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* PosthumousVillainVictory: [[spoiler: Despite being dead before the end of the first episode Imelda eventually manages to steal the birthday cake he wanted.]]
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* PosthumousVillainVictory: [[spoiler: Despite being dead before the end of the first episode Imelda eventually manages pushes the Big Guy to steal the birthday cake like he wanted.]]wanted. And the whole thing to boot!]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: He arrives at the final battle just in time to help save Dans life.]]
* {{Catchphrase}}: Ends every encounter with "You’ll never see me again." even when he's talking to Dan whose club he's been a regular at for years.
* {{Catchphrase}}: Ends every encounter with "You’ll never see me again." even when he's talking to Dan whose club he's been a regular at for years.
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: He arrives at the final battle just in time to help save Dans Dan’s life.]]
* {{Catchphrase}}: Ends every encounter with"You’ll [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere"You’ll never see me again." even again!"]] Even when he's talking to Dan Dan, whose club he's been a regular at for years.
* {{Catchphrase}}: Ends every encounter with
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* ThePeepingTom: He is fond of listening at the bathroom of Shugah’s.
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* ThePeepingTom: He is fond of listening at the door of the ladies’ bathroom of Shugah’s.in many establishments, including Sugah’s and Nostalgia’s Diner. Hunch is very displeased to be grouped together with him.
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A woman infiltrating Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.
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A woman ”waiter” infiltrating Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.her own reasons.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Was one of Elias’ four survival instincts, meant to help higher functions govern Cortex City alongside her siblings. Now, none of her siblings have heard from her in years, and she’s reduced.
* JanitorImpersonationInfiltration: Has infiltrated Châteaux Appetit disguised as a waiter, and manages to palm Anastasia’s key from her.
* JanitorImpersonationInfiltration: Has infiltrated Châteaux Appetit disguised as a waiter, and manages to palm Anastasia’s key from her.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Is meant to be one of Elias’ key survival instincts, working alongside her siblings and the higher cerebral functions up in Cortex City. Instead, she’s stuck training up other concepts for an illegal boxing ring after being ignominiously fired for her role [[NoodleIncident the Ice Skates Incident]], with no idea where any of her siblings are.
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** [[spoiler:Announcing to a group of Shock Troops that the Big Guy is about to get some just gets him subjected to a police beatdown.]]
** [[spoiler:Following Imelda's lead of SexyCoatFlashing, he whips out his member in front of a bunch of gangsters - prompting everyone to shoot at him in horror.]]
* EveryoneHasStandards: He's quite salacious and is implied to be very into kinks, but he is a little put off by the joy Hans takes in his role.
* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Manages to win big gambling on prizefights while investigating with PI’s which is mechanically representent by him gaining the ability to pay a massive bribe to someone once before losing all the money he gained. [[spoiler: Since he never ends up spending it over the course of the investigation,[[SubvertedTrope he ends up using the money to revamp his club and buy other businesses in the area actually investing it successfully.]]]]
** [[spoiler:Following Imelda's lead of SexyCoatFlashing, he whips out his member in front of a bunch of gangsters - prompting everyone to shoot at him in horror.]]
* EveryoneHasStandards: He's quite salacious and is implied to be very into kinks, but he is a little put off by the joy Hans takes in his role.
* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Manages to win big gambling on prizefights while investigating with PI’s which is mechanically representent by him gaining the ability to pay a massive bribe to someone once before losing all the money he gained. [[spoiler: Since he never ends up spending it over the course of the investigation,[[SubvertedTrope he ends up using the money to revamp his club and buy other businesses in the area actually investing it successfully.]]]]
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** [[spoiler:Announcing [[spoiler: Announcing to a group of Shock Troops that the Big Guy is about to get some just gets him subjected to a police beatdown.]]
**[[spoiler:Following [[spoiler: Following Imelda's lead of SexyCoatFlashing, he whips out his member in front of a bunch of gangsters - prompting everyone to shoot at him in horror.]]
* EveryoneHasStandards: He's quite salacious and is implied to be very into a variety of kinks, but even he is a little put off by the joy Hans takes in his role.
* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Manages to win big gambling on prizefights while investigating withPI’s PI’s, which is mechanically representent represented by him gaining the ability to pay a massive bribe to someone once before losing all the money he gained. [[spoiler: Since he never ends up spending it over the course of the investigation,[[SubvertedTrope he ends up using the money to revamp his club and buy other businesses in the area area, actually investing it successfully.]]]]
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* EveryoneHasStandards: He's quite salacious and is implied to be very into a variety of kinks, but even he is a little put off by the joy Hans takes in his role.
* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Manages to win big gambling on prizefights while investigating with
* LaResistance: Revealed to be one of the founding members of a nascent “pleasure revolution” alongside [[DirtyOldMan Wilton]].
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Dan is deeply self interested and hedonistic only interested in ensuring that Elias has more fun, which can make him overly hostile to anyone who he sees as opposed to him and easily tempted by villains who promise that their plans will make Elias happy.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Dan is deeply self interested and hedonistic hedonistic, only interested in ensuring that Elias has more fun, which fun. This can make him overly hostile to anyone who he sees as opposed to him his goals, and easily tempted by villains who promise that their plans will make Elias happy.
** In the finale, [[spoiler: Conrad grows an inch or two as he takes direct action, and in the epilogue is implied to be [[KidHeroAllGrownUp finally going through puberty.]]]]
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* BringMyBrownPants: He manages to scare at least one mental process into shiting itself [[AccidentalNightmareFuel without actually meaning to be threatening in this case.]] [[spoiler: Its the Vagus Nerve and his attempt to get them to calm down not only manages to make the entirety of the Las Vagus casino shit itself in fear but [[GoneHorriblyRight makes the Big Guy shit himself too reducing the pressure as he does so.]]]]
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* BringMyBrownPants: He manages to scare at least one mental process into shiting itself [[AccidentalNightmareFuel without actually meaning to be threatening in this case.]] [[spoiler: Its His attempt to get the Vagus Nerve and his attempt to get them to calm down not only manages to make the entirety of the Las Vagus casino shit itself in fear fear, but [[GoneHorriblyRight makes the Big Guy shit himself too too, reducing the pressure as he does so.]]]]
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* EatingSolvesEverything: He's mentioned to eat a lot of weird things. [[spoiler:When he gets the White Key in his hands, after a moment of fighting off its influence, he swallows it.]]
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* EatingSolvesEverything: He's mentioned to eat have eaten a lot of weird things.things. He even uses eating as a WeirdEuphemism for his job. [[spoiler:When he gets the White Key in his hands, after a moment of fighting off its influence, he swallows it.]]
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* TokenEvilTeammate: The Fix is a contract killer who has worked for a bevy of city figures, with him mentioning [[AmbitionIsEvil Mark Bition]], [[TheDon Don Avaricci]], and [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney the Pulse family]] as prior clients. He starts the series hunting Conrad to murder him on Bitions orders and even after joining the rest of the group [[ReformedButNotTamed he still does not really regret many of the kills he did over the years.]]
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* TokenEvilTeammate: The Fix is a contract killer who has worked for a bevy of city figures, with him mentioning [[AmbitionIsEvil Mark Bition]], [[TheDon Don Avaricci]], and [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney the Pulse family]] as prior clients. He starts the series hunting Conrad to murder him on Bitions Bition’s orders and even after joining the rest of the group [[ReformedButNotTamed he still does not really regret many of the kills he did carried out over the years.]]
* PreciousPhoto: Has an old one on her desk of herself and her late younger brother [[spoiler: Ichabod Ice Skates. Later subverted when Elias asks the coffee girl on an ice skating date in the finale, Ichabod is revealed to be AliveAllAlong, and has a TearfulReunion with his sister.]]
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Mixed with OppositesAttract. [[spoiler: He and Imelda are both too quick to jump to action when confronted with a problem, but where she’s an IdleRich BlitheSpirit, he’s a SeriousBusiness TheParanoiac. Somehow this works for them.]]
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Mixed with OppositesAttract. [[spoiler: He and Imelda are both too quick to jump to action when confronted with a problem, but where she’s an IdleRich BlitheSpirit, he’s a SeriousBusiness ComicallyOverreacting TheParanoiac. Somehow this works for them.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler: When confronting Mr. Henry, decided to bring a ''grappling hook'' with him to the meeting just in case. Also had been taking copper supplements to try to negate the effects of the Psychometer in case it was used against him.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler: When confronting Mr. Henry, decided to bring a ''grappling hook'' with him to the meeting just in case. Also had been taking copper supplements to try to negate the effects of the Psychometer in case it was used against him.]]
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*LaResistance: Is a member of Dan Fuck’s underground pleasure revolution, devoted to bringing the attention of the bigwigs in Mentopolis to all the ''physical'' issues Elias has been ignoring.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Mixed with OppositesAttract. [[spoiler: He and Imelda are both quick to jump to action when confronted with a problem, but where she’s an IdleRich FreeSpirit, he’s TheParanoiac. Somehow this works for them.]]
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Mixed with OppositesAttract. [[spoiler: He and Imelda are both too quick to jump to action when confronted with a problem, but where she’s an IdleRich FreeSpirit, BlitheSpirit, he’s a SeriousBusiness TheParanoiac. Somehow this works for them.]]
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-->'''Concept:''' Loathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing, later Guilt]]
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-->'''Concept:''' Loathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing, later Guilt]]
Guilt and Shame]]
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: She becomes this in the final episode, giving up her orphanage to Pasha and The Fix who are better equipped to run it while she goes to reexamine her life. Since she is Elias’s guilt and shame this is also what she is meant to induce in him.]]
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* HatesEveryoneEqually: Openly admits to this.
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* HatesEveryoneEqually: Openly She openly admits to this.that she hates everyone in Mentopolis and herself. [[spoiler: Since everyone in Mentopolis is aspects of Elias’s brain this is pretty significant {{Foreshadowing}} that she is not externalized hatred but Elias’s own self hatred.]]
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* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: [[spoiler: Conrad realizes in the final episode that she is not just Self Loathing an inherently harmful concept, but also Elias’s sense of guilt and shame two important motivators that can do a lot of good if focused the right way.]]
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* CoDragons: He is one half of [[spoiler: the Key /Madam Loathing’s]] main forces in the city with the other being Mark Bition.
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: Makes these to people in positions of power to ensure he gets his way, such as DA Mark Bition and [[spoiler: emergency mayor Dan Fucks]].
* CoDragons: He is one half of [[spoiler: theKey /Madam Key/Madam Loathing’s]] main forces in the city with the other being Mark Bition.
* CoDragons: He is one half of [[spoiler: the
* FragileSpeedster: Is extremely good at running and dodging, as you’d expect from Flight. Not the best if she ends up in a more physical confrontation, however.
* LaResistance: [[spoiler: Revealed to be a member of Dan Fucks and Wilton’s pleasure revolution, working from the inside.]]
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* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
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* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained and breathy while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Mixed with OppositesAttract. [[spoiler: He and Imelda are both quick to jump to action when confronted with a problem, but where she’s an IdleRich FreeSpirit, he’s TheParanoiac. Somehow this works for them.]]
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A pervert and regular at Shugah’s who represents a very specific thing the Big Guy find enjoyable.
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A pervert and regular at Shugah’s who represents a very specific thing the Big Guy find finds enjoyable.
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* BigDamnHeros: [[spoiler: He arrives at the final battle just in time to help save Dans life.]]
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* BigDamnHeros: BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: He arrives at the final battle just in time to help save Dans life.]]
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* CheckovsGunman: She appears for one scene midway though the first episode before not appearing again until the penultimate episode where it's revealed [[spoiler: she is the main agent that the key is using to destroy Elias and she's the one who killed Norrell.]]
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* CheckovsGunman: ChekhovsGunman: She appears for one scene midway though the first episode before not appearing again until the penultimate episode where it's revealed [[spoiler: she is the main agent that the key is using to destroy Elias and she's the one who killed Norrell.]]
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* FanDiservice: Flirts with anyone she meets but it is clear that every time she's flirting is motivated by an all encompassing fear rather than any real attraction.
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* FanDiservice: FanDisservice: Flirts with anyone she meets but it is clear that every time she's flirting is motivated by an all encompassing fear rather than any real attraction.
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* TalkToTheFist: [[spoiler: He gets Decked by Elias in the middle of gloating to him.]]
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* TalkToTheFist: [[spoiler: He gets Decked decked by Elias in the middle of gloating to him.]]
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* PragmaticVillian: It mostly targets the impulses and drives in Mentopolis that are most likely to be receptive to its goals. Not because it wouldn't completely take over everything if possible but because it is programmed to spend less energy that way.
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* PragmaticVillian: PragmaticVillainy: It mostly targets the impulses and drives in Mentopolis that are most likely to be receptive to its goals. Not because it wouldn't completely take over everything if possible but because it is programmed to spend less energy that way.
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* WildCard: They all represent different mental processes and will often feel compelled to act against their best interests if it conflicts with who they are. Imelda and Dan are the biggest offenders but every character has at least a few cases where they struggle to keep themselves from getting distracted from the case by whatever they are experiencing. This ties into the central theme of the season that there is time and a place for every one of them but they cannot act alone.
* CatchphraseInsult: He constantly refers to [[SitcomArchNemesis Conrad]] as “Conrad, you little shit” to the point that the genuine hatred in his voice when he says it manages to convince a mook he genuinely wants Conrad dead. [[spoiler: After Conrad becomes a teenager and they go into business together he changes it to the more polite but still insulting “Conrad, you medium sized rapscallion.”]]
* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Manages to win big gambling on prizefights while investigating with PI’s which is mechanically representent by him gaining the ability to pay a massive bribe to someone once before losing all the money he gained. [[spoiler: Since he never ends up spending it over the course of the investigation,[[SubvertedTrope he ends up using the money to revamp his club and buy other businesses in the area actually investing it successfully.]]]]
--> "Just one time, yep that's the difference between OldMoney and [[NouveauRiche New Money]]."
--> "Just one time, yep that's the difference between OldMoney and [[NouveauRiche New Money]]."
* GoodFeelsGood: Realizing he can make the Big Guy happy by doing good things makes him ultimately decide to mellow out on Conrad.
* JerkassToOne: Dan is a self interested but mostly polite and charming businessman who serves a wide variety of clientele politely and treats his staff well. This all falls away when he's dealing with [[CatchphraseInsult Conrad the little shit]].
* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Dan is less interested in getting Elias to do the right thing and more interested in getting him to loosen up and enjoy himself more, which means he is easily tempted by other avenues to get pleasure. Ironically for the trope name he is actually a leader of a nascent revolutionary group trying to make Elias more hedonistic, meaning that is more like the other PI’s [[RussianReversal are not in it for his revolution.]]
* PervertAlliance: He leads a small group of revolutionaries dedicated to making the Big Guy more interested in enjoying himself. What makes it this trope rather than any other tropes tied to revolution, is how much he and Wilton are concerned about sexual pleasure compared to other types of pleasure.
* NotInThisForYourRevolution: Dan is less interested in getting Elias to do the right thing and more interested in getting him to loosen up and enjoy himself more, which means he is easily tempted by other avenues to get pleasure. Ironically for the trope name he is actually a leader of a nascent revolutionary group trying to make Elias more hedonistic, meaning that is more like the other PI’s [[RussianReversal are not in it for his revolution.]]
* PervertAlliance: He leads a small group of revolutionaries dedicated to making the Big Guy more interested in enjoying himself. What makes it this trope rather than any other tropes tied to revolution, is how much he and Wilton are concerned about sexual pleasure compared to other types of pleasure.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Dan is deeply self interested and hedonistic only interested in ensuring that Elias has more fun, which can make him overly hostile to anyone who he sees as opposed to him and easily tempted by villains who promise that their plans will make Elias happy.
* BringMyBrownPants: He manages to scare at least one mental process into shiting itself [[AccidentalNightmareFuel without actually meaning to be threatening in this case.]] [[spoiler: Its the Vagus Nerve and his attempt to get them to calm down not only manages to make the entirety of the Las Vagus casino shit itself in fear but [[GoneHorriblyRight makes the Big Guy shit himself too reducing the pressure as he does so.]]]]
* ReformedButNotTamed: He stops being a terrifying killer working for the villains running the city but remains a terrifying hitman capable and willing to kill anyone he views as a distraction.
* TokenEvilTeammate: The Fix is a contract killer who has worked for a bevy of city figures, with him mentioning [[AmbitionIsEvil Mark Bition]], [[TheDon Don Avaricci]], and [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney the Pulse family]] as prior clients. He starts the series hunting Conrad to murder him on Bitions orders and even after joining the rest of the group [[ReformedButNotTamed he still does not really regret many of the kills he did over the years.]]
* CanineCompanion: He constantly follows Conrad around and serves as his best friend and closest confidant. This trope is probably why he is a dog rather than a person like every other mental construct, he serves as sidekick to anyone he's with backing up and [[MeaningfulName Justifying]] there actions rather than directing the Big Guy to do anything on his own.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: He spends most of his time as a big friendly dog hanging out with Conrad, but its shown when [[spoiler: Madam Loathing brainwashes him]] that he can be easily turned into a truly terrifying monstrous RightHandAttackDog for anyone who gets him on their side.
--> "I'm lucky I ended up with Conscience because justification paired with anything else can get really bad."
--> "I'm lucky I ended up with Conscience because justification paired with anything else can get really bad."
*BadassBystander: He was just a regular employee of Cerebell Pacific [[spoiler: who took it upon himself to destroy his workstation and get himself killed to stop the Psychometer from taking control of the city.]]
* WalkingSpoiler: He's the murder victim in this murder mystery and any discussion of who he was, beyond an employee of Cerebell Pacific, or why he died will involve major spoilers.
* WorkingClassHero: He was a worker at Cerebell Pacific and had enough money troubles that he was a regular at a pawnshop and even became personal friends with the owner. [[spoiler: He was also one of the only ones to realize the threat of the Psychometer and manages to stop it long enough to save the city at the cost of his own life.]]
* WorkingClassHero: He was a worker at Cerebell Pacific and had enough money troubles that he was a regular at a pawnshop and even became personal friends with the owner. [[spoiler: He was also one of the only ones to realize the threat of the Psychometer and manages to stop it long enough to save the city at the cost of his own life.]]
* {{Bouncer}}: He works as the bouncer and security guard at Dan's club and takes great joy in hurting unruly customers.
* EatTheRich: He admits that he would absolutely love to see the rich leaders of the city brought down a peg.
* EatTheRich: He admits that he would absolutely love to see the rich leaders of the city brought down a peg.
* PosthumousVillainVictory: [[spoiler: Despite being dead before the end of the first episode Imelda eventually manages to steal the birthday cake he wanted.]]
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!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing, [[spoiler:Guilta]]The Pervert]]
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Owner and proprietor of Madame Loathing’s Home for Wayward Interests. Unsure if she loves or hates her job.
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* BigDamnHeros: [[spoiler: He arrives at the final battle just in time to help save Dans life.]]
* {{Catchphrase}}: Ends every encounter with "You’ll never see me again." even when he's talking to Dan whose club he's been a regular at for years.
* ConnectedAllAlong: [[spoiler: He claims to be Dan’s Father as hes rescuing him in the final episode.]]
* OddJobGods: Most other characters represent a broad or important element of cognition or a physical piece of anatomy, he represents a very specific source of pleasure, wanting to spit into his own hand.
* ThePeepingTom: He is fond of listening at the bathroom of Shugah’s.
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!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing, [[spoiler:Guilta]]
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-->'''Concept:''' Loathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing, later Guilt]]
Owner and proprietor of Madame Loathing’s Home for Wayward Interests. Unsure if she loves or hates her job.
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* {{Catchphrase}}: Ends every encounter with "You’ll never see me again." even when he's talking to Dan whose club he's been a regular at for years.
* ConnectedAllAlong: [[spoiler: He claims to be Dan’s Father as hes rescuing him in the final episode.]]
* OddJobGods: Most other characters represent a broad or important element of cognition or a physical piece of anatomy, he represents a very specific source of pleasure, wanting to spit into his own hand.
* ThePeepingTom: He is fond of listening at the bathroom of Shugah’s.
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!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing, [[spoiler:Guilta]]
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Loathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing, later Guilt]]
Owner and proprietor of Madame Loathing’s Home for Wayward Interests. Unsure if she loves or hates her job.
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* CheckovsGunman: She appears for one scene midway though the first episode before not appearing again until the penultimate episode where it's revealed [[spoiler: she is the main agent that the key is using to destroy Elias and she's the one who killed Norrell.]]
* BetterThanSex: Says that the rush of endorphins and dopamine released when [[spoiler: Elias escapes with the Psychometer documents]] is better than nutting.
* PervertAlliance: He’s a loyalist of Dan’s revolution and is dedicated to making Elias give up everything else in his life to focus on sex.
* WorldsBestWarrior: She’s the embodiment of Elias’s fighting skills and reflexes and has the highest sharp skill, the skill covering fighting, possible for an NPC. During the finale she even manages to roll a 59 on an attack due to [[CriticalHit multiple critical rolls]] in a game system where getting anything above a twenty is extremely difficult.
* CoDragons: He is one half of [[spoiler: the Key /Madam Loathing’s]] main forces in the city with the other being Mark Bition.
* NotBrainwashed: He remains fighting against the PI’s even after [[spoiler: Madam Loathing]] surrenders meaning that he was either never actually brainwashed to begin with or that after being freed he still wanted to oppose them.
* BirdsOfAFeather: She ends up with Anastasia in the finale because they both enjoy paying attention to each other.
* ExtremeDoormat: She will literally do anything anyone asks of her because she is convinced that is the only way she can keep herself safe.
* FanDiservice: Flirts with anyone she meets but it is clear that every time she's flirting is motivated by an all encompassing fear rather than any real attraction.
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: This applies to all the F’s except [[spoiler: Freeze]] to an extent, but she’s suffered more than most. She was at one point a major drive capable of overriding the decisions of the city hall if she needed to but she's been reduced to being eye candy for a crime boss in constant terror for her life.
* ExtremeDoormat: She will literally do anything anyone asks of her because she is convinced that is the only way she can keep herself safe.
* FanDiservice: Flirts with anyone she meets but it is clear that every time she's flirting is motivated by an all encompassing fear rather than any real attraction.
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: This applies to all the F’s except [[spoiler: Freeze]] to an extent, but she’s suffered more than most. She was at one point a major drive capable of overriding the decisions of the city hall if she needed to but she's been reduced to being eye candy for a crime boss in constant terror for her life.
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* BlitheSpirit: Extremely laidback, and willingly gives Anastasia all of his keys and his wallet to boot when she asks with no questions.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: The figures in power in Mentopolis, Ambition and Greed effectively running things while Conscience is forced far out of public focus, paint him as a man who is probably unpleasant to be around. But because the series mostly takes place in his psyche the audience gets to understand just how sad, scared, and broken down he is on the inside.
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* TalkToTheFist: [[spoiler: He gets Decked by Elias in the middle of gloating to him.]]
* UncertainDoom: [[spoiler: Elias is unsure if his punch killed Mr. Henry or just knocked him out and does not bother to check.]]
* UncertainDoom: [[spoiler: Elias is unsure if his punch killed Mr. Henry or just knocked him out and does not bother to check.]]
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* TheHeavy: [[spoiler: While it is ultimately a tool of Gobbstopper and Mr. Henry its the primary force working against Elias and the protagonists over the course of the show.]]
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* MoreThanMindControl: It works by targeting and corrupting the emotions and parts of the brain most likely to be receptive to its goals and getting them to want to work with it.
* NonMaliciousMonster: Its ultimately a non sapient piece of technology that is just doing what it was programmed to do. While it does express some hatred of Elias at points [[spoiler: that is eventually revealed to be because it has taken over his Self Loathing as its primary operative in the brain.]]
* PragmaticVillian: It mostly targets the impulses and drives in Mentopolis that are most likely to be receptive to its goals. Not because it wouldn't completely take over everything if possible but because it is programmed to spend less energy that way.
* NonMaliciousMonster: Its ultimately a non sapient piece of technology that is just doing what it was programmed to do. While it does express some hatred of Elias at points [[spoiler: that is eventually revealed to be because it has taken over his Self Loathing as its primary operative in the brain.]]
* PragmaticVillian: It mostly targets the impulses and drives in Mentopolis that are most likely to be receptive to its goals. Not because it wouldn't completely take over everything if possible but because it is programmed to spend less energy that way.
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* TheDon: "Don" by nickname, mafia don by profession.
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* TheDon: "Don" Don by nickname, name, mafia don by profession.
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* GagNose: As befitting his curious personality, his character portrait shows him with a huge schnoz.
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* MadeOfIron: The man's survived a ''lot.'' At one point, he gets punched so hard that [[ExorcistHead his head spins 360 degrees]], and it is explicitly stated that this should have killed him.
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* MadeOfIron: The man's survived a ''lot.'' At one point, he gets punched so hard that [[ExorcistHead his head spins 360 degrees]], and it is explicitly stated that this should have killed him. Even [[spoiler:a brainwashed Ivana Popov]] [[PunchedAcrossTheRoom punching him clear out of the train station]] (she rolled an exploded 59 and he rolled a nat 1) only puts him down for a few moments, and a filched shot of adrenaline later, he's back up and kicking.
* EveryManHasHisPrice: She frequently gets out of sticky situations with the city's lowlife by slipping them a few bucks. [[GameplayAndStoryIntegration It's practically a character feature with her.]]
* TheKidWithTheRemoteControl: As a member of the Pulse family, she is in possession of a key that, when inserted into one of the control switchboards around Mentopolis, allows her to command the Big Guy directly.
* BrassBalls: And they can even deflect bullets! [[spoiler:For a while, at least.]]
* DrawAggro: Does this on two occasions by walking out into danger and making a scene. It doesn't work out well for him on either occasion.
** [[spoiler:Announcing to a group of Shock Troops that the Big Guy is about to get some just gets him subjected to a police beatdown.]]
** [[spoiler:Following Imelda's lead of SexyCoatFlashing, he whips out his member in front of a bunch of gangsters - prompting everyone to shoot at him in horror.]]
* DrawAggro: Does this on two occasions by walking out into danger and making a scene. It doesn't work out well for him on either occasion.
** [[spoiler:Announcing to a group of Shock Troops that the Big Guy is about to get some just gets him subjected to a police beatdown.]]
** [[spoiler:Following Imelda's lead of SexyCoatFlashing, he whips out his member in front of a bunch of gangsters - prompting everyone to shoot at him in horror.]]
* TheKidWithTheRemoteControl: Becomes this when [[spoiler:he finds his own switchboard key]].
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* PhraseCatcher: Conrad’s insistence on being as inoffensive as possible, combined with a disregard for his own wellbeing in the face of pleasing others, often means he’ll say or do something which causes someone nearby to let out a [[DefusingTheTykeBomb horrified “Jesus Christ”.]]
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* PhraseCatcher: Conrad’s insistence on being as inoffensive as possible, combined with a disregard for his own wellbeing in the face of pleasing others, often means [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior he’ll say or do something something]] which causes someone nearby to let out a [[DefusingTheTykeBomb horrified “Jesus Christ”.]]
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: how he[[spoiler: saves justin from the influence of the White Key]]
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: how How he[[spoiler: saves justin Justin from the influence of the White Key]]Key]].
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* EatingSolvesEverything: He's mentioned to eat a lot of weird things. [[spoiler:When he gets the White Key in his hands, after a moment of fighting off its influence, he swallows it.]]
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--->'''The Fix:''' ''[holding a thug in his hands]'' Did you know that more than half the bones in your body are in your hands and feet?
* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler:Bought a copper gun with metal-piercing rounds from Thalamus & Sons before his shift at Cerebell Pacific. Not just to defend himself from an attacker, but in the worst-case scenario, [[WeWinBecauseYouDidnt to destroy the switchboard to prevent the White Key from mind-controlling the Big Guy]].]]
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* NiceGuy: His sister and the owner of Thalamus&Sons have nothing but kind words for him, and for the latter, even before he knew of his death. [[spoiler:He also saved everyone in Metropolis by stopping the Psychometer from taking effect.]]
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* NiceGuy: His sister and the owner of Thalamus&Sons Thalamus & Sons have nothing but kind words for him, and for the latter, even before he knew of his death. [[spoiler:He also saved everyone in Metropolis by stopping the Psychometer from taking effect.]]
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!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] LoathingLoathing, [[spoiler:Guilta]]
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-->'''Concept:''' Loathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing]]
''Self''-Loathing, later Guilt]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: In the final episode, Conrad is able to convince her to accept ''all'' of the disparate parts of Elias' mind rather than just drowning in self-hatred, and she is able to break free from the Psychometer's influence and help the heroes to get Elias out of Gobstopper Industries. She later turns over her orphanage to The Fix and Pasha to run in the epilogue.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: In the final episode, Conrad is able to convince her to accept ''all'' of the disparate parts of Elias' mind rather than just drowning in self-hatred, and she is able to break free from the Psychometer's influence and help the heroes to get Elias out of Gobstopper Industries. She later changes her name to Guilta, turns over her orphanage to The Fix and Pasha to run in the epilogue.epilogue, and decides to go traveling.]]
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Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
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Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s."F"s, and is now currently a boxing coach.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one (the die is rolled again and the new roll added to an accumulating total) managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
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* PostFinalBoss: [[spoiler: After the FinalBattle at Oblongata Station reaches its conclusion and Madame Loathing surrenders, he's the final antagonist left standing, still determined to force Elias to pursue his greed and ambition over everything else. By this point, most of his backup has turned or taken out, and it doesn't take much for Hunch and the Fix to finish him off.]]
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* PostFinalBoss: [[spoiler: After the FinalBattle at Oblongata Station reaches its conclusion and Madame Loathing surrenders, he's the final antagonist left standing, still determined to force Elias to pursue his greed and ambition over everything else. By this point, most of his backup has been turned or taken out, and it doesn't take much for Hunch and the Fix to finish him off.]]
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* SlapSlapKiss: [[spoiler:Goes from pulling a gun on Imelda to making out with her.]]
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* SlapSlapKiss: [[spoiler:Goes from pulling a gun on Imelda to making out with and proposing to her.]]
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadassCrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: By the finale, his accomplishments include [[spoiler:jumping out a window, grapple-hooking himself to safety, crapping himself in mid-air, punching out his boss, blowing the whistle on his company making a mind-control ray, and stealing a birthday cake]].
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: He once stood up to bullies that were hurting his twin sister, and not only got slashed with ice skates for it, but [[UnwantedAssistance his sister yelled at him because she liked the guy]]. It is heavily implied that the sheer trauma from the incident caused him to suppress his conscience.
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.]]
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.]]
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: He once stood up to bullies that were hurting his twin sister, and not only got slashed with ice skates for it, but [[UnwantedAssistance his sister yelled at him because she liked the guy]]. It is heavily implied that the sheer trauma from the incident caused him to suppress his conscience. [[spoiler:However, when Hunch finds the book containing the real memory (which has been dog-eared and distorted over time), he sees that his sister was actually standing up for him, yelling at everyone else to not laugh at him.]]
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: Downplayed, he's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents, though we do know his full name.
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent represents his trauma and emotional repression.]]
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: Downplayed, he's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents, though we do know his full name.
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* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for.
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* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for. [[spoiler:The finale has him taking his research and the Psychometer blueprints straight to the newspaper, and the resulting scandal lands Gobstopper Industries in a lot of hot water.]]
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* BadassBookworm: She's a brainy reporter that doesn't seem too tough, but [[spoiler:during the ambush in De'lux, she's one of only two people to be able to react before the then-hidden enemies can act]].
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* BadassBookworm: BadassBookworm:
** She's a brainy reporter that doesn't seem too tough, but[[spoiler:during during the ambush in De'lux, she's one of only two people to be able to react before the then-hidden enemies can act]]. act.
** Reinforced in episode 5, where [[spoiler: she manages to escape from Don Avaricci's men by holding them at gunpoint, then singlehandedly takes down the ''real'' Stacey Fakename with nothing more than [[SherlockScan her investigative reporter skills]] and [[ShoeSlap a thrown high heel]].]]
** She's a brainy reporter that doesn't seem too tough, but
** Reinforced in episode 5, where [[spoiler: she manages to escape from Don Avaricci's men by holding them at gunpoint, then singlehandedly takes down the ''real'' Stacey Fakename with nothing more than [[SherlockScan her investigative reporter skills]] and [[ShoeSlap a thrown high heel]].]]
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* NervesOfSteel: She can act as levelheaded in high-stakes situations than in normal everyday life.
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* NervesOfSteel: She can act as levelheaded in high-stakes situations than as in normal everyday life.life. This trope is also [[GameplayAndStoryIntegration the name of one of her special traits]], enabling her to spend Moxie tokens to make a planned action and average her die roll when she otherwise wouldn't be able to.
* WeaponizedHeadgear: Uses her trilby to trip up a would-be ambusher during the ambush at De'Lux.
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* ChildHater: Hates her young charges, along with everyone else.
* EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope.
* EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope.
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* BigBad: [[spoiler: As the true identity of the White Key and the killer of Norrell Ojiccle, she's the primary antagonist of the season and the FinalBoss standing between the heroes and saving Elias Hodge.]]
** BigBadEnsemble: [[spoiler: Is this with Mr. Henry. While the latter is [[GreaterScopeVillain the true cause of all of Elias' suffering]], Madame Loathing is his agent within Mentopolis empowered by the Psychometer/White Key, and thus the main direct antagonist for the heroes as well as the [[TheHeavy the one doing all the work]]. She's also this with Don Avaricci, who has similar goals but is not controlled by the Key like her and M. Bition.]]
* ChildHater: Hates her young charges, along with everyoneelse.
else. [[spoiler: She seems to be turning this around when the Fix visits the orphanage again later, even taking the kids on field trips... but all of that was just a cover for her actions as the Psychometer Key.]]
* EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope. She's a domineering and nasty orphange-runner who has zero kindness of patience to spare for the kids under her watch.
** BigBadEnsemble: [[spoiler: Is this with Mr. Henry. While the latter is [[GreaterScopeVillain the true cause of all of Elias' suffering]], Madame Loathing is his agent within Mentopolis empowered by the Psychometer/White Key, and thus the main direct antagonist for the heroes as well as the [[TheHeavy the one doing all the work]]. She's also this with Don Avaricci, who has similar goals but is not controlled by the Key like her and M. Bition.]]
* ChildHater: Hates her young charges, along with everyone
* EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope. She's a domineering and nasty orphange-runner who has zero kindness of patience to spare for the kids under her watch.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: In the final episode, Conrad is able to convince her to accept ''all'' of the disparate parts of Elias' mind rather than just drowning in self-hatred, and she is able to break free from the Psychometer's influence and help the heroes to get Elias out of Gobstopper Industries. She later turns over her orphanage to The Fix and Pasha to run in the epilogue.]]
* LightIsNotGood: [[spoiler: Glows with the unearthly white light of the Psychometer Key when she reveals her true nature, and is the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the season.]]
* NeverMessWithGranny: She appears as an elderly woman, and is one of the only people in Mentopolis who is completely unintimidated by the Fix. [[spoiler: And then comes TheReveal of her true identity and that she was the one who killed Norrell Ojiccle. During the FinalBattle, she ably holds her own against most of the Prefrontal P.I.s all by herself.]]
* LightIsNotGood: [[spoiler: Glows with the unearthly white light of the Psychometer Key when she reveals her true nature, and is the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the season.]]
* NeverMessWithGranny: She appears as an elderly woman, and is one of the only people in Mentopolis who is completely unintimidated by the Fix. [[spoiler: And then comes TheReveal of her true identity and that she was the one who killed Norrell Ojiccle. During the FinalBattle, she ably holds her own against most of the Prefrontal P.I.s all by herself.]]
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* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly grows stronger when The Fix focuses on her.
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* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly Fittingly for the mental embodiment of hatred, she seems to run on this trope -- the Fix losing his temper with her only makes her more powerful and intimidating. [[spoiler: During the FinalBattle, she grows stronger when The Fix focuses and stronger as the fight wages on and she takes more injuries. Conrad has to try [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath a different tactic]] to finally defeat her.]]
* WalkingSpoiler: As you can probably tell from the amount of white on her tropes page, [[spoiler: it's really hard to discuss Madame Loathing without revealing that she's actually the killer and BigBad of the season]].
* WalkingSpoiler: As you can probably tell from the amount of white on her tropes page, [[spoiler: it's really hard to discuss Madame Loathing without revealing that she's actually the killer and BigBad of the season]].
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* BigSisterInstinct: She's the eldest of the Four F's, and still looks out for the others fondly despite their messy history and years of estrangement.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: During the FinalBattle, she's stabbed by the Psychometer Key and brainwashed into fighting the heroes.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: During the FinalBattle, she's stabbed by the Psychometer Key and brainwashed into fighting the heroes.]]
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* OneManArmy: Fittingly so for the Fight Response, she's probably the most dangerous woman in Mentopolis in a straight fight. [[spoiler: She takes out all the guards singlehanded when storming Cerebell Pacific with Imelda, and later on, Madame Loathing brainwashing her with the Psychometer Key is nearly enough to turn the FinalBattle all by itself.]]
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* PostFinalBoss: [[spoiler: After the FinalBattle at Oblongata Station reaches its conclusion and Madame Loathing surrenders, he's the final antagonist left standing, still determined to force Elias to pursue his greed and ambition over everything else. By this point, most of his backup has turned or taken out, and it doesn't take much for Hunch and the Fix to finish him off.]]
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He fails a lot of what he attempts to do in this season, but when it comes to action, he's not to be messed with.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He fails a lot of what he attempts to do in this season, but when it comes to action, he's not to be messed with. Enforced by his character build: while all characters benefit from the Moxie system (granting points after failures that can be spent to boost future rolls), Hunch has a special trait that gives him twice as much Moxie as anyone else.
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* CloudCuckooLandersMinder: Ends up acting as this when Hunch Curio is too enthralled by the pawn shop wares.
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* CloudCuckooLandersMinder: CloudcuckoolandersMinder: Ends up acting as this when Hunch Curio is too enthralled by the pawn shop wares.
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* WeTakeEverything: His pawnshop holds odds and ends that even he’s not entirely sure of the provenance of. [[Spoiler: Including the copper bullets to the gun that Norrell Ojiccle tried to use to take down The Key.]]
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* WeTakeEverything: WeSellEverything: His pawnshop holds odds and ends that even he’s not entirely sure of the provenance of. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Including the copper bullets to the gun that Norrell Ojiccle tried to use to take down The Key.]]]] Just don’t complain about his unicorn fur coats…
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* BenevolentBoss: He treats his workers well, listens to what they have to say, and is pretty tolerant of their eccentricities.
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* BenevolentBoss: He He’s a hardworking businessman who treats his workers well, listens to what they have to say, and is pretty tolerant of their eccentricities.eccentricities. He’s also discerning and compassionate to his clientele, refusing to give [[TheBully Donny Urges]] a free drink before turning around and giving the poor memory Donny knocked flat a taste of a new pleasure on the house.
* CloudCuckooLandersMinder: Ends up acting as this when Hunch Curio is too enthralled by the pawn shop wares.
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The owner of Thalamus & Sons pawn shop. A huge fan of Imelda Pulse.
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* PajamaCladHero: Since our Prefrontal PI’s have roused him from bed, he opens his shop for them like this.
* WeTakeEverything: His pawnshop holds odds and ends that even he’s not entirely sure of the provenance of. [[Spoiler: Including the copper bullets to the gun that Norrell Ojiccle tried to use to take down The Key.]]
* WeTakeEverything: His pawnshop holds odds and ends that even he’s not entirely sure of the provenance of. [[Spoiler: Including the copper bullets to the gun that Norrell Ojiccle tried to use to take down The Key.]]
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Sperm Production
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!!Ivana PopovMr. Thalamus]]
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-->'''Concept:''' The Fight Response
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
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-->'''Concept:''' Hypothalamus
TheFight Response
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.owner of Thalamus & Sons pawn shop.
The
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
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* HuskyRusskie: She’s an experienced fighter with a [[UnexplainedAccent Russian accent]] in a city of mental constructs with American accents.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
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!!Dominick NuntzIvana Popov]]
!!Ivana Popov
!!Dominick Nuntz
!!Ivana Popov
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A wannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.
A wannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.
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-->'''Concept:''' Dominance
A wannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.The Fight Response
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
A wannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
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* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees Dominance is a prize fighter he thinks he is looking for the hulking brute of the pair who is actually SD. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. That's actually their trainer.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The little guy to SD’s big guy.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The little guy to SD’s big guy.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
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* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees Dominance is a prize HuskyRusskie: She’s an experienced fighter he thinks he is looking for the hulking brute with a [[UnexplainedAccent Russian accent]] in a city of mental constructs with American accents.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of thepair who is actually SD. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. That's actually their trainer.
cities problems.
*BigGuyLittleGuy: The little guy to SD’s big guy.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak andRetiredBadass: She clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, knows the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight. boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the
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!!SDDominick Nuntz]]
!!Dominick Nuntz
!!SD
!!Dominick Nuntz
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A terrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.
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Dominance
Aterrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.wannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.
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* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees SD, he believes the hulking brute is the one he signed up to fight, until SD calls the reedy Dom Nuntz over. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. [[spoiler:That's actually their trainer.]]
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Is the brother of [[spoiler:Madame Self-Loathing. Their family name "Self-" comes first]].
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Is the brother of [[spoiler:Madame Self-Loathing. Their family name "Self-" comes first]].
to:
* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees SD, Dominance is a prize fighter he believes thinks he is looking for the hulking brute is of the one he signed up to fight, until SD calls the reedy Dom Nuntz over.pair who is actually SD. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. [[spoiler:That's That's actually their trainer.]]
trainer.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: Thebig little guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
SD’s big guy.
*OneDegreeOfSeparation: Is CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the brother of [[spoiler:Madame Self-Loathing. Their family name "Self-" comes first]].lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The
*
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[[folder: Don Avaricci]]
!!Donald "Don" Avaricci
!!Donald "Don" Avaricci
to:
[[folder: Don Avaricci]]
!!Donald "Don" AvaricciSD]]
!!SD
!!Donald "Don" Avaricci
!!SD
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-->'''Concept:''' Avarice
A mob boss for Mentopolis's criminal underworld.
A mob boss for Mentopolis's criminal underworld.
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-->'''Concept:''' Avarice
[[spoiler:Self Doubt]]
Amob boss for Mentopolis's criminal underworld.terrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.
A
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* TheDon: "Don" by nickname, mafia don by profession.
* {{Greed}}: What he embodies in the Big Guy's mind. He will assist anyone who he thinks will elevate the Big Guy above everyone else, from [[spoiler:Mark Bition to Danny Fucks]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Has it out for Conrad Schintz, and is perfectly willing to have the kid whacked.
* {{Greed}}: What he embodies in the Big Guy's mind. He will assist anyone who he thinks will elevate the Big Guy above everyone else, from [[spoiler:Mark Bition to Danny Fucks]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Has it out for Conrad Schintz, and is perfectly willing to have the kid whacked.
to:
* TheDon: "Don" by nickname, mafia don by profession.
* {{Greed}}: WhatBaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees SD, he embodies in believes the Big Guy's mind. hulking brute is the one he signed up to fight, until SD calls the reedy Dom Nuntz over. He will assist anyone who he also thinks will elevate that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. [[spoiler:That's actually their trainer.]]
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Is theBig Guy above everyone else, from [[spoiler:Mark Bition to Danny Fucks]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Has it out for Conrad Schintz, and is perfectly willing to have the kid whacked.brother of [[spoiler:Madame Self-Loathing. Their family name "Self-" comes first]].
* {{Greed}}: What
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Is the
* WouldHurtAChild: Has it out for Conrad Schintz, and is perfectly willing to have the kid whacked.
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[[folder: Fanny Fawnsworth]]
!!Fanny Fawnsworth
!!Fanny Fawnsworth
to:
[[folder: Fanny Fawnsworth]]
!!Fanny FawnsworthDon Avaricci]]
!!Donald "Don" Avaricci
!!Fanny Fawnsworth
!!Donald "Don" Avaricci
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-->'''Concept:''' The Fawn Response
An arm-girl and assistant for Don Avaricci.
An arm-girl and assistant for Don Avaricci.
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-->'''Concept:''' The Fawn Response
An arm-girl and assistantGreed
A mob boss forDon Avaricci.Mentopolis's criminal underworld.
An arm-girl and assistant
A mob boss for
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* PleaseIWillDoAnything: Her standard response to any form of threat, which, given what she represents in the brain, isn't surprising.
* PragmaticPansexuality: Will flirt with and fawn over anyone, from Don Avaricci to Anastasia, if it means that she'll be safe.
* PragmaticPansexuality: Will flirt with and fawn over anyone, from Don Avaricci to Anastasia, if it means that she'll be safe.
to:
* PleaseIWillDoAnything: Her standard response to any form of threat, which, given what she represents TheDon: "Don" by nickname, mafia don by profession.
* {{Greed}}: What he embodies in thebrain, isn't surprising.
* PragmaticPansexuality: Will flirt with and fawn over anyone,Big Guy's mind. He will assist anyone who he thinks will elevate the Big Guy above everyone else, from Don Avaricci [[spoiler:Mark Bition to Anastasia, if Danny Fucks]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Has itmeans that she'll be safe.out for Conrad Schintz, and is perfectly willing to have the kid whacked.
* {{Greed}}: What he embodies in the
* PragmaticPansexuality: Will flirt with and fawn over anyone,
* WouldHurtAChild: Has it
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[[folder: Stacy Fakename]]
!!Stacy Fakename
!!Stacy Fakename
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[[folder: Stacy Fakename]]
!!Stacy FakenameFanny Fawnsworth]]
!!Fanny Fawnsworth
!!Stacy Fakename
!!Fanny Fawnsworth
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-->'''Concept:''' The Flight Response
A woman infiltrating Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.
A woman infiltrating Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.
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-->'''Concept:''' The Flight Fawn Response
A woman infiltrating An arm-girl and assistant for Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.Avaricci.
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* RealAfterAll: From a LazyAlias by Imelda to an actual, influential person in her own right.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Her response to everything.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Her response to everything.
to:
* RealAfterAll: From a LazyAlias by Imelda to an actual, influential person in her own right.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere:PleaseIWillDoAnything: Her standard response to everything.any form of threat, which, given what she represents in the brain, isn't surprising.
* PragmaticPansexuality: Will flirt with and fawn over anyone, from Don Avaricci to Anastasia, if it means that she'll be safe.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere:
* PragmaticPansexuality: Will flirt with and fawn over anyone, from Don Avaricci to Anastasia, if it means that she'll be safe.
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!Mentopolis Government and Law Enforcement
[[folder: Officer Connell]]
!!Officer Connell
[[folder: Officer Connell]]
!!Officer Connell
to:
!!Officer Connell
!!Stacy Fakename
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-->'''Concept:''' Unknown
A beat cop at the scene of Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.
A beat cop at the scene of Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.
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-->'''Concept:''' Unknown
The Flight Response
Abeat cop at the scene of Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.woman infiltrating Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.
A
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* MeddlesomePatrolman: Keeps Anastasia from accessing the crime scene and carts away evidence.
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* MeddlesomePatrolman: Keeps Anastasia from accessing the crime scene and carts away evidence.RealAfterAll: From a LazyAlias by Imelda to an actual, influential person in her own right.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Her response to everything.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Her response to everything.
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[[folder: Officer Joie de Vivre]]
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
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!Mentopolis Government and Law Enforcement
[[folder: OfficerJoie de Vivre]]
Connell]]
!!OfficerJoie de VivreConnell
[[folder: Officer
!!Officer
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-->'''Concept:''' Enjoyment of life
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Enjoyment Unknown
A beat cop at the scene oflife
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.
A beat cop at the scene of
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
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* BlitheSpirit: Extremely laidback, and willingly gives Anastasia all of his keys and his wallet to boot when she asks with no questions.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.
to:
* BlitheSpirit: Extremely laidback, and willingly gives MeddlesomePatrolman: Keeps Anastasia all of his keys from accessing the crime scene and his wallet to boot when she asks with no questions.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.carts away evidence.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.
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[[folder: Pasha N.]]
!!Pasha N.
!!Pasha N.
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[[folder: Pasha N.]]
!!Pasha N.Officer Joie de Vivre]]
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
!!Pasha N.
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
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-->'''Concept:''' Passion
A forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli in the evidence room.
A forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli in the evidence room.
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-->'''Concept:''' Passion
Enjoyment of life
Aforensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli shock officer in the evidence room.Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
A
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Underneath her polite exterior, Pasha has a deep love for little known facts and enjoys sharing them with people and learning new ones. The Fix, when he discovers this, is ''enamored''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
to:
* BirdsOfAFeather: Underneath her polite exterior, Pasha has a deep love for little known facts BlitheSpirit: Extremely laidback, and enjoys sharing them willingly gives Anastasia all of his keys and his wallet to boot when she asks with people and learning new ones. The Fix, when no questions.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means hediscovers this, is ''enamored''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading factsalso takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.no ill will whatsoever.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts
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[[folder: Chief Tightass]]
!!Chief Tightass
!!Chief Tightass
to:
[[folder: Chief Tightass]]
!!Chief TightassPasha N.]]
!!Pasha N.
!!Chief Tightass
!!Pasha N.
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-->'''Concept:''' Tightassery
Chief of police in Mentopolis. Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.
Chief of police in Mentopolis. Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Tightassery
Chief ofPassion
A forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli inMentopolis. Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.the evidence room.
Chief of
A forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli in
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* AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Manages to get hit in the head by Dan Fucks breaking out of his handcuffs with too much force. This kills him stone dead.]]
* DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his backhanders to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed to have one that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Police]]”.
* DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his backhanders to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed to have one that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Police]]”.
to:
* AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Manages to get hit in the head by Dan Fucks breaking out of his handcuffs BirdsOfAFeather: Underneath her polite exterior, Pasha has a deep love for little known facts and enjoys sharing them with too much force. This kills him stone dead.]]
people and learning new ones. The Fix, when he discovers this, is ''enamored''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
*DaChief: Head FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of Mentopolis’ police department.
legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
*DirtyCop: HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Evenwithout when the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his backhanders Fix gets her to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealedopen up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to have one that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Police]]”.talking so much.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
*
*
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even
* MyCard: Revealed
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[[folder: Mark Bition]]
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
to:
[[folder: Mark Bition]]
!!DA Mark “M” BitionChief Tightass]]
!!Chief Tightass
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
!!Chief Tightass
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-->'''Concept:''' Ambition
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Ambition
The District AttorneyTightassery
Chief of police in Mentopolis.Provides targets for The Fix.Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.
The District Attorney
Chief of police in Mentopolis.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: He's the literal personification of Elias' ambition and is portrayed in an amoral light.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be in cahoots with Don Avaricci, who gave him a campaign contribution check.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be in cahoots with Don Avaricci, who gave him a campaign contribution check.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].
to:
* AmbitionIsEvil: He's the literal personification of Elias' ambition and is portrayed in an amoral light.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy:AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Revealed Manages to have been taken over by get hit in the Psychometer Key, which is using head by Dan Fucks breaking out of his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.handcuffs with too much force. This kills him stone dead.]]
*BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without thepleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because dubious actions of his dogged commitment to force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters backhanders to convince him of things Danny Fucks show that he wants qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed tobe true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tiehave one that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealedgives to be in cahoots with Don Avaricci, who gave him a campaign contribution check.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Police]]”.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy:
*
* DirtyCop: Even without the
* MyCard: Revealed to
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealed
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].
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[[folder: Mayor Logic]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
to:
[[folder: Mayor Logic]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]Mark Bition]]
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
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-->'''Concept:''' Logic [[spoiler: actually The Freeze Response]]
Mayor of Mentopolis, currently running for re-election.
Mayor of Mentopolis, currently running for re-election.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Logic [[spoiler: actually Ambition
TheFreeze Response]]
MayorDistrict Attorney of Mentopolis, currently running Mentopolis. Provides targets for re-election.The Fix.
The
Mayor
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* AmbitionIsEvil: He's the literal personification of Elias' ambition and is portrayed in an amoral light.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be in cahoots with Don Avaricci, who gave him a campaign contribution check.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Mayor Logic]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Logic [[spoiler: actually The Freeze Response]]
Mayor of Mentopolis, currently running for re-election.
----
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be in cahoots with Don Avaricci, who gave him a campaign contribution check.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].
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[[folder: Mayor Logic]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Logic [[spoiler: actually The Freeze Response]]
Mayor of Mentopolis, currently running for re-election.
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: Consistently referred to as "The Fix", or even "''Mr.'' The Fix".
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* SpellMyNameWithAThe: Consistently referred to as "The Fix", or even "''Mr.'' The Fix". When asked, he actually prefers to be addressed this way [[spoiler: which makes Mark Bition’s InsistentTerminology of just “Fix” come across as that much more demeaning.]]
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: He outright admits that his attention span is garbage.
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* GrewASpine: As the series goes on, learns to stand up for himself more and speak his mind about what’s going on in the city. He even manages to call Dan Fucks by his name!
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: As great as he is at it, he drives like someone with a death wish, to the detriment of his co-passengers.
* GrewASpine: As the series goes on, Conrad learns to stand up for himself more and speak his mind about what’s going on in the city. He even manages to call Dan Fucks by his name!
* GrewASpine: As the series goes on, Conrad learns to stand up for himself more and speak his mind about what’s going on in the city. He even manages to call Dan Fucks by his name!
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* MoralityChain: Starts to serve as one to The Fix.
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* MoralityChain: Starts to serve as one to MoralityPet: The Fix.sorry state of his life and his innocence are what brings out The Fix's [[HitmanWithAHeart selfless and sentimental]] side.
* BirdsOfAFeather: With Pasha N. They hit it off so much by telling each other fun facts that the DC for the Snoop check to figure out if he was smitten with her was an impossible to fail 1.
* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: One of her main functions is making sure Hunch's boundless curiosity and lack of attention span don't prevent him from getting paid.
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* InnocentBystander: A Cerebell Pacific employee who was in the wrong place at the wrong time.
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* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: [[spoiler:He stopped Elias' mind from becoming overrun by the Psychometer by destroying the Cerebell Pacific Switchboard shortly before his death.]]
* FunctionalAddict: He was a hard drinker, but he seems to have maintained healthy relationships with his loved ones and was a fine employee of Cerebell Pacific.
* InnocentBystander: A Cerebell Pacific employee who was in the wrong place at the wrong time. [[spoiler:Or so it seems.]]
* FunctionalAddict: He was a hard drinker, but he seems to have maintained healthy relationships with his loved ones and was a fine employee of Cerebell Pacific.
* InnocentBystander: A Cerebell Pacific employee who was in the wrong place at the wrong time. [[spoiler:Or so it seems.]]
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* NiceGuy: His sister and the owner of Thalamus&Sons have nothing but kind words for him, and for the latter, even before he knew of his death. [[spoiler:He also saved everyone in Metropolis by stopping the Psychometer from taking effect.]]
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* TheReveal: In two layers; first when they reveal their existence to The Fix in the DAs office, and secondly when it's revealed that the shadowy figure is actually [[spoiler: Madame Loathing.]]
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* TheReveal: In two layers; first when they reveal their existence to The Fix in the DAs D.A.s office, and secondly when it's revealed that the shadowy figure is actually [[spoiler: Madame Loathing.]]
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* TheReveal: In two layers; first when they reveal their existence to The Fix in the DAs office, and secondly when it's revealed that the shadowy figure is actually [[spoiler: Madame Loathing.]]
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* RealAfterAll: From a LazyAlias by Imelda to an actual, influential person in her own right.
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* BeefBandage: Exaggerated; he has a whole locker of frozen meat in his office that he uses to patch himself up after his frequent beatdowns. They even manage to patch up The Fix's broken leg.
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* RichKidTurnedSocialActivist: In a way. She refuses to abuse the generational wealth and power that her family has out of principle, and wants to focus on stories that matter more in the long run, rather than temporary roadblocks in the big guy's life and career.
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* RichKidTurnedSocialActivist: In a way. She refuses to abuse the generational wealth and power that her family has out of principle, and wants to focus on stories that matter more in the long run, rather than temporary roadblocks in the big guy's life and career. She lives in an out-of-the-way apartment and [[spoiler:keeps her switchboard key in her freezer]].
* TopHeavyGuy: His arms are described as being longer and thicker than his legs.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler:Is struck by the White Key and turned into a feral dog growling insults at everyone, until Hunch, The Fix and Conrad calm him down.]]
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[[folder: Officer Connell]]
!!Officer Connell
!!Officer Connell
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[[folder: Officer Connell]]
!!Officer ConnellFreddy Focus]]
!!Freddy Focus
!!Officer Connell
!!Freddy Focus
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-->'''Concept:''' Unknown
A beat cop at the scene of Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.
A beat cop at the scene of Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.
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-->'''Concept:''' Unknown
A beat cop atFocus
Head editor of thescene of Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.Daily Observer, Mentopolis’ city paper.
A beat cop at
Head editor of the
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* MeddlesomePatrolman: Keeps Anastasia from accessing the crime scene and carts away evidence.
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* MeddlesomePatrolman: Keeps DaEditor: Head honcho of the paper, who threatens Anastasia from accessing the crime scene and carts away evidence.with [[TurnInYourBadge a long ''talk'']] should her insistence on investigating Norrell’s case fail to turn a good story.
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[[folder: Officer Joie de Vivre]]
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
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[[folder: Officer Joie de Vivre]]
!!Officer Joie de VivreJoey Sneezes]]
!!Joey Sneezes
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
!!Joey Sneezes
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-->'''Concept:''' Enjoyment of life
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
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-->'''Concept:''' Enjoyment of life
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.Sneeze Relief
The congested bartender at Sugah’s.
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
The congested bartender at Sugah’s.
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* BlitheSpirit: Extremely laidback, and willingly gives Anastasia all of his keys and his wallet to boot when she asks with no questions.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.
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* BlitheSpirit: Extremely laidback, and willingly gives Anastasia all of TheBartender: He works as the main bartender at Sugah's, though he doesn't offer the sage advice most bartenders would have.
* IronicAllergy: Reveals he’s allergic to Sugah’s building, explaining hiskeys and his wallet constant sneezing while on the job. Dan still expects him to boot when she asks with no questions.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.work.
* IronicAllergy: Reveals he’s allergic to Sugah’s building, explaining his
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with no ill will whatsoever.
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[[folder: Pasha N.]]
!!Pasha N.
!!Pasha N.
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!!Pasha N.Libby Longshower]]
!!Libby Longshower
!!Pasha N.
!!Libby Longshower
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-->'''Concept:''' Passion
A forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli in the evidence room.
A forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli in the evidence room.
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A forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli in the evidence room.
The steamy waitress at Sugah’s.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Underneath her polite exterior, Pasha has a deep love for little known facts and enjoys sharing them with people and learning new ones. The Fix, when he discovers this, is ''enamored''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Underneath her polite exterior, Pasha has a deep love for little known facts BubblyWaitress: She's quite charming and enjoys sharing them with people and learning new ones. The Fix, when he discovers this, is ''enamored''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d likeaffable to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonnabe a snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.around.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
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!!Chief Tightass
!!Chief Tightass
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[[folder: Chief Tightass]]
!!Chief TightassHans Schadenfreude]]
!!Hans Schadenfreude
!!Chief Tightass
!!Hans Schadenfreude
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-->'''Concept:''' Tightassery
Chief of police in Mentopolis. Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.
Chief of police in Mentopolis. Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.
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Chief
The bouncer at Sugah’s who gets a little too much enjoyment out of
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* AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Manages to get hit in the head by Dan Fucks breaking out of his handcuffs with too much force. This kills him stone dead.]]
* DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his backhanders to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed to have one that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Police]]”.
* DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his backhanders to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed to have one that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Police]]”.
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* AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Manages MeaningfulName: ''Schadenfreude''[[note]]roughly meaning "harm-joy"[[/note]] is a German term referring to get hit in the head by Dan Fucks breaking out of pleasure gained from viewing someone else's misfortune.
* SoftSpokenSadist: It's even in hishandcuffs with too much force. This kills him stone dead.]]
* DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality onname! While Hans appears to be a whole train of fairly nice person, he ''loves'' seeing people's pain couriers from and discomfort, especially if he's the scalp]]), his backhanders to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed to haveone that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Police]]”.doing the job.
* SoftSpokenSadist: It's even in his
* DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on
* MyCard: Revealed to have
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!!DA Mark “M” Bition
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
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[[folder: Mark Bition]]
!!DA Mark “M” BitionDonny Urges]]
!!Donald “Donny” Urges
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
!!Donald “Donny” Urges
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-->'''Concept:''' Ambition
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.
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-->'''Concept:''' Ambition
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.Intrusive Thought
A rough and rowdy thought plotting a birthday cake heist.
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.
A rough and rowdy thought plotting a birthday cake heist.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: He's the literal personification of Elias' ambition and is portrayed in an amoral light.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: He's the literal personification of Elias' ambition and is portrayed in BankRobbery: Albeit an amoral light.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his powerunusual one. He’s planning to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting inpush the Big Guys way Guy to steal a bit of a birthday cake intended for someone in another department.
* BitPartBadGuy: Really just here to show us the rougher side of the subconscious andstopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hiresgive the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz.a target.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in
* BitPartBadGuy: Really just here to show us the rougher side of the subconscious and
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires
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[[folder: Mayor Logic]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
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[[folder: Mayor Logic]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]Madame Loathing]]
!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing
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-->'''Concept:''' Logic [[spoiler: actually The Freeze Response]]
Mayor of Mentopolis, currently running for re-election.
Mayor of Mentopolis, currently running for re-election.
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-->'''Concept:''' Logic [[spoiler: actually The Freeze Response]]
MayorLoathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing]]
Owner and proprietor ofMentopolis, currently running Madame Loathing’s Home for re-election.Wayward Interests. Unsure if she loves or hates her job.
Mayor
Owner and proprietor of
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* AnIcePerson: [[spoiler: Prone to freezing up when shocked, which given that he’s The Freeze Response…PlayedForLaughs when Anastasia revealing he took a much bigger risk than previously stated has him turn into a block of ice.]]
* INeverSaidItWasPoison: [[spoiler: Accidentally reveals himself when he starts yelling that Conrad doing the right thing has gotten them in trouble “like with the ice skates again”. As that memory was never processed, Leon Logic should have no knowledge of it. Freeze, however…]]
* MayorPain: Of the incompetent variety, given his covering up of the Mentopolis’ sundry infrastructure failures as “planned maintenance”. Our heroes visiting his office to ask for his help results in him listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than contributing anything constructive. [[spoiler: Reveals that he knows this incompetency is likely why he was elected, so that other powerful players in Mentopolis can use him as a figurehead.]]
* ParalysisByAnalysis: Prone to overthinking a situation and listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than coming up with a constructive conclusion. [[spoiler:Justified, as he’s actually Elias’ Freeze response.]]
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[[folder: Deputy Lance]]
!!Deputy Chief of Staff H. V. Lance
* INeverSaidItWasPoison: [[spoiler: Accidentally reveals himself when he starts yelling that Conrad doing the right thing has gotten them in trouble “like with the ice skates again”. As that memory was never processed, Leon Logic should have no knowledge of it. Freeze, however…]]
* MayorPain: Of the incompetent variety, given his covering up of the Mentopolis’ sundry infrastructure failures as “planned maintenance”. Our heroes visiting his office to ask for his help results in him listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than contributing anything constructive. [[spoiler: Reveals that he knows this incompetency is likely why he was elected, so that other powerful players in Mentopolis can use him as a figurehead.]]
* ParalysisByAnalysis: Prone to overthinking a situation and listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than coming up with a constructive conclusion. [[spoiler:Justified, as he’s actually Elias’ Freeze response.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Deputy Lance]]
!!Deputy Chief of Staff H. V. Lance
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* AnIcePerson: [[spoiler: Prone to freezing up when shocked, which given that he’s The Freeze Response…PlayedForLaughs when Anastasia revealing he took a much bigger risk than previously stated has him turn into a block of ice.]]
* INeverSaidItWasPoison: [[spoiler: Accidentally reveals himself when he starts yelling that Conrad doing the right thing has gotten them in trouble “likeChildHater: Hates her young charges, along with the ice skates again”. As that memory was never processed, Leon Logic should have no knowledge of it. Freeze, however…]]
everyone else.
*MayorPain: Of the incompetent variety, given his covering up of the Mentopolis’ sundry infrastructure failures as “planned maintenance”. Our heroes visiting his office EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope.
* HatesEveryoneEqually: Openly admits toask this.
* OrphanageOfFear: Runs one forhis help results in him listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than contributing anything constructive. [[spoiler: Reveals non-work interests that he knows this incompetency is likely why he was elected, so that other powerful players in Mentopolis can use him as a figurehead.]]
* ParalysisByAnalysis: Prone to overthinking a situationthe Big Guy holds, and listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than coming up with a constructive conclusion. [[spoiler:Justified, as he’s actually Elias’ Freeze response.]]
[[/folder]]
appears to despise her charges.
* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly grows stronger when The Fix focuses on her.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Deputy Lance]]
!!Deputy Chief of Staff H. V. LanceRonnie Reptile]]
!!Ronnie Reptile
* INeverSaidItWasPoison: [[spoiler: Accidentally reveals himself when he starts yelling that Conrad doing the right thing has gotten them in trouble “like
*
* HatesEveryoneEqually: Openly admits to
* OrphanageOfFear: Runs one for
* ParalysisByAnalysis: Prone to overthinking a situation
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* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly grows stronger when The Fix focuses on her.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:
!!Deputy Chief of Staff H. V. Lance
!!Ronnie Reptile
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-->'''Concept:''' Hypervigilance
The Deputy Chief of Staff for Mentopolis. Very high strung.
The Deputy Chief of Staff for Mentopolis. Very high strung.
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-->'''Concept:''' Hypervigilance
The Deputy ChiefInterest in Reptiles
A sweet young manifestation ofStaff for Mentopolis. Very high strung. an interest in reptiles.
The Deputy Chief
A sweet young manifestation of
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* NervousWreck: Terrified of everything that could possibly hurt the Big Guy or damage his reputation, and determined to stop all of it with extreme force. [[spoiler: He is ''horrified'' to learn that Elias has shit himself while swinging to safety in public.]]
* TheParanoiac: Very determined to ferret out any and all threats to Mentopolis, real or imagined.
* TheParanoiac: Very determined to ferret out any and all threats to Mentopolis, real or imagined.
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* NervousWreck: Terrified of everything that could possibly hurt the Big Guy or damage his reputation, AdorablyPrecociousChild: Small, cute, and determined to stop loves reptiles of all of it kinds.
* LovableLizard: His reptillian appearance combined withextreme force. [[spoiler: He is ''horrified'' to learn that Elias has shit himself while swinging to safety in public.]]
* TheParanoiac: Very determined to ferret out any and all threats to Mentopolis, real or imagined.his charming characterization makes him a solid depiction of this.
* LovableLizard: His reptillian appearance combined with
* TheParanoiac: Very determined to ferret out any and all threats to Mentopolis, real or imagined.
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[[folder: Freddy Focus]]
!!Freddy Focus
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Focus
Head editor of the Daily Observer, Mentopolis’ city paper.
!!Freddy Focus
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Focus
Head editor of the Daily Observer, Mentopolis’ city paper.
to:
[[folder: Freddy Focus]]
!!Freddy Focus
!!!PlayedMax Medulla]]
!! Max Medulla
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:'''Focus
Head editorMedulla (Oblongata)
Stationmaster ofthe Daily Observer, Mentopolis’ city paper.Oblongata Train Station. Sees more than they’re comfortable with.
!!Freddy Focus
!!!Played
!! Max Medulla
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:'''
Head editor
Stationmaster of
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* DaEditor: Head honcho of the paper, who threatens Anastasia with [[TurnInYourBadge a long ''talk'']] should her insistence on investigating Norrell’s case fail to turn a good story.
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* DaEditor: Head honcho of the paper, who threatens CouldSayItBut: How they end up telling Anastasia with [[TurnInYourBadge a long ''talk'']] should her insistence on investigating Norrell’s case fail to turn a good story.and Danny Fucks about the [[spoiler: shock troopers storming the train from the scalp.]] Anastasia even nervously asks them if they’re safe after they testify.
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[[folder: Joey Sneezes]]
!!Joey Sneezes
!!Joey Sneezes
to:
[[folder: Joey Sneezes]]
!!Joey SneezesWilton]]
!!Wilton
!!Joey Sneezes
!!Wilton
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-->'''Concept:''' Sneeze Relief
The congested bartender at Sugah’s.
The congested bartender at Sugah’s.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Sneeze Relief
The congested bartender at Sugah’s.Unknown
A pleasure courier who works with Dan Fucks. Travels to Mentopolis from the gonads.
The congested bartender at Sugah’s.
A pleasure courier who works with Dan Fucks. Travels to Mentopolis from the gonads.
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* TheBartender: He works as the main bartender at Sugah's, though he doesn't offer the sage advice most bartenders would have.
* IronicAllergy: Reveals he’s allergic to Sugah’s building, explaining his constant sneezing while on the job. Dan still expects him to work.
* IronicAllergy: Reveals he’s allergic to Sugah’s building, explaining his constant sneezing while on the job. Dan still expects him to work.
to:
* TheBartender: He works as the main bartender at Sugah's, though he doesn't offer the sage advice most bartenders would have.
* IronicAllergy: Reveals he’s allergicDirtyOldMan: He's depicted to Sugah’s building, explaining his constant sneezing while on the job. Dan still expects him to work.be an old man who loves talking about sexual stuff, especially with Danny.
* IronicAllergy: Reveals he’s allergic
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[[folder: Libby Longshower]]
!!Libby Longshower
!!Libby Longshower
to:
[[folder: Libby Longshower]]
!!Libby LongshowerIvana Popov]]
!!Ivana Popov
!!Libby Longshower
!!Ivana Popov
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-->'''Mental Process:''' Pleasure from Long Showers
The steamy waitress at Sugah’s.
The steamy waitress at Sugah’s.
to:
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
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* BubblyWaitress: She's quite charming and affable to be around.
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* BubblyWaitress: She's quite charming HuskyRusskie: She’s an experienced fighter with a [[UnexplainedAccent Russian accent]] in a city of mental constructs with American accents.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency andaffable to be around. fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
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[[folder: Hans Schadenfreude]]
!!Hans Schadenfreude
!!Hans Schadenfreude
to:
[[folder: Hans Schadenfreude]]
!!Hans SchadenfreudeDominick Nuntz]]
!!Dominick Nuntz
!!Hans Schadenfreude
!!Dominick Nuntz
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-->'''Mental Process:''' Schadenfreude ("harm-joy")
The bouncer at Sugah’s who gets a little too much enjoyment out of his job.
The bouncer at Sugah’s who gets a little too much enjoyment out of his job.
to:
The bouncer at Sugah’s
A wannabe fighter who
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* MeaningfulName: ''Schadenfreude''[[note]]roughly meaning "harm-joy"[[/note]] is a German term referring to the pleasure gained from viewing someone else's misfortune.
* SoftSpokenSadist: It's even in his name! While Hans appears to be a fairly nice person, he ''loves'' seeing people's pain and discomfort, especially if he's the one doing the job.
* SoftSpokenSadist: It's even in his name! While Hans appears to be a fairly nice person, he ''loves'' seeing people's pain and discomfort, especially if he's the one doing the job.
to:
* MeaningfulName: ''Schadenfreude''[[note]]roughly meaning "harm-joy"[[/note]] BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees Dominance is a German term referring to prize fighter he thinks he is looking for the pleasure gained from viewing someone else's misfortune.hulking brute of the pair who is actually SD. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. That's actually their trainer.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The little guy to SD’s big guy.
*SoftSpokenSadist: It's even in CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his name! While Hans appears to be a fairly nice person, Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he ''loves'' seeing people's pain and discomfort, especially if he's the explodes on anything but a one doing the job.managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The little guy to SD’s big guy.
*
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[[folder: Donny Urges]]
!!Donald “Donny” Urges
!!Donald “Donny” Urges
to:
[[folder: Donny Urges]]
!!Donald “Donny” UrgesSD]]
!!SD
!!Donald “Donny” Urges
!!SD
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-->'''Concept:''' Intrusive Thought
A rough and rowdy thought plotting a birthday cake heist.
A rough and rowdy thought plotting a birthday cake heist.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Intrusive Thought
[[spoiler:Self Doubt]]
Arough terrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and rowdy thought plotting a birthday cake heist.Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.
A
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* BankRobbery: Albeit an unusual one. He’s planning to push the Big Guy to steal a bit of a birthday cake intended for someone in another department.
* BitPartBadGuy: Really just here to show us the rougher side of the subconscious and give the Fix a target.
* BitPartBadGuy: Really just here to show us the rougher side of the subconscious and give the Fix a target.
to:
* BankRobbery: Albeit an unusual one. He’s planning to push BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees SD, he believes the Big Guy to steal a bit of a birthday cake intended for someone in another department.
* BitPartBadGuy: Really just here to show ushulking brute is the rougher side of one he signed up to fight, until SD calls the subconscious and give reedy Dom Nuntz over. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. [[spoiler:That's actually their trainer.]]
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Is theFix a target.brother of [[spoiler:Madame Self-Loathing. Their family name "Self-" comes first]].
* BitPartBadGuy: Really just here to show us
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
* OneDegreeOfSeparation: Is the
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[[folder: Madame Loathing]]
!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing
!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing
to:
[[folder: Madame Loathing]]
!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] LoathingDon Avaricci]]
!!Donald "Don" Avaricci
!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing
!!Donald "Don" Avaricci
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-->'''Concept:''' Loathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing]]
Owner and proprietor of Madame Loathing’s Home for Wayward Interests. Unsure if she loves or hates her job.
Owner and proprietor of Madame Loathing’s Home for Wayward Interests. Unsure if she loves or hates her job.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Loathing[[spoiler:, ''Self''-Loathing]]
Owner and proprietor of Madame Loathing’s HomeAvarice
A mob boss forWayward Interests. Unsure if she loves or hates her job.Mentopolis's criminal underworld.
Owner and proprietor of Madame Loathing’s Home
A mob boss for
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* ChildHater: Hates her young charges, along with everyone else.
* EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope.
* HatesEveryoneEqually: openly admits to this.
* OrphanageOfFear: Runs one for all the non-work interests that the Big Guy holds, and appears to despise her charges.
* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly grows stronger when The Fix focuses on her.
* EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope.
* HatesEveryoneEqually: openly admits to this.
* OrphanageOfFear: Runs one for all the non-work interests that the Big Guy holds, and appears to despise her charges.
* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly grows stronger when The Fix focuses on her.
to:
* ChildHater: Hates her young charges, along with everyone else.
TheDon: "Don" by nickname, mafia don by profession.
*EvilOrphanageLady: Embodies this trope.
* HatesEveryoneEqually: openly admits to this.
* OrphanageOfFear: Runs one for all{{Greed}}: What he embodies in the non-work interests that Big Guy's mind. He will assist anyone who he thinks will elevate the Big Guy holds, above everyone else, from [[spoiler:Mark Bition to Danny Fucks]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Has it out for Conrad Schintz, andappears is perfectly willing to despise her charges.
* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly grows stronger when The Fix focuses on her.have the kid whacked.
*
* HatesEveryoneEqually: openly admits to this.
* OrphanageOfFear: Runs one for all
* WouldHurtAChild: Has it out for Conrad Schintz, and
* ThePowerOfHate: Seemingly grows stronger when The Fix focuses on her.
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[[folder: Ronnie Reptile]]
!!Ronnie Reptile
!!Ronnie Reptile
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[[folder: Ronnie Reptile]]
!!Ronnie ReptileFanny Fawnsworth]]
!!Fanny Fawnsworth
!!Ronnie Reptile
!!Fanny Fawnsworth
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-->'''Concept:''' Interest in Reptiles
A sweet young manifestation of an interest in reptiles.
A sweet young manifestation of an interest in reptiles.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Interest in Reptiles
A sweet young manifestation of an interest in reptiles.The Fawn Response
An arm-girl and assistant for Don Avaricci.
A sweet young manifestation of an interest in reptiles.
An arm-girl and assistant for Don Avaricci.
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* AdorablyPrecociousChild: Small, cute, and loves reptiles of all kinds.
* LovableLizard: His reptillian appearance combined with his charming characterization makes him a solid depiction of this.
* LovableLizard: His reptillian appearance combined with his charming characterization makes him a solid depiction of this.
to:
* AdorablyPrecociousChild: Small, cute, and loves reptiles PleaseIWillDoAnything: Her standard response to any form of all kinds.
threat, which, given what she represents in the brain, isn't surprising.
*LovableLizard: His reptillian appearance combined PragmaticPansexuality: Will flirt with his charming characterization makes him a solid depiction of this.and fawn over anyone, from Don Avaricci to Anastasia, if it means that she'll be safe.
*
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[[folder: Max Medulla]]
!! Max Medulla
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Medulla (Oblongata)
Stationmaster of Oblongata Train Station. Sees more than they’re comfortable with.
!! Max Medulla
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Medulla (Oblongata)
Stationmaster of Oblongata Train Station. Sees more than they’re comfortable with.
to:
[[folder: Max Medulla]]
!! Max Medulla
!!! PlayedStacy Fakename]]
!!Stacy Fakename
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:'''Medulla (Oblongata)
Stationmaster of Oblongata Train Station. Sees more than they’re comfortable with.The Flight Response
A woman infiltrating Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.
!! Max Medulla
!!! Played
!!Stacy Fakename
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:'''
Stationmaster of Oblongata Train Station. Sees more than they’re comfortable with.
A woman infiltrating Don Avaricci's manor for some reason.
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* CouldSayItBut: How they end up telling Anastasia and Danny Fucks about the [[spoiler: shock troopers storming the train from the scalp.]] Anastasia even nervously asks them if they’re safe after they testify.
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* CouldSayItBut: How they end up telling Anastasia and Danny Fucks about the [[spoiler: shock troopers storming the train from the scalp.]] Anastasia even nervously asks them if they’re safe after they testify.ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Her response to everything.
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[[folder: Wilton]]
!!Wilton
!!Wilton
to:
!Mentopolis Government and Law Enforcement
[[folder:Wilton]]
!!WiltonOfficer Connell]]
!!Officer Connell
[[folder:
!!Wilton
!!Officer Connell
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A pleasure courier who works with Dan Fucks. Travels to Mentopolis from the gonads.
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A pleasure courier who works with Dan Fucks. Travels to Mentopolis from beat cop at the gonads.scene of Norrell Ojiccle’s murder.
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* DirtyOldMan: He's depicted to be an old man who loves talking about sexual stuff, especially with Danny.
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* DirtyOldMan: He's depicted to be an old man who loves talking about sexual stuff, especially with Danny. MeddlesomePatrolman: Keeps Anastasia from accessing the crime scene and carts away evidence.
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[[folder: Ivana Popov]]
!!Ivana Popov
!!Ivana Popov
to:
[[folder: Ivana Popov]]
!!Ivana PopovOfficer Joie de Vivre]]
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
!!Ivana Popov
!!Officer Joie de Vivre
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-->'''Concept:''' The Fight Response
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' The Fight Response
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.Enjoyment of life
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
Elias's fight instinct. She was fired years ago along with the other 3 "F"s.
A shock officer in Mentopolis. Very lackidasical.
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* HuskyRusskie: She’s an experienced fighter with a [[UnexplainedAccent Russian accent]] in a city of mental constructs with American accents.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
to:
* HuskyRusskie: She’s an experienced fighter BlitheSpirit: Extremely laidback, and willingly gives Anastasia all of his keys and his wallet to boot when she asks with a [[UnexplainedAccent Russian accent]] in a city of mental constructs no questions.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings withAmerican accents.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.no ill will whatsoever.
* MellowFellow: Very difficult to excite or alarm, as Anastasia quickly discovers. However, this means he also takes Anastasia stealing all his personal belongings with
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gives Conrad a brief one about how his complacency and fear of confrontation have caused many of the cities problems.
* RetiredBadass: She clearly knows the most about fighting out of anyone in Mentopolis but spends most of her days training boxers like Dom Nuntz and SD.
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[[folder: Dominick Nuntz]]
!!Dominick Nuntz
!!Dominick Nuntz
to:
[[folder: Dominick Nuntz]]
!!Dominick NuntzPasha N.]]
!!Pasha N.
!!Dominick Nuntz
!!Pasha N.
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-->'''Concept:''' Dominance
A wannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.
A wannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.
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-->'''Concept:''' Dominance
Passion
Awannabe fighter who cannot hide his extreme insecurity.forensic scientist on the police force. Catalogues stimuli in the evidence room.
A
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* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees Dominance is a prize fighter he thinks he is looking for the hulking brute of the pair who is actually SD. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. That's actually their trainer.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The little guy to SD’s big guy.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The little guy to SD’s big guy.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak and clearly is not a mental process that [[{{Pun}} gets exercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight.
to:
* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees Dominance is BirdsOfAFeather: Underneath her polite exterior, Pasha has a prize fighter he thinks he is looking deep love for the hulking brute of the pair who is actually SD. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. That's actually their trainer.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: Thelittle guy to SD’s big guy.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weakknown facts and clearly enjoys sharing them with people and learning new ones. The Fix, when he discovers this, is not ''enamored''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be amental process that [[{{Pun}} snoop ''one''.
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix getsexercised much]]. This is reflected by him only having a d4, the lowest dice possible on his Sharp skill. But her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with training from Popov he explodes on anything but a one managing him, suggesting she’s not used to put [[MadeOfIron Hunch]] in serious danger during their prizefight. talking so much.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He’s naturally pretty weak
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a
* FierySensuality: A little more straitlaced than your typical example, but she has fire instead of legs and flames licking out from her PrimAndProperBun. Intended to subtly show off her status as Passion.
* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets
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[[folder: SD]]
!!SD
!!SD
to:
[[folder: SD]]
!!SDChief Tightass]]
!!Chief Tightass
!!SD
!!Chief Tightass
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-->'''Concept:''' [[spoiler:Self Doubt]]
A terrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.
A terrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' [[spoiler:Self Doubt]]
A terrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.Tightassery
Chief of police in Mentopolis. Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.
A terrifying giant heavily tattooed prize fighter. Hunch and Dan are convinced he's secretly the Fight reflex.
Chief of police in Mentopolis. Has an understanding with Danny Fucks.
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* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees SD, he believes the hulking brute is the one he signed up to fight, until SD calls the reedy Dom Nuntz over. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. [[spoiler:That's actually their trainer.]]
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
* BigGuyLittleGuy: The big guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
to:
* BaitAndSwitch: In two different ways. When Hunch originally sees SD, he believes AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Manages to get hit in the hulking brute is the one he signed up to fight, until SD calls the reedy Dom Nuntz over. He also thinks that either SD or Dom is Elias’s fight instinct working under an alias. [[spoiler:That's actually their trainer.head by Dan Fucks breaking out of his handcuffs with too much force. This kills him stone dead.]]
*BigGuyLittleGuy: DaChief: Head of Mentopolis’ police department.
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his backhanders to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed to have one that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Thebig guy to Dom Nuntz’s little guy.
Police]]”.
*
* DirtyCop: Even without the dubious actions of his force (i.e. [[spoiler: enacting PoliceBrutality on a whole train of pain couriers from the scalp]]), his backhanders to Danny Fucks show that he qualifies as this.
* MyCard: Revealed to have one that he gives to Anastasia, which just says “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The
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[[folder: Judge Fusion]]
!!Judge Connie Fusion
!!Judge Connie Fusion
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[[folder: Judge Fusion]]
!!Judge Connie FusionMark Bition]]
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
!!Judge Connie Fusion
!!DA Mark “M” Bition
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-->'''Concept:''' Confusion
Lead judge of the Mentopolis court system.
Lead judge of the Mentopolis court system.
to:
-->'''Concept:''' Confusion
Lead judgeAmbition
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.
----
* AmbitionIsEvil: He's the literal personification of Elias' ambition and is portrayed in an amoral light.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopoliscourt system.to either bring Elias to heel or destroy Mentopolis entirely.]]
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be in cahoots with Don Avaricci, who gave him a campaign contribution check.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].
Lead judge
The District Attorney of Mentopolis. Provides targets for The Fix.
----
* AmbitionIsEvil: He's the literal personification of Elias' ambition and is portrayed in an amoral light.
* AmoralAttorney: He has no qualms of using his power to ensure that his goals are met, whether it's hiring a hitman to eliminate anything that is deemed a distraction or [[spoiler:ordering Elias' pleasure centers to be shut down so that he can complete his work.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Revealed to have been taken over by the Psychometer Key, which is using his position of power over Mentopolis
* BelievingTheirOwnLies: He believes that completing Elias' work will give Mentopolis the pleasure it needs for things to turn around, to the point where he [[spoiler:completely shut down Elias' pleasure centers in order to make him focus better.]] He is good at ignoring things that should be obvious to him - like that Elias is depressed because of his dogged commitment to his work ambitions or that there might be moral issues with Elias’ project - making it easy for other characters to convince him of things that he wants to be true.
* BigRedDevil: His character art has this as a motif, with his [[AmazingTechnicolorPopulation bright red skin]], hair curls resembling horns and a tie that makes it look like he has a forked tail.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler:Is revealed to be in cahoots with Don Avaricci, who gave him a campaign contribution check.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:He has banned the pleasure centers of the brain for distracting Elias from his work and blames them for getting in the Big Guys way and stopping the eventual dopamine rush of completing his project. He ignores that the only reason that Elias needs that rush so desperately is because Bition banned any sort of other joy.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Hires the Fix to erase young Conrad Schintz, [[spoiler:presumably on Don Avaricci's orders]].
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!!Stacy Fakename
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!!Stacy FakenameMayor Logic]]
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
!!Stacy Fakename
!!Mayor Leon Logic[[spoiler: /Frank Freeze]]
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
Often known as "The Big Guy", he is a scientist working at Gobstopper Industries who is constantly looking for praise and attention from his bosses. Many of his pleasure centers are currently suppressed in favor of his more logical thought processes, but that doesn't seem to be doing any favors to his psyche.
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
Often known as "The Big Guy", he is a scientist working at Gobstopper Industries who is constantly looking for praise and attention from his bosses. Many of his pleasure centers are currently suppressed in favor of his more logical thought processes, but that doesn't seem to be doing any favors to his psyche.
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-->'''Concept:''' Logic [[spoiler: actually The Flight Response
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
Often known as "The Big Guy", he is a scientist working at Gobstopper Industries who is constantly looking for praise and attention from his bosses. ManyFreeze Response]]
Mayor ofhis pleasure centers are Mentopolis, currently suppressed in favor of his more logical thought processes, but that doesn't seem to be doing any favors to his psyche. running for re-election.
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
Often known as "The Big Guy", he is a scientist working at Gobstopper Industries who is constantly looking for praise and attention from his bosses. Many
Mayor of
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* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler: When confronting Mr. Henry, decided to bring a ''grappling hook'' with him to the meeting just in case. Also had been taking copper supplements to try to negate the effects of the Psychometer in case it was used against him.]]
* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: He is a researcher with an interest in creating technology that lets people get a better understanding of the human mind. He also has a myriad of mental issues he scrupulously avoids ever reflecting on and treating.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass
* DestinationDefenestration: [[spoiler:The current problems plaguing Mentopolis as of late are revealed at the end of the second episode to be a result of Elias Hodge being thrown out of a window when he confronted his bosses on the exact nature of his work. Later revealed to have been done by Elias ''himself'' as a desperate escape attempt.]]
* FeaturelessProtagonist: While Elias does have a distinguishing facial scar, his actual appearance is otherwise undescribed - whenever we see his perspective of the outside world, he's wearing gloves.
** It is implied that he's Black, or at least-dark skinned, as A. Tension has reported on him having ashy elbow.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Has the Psychometer, the project he poured his soul into, turned on his own mind.]]
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: He once stood up to bullies that were hurting his little sister and got slashed with ice skates for it. It is heavily implied that the sheer trauma from the incident caused him to suppress his conscience.
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.]]
* PunchClockVillain: He's a scientist working for a cleary corrupt pharmaceutical company, but he only does it as a job.
* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for.
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[[folder: Mr. Henry]]
!!Mr. Henry
* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: He is a researcher with an interest in creating technology that lets people get a better understanding of the human mind. He also has a myriad of mental issues he scrupulously avoids ever reflecting on and treating.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass
* DestinationDefenestration: [[spoiler:The current problems plaguing Mentopolis as of late are revealed at the end of the second episode to be a result of Elias Hodge being thrown out of a window when he confronted his bosses on the exact nature of his work. Later revealed to have been done by Elias ''himself'' as a desperate escape attempt.]]
* FeaturelessProtagonist: While Elias does have a distinguishing facial scar, his actual appearance is otherwise undescribed - whenever we see his perspective of the outside world, he's wearing gloves.
** It is implied that he's Black, or at least-dark skinned, as A. Tension has reported on him having ashy elbow.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Has the Psychometer, the project he poured his soul into, turned on his own mind.]]
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: He once stood up to bullies that were hurting his little sister and got slashed with ice skates for it. It is heavily implied that the sheer trauma from the incident caused him to suppress his conscience.
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.]]
* PunchClockVillain: He's a scientist working for a cleary corrupt pharmaceutical company, but he only does it as a job.
* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for.
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[[folder: Mr. Henry]]
!!Mr. Henry
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* CrazyPrepared: AnIcePerson: [[spoiler: When confronting Mr. Henry, decided Prone to bring freezing up when shocked, which given that he’s The Freeze Response… PlayedForLaughs when Anastasia revealing he took a ''grappling hook'' with much bigger risk than previously stated has him to the meeting just in case. Also had been taking copper supplements to try to negate the effects turn into a block of the Psychometer in case it was used against him.ice.]]
*TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: He is a researcher INeverSaidItWasPoison: [[spoiler: Accidentally reveals himself when he starts yelling that Conrad doing the right thing has gotten them in trouble “like with an interest in creating technology the ice skates again”. As that lets people get a better understanding memory was never processed, Leon Logic should have no knowledge of it. Freeze, however…]]
* MayorPain: Of the incompetent variety, given his covering up of thehuman mind. He also has a myriad of mental issues Mentopolis’ sundry infrastructure failures as “planned maintenance”. Our heroes visiting his office to ask for his help results in him listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than contributing anything constructive. [[spoiler: Reveals that he scrupulously avoids ever reflecting on and treating.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass
* DestinationDefenestration: [[spoiler:The current problems plaguingknows this incompetency is likely why he was elected, so that other powerful players in Mentopolis as of late are revealed at the end of the second episode to be a result of Elias Hodge being thrown out of a window when he confronted his bosses on the exact nature of his work. Later revealed to have been done by Elias ''himself'' can use him as a desperate escape attempt.]]
* FeaturelessProtagonist: While Elias does have a distinguishing facial scar, his actual appearance is otherwise undescribed - whenever we see his perspective of the outside world, he's wearing gloves.
** It is implied that he's Black, or at least-dark skinned, as A. Tension has reported on him having ashy elbow.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Has the Psychometer, the project he poured his soul into, turned on his own mind.figurehead.]]
*NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: He once stood up ParalysisByAnalysis: Prone to bullies that were hurting his little sister overthinking a situation and got slashed listing out all the ways things could go wrong rather than coming up with ice skates for it. It is heavily implied that the sheer trauma from the incident caused him to suppress his conscience.
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred toa constructive conclusion. [[spoiler:Justified, as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.he’s actually Elias’ Freeze response.]]
* PunchClockVillain: He's a scientist working for a cleary corrupt pharmaceutical company, but he only does it as a job.
* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for.
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[[folder:Mr. Henry]]
!!Mr. HenryDeputy Lance]]
!!Deputy Chief of Staff H. V. Lance
*
* MayorPain: Of the incompetent variety, given his covering up of the
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass
* DestinationDefenestration: [[spoiler:The current problems plaguing
* FeaturelessProtagonist: While Elias does have a distinguishing facial scar, his actual appearance is otherwise undescribed - whenever we see his perspective of the outside world, he's wearing gloves.
** It is implied that he's Black, or at least-dark skinned, as A. Tension has reported on him having ashy elbow.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Has the Psychometer, the project he poured his soul into, turned on his own mind.
*
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.
* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for.
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!!Mr. Henry
!!Deputy Chief of Staff H. V. Lance
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Head of Gobstopper Industries and Elias's Boss.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: A major executive at Gobstopper Industries, he is notably involved in a number of shady dealings. Notably in the series are his questionable plans for the psychometer project, involving its potential capability to alter the minds of those it is used upon.
* GreaterScopeVillain: He is another human being like Elias and is responsible for many of the issues in Mentopolis directly or indirectly. However since the protagonists can only interact with him through Elias [[spoiler: and Elias is hurtling out a window]] they have more pressing antagonists to deal with.
* GreaterScopeVillain: He is another human being like Elias and is responsible for many of the issues in Mentopolis directly or indirectly. However since the protagonists can only interact with him through Elias [[spoiler: and Elias is hurtling out a window]] they have more pressing antagonists to deal with.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: A major executive at Gobstopper Industries, he is notably involved in a number NervousWreck: Terrified of shady dealings. Notably in everything that could possibly hurt the series are Big Guy or damage his questionable plans for the psychometer project, involving its potential capability to alter the minds of those it is used upon.
* GreaterScopeVillain: He is another human being like Eliasreputation, and is responsible for many determined to stop all of the issues in Mentopolis directly or indirectly. However since the protagonists can only interact it with him through Elias extreme force. [[spoiler: and He is ''horrified'' to learn that Elias is hurtling has shit himself while swinging to safety in public.]]
* TheParanoiac: Very determined to ferret outa window]] they have more pressing antagonists any and all threats to deal with.Mentopolis, real or imagined.
* SlapSlapKiss: [[spoiler:Goes from pulling a gun on Imelda to making out with her.]]
* GreaterScopeVillain: He is another human being like Elias
* TheParanoiac: Very determined to ferret out
* SlapSlapKiss: [[spoiler:Goes from pulling a gun on Imelda to making out with her.]]
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[[folder: The Key]]
!! [[spoiler: The Psychometer Key]]
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
An outside perspective in Mentopolis.
!! [[spoiler: The Psychometer Key]]
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
An outside perspective in Mentopolis.
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[[folder: The Key]]
!! [[spoiler: The Psychometer Key]]
!!! PlayedJudge Fusion]]
!!Judge Connie Fusion
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Confusion
Lead judge of the Mentopolis court system.
* CirclingBirdies: Her character portrait show these circling her head.
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
An outside perspective Often known as "The Big Guy", he is a scientist working at Gobstopper Industries who is constantly looking for praise and attention from his bosses. Many of his pleasure centers are currently suppressed in Mentopolis.favor of his more logical thought processes, but that doesn't seem to be doing any favors to his psyche.
!! [[spoiler: The Psychometer Key]]
!!! Played
!!Judge Connie Fusion
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' Confusion
Lead judge of the Mentopolis court system.
* CirclingBirdies: Her character portrait show these circling her head.
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
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* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler: When confronting Mr. Henry, decided to bring a ''grappling hook'' with him to the meeting just in case. Also had been taking copper supplements to try to negate the effects of the Psychometer in case it was used against him.]]
* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: He is a researcher with an interest in creating technology that lets people get a better understanding of the human mind. He also has a myriad of mental issues he scrupulously avoids ever reflecting on and treating.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass
* DestinationDefenestration: [[spoiler:The current problems plaguing Mentopolis as of late are revealed at the end of the second episode to be a result of Elias Hodge being thrown out of a window when he confronted his bosses on the exact nature of his work. Later revealed to have been done by Elias ''himself'' as a desperate escape attempt.]]
* FeaturelessProtagonist: While Elias does have a distinguishing facial scar, his actual appearance is otherwise undescribed - whenever we see his perspective of the outside world, he's wearing gloves.
** It is implied that he's Black, or at least-dark skinned, as A. Tension has reported on him having ashy elbow.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Has the Psychometer, the project he poured his soul into, turned on his own mind.]]
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: He once stood up to bullies that were hurting his twin sister, and not only got slashed with ice skates for it, but [[UnwantedAssistance his sister yelled at him because she liked the guy]]. It is heavily implied that the sheer trauma from the incident caused him to suppress his conscience.
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.]]
* PunchClockVillain: He's a scientist working for a clearly corrupt pharmaceutical company, but he only does it as a job.
* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for.
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!!Mr. Henry
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
Head of Gobstopper Industries and Elias's Boss.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: A major executive at Gobstopper Industries, he is notably involved in a number of shady dealings. Notably in the series are his questionable plans for the psychometer project, involving its potential capability to alter the minds of those it is used upon.
* GreaterScopeVillain: He is another human being like Elias and is responsible for many of the issues in Mentopolis directly or indirectly. However since the protagonists can only interact with him through Elias [[spoiler: and Elias is hurtling out a window]] they have more pressing antagonists to deal with.
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[[folder: The Key]]
!! [[spoiler: The Psychometer Key]]
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
An outside perspective in Mentopolis.
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* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: He is a researcher with an interest in creating technology that lets people get a better understanding of the human mind. He also has a myriad of mental issues he scrupulously avoids ever reflecting on and treating.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass
* DestinationDefenestration: [[spoiler:The current problems plaguing Mentopolis as of late are revealed at the end of the second episode to be a result of Elias Hodge being thrown out of a window when he confronted his bosses on the exact nature of his work. Later revealed to have been done by Elias ''himself'' as a desperate escape attempt.]]
* FeaturelessProtagonist: While Elias does have a distinguishing facial scar, his actual appearance is otherwise undescribed - whenever we see his perspective of the outside world, he's wearing gloves.
** It is implied that he's Black, or at least-dark skinned, as A. Tension has reported on him having ashy elbow.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Has the Psychometer, the project he poured his soul into, turned on his own mind.]]
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: He once stood up to bullies that were hurting his twin sister, and not only got slashed with ice skates for it, but [[UnwantedAssistance his sister yelled at him because she liked the guy]]. It is heavily implied that the sheer trauma from the incident caused him to suppress his conscience.
* OnlyKnownByHisNickname: He's mostly referred to as "The Big Guy" by Mentopolis' residents.
* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: He has a prominent physical scar on his face from the ice skate incident, which represent his trauma and emotional repression.]]
* PunchClockVillain: He's a scientist working for a clearly corrupt pharmaceutical company, but he only does it as a job.
* TheStoolPigeon: Given the impulse by Imelda and Conrad to keep his research to himself, and demanding some explanations from his bosses on what exactly his work will be used for.
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[[folder: Mr. Henry]]
!!Mr. Henry
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
Head of Gobstopper Industries and Elias's Boss.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: A major executive at Gobstopper Industries, he is notably involved in a number of shady dealings. Notably in the series are his questionable plans for the psychometer project, involving its potential capability to alter the minds of those it is used upon.
* GreaterScopeVillain: He is another human being like Elias and is responsible for many of the issues in Mentopolis directly or indirectly. However since the protagonists can only interact with him through Elias [[spoiler: and Elias is hurtling out a window]] they have more pressing antagonists to deal with.
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[[folder: The Key]]
!! [[spoiler: The Psychometer Key]]
!!! Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
An outside perspective in Mentopolis.
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* IGotBigger: He gains a few inches in episode 5 as Elias gains a renewed determination to do the right thing.
* ItWasWithYouAllAlong: In episode 5, Conrad [[spoiler: manifests his own switchboard key when saving Justin from the White Key's control. Conrad's key fittingly manifests from the Ice Skates.]]
* ItWasWithYouAllAlong: In episode 5, Conrad [[spoiler: manifests his own switchboard key when saving Justin from the White Key's control. Conrad's key fittingly manifests from the Ice Skates.]]
* ThePowerOfFriendship: how he[[spoiler: saves justin from the influence of the White Key]]
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: His bond with Conrad [[spoiler:which saves him from the White Key's control.]]
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!!Elias Hodge
!!Judge Connie Fusion
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-->'''Concept:''' Confusion
Lead judge of the Mentopolis court system.
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!!Stacy Fakename
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' The Flight Response
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
Lead judge of the Mentopolis court system.
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[[folder: Stacy Fakename]]
!!Stacy Fakename
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
-->'''Concept:''' The Flight Response
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!Other
[[folder: Elias Hodge]]
!!Elias Hodge
!!!Played by: Brennan Lee Mulligan
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: The terror he inflicts is mostly carried out by just stating random, niche facts. Often without even really meaning to.
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** Humorously, it's implied that the Fix often ''doesn't'' intend for his facts to be threatening or have any sinister hidden meaning, he's just ''that'' frightening of a presence.
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!!Madame Loathing
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!!Madame [[spoiler: Self]] Loathing
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-->'''Concept:''' Loathing
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* FeaturelessProtagonist: While Elias does have a distinguishing facial scar, his actual appearance is otherwise undescribed - whenever we see his perspective of the outside world, he's wearing gloves.
** It is implied that he's Black, or at least-dark skinned, as A. Tension has reported on him having ashy elbow.
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* WildCard: As a literal representation of impulsivity, whether she is working towards the Big guys best interest at any given time is pretty much decided by her mood. She is just as likely to try and make him do the right thing in an attack of conscience, as she is to try and make him scratch his groin in public.
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* WildCard: As a literal representation of impulsivity, whether she is working towards the Big guys Guy's best interest at any given time is pretty much decided by her mood. She is just as likely to try and make him do the right thing in an attack of conscience, as she is to try and make him scratch his groin in public.
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* BirdsOfAFeather:
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Underneath her polite exterior, Pasha has a deep love for little known facts and enjoys sharing them with people and learning new ones. The Fix, when he discovers this, is ''enamored''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
-->'''Mike Trapp:''' I’d like to roll to see how horny the Fix is right now.
-->'''Brennan Lee Mulligan:''' Yeah, that’s gonna be a snoop ''one''.
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* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially.
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* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially. Even when the Fix gets her to open up, her voice gets slightly strained while trading facts with him, suggesting she’s not used to talking so much.
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* HotLibrarian: The Fix certainly seems to think so.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially.
* TheQuietOne: Rather soft-spoken and reserved initially.
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!!Mayor Leon Logic/[[spoiler: Frank Freeze]]
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* GloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Has this with Anastasia, despite them being cousins. The two bicker regularly over Imelda’s reckless behavior and Anastasia’s attempts to distance herself from the family, but do love each other at the end of the day.
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* GloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Has this with Anastasia, despite them being cousins. The two bicker regularly over Imelda’s reckless behavior and Anastasia’s attempts to distance herself from the family, but do love each other at the end of the day.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Has this with Imelda, despite them being cousins. The two bicker regularly over Imelda’s reckless behavior and Anastasia’s attempts to distance herself from the family, but do love each other at the end of the day.
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* GloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Has this with Imelda, despite them being cousins. The two bicker regularly over Imelda’s reckless behavior and Anastasia’s attempts to distance herself from the family, but do love each other at the end of the day.