Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Deleted line(s) 24 (click to see context) :
* TheHero: Gine is an Saiyan woman destined to be the most powerful Saiyan warrior as she defends her son, loved ones and continues on her journey to protect her new home.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
General clarification on work content
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine begins the main series as a civilian kitchen worker on Planet Vegeta -- and even during her younger days as a prospective warrior, she was a FragileSpeedster who never rose above the lower ranks before getting herself the boot. Once she reaches Earth, however, she finds herself the WorldsStrongestWoman, and her {{Flight}} ability (considered normal on her homeworld, but almost unheard of on Earth) makes her an overpowered FlyingBrick compared to every other Earthling.
to:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine begins the main series as a civilian kitchen worker on Planet Vegeta -- and even during her younger days as a prospective warrior, she was a FragileSpeedster who never rose above the lower ranks before getting herself kicked out of the boot.army. Once she reaches Earth, however, she finds herself the WorldsStrongestWoman, and her {{Flight}} ability (considered normal on her homeworld, but almost unheard of on Earth) makes her an overpowered FlyingBrick compared to every other Earthling.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: Canon Bulma during the original ''Dragon Ball'' series was not above using her sex appeal for personal gain with ShowSomeLeg being her go-to bartering tactic. Here, she is ''much'' more of a ReluctantFanserviceGirl. For comparison, canon Bulma happily flashed Roshi in exchange for his Three-Star Dragon Ball. This Bulma was visibly very uncomfortable when Roshi asked to see her panties in exchange for giving her his Dragon Ball, and instead her panties get accidentally exposed by Goku when he flies by on his Nimbus Cloud and the resulting wind blows her skirt upwards.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
* AdaptationalIntelligence: He's not as naive or clueless about the outside world as his canon counterpart was at the start of ''Dragon Ball'' since this version had both Grandpa Gohan and his mother Gine to raise him together.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added image
Added DiffLines:
[[quoteright:561:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/img_0822.jpeg]]
%%[[caption-width-right:561:some caption text]]
%%[[caption-width-right:561:some caption text]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 107 (click to see context) from:
The ruler of the Saiyan race.
to:
The ruler Grand Ruler of the Saiyan race.race and the father of Prince Vegeta the Fourth. He was also a "hero" to the Saiyans after he led his people to victory in the Saiyan-Tuffle war, in which the planet was renamed in his honor.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
* NobleDemon: He's an unapologetic mass murderer who has no problem serving a genocidal tyrant or leading an extermination mission against a planet full of defenseless civilians. He also privately admits to Gine that he [[EvilCannotComprehendGood personally doesn't really understand]] her ChronicHeroSyndrome nor her [[ThouShallNotKill refusal to take a life]]. However, he still chooses to stand by Gine's side because he respects how she's willing to stay true to her personal beliefs and do what she thinks is right no matter what.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
* ParentalSubstitute: To Gine, having taken her in and raised her as his protégé after she lost both of her biological parents at a very young age.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added image captions for Gine.
Changed line(s) 8,9 (click to see context) from:
%%[[caption-width-right:402:some caption text]]
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Image quality upgrade
Changed line(s) 32,33 (click to see context) from:
[[quoteright:672:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/img_0818_4.jpeg]]
%%[[caption-width-right:672:some caption text]]
%%[[caption-width-right:672:some caption text]]
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added image
Added DiffLines:
[[quoteright:672:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/img_0818_4.jpeg]]
%%[[caption-width-right:672:some caption text]]
%%[[caption-width-right:672:some caption text]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added character description for Roshi.
Changed line(s) 61,62 (click to see context) from:
[[folder:Master Roshi]]
!!Master Roshi
!!Master Roshi
to:
!!Master Roshi
!!Roshi
An old man who Gine, Goku, and Bulma encounter early in their quest to find the Dragon Balls. He refers to himself as the Turtle Hermit and gifts Goku his Flying Nimbus cloud as a reward for helping his lost turtle find his way to the sea.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
General clarification on work content
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Compared to her canon counterpart at the start of the original ''Dragon Ball'' series, this Bulma is less of a vain, manipulative SpoiledBrat, and a lot of her BrattyTeenageDaughter traits are noticeably toned down, partially a result of the webcomic's AdaptationDistillation.
to:
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Compared to her canon counterpart at the start of the original ''Dragon Ball'' series, this Bulma is less of a vain, manipulative SpoiledBrat, and SpoiledBrat. The webcomic also noticeably tones down a lot of her Bulma's personality traits as a BrattyTeenageDaughter traits are noticeably toned down, partially a result of the webcomic's through its AdaptationDistillation.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Spelling/grammar fix(es)
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Compared to her canon counterpart at the start of the original ''Dragon Ball'' series, this Bulma is less of a vain, manipulative SpoiledBrat and a lot of her BrattyTeenageDaughter traits are noticeably toned down, partially a result of the webcomic's AdaptationDistillation.
to:
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Compared to her canon counterpart at the start of the original ''Dragon Ball'' series, this Bulma is less of a vain, manipulative SpoiledBrat SpoiledBrat, and a lot of her BrattyTeenageDaughter traits are noticeably toned down, partially a result of the webcomic's AdaptationDistillation.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Compared to her canon counterpart at the start of the original ''Dragon Ball'' series, this Bulma is less of a vain, manipulative SpoiledBrat and a lot of her BrattyTeenageDaughter traits are noticeably toned down, partially a result of the webcomic's AdaptationDistillation.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added image
Added DiffLines:
[[quoteright:351:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/img_0816.jpeg]]
%%[[caption-width-right:351:some caption text]]
The ruler of the Saiyan race.
----
%%[[caption-width-right:351:some caption text]]
The ruler of the Saiyan race.
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added image
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
to:
[[quoteright:261:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/img_0815.jpeg]]
%%[[caption-width-right:261:some caption text]]
%%[[caption-width-right:261:some caption text]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 67 (click to see context) from:
The deuteragonist of the prequel season and Gine's late husband. He tried to stop the destruction of his home planet but ended up perishing alongside the planet. Bardock was the one who sent Gine and Goku to Earth under the nose of Frieza.
to:
The deuteragonist of the prequel season spin-off and Gine's late husband. He tried to stop the destruction of his their home planet but ended up perishing alongside the planet. Bardock was the one who sent Gine and Goku to Earth under the nose of Frieza.
Changed line(s) 75 (click to see context) from:
A female Saiyan warrior who served as part of Bardock's team. She was also close childhood friends with Gine, though they drifted apart as adults.
to:
A female Saiyan warrior who served as part of Bardock's team. She was also once close childhood friends with Gine, though they drifted apart as adults.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
* WeakButSkilled: Compared to Gine or even an eleven-year-old Goku, Grandpa Gohan is physically weaker and lacks the raw power that the mother and son possess. However, he has far better fine control over his power and is much more efficient with how he spends his Ki in his attacks.
to:
* WeakButSkilled: Compared to Gine or even an eleven-year-old Goku, Grandpa Gohan is physically weaker and lacks the raw power that the mother and son mother-son duo possess. However, he has far better fine control over his power and is much more efficient with how he spends his Ki in his attacks.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
* TelescopingStaff: He is introduced wielding the iconic Power Pole as his weapon of choice before eventually passing it onto Goku.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added image
Added DiffLines:
[[quoteright:432:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/img_0809.jpeg]]
%%[[caption-width-right:432:some caption text]]
%%[[caption-width-right:432:some caption text]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
!!Protagonists
Changed line(s) 35 (click to see context) from:
!Friends and Allies
to:
Added DiffLines:
An elderly human martial arts master who adopts an infant Kakarot as his son shortly after the latter crash-landed on Earth. Upon reuniting Goku with his mother Gine, Gohan invites them both to live with him in his home, eventually forming a family with them.
----
* TokenHuman: In Season 2, he is the only one out of the three main characters to be a human, while Gine and Goku are both Saiyans.
* WeakButSkilled: Compared to Gine or even an eleven-year-old Goku, Grandpa Gohan is physically weaker and lacks the raw power that the mother and son possess. However, he has far better fine control over his power and is much more efficient with how he spends his Ki in his attacks.
----
* TokenHuman: In Season 2, he is the only one out of the three main characters to be a human, while Gine and Goku are both Saiyans.
* WeakButSkilled: Compared to Gine or even an eleven-year-old Goku, Grandpa Gohan is physically weaker and lacks the raw power that the mother and son possess. However, he has far better fine control over his power and is much more efficient with how he spends his Ki in his attacks.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Added example(s)
Added DiffLines:
* TokenGoodTeammate: Of Team Bardock during her brief time as a member in the spin-off. Gine was the only Saiyan warrior on Bardock's squad who doesn't have innocent blood on her hands. [[spoiler:During her first mission with the team, they were sent to an alien world to depopulate it so Frieza could mine its resources; Gine was the only member who decided not to kill the world's natives and instead secretly help them escape, while her comrades had no problem slaughtering innocent aliens left and right.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
General clarification on work content
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine begins the main series as a civilian kitchen worker on Planet Vegeta -- and even during her younger days as a prospective warrior, she was a FragileSpeedster who never rose above low class. Once she reaches Earth, however, she finds herself the WorldsStrongestWoman, and her {{Flight}} ability (considered normal on her homeworld, but almost unheard of on Earth) makes her an overpowered FlyingBrick compared to every other Earthling.
to:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine begins the main series as a civilian kitchen worker on Planet Vegeta -- and even during her younger days as a prospective warrior, she was a FragileSpeedster who never rose above low class.the lower ranks before getting herself the boot. Once she reaches Earth, however, she finds herself the WorldsStrongestWoman, and her {{Flight}} ability (considered normal on her homeworld, but almost unheard of on Earth) makes her an overpowered FlyingBrick compared to every other Earthling.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
General clarification on work content
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine is considered to be a low-class Saiyan back on Planet Vegeta, but she's easily the strongest woman on Earth. Her {{Flight}} ability, which pretty much everyone on her homeworld knows how to do, is considered incredible on Earth where only a rare few have mastered it.
to:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine is considered to be begins the main series as a low-class Saiyan back civilian kitchen worker on Planet Vegeta, but she's easily Vegeta -- and even during her younger days as a prospective warrior, she was a FragileSpeedster who never rose above low class. Once she reaches Earth, however, she finds herself the strongest woman on Earth. Her WorldsStrongestWoman, and her {{Flight}} ability, which pretty much everyone ability (considered normal on her homeworld knows how homeworld, but almost unheard of on Earth) makes her an overpowered FlyingBrick compared to do, is considered incredible on Earth where only a rare few have mastered it.every other Earthling.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
General clarification on work content
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine is considered to be a low class Saiyan back on Planet Vegeta, but she's easily the strongest woman on Earth.
to:
* NormalFishInATinyPond: Gine is considered to be a low class low-class Saiyan back on Planet Vegeta, but she's easily the strongest woman on Earth.Earth. Her {{Flight}} ability, which pretty much everyone on her homeworld knows how to do, is considered incredible on Earth where only a rare few have mastered it.
