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Champion of the Star Heaven, she's an entity aligned with the Lords of Order and the enemy of The Darkness. Currently her host is Lauren Franchetti, and has an uneasy partnership with Apollonia Franchetti. After a failed ritual to exorcize her from Lauren's body by Appolonia and Jackie Estacado, her essence was divided between five hosts, Superna, Amatara, Filia, Sororia and Meretrix.
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Champion of the Star Heaven, she's an entity aligned with the Lords of Order and the enemy of The Darkness. Currently her host is Lauren Franchetti, and has an uneasy partnership with Apollonia Franchetti. After a failed ritual to exorcize her from Lauren's body by Appolonia and Jackie Estacado, her essence was divided between five hosts, Superna, Matrona, Amatara, Filia, Sororia and Meretrix.
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Changed line(s) 153 (click to see context) from:
Champion of the Star Heaven, she's an entity aligned with the Lords of Order and the enemy of The Darkness. Currently her host is Lauren Franchetti, and has an uneasy partnership with Apollonia Franchetti. After a failed ritual to exorcize her from Lauren's body by Appolonia and Jackie Estacado, her essence was divided between five hosts, Superna, Amatara, Filia, Sororia and Meretix.
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Champion of the Star Heaven, she's an entity aligned with the Lords of Order and the enemy of The Darkness. Currently her host is Lauren Franchetti, and has an uneasy partnership with Apollonia Franchetti. After a failed ritual to exorcize her from Lauren's body by Appolonia and Jackie Estacado, her essence was divided between five hosts, Superna, Amatara, Filia, Sororia and Meretix.Meretrix.
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* DecompositeCharacter: In the comics the Angelus eventually found a new host after the current one died, but here due to the imperfect ritual used by Apollonia, her essence has been divided between five hosts at the same time.
