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* EatingTheEyeCandy: During his date with Akiza, Yusei takes a moment to admire her curves... while wearing a nearly-translucent shirt so she can do the same.
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* IAmNotPretty: Taylor's reaction to anyone calling her cute or pretty is to retaliate she's not. She even calls herself plain in front of [[LoveInterest Dennis]], who strongly disagrees. Given she is a {{Bifauxnen}} who was teased for her looks in the past, her reaction is somewhat justified.
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* TheStrategist: Whenever a new enemy shows up, Jack is usually the first to figure out its strengths and weaknesses, owing to his centuries of combat experience. He is also one of the quickest to devise counters.
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* AnimalMotifs: Taylor has a couple, all for insects. In her civilian identity, she's called "the Twig", because she's skinny and a master of blending into her environment like stick bug, and as Weaver she's been compared to a cockroach a few times because she doesn't go down easily. the chapter titles also refer to her as either the Bug or the Swarm.
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* AnimalMotifs: Taylor has a couple, all for insects. In her civilian identity, she's called "the Twig", because she's skinny and a master of blending into her environment like stick bug, and as Weaver she's been compared to a cockroach a few times because she doesn't go down easily. the The chapter titles also refer to her as either the Bug or the Swarm.
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* Biblical Motifs: Fiends. His partner is Red Dragon Archfiend, the Archfiend archetype is a part of his deck and the chapter titles also refer to him as such.
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* Biblical Motifs: BiblicalMotifs: Fiends. His partner is Red Dragon Archfiend, the Archfiend archetype is a part of his deck and the chapter titles also refer to him as such.
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* AnimalMotifs: Taylor has a couple, all for insects. In her civilian identity, she's called "the Twig", because she's skinny and a master of blending into her environment like stick bug, and as Weaver she's been compared to a cockroach a few times because she doesn't go down easily. the chapter titles also refer to her as either the Bug or the Swarm.
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* CosmicMotifs: Stars. His Hero alias is White Star, his partner is Stardust Dragon while his Duel Runner is called the Shooting Stardust, and the chapter titles refer to him as the Star.
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* BadassBiker: Eventually passes her Turbo Exam to become a Turbo Duelist like Yusei, Jack and Crow. Her CurbStompBattle of Trudge proves her skills remain even on a bike.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: In this story his relationship with Kalin was explicitly romantic, but he still has hints of attraction to Akiza.
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* LapPillow: At one point he has Taylor reading the Odyssey on one thing while Akiza is napping on the other.
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* PapaWolf: While he'll let her fight her own battles when she needs to, he's rather protective of Dinah after adopting her, like when her teacher at the Academy is dismissing her entire class and gets thrashed in a duel as a result. This is apparently a recurring trait of his across his incarnations with the incarnations of his son as well.
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* SoProudOfYou: After Dinah beats Chacu Challhua by baiting it with a Field Spell then destroying it to seal it away, Jack first has a laughing fit. Then he hugs her and tells her how proud he is.
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* TheReliableOne: Following the TimeSkip (and a drinking contest he lost to Jack), Yusei considers Taylor to be the most responsible of his siblings, including Jack and Crow.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Unfortunately for Yusei, when it comes to drinking, he is as much a lightweight as Stardust, and is reminded of the fact the hard way following a drinking contest with Jack and Crow.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Years of bullying do not vanish like that, especially since it caused Taylor's [[TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening Trigger Event]]. Even though she can face [[GodOfEvil Earthbound Immortals]] without fear, going to school gives Taylor traumatic flashbacks of Winslow and forces her to default to homeschooling, much to her frustration.
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* RealityEnsues: Years of bullying do not vanish like that, especially since it caused Taylor's [[TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening Trigger Event]]. Even though she can face [[GodOfEvil Earthbound Immortals]] without fear, going to school gives Taylor traumatic flashbacks of Winslow and forces her to default to homeschooling, much to her frustration.
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* RealityEnsues: Years of bullying do not vanish like that, especially since it caused Taylor's [[TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening Trigger Event]]. Even though she can face [[GodOfEvil Earthbound Immortals]] without fear, going to school gives Taylor traumatic flashbacks of Winslow and forces her to default to homeschooling, much to her frustration.
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* ForgivenButNotForgotten: Following his actions against the Dark Signers, the people of Satellite may have forgiven Jack for betraying Yusei, but Blitz makes clear he hasn't forgotten and will keep an eye on him. Jack acknowledges it.
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* BadassTeacher. EternalHero. Teacher at Neo Domino's Duel Academy. ''Do not'' mess with his students.
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* BadassTeacher. EternalHero. Teacher at Neo Domino's Duel Academy. ''Do not'' mess with his students. Heitmann finds out the hard way when he not only delivers him a CurbStompBattle, but also uses said battle as a lesson.
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* HiddenDepths: Being an EternalHero who is highly familiar with conflict, Jack is also knowledgeable of the scars it leaves behind, both physical and mental. As such, when Taylor discovers school is her TraumaButton, he is the one who advises her on how to deal with it.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Weaver delivers a scathing one to the Black Rose Witch and the other Arcadians by pointing how they keep misusing their powers and blame society for shunning them when it is ''their'' actions that drive people in pushing them away. If they were more creative and used their Monsters, Spells and Traps to help people and assist them, society would be much more welcoming.
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* TraumaButton: School turns to be this. When Taylor tries to go to Neo Domino Duel Academy, she is overwhelmed by memories of Winslow and swiftly turns tail, then rages that she has no problem staring down Earthbound Immortals but going to school gives her a panic attack.
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* BigLittleSister: Despite being two years younger than Yusei, Taylor is several inches taller than her adoptive brother following her growth spurt.
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* AdoptiveNameChange: {{Downplayed}}. Dragon's file on Taylor refers to her as Hebert-Fudo, adding her adoptive family's last name to her own rather than replacing it.
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* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: Downplayed, but Jack admits that he's always been... uncomfortable with sexuality, in part because he knows that he's never quite had the level of trust needed to be truly intimate with someone. This is part of why he was uncomfortable with Yusei and Kalin's relationship; he was worried (correctly, as it turned out), it would turn out badly. In fact, part of the reason he's so eager to help rescue Akiza is because Sayer's action's remind him of Kalin's during his mad romance with Yusei during his descent. It is {{Averted}} with his spouse Himawari who, as his SoulMate, is the only one he trusts enough to go this far. Naturally, her current incarnation is [[IntrepidReporter Carly]].
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* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: Downplayed, but Jack admits that he's always been... uncomfortable with sexuality, in part because he knows that he's never quite had the level of trust needed to be truly intimate with someone. This is part of why he was uncomfortable with Yusei and Kalin's relationship; he was worried (correctly, as it turned out), it would turn out badly. In fact, part of the reason he's so eager to help rescue Akiza is because Sayer's action's remind him of Kalin's during his mad romance with Yusei during his descent. It is {{Averted}} with his spouse Himawari who, as his SoulMate, OneTrueLove, is the only one he trusts enough to go this far. Naturally, her current incarnation is [[IntrepidReporter Carly]].
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* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: Downplayed, but Jack admits that he's always been... uncomfortable with sexuality, in part because he knows that he's never quite had the level of trust needed to be truly intimate with someone. This is part of why he was uncomfortable with Yusei and Kalin's relationship; he was worried (correctly, as it turned out), it would turn out badly. In fact, part of the reason he's so eager to help rescue Akiza is because Sayer's action's remind him of Kalin's during his mad romance with Yusei during his descent. It is {{Averted}} with his spouse Himawari who, as his SoulMate, is the only one he trusts enough to go this far. Naturally, her current incarnation is [[IntrepidReporter Carly]].
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* AmazonianBeauty: {{Averted}} following her growth spurt. Though she gained in height, Taylor remains on the slender side and retains her lack of curves.
* StatuesqueStunner: Following a two months growth spurt that kept her in her bed, Taylor now stands at 6'1, so one inch shorter than ''Jack''. Misty encourages her to eat properly and exercise to she gains a suitable physique.
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* CripplingOverspecialization: From one life to the next, fighting and parenting are the only two skillsets Jack retains. Anything else, he has to re-learn from scratch. As such, besides fighting, raising children and teaching how to do either, there aren't many things he can do.
