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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler: Breaks his code and gives info on Tracy to a Military Investigator who wants to arrest Tracy. He does this so that the Military Investigator will save Tracy who stupidly meets the Triad while wounded.]]
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Greta's young daughter, who helps run the Undertow with Gnarly.
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Greta's young daughter, who helps run the Undertow with Gnarly. [[spoiler: Who is the protagonist of "My Heroes Have Always Been Junkies".]]
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: She utterly romanticizes drug addiction and the artists who were drug addicts, ignoring her mother's despair and shame at her addiction.
* FallingForTheMark: [[spoiler: She genuinely cares for Skip. But it does not stop her from getting him to relapse to eventually reveal the location of her father who was about to flip on a mobster.]]
* HeroWorship: Is eternally grateful to Leo for saving her.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: [[spoiler: She is the protagonist of "My Heroes Have Always Been Junkies", after being a hostage in "Coward".]]
* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler: Her true identity and motivation are the main twist of her starring story.]]
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: She utterly romanticizes drug addiction and the artists who were drug addicts, ignoring her mother's despair and shame at her addiction.
* FallingForTheMark: [[spoiler: She genuinely cares for Skip. But it does not stop her from getting him to relapse to eventually reveal the location of her father who was about to flip on a mobster.]]
* HeroWorship: Is eternally grateful to Leo for saving her.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: [[spoiler: She is the protagonist of "My Heroes Have Always Been Junkies", after being a hostage in "Coward".]]
* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler: Her true identity and motivation are the main twist of her starring story.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Mostly views Tracy and Ricky as GenerationXerox of their father. But he does try to insist that Tracy take the wisest course to survive. When pressed by Tracy why Gnarly cares, Gnarly does admit he remembers Tracy as a kid taking his father out of the Undertow.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: In "The Sinners" he brutally ridicules Tracy's HonorBeforeReason and points out that he should just leave and forget about his family's debts. [[spoiler: Tracy goes on with his plan to Gnarly's disappointment.]]
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: Of the Romantic lead of numerous comics like Archie. He quickly realizes that he made a mistake on which woman he ultimately chose to be with [[spoiler: and later reveals that he is truly a man willing to kill his wife, frame an innocent man, and kill his best friend just to avoid being caught.]]
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: Of the Romantic romantic lead of numerous comics like Archie. He quickly realizes that he made a mistake on which woman he ultimately chose to be with [[spoiler: and later reveals that he is truly a man willing to kill his wife, frame an innocent man, and kill his best friend just to avoid being caught.]]
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* TrueCompanion: Seemingly with Freakout. [[spoiler: Even though Riley hears Freakout profess his UndyingLoyalty, Riley still kills Freakout to make sure he is never exposed.]]
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* TrueCompanion: TrueCompanions: Seemingly with Freakout. [[spoiler: Even though Riley hears Freakout profess his UndyingLoyalty, Riley still kills Freakout to make sure he is never exposed.]]
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* Expy: Of Archie from Creator/ArchieComics.
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Of Archie from Creator/ArchieComics.
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: He is a deconstruction of the fun-loving party character, as that sort of lifestyle eventually lead to Freakout using hard drugs.
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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: He is a deconstruction of the fun-loving party character, as that sort of lifestyle eventually lead to Freakout using hard drugs. Even his BigEater tendencies, which are prominent with Jughead, are the result of him smoking weed and getting the munchies.
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Of Jugghead Jughead of Creator/ArchieComics.
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Dewicking per TRS.
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* NotSoDifferent: Frequently invoked by people who say that Tracy is "just like" Teeg and Ricky.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Frequently invoked by people who say that Tracy is "just like" Teeg and Ricky.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Routinely cheats on his wife.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Sleeps with Ricky's ex-girlfriend and his boss's wife.
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* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Has a relationship with Tracy. This later gets her maimed to near death by Hyde when he discovers.]]
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* YourCheatingHeart: Cheats on her husband with the man who often pursued her. Riley accidentally sees them in the act.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Immediately shoots an unarmed man who swears he will kill him.
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* TheAlcoholic: A cocaine addict at a certain point.
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* LikeFatherLikeSon: Has the addiction and self-destructive impulses like Teeg.
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* ALighterShadeOfGrey: In the criminal world he is much more of a KnightTemplar as he follows his code and refuses to indiscriminately kill and is willing to intimidate people rather than kill. But he is completely willing to kill people.
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* AloofBigBrother: Became this for Ricky, as he finally had an excuse to be associated with his family.
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* AloofBigBrother: Became this for Ricky, as he finally had an excuse to not be associated with his family.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Sleeps with Ricky's ex-girlfriend and his boss's wife.
* TheCynic: He's lived through enough of his partners dying to not trust anyone, even people he's worked with for years.
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* HeUsedToBeASweetKid: How Tracy remembers Ricky, and it is true, though he quickly grows out of it in trying to live-up to his father.
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* HeUsedToBeASweetKid: UsedToBeASweetKid: How Tracy remembers Ricky, and it is true, though he quickly grows out of it in trying to live-up to his father.
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* AloofBigBrother: Became this for Ricky, as he finally had an excuse to be associated with his family.
* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: After killing the rest of Ricky's crew, when he learns that Mallory was the one who killed Ricky and why she did, he spares her.]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: He lives by his code and refuses to every fail to live-up to a promise to his own detriment.
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* HonorBeforeReason: He lives by his code and refuses to every ever fail to live-up to a promise to his own detriment.
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* TheOneWhoGotOut: How everyone views Tracy. He has mixed feelings about this.
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* TheOneWhoGotOut: NotSoDifferent: Frequently invoked by people who say that Tracy is "just like" Teeg and Ricky.
* TheOneWhoMadeItOut: How everyone views Tracy. He has mixed feelings about this.
* TheOneWhoMadeItOut: How everyone views Tracy. He has mixed feelings about this.
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* OnlySaneMan: Avoids involvement with the criminal activity other than serving them drinks and occasionally gives advice to Tracy and others. [[spoiler: They never listen.]]
* ReasonBeforeHonor: A rare relatively positive example of this. He does not involve himself in the criminal world beyond running a criminal friendly bar. But because he has a strict policy of never speaking to anyone and no violence or preference in his bar he is respected.
* ReasonBeforeHonor: A rare relatively positive example of this. He does not involve himself in the criminal world beyond running a criminal friendly bar. But because he has a strict policy of never speaking to anyone and no violence or preference in his bar he is respected.
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* HeelRealization: Realizes how she has ruined a decent person's life and decides to make things right by humiliating Hyde.
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* BlackComedy: Jokingly says that Leo abuses him and that no one believes him because he has Alzheimer's.
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* FemmeFatale: Pretends to be in love with Jacob in order to con him.
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* FemmeFatale: Pretends to be in love with Jacob in order to con him. Though it seems she [[BecomingTheMask did.]]
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* HiddenDepths: Was a closeted comics fan and also had a sensitive side that only Mallory saw.
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* TheCynic: After Vietnam, he has a very sour view of the world.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Will not kill women and wants to make sure that his victims "deserve" to die by Tracy's standards.
* HonorBeforeReason: He lives by his code and refuses to every fail to live-up to a promise to his own detriment.
* HonorBeforeReason: He lives by his code and refuses to every fail to live-up to a promise to his own detriment.
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* BigBrotherWorship: He worshipped Tracy as his heroic soldier brother, and was hurt that Tracy never wrote to him.
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* HeUsedToBeASweetKid: How Tracy remembers Ricky, and it is true, though he quickly grows out of it in trying to live-up to his father.
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For characters appearing in the anthology series, click [[here Characters/Criminal2019]]
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For characters appearing in the anthology series, click [[here Characters/Criminal2019]][[Characters/Criminal2019 here]].
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* AbusiveParent: Physically and emotionally abusive to his children and wife.
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* AbusiveParent: Physically and emotionally abusive to his children and wife. Ricky loves Teeg despite it. Tracy regrets that he didn't kill Teeg.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Receives one from a young Tracy who begs him not to hurt a woman. Teeg horrified asks [[StunnedSilence what does Tracy think he is.]]
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Receives one from a young Tracy who begs him not to hurt a woman. Teeg horrified asks [[StunnedSilence what does Tracy think he is.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Regularly beaten and left to fend forhimself by Teeg, who would be chasing a score or indulging his vices.
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* ExperiencedProtagonist: Downplayed. Since the Criminal story is non-linear, he can never truly be this. However, he was a god tier thief and con man before readers were introduced to him.
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* DescentIntoAddiction: He used to be a pretty decent guy before Vietnam, which forced him into drinking the pain away, destroying what goodness he had in his heart.
