEquivalent: FantasyCounterpartCulture: He gives off a Russian vibe.













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Check RainbowDash on the main MLP characters page.

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Check RainbowDash [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash Rainbow Dash]] on the main MLP characters page.



* GaleForceSound: Her Sonic Rainboom can be used this way.



* InstantExpert: Picks up on modern Solar, shockingly fast. It's implied that this is to do with whatever brought her here.
* MythologyGag: She briefly disguises herself and takes the identity of [[spoiler: FireFly.]]

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* InstantExpert: Picks up on modern Solar, shockingly fast. It's implied that this is has to do with whatever brought her here.
* MythologyGag: She briefly disguises herself and takes the identity of [[spoiler: FireFly.Firefly.]]



* SonicAttack: Her Sonic Rainboom can be used this way.



* TechnicalPacifist: Despite her willingness to get into a fight, Rainbow Dash doesn't get the whole having to kill thing, that unfortunately happens a lot in this CrapSack worlds.

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* TechnicalPacifist: Despite her willingness to get into a fight, Rainbow Dash doesn't get the whole having to kill thing, that unfortunately happens a lot in this CrapSack worlds.CrapsackWorld.



* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arranged marriage, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents,]] all because she was born with a magical talent.Oh, and her SubstituteParentalFigure [[spoiler:turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]].

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* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arranged marriage, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents,]] all because she was born with a magical talent. Oh, and her SubstituteParentalFigure [[spoiler:turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]].Umbra.]]



* BlessedWithSuck: Her Magic talent comes in handy a lot of the time, but just look how it has effected her life as well.

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* BlessedWithSuck: Her Magic talent comes in handy a lot of the time, but just look how it has effected affected her life as well.



* BrokenPedestal:[[spoiler: To Twinkle Shine. After the latter is revealed to be, Umbra.]]

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* BrokenPedestal:[[spoiler: To Twinkle Shine. After the latter is revealed to be, be Umbra.]]



* SuperBreedingProgram: Is forced into this by the king, in hopes that she can produce an alicorn ere.

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* SuperBreedingProgram: Is forced into this by the king, in hopes that she can produce an alicorn ere.heir.






Star's bodyguard and closest friend. Astrid is a member of the Royal Griffin guard, charged with protecting Star at all cost. She also developes a fast, if shaky friendship with Rainbow Dash.

* Anti-Hero
* BadAss: She storms Cash's dig site single-handedlly.
* BigDamnHeroesMoment: At the dig site.

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Star's bodyguard and closest friend. Astrid is a member of the Royal Griffin guard, charged with protecting Star at all cost. She also developes develops a fast, if shaky friendship with Rainbow Dash.

* Anti-Hero
AntiHero
* BadAss: {{Badass}}: She storms Cash's dig site single-handedlly.
* BigDamnHeroesMoment: BigDamnHeroes: At the dig site.



* BodyGuardingABadAss: For Star Fall.
* SuperBreedingProgram: Like all griffins, the lack of magic means she needs the aid of pony breeding programs, to help continue her line. This comes into a little problem though. See The bus came back below.

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* BodyGuardingABadAss: BodyGuardingABadass: For Star Fall.
* SuperBreedingProgram: Like all griffins, the lack of magic means she needs the aid of pony breeding programs, to help continue her line. This comes into a little problem though. See The bus came back below.
Fall.



* Undying Loyalty: Will always be there for Star, whether she wants her there or not.

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* Undying Loyalty: SuperBreedingProgram: Like all griffins, the lack of magic means she needs the aid of pony breeding programs, to help continue her line. This comes into a little problem though. See The bus came back below.
* UndyingLoyalty:
Will always be there for Star, whether she wants her there or not.



* {{Foil}}: His idealistic attitude and friend with all living things status, contrast greatly with his ex Charisma's cynical attitude and psychotic nature. Also, his rival Silas is a treturiouse scumbag, while he's an honest pony.

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* {{Foil}}: His idealistic attitude and friend with all living things status, contrast greatly with his ex Charisma's cynical attitude and psychotic nature. Also, his rival Silas is a treturiouse scumbag, while he's an honest pony.



A Changling agent of the Lunar Republic, currently using the alias of a deceased Lunar soldier (Including, pretending to be his mother's son.). He is sent to capture Rainbow Dash (Who was beleaved to be a Solar agent at the time.), at all cost. But along the way, Trail Blazer the guide, he hired to bring him across the Everstorm, befriends him, while trying to act as a moral compass. This, combined with his guilt over having the deserve the mother of the soldier he's impersonating, throws him into a moral deli ma, that causes him to re-think his entire life and what it means to be a changeling.

* AntiHero: As a Changling, he relies on deception to achieve his goal and at first, is willing to use whatever means necessary, to achieve his goals.

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A Changling Changeling agent of the Lunar Republic, currently using the alias of a deceased Lunar soldier (Including, pretending to be his mother's son.). He is sent to capture Rainbow Dash (Who was beleaved to be a Solar agent at the time.), at all cost. But along the way, Trail Blazer the guide, he hired to bring him across the Everstorm, befriends him, while trying to act as a moral compass. This, combined with his guilt over having the deserve the mother of the soldier he's impersonating, throws him into a moral deli ma, that causes him to re-think his entire life and what it means to be a changeling.

* AntiHero: As a Changling, Changeling, he relies on deception to achieve his goal and at first, is willing to use whatever means necessary, to achieve his goals.



* DarkIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changelings, but is differentiately not evil.

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* ConflictingLoyalty: Has one, when he starts question the morality of what he's doing.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changelings, but is differentiately definitely not evil.



* InternalDelima: Has one, when he starts question the morality of what he's doing.



* ReplacementGoldfish: Colum implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conciouse version of this.
* ShapeShiftier: He is a changeling, after all.

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* ReplacementGoldfish: Colum Calumn implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conciouse version of this.
* ShapeShiftier: ShapeShifter: He is a changeling, after all.



* Took A Level In Kindness: Blaze manages to, help Colum become a better person.
* WorfEffect: Calumn is an elite agent. But, whenever an actual fight rolls around, he's dispatched pretty quickly.


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* Took A Level In Kindness: TookALevelInKindness: Blaze manages to, to help Colum become a better person.
* WorfEffect: TheWorfEffect: Calumn is an elite agent. But, whenever an actual fight rolls around, he's dispatched pretty quickly.




* Anti-Hero: Not exactly the most honorable of member of the cast.

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* Anti-Hero: AntiHero: Not exactly the most honorable of member of the cast.



[[folder:Main Characters(Villions)]]

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Characters(Villians)]]



The War Goddess and most feared being in post-Schism Equistra. After being temperately put out commission, by Celestia and Luna [[spoiler: Sadly, through a HeroicSacrifice.]] Umbra is believed to be one of the causes of the Schism, but her true origins are a complete mystery.

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The War Goddess and most feared being in post-Schism Equistra.Equestra. After being temperately put out commission, by Celestia and Luna [[spoiler: Sadly, through a HeroicSacrifice.]] Umbra is believed to be one of the causes of the Schism, but her true origins are a complete mystery.



* TheAssimilatior: Can absorb any pony and bring them back as her undead mooks.

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* TheAssimilatior: TheAssimilator: Can absorb any pony and bring them back as her undead mooks.



* BadAssBoast: Gives these all the time.
* BeserkButton: She really doesn't like the mention of the Element Barriers.

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* BadAssBoast: BadassBoast: Gives these all the time.
* BeserkButton: BerserkButton: She really doesn't like the mention of the Element Barriers.Barriers.
* BloodyMurder: If by some miracle, you actually get her to bleed, her blood will physically attack and infect you.



* DeathByAThousandPaperCuts: The only reason [[spoiler:Rainbow, Astrid, and Star]] was through spamming repeated hits to the same area while she was healing.

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* DeathByAThousandPaperCuts: DeathByAThousandCuts: The only reason [[spoiler:Rainbow, Astrid, and Star]] Star won]] was through spamming repeated hits to the same area while she was healing.



* HealingFactor: Not that most ponies that face her, will ever see it used.
* MindHive: [[spoiler: with Twinkle Shine.]]

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* HealingFactor: Not that most ponies that face her, her will ever see it used.
* MindHive: [[spoiler: with With Twinkle Shine.]]



* VoiceOfLegion: Can speak in the Royal Canterlot Voice.

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* VoiceOfLegion: VoiceOfTheLegion: Can speak in the Royal Canterlot Voice.



* WeaponizedBlood: If by some miracle, you actually get her to bleed, her blood will physically attack and infect you.

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FanFic/HarmonyTheory



Rainbow Dash

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Rainbow !!Rainbow Dash



Unique to this patrayol

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Unique to this patrayol
story:



* MythologyGag: She briefly disguises herself and takes the identity of: [[spoiler: FireFly.]]

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* MythologyGag: She briefly disguises herself and takes the identity of: of [[spoiler: FireFly.]]



* SuperStrenght

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* SuperStrenghtSuperStrength



* UnskilledButStrong: She has no combat training, but her natural strength usually makes up for. [[spoiler: Bites her in the flank, when she has to face Charisma, who is far weaker, but makes up for it with superior training.]]

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* UnskilledButStrong: She has no combat training, but her natural strength usually makes up for.for it. [[spoiler: Bites her in the flank, when she has to face Charisma, who is far weaker, but makes up for it with superior training.]]



Star Fall "Fall"

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Star !!Star Fall "Fall"



Astrid

Astrid: "Oh no, I missed out on learning egghead, to become an unstoppable bad ass."

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Astrid

Astrid: "Oh
!!Astrid

->'''Astrid:''' Oh
no, I missed out on learning egghead, to become an unstoppable bad ass."
ass.



Trail "Blaze" Blazer

Blaze: "What the bartender was doing was robbery because it was stealing, because he's taking from you. What Silas is doing is murder, because he's going to leave you to die."

Later
Blaze: "I'm mostly here in case my ex shows up."
Hard Boiled: "Your ex?"
Blaze: "Charisma"
Hard Boiled: "You dated that?!"
Blaze: "It was an exercise in time and pain management."


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Trail !!Trail "Blaze" Blazer

Blaze: ->'''Blaze''': "What the bartender was doing was robbery because it was stealing, because he's taking from you. What Silas is doing is murder, because he's going to leave you to die."

Later
Blaze: "I'm
Later:
->'''Blaze:''' I'm
mostly here in case my ex shows up."
Hard Boiled: "Your ex?"
Blaze: "Charisma"
Hard Boiled: "You
\\
'''Hard Boiled:''' Your ex?\\
'''Blaze:''' Charisma.\\
'''Hard Boiled:''' You
dated that?!"
Blaze: "It
that?!\\
'''Blaze:''' It
was an exercise in time and pain management."

management.




* BatManGambit: Pulls one on [[spoiler: Charisma.]]

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* BatManGambit: BatmanGambit: Pulls one on [[spoiler: Charisma.]]



* BunnyEaredLawyer: Is still a confident guide, despite being out of his mind.

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* BunnyEaredLawyer: BunnyEarsLawyer: Is still a confident guide, despite being out of his mind.



* DatingCatWomen: With Charisma.

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* DatingCatWomen: DatingCatwoman: With Charisma.



* HeelFaceTurn: Implied. Not only did he date PhycoForHire Charisma, but he also seems to know Cash personally. He also tries to get Charisma to go along, but fails.

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* HeelFaceTurn: Implied. Not only did he date PhycoForHire PhsycoForHire Charisma, but he also seems to know Cash personally. He also tries to get Charisma to go along, but fails.



* WhatKindOfPowerIsHeart: In a world with talents like magic and even killing, his talent that always points him in the right direction, doesn't sound too impressive. But it is.
* WhatTheHellHero?: Gives a subdued one to Calumn, when his friend [[spoiler: Brain Washes Rainbow Dash into loving him, just so he could bring her back to the Night Lands.

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* WhatKindOfPowerIsHeart: WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: In a world with talents like magic and even killing, his talent that always points him in the right direction, doesn't sound too impressive. But it is.
* WhatTheHellHero?: WhatTheHellHero: Gives a subdued one to Calumn, when his friend [[spoiler: Brain Washes [[spoiler:Brainwashes Rainbow Dash into loving him, just so he could bring her back to the Night Lands. Lands]].



* Undying Loyalty: To his friends.

Calumn "Strong Heart"

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* Undying Loyalty: UndyingLoyalty: To his friends.

Calumn !!Calumn "Strong Heart"



* Anti-Hero: As a Changling, he relies on deception to achieve his goal and at first, is willing to use whatever means necessary, to achieve his goals.
* BlackIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changelings, but is differentiately not evil.

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* Anti-Hero: AntiHero: As a Changling, he relies on deception to achieve his goal and at first, is willing to use whatever means necessary, to achieve his goals.
* BlackIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changelings, but is differentiately not evil.
goals.



* DarkIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changelings, but is differentiately not evil.



* Mind Rape: Though benevalent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.

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* Mind Rape: MindRape: Though benevalent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.



* ReplacementGoldFish: Colum implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conciouse version of this.

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* ReplacementGoldFish: ReplacementGoldfish: Colum implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conciouse version of this.



Spike (Adult)

Spike:"You want to know what the Elements are capable of?"

After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intellegent dragon, as well, as one of the most influentual creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renouned artist--not to assume he's not dangerouse on the battlefield-- credited for teaching generousity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

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Spike !!Spike (Adult)

Spike:"You ->'''Spike:''' You want to know what the Elements are capable of?"

of?

After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intellegent dragon, as well, as one of the most influentual creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renouned artist--not to assume he's not dangerouse on the battlefield-- battlefield -- credited for teaching generousity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.



** BadAss Grand Pa: Is currently one of the oldest surviving dragons, but can still tear mooks apart with ease.

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** BadAss Grand Pa: BadassGrandpa: Is currently one of the oldest surviving dragons, but can still tear mooks apart with ease.



* DeadPanSnarker: Has shades of this.

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* DeadPanSnarker: DeadpanSnarker: Has shades of this.



* FriendsWithChutala:[[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* GadedGlasses: Not oviose at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.
* Genius Bruiser: He's highly intelegent. Also, he can litterly rip you in half.

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* FriendsWithChutala:[[spoiler: FriendsWithCthulhu: [[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* GadedGlasses: JadedGlasses: Not oviose obvious at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.
* Genius Bruiser: GeniusBruiser: He's highly intelegent. Also, he can litterly rip you in half.



* Kill It With Fire:[[spoiler: How he mercy kills Cash's brain washed mooks.]]
* KnowsMoreThenTheyLetOn: He knew [[spoiler: Twinkle was Umbra the whole time.]] It's also implied that he knows more about the elements, then he's telling.
* HiddenDipth: Aparrently, he's a world renowned sculpter and archetect.
* Lightning Bruiser: Is suprisingly agile for a dragon.

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* Kill It With Fire:[[spoiler: KillItWithFire: [[spoiler: How he mercy kills Cash's brain washed brainwashed mooks.]]
* KnowsMoreThenTheyLetOn: He knew [[spoiler: Twinkle was Umbra the whole time.]] It's also implied that he knows more about the elements, then elements that he's telling.
* HiddenDipth: HiddenDepths: Aparrently, he's a world renowned sculpter and archetect.
* Lightning Bruiser: LightningBruiser: Is suprisingly agile for a dragon.



{{Revenge}}: His motive for going after Cash. After Max [[spoiler: corrupted baby dragon to use as a distraction.]]
* Took A Level In Bad Ass: A far cry from the little baby dragon from the past.

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* {{Revenge}}: His motive for going after Cash. After Max [[spoiler: corrupted [[spoiler:corrupted baby dragon to use as a distraction.]]
* Took A Level In Bad Ass: TookALevelInBadass: A far cry from the little baby dragon from the past.



* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A dragon.

Lt. Hard "HB" Boiled

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* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A dragon.

Lt.

!!Lt.
Hard "HB" Boiled



* BadAssNormal: He's just a normal pony. But, he does make up for it with police training and quick thinking.
** HandicappedBadAss: He has a debilitating condition, that causes his magic to slowly weaken over time. This also causes him to have intense headaches, that hinder his physical ability. Does that stop him, from going out in the field and fighting Cash's {{Mooks}}?

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* BadAssNormal: BadassNormal: He's just a normal pony. But, he does make up for it with police training and quick thinking.
** HandicappedBadAss: HandicappedBadass: He has a debilitating condition, that causes his magic to slowly weaken over time. This also causes him to have intense headaches, that hinder his physical ability. Does that stop him, from going out in the field and fighting Cash's {{Mooks}}?



* GoodOldFistaCuffs: Compared to Trabuse, he uses a much simpler fighting style.

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* GoodOldFistaCuffs: GoodOldFisticuffs: Compared to Trabuse, Traduse, he uses a much simpler fighting style.



** JerkAssHasAPoint: He really can't be blamed too much for not trusting changeling.
* Foil: To his partner Traduse. While he's an honest cop, who hates all the secret agent, cloak and dagger stuff, she's a changing and secret agent. This puts them at conflict at first.

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** JerkAssHasAPoint: JerkassHasAPoint: He really can't be blamed too much for not trusting changeling.
* Foil: {{Foil}}: To his partner Traduse. While he's an honest cop, who hates all the secret agent, cloak and dagger stuff, she's a changing and secret agent. This puts them at conflict at first.



* RelationShipUpgrade: Though he admits, he can't honestly say he loves her, he does admit she's become a close friend.

Traduse

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* RelationShipUpgrade: RelationshipUpgrade: Though he admits, he can't honestly say he loves her, he does admit she's become a close friend.

Traduse!!Traduse



* BlackIsNotEvil: Like all changelings, she's covered in black chitin.

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* BlackIsNotEvil: DarkIsNotEvil: Like all changelings, she's covered in black chitin.



* OppasitesAttract: Outright says this to HB.

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* OppasitesAttract: OppositesAttract: Outright says this to HB.



Gamma

Professor Twinkle Shine

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Gamma

Professor
!!Gamma

!!Professor
Twinkle Shine



* The Mentor: To Star Fall

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* The Mentor: TheMentor: To Star Fall



Walking Spoiler: Just look at the tropes under her name.

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Walking Spoiler: * WalkingSpoiler: Just look at the tropes under her name.



Nightmare "The Nightmare" Umbra

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Nightmare !!Nightmare "The Nightmare" Umbra



Umbra: "AT MY WEAKEST, I HAVE DEFEATED YOU BEST!!!"

Umbra: "When I Emerged From My Silence I Expected To See Armies Arrayed Against Me! Heroes And Sages Aiding Great Leaders In Battle Against The Only Foe That Will Ever Matter For You. A Worthy Challenge To My Dominion. What Have I Found? The Petty Rulers Of A Broken World, Sitting In Pretty Rows Celebrating The Union Of A Blushing Filly And Pampered Fop Who You Expect To Be Your Sovereign. Are You Such Fools That You Thought I Was Gone Forever? Where You Not Informed Of My Return? Did You Not See The Signs."

* TheAssimilatior: Can absorb any pony and bring them back, as her undead mooks.

to:

Umbra: "AT -> '''Umbra:''' AT MY WEAKEST, I HAVE DEFEATED YOU BEST!!!"

Umbra: "When
BEST!!!

->'''Umbra:''' When
I Emerged From My Silence I Expected To See Armies Arrayed Against Me! Heroes And Sages Aiding Great Leaders In Battle Against The Only Foe That Will Ever Matter For You. A Worthy Challenge To My Dominion. What Have I Found? The Petty Rulers Of A Broken World, Sitting In Pretty Rows Celebrating The Union Of A Blushing Filly And Pampered Fop Who You Expect To Be Your Sovereign. Are You Such Fools That You Thought I Was Gone Forever? Where You Not Informed Of My Return? Did You Not See The Signs."

Signs.

* TheAssimilatior: Can absorb any pony and bring them back, back as her undead mooks.



* DeathByAThousandPaperCuts: The only reason [[spoiler:Rainbow, Astrid, and Star]] was through spamming repeated hits to the same area, while she was healing.

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* DeathByAThousandPaperCuts: The only reason [[spoiler:Rainbow, Astrid, and Star]] was through spamming repeated hits to the same area, area while she was healing.



* NighImbonerable: At her wakened state, it takes an incredible amount of repeated hits, just to get her to back off.
* NoInDoorVoice: "ALWAYS SPEAKS TO PONIES LIKE THIS!!!!

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* NighImbonerable: NighInvulnerable: At her wakened state, it takes an incredible amount of repeated hits, just to get her to back off.
* NoInDoorVoice: NoIndoorVoice: "ALWAYS SPEAKS TO PONIES LIKE THIS!!!!



** "To call your selves noble, is laughable. You claim to worship Celestia. Yet when I look into your precious little sun loving faces, I do not see ponies she would be proud of. Just look at you now: You trample those weaker under hoof, in hopes of buying yourself another breath of life. Craven beast, who hope is as empty as your hearts.
* Omnicidal Maniac: Plans to turn the world to ashes.

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** "To --> To call your selves noble, is laughable. You claim to worship Celestia. Yet when I look into your precious little sun loving faces, I do not see ponies she would be proud of. Just look at you now: You trample those weaker under hoof, in hopes of buying yourself another breath of life. Craven beast, who hope is as empty as your hearts.
* Omnicidal Maniac: OmnicidalManiac: Plans to turn the world to ashes.



* Unskilled,ButStrong: Is the most powerful character seen so far, but is not particularly talented in direct combat.

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* Unskilled,ButStrong: UnskilledButStrong: Is the most powerful character seen so far, but is not particularly talented in direct combat.



* WeHaveBecomeComplaicent: Accuses the ponies of this.

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* WeHaveBecomeComplaicent: WeHaveBecomeComplacent: Accuses the ponies of this.



Maxi-million Oswald "Max" Cash

Max: " I think I'm going to raid the candy store. You never deprive a chocolate-attic from his fix. Oh, and while I'm replenishing my supply, can you kill everyone."

Charisma: " Don't you have a plan B?"
Max: "Of course I have a plan B. I hired an ex special forces pegasus as my personnel bodyguard."

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Maxi-million !!Maxi-million Oswald "Max" Cash

Max: " ->'''Max:''' I think I'm going to raid the candy store. You never deprive a chocolate-attic from his fix. Oh, and while I'm replenishing my supply, can you kill everyone."

Charisma: "
everyone.

->'''Charisma:'''
Don't you have a plan B?"
Max: "Of
B?\\
'''Max:''' Of
course I have a plan B. I hired an ex special forces pegasus as my personnel bodyguard."
bodyguard.



* ArmourPiecingQuestion: With the help of [[spoiler: the Element of Loyalty,]] Max is basically able to weaponize this trope. Simply asking someone what they truly want, and to just allow one little betrayal, is enough to send them into HeroricBOSD.

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* ArmourPiecingQuestion: ArmourPiercingQuestion: With the help of [[spoiler: the Element of Loyalty,]] Max is basically able to weaponize this trope. Simply asking someone what they truly want, and to just allow one little betrayal, is enough to send them into HeroricBOSD.



* ChronicBackStabbing Disorder: Max will betray anyone, so long as it's convent.

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* ChronicBackStabbing Disorder: ChronicBackStabbingDisorder: Max will betray anyone, so long as it's convent.convenient.



* ForMeItWasTuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: thriving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but he can't even remember her name.

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* ForMeItWasTuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: thriving driving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but he can't even remember her name.



* ScrewTheRules, I Have Money: One of the reasons he has gotten away so far. He even out right says that even if he does get taking to justice, he has the funds and connections to stall for an entire decade, while his people do whatever necessary to get him out. [[spoiler: This was after marching his private army into a senator's mansion and killing multiple cops.]]

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* ScrewTheRules, I Have Money: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: One of the reasons he has gotten away so far. He even out right outright says that even if he does get taking to justice, he has the funds and connections to stall for an entire decade, while his people do whatever necessary to get him out. [[spoiler: This was after marching his private army into a senator's mansion and killing multiple cops.]]



* VillainousFriendship: He had this with John Bays, [[until he murdered him.]] To a lesser extent, Charisma. Though, he makes clear she's only a tool for him.

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* VillainousFriendship: He had this with John Bays, [[until [[spoiler:until he murdered him.]] To a lesser extent, Charisma. Though, Though he makes clear she's only a tool for him.



* WouldHurtAChild: During his[[spoiler: massacre of a small town, he gleefully sets a school on fire.]]

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* WouldHurtAChild: During his[[spoiler: his [[spoiler: massacre of a small town, he gleefully sets a school on fire.]]



Charisma

Star Fall: "The three of us can out run her. You and Astrid can over power her. But NONE of us, can out fight her."

Max Cash: "I hired you, because your a murderous phycopath."

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Charisma

Star Fall: "The
!!Charisma

->'''Star Fall:''' The
three of us can out run her. You and Astrid can over power her. But NONE of us, can out fight her."

Max Cash: "I
her.

->'''Max Cash:'' I
hired you, because your a murderous phycopath."
psychopath.



* BadAss: She used to train GRIFFINS.
** BadAss Normal: Can go toe to toe with griffons, dragons, and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash.]] despite only being a regular Pegasus. Albert, one with a literal talent for killing.

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* BadAss: {{Badass}}: She used to train GRIFFINS.
** BadAss Normal: BadassNormal: Can go toe to toe with griffons, dragons, and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash.]] despite only being a regular Pegasus. Albert, one with a literal talent for killing.



* BeserkButton: Not even MAX, is allowed to bring up her parents.

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* BeserkButton: Not even MAX, '''Max''' is allowed to bring up her parents.



* DavidVsGalioth: A rare villainous example: She faces [[spoiler: Astrid, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, all of whom, vastly out power her.]]

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* DavidVsGalioth: A rare villainous example: She faces [[spoiler: Astrid, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, all of whom, vastly out power out-power her.]]



* ImporwardBadass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]

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* ImporwardBadass: ImpoweredBadass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]



* [[spoiler:IncurableCoughOfDeath: Has developed this due to Max's rather lack-luster healing abilities.]]



* VillainousValor: As monster-is as her action are, it's hard not be impressed with her combat ability.

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* VillainousValor: As monster-is monsterish as her action are, it's hard not be impressed with her combat ability.



Melody

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Melody
!!Melody



Big Wig

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Big !!Big Wig



* BadAss: He put CHARISMA on the defensive.
* FantasticRacism: He's immediately ready to kill Calumn, after finding out he's a changeling. [[spoiler: Until he sees one of the children, Calumn had befriended and saved.]]
* NotQuitFlight: Big Wig can use his telekinesis, to fly around on a concrete slab. But, he has very poor maneuverability.

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* BadAss: He put CHARISMA '''Charisma''' on the defensive.
* FantasticRacism: He's immediately ready to kill Calumn, after finding out he's a changeling. [[spoiler: Until he sees one of the children, children Calumn had befriended and saved.]]
* NotQuitFlight: NotQuiteFlight: Big Wig can use his telekinesis, to fly around on a concrete slab. But, he has very poor maneuverability.



The King

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The !!The King



John Bays

One of(if not only) true friends of Max Cash. For years, he has loyally served and mentored his best friend Max. Which Max returns [[spoiler: with making him the first sacrifice to remove the elements.]]

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John !!John Bays

One of(if of (if not the only) true friends of Max Cash. For years, he has loyally served and mentored his best friend Max. Which Max returns [[spoiler: with making him the first sacrifice to remove the elements.]]



Regal Stature

{{Adorkable}}: Is this.

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Regal !!Regal Stature

{{Adorkable}}: *{{Adorkable}}: Is this.



ArrangedMarrige: With Star Fall.
DarkHorseVictory: He's the middle child and hasn't learned all that's necessary to be king, because odds our he would have never been given the opportunity. Then, his father decided he was the one to be married to Star Fall, and made him his ere to the throne.
SpoiledSweet: Is actually a very nice guy.

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ArrangedMarrige: *ArrangedMarrige: With Star Fall.
DarkHorseVictory: *DarkHorseVictory: He's the middle child and hasn't learned all that's necessary to be king, because odds our he would have never been given the opportunity. Then, his father decided he was the one to be married to Star Fall, and made him his ere to the throne.
SpoiledSweet: *SpoiledSweet: Is actually a very nice guy.



Silas

Silas: "Shut up, stupid pony."

to:

Silas

Silas: "Shut
!!Silas

->'''Silas:''' Shut
up, stupid pony."
pony.



High Fashion

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High !!High Fashion



* Satalite Character: Only serves as Melody's boss.

Conrad Sherman

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* Satalite Character: SatelliteCharacter: Only serves as Melody's boss.

Conrad !!Conrad Sherman



TheAlcoholic: Drinks his heart away, while in his hotel suite
CasanovaWannabe: Really loves chasing tail.
KilledOffForReal: Used as a sacrifice[[spoiler: to retrieve the element of honest.]]
OhCrap: When he realizes he's busted.

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* TheAlcoholic: Drinks his heart away, while in his hotel suite
* CasanovaWannabe: Really loves chasing tail.
* KilledOffForReal: Used as a sacrifice[[spoiler: to sacrifice [[spoiler:to retrieve the element of honest.honesty.]]
* OhCrap: When he realizes he's busted.












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* BigDammHeroesMoment: At the dig site.

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* BigDammHeroesMoment: BigDamnHeroesMoment: At the dig site.



* BreedingProgram: Like all griffins, the lack of magic means she needs the aid of pony breeding programs, to help continue her line. This comes into a little problem though. See The bus came back below.

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* BreedingProgram: SuperBreedingProgram: Like all griffins, the lack of magic means she needs the aid of pony breeding programs, to help continue her line. This comes into a little problem though. See The bus came back below.



** TheBusCameBack: Does recover. But, [[spoiler: it's through magical healing, which not only puts her long term health at great risk, but it also permanetley puts her out of the Griffin breeding program.]]

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** TheBusCameBack: Does recover. But, [[spoiler: it's through magical healing, which not only puts her long term health at great risk, but it also permanetley permanently puts her out of the Griffin breeding program.]]



* Friend To All Living Being: He outright says, he loves everyone in the world, including all the JerkAsses.

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* Friend To All Living Being: FriendToAllLivingThings: He outright says, he loves everyone in the world, including all the JerkAsses.

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* MagicKnight:



* BreedingProgram: Is forced into this by the king, in hopes that she can produce an alicorn ere.

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* BreedingProgram: Is forced into this by CombatPragmatist: Her methods of dealing with [[spoiler: Charisma]] is to simply use her magic. [[spoiler: She's the king, in hopes only one that she can produce an alicorn ere.beats her fairly easily.]]



* PragmaticCombat: Her methods of dealing with [[spoiler: Charisma]] is to simply use her magic. [[spoiler: She's the only one that beats her fairly easily.]]

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* PragmaticCombat: Her methods of dealing with [[spoiler: Charisma]] is to simply use her magic. [[spoiler: She's MagicKnight
* SuperBreedingProgram: Is forced into this by
the only one king, in hopes that beats her fairly easily.]]she can produce an alicorn ere.



* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.


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* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.




* CombatPragmatist: Tries do this: mixed results.



* PragmaticCombat: Tries do this: mixed results.



* CombatPragmatist: Her tactics include everything from throwing decoy knives to distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.



* PsychoForHire:
* PragmaticCombat: Her tactics include everything from throwing decoy knives to distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.

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* PsychoForHire:
* PragmaticCombat: Her tactics include everything from throwing decoy knives to distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Her Magic talent comes in handy a lot of the time, but just look how it has effected her life as well.



* CursedWithAwsome: Her Magic talent comes in handy a lot of the time, but just look how it has effected her life as well.

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* FastLerner: Picks up on modern Solar, shockingly fast. It's implied that this is to do with whatever brought her here.


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* InstantExpert: Picks up on modern Solar, shockingly fast. It's implied that this is to do with whatever brought her here.

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* CrackPairing: Basically how he sees his relationship with Traduse.
* FanPreferredCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Traduse x HB.



RelationShipUpgrade: Though he admits, he can't honestly say he loves her, he does admit she's become a close friend.
* {{Squick}}: Runs into a lot of this, while working with Traduse.

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RelationShipUpgrade: *RelationShipUpgrade: Though he admits, he can't honestly say he loves her, he does admit she's become a close friend.
* {{Squick}}: Runs into a lot of this, while working with Traduse.



A changling agent for the Lunar Republic and Straff's right hand girl. She's partenered with Lt. Hard Boiled, who she(much to his charging) quickly takes a liking to.

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A changling changeling agent for the Lunar Republic and Straff's right hand girl. She's partenered with Lt. Hard Boiled, who she(much to his charging) quickly takes a liking to.



* FanPreferredCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Traduse x HB.



* Squick: While traveling through the jungle, she apparently ate something alive.

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* Squick: While traveling through the jungle, she apparently ate something alive.



* [[spoiler: MasterManipulator: She's been secretly shaping the kingdom's history from the begining.]]

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* [[spoiler: MasterManipulator: She's been secretly shaping the kingdom's history from the begining.beginning.]]



* [[spoiler: WellIntention-edExtremist: She's only doing what, she sees as best for the world.]]

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* [[spoiler: WellIntention-edExtremist: WellIntentionedExtremist: She's only doing what, she sees as best for the world.]]



* The Assimilatior: Can obsorb any pony and bring them back, as her undead mooks.
* Ax Crazy: Very.
* Bad Ass Boast: Gives these all the time.
* Beserk Button: She really doesn't like the mention of the Element Barriers.
* CallBack: Makes one to Nightmare Moon's speach, at the end of her speech above.

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* The Assimilatior: TheAssimilatior: Can obsorb absorb any pony and bring them back, as her undead mooks.
* Ax Crazy: AxCrazy: Very.
* Bad Ass Boast: BadAssBoast: Gives these all the time.
* Beserk Button: BeserkButton: She really doesn't like the mention of the Element Barriers.
* CallBack: Makes one to Nightmare Moon's speach, speech, at the end of her speech above.



* The Dreaded: She makes Charisma look like a minor annouece.

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* The Dreaded: TheDreaded: She makes Charisma look like a minor annouece.announce.



* Mind Hive: [[spoiler: with Twinkle Shine.]]
* NighImbonrable: At her weakend state, it takes an incredible amount of reapeated hits, just to get her to back off.
* No InDoor Voice: "ALWAYS SPEAKS TO PONIES LIKE THIS!!!!

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* Mind Hive: MindHive: [[spoiler: with Twinkle Shine.]]
* NighImbonrable: NighImbonerable: At her weakend wakened state, it takes an incredible amount of reapeated repeated hits, just to get her to back off.
* No InDoor Voice: NoInDoorVoice: "ALWAYS SPEAKS TO PONIES LIKE THIS!!!!



** "To call your selvers noble, is laughable. You claim to worship Celestia. Yet when I look into your preciouse little sun loving faces, I do not see ponies she would be proud of. Just look at you now: You trample those weaker underhoof, in hopes of buying yourself another breath of life. Craven beast, who hope is as empty as your hearts.

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** "To call your selvers selves noble, is laughable. You claim to worship Celestia. Yet when I look into your preciouse precious little sun loving faces, I do not see ponies she would be proud of. Just look at you now: You trample those weaker underhoof, under hoof, in hopes of buying yourself another breath of life. Craven beast, who hope is as empty as your hearts.



* Voice Of Legion: Can speak in the Royal Canterlot Voice.
* Unskilled,ButStrong: Is the most powerful charater seen so far, but is not particurly talented in direct combat.

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* Voice Of Legion: VoiceOfLegion: Can speak in the Royal Canterlot Voice.
* Unskilled,ButStrong: Is the most powerful charater character seen so far, but is not particurly particularly talented in direct combat.



* WeHaveBecomeComplaicent: Acuses the ponies of this.

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* WeHaveBecomeComplaicent: Acuses Accuses the ponies of this.



* Well Intentioned Extremist: Implied to be this.


Maximillion Oswald "Max" Cash

Max: " I think I'm going to raid the candy store. You never deprive a choclate-attic from his fix. Oh, and while I'm replenishing my supply, can you kill everyone."

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* Well Intentioned Extremist: WellIntentionedExtremist: Implied to be this.


Maximillion Maxi-million Oswald "Max" Cash

Max: " I think I'm going to raid the candy store. You never deprive a choclate-attic chocolate-attic from his fix. Oh, and while I'm replenishing my supply, can you kill everyone."



Max: "Of course I have a plan B. I hired an ex special forces pegasus as my personle bodyguard."

A powerful magic talented unicorn from the Lunar Republic and one of the main atagonist, Max is shown to be brillent, polite, and highly ambitiouse, if ecentric character. But he is not to be underestemated by his demeaner: Max is a VERY ruthless and cunning. He has aquired great wealth from both legal and ilegal ventures, as well as a lot of powerful connection. He has also been shown to very sadistic and shows many characteristics ossociated with sociopaths. Dispite thier best efforts, Cash and his plans have remained an enigma to everyone: including his closest operative.

* ArmourPiecingQuistion: With the help of [[spoiler: the Element of Loyalty,]] Max is basically able to weaponize this trope. Simply asking someone what they truly want, and to just allow one little betrayal, is enough to send them into HeroricBOSD.
* AxCrazy: When he throws away the Affiably Evil demeaner. [[spoiler: He orders the death of an entire town, including the children, with a sadistic smile on his face.]]
* Bad Boss: Perfectly willing to send his own henchmen to thier deaths.

to:

Max: "Of course I have a plan B. I hired an ex special forces pegasus as my personle personnel bodyguard."

A powerful magic talented unicorn from the Lunar Republic and one of the main atagonist, antagonist, Max is shown to be brillent, brilliant, polite, and highly ambitiouse, ambitious, if ecentric eccentric character. But he is not to be underestemated underestimated by his demeaner: demeanor: Max is a VERY ruthless and cunning. He has aquired great wealth from both legal and ilegal illegal ventures, as well as a lot of powerful connection. He has also been shown to very sadistic and shows many characteristics ossociated associated with sociopaths. Dispite thier Despite their best efforts, Cash and his plans have remained an enigma to everyone: including his closest operative.

* ArmourPiecingQuistion: ArmourPiecingQuestion: With the help of [[spoiler: the Element of Loyalty,]] Max is basically able to weaponize this trope. Simply asking someone what they truly want, and to just allow one little betrayal, is enough to send them into HeroricBOSD.
* AxCrazy: When he throws away the Affiably Evil demeaner.demeanor. [[spoiler: He orders the death of an entire town, including the children, with a sadistic smile on his face.]]
* Bad Boss: BadBoss: Perfectly willing to send his own henchmen to thier deaths.



* Beware The Silly Ones: Max may have a very layed back and playful demeanor, but he is one of the most dangerouse criminals to ever live.

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* Beware The Silly Ones: BewareTheSillyOnes: Max may have a very layed laid back and playful demeanor, but he is one of the most dangerouse dangerous criminals to ever live.



* Chess Master: Is very good at planning ahead.
* Cloud Cuckolander: A villinouse example.
* Chronic Back Stabbing Disorder: Max will betray anyone, so long as it's convient.
* Evil Can Not Comprehend Good: He seems to be a very friendly and charming stallion, but he really only has a basic understanding of things like loyalty and love.
* Expy: Some have drawn connections with him and the Joker.
* Faux Affiably Evil: He comes off as friendly and polite stallion, but he is anything but.

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* Chess Master: ChessMaster: Is very good at planning ahead.
* Cloud Cuckolander: CloudCuckoolander: A villinouse villainous example.
* Chronic Back Stabbing ChronicBackStabbing Disorder: Max will betray anyone, so long as it's convient.
convent.
* Evil Can Not Comprehend Good: EvilCanNotComprehendGood: He seems to be a very friendly and charming stallion, but he really only has a basic understanding of things like loyalty and love.
* Expy: Some have drawn connections with him and the Joker.
* Faux Affiably
FauxAffiably Evil: He comes off as friendly and polite stallion, but he is anything but.



* For Me It Was Tuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: thriving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but he can't even remember her name.
* For The Evulz: He definatley does way more evil things, than he has to.

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* For Me It Was Tuesday: ForMeItWasTuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: thriving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but he can't even remember her name.
* For The Evulz: ForTheEvulz: He definatley does way more evil things, than he has to.



* LackOfEpathy: He's basically the worst scumbag imaginable.
* Magnificient Bastered: Has a long and well layed out plan, and is in complete control most of the time. But, he's not afraid to improvise.
* Manipulative Bastered: There is no one he won't do this too.

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* LackOfEpathy: LackOfEmpathy: He's basically the worst scumbag imaginable.
* Magnificient Bastered: MagnificentBastard: Has a long and well layed laid out plan, and is in complete control most of the time. But, he's not afraid to improvise.
* Manipulative Bastered: ManipulativeBastard: There is no one he won't do this too.



* Oppurtunistic Bastered: When his plans do run into problems, he's quick to improvise.
* Trade Mark Favorite food: Cochlate and Cookies.
* Screw The Rules, I Have Money: One of the reasons he has gotten away so far. He even out right says that even if he does get taking to justice, he has the funds and connections to stall for an entire decade, while his people do whatever nesscesary to get him out. [[spoiler: This was after marching his private army into a senator's massion and killing multiple cops.]]
* Slasher Smile/StepharedSmiler: Switches between these.
* The Sociopath: Is heavilly impided to be one.

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* Oppurtunistic Bastered: OpportunisticBastard: When his plans do run into problems, he's quick to improvise.
* Trade Mark Favorite food: Cochlate TradeMarkFavoriteFood: Chocolate and Cookies.
* Screw The Rules, ScrewTheRules, I Have Money: One of the reasons he has gotten away so far. He even out right says that even if he does get taking to justice, he has the funds and connections to stall for an entire decade, while his people do whatever nesscesary necessary to get him out. [[spoiler: This was after marching his private army into a senator's massion mansion and killing multiple cops.]]
* Slasher Smile/StepharedSmiler: SlasherSmile/StepforedSmiler: Switches between these.
* The Sociopath: TheSociopath: Is heavilly impided heavily implied to be one.



* Straw Nillist: Heavilly implied in chapter 29.
* Suicide Aider: Can do this.
* Unreliable Narator: His stories should be taken with less then grain of salt.
* Villanouse Break Down: Is starting to have a major one.
* VillinouseFriendship: He had this with John Bays, [[until he murderd him.]] To a lesser extent, Charisma. Though, he makes clear she's only a tool for him.
* Villain Sue: Some commenters have started to debate on this, considering his plans mostly go off without a hitch and when something does go wrong, he makes it seem like a minor set back, and is very quick to adjust. [[spoiler: Finally subverted in chapter 29.]]

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* Straw Nillist: Heavilly StrawNihilist: Heavily implied in chapter 29.
* Suicide Aider: *PsychicAssistedSuicide: Can do this.
* Unreliable Narator: UnreliableNarrator: His stories should be taken with less then grain of salt.
* Villanouse Break VillainousBreak Down: Is starting to have a major one.
* VillinouseFriendship: VillainousFriendship: He had this with John Bays, [[until he murderd murdered him.]] To a lesser extent, Charisma. Though, he makes clear she's only a tool for him.
* Villain Sue: VillainSue: Some commenters commentators have started to debate on this, considering his plans mostly go off without a hitch and when something does go wrong, he makes it seem like a minor set back, and is very quick to adjust. [[spoiler: Finally subverted in chapter 29.]]



* WouldHurtAChild: During his[[spoiler: massacure of a small town, he gleefully sets a school on fire.]]
* YouHaveOutLivedYourUseFullness: He doesn't even try to hide the fact, that he'll do this to everone. [[spoiler: Including his only friend.]]


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* WouldHurtAChild: During his[[spoiler: massacure massacre of a small town, he gleefully sets a school on fire.]]
* YouHaveOutLivedYourUseFullness: He doesn't even try to hide the fact, that he'll do this to everone.everyone. [[spoiler: Including his only friend.]]




* Ax Crazy: Is this by nature, of having a killer mark.
* Bad Ass: She used to train GRIFFINS.
** Bad Ass Normal: Can go toe to toe with griffons, dragons, and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash.]] despite only being a regular Pegasus. Albert, one with a literal talent for killing.
** Bad Ass Adorable: A psychotic commando, who literally was born to be killer, just happens to be an adorable pink Pegasus.
* Becouse You Were Nice To Me: Possibly the reason she cares for Trail Blazer.
* Beserk Button: Not even MAX, is allowed to bring up her parents.
* Blessed With Suck: Her killer talent does give her incredible combat ability, but it also drove her insane.
* Blood Knight: Part of her talent.
* Cry For The Devil: After finding out that the talent she's had for most of her life,[[spoiler: is constantly telling her to kill everyone around her]], whether she wants to or not. It's kind of hard to say she she ever had a chance of being anything, other then the psychopathic killer she is today.

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* Ax Crazy: AxCrazy: Is this by nature, of having a killer mark.
* Bad Ass: BadAss: She used to train GRIFFINS.
** Bad Ass BadAss Normal: Can go toe to toe with griffons, dragons, and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash.]] despite only being a regular Pegasus. Albert, one with a literal talent for killing.
** Bad Ass Adorable: BadAssAdorable: A psychotic commando, who literally was born to be killer, just happens to be an adorable pink Pegasus.
* Becouse You Were Nice To Me: BecouseYouWereNiceToMe: Possibly the reason she cares for Trail Blazer.
* Beserk Button: BeserkButton: Not even MAX, is allowed to bring up her parents.
* Blessed With Suck: BlessedWithSuck: Her killer talent does give her incredible combat ability, but it also drove her insane.
* Blood Knight: BloodKnight: Part of her talent.
* Cry For The Devil: CryForTheDevil: After finding out that the talent she's had for most of her life,[[spoiler: is constantly telling her to kill everyone around her]], whether she wants to or not. It's kind of hard to say she she ever had a chance of being anything, other then the psychopathic killer she is today.



* Dark And Troubled Past: Hinted at.

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* Dark And Troubled Past: DarkAndTroubledPast: Hinted at.



* The Dragon: Is this to Max.
* The Dreaded: Is this to many ponies who are familiar with her.
* Imporward Badass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]
* Even Evil Has Loved Ones: Blaze is the only pony she hesitates to kill.
* Even Evil Has Standards: Though she never acts on it, even she is clearly disturbed by her boss's actions. [[spoiler: Blaze tries to invoke this, to snap her out of her homicidal rage.]]

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* The Dragon: TheDragon: Is this to Max.
* The Dreaded: TheDreaded: Is this to many ponies who are familiar with her.
* Imporward Badass: ImporwardBadass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]
* Even Evil Has Loved Ones: EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Blaze is the only pony she hesitates to kill.
* Even Evil Has Standards: EvenEvilHasStandards: Though she never acts on it, even she is clearly disturbed by her boss's actions. [[spoiler: Blaze tries to invoke this, to snap her out of her homicidal rage.]]



* Knife Nut: Her favorite weapon.
* Made Of Iron: For a modern Pegasus, she can shrug off some serious hits.
* Orgasmic Combat: Apparently, her talent give her a very satisfying filling, every time she successfully kills some one.
* Pet The Dog Moment: Tries to give Melody genuinely helpful advice, on how to advance her career as a body guard.
* Psycho Ex-Girlfriend: To Trail Blazer.
* Psycho For Hire:
* Pragmatic Combat: Her tactics include everything from throwing decoy knives to distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.
* Rewarded As A Trader Deserves: Heavily implied to be her eventual fate.
* Sex Is Violence: She's very kinky.
* Self Made Orphan: Heavily implied.
* Torture Technician: Really enjoys interrogations.

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** She's also taking to calling Rainbow Dash "hot stuff".
* Knife Nut: KnifeNut: Her favorite weapon.
* Made Of Iron: MadeOfIron: For a modern Pegasus, she can shrug off some serious hits.
* Orgasmic Combat: OrgasmicCombat: Apparently, her talent give her a very satisfying filling, every time she successfully kills some one.
* Pet The Dog Moment: PetTheDogMoment: Tries to give Melody genuinely helpful advice, on how to advance her career as a body guard.
* Psycho Ex-Girlfriend: PsychoExGirlfriend: To Trail Blazer.
* Psycho For Hire:
PsychoForHire:
* Pragmatic Combat: PragmaticCombat: Her tactics include everything from throwing decoy knives to distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.
* Rewarded As A Trader Deserves: RewardedAsATraderDeserves: Heavily implied to be her eventual fate.
* Sex Is Violence: SexIsViolence: She's very kinky.
* Self Made Orphan: SelfMadeOrphan: Heavily implied.
* Torture Technician: TortureTechnician: Really enjoys interrogations.



* Villonouse Valor: As monster-is as her action are, it's hard not be impressed with her combat ability.

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* Villonouse Valor: VillainousValor: As monster-is as her action are, it's hard not be impressed with her combat ability.

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* KnightHood: Is given some equivalent to this. But, [[spoiler: it's more to distract the nobles from the King's other controversial plans.]]



* ChildProdogy: Was the first pegasus to be born with a magic talent.

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* ChildProdogy: ChildProdigy: Was the first pegasus to be born with a magic talent.



Max Cash: "I hired you, becouse your a murderous phycopath."

Max's personal body guard and Blaze's ex girl-friend. Charisma is a former member of the Solor Kingdom's special forces and very skilled combatant, with a talent specifically for killing. On the surface, she appears as a fairly inncocent pink pegasus, but undernithe is a phycotic killer who's constantly being told by her talent, how to kill everyone in her immediate vecinity.

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Max Cash: "I hired you, becouse because your a murderous phycopath."

Max's personal body guard and Blaze's ex girl-friend. Charisma is a former member of the Solor Kingdom's special forces and very skilled combatant, with a talent specifically for killing. On the surface, she appears as a fairly inncocent innocent pink pegasus, Pegasus, but undernithe underneath is a phycotic psychotic killer who's constantly being told by her talent, how to kill everyone in her immediate vecinity.
vicinity.



** Bad Ass Normal: Can go toe to toe with griffons, dragons, and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash.]] despite only being a reguler pegasus. Albert, one with a literal talent for killing.
** Bad Ass Adorable: A phycotic commando, who litterally was born to be killer, just happens to be an adorable pink pegasus.

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** Bad Ass Normal: Can go toe to toe with griffons, dragons, and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash.]] despite only being a reguler pegasus.regular Pegasus. Albert, one with a literal talent for killing.
** Bad Ass Adorable: A phycotic psychotic commando, who litterally literally was born to be killer, just happens to be an adorable pink pegasus.Pegasus.



* Blessed With Suck: Her killer talent does give her incredibble combat abbility, but it also drove her insane.

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* Blessed With Suck: Her killer talent does give her incredibble incredible combat abbility, ability, but it also drove her insane.



* Cry For The Devil: Afer finding out that the talent she's had for most of her life,[[spoiler: is constantly telling her to kill everone around her]], whether she wants to or not. It's kind of hard to say she she ever had a chance of being anything, other then the phycopathic killer she is today.
* CombatDance: She lamnates on how similer her fights are to the dances she did as a filly.

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* Cry For The Devil: Afer After finding out that the talent she's had for most of her life,[[spoiler: is constantly telling her to kill everone everyone around her]], whether she wants to or not. It's kind of hard to say she she ever had a chance of being anything, other then the phycopathic psychopathic killer she is today.
* CombatDance: She lamnates laminates on how similer similar her fights are to the dances she did as a filly.



* DavidVsGalioth: A rare villinouse example: She faces [[spoiler: Astrid, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, all of whom, vastly out power her.]]

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* DavidVsGalioth: A rare villinouse villainous example: She faces [[spoiler: Astrid, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, all of whom, vastly out power her.]]



* Emporward Badass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]

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* Emporward Imporward Badass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]



* Even Evil Has Standards: Though she never acts on it, even she is clearly desturbed by her boss's actions. [[spoiler: Blaze tries to invoke this, to snap her out of her homicidal rage.]]

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* Even Evil Has Standards: Though she never acts on it, even she is clearly desturbed disturbed by her boss's actions. [[spoiler: Blaze tries to invoke this, to snap her out of her homicidal rage.]]



* FriendlyEnemies: Even after there falling out, she seems to still be on good terms with Trail Blazer. Albert, in a very twisted way. Even after he [[spoiler: uses this to destract her, so his friends have enough time to catch her off guard, so she doesn't kill them,]] she manages to laugh it off and complement him, for getting the drop on her. [[spoiler: Despite being in agonizing pain and dieing.]]

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* FriendlyEnemies: Even after there falling out, she seems to still be on good terms with Trail Blazer. Albert, in a very twisted way. Even after he [[spoiler: uses this to destract distract her, so his friends have enough time to catch her off guard, so she doesn't kill them,]] she manages to laugh it off and complement him, for getting the drop on her. [[spoiler: Despite being in agonizing pain and dieing.dying.]]



* Made Of Iron: For a modern pegasus, she can shrug off some serious hits.
* Orgasmic Combat: Apparently, her talent give her a very sticfying filling, everytime she succesfully kills some one.
* Pet The Dog Moment: Tries to give Melody genulenly helpful advice, on how to advance her carrer as a body guard.
* Phyco Ex-Girlfriend: To Trail Blazer.
* Phyco For Hire:
* Pragmatic Combat: Her tactics incude everything from throwing decoy knives to destract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.

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* Made Of Iron: For a modern pegasus, Pegasus, she can shrug off some serious hits.
* Orgasmic Combat: Apparently, her talent give her a very sticfying satisfying filling, everytime every time she succesfully successfully kills some one.
* Pet The Dog Moment: Tries to give Melody genulenly genuinely helpful advice, on how to advance her carrer career as a body guard.
* Phyco Psycho Ex-Girlfriend: To Trail Blazer.
* Phyco Psycho For Hire:
* Pragmatic Combat: Her tactics incude include everything from throwing decoy knives to destract distract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.



* Sex Is Violencse: She's very kinky.
* Self Made Orphan: Heavilly implied.
* Torture Technition: Really enjoys interorgations.
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.
* Villonouse Valor: As monsteriouse as her action are, it's hard not be impressed with her combat abillity.

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* Sex Is Violencse: Violence: She's very kinky.
* Self Made Orphan: Heavilly Heavily implied.
* Torture Technition: Technician: Really enjoys interorgations.
interrogations.
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.
* Villonouse Valor: As monsteriouse monster-is as her action are, it's hard not be impressed with her combat abillity.
ability.



The young body guard of a local noble, living in a rural town. Melody is the latest in a long line of body guads, to have protected her master's family. She is a very kind and capable young warrior, that aspires to advance her combat abillity. But all this changes, when [[spoiler: Max Cash and Charsima]] arrive in town. Leading to the brutal massacure of her home town and [[spoiler: her being mind raped by Max, into gaurding the rotting corpse of her master, High Fashion.]]

* Big Damm Heroes Moment: When she [[spoiler: saves HB and Traduce.]]
* Blade On a Stick: Chooses to wheeled a spear.
* Break The Cutie: [[spoiler: Is mind raped into guarding her master's dead body, after being betrayed by two people she trusted,]] while her home was destroyed. The worst part? She's completeley aware, but can't stop.
* Horrible Judge Of Character: Some how, Charisma almost killing her on sight, didn't clue her in on how dangerouse she and Max were.
* No Holds Barred Beat Down: Delivers one to [[spoiler: Max Cash, during the raid on Berch's massion. Sadly, it gets her killed.]]
* [[spoiler: Killed Off For Real: Is murdered by Cash, during the raid on senator Berch's massion.]]
* Replacement Gold Fish: A VERY dark example: [[spoiler: sense she can't phycologically leave her master's side (Even when he's nothing, but a decaying corpse.) She has to keep a little doll of him around, at all times.]]
* Sanity Slipage: Is a babbling mess.
* Undying Loyalty: To her master, High Fashion. [[spoiler: This is what Max uses to brain wash her.]]
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.

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The young body guard of a local noble, living in a rural town. Melody is the latest in a long line of body guads, guards, to have protected her master's family. She is a very kind and capable young warrior, that aspires to advance her combat abillity. ability. But all this changes, when [[spoiler: Max Cash and Charsima]] Charisma]] arrive in town. Leading to the brutal massacure massacre of her home town and [[spoiler: her being mind raped by Max, into gaurding guarding the rotting corpse of her master, High Fashion.]]

* Big Damm Heroes Moment: BigDamnHeroesMoment: When she [[spoiler: saves HB and Traduce.]]
* Blade On a Stick: BladeOnaStick: Chooses to wheeled a spear.
* Break The Cutie: BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Is mind raped into guarding her master's dead body, after being betrayed by two people she trusted,]] while her home was destroyed. The worst part? She's completeley completely aware, but can't stop.
* Horrible Judge HorribleJudge Of Character: Some how, Charisma almost killing her on sight, didn't clue her in on how dangerouse dangerous she and Max were.
* No Holds Barred Beat Down: NoHoldsBarredBeatDown: Delivers one to [[spoiler: Max Cash, during the raid on Berch's massion.mansion. Sadly, it gets her killed.]]
* [[spoiler: Killed Off For Real: KilledOffForReal: Is murdered by Cash, during the raid on senator Berch's massion.mansion.]]
* Replacement Gold Fish: ReplacementGoldFish: A VERY dark example: [[spoiler: sense she can't phycologically physically leave her master's side (Even when he's nothing, but a decaying corpse.) She has to keep a little doll of him around, at all times.]]
* Sanity Slipage: SanitySlipage: Is a babbling mess.
* Undying Loyalty: UndyingLoyalty: To her master, High Fashion. [[spoiler: This is what Max uses to brain wash her.]]
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.



A unicorn forman and war ventern. Big Wig has a telekanisis talent.

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A unicorn forman foreman and war ventern. veteran. Big Wig has a telekanisis telekinesis talent.



* FantasticRacism: He's immediatly ready to kill Calumn, after finding out he's a Changling. [[spoiler: Until he sees one of the children, Calumn had befriended and saved.]]
* NotQuitFlight: Big Wig can use his telekanisis, to fly around on a concrete slab. But, he has very poor menouvrabillity.

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* FantasticRacism: He's immediatly immediately ready to kill Calumn, after finding out he's a Changling.changeling. [[spoiler: Until he sees one of the children, Calumn had befriended and saved.]]
* NotQuitFlight: Big Wig can use his telekanisis, telekinesis, to fly around on a concrete slab. But, he has very poor menouvrabillity.maneuverability.



* ArrangedMarrige: Orders one between StarFall and his son Regal.

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* ArrangedMarrige: ArrangedMarriage: Orders one between StarFall Star Fall and his son Regal.



* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A pegasus-unicorn.

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* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A pegasus-unicorn.Pegasus-unicorn.



Senator Birch

Queen Aqua


Straff

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Senator Birch

Queen Aqua


Straff



One of(if not only) true friends of Max Cash. For years, he has loyaly served and mentored his best friend Max. Which Max returns [[spoiler: with making him the first sacrafice to remove the elements.]]

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One of(if not only) true friends of Max Cash. For years, he has loyaly loyally served and mentored his best friend Max. Which Max returns [[spoiler: with making him the first sacrafice sacrifice to remove the elements.]]



* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Apparently, he thought his murderous, sociopathic friend would return his loyalty.
* PostMortemCharacter: His death kicks off the story.

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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Apparently, he thought his murderous, sociopathic sociopath friend would return his loyalty.
*TheMentor: To Max.
* PostMortemCharacter: PostmortemCharacter: His death kicks off the story.



* UndyingLoyalty: To his friend, Max Cash. [[spoiler: Which Max repays just how you think a murderouse sociopath, with no sense of loyalty hiself would.]]
* VillinouseFriendship: With Cash.

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* UndyingLoyalty: To his friend, Max Cash. [[spoiler: Which Max repays just how you think a murderouse murderous sociopath, with no sense of loyalty hiself himself would.]]
* VillinouseFriendship: VillainousFriendship: With Cash.



* AntiClimaticReveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married somone he barly knows, work, as StarFall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on StarFall, before she stops him and says they she want to atleast become friends with him, before their married in a week.
ArrangedMarrige: With StarFall.
DarkHorseVictory: He's the middle child and hasn't learned all that's nessecary to be king, becouse odds our he would have never been given the oppurtunity. Then, his father descided he was the one to be married to StarFall, and made him his eir to the throne.

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* AntiClimaticReveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married somone someone he barly barley knows, work, as StarFall Star Fall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on StarFall, Star Fall, before she stops him and says they she want to atleast at least become friends with him, before their married in a week.
ArrangedMarrige: With StarFall.
Star Fall.
DarkHorseVictory: He's the middle child and hasn't learned all that's nessecary necessary to be king, becouse because odds our he would have never been given the oppurtunity. opportunity. Then, his father descided decided he was the one to be married to StarFall, Star Fall, and made him his eir ere to the throne.



Silus

Silus: "Shut up, stupid pony."

A shifty Diamond Dog guide, who offers to lead people through the Everstorm, only to leave them for dead. He has a long standing fued, with a rival guide: Trail Blazer.

* Foil: To Trail Blazer.
* Fantasy Culture Equivalent: He gives off a Russian vive.
* Jerk Ass:
* Laser Guided Karma: Tries to Murder Blaze over costing him a customer. [[spoiler: This gets him left for dead, while in the storm he abadoned all his customers in.]]
* The Rival: Apparently has a long grudge against Blaze. Likley, becouse Blaze warns his customers, how trust worthy Silus is.

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Silus

Silus:
Silas

Silas:
"Shut up, stupid pony."

A shifty Diamond Dog guide, who offers to lead people through the Everstorm, only to leave them for dead. He has a long standing fued, feud, with a rival guide: Trail Blazer.

* Foil: {{Foil}}: To Trail Blazer.
* Fantasy Culture Equivalent: FantasyCultureEquivalent: He gives off a Russian vive.
vibe.
* Jerk Ass:
JerkAss:
* Laser Guided Karma: LaserGuidedKarma: Tries to Murder Blaze over costing him a customer. [[spoiler: This gets him left for dead, while in the storm he abadoned abandoned all his customers in.]]
* The Rival: TheRival: Apparently has a long grudge against Blaze. Likley, becouse Likely, because Blaze warns his customers, customers how trust worthy Silus Silas is.



A minor associate of Max Cash and gambler. Conrad is enjoying a layed back suite, while Cash's goons shadow him, when Lunar agents go after him.

The Alchoholic: Drinks his heart away, while in his hotel suite
Cassanova Wantabe: Realy loves chasing tail.
Killed Off For Real: Used as a sacrafice[[spoiler: to retrieve the element of honest.]]
Oh Crap: When he realizes he's busted.

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A minor associate of Max Cash and gambler. Conrad is enjoying a layed laid back suite, while Cash's goons shadow him, when Lunar agents go after him.

The Alchoholic: TheAlcoholic: Drinks his heart away, while in his hotel suite
Cassanova Wantabe: Realy CasanovaWannabe: Really loves chasing tail.
Killed Off For Real: KilledOffForReal: Used as a sacrafice[[spoiler: sacrifice[[spoiler: to retrieve the element of honest.]]
Oh Crap: OhCrap: When he realizes he's busted.

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* Emotion Eater: Comes with being a changeling.
* Gender Bender: As a shapeshifter, Calumn can do this when need be.
** Attractive Bent Gender: He can also be as attractive, as need be.
* HiroicBSOD:

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* Emotion Eater: EmotionEater: Comes with being a changeling.
* Gender Bender: GenderBender: As a shapeshifter, Calumn can do this when need be.
** Attractive Bent Gender: AttractiveBentGender: He can also be as attractive, as need be.
* HiroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:



* Mind Rape: Though benevolent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.

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* Mind Rape: Though benevolent(ish), benevalent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.



* ReplacementGoldFish: Calumn implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conscious version of this.

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* ReplacementGoldFish: Calumn Colum implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conscious sub-conciouse version of this.



* TookALevelInKindness: Blaze manages to, help Colum become a better person.
* WorfEffect: Calumn is an elite agent. But, whenever an actual fight rolls around, he's despached pretty quickly.


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* TookALevelInKindness: Took A Level In Kindness: Blaze manages to, help Colum become a better person.
* WorfEffect: Calumn is an elite agent. But, whenever an actual fight rolls around, he's despached dispatched pretty quickly.




After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intelligent dragon, as well, as one of the most influential creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renowned artist--not to assume he's not dangerous on the battlefield-- credited for teaching generosity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

* Ambiguous Relationship Status: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
* Bad Ass: Is able to literately tear a pony in half.
** Bad Ass Grand Pa: Is currently one of the oldest surviving dragons, but can still tear mooks apart with ease.
* Berserk Button: Don't mess with his friends or hurt baby dragons, or else he'll KILL you.

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After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intelligent intellegent dragon, as well, as one of the most influential influentual creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renowned renouned artist--not to assume he's not dangerous dangerouse on the battlefield-- credited for teaching generosity generousity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

* Ambiguous Relationship Status: AmbiguousRelationshipStatus: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
* Bad Ass: BadAss: Is able to literately littarly tear a pony in half.
** Bad Ass BadAss Grand Pa: Is currently one of the oldest surviving dragons, but can still tear mooks apart with ease.
* Berserk Button: BeserkButton: Don't mess with his friends or hurt baby dragons, or else he'll KILL you.



* Dark And Troubled Past: Not much is known about his past, beyond what happens in the show, but it's clear that a lot happened.

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* Dark And Troubled Past: DarkAndTroubledPast: Not much is known about his past, beyond what happens in the show, but it's clear that a lot happened.



* {{Determinator}}: He will never stop fighting, until he literally can't.
* FriendsWithChutula:[[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* GadedGlasses: Not at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.

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* {{Determinator}}: He will never stop fighting, until he literally litterally can't.
* FriendsWithChutula:[[spoiler: FriendsWithChutala:[[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* GadedGlasses: Not oviose at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.



* The Mentor: Becomes this for the whole dragon race, after the schism. He also helped Twinkle Shine, mentor Star Fall.

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* The Mentor: TheMentor: Becomes this for the whole dragon race, after the schism. He also helped Twinkle Shine, mentor Star Fall.



* Took A level In Cynclism: Not as obviouse as other examples, but it's clear, that this Spike is not as iddealistic as he once was.
* Took The Long Way Around: How he got to the future.
* Shell Shocked Veterain: Not shown at first, but our favorite little dragon, has definatley seen a lot of action in his life.

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* Took A level In Cynclism: TookAlevelInCynicism: Not as obviouse as other examples, but it's clear, that this Spike is not as iddealistic as he once was.
* Took The Long Way Around: TookTheLongWayAround: How he got to the future.
* Shell Shocked Veterain: ShellShockedVeteran: Not shown at first, but our favorite little dragon, has definatley seen a lot of action in his life.



Lt. Hard "HB" Boilded
Lt. Hard Boiled, is a police officer from Orion City. When a pony with connections to the infamous criminal Max Cash, is found murdered in one of his dig sites, at the same time as a mysterious "super" pegasus--RainbowDash-- injured two patrolmen, he's dragged into a huge conspiracy. While reluctently, being partnered up with a changling agent (Who happens to have a crush on him.).

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Lt. Hard "HB" Boilded
Boiled
Lt. Hard Boiled, is a police officer from Orion City. When a pony with connections to the infamous criminal Max Cash, is found murdered in one of his dig sites, at the same time as a mysterious "super" pegasus--RainbowDash-- Pegasus--Rainbow Dash-- injured two patrolmen, he's dragged into a huge conspiracy. While reluctently, reluctantly, being partnered up with a changling changeling agent (Who happens to have a crush on him.).



** HandicappedBadAss: He has a devilatating condition, that causes his magic to slowly weaken over time. This also causes him to have intense headaches, that hinder his physical ability. Does that stop him, from going out in the field and fighting Cash's {{Mooks}}?
* CrackPairing: Basically how he sees his relationship with Trabuse.
* FanPreferedCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Trabuse x HB.
* FantasticRacism: Like most ponies, he doesn't view changlings in a very positive light. This makes it especally agravating, when he's partnered up with Trabuse: a changling.

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** HandicappedBadAss: He has a devilatating debilitating condition, that causes his magic to slowly weaken over time. This also causes him to have intense headaches, that hinder his physical ability. Does that stop him, from going out in the field and fighting Cash's {{Mooks}}?
* CrackPairing: Basically how he sees his relationship with Trabuse.
Traduse.
* FanPreferedCouple: FanPreferredCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Trabuse Traduse x HB.
* FantasticRacism: Like most ponies, he doesn't view changlings in a very positive light. This makes it especally agravating, especially aggravating, when he's partnered up with Trabuse: Traduse: a changling.changeling.



** NobileBiggot: He eventually mellows out, after growing close to her.
** JerkAssHasAPoint: He really can't be blamed too much for not trusting changlings.
* Foil: To his partner Trabuse. While he's an honest cop, who hates all the secret agent, cloak and dagger stuff, she's a changling and secret agent. This puts them at conflict at first.

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** NobileBiggot: NobleBigot: He eventually mellows out, after growing close to her.
** JerkAssHasAPoint: He really can't be blamed too much for not trusting changlings.
changeling.
* Foil: To his partner Trabuse. Traduse. While he's an honest cop, who hates all the secret agent, cloak and dagger stuff, she's a changling changing and secret agent. This puts them at conflict at first.



* OddCouple: With Trabuse.
* OppasitesAttract: Trabuse outright says this to him.
RelationShipUpgrade: Though he admits, he can't honestley say he loves her, he does admit she's become a close friend.
* Sickness:
* Squick: Runs into a lot of this, while working with Trabuse.

Trabuse

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* OddCouple: With Trabuse.
Traduse.
* OppasitesAttract: Trabuse OppositesAttract: Traduse outright says this to him.
RelationShipUpgrade: Though he admits, he can't honestley honestly say he loves her, he does admit she's become a close friend.
friend.
* Sickness:
* Squick:
{{Squick}}: Runs into a lot of this, while working with Trabuse.

Trabuse
Traduse.

Traduse



* Anti-Hero: Not exactly the most honarable of member of the cast.

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* Anti-Hero: Not exactly the most honarable honorable of member of the cast.



* BlackIsNotEvil: Like all changlings, she's covered in black chitin.
* EmotionEater: Part of being a changling.
* FanPreferedCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Trabuse x HB.

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* BlackIsNotEvil: Like all changlings, changelings, she's covered in black chitin.
* EmotionEater: Part of being a changling.
changeling.
* FanPreferedCouple: FanPreferredCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Trabuse Traduse x HB.



* ShapeShifter: She's a changling.

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* ShapeShifter: She's a changling.changeling.



* Squick: While travling through the jungle, she apparently ate something alive.

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* Squick: While travling traveling through the jungle, she apparently ate something alive.



Star Fall's mentor and adopted mother. Twinkle Shine is a respected professor and most trusted advisor and friend, to The King.
* Affectionet Nick Name: Refers to Star Fall, as her little Fallen Star.
* [[spoiler: Bitch In Sheeps Clothing: It's apparent from the beginning, that she has great distain for Rainbow Dash, who she sets out to prove is a fraud. But she pretends to be a kind and welcoming pony.]]
* [[spoiler: Body Horror: Her transfermation into Umbra envolves her bones, tendons, mussles, and flesh, all graphically rearanging.]]
* [[spoiler: Broken Pedestole: Star Fall does not take kindly to her betrayal.]]
* [[spoiler: Corrupt Grand Visor: Is this to the King.]]
* [[spoiler:DevilInPlainSight: Sort of. Her and Nightmare Umbra share the same body, but Twinkle Shine's clearly a sepeate entity.]]
* [[spoiler: Master Mannipulater: She's been secretly shaping the kingdom's history from the begining.]]

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Star Fall's mentor and adopted mother. Twinkle Shine is a respected professor and most trusted advisor adviser and friend, to The King.
* Affectionet Nick Name: AffectionateNickName: Refers to Star Fall, as her little Fallen Star.
* [[spoiler: Bitch In Sheeps Clothing: BitchInSheep'sClothing: It's apparent from the beginning, that she has great distain disdain for Rainbow Dash, who she sets out to prove is a fraud. But she pretends to be a kind and welcoming pony.]]
* [[spoiler: Body Horror: Her transfermation transformation into Umbra envolves involves her bones, tendons, mussles, mussels, and flesh, all graphically rearanging.rearranging.]]
* [[spoiler: Broken Pedestole: BrokenPedestal: Star Fall does not take kindly to her betrayal.]]
* [[spoiler: Corrupt Grand Visor: GrandVisor: Is this to the King.]]
* [[spoiler:DevilInPlainSight: Sort of. Her and Nightmare Umbra share the same body, but Twinkle Shine's clearly a sepeate separate entity.]]
* [[spoiler: Master Mannipulater: MasterManipulator: She's been secretly shaping the kingdom's history from the begining.]]



* [[spoiler: Well Interntioned Extremist: She's only doing what, she sees as best for the world.]]

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* [[spoiler: Well Interntioned Extremist: WellIntention-edExtremist: She's only doing what, she sees as best for the world.]]



The War Goddess and most feared being in post-Schism Equistra. After being temperarly put out commision, by Celestia and Luna [[spoiler: Sadly, through a HeroicSacrafice.]] Umbra is believed to be one of the causes of the Schism, but her true origins are a complete mystery.
Umbra: "AT MY WEAKEST, I HAVE DEAFEATED YOU BEST!!!"

Umbra: "When I Emerged From My Silence I Expected To See Armies Arrayed Against Me! Heroes And Sages Aideing Great Leaders In Battle Against The Only Foe That Will Ever Matter For You. A Worthy Challange To My Dominion. What Have I Found? The Petty Rulers Of A Broken World, Sitting In Pretty Rows Celebrating The Union Of A Blushing Filly And Pampered Fop Who You Expect To Be Your Sovereign. Are You Such Fools That You Thought I Was Gone Forever? Where You Not Informed Of My Return? Did You Not See The Sighns."

* TheAssimilator: Can obsorb any pony and bring them back, as her undead mooks.

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The War Goddess and most feared being in post-Schism Equistra. After being temperarly temperately put out commision, commission, by Celestia and Luna [[spoiler: Sadly, through a HeroicSacrafice.HeroicSacrifice.]] Umbra is believed to be one of the causes of the Schism, but her true origins are a complete mystery.
Umbra: "AT MY WEAKEST, I HAVE DEAFEATED DEFEATED YOU BEST!!!"

Umbra: "When I Emerged From My Silence I Expected To See Armies Arrayed Against Me! Heroes And Sages Aideing Aiding Great Leaders In Battle Against The Only Foe That Will Ever Matter For You. A Worthy Challange Challenge To My Dominion. What Have I Found? The Petty Rulers Of A Broken World, Sitting In Pretty Rows Celebrating The Union Of A Blushing Filly And Pampered Fop Who You Expect To Be Your Sovereign. Are You Such Fools That You Thought I Was Gone Forever? Where You Not Informed Of My Return? Did You Not See The Sighns.Signs."

* TheAssimilator: The Assimilatior: Can obsorb any pony and bring them back, as her undead mooks.
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* GadedGlasses: Not at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.

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* GadedGlasses: Not Not at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.
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* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arranged marriage, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents, and her substituteparentalfigure turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]], all because she was born with a magical talent.

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* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arranged marriage, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents, and her substituteparentalfigure turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]], parents,]] all because she was born with a magical talent.Oh, and her SubstituteParentalFigure [[spoiler:turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]].



* BrokenPedistool:[[spoiler: To Twinkle Shine. After the latter is revealed to be, Umbra.]]

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* BrokenPedistool:[[spoiler: BrokenPedestal:[[spoiler: To Twinkle Shine. After the latter is revealed to be, Umbra.]]



* CursedWithAwsome: Her Magic talent comes in handy alot of the time, but just look how it has effected her life as well.

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* CursedWithAwsome: Her Magic talent comes in handy alot a lot of the time, but just look how it has effected her life as well.



* VentrilqueBestBud's: With Astrid and Rainbow.

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* VentrilqueBestBud's: VitriolicBestBuds: With Astrid and Rainbow.



* Iristacrat:

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* Iristacrat:




Astrid: "Oh no, I missed out on learning egghead, to become an unstoppable badass."

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Astrid: "Oh no, I missed out on learning egghead, to become an unstoppable badass.bad ass."



* BadAss: She storms Cash's dig site single handedly.

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* BadAss: She storms Cash's dig site single handedly.single-handedlly.



* BodyGuarding A BadAss: For Star Fall.

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* BodyGuarding A BadAss: BodyGuardingABadAss: For Star Fall.



* CurbStompBattle: On the recieving end of one, against [[spoiler: Charisma.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: On the recieving receiving end of one, against [[spoiler: Charisma.]]



* Hair Trigger Temper: Very fast to anger.
* Lightning Bruiser: Not only is she strong, but she's also stealthy enough to get past Cash's defenses.
* PutOnABus: Is hospitilized, after her fight with [[spoiler: Charisma.]].

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* Hair Trigger Temper: HairTriggerTemper: Very fast to anger.
* Lightning Bruiser: LightningBruiser: Not only is she strong, but she's also stealthy enough to get past Cash's defenses.
* PutOnABus: Is hospitilized, hospitalized, after her fight with [[spoiler: Charisma.]].



* Ventrilque Best Buds: Basically all of her friendships.
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A grifon.

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* Ventrilque Best Buds: VitriolicBestBuds: Basically all of her friendships.
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A grifon.griffon.



** She's also given one of her own for using[[spoiler: magical healing. Knowing that it means she'll permenantley be taken out of the breeding program and the genetic materal of one of there best warriors, will never be added to their already dwindalling gene pool.]]

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** She's also given one of her own for using[[spoiler: magical healing. Knowing that it means she'll permenantley permanently be taken out of the breeding program and the genetic materal material of one of there best warriors, will never be added to their already dwindalling dwindling gene pool.]]



Blaze: "What the bartender was doing was robbery becouse it was stealing, becouse he's taking from you. What Silus is doing is murder, becouse he's going to leave you to die."

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Blaze: "What the bartender was doing was robbery becouse because it was stealing, becouse because he's taking from you. What Silus Silas is doing is murder, becouse because he's going to leave you to die."



Blaze: "It was an exercise in time and pain managment."


A highly talketive and ecentric guide, operating in the Everstorm and Charisma's ex boy friend. Blaze has been shown to be a very kind hearted and eccentric guy. Constantly going out his way to help others. When he agrees to help a certain changling cross the Everstorm, he's dragged into a huge conspiracy that threatens the entire world.

* Action Surviver: Has the least combat abbility out of the entire main cast.

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Blaze: "It was an exercise in time and pain managment.management."


A highly talketive talkative and ecentric eccentric guide, operating in the Everstorm and Charisma's ex boy friend. Blaze has been shown to be a very kind hearted and eccentric guy. Constantly going out his way to help others. When he agrees to help a certain changling changeling cross the Everstorm, he's dragged into a huge conspiracy that threatens the entire world.

* Action Surviver: ActionSurvivor: Has the least combat abbility ability out of the entire main cast.



* Bunny Eared Lawyer: Is still a confident guide, despite being out of his mind.
* Cloud Cuckoolander: To the point that many readers have theorised that he's a descendent of Pinkie Pie, from his first appearance.
* Crouching Moron Hidden BadAss: Is starting to lean towards this.
* Dating Cat Women: Whith Charisma.
* Expy: To Pinkie.
* Foil: His idealistic attitude and friend with all living things status, contrast greatly with his ex Charisma's cynical attitude and phycotic nature. Also, his rival Silus is a treturiouse scumbag, while he's an honest pony.
* Friend To All Living Being: He outright says, he loves everone in the world, including all the JerkAsses.

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* Bunny Eared Lawyer: BunnyEaredLawyer: Is still a confident guide, despite being out of his mind.
* Cloud Cuckoolander: CloudCuckoolander: To the point that many readers have theorised theorized that he's a descendent descendant of Pinkie Pie, from his first appearance.
* Crouching Moron Hidden BadAss: CrouchingMoronHiddenBadAss: Is starting to lean towards this.
* Dating Cat Women: Whith DatingCatWomen: With Charisma.
* Expy: {{Expy}}: To Pinkie.
* Foil: {{Foil}}: His idealistic attitude and friend with all living things status, contrast greatly with his ex Charisma's cynical attitude and phycotic psychotic nature. Also, his rival Silus Silas is a treturiouse scumbag, while he's an honest pony.
* Friend To All Living Being: He outright says, he loves everone everyone in the world, including all the JerkAsses.



* Morality Pet: Tries to be this for Charima and later Column.
* Motor Mouth: Another similarity, between him and Pinkie
* Nice Guy: Is by far, the kindest person from the future we've seen.
* PluckyComicRelief: Provides the most amount of FunnyMoments.
* Plucky Girl: A male example. No matter what happens, Blaze never loses his cool. Even when someone's pressing his broken rib against his lungs.
* Pragmatic Combat: Tries do this: mixed results.
* Rival: To Silas, a diamond dog guide, who constantly scams his clients, before leaving them for dead.

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* Morality Pet: MoralityPet: Tries to be this for Charima and later Column.
* Motor Mouth: MotorMouth: Another similarity, between him and Pinkie
* Nice Guy: NiceGuy: Is by far, the kindest person from the future we've seen.
* PluckyComicRelief: Provides the most amount of FunnyMoments.
Funny Moments.
* Plucky Girl: PluckyGirl: A male example. No matter what happens, Blaze never loses his cool. Even when someone's pressing his broken rib against his lungs.
* Pragmatic Combat: PragmaticCombat: Tries do this: mixed results.
* Rival: {{Rival}}: To Silas, a diamond dog guide, who constantly scams his clients, before leaving them for dead.



* What The Hell Hero?: Gives a subdued one to Colum, when his friend [[spoiler: Brain Washes Rainbow Dash into loving him, just so he could bring her back to the Night Lands.
* Wide Eyed Idielist: Is the only one to still see good in Charisma.

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* What The Hell Hero?: WhatTheHellHero?: Gives a subdued one to Colum, Calumn, when his friend [[spoiler: Brain Washes Rainbow Dash into loving him, just so he could bring her back to the Night Lands.
* Wide Eyed Idielist: WideEyedIdealist: Is the only one to still see good in Charisma.



Calumn "Stron Heart"

A Changling agent of the Luner Republic, currently using the alias of a desceased Luner soldier (Including, pretending to be his mother's son.). He is sent to capture Rainbow Dash (Who was beleaved to be a Solar agent at the time.), at all cost. But along the way, Trail Blazer the guide, he hired to bring him across the Everstorm, befriends him, while trying to act as a moral compass. This, combined with his guilt over having the deseve the mother of the soldier he's imparsinating, throws him into a moral delima, that causes him to re-think his entire life and what it means to be a changling.

* Anti-Hero: As a Changling, he relise on deception to achieve his goal and at first, is willing to use whatever means nescessary, to achieve his goals.
* BlackIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changlings, but is diffenatley not evil.

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Calumn "Stron "Strong Heart"

A Changling agent of the Luner Lunar Republic, currently using the alias of a desceased Luner deceased Lunar soldier (Including, pretending to be his mother's son.). He is sent to capture Rainbow Dash (Who was beleaved to be a Solar agent at the time.), at all cost. But along the way, Trail Blazer the guide, he hired to bring him across the Everstorm, befriends him, while trying to act as a moral compass. This, combined with his guilt over having the deseve deserve the mother of the soldier he's imparsinating, impersonating, throws him into a moral delima, deli ma, that causes him to re-think his entire life and what it means to be a changling.

changeling.

* Anti-Hero: As a Changling, he relise relies on deception to achieve his goal and at first, is willing to use whatever means nescessary, necessary, to achieve his goals.
* BlackIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changlings, changelings, but is diffenatley differentiately not evil.



* BodyHorror: When he tries to fight Charisma, he [[spoiler: gets part of his caracus torn off. Which is basically his SKIN.]]
* Emotion Eater: Comes with being a changling.

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* BodyHorror: When he tries to fight Charisma, he [[spoiler: gets part of his caracus Caracas torn off. Which is basically his SKIN.]]
* Emotion Eater: Comes with being a changling.changeling.



** Atractive Bent Gender: He can also be as atractive, as need be.

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** Atractive Attractive Bent Gender: He can also be as atractive, attractive, as need be.



* Internal Delima: Has one, when he starts quistion the morallity of what he's doing.
* Mind Rape: Though benevalent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.

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* Internal Delima: InternalDelima: Has one, when he starts quistion question the morallity morality of what he's doing.
* Mind Rape: Though benevalent(ish), benevolent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.



* Replacementment Gold Fish: Colum implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conciouse version of this.
* Shape Shifter: He is a Changling, after all.

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* Replacementment Gold Fish: Colum ReplacementGoldFish: Calumn implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conciouse sub-conscious version of this.
* Shape Shifter: ShapeShiftier: He is a Changling, changeling, after all.



* Took A Level In Kindness: Blaze manages to, help Colum become a better person.
* Worf Effect: Calumn is an elite agent. But, whenever an actual fight rolls around, he's depached pretty quickly.


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* Took A Level In Kindness: TookALevelInKindness: Blaze manages to, help Colum become a better person.
* Worf Effect: WorfEffect: Calumn is an elite agent. But, whenever an actual fight rolls around, he's depached despached pretty quickly.




After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intellegent dragon, as well, as one of the most influentual creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renouned artist--not to assume he's not dangerouse on the battlefield-- credited for teaching generousity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

* Ambigouse Relationship Status: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
* Bad Ass: Is able to littarly tear a pony in half.

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After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intellegent intelligent dragon, as well, as one of the most influentual influential creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renouned renowned artist--not to assume he's not dangerouse dangerous on the battlefield-- credited for teaching generousity generosity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

* Ambigouse Ambiguous Relationship Status: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
* Bad Ass: Is able to littarly literately tear a pony in half.



* Beserk Button: Don't mess with his friends or hurt baby dragons, or else he'll KILL you.

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* Beserk Berserk Button: Don't mess with his friends or hurt baby dragons, or else he'll KILL you.



* Determinator: He will never stop fighting, until he litterally can't.
* FriendsWithChutala:[[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* GadedGlasses: Not oviose at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.

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* Determinator: {{Determinator}}: He will never stop fighting, until he litterally literally can't.
* FriendsWithChutala:[[spoiler: FriendsWithChutula:[[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
* GadedGlasses: Not oviose Not at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.
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* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStreght: A varriation. She does know what she's capable of. It's just that modern ponies have become weaker over time, so she doesn't know how strong in comparison to them she is.

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* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStreght: DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength: A varriation.variation. She does know what she's capable of. It's just that modern ponies have become weaker over time, so she doesn't know how strong in comparison to them she is.



* HealingFacter: She heals incredibly fast, compared to modern ponies.
* KnightHood: Is given some equivalent to this. But, [[spoiler: it's more to distract the nobles from the King's other controversal plans.]]
* MythologyGag: She briefly disquises herself and takes the identity of: [[spoiler: FireFly.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Accdently gets into a fight with two Lunar patrolmen, becouse niether party could understand each other.

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* HealingFacter: HealingFactor: She heals incredibly fast, compared to modern ponies.
* KnightHood: Is given some equivalent to this. But, [[spoiler: it's more to distract the nobles from the King's other controversal controversial plans.]]
* MythologyGag: She briefly disquises disguises herself and takes the identity of: [[spoiler: FireFly.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Accdently Accidentally gets into a fight with two Lunar patrolmen, becouse niether because neither party could understand each other.



* TechniclePacifest: Despite her willingness to get into a fight, Rainbow Dash doesn't get the whole having to kill thing, that unfortunatley happens alot in this CrapSack worlds.
* UnskilledButStrong: She has no combat training, but her natural streght usually makes up for. [[spoiler: Bites her in the flank, when she has to face Charisma, who is far weaker, but makes up for it with superior training.]]
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.
* WhatTheHellHero: Given one, for almost getting [[spoiler:StarFall]] killed.

StarFall "Fall"

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* TechniclePacifest: TechnicalPacifist: Despite her willingness to get into a fight, Rainbow Dash doesn't get the whole having to kill thing, that unfortunatley unfortunately happens alot a lot in this CrapSack worlds.
* UnskilledButStrong: She has no combat training, but her natural streght strength usually makes up for. [[spoiler: Bites her in the flank, when she has to face Charisma, who is far weaker, but makes up for it with superior training.]]
* VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.
* WhatTheHellHero: Given one, for almost getting [[spoiler:StarFall]] [[spoiler:Star Fall]] killed.

StarFall Star Fall "Fall"



* ArragedMarrige: Is forced into one by the king, who hopes her magical talent will lead to her giving birth to an alicorn.
* BadAssMage:
* BeserkButton: Don't make fun of her unique position.
* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arraged marrige, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents, and her substituteparentalfigure turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]], all becouse she was born with a magical talent.
* BreedingProgram: Is forced into this by the king, in hopes that she can produce an alicorn eir.

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* ArragedMarrige: ArrangedMarriage: Is forced into one by the king, who hopes her magical talent will lead to her giving birth to an alicorn.
* BadAssMage:
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* BeserkButton: BerserkButton: Don't make fun of her unique position.
* BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arraged marrige, arranged marriage, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents, and her substituteparentalfigure turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]], all becouse because she was born with a magical talent.
* BreedingProgram: Is forced into this by the king, in hopes that she can produce an alicorn eir.ere.



* BrokenPedistol:[[spoiler: To Twinkle Shine. After the latter is revealed to be, Umbra.]]

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Max's personal body guard and Blaze's ex girl-friend. Charisma is a former member of the Solor Kingdom's special forces and very skilled combatant, with a talent specifically for killing. On the surface, she appears as a fairly inncocent pink pegasus, but undernithe is a phycotic killer who's constantly being told by her talent, how to kill everone in her immediate vecinity.

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Max's personal body guard and Blaze's ex girl-friend. Charisma is a former member of the Solor Kingdom's special forces and very skilled combatant, with a talent specifically for killing. On the surface, she appears as a fairly inncocent pink pegasus, but undernithe is a phycotic killer who's constantly being told by her talent, how to kill everone everyone in her immediate vecinity.



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Rainbow Dash

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*DoesNotKnowHerOwnStreght: A varriation. She does know what she's capable of. It's just that modern ponies have become weaker over time, so she doesn't know how strong in comparison to them she is.
*FastLerner: Picks up on modern Solar, shockingly fast. It's implied that this is to do with whatever brought her here.
*HealingFacter: She heals incredibly fast, compared to modern ponies.
*KnightHood: Is given some equivalent to this. But, [[spoiler: it's more to distract the nobles from the King's other controversal plans.]]
*MythologyGag: She briefly disquises herself and takes the identity of: [[spoiler: FireFly.]]
*PoorCommunicationKills: Accdently gets into a fight with two Lunar patrolmen, becouse niether party could understand each other.
*SonicAttack: Her Sonic Rainboom can be used this way.
*SuperSoldier: She's this compared to modern ponies.
*SuperStrenght
*TechniclePacifest: Despite her willingness to get into a fight, Rainbow Dash doesn't get the whole having to kill thing, that unfortunatley happens alot in this CrapSack worlds.
*UnskilledButStrong: She has no combat training, but her natural streght usually makes up for. [[spoiler: Bites her in the flank, when she has to face Charisma, who is far weaker, but makes up for it with superior training.]]
*VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.
*WhatTheHellHero: Given one, for almost getting [[spoiler:StarFall]] killed.

StarFall "Fall"

*ActionGirl
*ArragedMarrige: Is forced into one by the king, who hopes her magical talent will lead to her giving birth to an alicorn.
*BadAssMage:
*BeserkButton: Don't make fun of her unique position.
*BreakTheCutie: Is forced into an arraged marrige, turned into a political tool, [[spoiler: forced to banish her own parents, and her substituteparentalfigure turns out to be Nightmare Umbra]], all becouse she was born with a magical talent.
*BreedingProgram: Is forced into this by the king, in hopes that she can produce an alicorn eir.
*BlueOniRedOni: Blue to Astrid's red.
*BrokenPedistol:[[spoiler: To Twinkle Shine. After the latter is revealed to be, Umbra.]]
*ChildProdogy: Was the first pegasus to be born with a magic talent.
*CombatMedic: Can use healing spells. [[spoiler: Sadly, it turns out this can lead to cancer.]]
*CursedWithAwsome: Her Magic talent comes in handy alot of the time, but just look how it has effected her life as well.
*HappilyAdopted: Unusual example. Her real parents are still alive, but her magical talent lead to her being "adopted" into nobility, for political reasons by the professor. None the less, she still admires the professor, like a mother.
*PragmaticCombat: Her methods of dealing with [[spoiler: Charisma]] is to simply use her magic. [[spoiler: She's the only one that beats her fairly easily.]]
*VentrilqueBestBud's: With Astrid and Rainbow.
*VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.
*Iristacrat:

Astrid

Astrid: "Oh no, I missed out on learning egghead, to become an unstoppable badass."

Star's bodyguard and closest friend. Astrid is a member of the Royal Griffin guard, charged with protecting Star at all cost. She also developes a fast, if shaky friendship with Rainbow Dash.

*Anti-Hero
*BadAss: She storms Cash's dig site single handedly.
*BigDammHeroesMoment: At the dig site.
*BigGirl
*BlueOniRedOni: Red to Star's blue.
*BodyGuarding A BadAss: For Star Fall.
*BreedingProgram: Like all griffins, the lack of magic means she needs the aid of pony breeding programs, to help continue her line. This comes into a little problem though. See The bus came back below.
*CurbStompBattle: On the recieving end of one, against [[spoiler: Charisma.]]
*DeadPanSnarker: Especially around her friends.
*Hair Trigger Temper: Very fast to anger.
*Lightning Bruiser: Not only is she strong, but she's also stealthy enough to get past Cash's defenses.
*PutOnABus: Is hospitilized, after her fight with [[spoiler: Charisma.]].
**TheBusCameBack: Does recover. But, [[spoiler: it's through magical healing, which not only puts her long term health at great risk, but it also permanetley puts her out of the Griffin breeding program.]]
*Undying Loyalty: Will always be there for Star, whether she wants her there or not.
*Ventrilque Best Buds: Basically all of her friendships.
*VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A grifon.
*WhatTheHellHero: Gives one to Rainbow Dash for almost getting [[spoiler:Star Fall]] killed.
**She's also given one of her own for using[[spoiler: magical healing. Knowing that it means she'll permenantley be taken out of the breeding program and the genetic materal of one of there best warriors, will never be added to their already dwindalling gene pool.]]

Trail "Blaze" Blazer

Blaze: "What the bartender was doing was robbery becouse it was stealing, becouse he's taking from you. What Silus is doing is murder, becouse he's going to leave you to die."

Later
Blaze: "I'm mostly here in case my ex shows up."
Hard Boiled: "Your ex?"
Blaze: "Charisma"
Hard Boiled: "You dated that?!"
Blaze: "It was an exercise in time and pain managment."


A highly talketive and ecentric guide, operating in the Everstorm and Charisma's ex boy friend. Blaze has been shown to be a very kind hearted and eccentric guy. Constantly going out his way to help others. When he agrees to help a certain changling cross the Everstorm, he's dragged into a huge conspiracy that threatens the entire world.

*Action Surviver: Has the least combat abbility out of the entire main cast.
*BatManGambit: Pulls one on [[spoiler: Charisma.]]
*BlueOniRedOni: Red to Calumn's blue.
*Bunny Eared Lawyer: Is still a confident guide, despite being out of his mind.
*Cloud Cuckoolander: To the point that many readers have theorised that he's a descendent of Pinkie Pie, from his first appearance.
*Crouching Moron Hidden BadAss: Is starting to lean towards this.
*Dating Cat Women: Whith Charisma.
*Expy: To Pinkie.
*Foil: His idealistic attitude and friend with all living things status, contrast greatly with his ex Charisma's cynical attitude and phycotic nature. Also, his rival Silus is a treturiouse scumbag, while he's an honest pony.
*Friend To All Living Being: He outright says, he loves everone in the world, including all the JerkAsses.
*HeelFaceTurn: Implied. Not only did he date PhycoForHire Charisma, but he also seems to know Cash personally. He also tries to get Charisma to go along, but fails.
*LegacyCharacter: Many readers beleave he's this, to Pinkie.
*Morality Pet: Tries to be this for Charima and later Column.
*Motor Mouth: Another similarity, between him and Pinkie
*Nice Guy: Is by far, the kindest person from the future we've seen.
*PluckyComicRelief: Provides the most amount of FunnyMoments.
*Plucky Girl: A male example. No matter what happens, Blaze never loses his cool. Even when someone's pressing his broken rib against his lungs.
*Pragmatic Combat: Tries do this: mixed results.
*Rival: To Silas, a diamond dog guide, who constantly scams his clients, before leaving them for dead.
*WhatKindOfPowerIsHeart: In a world with talents like magic and even killing, his talent that always points him in the right direction, doesn't sound too impressive. But it is.
*What The Hell Hero?: Gives a subdued one to Colum, when his friend [[spoiler: Brain Washes Rainbow Dash into loving him, just so he could bring her back to the Night Lands.
*Wide Eyed Idielist: Is the only one to still see good in Charisma.
*Undying Loyalty: To his friends.

Calumn "Stron Heart"

A Changling agent of the Luner Republic, currently using the alias of a desceased Luner soldier (Including, pretending to be his mother's son.). He is sent to capture Rainbow Dash (Who was beleaved to be a Solar agent at the time.), at all cost. But along the way, Trail Blazer the guide, he hired to bring him across the Everstorm, befriends him, while trying to act as a moral compass. This, combined with his guilt over having the deseve the mother of the soldier he's imparsinating, throws him into a moral delima, that causes him to re-think his entire life and what it means to be a changling.

*Anti-Hero: As a Changling, he relise on deception to achieve his goal and at first, is willing to use whatever means nescessary, to achieve his goals.
*BlackIsNotEvil: Has a black body like most changlings, but is diffenatley not evil.
*BlueOniRedOni: Blue to Blaze's red.
*BodyHorror: When he tries to fight Charisma, he [[spoiler: gets part of his caracus torn off. Which is basically his SKIN.]]
*Emotion Eater: Comes with being a changling.
*Gender Bender: As a shapeshifter, Calumn can do this when need be.
**Atractive Bent Gender: He can also be as atractive, as need be.
*HiroicBSOD:
*Hypnotist: Has this ability.
*Internal Delima: Has one, when he starts quistion the morallity of what he's doing.
*Mind Rape: Though benevalent(ish), Calumn is capable of this.
*OddFriendShip: With Trail Blazer.
*Replacementment Gold Fish: Colum implies that his "mother" knows he's not her son, deep down, and he's some kind of sub-conciouse version of this.
*Shape Shifter: He is a Changling, after all.
*SpyFiction
*Took A Level In Kindness: Blaze manages to, help Colum become a better person.
*Worf Effect: Calumn is an elite agent. But, whenever an actual fight rolls around, he's depached pretty quickly.


Spike (Adult)

Spike:"You want to know what the Elements are capable of?"

After 1000 years, Spike has grown into a strong and intellegent dragon, as well, as one of the most influentual creatures around, despite staying neutral in most of the worlds conflicts. He went on to become a world renouned artist--not to assume he's not dangerouse on the battlefield-- credited for teaching generousity to his fellow dragons. At first glance, he seems like just an older version of his past self, who's just as clueless as every one else. But, it's made clear that there's a lot more too him then that and he knows a lot more then he's admitting to.

*Ambigouse Relationship Status: Spike says Rarity was a powerful influence in his life, but never out right says what became of his romantic interest in her.
*Bad Ass: Is able to littarly tear a pony in half.
** Bad Ass Grand Pa: Is currently one of the oldest surviving dragons, but can still tear mooks apart with ease.
*Beserk Button: Don't mess with his friends or hurt baby dragons, or else he'll KILL you.
** Also, he makes it clear to Gamma, how much he wants to talk about the Elements.
*BigFancyHouse: Carved his own personal palace into the interior of a mountain.
*BigGuy
*Dark And Troubled Past: Not much is known about his past, beyond what happens in the show, but it's clear that a lot happened.
*DeadPanSnarker: Has shades of this.
*Determinator: He will never stop fighting, until he litterally can't.
*FriendsWithChutala:[[spoiler: Well not friends, but he's the only one who is able to talk to Nightmare Umbra.]]
*GadedGlasses: Not oviose at first glance, but it's made clear this isn't the happy little dragon we're used to.
*Genius Bruiser: He's highly intelegent. Also, he can litterly rip you in half.
*GotThereTheOldFashionedWay: He's been around for a thousand years.
*HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Did this to one of Cash's mooks.
*InstantAwsomeJustAddDragons
*Kill It With Fire:[[spoiler: How he mercy kills Cash's brain washed mooks.]]
*KnowsMoreThenTheyLetOn: He knew [[spoiler: Twinkle was Umbra the whole time.]] It's also implied that he knows more about the elements, then he's telling.
*HiddenDipth: Aparrently, he's a world renowned sculpter and archetect.
*Lightning Bruiser: Is suprisingly agile for a dragon.
*MadeOfIron: Can shrug off bullet wounds and gets back up after being thrown around like a ragdoll.
*The Mentor: Becomes this for the whole dragon race, after the schism. He also helped Twinkle Shine, mentor Star Fall.
*PlayingWithFire: He is a dragon.
{{Revenge}}: His motive for going after Cash. After Max [[spoiler: corrupted baby dragon to use as a distraction.]]
*Took A Level In Bad Ass: A far cry from the little baby dragon from the past.
*Took A level In Cynclism: Not as obviouse as other examples, but it's clear, that this Spike is not as iddealistic as he once was.
*Took The Long Way Around: How he got to the future.
*Shell Shocked Veterain: Not shown at first, but our favorite little dragon, has definatley seen a lot of action in his life.
*Shrouded In mystery: Not only is very little is known about what happened to him, between past and pressent Equistria, but he's definatley not telling much about what he really knows.
*VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A dragon.

Lt. Hard "HB" Boilded
Lt. Hard Boiled, is a police officer from Orion City. When a pony with connections to the infamous criminal Max Cash, is found murdered in one of his dig sites, at the same time as a mysterious "super" pegasus--RainbowDash-- injured two patrolmen, he's dragged into a huge conspiracy. While reluctently, being partnered up with a changling agent (Who happens to have a crush on him.).

*BadAssNormal: He's just a normal pony. But, he does make up for it with police training and quick thinking.
**HandicappedBadAss: He has a devilatating condition, that causes his magic to slowly weaken over time. This also causes him to have intense headaches, that hinder his physical ability. Does that stop him, from going out in the field and fighting Cash's {{Mooks}}?
*CrackPairing: Basically how he sees his relationship with Trabuse.
*FanPreferedCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Trabuse x HB.
*FantasticRacism: Like most ponies, he doesn't view changlings in a very positive light. This makes it especally agravating, when he's partnered up with Trabuse: a changling.
*GoodOldFistaCuffs: Compared to Trabuse, he uses a much simpler fighting style.
**NobileBiggot: He eventually mellows out, after growing close to her.
**JerkAssHasAPoint: He really can't be blamed too much for not trusting changlings.
*Foil: To his partner Trabuse. While he's an honest cop, who hates all the secret agent, cloak and dagger stuff, she's a changling and secret agent. This puts them at conflict at first.
*GenreShift: His and Traduce's segments have a lot of BuddyCop in them, along with plenty of FilmNoir.
*LivingLieDetector: His talent is to always find the truth.
*MeaningfulName
*OddCouple: With Trabuse.
*OppasitesAttract: Trabuse outright says this to him.
RelationShipUpgrade: Though he admits, he can't honestley say he loves her, he does admit she's become a close friend.
*Sickness:
*Squick: Runs into a lot of this, while working with Trabuse.

Trabuse
A changling agent for the Lunar Republic and Straff's right hand girl. She's partenered with Lt. Hard Boiled, who she(much to his charging) quickly takes a liking to.

*ActionGirl
*Anti-Hero: Not exactly the most honarable of member of the cast.
*BadAss: Handles herself pretty well in a fight.
*BlackIsNotEvil: Like all changlings, she's covered in black chitin.
*EmotionEater: Part of being a changling.
*FanPreferedCouple: Many readers did take a liking to Trabuse x HB.
*FemeFatale: Has elements of this.
*GenreShift: Her and Hard Boiled's segments have a lot of BuddyCop in them, along with plenty of FilmNoir.
*LoveAtFirstSight: Her attraction to HB, kind of comes out the blue.
*LoveInterest: Takes a quick liking to HB.
*OddCouple: Has this relationship,with HB.
*OppasitesAttract: Outright says this to HB.
*ShapeShifter: She's a changling.
*SpyFiction
*Squick: While travling through the jungle, she apparently ate something alive.

Gamma

Professor Twinkle Shine

Star Fall's mentor and adopted mother. Twinkle Shine is a respected professor and most trusted advisor and friend, to The King.
*Affectionet Nick Name: Refers to Star Fall, as her little Fallen Star.
*[[spoiler: Bitch In Sheeps Clothing: It's apparent from the beginning, that she has great distain for Rainbow Dash, who she sets out to prove is a fraud. But she pretends to be a kind and welcoming pony.]]
*[[spoiler: Body Horror: Her transfermation into Umbra envolves her bones, tendons, mussles, and flesh, all graphically rearanging.]]
*[[spoiler: Broken Pedestole: Star Fall does not take kindly to her betrayal.]]
*[[spoiler: Corrupt Grand Visor: Is this to the King.]]
*[[spoiler:DevilInPlainSight: Sort of. Her and Nightmare Umbra share the same body, but Twinkle Shine's clearly a sepeate entity.]]
*[[spoiler: Master Mannipulater: She's been secretly shaping the kingdom's history from the begining.]]
*The Mentor: To Star Fall
*[[spoiler: Mind Hive: Share's one with Umbra.]]
Walking Spoiler: Just look at the tropes under her name.
*[[spoiler: Well Interntioned Extremist: She's only doing what, she sees as best for the world.]]


[[folder:Main Characters(Villions)]]

Nightmare "The Nightmare" Umbra
The War Goddess and most feared being in post-Schism Equistra. After being temperarly put out commision, by Celestia and Luna [[spoiler: Sadly, through a HeroicSacrafice.]] Umbra is believed to be one of the causes of the Schism, but her true origins are a complete mystery.
Umbra: "AT MY WEAKEST, I HAVE DEAFEATED YOU BEST!!!"

Umbra: "When I Emerged From My Silence I Expected To See Armies Arrayed Against Me! Heroes And Sages Aideing Great Leaders In Battle Against The Only Foe That Will Ever Matter For You. A Worthy Challange To My Dominion. What Have I Found? The Petty Rulers Of A Broken World, Sitting In Pretty Rows Celebrating The Union Of A Blushing Filly And Pampered Fop Who You Expect To Be Your Sovereign. Are You Such Fools That You Thought I Was Gone Forever? Where You Not Informed Of My Return? Did You Not See The Sighns."

*TheAssimilator: Can obsorb any pony and bring them back, as her undead mooks.
*Ax Crazy: Very.
*Bad Ass Boast: Gives these all the time.
*Beserk Button: She really doesn't like the mention of the Element Barriers.
*CallBack: Makes one to Nightmare Moon's speach, at the end of her speech above.
*DeathByAThousandPaperCuts: The only reason [[spoiler:Rainbow, Astrid, and Star]] was through spamming repeated hits to the same area, while she was healing.
*The Dreaded: She makes Charisma look like a minor annouece.
*HealingFactor: Not that most ponies that face her, will ever see it used.
*Mind Hive: [[spoiler: with Twinkle Shine.]]
*NighImbonrable: At her weakend state, it takes an incredible amount of reapeated hits, just to get her to back off.
*No InDoor Voice: "ALWAYS SPEAKS TO PONIES LIKE THIS!!!!
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives an epic one to the nobles of the Solar Kingdom.
** "To call your selvers noble, is laughable. You claim to worship Celestia. Yet when I look into your preciouse little sun loving faces, I do not see ponies she would be proud of. Just look at you now: You trample those weaker underhoof, in hopes of buying yourself another breath of life. Craven beast, who hope is as empty as your hearts.
*Omnicidal Maniac: Plans to turn the world to ashes.
*Voice Of Legion: Can speak in the Royal Canterlot Voice.
*Unskilled,ButStrong: Is the most powerful charater seen so far, but is not particurly talented in direct combat.
*WarGod: Believed to be this, by modern ponies.
*WeHaveBecomeComplaicent: Acuses the ponies of this.
*WeaponizedBlood: If by some miracle, you actually get her to bleed, her blood will physically attack and infect you.
*Well Intentioned Extremist: Implied to be this.


Maximillion Oswald "Max" Cash

Max: " I think I'm going to raid the candy store. You never deprive a choclate-attic from his fix. Oh, and while I'm replenishing my supply, can you kill everyone."

Charisma: " Don't you have a plan B?"
Max: "Of course I have a plan B. I hired an ex special forces pegasus as my personle bodyguard."

A powerful magic talented unicorn from the Lunar Republic and one of the main atagonist, Max is shown to be brillent, polite, and highly ambitiouse, if ecentric character. But he is not to be underestemated by his demeaner: Max is a VERY ruthless and cunning. He has aquired great wealth from both legal and ilegal ventures, as well as a lot of powerful connection. He has also been shown to very sadistic and shows many characteristics ossociated with sociopaths. Dispite thier best efforts, Cash and his plans have remained an enigma to everyone: including his closest operative.

*ArmourPiecingQuistion: With the help of [[spoiler: the Element of Loyalty,]] Max is basically able to weaponize this trope. Simply asking someone what they truly want, and to just allow one little betrayal, is enough to send them into HeroricBOSD.
*AxCrazy: When he throws away the Affiably Evil demeaner. [[spoiler: He orders the death of an entire town, including the children, with a sadistic smile on his face.]]
*Bad Boss: Perfectly willing to send his own henchmen to thier deaths.
*BigBad: Both he and Umbra share this position.
*Beware The Silly Ones: Max may have a very layed back and playful demeanor, but he is one of the most dangerouse criminals to ever live.
*BreakThemByTalking: His favorite method of dealing with ponies.
*Chess Master: Is very good at planning ahead.
*Cloud Cuckolander: A villinouse example.
*Chronic Back Stabbing Disorder: Max will betray anyone, so long as it's convient.
*Evil Can Not Comprehend Good: He seems to be a very friendly and charming stallion, but he really only has a basic understanding of things like loyalty and love.
*Expy: Some have drawn connections with him and the Joker.
*Faux Affiably Evil: He comes off as friendly and polite stallion, but he is anything but.
*ForgotOneDetail: How Calumn figures out, his story is fake.
*For Me It Was Tuesday: He's responsible for [[spoiler: thriving Melody insane and destroying everything she ever cared about.]], but he can't even remember her name.
*For The Evulz: He definatley does way more evil things, than he has to.
*JerkWithAHeartOfAJerk: Any time it looks like Cash is about to show a sympathetic side, he's sure to it end in way that further solidifies what a scumbag he is.
*LackOfEpathy: He's basically the worst scumbag imaginable.
*Magnificient Bastered: Has a long and well layed out plan, and is in complete control most of the time. But, he's not afraid to improvise.
*Manipulative Bastered: There is no one he won't do this too.
*MoreThanMindRape: He uses a combination of his "social skills" and [[spoiler: The invertered element of loyalty to do this]] to corrupt ponies.
*Oppurtunistic Bastered: When his plans do run into problems, he's quick to improvise.
*Trade Mark Favorite food: Cochlate and Cookies.
*Screw The Rules, I Have Money: One of the reasons he has gotten away so far. He even out right says that even if he does get taking to justice, he has the funds and connections to stall for an entire decade, while his people do whatever nesscesary to get him out. [[spoiler: This was after marching his private army into a senator's massion and killing multiple cops.]]
*Slasher Smile/StepharedSmiler: Switches between these.
*The Sociopath: Is heavilly impided to be one.
*SmugSnake: Very.
*Straw Nillist: Heavilly implied in chapter 29.
*Suicide Aider: Can do this.
*Unreliable Narator: His stories should be taken with less then grain of salt.
*Villanouse Break Down: Is starting to have a major one.
*VillinouseFriendship: He had this with John Bays, [[until he murderd him.]] To a lesser extent, Charisma. Though, he makes clear she's only a tool for him.
*Villain Sue: Some commenters have started to debate on this, considering his plans mostly go off without a hitch and when something does go wrong, he makes it seem like a minor set back, and is very quick to adjust. [[spoiler: Finally subverted in chapter 29.]]
*WickedCultured: Is very refined.
*WouldHurtAChild: During his[[spoiler: massacure of a small town, he gleefully sets a school on fire.]]
*YouHaveOutLivedYourUseFullness: He doesn't even try to hide the fact, that he'll do this to everone. [[spoiler: Including his only friend.]]


Charisma

Star Fall: "The three of us can out run her. You and Astrid can over power her. But NONE of us, can out fight her."

Max Cash: "I hired you, becouse your a murderous phycopath."

Max's personal body guard and Blaze's ex girl-friend. Charisma is a former member of the Solor Kingdom's special forces and very skilled combatant, with a talent specifically for killing. On the surface, she appears as a fairly inncocent pink pegasus, but undernithe is a phycotic killer who's constantly being told by her talent, how to kill everone in her immediate vecinity.

*Ax Crazy: Is this by nature, of having a killer mark.
*Bad Ass: She used to train GRIFFINS.
**Bad Ass Normal: Can go toe to toe with griffons, dragons, and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash.]] despite only being a reguler pegasus. Albert, one with a literal talent for killing.
**Bad Ass Adorable: A phycotic commando, who litterally was born to be killer, just happens to be an adorable pink pegasus.
*Becouse You Were Nice To Me: Possibly the reason she cares for Trail Blazer.
*Beserk Button: Not even MAX, is allowed to bring up her parents.
*Blessed With Suck: Her killer talent does give her incredibble combat abbility, but it also drove her insane.
*Blood Knight: Part of her talent.
*Cry For The Devil: Afer finding out that the talent she's had for most of her life,[[spoiler: is constantly telling her to kill everone around her]], whether she wants to or not. It's kind of hard to say she she ever had a chance of being anything, other then the phycopathic killer she is today.
*CombatDance: She lamnates on how similer her fights are to the dances she did as a filly.
*DarkActionGirl
*Dark And Troubled Past: Hinted at.
*DavidVsGalioth: A rare villinouse example: She faces [[spoiler: Astrid, Rainbow Dash, and Spike, all of whom, vastly out power her.]]
*The Dragon: Is this to Max.
*The Dreaded: Is this to many ponies who are familiar with her.
*Emporward Badass: [[spoiler: After Max gives her the element of loyalty.]]
*Even Evil Has Loved Ones: Blaze is the only pony she hesitates to kill.
*Even Evil Has Standards: Though she never acts on it, even she is clearly desturbed by her boss's actions. [[spoiler: Blaze tries to invoke this, to snap her out of her homicidal rage.]]
*FragileSpeedster: She's able to CurbStomp most enemies, but one hit from [[spoiler: Spike]] leaves her severally injured.
*FriendlyEnemies: Even after there falling out, she seems to still be on good terms with Trail Blazer. Albert, in a very twisted way. Even after he [[spoiler: uses this to destract her, so his friends have enough time to catch her off guard, so she doesn't kill them,]] she manages to laugh it off and complement him, for getting the drop on her. [[spoiler: Despite being in agonizing pain and dieing.]]
*Knife Nut: Her favorite weapon.
*Made Of Iron: For a modern pegasus, she can shrug off some serious hits.
*Orgasmic Combat: Apparently, her talent give her a very sticfying filling, everytime she succesfully kills some one.
*Pet The Dog Moment: Tries to give Melody genulenly helpful advice, on how to advance her carrer as a body guard.
*Phyco Ex-Girlfriend: To Trail Blazer.
*Phyco For Hire:
*Pragmatic Combat: Her tactics incude everything from throwing decoy knives to destract from the knife that's really heading for you, to lightly hitting Astrid with her wing, to throw her off balance.
*Rewarded As A Trader Deserves: Heavily implied to be her eventual fate.
*Sex Is Violencse: She's very kinky.
*Self Made Orphan: Heavilly implied.
*Torture Technition: Really enjoys interorgations.
*VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.
*Villonouse Valor: As monsteriouse as her action are, it's hard not be impressed with her combat abillity.

[[folder:Secondary Characters]]


Melody

The young body guard of a local noble, living in a rural town. Melody is the latest in a long line of body guads, to have protected her master's family. She is a very kind and capable young warrior, that aspires to advance her combat abillity. But all this changes, when [[spoiler: Max Cash and Charsima]] arrive in town. Leading to the brutal massacure of her home town and [[spoiler: her being mind raped by Max, into gaurding the rotting corpse of her master, High Fashion.]]

*Big Damm Heroes Moment: When she [[spoiler: saves HB and Traduce.]]
*Blade On a Stick: Chooses to wheeled a spear.
*Break The Cutie: [[spoiler: Is mind raped into guarding her master's dead body, after being betrayed by two people she trusted,]] while her home was destroyed. The worst part? She's completeley aware, but can't stop.
*Horrible Judge Of Character: Some how, Charisma almost killing her on sight, didn't clue her in on how dangerouse she and Max were.
*No Holds Barred Beat Down: Delivers one to [[spoiler: Max Cash, during the raid on Berch's massion. Sadly, it gets her killed.]]
*[[spoiler: Killed Off For Real: Is murdered by Cash, during the raid on senator Berch's massion.]]
*Replacement Gold Fish: A VERY dark example: [[spoiler: sense she can't phycologically leave her master's side (Even when he's nothing, but a decaying corpse.) She has to keep a little doll of him around, at all times.]]
*Sanity Slipage: Is a babbling mess.
*Undying Loyalty: To her master, High Fashion. [[spoiler: This is what Max uses to brain wash her.]]
*VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A Pegasus.

Big Wig

A unicorn forman and war ventern. Big Wig has a telekanisis talent.
*BadAss: He put CHARISMA on the defensive.
*FantasticRacism: He's immediatly ready to kill Calumn, after finding out he's a Changling. [[spoiler: Until he sees one of the children, Calumn had befriended and saved.]]
*NotQuitFlight: Big Wig can use his telekanisis, to fly around on a concrete slab. But, he has very poor menouvrabillity.
*ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Is considered this by his employees.

The King
*ArrangedMarrige: Orders one between StarFall and his son Regal.
*ReasonableAuthorityFigure: All in all, he's just doing what he thinks is best for his people.
*VertabrateWithExtraLimbs: A pegasus-unicorn.
*WingedUnicorn: Though not a true alicorn.

Senator Birch

Queen Aqua


Straff

John Bays

One of(if not only) true friends of Max Cash. For years, he has loyaly served and mentored his best friend Max. Which Max returns [[spoiler: with making him the first sacrafice to remove the elements.]]

*GamblingMan: Was one.
*HumanSacrafic: Well, pony anyway.
*HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Apparently, he thought his murderous, sociopathic friend would return his loyalty.
*PostMortemCharacter: His death kicks off the story.
*SmallRole,BigImpact: His murder is what [[spoiler: frees Rainbow Dash, gives control of Loyalty to Cash, and the motivation for Hard Boiled's entrance into the story.]]
*UndyingLoyalty: To his friend, Max Cash. [[spoiler: Which Max repays just how you think a murderouse sociopath, with no sense of loyalty hiself would.]]
*VillinouseFriendship: With Cash.

Regal Stature

{{Adorkable}}: Is this.
*AntiClimaticReveal: When we finally meet him, it turns out he's just a sweet and inexperienced young stallion, who's just as clueless on how to make being married somone he barly knows, work, as StarFall is. All he can do is make a few febal passes on StarFall, before she stops him and says they she want to atleast become friends with him, before their married in a week.
ArrangedMarrige: With StarFall.
DarkHorseVictory: He's the middle child and hasn't learned all that's nessecary to be king, becouse odds our he would have never been given the oppurtunity. Then, his father descided he was the one to be married to StarFall, and made him his eir to the throne.
SpoiledSweet: Is actually a very nice guy.

[[folder:Minor Characters]]


Silus

Silus: "Shut up, stupid pony."

A shifty Diamond Dog guide, who offers to lead people through the Everstorm, only to leave them for dead. He has a long standing fued, with a rival guide: Trail Blazer.

*Foil: To Trail Blazer.
*Fantasy Culture Equivalent: He gives off a Russian vive.
*Jerk Ass:
*Laser Guided Karma: Tries to Murder Blaze over costing him a customer. [[spoiler: This gets him left for dead, while in the storm he abadoned all his customers in.]]
*The Rival: Apparently has a long grudge against Blaze. Likley, becouse Blaze warns his customers, how trust worthy Silus is.

High Fashion

A wealthy unicorn and Melody's employer. He comes from a long line of nobles, who have ran his estate.
*[[spoiler: Killed Off For Real: Is driven to suicide by Max Cash.]]
*Satalite Character: Only serves as Melody's boss.

Conrad Sherman

A minor associate of Max Cash and gambler. Conrad is enjoying a layed back suite, while Cash's goons shadow him, when Lunar agents go after him.

The Alchoholic: Drinks his heart away, while in his hotel suite
Cassanova Wantabe: Realy loves chasing tail.
Killed Off For Real: Used as a sacrafice[[spoiler: to retrieve the element of honest.]]
Oh Crap: When he realizes he's busted.









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