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* [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: He's happy in his relationship with Dovesong.
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* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
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* [[Mrs. Exposition MrExposition]]: Her role so far has been to explain the 16th rule of the Warrior Code, and to say that Galeflight never breaks his promies.
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* [[Mrs. Exposition MrExposition]]: [[HappilyMarried Happily Mated]]: She and Galeflight have a solid relationship.
* [[MrExposition Mrs. Exposition]]: Her role so far has been to explain the 16th rule of the Warrior Code, and to say that Galeflight never breaks hispromies.
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* [[MrExposition Mrs. Exposition]]: Her role so far has been to explain the 16th rule of the Warrior Code, and to say that Galeflight never breaks his
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* EnemyMine: She teams up with Duskstar and [=ShadowClan=] to defeat Bonetail.
!!Duskstar
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
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* EnemyMine: Agrees to work with Otterstar and [=RiverClan=] to take down Bonetail.
[=ShadowClan=]'s leader, and the mother of Darkclaw and Cherrynose. She had her kits when she was deputy, but was forced to leave the Nursery when her predecessor died. Nowadays, Darkclaw struggles to earn her approval.
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* EnemyMine: Agrees to work with Otterstar and [=RiverClan=] to take down Bonetail.
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* ShroudedInMyth: Only a few cats know about him, and even then the truth about him is unclear.
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* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White Furred Pretty She-cat]]
[[Mrs. Exposition MrExposition]]: Her role so far has been to explain the 16th rule of the Warrior Code, and to say that Galeflight never breaks his promies.
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** BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
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* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
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* DragonWithAnAgenda: It's clear that he has his own plans other than what the Watcher gives him. He even goes behind the Watcher's back and messes with his spike thing.
* TheDreaded: EvenThe the Watcher is scared of him.
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
* TheDreaded: Even
* ManipulativeBastard: He has been seen manipulating Hazelfrost and Darkclaw to his own ends.
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* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
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* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash. Their fighting style relies on working together.
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* DarkChickDarkChick: She's not as aggressive as the other rogues, and focuses more on collecting herbs.
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A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
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A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan. He has also been manipulating Darkclaw.
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* HurtingHero: In addition to the problems facing her Clan, she lost her kits.
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* AxCrazyAxCrazy: He often forgets everything except his bloodlust. Creamfur and Owlflight have had to snap him out of it.
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* HotBloodedHotBlooded: He's completely obsessed with battle, and goes charging into it without thinking.
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* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son.
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* MysteriousPast
MysteriousPast: Something happened between him and Tidepaw, and it serves as a driving source of conflict.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son. However, he's doing it because of issues with his mother.
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* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and CreeyChild. The cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
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* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and CreeyChild.CreepyChild. The cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
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* DeadpanSnarker
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* DeadpanSnarkerDeadpanSnarker: He's both polite and sarcastic at the same time.
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A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
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A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Many Clan cats believe that her murdered [=ThunderClan=]'s former deputy Whisperwing so that his niece Sandstone could be deputy.
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* TheChessmaster
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* TheChessmasterTheChessmaster: He's apparently pulling the strings of the Clans. His plans also seem malleable enough to account for problems. When the Deliverer kills one of the kits she was supposed to bring to him, he explains that instead of screwing him over, she may have improved the end result.
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* HiddenVillain
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
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* HiddenVillain
HiddenVillain: We know that he is a Clan cat, but we don't know who he is, or even which Clan he's in.
*IntroOnlyPointOfViewIntroOnlyPointOfView: He has a point of view in the prologue, but he's not a main character like Leafkit, Tidepaw, or Darkclaw.
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* DarkActionGirlDarkActionGirl: Stealing kits and performing daring escapes is all in a day's work for her.
* HiddenVillain: She's confirmed to have appeared somewhere in the first six chapters, but her identity is unknown. However, she is known to be a Clan cat.
* EvilMentor: He was Darkclaw's mentor before he betrayed the Clans. Darkclaw hates him because of this, and wants to be the one to defeat/kill him.
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* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
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* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.mate, Fernheart.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFastNamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The "Bone" half of his name does not signify a nice guy.
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* EarNotchEarNotch: When Leafkit first sees him, she notes that he has a notch in his ear.
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* IcyBlueEyes
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
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* IcyBlueEyes
IcyBlueEyes: Leafkit notes that he has "icy blue eyes" which seem to look right into her soul.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues. His mate Whitefeather still calls him Reedfur, however.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues. His mate Whitefeather still calls him Reedfur, however.
* TheMedic: Although she wasn't a medicine cat during her time with [=WindClan=], she has enough knowledge of herbs to aid Bonetail and his rogues.
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->'''Tidepaw''': "Tell me who you are."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
->'''Jester''': "Just a cat who doesn't know the meaning of eternity."
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* CheerfulChild
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* CheerfulChildCheerfulChild: He usually seems pretty happy, although hints of sadness do occasionally show.
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The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems to be developing a rivalry with Boulderpaw.
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The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who apprentice. She was a loner, but joined [=RiverClan=] when she was fairly young. Before that, her brother Scratch died because of a disease, which made her vow to never lose a cat to sickness again. She is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems friend, and tries to be developing offer moral support even when her friend fights against it. Boulderpaw of [=WindClan=] has a one-sided rivalry with Boulderpaw.her.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure
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NumberTwo: He's the deputy of [=ShadowClan=].
*ReasonableAuthorityFigure
ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He wants to help [=RiverClan=] with their food problems.
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* CelibateHeroCelibateHero: As a medicine cat, he can never take a mate.
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* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
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* TheMedic
TheMedic: He's [=ThunderClan=]'s Medicine Cats.
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates. In Chapter 5, he's revealed to be a former kittypet. This probably has something to do with it.
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates. In Chapter 5, he's revealed to be a former kittypet. This probably has something to do with it.
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* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]
Hero]]: He has ginger fur, and he's very heroic.
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* TheLeaderTheLeader: He's [=ThunderClan=]'s leader.
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* [[KidHero Kit Hero]]
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* [[KidHero Kit Hero]]Hero]]: She's only four moons old at the start of the story, yet she sets out to do heroic things like stopping the rogues.
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* GreenEyesGreenEyes: Snowcloud even mentions that toms will love her green eyes.
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* HonorBeforeReason
* HotBlooded
* IdiotHero
* HonorBeforeReason
* HotBlooded
* IdiotHero
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* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]
Pelt]]: He's incredibly excitable, and rushes off to help others at the drop of a hat.
*HonorBeforeReason
HonorBeforeReason: He refuses to break his promise to Leafkit, even though it puts her in danger.
*HotBlooded
HotBlooded: He always leaps in to help those in need.
*IdiotHeroIdiotHero: Fieldstone is always there pointing out that he isn't very bright.
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* MartialPacifistMartialPacifist: He talks about peace nearly every time he appears, but he still has plenty of fights against cats like Bear and Slash.
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* CelibateHeroCelibateHero: As a medicine cat, she can never have a mate.
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* GreenEyes
* TheMedic
* TheMedic
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* GreenEyes
GreenEyes: She's a green-eyed medic and is closely associated with [=StarClan=].
*TheMedicTheMedic: She's [=WindClan=]'s medicine cat.
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* TheLeader
* TheLeader
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* {{Jerkass}}
{{Jerkass}}: He treats Otterstar cruelly, denying her prey even though [=RiverClan=] is starving and [=WindClan=] has lots of food.
*TheLeader
TheLeader: He's [=WindClan=]'s leader.
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* {{Jerkass}}
* {{Jerkass}}
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* ActionGirl
ActionGirl: She fights frequently, mostly seen in her battle with the rogues in Chapter 3.
*{{Jerkass}}{{Jerkass}}: She frequently insults those around her, and calls Galeflight an idiot nearly every time she talks to him.
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* ApologizesALot
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* ApologizesALotApologizesALot: Every line of dialogue from him has the word "sorry" in it. Hawkkit eventually decides that he'll only stop constantly apologizing if he stops talking.
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* SmallNameBigEgoSmallNameBigEgo: Believes himself to be a mighty warrior, but he's actually a total wimp.
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* MinorMajorCharacter
* MinorMajorCharacter
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NumberTwo: He's [=WindClan=]'s deputy.
*MinorMajorCharacterMinorMajorCharacter: He has the very important position of [=WindClan=]'s deputy, but he has done next to nothing.
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* ActionGirlActionGirl: She fights frequently, taking on Bear in Chapter 2 and Darkclaw in Chapter 4.
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* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
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* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.an energetic and optimistic she-cat.
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath
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* [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]
She-cat]]: She has a severe illness that hampers her at crucial moments.
*IncurableCoughOfDeath
IncurableCoughOfDeath: Nightheart goes out of his way to explain that he has found no cure for her illness.
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* TheLeader
* TheLeader
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* BigGood
BigGood: She's the most heroic of the leaders.
*TheLeader
TheLeader: She's the leader of [=RiverClan=].
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* CelibateHeroCelibateHero: He can never take a mate due to being a medicine cat.
* {{Determinator}}: Amberfang says that Nightheart never gives up on a patient.
* {{Determinator}}: Amberfang says that Nightheart never gives up on a patient.
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* SadClownSadClown: Her plucky and humorous nature is just a ruse for her misery.
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* StepfordSnarker
* StepfordSnarker
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* StepfordSmiler
StepfordSmiler: She's faking her cheerfulness to deal with trauma, and to give Brightpaw someone to lean on.
*StepfordSnarker
StepfordSnarker: Seems like a snarky joker, but she's really incredibly miserable and hates herself.
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* CelibateHeroCelibateHero: She's a medicine cat, so she can never take a mate.
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* TheMedicTheMedic: She's the medicine apprentice of [=RiverClan=].
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* MissingMomMissingMom: She disappeared mysteriously a week before Tidepaw's first point of view chapter.
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!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
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->"Your Clan of traitors and murderers can collapse on itself. And then, you'll die just like everyone else."
A violently insane she-cat who was formerly a member of [=ThunderClan=]. After attempting to kill Sandstone, [=ThunderClan=]'s
* ADayInTheLimelight: Interlude 1 is about her failed attempt to kill the [=ThunderClan=] deputy Sandstone.
* AxCrazy: She's crazy, and violent, especially when she attacks Sandstone.
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let her kill Sandstone.
* ChekhovsGunman: She seems like a random minor character in Chapter 6, but then Interlude 1 reveals that she's working for Arise.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: At first, she seems insane when she says that Sandstone killed her mother. Then it turns out to be true.
* DarkSecret: She killed her brother.
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revenge on Sandstone.
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
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* AxCrazy: She's crazy, and violent, especially when she attacks Sandstone.
* BrokenPedestal: She decided that she hated Jaytalon after he refused to let her kill Sandstone.
* ChekhovsGunman: She seems like a random minor character in Chapter 6, but then Interlude 1 reveals that she's working for Arise.
* TheCuckoolanderWasRight: At first, she seems insane when she says that Sandstone killed her mother. Then it turns out to be true.
* DarkSecret: She killed her brother.
* HearingVoices: She hears many voices talking to her. Some, like Whisperwing, are imaginary, but she also hears the voice of Arise.
* {{Revenge}}: She spends most of Interlude 1 ranting about taking revenge on Sandstone.
* TheRunaway: She flees [=ThunderClan=] at the end of Interlude 1.
* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Mother]]: The reason she wants to kill Sandstone is because she has been led to believe that Sandstone murdered her mother, Goldenfoot. Then it turns out that it's true.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
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* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far. In Chapter 5, he gets a second line, and that's all.
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* BigBad
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
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* BigBad
*BigBad: He's the menacing figure manipulating the characters in his attempt to destroy the Clans.
** BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
*
** BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
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* ActionGirlActionGirl: She has her fair share of fights. The very first thing she does in the fic is win a fight.
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* LeaderWannabeLeaderWannabe: Her dream is to become Clan leader.
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!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
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* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do want to find him[=/=]her.
* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do want to find him[=/=]her.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname
AwesomeMcCoolname: "Ace, the Rogue Hunter" At one point, Darkclaw points out that her name is so overdramatic that no one could actually take it seriously.
*TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, BigDamnHeroes: Subverted in her first appearance. When Darkclaw is fighting Slash and Whitefeather, she comes out of nowhere to help him fight the rogues, only for Slash to effortlessly knock her aside.
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on theClans do want inside.
* DynamicEntry: She screams tofind him[=/=]her.
announce her presence when she interrupts Darkclaw's fight with Slash and Whitefeather.
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
*
* CheerfulChild: Darkclaw finds her cheerfulness very annoying, but thinks that she's a lot like Tidepaw. Glace is presumably not as angsty as Tidepaw is on the
* DynamicEntry: She screams to
* {{Kiai}}: She yells "Kiai!" when she attacks Slash.
* LargeHam: She constantly acts overblown, from screaming as she attacks Slash to striking a dramatic pose when introducing herself to Darkclaw.
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One of the three point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
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One of the three main point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
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!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
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* NumberTwo
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
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* NumberTwo
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure
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->"Nice scar."
The son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
The son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
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The
One of the three main point of view characters. He is the son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader,
* AntiHero: He does care for his Clan and is firmly on the side of the good guys, but he's also extremely violent and a jerk.
* BerserkButton: Talking about how he was mentored by Bonetail sets him off into a rage.
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* {{Jerkass}}HotBlooded
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
* {{Jerkass}}: Tidepaw sees him as one. His point of view shows us that she's right, as he constantly insults other cats and has serious temper problems.
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!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* CelibateHero
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
* CelibateHero
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
to:
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
NumberTwo
*CelibateHero
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but heReasonableAuthorityFigure
!!Hopekit
->"The Winds of Death can neverelaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you alwaysbe so theatrical?"
cheated."
Agrumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.small white she-kit who often bothers Darkclaw. She can somehow tell when cats will die with a mysterious power known as "The Winds of Death".
*
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he
!!Hopekit
->"The Winds of Death can never
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always
A
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
----
* TheLeader
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
----
* TheLeader
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far.
to:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], CatchPhrase: "Oh my frog!"
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this andLeafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
CreeyChild. The cheerful part comes out when she's talking about frogs.
*OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by CreepyChild: Alternates between this and CheerfulChild. The creepy part comes out when she's talking about the antics Winds of Death.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of theother cats.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important thanClans themselves by saying "Oh my frog" instead of "Oh my [=StarClan=]".
* WaifProphet: She can tell who will die due to theother Clan leaders.
----
* TheLeader
* MinorMajorCharacter: He'sWinds of Death. And she's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far.kit.
* CheerfulChild: Alternates between this and
*
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Does this to the terminology of the
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than
* WaifProphet: She can tell who will die due to the
----
* TheLeader
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's
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[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
to:
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always
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* BigBad
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger because of it.
* HiddenVillain
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger because of it.
* HiddenVillain
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
to:
* BigBad
AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
*BiggerBad: CelibateHero
* DeadpanSnarker
* HeroicSacrifice: Proposes that he could make one by giving himself up to Bonetail in exchange for the freedom of the other medicine cats.
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: Heis much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
never elaborates.
*TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan:NiceGuy: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in dangerbrings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because of it.
* HiddenVillain
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so thathe can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything thatthinks they might need them.
* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must youtold me."
always be so theatrical?"
Ashe-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
*
* DeadpanSnarker
* HeroicSacrifice: Proposes that he could make one by giving himself up to Bonetail in exchange for the freedom of the other medicine cats.
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He
*
* EvilPlan:
* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger
* HiddenVillain
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that
* [[RedHeadedHero Red Furred Hero]]
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you
A
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* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
to:
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing itJerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatredshare herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sortsurprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics ofrole in The Watcher's plan.the other cats.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
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* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
to:
* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't youHeroicBastard: He's a [=halfClan=].
* TheLeader
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clancats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for leader, but he only has a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch single line so far.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood ofrestless kits.the Clan cats."
Aformer [=ShadowClan=] warrior, mysterious figure who left to form a rebellion against seeks the destruction of the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out His plans involved tracking down the Clans if enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you
* TheLeader
* MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of
A
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* AttackOfTheTownFestival: He crashes the Gathering in Chapter 2 so that he can give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
to:
* AttackOfTheTownFestival: BigBad
* BiggerBad: Hecrashes is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the Gathering in Chapter 2 so that he can give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
prologue.
*BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He hasone involving the medicine cats.
one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
*FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting atplan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in Chapter 2, he leaves danger because of it.
* HiddenVillain
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over theGathering Island without fighting. Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking also what the prologue calls him.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying offthe Clan cats.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. Aftera kit so that he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
* BiggerBad: He
*
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has
*
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at
* HiddenVillain
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
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* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
to:
* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: ToBonetail, before the story began.
The Watcher.
*TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have[[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to hurt drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what youany more.wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
* TheDragon: To
*
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have
!!Arise
->"Do what you
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* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is a fairly intimidating name.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is a fairly intimidating name.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
to:
* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a memberTheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet whenhe fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on I come for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash isa fairly intimidating name.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one.visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
Slash's mate, a A former [=WindClan=] cat. She [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when
* IcyBlueEyes
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one.
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
to:
* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they AttackOfTheTownFestival: He crashes the Gathering in Chapter 2 so that he can give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can takeher to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fightsthe Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of roguesfor one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.blocking off the Clan cats.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname
* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do want to find him[=/=]her.
!!Jester
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".
* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do want to find him[=/=]her.
!!Jester
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".
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* AwesomeMcCoolname
DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost:Ace hasn't appeared yet, but He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from theClans do want to find him[=/=]her.
!!Jester
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".Clans.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost:
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the
!!Jester
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".
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* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is a fairly intimidating name.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname
* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do want to find him[=/=]her.
!!Jester
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".
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* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* IcyBlueEyes
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Leafkit even jokes about it by pointing out that Slash is a fairly intimidating name.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname
* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do want to find him[=/=]her.
!!Jester
A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".
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A strange kit who Tidepaw meets on the beach. He claims to work for "the wishgranter".
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* CheerfulChild
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!!Tidepaw's Mother
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UnnamedParent: Until Chapter 4, when we learn that her name is Swanwing.
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* HeroicBSOD: In Chapter 4, when Darkclaw wounds Brightpaw. She manages to snap out of it when her mentor Graywave tells her that Brightpaw will be okay.
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* OhCrap: In Chapter 4, when she realizes that she has the {{healing factor}}.
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* ArchEnemy: To Tidepaw.
* AxCrazy
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
* AxCrazy
* EarNotch: Tidepaw tears his ear in Chapter 4.
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* RoyalBrat: He will not shut up about being the Clan Leader's son.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
* SlasherSmile: When attacking Brightpaw in Chapter 4.
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* CelibateHero
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* HeroicBSOD: She has a minor one after [[spoiler:Slash and his rogues beat her down.]]
* ISurrenderSuckers: She does this without intending to. [[spoiler:During her fight with Slash, she realizes that he is much stronger than her and accepts his offer to come with him quietly. However, while walking towards him, she notices how soft the earth is, and decides to flick it in his eyes to blind him.]]
* ISurrenderSuckers: She does this without intending to. [[spoiler:During her fight with Slash, she realizes that he is much stronger than her and accepts his offer to come with him quietly. However, while walking towards him, she notices how soft the earth is, and decides to flick it in his eyes to blind him.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: She has a minor one after [[spoiler:Slash Slash and his rogues beat her down.]]
down.
* ISurrenderSuckers: She does this without intending to.[[spoiler:During During her fight with Slash, she realizes that he is much stronger than her and accepts his offer to come with him quietly. However, while walking towards him, she notices how soft the earth is, and decides to flick it in his eyes to blind him.]]
* ISurrenderSuckers: She does this without intending to.
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* [[TheSmartGuy Smart Guy]]: She wills her battles with strategy, wants to study everything, and tends to analyze everything.
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* [[TheSmartGuy Smart Guy]]: She wills wins her battles with strategy, wants to study everything, and tends to analyze everything.
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* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
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* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The HealingFactor: The wounds she received while fighting during her fight with Bear have mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]healed by the time she leaves the Gathering Island.
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* HiddenAgendaVillain: All we know is that his plan involves killing some cats, and the Clan cats are in danger because of it.
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* AmberEyes
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* TheWathcer: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
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* TheWathcer: TheWatcher: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
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* BiggerBad: He is much more powerful and malicious than Bonetail, but he hasn't received any focus outside out the prologue.
* IntroOnlyPointOfView
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWathcer: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The prologue simply calls him, "The Watcher".
* TheWathcer: He seems to be watching over the Clans with an evil plan in mind. It's also what the prologue calls him.
* AttackOfTheTownFestival: He crashes the Gathering in Chapter 2 so that he can give the Clans a demonstration of his rogue army.
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* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
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* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, Clans, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
* VillainExitStageLeft: After ranting at the Clan cats in Chapter 2, he leaves the Gathering Island without fighting. It's justified because he had a large army of rogues blocking off the Clan cats.
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!!Woodfur
[=WindClan=]'s deputy. He's also the father of Snowcloud and Tigertail.
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* NumberTwo
* MinorMajorCharacter
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* MajorMinorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far.
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* MajorMinorCharacter: MinorMajorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far.
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* LeaderWannabe
* LeaderWannabe: His goal is to become Clan leader.
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!!Brambletail
->"Are we late?"
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
->"Are we late?"
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
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->"Are we late?"
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
->"Surely you can't agree to this madness!"
One of [=WindClan=]'s senior warriors. She has a deep hatred for Galeflight.
* ActionGirl
* {{Jerkass}}
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"Are we late?"
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
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* {{Jerkass}}
* OnlySaneMan: Considers herself this in Chapter Three when everyone else ignores how stupid Galeflight's plan is.
* TheRival: To Galeflight
!!Brambletail
->"Are we late?"
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
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[[folder:RiverClan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
[[folder:RiverClan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
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[[folder:RiverClan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks
!!Dovesong
->"We won't deprive them of a kindness just because they remain ignorant of it. From the
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* ActionGirl
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems to be developing a rivalry with Boulderpaw.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems to be developing a rivalry with Boulderpaw.
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* ActionGirl
* BeneathTheMask: She seems[[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need tobe an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break herstop apologizing so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength.much."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems to be developing Dovesong's younger brother. He's a rivalry with Boulderpaw.fairly capable warrior, but he's not very confident.
* BeneathTheMask: She seems
!!Thistlepelt
->"Sorry, I need to
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength.
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* CelibateHero
* CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* TheMedic
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
* CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* TheMedic
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
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* CelibateHero
ApologizesALot
*CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* TheMedic
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights fallsShipTease: With Brambletail in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sicklyChapter Three.
!!Boulderpaw
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical [=WindClan=] apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
*
* TheMedic
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly
!!Boulderpaw
->"I-I will have my revenge!"
An egotistical [=WindClan=] apprentice.
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
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* [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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* BigGood
* TheLeader
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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* BigGood
* TheLeader
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* [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]
ButtMonkey: Nobody ever gives him a break.
*IncurableCoughOfDeath
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we haveSmallNameBigEgo
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refers tobe monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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* BigGood
* TheLeaderhimself as "the mighty Boulderpaw" sometimes.
*
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have
* ThirdPersonPerson: Refers to
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
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* BigGood
* TheLeader
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!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
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!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength.
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
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* NumberTwo
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar."
The son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw, and was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar."
The son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw, and was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
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* NumberTwo
ActionGirl
*ReasonableAuthorityFigure
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar.BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
Theson of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems to be developing a rivalry with Tidepaw, and was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.Boulderpaw.
*
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
The
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* {{Jerkass}}
* MysteriousPast
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[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* DeadpanSnarker
* MysteriousPast
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* DeadpanSnarker
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* {{Jerkass}}
CelibateHero
*MysteriousPast
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will,CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* DeadpanSnarkerhealer.
*
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will,
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* DeadpanSnarker
Changed line(s) 151,157 (click to see context) from:
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
to:
* MysteriousPast: He claims LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that there's quite ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's storybehind his name, but he never elaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
Changed line(s) 159,167 (click to see context) from:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
to:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to beprickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats.monitored or hunted for."
A mysterious figure who seeks [=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity current food shortage, but is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about finding it would be an enormous crime.increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats.
Changed line(s) 169,178 (click to see context) from:
* BigBad
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
to:
* BigBad
BigGood
*TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying offTheLeader
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not akit so question of how strong I am. It's how I gain my strength. I believe that he when we are protecting something precious to ourselves, we can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me.grow more ferocious than the warriors of [=TigerClan=]."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part father of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.Tidepaw and Brightpaw. He was killed by rogues before the story began.
*
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off
!!Quailfeather
->"It's not a
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me.
Changed line(s) 180,187 (click to see context) from:
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
to:
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: ToPosthumousCharacter: The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]:rogues killed him a week before Tidepaw's first point of view chapter.
!!Tidepaw's Mother
The mother of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. Shethrows a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.disappeared on the same day her mate Quailfeather was killed.
* TheDragon: To
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]:
!!Tidepaw's Mother
The mother of Tidepaw and Brightpaw. She
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
Changed line(s) 189,195 (click to see context) from:
* AmberEyes
* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
to:
* AmberEyes
TheGhost
*TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans.MissingMom
* UnnamedParent
!!Nightheart
[=RiverClan=]'s medicine cat. Hecommands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.never give up on a patient.
*
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans.
* UnnamedParent
!!Nightheart
[=RiverClan=]'s medicine cat. He
Changed line(s) 197,207 (click to see context) from:
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
to:
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believesTheMedic: Of [=RiverClan=].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ShadowClan]]
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me tobe because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced himfurther strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree withSlash.his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ShadowClan]]
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with
Changed line(s) 209,216 (click to see context) from:
* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
to:
* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
NumberTwo
*TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more.ReasonableAuthorityFigure
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from The son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw. He was also the Clans.one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
*
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more.
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar."
Changed line(s) 218,233 (click to see context) from:
* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* BlueEyes
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
* BlueEyes
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
to:
* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
{{Jerkass}}
*BlueEyes
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat fromMysteriousPast
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn anotherClan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love withClan for the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one.sake of your pride."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] [=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. She left [=WindClan=] Despite his undying loyalty to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned his own Clan, he cares for loving a cat from another Clan.all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
*
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one.
Changed line(s) 235,243 (click to see context) from:
* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
to:
* AffablyEvil: She's AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quitekind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbswhen to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes:might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
Avillainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes:
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
Added DiffLines:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
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* TheLeader
* MajorMinorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
----
* BigBad
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
----
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
----
* AmberEyes
* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
----
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
----
* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
----
* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* BlueEyes
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
----
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
!!Thornstar
[=ThunderClan=]'s leader. He's significantly less important than the other Clan leaders.
----
* TheLeader
* MajorMinorCharacter: He's a Clan leader, but he only has a single line so far.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
----
* BigBad
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
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* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
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* AmberEyes
* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
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* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
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* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
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* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* BlueEyes
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
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[[folder:WindClan]]
!!Leafkit
->"I am Leafkit, [=WindClan=]'s fiercest warrior. I don't care who you are or what your reasons are. I will never allow anyone to hurt my Clanmates!"
One of the three main point of view characters. Leafkit is a silver [=WindClan=] she-cat who dreams of one day being the leader of her Clan. Although her dreams are big, she doesn't quite have a complete grip on the way the Clans work yet.
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* ActionGirl
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: She believes that all enemies of the Clans deserve death. At the end of Chapter Three, she seems to be growing out of it.
* {{Determinator}}: She doesn't let anything hold her back.
* GeniusBruiser: She's fairly strong, and uses both her strength and strategy to win fights.
* GreenEyes
* HeroicBSOD: She has a minor one after [[spoiler:Slash and his rogues beat her down.]]
* ISurrenderSuckers: She does this without intending to. [[spoiler:During her fight with Slash, she realizes that he is much stronger than her and accepts his offer to come with him quietly. However, while walking towards him, she notices how soft the earth is, and decides to flick it in his eyes to blind him.]]
* [[KidHero Kit Hero]]
* [[spoiler:KnowWhenToFoldEm]]: [[spoiler:She actually takes Slash up on his offer to come with him quietly after realizing that she can't beat him.]]
* LargeHam: She tends to be very over the top and cheesy when she gets excited. While she's calm, she's usually much quieter.
* ObliviousToLove: She completely fails to notice Eaglekit's attraction to her.
* SherlockScan: She can break down the individual strengths of a cat after trading only a few blows with them, as seen in her fight with Slash.
* SignificantBirthDate: She was born on the day that Bonetail started his rebellion.
* [[TheSmartGuy Smart Guy]]: She wills her battles with strategy, wants to study everything, and tends to analyze everything.
* ToBeAMaster: She dreams of becoming Clan Leader.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
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* BigDamnHeroes: He saves Leafkit from Slash in Chapter Three.
* {{Expy}}: He's based on {{Shonen}} protagonists, drawing most heavily from Manga/{{Naruto}}.
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]
* HonorBeforeReason
* HotBlooded
* IdiotHero
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger.
* MartialPacifist
* ToBeAMaster: His dream is to become Clan Leader and change the Clans.
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox.
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* ActionGirl: Not usually, but she does help Tidepaw fight Bear during the Gathering Island Battle.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes
* TheMedic
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.
----
* {{Jerkass}}
* TheLeader
!!Brambletail
->"Are we late?"
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
----
* BigDamnHeroes: She appears just in time to prevent Slash from grabbing Leafkit in Chapter Three.
* TheMentor: If Chapter Three is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit.
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
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[[folder:RiverClan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
----
* ActionGirl
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems to be developing a rivalry with Boulderpaw.
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* CelibateHero
* CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* TheMedic
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
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* [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
----
* BigGood
* TheLeader
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[[folder:ShadowClan]]
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
----
* NumberTwo
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar."
The son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw, and was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
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* {{Jerkass}}
* MysteriousPast
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[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
----
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
----
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
----
* BigBad
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
----
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
----
* AmberEyes
* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
----
* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
----
* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
----
* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* BlueEyes
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
----
* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
----
* AwesomeMcCoolname
* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do what to find him[=/=]her.
[[/folder]]
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[[folder:WindClan]]
!!Leafkit
->"I am Leafkit, [=WindClan=]'s fiercest warrior. I don't care who you are or what your reasons are. I will never allow anyone to hurt my Clanmates!"
One of the three main point of view characters. Leafkit is a silver [=WindClan=] she-cat who dreams of one day being the leader of her Clan. Although her dreams are big, she doesn't quite have a complete grip on the way the Clans work yet.
----
* ActionGirl
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: She believes that all enemies of the Clans deserve death. At the end of Chapter Three, she seems to be growing out of it.
* {{Determinator}}: She doesn't let anything hold her back.
* GeniusBruiser: She's fairly strong, and uses both her strength and strategy to win fights.
* GreenEyes
* HeroicBSOD: She has a minor one after [[spoiler:Slash and his rogues beat her down.]]
* ISurrenderSuckers: She does this without intending to. [[spoiler:During her fight with Slash, she realizes that he is much stronger than her and accepts his offer to come with him quietly. However, while walking towards him, she notices how soft the earth is, and decides to flick it in his eyes to blind him.]]
* [[KidHero Kit Hero]]
* [[spoiler:KnowWhenToFoldEm]]: [[spoiler:She actually takes Slash up on his offer to come with him quietly after realizing that she can't beat him.]]
* LargeHam: She tends to be very over the top and cheesy when she gets excited. While she's calm, she's usually much quieter.
* ObliviousToLove: She completely fails to notice Eaglekit's attraction to her.
* SherlockScan: She can break down the individual strengths of a cat after trading only a few blows with them, as seen in her fight with Slash.
* SignificantBirthDate: She was born on the day that Bonetail started his rebellion.
* [[TheSmartGuy Smart Guy]]: She wills her battles with strategy, wants to study everything, and tends to analyze everything.
* ToBeAMaster: She dreams of becoming Clan Leader.
!!Galeflight
->"You still don't understand me. As long as I can protect those precious to me, there's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice!"
The father of Leafkit, Hawkkit, and Gustkit, Galeflight is a tom who dreams of becoming [=WindClan=]'s leader and bringing peace to the Clans. He is brave and honourable to a fault, which often annoys his Clanmates.
----
* BigDamnHeroes: He saves Leafkit from Slash in Chapter Three.
* {{Expy}}: He's based on {{Shonen}} protagonists, drawing most heavily from Manga/{{Naruto}}.
* [[FieryRedhead Fiery Red Pelt]]
* HonorBeforeReason
* HotBlooded
* IdiotHero
* IGaveMyWord: He never breaks a promise, even if it means putting himself in danger.
* MartialPacifist
* ToBeAMaster: His dream is to become Clan Leader and change the Clans.
!!Snowcloud
->"Is that what you really believe, Bonetail? Because you're wrong. There is always something worth fighting for. We all have things that we have to protect!"
[=WindClan=]'s medicine cat. She went from apprentice to a full medicine cat at eight moons, because her mentor was killed by a passing fox.
----
* ActionGirl: Not usually, but she does help Tidepaw fight Bear during the Gathering Island Battle.
* ActuallyIAmHim: Tidepaw mistakes her for the [=WindClan=] medicine apprentice. However, Rainpaw is the one to do the correcting.
* BigDamnHeroes: She saves Tidepaw from Bear in Chapter Two.
* CelibateHero
* CombatMedic: While a medicine cat, she is also trained to fight.
* GreenEyes
* TheMedic
* MrExposition: Her main role is to explain the plot to Leafkit and Tidepaw.
* ScarsAreForever: At the end of Chapter Three, Leafkit notices that she has a small scar.
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
* YoungAndInCharge: She was put in charge of her Clan's medical and spiritual needs at only eight moons old.
!!Ravenstar
->"Why should we encourage the breaking of the Warrior Code?"
[=WindClan=]'s leader. He disagrees with [=RiverClan=] taking [=WindClan=] prey, even though [=RiverClan=] needs the prey to survive.
----
* {{Jerkass}}
* TheLeader
!!Brambletail
->"Are we late?"
A kind and affectionate [=WindClan=] warrior.
----
* BigDamnHeroes: She appears just in time to prevent Slash from grabbing Leafkit in Chapter Three.
* TheMentor: If Chapter Three is any indication, she'll end up as this to Leafkit.
* ShipTease: With Thistlepelt in Chapter Three.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:RiverClan]]
!!Tidepaw
->"Everyone always overlooks the happy ones. The ones who sulk stand out, but nobody ever thinks that someone so cheerful could be so broken inside."
One of the three point of view characters. Tidepaw is an upbeat [=RiverClan=] she-cat who never lets anything get her down, despite recent misfortune. At least, that's what she pretends. In reality, Tidepaw hates herself, and hides dark secrets which she believes would cause her Clanmates to hate her.
----
* ActionGirl
* BeneathTheMask: She seems to be an excitable and upbeat she-cat, but that's a false persona she uses to prevent her Clanmates from hating her.
* BreakTheCutie: She seems broken beyond repair. However, we don't actually know what made her that way.
* DarkSecret: She has one, but it's only been hinted at.
* GenkiGirl: She pretends to be one.
* [[spoiler:HealingFactor]]: [[spoiler:The wounds she received while fighting Bear mysteriously disappear after that battle.]]
* MysteriousPast: Something happened to break her so hard. It involves Darkclaw, but the rest has only been hinted at.
* PluckyComicRelief: She pretends to be this.
* PromotionToParent: She has had to care for her sister Brightpaw ever since her father was killed by rogues and her mother went missing.
* ScarsAreForever: She has a noticeable scar across her forehead. It's still as fresh as when she first got it, which perplexes Sunstorm.
* StepfordSmiler
* StepfordSnarker
!!Rainpaw
->"I think we can all find cats who we admire for their strength."
The [=RiverClan=] medicine apprentice, who is also Tidepaw's best friend. She seems to be developing a rivalry with Boulderpaw.
----
* CelibateHero
* CombatMedic: She is a trained fighter and healer.
* TheMedic
* LoveAtFirstPunch: Tidepaw jokes that ever tom she fights falls in love with her.
!!Brightpaw
->"We're all starving, and the Clan needs strong warriors more than they need a sickly apprentice."
Tidepaw's sister. A quarter moon before Tidepaw's story began, she sometime obtained an incurable illness.
----
* [[IllGirl Ill She-cat]]
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
!!Otterstar
->"Please, allow us some of your food, even if we have to be monitored or hunted for."
[=RiverClan=]'s leader. She struggles to deal with the current food shortage, but is finding it increasingly difficult to save her Clan.
----
* BigGood
* TheLeader
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ShadowClan]]
!!Redclaw
->"I'll keep walking this path, as long as it leads me to further strength."
[=ShadowClan=]'s deputy. He doesn't agree with his leader's decision to abandon [=RiverClan=].
----
* NumberTwo
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure
!!Darkclaw
->"Nice scar."
The son of [=ShadowClan=]'s leader, Duskstar. He has some sort of history with Tidepaw, and was also the one who discovered the body of her father Quailfeather, who was killed by rogues.
----
* {{Jerkass}}
* MysteriousPast
[[/folder]]
[[folder:ThunderClan]]
!!Sunstorm
->"The survival of all four Clans has always been [=StarClan=]'s will, and I will not let you condemn another Clan for the sake of your pride."
[=ThunderClan=]'s medicine cat. Despite his undying loyalty to his own Clan, he cares for all the Clans, protecting them for hardship.
----
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Tidepaw even goes on a rant about it.
* DeadpanSnarker
* TheMedic
* MysteriousPast: He claims that there's quite a story behind his name, but he never elaborates.
* NiceGuy: He brings herbs to [=WindClan=] simply because he thinks they might need them.
!!Lightningblaze
->"Must you always be so theatrical?"
A grumpy [=ThunderClan=] warrior.
----
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He may be prickly, but he does agree to share herbs with [=WindClan=], and Leafkit notices that he is surprisingly soft around Snowcloud.
* OnlySaneMan: He's bothered by the antics of the other cats.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Outside the Clans[=/=]Unknown Clan]]
!!The Watcher
->"My goal is, as it always was, to stain this land crimson with the blood of the Clan cats."
A mysterious figure who seeks the destruction of the Clans. His plans involved tracking down the enigmatic tom known as Arise. Although his identity is unclear, he has apparently committed a deed so horrible that even thinking about it would be an enormous crime.
----
* BigBad
* TheChessmaster
* EvilPlan: He has one, and it somehow involves abducting and killing newborn kittens.
* HiddenVillain
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He is last seen carrying off a kit so that he can kill it. It somehow fits into his master plan.
!!The Deliverer
->"I told her everything that you told me."
A she-cat working for The Watcher. As part of his plan, she kidnaps two newborn kits.
----
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To The Watcher.
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: She throws a kit into a river, causing it to drown.
!!Arise
->"Do what you wish. It's not as if it concerns me. I'm just glad your hatred is still so strong. You'd be useless to me otherwise."
A mysterious tom who wields great power. He plays some sort of role in The Watcher's plan.
----
* AmberEyes
* TheDreaded: Even The Watcher is scared of him.
!!Bonetail
->"How strange. Don't you Clan cats pride yourselves on your rules and regulations? Yet when I come for a visit, I see you squabbling like a bunch of restless kits."
A former [=ShadowClan=] warrior, who left to form a rebellion against the Clans. He commands an army of rogues, which he promises will be used to wipe out the Clans if he doesn't get what he wants (that being the Medicine Cats). There's more to him than he lets on, but only Snowcloud has tried to figure out his motives.
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* BigBad: At least for the beginning of the story.
* DiscardAndDraw: He throws his battle against Moorwhisker's patrol so that he can take the Clans by surprise at the Gathering.
* EvilPlan: He has one involving the medicine cats.
* FreudianExcuse: He wants the Medicine Cats because he's angry at them for failing to save his mate.
* LaResistance: He runs an evil one against the Clans.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* {{Revenge}}: He seeks revenge against the Clan, especially the Medicine Cats. Snowcloud believes this to be because he is angry at them for failing to save his mate.
!!Frost
Bonetail's former second-in-command. After he abandoned Bonetail in a battle, he left the Clans. Bonetail has replaced him with Slash.
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* DirtyCoward: He abandons the others during the fight with Moorwhisker's patrol.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, before the story began.
* TheGhost: He has never actually appeared.
!!Slash[=/=]Reedfur
->"Give up now, come with me, and I won't have to hurt you any more."
Bonetail's new second-in-command, replacing Frost after he fled from the Clans.
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* BattleCouple: With his mate, Whitefeather.
* BlueEyes
** IcyBlueEyes
* DefectorFromDecadence: He left [=RiverClan=] after they shunned him for loving a cat from another Clan.
* TheDragon: To Bonetail, replacing Frost.
* EarNotch
* FreudianExcuse: He used to be a member of [=RiverClan=], but they shunned him when he fell in love with the [=WindClan=] she-cat Whitefeather. Together, they joined Bonetail's rogues, where they weren't looked down on for being together.
* MeaningfulRename: He changed his name from Reedfur to Slash when he joined Bonetail's rogues.
* StarCrossedLovers: With Whitefeather. Or so the Clans thought.
* WakeUpCallBoss: His fight with Leafkit taught her that she had to train harder if she wanted to fight rogues. [[invoked]]
* [[WouldHurtAChild Would Hurt A Kit]]: He was perfectly willing to beat up Leafkit if it meant weakening her enough to capture.
!!Whitefeather
->"You're an observant little one."
Slash's mate, a former [=WindClan=] cat. She left [=WindClan=] to join Bonetail's rogues, where she wasn't shunned for loving a cat from another Clan.
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* AffablyEvil: She's quite kind to Leafkit, even offering to get her some herbs when they take her to Bonetail.
* BattleCouple: With her mate, Slash.
* BigDamnHeroes: A villainous variant. When Leafkit manages to weaken Slash, she shows up to protect him.
* DarkChick
* [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl White-Furred Pretty She-cat]]
!!Ace, The Rogue Hunter
A mysterious cat who fights the rogues for one reason or another. The Clans have yet to meet them, but they have begun to feel Ace's presence.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname
* TheGhost: Ace hasn't appeared yet, but the Clans do what to find him[=/=]her.
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