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* TheHero: Well, as much a hero as an investigative reporter for an [[CurrentEventsBlog online news blog blog]] can be.
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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: [[spoiler:They are the true villains of the story. Mr. Smith is a NiceGuy, and even his wolf form behaves more like a real wolf than the violent monsters werewolves are traditionally depicted as, acting more like a scared and confused animal that attacks out of instinct]].
* KarmaHoudini: They get no comeuppance for [[spoiler:locking their charges in a room with a dangerous animal and causing several of them to get scratched and bitten]].
* KarmaHoudini: They get no comeuppance for [[spoiler:locking their charges in a room with a dangerous animal and causing several of them to get scratched and bitten]].
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* OurWerewolvesAreDifferentOurWerewolvesAreDifferent: [[spoiler:Mr. Smith’s lycanthropy is akin to narcolepsy; rather than being aware that he’s transformed, his consciousness ends up in a state similar to a deep sleep while his body takes over.]]
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* BiggerBad: They're the ones who are behind the whole ordeal of using [[spoiler:Mr. Smith]] as a means to punish unruly children.
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* BiggerBad: GreaterScopeVillain: They're the ones who are behind the whole ordeal of using [[spoiler:Mr. Smith]] as a means to punish unruly children.
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A former employee at Happy Sun Daycare who communicated with the protagonist via e-mail. A nice guy who suffers from a strange form or narcolepsy [[spoiler: or, rather, lycanthropy.]]
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A former employee at Happy Sun Daycare who communicated with the protagonist viae-mail. A nice guy e-mail - a kind man who suffers from a strange form or narcolepsy [[spoiler: or, rather, lycanthropy.]]
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* FriendToAllChildren: Tells the Reporter that he tended to get along well with the children at the daycare. Which makes [[spoiler:the fact he was a werewolf used to terrorize said children]] all the more horrifying.
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* FriendToAllChildren: Tells He tells the Reporter reporter that he tended to get along well with the children at the daycare. Which makes [[spoiler:the fact he was a werewolf used to terrorize said children]] all the more horrifying.horrifying and tragic.
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An unnamed reporter who serves as the main protagonist and narrator for the story.
* TheHero: Well, as much a hero as an investigative reporter for an online news blog can be.
* NoNameGiven: We never find out what his name is.
* OhCrap: His realization when finds out what ''really'' happened at the daycare.
* RightManInTheWrongPlace: Who would've thought a reporter would expose a conspiracy involving a [[spoiler:werewolf]]?
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[[folder:Mr. Smith [[spoiler:The werewolf]]]]
A former employee at Happy Sun Daycare who communicated with the protagonist via e-mail. A nice guy who suffers from a strange form or narcolepsy [[spoiler: or, rather, lycanthropy.]]
* CrustyCaretaker: Subverted. He's actually a really nice guy.
* FriendToAllChildren: Tells the Reporter that he tended to get along well with the children at the daycare. Which makes [[spoiler:the fact he was a werewolf used to terrorize said children]] all the more horrifying.
* [[spoiler:NonMaliciousMonster]]: [[spoiler:His actions when transformed are more akin to that of a frightened animal than anything truly malcious]]
* [[spoiler:OurWerewolvesAreDifferent]]
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[[folder:Daycare Staff]]
The former staff who worked at Happy Sun Daycare. Their job was to ensure the children could learn and play in a safe environment. [[spoiler:Their idea of punishment, however...]]
* [[spoiler:BiggerBad]]: [[spoiler:They're the ones who are behind the whole ordeal of using Mr. Smith as a means to punish unruly children.]]
[[/folder]]
An unnamed reporter who serves as the main protagonist and narrator for the story.
* TheHero: Well, as much a hero as an investigative reporter for an online news blog can be.
* NoNameGiven: We never find out what his name is.
* OhCrap: His realization when finds out what ''really'' happened at the daycare.
* RightManInTheWrongPlace: Who would've thought a reporter would expose a conspiracy involving a [[spoiler:werewolf]]?
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[[folder:Mr. Smith [[spoiler:The werewolf]]]]
A former employee at Happy Sun Daycare who communicated with the protagonist via e-mail. A nice guy who suffers from a strange form or narcolepsy [[spoiler: or, rather, lycanthropy.]]
* CrustyCaretaker: Subverted. He's actually a really nice guy.
* FriendToAllChildren: Tells the Reporter that he tended to get along well with the children at the daycare. Which makes [[spoiler:the fact he was a werewolf used to terrorize said children]] all the more horrifying.
* [[spoiler:NonMaliciousMonster]]: [[spoiler:His actions when transformed are more akin to that of a frightened animal than anything truly malcious]]
* [[spoiler:OurWerewolvesAreDifferent]]
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[[folder:Daycare Staff]]
The former staff who worked at Happy Sun Daycare. Their job was to ensure the children could learn and play in a safe environment. [[spoiler:Their idea of punishment, however...]]
* [[spoiler:BiggerBad]]: [[spoiler:They're the ones who are behind the whole ordeal of using Mr. Smith as a means to punish unruly children.]]
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