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* {{Narcissist}}: While he cooperates grudgingly with the Ruby Vanguard he is mainly concerned with his own legacy and ensuring [[spoiler:his progeny becomes the vessel for Predathos.]]
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* {{Narcissist}}: While he cooperates grudgingly with the Ruby Vanguard he is mainly concerned with his own legacy and ensuring [[spoiler:his progeny becomes the vessel for Predathos. He even comments that his loyalty to Sammanar is secondary to this goal. In his conversation with Fearne in episode 94 he makes it clear that he sees her as an extension of himself (a hallmark of narcissistic parenting) and projects his desire for death and chaos onto her saying it is her "true nature".]]
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* InsistentTerminology: [[spoiler:He is very insistent on calling his daughter Fearne ''Zathuda'' instead of Calloway and shows irritation when she corrects him because he sees her as his heir.]]
* {{Narcissist}}: While he cooperates grudgingly with the Ruby Vanguard he is mainly concerned with his own legacy and ensuring [[spoiler:his progeny becomes the vessel for Predathos.]]
* {{Narcissist}}: While he cooperates grudgingly with the Ruby Vanguard he is mainly concerned with his own legacy and ensuring [[spoiler:his progeny becomes the vessel for Predathos.]]
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* FantasticRacism: Appears to hold a low opinion of humans evidenced by his interactions with Otohan.
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* FantasticRacism: Appears to hold a low opinion of humans [[WeAreAsMayflies mortals]] evidenced by his interactions with Otohan.Otohan and confirmed [[spoiler:in his conversation with Fearne in episode 94 when he asks why she bothers with Bell's Hells.]]
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* CoupDeGrace: One of the things that distinguishes her as TheDreaded is that she keeps attacking incapacitated [=PCs=] until they're dead before the party has a chance to save them. She deals a coup de grace to Orym in their WakeUpCallBoss fight in Episode 33 and to Chetney in Episode 91.
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* NotSoStoic: She appears calm and in control at all times until episode 91 when [[spoiler:FCG rigs his arcane core to explode and [[TakeThemWithMe latches onto her arm]]. She has just enough time to realize what he's doing and frantically tries to escape his grasp before getting incinerated in the blast.]]
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* NotSoStoic: She appears calm and in control at all times until episode 91 when [[spoiler:FCG rigs his arcane core to explode and [[TakeThemWithMe [[TakingYouWithMe latches onto her arm]]. She has just enough time to realize what he's doing and frantically tries to escape his grasp before getting incinerated in the blast.]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Averted. Almost all the reilorans that Bells Hells meet are hostile and malicious, but that's because they work with the Ruby Vanguard. When the party visits Ruidus starting in episode 83, they learn that [[spoiler:some of the Reliorans are part of the "Volition", a LaResistance group fighting against the domination of the Imperium. The Imperium are a domineering faction of Reilorans who are working with the Vanguard and enslave the Bormodo, another race native to Ruidus.]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Averted. Almost all the reilorans reilora that Bells Hells meet are hostile and malicious, but that's because they work with the Ruby Vanguard. When the party visits Ruidus starting in episode 83, they learn that [[spoiler:some of the Reliorans are part of the "Volition", a LaResistance group fighting against the domination of the Imperium. The Imperium are a domineering faction of Reilorans reilora who are working with the Vanguard and enslave the Bormodo, another race native to Ruidus.]]
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* TheEmpire: When the party reaches Ruidus, they learn that [[spoiler:many of the Reilorans are ruled by the Imperium, a tyrannical faction that's enslaved the Bormodo, another race of creatures native to Ruidus, and is allied to the Ruby Vanguard. They are led by the Weave Mind, a group of powerful mystics with connections to Predathos.]]
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* TheEmpire: When the party reaches Ruidus, they learn that [[spoiler:many of the Reilorans reilora are ruled by the Imperium, a tyrannical faction that's enslaved the Bormodo, another race of creatures native to Ruidus, and is allied to the Ruby Vanguard. They are led by the Weave Mind, a group of powerful mystics with connections to Predathos.]]
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A quintet of Reiloran mystics that have ruled the Dominion with an iron fist for centuries.
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A quintet of Reiloran reilora mystics that have ruled the Dominion with an iron fist for centuries.
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* BigBrotherIsWatching: They can possess and look through the eyes of any Reiloran with an implant, allowing them to surveil their subjects at any time. For this reason, new recruits to the Voltion have to have their implants surgically removed to avoid giving the others away.
* BioAugmentation: They extensively bioengineered the Reilorans to create the four reilora subspecies and also implant organic devices into Reilora at birth that force them to be subservient to their will.
* BioAugmentation: They extensively bioengineered the Reilorans to create the four reilora subspecies and also implant organic devices into Reilora at birth that force them to be subservient to their will.
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* BigBrotherIsWatching: They can possess and look through the eyes of any Reiloran reiloran with an implant, allowing them to surveil their subjects at any time. For this reason, new recruits to the Voltion Volition have to have their implants surgically removed to avoid giving the others away.
* BioAugmentation: They extensively bioengineeredthe Reilorans their subjects to create the four reilora subspecies and also implant organic devices into Reilora reilora at birth that force them to be subservient to their will.
* BioAugmentation: They extensively bioengineered
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A quintet of Reiloran mystics that have ruled Ruidus the Dominion with an iron fist for centuries.
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* BigBrotherIsWatching: They can possess and look through the eyes of any Reiloran with an implant, allowing them to surveil their subjects at any time. For to this, this reason, new recruits to the Voltion have to have their implants surgically removed to avoid giving the others away.
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[[folder:Edmuda]]
!!Willmaster Edmuda
--> '''Race:''' Reilora (Thought Eater)
A member of the Dominion who was sent to the rural farming village Razora to enforce doubled work quotas to supply the war effort.
!!Willmaster Edmuda
--> '''Race:''' Reilora (Thought Eater)
A member of the Dominion who was sent to the rural farming village Razora to enforce doubled work quotas to supply the war effort.
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!!Willmaster Edmuda
--> '''Race:''' Reilora (Thought Eater)
!!The Weave Mind
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* DePower: When she is captured by Bell's Hells they use the Quintessence Array to temporarily drain her psychic powers so they can safely question her.
* HumanShield: She uses mind control to move villagers into the path of blows meant for her, forcing Bell's Hells to knock all of the nearby bystanders unconscious so they can reliably target her.
* MassHypnosis: Her specialty is controlling large groups of people at once, which she utilizes both for attack and defense.
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Orym absorbs her ability to ''Dominate'' and turns it back on her, forcing her to explain the Dominion's goals and motivations. Naturally, she is horrified when she realizes what she was compelled to do.
* TelepathicSpacemen: She is so reliant on her telepathy that she initially has difficulty remembering how to speak verbally.
* UndignifiedDeath: She is drained to death by Laudna when the Hells need to leave in a hurry to escape Otohan Thull then left in the Portable Hole to avoid leaving behind evidence.
* HumanShield: She uses mind control to move villagers into the path of blows meant for her, forcing Bell's Hells to knock all of the nearby bystanders unconscious so they can reliably target her.
* MassHypnosis: Her specialty is controlling large groups of people at once, which she utilizes both for attack and defense.
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Orym absorbs her ability to ''Dominate'' and turns it back on her, forcing her to explain the Dominion's goals and motivations. Naturally, she is horrified when she realizes what she was compelled to do.
* TelepathicSpacemen: She is so reliant on her telepathy that she initially has difficulty remembering how to speak verbally.
* UndignifiedDeath: She is drained to death by Laudna when the Hells need to leave in a hurry to escape Otohan Thull then left in the Portable Hole to avoid leaving behind evidence.
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* DePower: When she is captured by Bell's Hells they use BigBrotherIsWatching: They can possess and look through the Quintessence Array eyes of any Reiloran with an implant, allowing them to temporarily drain her psychic powers so they can safely question her.
* HumanShield: She uses mind controlsurveil their subjects at any time. For to move villagers into this, new recruits to the path of blows meant for her, forcing Bell's Hells Voltion have to knock all of the nearby bystanders unconscious so they can reliably target her.
* MassHypnosis: Her specialty is controlling large groups of people at once, which she utilizes both for attack and defense.
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Orym absorbs her ability to ''Dominate'' and turns it back on her, forcing her to explain the Dominion's goals and motivations. Naturally, she is horrified when she realizes what she was compelled to do.
* TelepathicSpacemen: She is so reliant on her telepathy that she initially has difficulty remembering how to speak verbally.
* UndignifiedDeath: She is drained to death by Laudna when the Hells need to leave in a hurry to escape Otohan Thull then left in the Portable Holehave their implants surgically removed to avoid leaving behind evidence.giving the others away.
* BioAugmentation: They extensively bioengineered the Reilorans to create the four reilora subspecies and also implant organic devices into Reilora at birth that force them to be subservient to their will.
* DreamWalker: Their connection to Predathos enables the residents of Ruidus to observe the dreams of Exandrians, which provides the basis for most of their culture and mythology.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: Very little is known about their motivations besides working with the Ruby Vanguard to free Predathos. In episode 91 they magically project themselves around Imogen and the infiltration team, quietly evaluate each of them, and then cryptically tell Imogen "welcome home" before disappearing without trying to capture her.
* PropagandaMachine: Their propaganda has convinced the races of Ruidus that when Predathos escapes it will bring them to the "Blue Promise" (Exandria), which they portray as a sort of holy paradise.
* HumanShield: She uses mind control
* MassHypnosis: Her specialty is controlling large groups of people at once, which she utilizes both for attack and defense.
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Orym absorbs her ability to ''Dominate'' and turns it back on her, forcing her to explain the Dominion's goals and motivations. Naturally, she is horrified when she realizes what she was compelled to do.
* TelepathicSpacemen: She is so reliant on her telepathy that she initially has difficulty remembering how to speak verbally.
* UndignifiedDeath: She is drained to death by Laudna when the Hells need to leave in a hurry to escape Otohan Thull then left in the Portable Hole
* BioAugmentation: They extensively bioengineered the Reilorans to create the four reilora subspecies and also implant organic devices into Reilora at birth that force them to be subservient to their will.
* DreamWalker: Their connection to Predathos enables the residents of Ruidus to observe the dreams of Exandrians, which provides the basis for most of their culture and mythology.
* HiddenAgendaVillain: Very little is known about their motivations besides working with the Ruby Vanguard to free Predathos. In episode 91 they magically project themselves around Imogen and the infiltration team, quietly evaluate each of them, and then cryptically tell Imogen "welcome home" before disappearing without trying to capture her.
* PropagandaMachine: Their propaganda has convinced the races of Ruidus that when Predathos escapes it will bring them to the "Blue Promise" (Exandria), which they portray as a sort of holy paradise.
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!!Willmaster Edmuda
--> '''Race:''' Reilora (Thought Eater)
A member of the Dominion who was sent to the rural farming village Razora to enforce doubled work quotas to supply the war effort.
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* DePower: When she is captured by Bell's Hells they use the Quintessence Array to temporarily drain her psychic powers so they can safely question her.
* HumanShield: She uses mind control to move villagers into the path of blows meant for her, forcing Bell's Hells to knock all of the nearby bystanders unconscious so they can reliably target her.
* MassHypnosis: Her specialty is controlling large groups of people at once, which she utilizes both for attack and defense.
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Orym absorbs her ability to ''Dominate'' and turns it back on her, forcing her to explain the Dominion's goals and motivations. Naturally, she is horrified when she realizes what she was compelled to do.
* TelepathicSpacemen: She is so reliant on her telepathy that she initially has difficulty remembering how to speak verbally.
* UndignifiedDeath: She is drained to death by Laudna when the Hells need to leave in a hurry to escape Otohan Thull then left in the Portable Hole to avoid leaving behind evidence.
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!!Willmaster Edmuda
--> '''Race:''' Reilora (Thought Eater)
A member of the Dominion who was sent to the rural farming village Razora to enforce doubled work quotas to supply the war effort.
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* DePower: When she is captured by Bell's Hells they use the Quintessence Array to temporarily drain her psychic powers so they can safely question her.
* HumanShield: She uses mind control to move villagers into the path of blows meant for her, forcing Bell's Hells to knock all of the nearby bystanders unconscious so they can reliably target her.
* MassHypnosis: Her specialty is controlling large groups of people at once, which she utilizes both for attack and defense.
* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Orym absorbs her ability to ''Dominate'' and turns it back on her, forcing her to explain the Dominion's goals and motivations. Naturally, she is horrified when she realizes what she was compelled to do.
* TelepathicSpacemen: She is so reliant on her telepathy that she initially has difficulty remembering how to speak verbally.
* UndignifiedDeath: She is drained to death by Laudna when the Hells need to leave in a hurry to escape Otohan Thull then left in the Portable Hole to avoid leaving behind evidence.
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* RageBreakingPoint: [[spoiler:When Imogen hears about the Volition planning an assassination attempt on Liliana she reaches out to try to convince her mother to leave Ludinus without warning her directly. When Imogen fails to sway her Imogen cryptically tells her mother "Maybe it's your turn to run." After the assassination attempt fails Liliana assumes her daughter's comment meant that she was involved in the assassination attempt, causing her to instantly enter her Exaltant Fury form and call out through the Ruidusborn mind network demanding to know if Imogen knew about the assassination attempt. She comes within seconds of attacking her daughter but Imogen narrowly manages to deceive her mother into believing that she was unaware.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:She methodically kills Imogen's friends one-by-one in order to force her into fully giving in to her Ruidus powers, which eventually succeeds. The first thing Imogen does with this newfound power is to psychically blast Otohan across Bassuras in retaliation, ending the fight and allowing the Hells to escape.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: HoistByHisOwnPetard:
** [[spoiler:She methodically kills Imogen's friends one-by-one in order to force her into fully giving in to her Ruidus powers, which eventually succeeds. The first thing Imogen does with this newfound power is to psychically blast Otohan across Bassuras in retaliation, ending the fight and allowing the Hells to escape.]]
** Her decision to focus her attacks on FCG to keep him from bringing the others back up [[spoiler:creates an opportunity for him to lure her away from the party before [[TakingYouWithMe overloading his core]], letting him kill her without endangering the others.]]
** [[spoiler:She methodically kills Imogen's friends one-by-one in order to force her into fully giving in to her Ruidus powers, which eventually succeeds. The first thing Imogen does with this newfound power is to psychically blast Otohan across Bassuras in retaliation, ending the fight and allowing the Hells to escape.]]
** Her decision to focus her attacks on FCG to keep him from bringing the others back up [[spoiler:creates an opportunity for him to lure her away from the party before [[TakingYouWithMe overloading his core]], letting him kill her without endangering the others.]]
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* ArchnemesisDad: [[spoiler:He sired Fearne during his flirtation with Birdie and intentionally had her birthed in Exandria under Ruidus to serve as a pawn in his and the Ruby Vanguard's scheme. Unfortunately for him, Birdie realized he intended to use Fearne as a tool so she ran away with her daughter and Ollie. Unbenownst to him Fearne was aged up by Morrigan and she is now one of the heroes trying to stop him. Fearne even personally torched the Feywild Malleus Key right under his nose without either of them realizing the relationship.]] [[spoiler:He finally encounters his daughter in episode 91, yelling that he both admires and hates her while chasing the demolition crew through the alleys of Kreviris.]]
--> ''Zathuda:'' How fitting my singular kin fights against me, bucks the order and call. You are your mother's daughter. The mix of pride and hate I hold for you, [[spoiler:Fearne Zathuda]], oh, it is delicious. A true chaos being of cold shadow and fiery whim.
--> ''Zathuda:'' How fitting my singular kin fights against me, bucks the order and call. You are your mother's daughter. The mix of pride and hate I hold for you, [[spoiler:Fearne Zathuda]], oh, it is delicious. A true chaos being of cold shadow and fiery whim.
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* ArchnemesisDad: [[spoiler:He He sired Fearne [[spoiler:Fearne]] during his flirtation with Birdie [[spoiler:Birdie and intentionally had her birthed in Exandria under Ruidus Ruidus]] to serve as a pawn in his and the Ruby Vanguard's scheme. Unfortunately [[spoiler:Unfortunately for him, Birdie realized he intended to use Fearne as a tool so she ran away with her daughter and Ollie. Unbenownst to him Fearne was aged up by Morrigan and she is now one of the heroes trying to stop him. Fearne even personally torched the Feywild Malleus Key right under his nose without either of them realizing the relationship.]] [[spoiler:He He finally encounters his daughter in episode 91, yelling that he both admires and hates her while chasing the demolition crew through the alleys of Kreviris.]]
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-->''Zathuda:'' '''Zathuda:''' How fitting my singular kin fights against me, bucks the order and call. You are your mother's daughter. The mix of pride and hate I hold for you, [[spoiler:Fearne Zathuda]], oh, it is delicious. A true chaos being of cold shadow and fiery whim.
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* ArchnemesisDad: [[spoiler:He sired Fearne during his flirtation with Birdie and intentionally had her birthed in Exandria under Ruidus to serve as a pawn in his and the Ruby Vanguard's scheme. Unfortunately for him, Birdie realized he intended to use Fearne as a tool so she ran away with her daughter and Ollie. Unbenownst to him Fearne was aged up by Morrigan and she is now one of the heroes trying to stop him. Fearne even personally torched the Feywild Malleus Key right under his nose without either of them realizing the relationship.]] [[spoilers:He finally encounters his daughter in episode 91, yelling that he both admires and hates her while chasing the demolition crew through the alleys of Kreviris.]]
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* ArchnemesisDad: [[spoiler:He sired Fearne during his flirtation with Birdie and intentionally had her birthed in Exandria under Ruidus to serve as a pawn in his and the Ruby Vanguard's scheme. Unfortunately for him, Birdie realized he intended to use Fearne as a tool so she ran away with her daughter and Ollie. Unbenownst to him Fearne was aged up by Morrigan and she is now one of the heroes trying to stop him. Fearne even personally torched the Feywild Malleus Key right under his nose without either of them realizing the relationship.]] [[spoilers:He [[spoiler:He finally encounters his daughter in episode 91, yelling that he both admires and hates her while chasing the demolition crew through the alleys of Kreviris.]]
