Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 98 (click to see context) from:
A half-Germanian woman who wanted to see the Faerie cities in person. She is one of the Tristanian tutors hired to work at Arrun Home. She teaches Tristanian language (specifically writing, as the Fae's 'Gift of Tongues' inherently translates speech).
to:
A half-Germanian woman who wanted to see the Faerie cities in person. She is one of the Tristanian tutors hired to work at Arrun Home. She teaches Tristanian language (specifically writing, as the Fae's 'Gift of Tongues' inherently translates speech).speech).
----
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
disambig Nice Hat
Deleted line(s) 55 (click to see context) :
* NiceHat: That wide-brimmed hat of his is very popular on the [=SpaceBattles=] forums, and even features in a couple of Omake.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Dewicked trope
Deleted line(s) 35 (click to see context) :
* AdultFear: One of her daughters is [[spoiler: on the verge of being declared a heretic. This sets her scrambling for solutions even if it takes every scrap of power and influence she has, and she fears it won't be enough.]] With this mind, her action under UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom are more understandable.
Deleted line(s) 63 (click to see context) :
* AdultFear: How would ''you'' feel if you suddenly found out that your son was unwittingly traveling with a powerful traitor, or somehow got stuck in a hopeless siege?
Changed line(s) 96,97 (click to see context) from:
* AdultFear: How would you feel if someone you loved dearly disappeared without a trace, and no one who knows anything about what happened is able to tell you ''anything''? This is what Eleanore had to experience in regards to Louise.
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 71,72 (click to see context) from:
%%%* BadassMustache
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 64 (click to see context) from:
* CharacterTics: Asuna notes that he has a habit of tapping his legs with his wand. [[spoiler: This is because one of his legs is artificial earth mage and he is maintaining it.]]
to:
* CharacterTics: Asuna notes that he has a habit of tapping his legs with his wand. [[spoiler: This is because one of his legs is artificial earth mage magic and he is maintaining it.]]
Changed line(s) 83 (click to see context) from:
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: Courtesy of Ephialtes after he has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness Outlived His Usefulness.]]]]
to:
*ArcVillain: [[spoiler: He is the true mastermind behind the events of part 2. Recruiting Jack the Ripper, funding Ryo's smear campaign, and plotting the assassination/kidnapping at the gala are all his doing.]]
*FantasticRacism: He sees the Fae as "sub-humans" and wants them all under strict and heavy control (his control).
*MoleInCharge: [[spoiler: As is noted in the epilogue, it is hard to formally try all the caught conspirators when the guy in charge of the legal system has disappeared, because he is one of them.]]
*HowTheMightyHaveFallen: [[spoiler: One of the most powerful men in Tristian bleeds to death on the floor of an abandoned cabin, having been tortured and stabbed by his former subordinates.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Courtesy of Ephialtes after he has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness Outlived His Usefulness.]]]]stabs him through the ribs down to the hilt of his sword and then watches him bleed out.]]
*FantasticRacism: He sees the Fae as "sub-humans" and wants them all under strict and heavy control (his control).
*MoleInCharge: [[spoiler: As is noted in the epilogue, it is hard to formally try all the caught conspirators when the guy in charge of the legal system has disappeared, because he is one of them.]]
*HowTheMightyHaveFallen: [[spoiler: One of the most powerful men in Tristian bleeds to death on the floor of an abandoned cabin, having been tortured and stabbed by his former subordinates.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:
Changed line(s) 85,87 (click to see context) from:
%%* RichBitch
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:After Ephi and Digby get from him everything he knows.]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:After Ephi and Digby get from him everything he knows.]]
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* BirdsofAFeather: Several characters suspect him and Rute of the Leprachuns to become best friends over their shared traits such as money and ego.
to:
* BirdsofAFeather: BirdsOfAFeather: Several characters suspect him and Rute of the Leprachuns to become best friends over their shared traits such as money and ego.ego. Indeed, they spend much of the gala in V2.0 discussing business opportunities.
Changed line(s) 35,36 (click to see context) from:
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Unconsciously feels this towards Kirito and Asuna in terms of parenting.
to:
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Unconsciously feels this towards Kirito and Asuna in terms of parenting. She envies them for having such a happy and well-adjusted daughter in Yui.
Changed line(s) 39,40 (click to see context) from:
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:Seeing Louise's injuries in the aftermath of the Gala, she orders her back to their estate and forbids her from any more magic practice, going so far as to confiscate her foci. This completely breaks the girl, leaving her in an almost vegetative state.]]
* NotSoStoic: A Fae potion causes a MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes that makes it harder for her to control her emotions. Not to mention the fact that she gets involved in crisis after crisis, with little rest in between...
* NotSoStoic: A Fae potion causes a MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes that makes it harder for her to control her emotions. Not to mention the fact that she gets involved in crisis after crisis, with little rest in between...
to:
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:Seeing Louise's injuries in the aftermath of the Gala, she orders her back to their estate and forbids her from any more magic practice, going so far as to confiscate her foci. This completely breaks the girl, leaving her in an almost vegetative state.]]
* NotSoStoic:NotSoStoic:
** A Fae potion causes a MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes that makes it harder for her to control her emotions. Not to mention the fact that she gets involved in crisis after crisis, with little rest in between...
* NotSoStoic:
** A Fae potion causes a MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes that makes it harder for her to control her emotions. Not to mention the fact that she gets involved in crisis after crisis, with little rest in between...
*ParentsAsPeople: She loves Louise and the girl's safety is always a high priority for her. However, her means of achieving this are strict orders and the absence of emotion. It works in the military but in this case it does more damage to Louise's psyche.
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
to:
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:In the aftermath of the Gala, she orders Louise back to their estate and forbids her from any more magic practice, going so far as to confiscate her foci. This completely breaks the girl, leaving her in an almost vegetative state. This causes a chain of events that will lead to Louise attempting to bind the Cardinal system as her familiar and causing a system crash.]]
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* NiceHat: It's very popular on the [=SpaceBattles=] forums, and even features in a couple of Omake.
to:
* NiceHat: It's That wide-brimmed hat of his is very popular on the [=SpaceBattles=] forums, and even features in a couple of Omake.
Changed line(s) 56,57 (click to see context) from:
* WorthyOpponent:[[spoiler:Is quite respectful of his opponents' skill, even in the middle of battle. Comments to himself after seeing Kirito and Asuna's display of teamwork, that if this had been ''anywhere'' else – such as, say, tryouts for the Griffin Knights – he'd have signed them both up on the spot.]]
to:
* WorthyOpponent:[[spoiler:Is quite respectful of his opponents' skill, even in the middle of battle. Comments to himself after After seeing Kirito and Asuna's display of teamwork, he comments to himself that if this had been ''anywhere'' else – such as, say, tryouts for the Griffin Knights – he'd have signed them both up on the spot.]]
Changed line(s) 62,63 (click to see context) from:
%%%* ArtificialLimbs:
* ChivalrousPervert: He can certainly appreciate the fact that the Slyph capital appeared near his holdings, because it means he has many lovely new neighbors to admire. He even allows his gaze to follow a Slyph courier as she enters and exits a War Room. However, he is otherwise a paragon of respectability and has a war-buddy relationship with Karin,
* ChivalrousPervert: He can certainly appreciate the fact that the Slyph capital appeared near his holdings, because it means he has many lovely new neighbors to admire. He even allows his gaze to follow a Slyph courier as she enters and exits a War Room. However, he is otherwise a paragon of respectability and has a war-buddy relationship with Karin,
to:
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler: One of his legs is an artificial creation of earth magic. Because he is an earth mage himself, he can keep it functioning as well as a flesh-and-blood leg]].
* ChivalrousPervert: He can certainly appreciate the fact that the Slyph capital appeared near his holdings, because it means he has many lovely new neighbors to admire. He even allows his gaze to follow a Slyph courier as she enters and exits a War Room. However, he is otherwise a paragon of respectability and has a war-buddy relationship with
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* HowDidYouKnowIDidnt: Said verbatim between him and Kirito, after the latter manages to defeat him.
Changed line(s) 52 (click to see context) from:
* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler: His body is lost to the mists of Albion. Considering what he survived in Canon, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
to:
* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler: His body is lost to the mists of Albion. Considering what he survived in Canon, however, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 12 (click to see context) from:
* HandsOnApproach: Shortly after the arrival of her "secret" lover in her capital city, she asks him to be her fencing instructor.
to:
* HandsOnApproach: Shortly after the arrival of her "secret" lover in her capital city, she asks him to be her fencing instructor. Admittedly, what is shown in V1 is just the start of a practice spar.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
*HandsOnApproach: Shortly after the arrival of her "secret" lover in her capital city, she asks him to be her fencing instructor.
Changed line(s) 13,14 (click to see context) from:
* YouAreInCommandNow: After Cardinal Mazarin is incapacitated during an ambush by a field boss.
to:
* YouAreInCommandNow: After Cardinal Mazarin is incapacitated during an ambush by a field boss.
boss, she is effectively in charge of Tristan.
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
* MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes: After taking a Fae potion.
to:
* MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes: After taking a Fae potion.mana potion, she flashes through her childhood and then the birth and development of her three daughters.
Changed line(s) 59 (click to see context) from:
* AdultFear: How would ''you'' feel if you suddenly found out that your son was unwittingly traveling with powerful traitor, or somehow got stuck in a hopeless siege?
to:
* AdultFear: How would ''you'' feel if you suddenly found out that your son was unwittingly traveling with a powerful traitor, or somehow got stuck in a hopeless siege?
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Artificial Limbs did not have context.
Changed line(s) 50,51 (click to see context) from:
* SelfDuplication: [[spoiler:Can create Wind Clones of himself.]]
* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler:And considering what he survived in Canon, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler:And considering what he survived in Canon, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
to:
* SelfDuplication: [[spoiler:Can [[spoiler: He can create Wind Clones of himself.himself. He normally restricts himself to one for maximum efficiency, but in a pinch he can create as many as ten functional-if-flawed clones.]]
* NeverFoundTheBody:[[spoiler:And considering [[spoiler: His body is lost to the mists of Albion. Considering what he survived in Canon, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
* NeverFoundTheBody:
Changed line(s) 53 (click to see context) from:
* ShockAndAwe: It's in his runic name.
to:
* ShockAndAwe: It's in his runic name.name, the Lightning Viscount.
Changed line(s) 59,60 (click to see context) from:
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler: Though it isn't obvious until someone mentions it.]]
* ChivalrousPervert: He can certainly appreciate the fact that the Slyph capital appeared near his holdings, because it means he has many lovely new neighbors to admire. He even allows his gaze to fallow a Slyph courier as she enters and exits a War Room. However, he is otherwise a paragon of respectability and has a war-buddy relationship with Karin,
* ChivalrousPervert: He can certainly appreciate the fact that the Slyph capital appeared near his holdings, because it means he has many lovely new neighbors to admire. He even allows his gaze to fallow a Slyph courier as she enters and exits a War Room. However, he is otherwise a paragon of respectability and has a war-buddy relationship with Karin,
to:
%%%* ArtificialLimbs:
* ChivalrousPervert: He can certainly appreciate the fact that the Slyph capital appeared near his holdings, because it means he has many lovely new neighbors to admire. He even allows his gaze to
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
to:
*ALighterShadeOfBlack: At the Treaty of Alfheim negotiations, Henrietta identifies him as part of the "Opportunist" faction, which means that he will wring every last drop of profit he can from the Fae. However, he's a useful ally against the "Radical" camp, who want to enslave and/or exterminate the Fae.
*BirdsofAFeather: Several characters suspect him and Rute of the Leprachuns to become best friends over their shared traits such as money and ego.
*{{Greed}}: He is a man focused on profit above all else, which means he is easily managed as long as there's money involved.
*BirdsofAFeather: Several characters suspect him and Rute of the Leprachuns to become best friends over their shared traits such as money and ego.
*{{Greed}}: He is a man focused on profit above all else, which means he is easily managed as long as there's money involved.
Changed line(s) 56 (click to see context) from:
%%%%* ChivalrousPervert:
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Please don't spoiler tag trope names. It's against policy.
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:BigGood: Of Tristain after she is crowned Queen.]]
to:
* [[spoiler:BigGood: BigGood [[spoiler: Of Tristain after she is crowned Queen.]]
Changed line(s) 17 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:AnArmAndALeg]]: [[spoiler:Loses a leg to a RazorFloss trap while pursuing fake Mortimer]].
to:
* [[spoiler:AnArmAndALeg]]: AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:Loses a leg to a RazorFloss trap while pursuing fake Mortimer]].
Changed line(s) 44,47 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his arm cut off/impaled through the chest.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito and Asuna had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open (run him through, in the Refactored version). Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
* [[spoiler:SelfDuplication]]: [[spoiler:Can create Wind Clones of himself.]]
* [[spoiler:NeverFoundTheBody]]: [[spoiler:And considering what he survived in Canon, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito and Asuna had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open (run him through, in the Refactored version). Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
* [[spoiler:SelfDuplication]]: [[spoiler:Can create Wind Clones of himself.]]
* [[spoiler:NeverFoundTheBody]]: [[spoiler:And considering what he survived in Canon, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
to:
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his arm cut off/impaled through the chest.]]
*[[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: GracefulLoser: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito and Asuna had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open (run him through, in the Refactored version). Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
*[[spoiler:SelfDuplication]]: SelfDuplication: [[spoiler:Can create Wind Clones of himself.]]
*[[spoiler:NeverFoundTheBody]]: NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler:And considering what he survived in Canon, there is a reason why he is only listed as '''presumed''' dead.]]
*
*
*
Changed line(s) 50,51 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:WorthyOpponent]]: [[spoiler:Is quite respectful of his opponents' skill, even in the middle of battle. Comments to himself after seeing Kirito and Asuna's display of teamwork, that if this had been ''anywhere'' else – such as, say, tryouts for the Griffin Knights – he'd have signed them both up on the spot.]]
to:
* [[spoiler:WorthyOpponent]]: [[spoiler:Is WorthyOpponent:[[spoiler:Is quite respectful of his opponents' skill, even in the middle of battle. Comments to himself after seeing Kirito and Asuna's display of teamwork, that if this had been ''anywhere'' else – such as, say, tryouts for the Griffin Knights – he'd have signed them both up on the spot.]]
Changed line(s) 55,56 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler: ArtificialLimbs]]: Though it isn't obvious until someone mentions it.
* ChivalrousPervert: And all four of his sons take after him.
* ChivalrousPervert: And all four of his sons take after him.
to:
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler: ArtificialLimbs]]: Though it isn't obvious until someone mentions it.
*it.]]
%%%%* ChivalrousPervert:And all four of his sons take after him.
*
%%%%* ChivalrousPervert:
Changed line(s) 61,62 (click to see context) from:
* BadassMustache
to:
Changed line(s) 65 (click to see context) from:
* LesYay: With Caramella.
to:
Changed line(s) 73,78 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler: ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Courtesy of Ephialtes after he has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness Outlived His Usefulness.]]]]
* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]
* [[spoiler:NotInThisForYourRevolution: He really does not believe in Reconquista's cause, merely seeing the group as a means to advance his own ambitions.]]
* RichBitch
* [[spoiler:YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness]]: [[spoiler:After Ephi and Digby get from him everything he knows.]]
* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]
* [[spoiler:NotInThisForYourRevolution: He really does not believe in Reconquista's cause, merely seeing the group as a means to advance his own ambitions.]]
* RichBitch
* [[spoiler:YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness]]: [[spoiler:After Ephi and Digby get from him everything he knows.]]
to:
* [[spoiler: ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: Courtesy of Ephialtes after he has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness Outlived His Usefulness.]]]]
*[[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]
* [[spoiler:NotInThisForYourRevolution:NotInThisForYourRevolution: [[spoiler: He really does not believe in Reconquista's cause, merely seeing the group as a means to advance his own ambitions.]]
* %%* RichBitch
*[[spoiler:YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness]]: YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:After Ephi and Digby get from him everything he knows.]]
*
* [[spoiler:NotInThisForYourRevolution:
*
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 43,45 (click to see context) from:
Captain of Tristain's Griffin Knight Squadron, entrusted with protecting Princess Henrietta. He is also Louise's betrothed [[spoiler:He later betrays Tristain for reasons unknown and defects to Albion. He is defeated by Kirito, Asuna, and Klein at the Battle of Newcastle and is presumed dead.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his arm cut off.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open. Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his arm cut off.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open. Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
to:
Captain of Tristain's Griffin Knight Squadron, entrusted with protecting Princess Henrietta. He is also Louise's betrothed betrothed. [[spoiler:He later betrays Tristain for reasons unknown and defects to Albion. He is defeated by Kirito, Asuna, and Klein at the Battle of Newcastle and is presumed dead.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his arm cutoff.off/impaled through the chest.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito and Asuna had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chestopen.open (run him through, in the Refactored version). Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his arm cut
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito and Asuna had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest
Changed line(s) 50,51 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:WorthyOpponent]]: [[spoiler:Is quite respectful of his opponents' skill, even in the middle of battle. Comments to himself after seeing the kind of teamwork Kirito and Asuna are capable of, that if this had been ''anywhere'' else – such as, say, tryouts for the Griffin Knights – he'd have signed them both up on the spot.]]
to:
* [[spoiler:WorthyOpponent]]: [[spoiler:Is quite respectful of his opponents' skill, even in the middle of battle. Comments to himself after seeing the kind of teamwork Kirito and Asuna are capable of, Asuna's display of teamwork, that if this had been ''anywhere'' else – such as, say, tryouts for the Griffin Knights – he'd have signed them both up on the spot.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 43,45 (click to see context) from:
Captain of Tristain's Griffin Knight Squadron, entrusted with protecting Princess Henrietta. He is also Louise's bethrothed [[spoiler:He later betrays Tristain for reasons unknown and defects to Albion. He is defeated by Kirito, Asuna, and Klein at the Battle of Newcastle and is presumed dead.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off of Albion after having his arm sliced off.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off of Albion after having his arm sliced off.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open.]]
to:
Captain of Tristain's Griffin Knight Squadron, entrusted with protecting Princess Henrietta. He is also Louise's bethrothed betrothed [[spoiler:He later betrays Tristain for reasons unknown and defects to Albion. He is defeated by Kirito, Asuna, and Klein at the Battle of Newcastle and is presumed dead.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his armsliced cut off.]]
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open. Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyVillainDeath]]: [[spoiler:Falls off the edge of Albion after having his arm
* [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open. Although that ''could'' also be due to the sudden trauma and blood loss.]]
Changed line(s) 48 (click to see context) from:
* NiceHat: It's very popular on the spacebattles forums, and even features in a couple of Omake.
to:
* NiceHat: It's very popular on the spacebattles [=SpaceBattles=] forums, and even features in a couple of Omake.
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
to:
* [[spoiler:WorthyOpponent]]: [[spoiler:Is quite respectful of his opponents' skill, even in the middle of battle. Comments to himself after seeing the kind of teamwork Kirito and Asuna are capable of, that if this had been ''anywhere'' else – such as, say, tryouts for the Griffin Knights – he'd have signed them both up on the spot.]]
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler: ArtificialLimbs:]] Though it isn't obvious until someone mentions it.
to:
* [[spoiler: ArtificialLimbs:]] ArtificialLimbs]]: Though it isn't obvious until someone mentions it.
Changed line(s) 56,57 (click to see context) from:
* DishingOutDirt: Is a square of earth.
to:
* DishingOutDirt: Is a square of earth.
Earth.
Changed line(s) 68,69 (click to see context) from:
The Patron of the Charming Faerie Inn, located in the Commoner section of the capital. Sometime between the second and third arcs. The Charming Faerie is burned down and he and his employees reestablish themselves at the Rangdorian Lake Resort.
to:
The Patron of the Charming Faerie Inn, located in the Commoner section of the capital. Sometime between the second and third arcs. The arcs, the Charming Faerie is burned down down, and he and his employees reestablish themselves at the Rangdorian Ragdorian Lake Resort.
Changed line(s) 74 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:NotInThisForYourRevolution: He really does not believe in Reconquista's cause. Merely seeing the group as a means to advance his own ambitions.]]
to:
* [[spoiler:NotInThisForYourRevolution: He really does not believe in Reconquista's cause. Merely cause, merely seeing the group as a means to advance his own ambitions.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoielr:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open.]]
to:
* [[spoielr:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoielr:GracefulLoser]]: [[spoiler:Is surprisingly accepting of how Kirito had just defeated his most powerful spell and carved his chest open.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* LonelyAtTheTop: She was exclusively home-schooled, and as such did not have an opportunity to develop school friendships/rivalries, something that she still regrets.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 66,67 (click to see context) from:
The Patron of the Charming Faerie Inn, located in the Commoner section of the capital.
to:
The Patron of the Charming Faerie Inn, located in the Commoner section of the capital.
capital. Sometime between the second and third arcs. The Charming Faerie is burned down and he and his employees reestablish themselves at the Rangdorian Lake Resort.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Unconsciously feels this towards Kirito and Asuna in terms of parenting.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:BigGood: Of Tristain after she is crowned Queen.]
to:
* [[spoiler:BigGood: Of Tristain after she is crowned Queen.]]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler:BigGood: Of Tristain after she is crowned Queen.]]
to:
* [[spoiler:BigGood: Of Tristain after she is crowned Queen.]]]
* CovertPervert: Is VERY interested in Asuna's and Kirito's sex life.
* CovertPervert: Is VERY interested in Asuna's and Kirito's sex life.