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'''Meira:''' How did you survive to Underlord? How do you survive getting out of bed every morning?
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--> '''Meira:''' How did you survive to Underlord? How do you survive getting out of bed every morning?
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* DropTheHammer: Wields a large hammer.
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* [[Characters/CradleSeriesAbidanAndVroshir Abidan and Vroshir]] [[note]] Abidan, Vroshir [[/note]]
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* [[Characters/CradleSeriesAbidanAndVroshir Abidan and Vroshir]] [[note]] Abidan, Vroshir Vroshir, Fiends of Chaos [[/note]]
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* [[Characters/CradleSeriesMainCharacters Main Characters]] [[note]] Lindon, Yerin, Eithan, Orthos, Lil' Blue, Mercy, Dross [[/note]]
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* [[Characters/CradleSeriesMainCharacters Main Characters]] [[note]] Lindon, Yerin, Eithan, Orthos, Lil' Little Blue, Mercy, Dross [[/note]]Dross, Ziel[[/note]]
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* DaChief: Is this for the entire Skysworn organization, but since this is Cradle and AuthorityEqualsAsskicking he's also their most powerful member. [[spoiler:Until Eithan joins]].
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* DaChief: Is this for the entire Skysworn organization, but since this is Cradle and AuthorityEqualsAsskicking AsskickingLeadsToLeadership he's also their most powerful member. [[spoiler:Until Eithan joins]].
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* Workaholic: Constantly takes notes or checks scripts in her notebook.
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* Workaholic: {{Workaholic}}: Constantly takes notes or checks scripts in her notebook.
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->''"When a traveler cannot find a path, sometimes he must'' make his own."\\\
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->''"When a traveler cannot find a path, sometimes he must'' make must ''make his own."\\\
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* FauxFlame: [[spoiler:As a practitioner of the Path of the White Fox, she can create balls of [[PurpleIsPowerful purple]] [[TechnicolorFire flame]], at least after she starts learning all the techniques of the Path under Orthos' tutelage.]]
* ParentalFavoritism: Has this due to Lindon's status as TheUnfavorite thanks to his Unsouled status. Their parents were willing to take Lindon't spirit fruit that he'd captured himself to give to Kelsa because of how they see her.
* ParentalFavoritism: Has this due to Lindon's status as TheUnfavorite thanks to his Unsouled status. Their parents were willing to take Lindon't spirit fruit that he'd captured himself to give to Kelsa because of how they see her.
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* FauxFlame: [[spoiler:As As a practitioner of the Path of the White Fox, she can create balls of [[PurpleIsPowerful purple]] [[TechnicolorFire flame]], at least after she starts learning all the techniques of the Path under Orthos' [[spoiler:Orthos' tutelage.]]
* ParentalFavoritism: Has this due to Lindon's status as TheUnfavorite thanks to his Unsouled status.Their parents were willing to take Lindon't For instance, Lindon breaks his arm getting a spirit fruit that he'd captured himself to give to Kelsa because of how fruit, and they see her.don't even consider giving it to him until he asks.
* ParentalFavoritism: Has this due to Lindon's status as TheUnfavorite thanks to his Unsouled status.
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** During the events of ''Wintersteel'' [[spoiler:Orthos wonders if the one defining trait of this family if their lack of patience.]] [[CrazyPrepared She also shares Lindon's tendency to carry a carefully organized, huge backpack full of anything they could possibly need]].
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** During the events of ''Wintersteel'' [[spoiler:Orthos [[spoiler:Orthos]] wonders if the one defining trait of this family if their lack of patience.]] [[CrazyPrepared patience. She also shares Lindon's tendency to carry a carefully organized, huge backpack [[CrazyPrepared full of anything they could possibly need]].
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* ParentalNeglect: He's ignored Lindon for a good deal of the boy's childhood, thinking him not worth the time. He only starts to pay attention when he realizes Lindon might have a chance to actually make a decent showing at the Seven Year Festival.
* SelectiveObliviousness: [[spoiler:Even then, When Lindon returns home after three years, he refuses to believe that Lindon has become powerful in his own right, and assumes that his abilities are being exaggerated. It isn't until he sees ''Emperor'' Naru Huan greeting Lindon as a superior in ''Reaper'' that it finally hits home.]]
** Enforced in ''Dreadgod'' [[spoiler:even with all that he's seen since leaving the Sacred Valley he still refuses to treat it as normal even though the other members of his family have.]]
--> [[spoiler: Jaran slowly shut the door.]]
--> [[spoiler: Seisha slid a hand around his waist. “You’ll have to get used to these things sooner or later.”]]
--> [[spoiler: “[[LittleNo No]],” Jaran grumbled.]]
* SelectiveObliviousness: [[spoiler:Even then, When Lindon returns home after three years, he refuses to believe that Lindon has become powerful in his own right, and assumes that his abilities are being exaggerated. It isn't until he sees ''Emperor'' Naru Huan greeting Lindon as a superior in ''Reaper'' that it finally hits home.]]
** Enforced in ''Dreadgod'' [[spoiler:even with all that he's seen since leaving the Sacred Valley he still refuses to treat it as normal even though the other members of his family have.]]
--> [[spoiler: Jaran slowly shut the door.]]
--> [[spoiler: Seisha slid a hand around his waist. “You’ll have to get used to these things sooner or later.”]]
--> [[spoiler: “[[LittleNo No]],” Jaran grumbled.]]
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* ParentalNeglect: He's ignored He ignores Lindon for a good deal of the boy's childhood, thinking him not worth the time. He only starts to pay attention when he realizes Lindon might have a chance to actually make a decent showing at the Seven Year Festival.
* SelectiveObliviousness:[[spoiler:Even then, When [[spoiler:When Lindon returns home after three years, years]], he refuses to believe that Lindon has become powerful in his own right, and assumes that his abilities are being exaggerated. It isn't until he sees ''Emperor'' Naru Huan greeting Lindon as a superior in ''Reaper'' that it finally hits home.]]
** Enforced in ''Dreadgod'' [[spoiler:even with all that he's seen since leaving the Sacred Valley he still refuses to treat it as normal even though the other members of his family have.]]
-->[[spoiler: Jaran slowly shut the door.]]
door.
-->[[spoiler: Seisha slid a hand around his waist. “You’ll have to get used to these things sooner or later.”]]
”
-->[[spoiler: “[[LittleNo No]],” Jaran grumbled.]]
grumbled.
* SelectiveObliviousness:
** Enforced in ''Dreadgod'' [[spoiler:even with all that he's seen since leaving the Sacred Valley he still refuses to treat it as normal even though the other members of his family have.]]
-->
-->
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* SparingTheAces: [[spoiler:Jaran and Seisha were both punished for resisting the Heaven's Glory school, but as a soulsmith Seisha was too valuable to cripple. Instead she was kept captive to work for the school]].
* SoProudOfYou: It's buried under a lot of stoicism, but she is definitely proud of Lindon for all that he's done, and far more readily accepts his change than her husband/his father.
* SoProudOfYou: It's buried under a lot of stoicism, but she is definitely proud of Lindon for all that he's done, and far more readily accepts his change than her husband/his father.
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* SparingTheAces: [[spoiler:Jaran Jaran and Seisha were are both punished for resisting [[spoiler:resisting the Heaven's Glory school, school]], but as a soulsmith Seisha was is too valuable to cripple. Instead she was is kept captive to work for the school]].
them.
* SoProudOfYou: It's buried under a lot of stoicism, but she is definitely proud of Lindon for all that he's done, and far more readily accepts his change thanher husband/his his father.
* SoProudOfYou: It's buried under a lot of stoicism, but she is definitely proud of Lindon for all that he's done, and far more readily accepts his change than
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: His presence caused Suriel to take notice of Lindon, putting him on the path he is currently on.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: His presence caused Suriel to take notice of Lindon, putting him on the path he is currently on.his Path.
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* IdiotBall: [[spoiler:When Eithan is evacuating Sacred Valley, Rahm tries to burn down a house full of people. Eithan cuts his remnant in two.]]
* JerkassHasAPoint: On one hand, his refusal to listen to Lindon and Yerin is infuriating. On the other hand, they ''did'' raid the Treasure Hall and betrayed his trust.
* JerkassHasAPoint: On one hand, his refusal to listen to Lindon and Yerin is infuriating. On the other hand, they ''did'' raid the Treasure Hall and betrayed his trust.
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* IdiotBall: [[spoiler:When Eithan Eithan]] is evacuating Sacred Valley, Rahm tries to burn down a house full of people. Eithan [[spoiler:Eithan cuts his remnant in two.]]
* JerkassHasAPoint: On one hand, his refusal to listen to Lindon and Yerin is infuriating. On the other hand, they ''did'' raid the Treasure Hall andbetrayed betray his trust.
* JerkassHasAPoint: On one hand, his refusal to listen to Lindon and Yerin is infuriating. On the other hand, they ''did'' raid the Treasure Hall and
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Elder Whitehall is the first Heaven's Glory elder that Lindon meets, when he visits the Clans to watch the 7-year tournament.
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Elder Whitehall is the first Heaven's Glory elder that Lindon meets, when he visits the Clans to watch the 7-year Seven Year Festival tournament.
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* CreepyChild: Looks like a small child, but actually is as old as the other elders in the sect.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: By the end of the series she has started to become a legend of Sacred Valley.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler:He tosses aside his honor at the end, proving willing to risk even the Dreadgods returning if it means killing Eithan]].
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* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler:He He tosses aside his honor at the end, proving willing to risk even the [[spoiler:the Dreadgods returning if it means killing Eithan]].
* BeleagueredBureaucrat: The Emperor of the Blackflame Empire is essentially just a (fancy) administrative job. The Akura Clan own the Blackflame Empire, but don't bother to put one of their own members in charge.
* FromZeroToHero: The Naru clan were once servants to the Blackflame family, and Huan recalls scrubbing the floors of the palace as a child.
* FragileFlyer: She is quick and agile, but much less tough than the rest of the Blackflame contingent.
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Leader of the Skysworn, the Empire's elite forces. He is strict and no-nonsense, and hates that Eithan always gets away with everything.
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* DaChief: Is this for the entire Skysworn organization, but since this is Cradle and AuthorityEqualsAsskicking he's also their most powerful member. [[spoiler:Until Eithan joins.]]
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* DaChief: Is this for the entire Skysworn organization, but since this is Cradle and AuthorityEqualsAsskicking he's also their most powerful member. [[spoiler:Until Eithan
* OralFixation: Constantly chews on a leaf, and keeps a ready supply in his pocket in case one is lost.
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!!Renfei
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* DropTheHammer: Wields a large hammer.
* PersonalRaincloud: Her goldsign is a small cloud that hovers over her head that turns into a grey stormcloud when she's angry or agitated.
* PersonalRaincloud: Her goldsign is a small cloud that hovers over her head that turns into a grey stormcloud when she's angry or agitated.
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!!Bai Rou
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!!Bai Rou
Rou, Path of the Amber Well
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* AllAsiansWearConicalStrawHats: Wears a conical straw hat that hides his goldsign eyes.
* PoisonousPerson: His Path seems to combine Water, Poison, and Dream, attacking the body and mind with acidic nightmares.
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!!King Seishen Dakata
The King of the Seishen Kingdom, he is the father of Kiro and Daji. He competes against the Blackflame Empire in a competition hosted by Akura Charity.
!!King Seishen Dakata
The King of the Seishen Kingdom, he is the father of Kiro and Daji. He competes against the Blackflame Empire in a competition hosted by Akura Charity.
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!!King Seishen
The King of the Seishen Kingdom, he is the father of Kiro and Daji. He competes against the Blackflame Empire in a
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* CombatPragmatist: [[spoiler:Leads his forces in an ambush against the Blackflame contingent to kick them out of the Nightwheel Valley, and sets a trap for them when they return]].
* FalseConfession: [[spoiler:When he realizes that his remaining son has committed treason against the Akura clan, he tries to take the blame instead.]]
* FalseConfession: [[spoiler:When he realizes that his remaining son has committed treason against the Akura clan, he tries to take the blame instead.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: [[spoiler:Leads Leads his forces in an ambush against the Blackflame contingent to kick them out of the Nightwheel Valley, and sets [[spoiler:sets a trap for them when they return]].
* FalseConfession:[[spoiler:When When he realizes that his [[spoiler:his remaining son has committed treason against the Akura clan, clan]], he tries to take the blame instead.]]
* FalseConfession:
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The son of Seishen Dakata and Crown Prince of the Seishen Kingdom, he was "encouraged" by Akura Charity to hunt Lindon & Co during the competition between the Seishen Kingdom and Blackflame Empire.
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The son of Seishen Dakata and Crown Prince of the Seishen Kingdom, he was is "encouraged" by Akura Charity to hunt Lindon & Co during the competition between the Seishen Kingdom and Blackflame Empire.
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* TheAce: He was highly regarded in his kingdom, and managed to reach Underlord at a young age.
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* TheAce: He was is highly regarded in his kingdom, and managed to reach Underlord at a young age.
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* OhCrap: Like many who've fought Lindon he had this reaction when not only was his sword blocked by someone who was a lower advancement level than him but who could mostly fight him evenly. This revelation causes him to [[TheGlovesComeOff stop holding back]] and really take Lindon seriously.
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* OhCrap: Like many who've fought Lindon he had this reaction when not only was is his sword blocked by someone who was is a lower advancement level than him but who could mostly fight him evenly. This revelation causes him to [[TheGlovesComeOff stop holding back]] and really take Lindon seriously.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro at Lindon's hands Daji will do anything, even put the lives of his father and Meira along with their entire kingdom at risk to achieve this revenge. He attacks Lindon twice while under direct orders from the Akura Clan to not attack their fellow vassal states on the penalty of death. Finally after those attacks fail he directly betrays them by teleporting multiple members of the Akura family, including Mercy, Pride, and Grace directly into a trap set by Reigan Shen. Safe to say he's abandoned all reason by this point.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:After After the death of Seishen [[spoiler:Seishen Kiro at Lindon's hands hands]] Daji will do anything, even put the lives of his father and Meira along with their entire kingdom at risk to achieve this revenge. He attacks Lindon twice while under direct orders from the Akura Clan to not attack their fellow vassal states on the penalty of death. Finally after those attacks fail he directly [[spoiler:directly betrays them by teleporting multiple members of the Akura family, including Mercy, Pride, and Grace directly into a trap set by Reigan Shen.Shen]]. Safe to say he's abandoned all reason by this point.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:Even after being told and shown time and again that he is no match for Lindon he keeps trying to fight him. His own allies are forced beat him unconscious to stop him from getting himself killed in one instance. [[AssholeVictim Not that they didn't enjoy it.]]]]
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]], and accuses Lindon of besmirching his honor. Mercy's solution? Trial by combat against Lindon, the Sage of Twin Stars. Lindon gives him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown]]
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]], and accuses Lindon of besmirching his honor. Mercy's solution? Trial by combat against Lindon, the Sage of Twin Stars. Lindon gives him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown]]
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* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:Even Even after being told and shown time and again that he is no match for Lindon he keeps trying to fight him. His own allies are forced beat him unconscious to stop him from getting himself killed in one instance. [[AssholeVictim Not that they didn't enjoy it.]]]]
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]], and accuses Lindon of besmirching his honor. Mercy's solution? Trial by combat against Lindon, the Sage of Twin Stars. Lindon gives him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown]]
]]
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]], and accuses Lindon of besmirching his honor. Mercy's solution? Trial by combat against Lindon, the Sage of Twin Stars. Lindon gives him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: Officially, she is a gardener. In reality, she is the star genius of her entire kingdom and one of the strongest Underlords they have.
* BrokenBird: Became one after the death of [[spoiler:Seishen Kiro]], she was so broken she was willing to let Seishen Dakata execute her with zero resistance. [[spoiler:Seems to be getting better by the time we see her in Wintersteel, subsequent books will show if she ever makes a complete turnaround.]]
* BrokenBird: Became one after the death of [[spoiler:Seishen Kiro]], she was so broken she was willing to let Seishen Dakata execute her with zero resistance. [[spoiler:Seems to be getting better by the time we see her in Wintersteel, subsequent books will show if she ever makes a complete turnaround.]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: Officially, she is a gardener. In reality, she is the star genius of her entire kingdom and one of the strongest Underlords they have.
* BrokenBird: Became one after the death of [[spoiler:SeishenKiro]], she was Kiro]]. She is so broken she was is willing to let Seishen Dakata execute her with zero resistance. [[spoiler:Seems to be getting better by the time we see her in Wintersteel, subsequent books will show if she ever makes a complete turnaround.]]
* BrokenBird: Became one after the death of [[spoiler:Seishen
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:In Wintersteel, after a particularly dumb statement from him Meira finally lays into Daji with a blistering rant about how much of a useless ass he is.]]
--> '''Daji:''' [[spoiler:He took our points, and he made some deal with the dragons so they wouldn't attack him.]]\\
'''Meira:''' [[spoiler:How did you survive to Underlord? How do you survive getting out of bed every morning? If you were the smallest fraction of the man your brother was, your father wouldn't have to cry himself to sleep every night.]]
--> '''Daji:''' [[spoiler:He took our points, and he made some deal with the dragons so they wouldn't attack him.]]\\
'''Meira:''' [[spoiler:How did you survive to Underlord? How do you survive getting out of bed every morning? If you were the smallest fraction of the man your brother was, your father wouldn't have to cry himself to sleep every night.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:In In Wintersteel, after a particularly dumb statement from him Meira finally lays into Daji with a blistering rant about how much of a useless ass he is.]]
--> '''Daji:''' [[spoiler:He took our points, and he made some deal with the dragons so they wouldn't attack him.]]\\
is.
'''Meira:'''[[spoiler:How How did you survive to Underlord? How do you survive getting out of bed every morning? If you were the smallest fraction of the man your brother was, your father wouldn't have to cry himself to sleep every night.]]morning?
--> '''Daji:''' [[spoiler:He took our points, and he made some deal with the dragons so they wouldn't attack him.]]\\
'''Meira:'''
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!!Jai Long, Path of the Stellar Spear (warped)
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!!Jai Long, Path of the Stellar Spear (warped)
(deviant)
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Once the heir of the Jai clan, binding an improper Remnant took him off the Path of the Stellar Spear.
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Once the heir of the Jai clan, binding an improper Remnant took him off the orthodox Path of the Stellar Spear.
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: He's the strongest in his clan and he knows it. Played with in that his friendlessness (aside from Kral) and lack of interpersonal skills aren't really his choice - they're the result of his Goldsign-deformed face and his rejection by his clan.
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: He's the strongest in of his clan in the Desolate Wilds and he knows it. Played with in that his friendlessness (aside from Kral) and lack of interpersonal skills aren't really his choice - they're the result of his Goldsign-deformed face and his rejection by his clan.
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--> [[spoiler:The last of his madra failed him, and soon he was fighting with nothing but the strength of his limbs. Even so, he swore an oath to the heavens.]]
--> [[spoiler:If nothing else, he would die before his sister did.]]
--> [[spoiler:If nothing else, he would die before his sister did.]]
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--> [[spoiler:The The last of his madra failed him, and soon he was fighting with nothing but the strength of his limbs. Even so, he swore an oath to the heavens.]]
heavens.
-->[[spoiler:If If nothing else, he would die before his sister did.]]
-->
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After she has spent years being treated as an embarrassment by Jai Daishou, and then as a hostage, she stabs him in the neck with the Ancestral Spear. She absorbs all his madra (and he had a ''lot'' at that point), putting her on a unique Path]].
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:After After she has spent years being treated as an embarrassment by Jai Daishou, and then as a hostage, she stabs [[spoiler:stabs him in the neck with the Ancestral Spear. She absorbs all his madra (and he had a ''lot'' at that point), putting her on a unique Path]].
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->'''Gesha''': [tearing up] Heavens grant long life to the Emperor
* GadgeteerGenius: As a master soulsmith, this is her speciality; several of the wonderful toys the cast uses are made by her, including [[spoiler:Lindon's artificial hand]].
* GadgeteerGenius: As a master soulsmith, this is her speciality; several of the wonderful toys the cast uses are made by her, including [[spoiler:Lindon's artificial hand]].
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* GadgeteerGenius: As a master soulsmith, this is her
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[[folder:Seishen Dakata]]
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* MeaningfulName: Daji is a character from Chinese mythology, a ''nasty'' fox spirit that seduces the emperor into torturing, executing, and even ''feeding his own citizens to each other.'' Being named after her is ''not'' a compliment.
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->''"We fight for the honor of the Empire, but we can't sacrifice the stability of the Empire for the honor of the Empire. This is our problem to solve."''\\\
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* SupernaturalGoldEyes: His goldsign is glowing yellow eyes.
->'''Gesha''': [tearing up] Heavens grant long life to the Emperor
* BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: Dies because he doesn't realize that Lindon has a superior version of his own [[HealingFactor Iron Body]] that lets him resist Sandviper madra.
* WouldHurtAChild: Kral, a Highgold, tries to kill Lindon, an Iron three stages lower than him, for no apparent reason.
* WouldHurtAChild: Kral, a Highgold, tries to kill Lindon, an Iron three stages lower than him, for no apparent reason.
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%%!!Royals
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%%The King of the Seishen Kingdom, he is the father of Kiro and Daji. He competes against the Blackflame Empire in a competition hosted by Akura Charity.
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!!Seishen Kiro, Path of the Steel Guardian
The son of Seishen Dakata and Crown Prince of the Seishen Kingdom, he was "encouraged" by Akura Charity to hunt Lindon & Co during the competition between the Seishen Kingdom and Blackflame Empire.
%%!!Royals
%%[[folder:Seishen Dakata]]
%%The King of the Seishen Kingdom, he is the father of Kiro and Daji. He competes against the Blackflame Empire in a competition hosted by Akura Charity.
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!!Seishen Kiro, Path of the Steel Guardian
The son of Seishen Dakata and Crown Prince of the Seishen Kingdom, he was "encouraged" by Akura Charity to hunt Lindon & Co during the competition between the Seishen Kingdom and Blackflame Empire.
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%%[[folder:Seishen
The King of the Seishen Kingdom, he is the father of Kiro and Daji. He competes against the Blackflame Empire in a competition hosted by Akura
%%[[/folder]]
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!!Seishen Kiro, Path of the Steel Guardian
The son of Seishen Dakata and Crown Prince of the Seishen Kingdom, he was "encouraged" by Akura Charity to hunt Lindon & Co during the competition between the Seishen Kingdom and Blackflame Empire.
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* TheAce: He was highly regarded in his kingdom, and managed to reach Underlord at a young age.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: He works extra hard to keep his father from embarrassing their kingdom in front of Akura Charity by interjecting whenever he thinks that Seishen Dakata is about to stick his foot in his mouth.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: His excuse for attacking a Truegold as an Underlord and his reasoning for not allowing Lindon to surrender when Yerin is in danger. He is a Prince and an Underlord, Lindon is a vassal and a Truegold, Kiro's responsibilities dictate that he has to kill Lindon.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Has this dynamic with Meira as she is a normal height and the men in the Seishen family are all incredibly tall.
* OhCrap: Like many who've fought Lindon he had this reaction when not only was his sword blocked by someone who was a lower advancement level than him but who could mostly fight him evenly. This revelation causes him to [[TheGlovesComeOff stop holding back]] and really take Lindon seriously.
* WellDoneSonGuy: One of the many things that he doesn't like about himself, he would love to stick up for Meira to his father, to get him to admit that while Kiro the strongest of his children that [[ChildProdigy Meira is the strongest Underlord]] in the Seishen Kingdom. He can't though, because it would lessen the respect his father has for him.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: He works extra hard to keep his father from embarrassing their kingdom in front of Akura Charity by interjecting whenever he thinks that Seishen Dakata is about to stick his foot in his mouth.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: His excuse for attacking a Truegold as an Underlord and his reasoning for not allowing Lindon to surrender when Yerin is in danger. He is a Prince and an Underlord, Lindon is a vassal and a Truegold, Kiro's responsibilities dictate that he has to kill Lindon.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Has this dynamic with Meira as she is a normal height and the men in the Seishen family are all incredibly tall.
* OhCrap: Like many who've fought Lindon he had this reaction when not only was his sword blocked by someone who was a lower advancement level than him but who could mostly fight him evenly. This revelation causes him to [[TheGlovesComeOff stop holding back]] and really take Lindon seriously.
* WellDoneSonGuy: One of the many things that he doesn't like about himself, he would love to stick up for Meira to his father, to get him to admit that while Kiro the strongest of his children that [[ChildProdigy Meira is the strongest Underlord]] in the Seishen Kingdom. He can't though, because it would lessen the respect his father has for him.
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* TheAce: He was highly regarded in AbusiveParents: Is cruelly dismissive to both his kingdom, and managed sons, to reach Underlord at a young age.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: He works extra hard to keep his father from embarrassing their kingdom in front of Akura Charity by interjecting whenever he thinksthe point that Seishen Dakata is about to stick his foot in his mouth.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: His excuse for attacking a Truegold as an Underlord and his reasoning for not allowing Lindon to surrender when Yerin is in danger. He is a Prince and an Underlord, Lindon is a vassal and a Truegold,Kiro's responsibilities dictate that he has to kill Lindon.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Has this dynamic with Meira as she is a normal height and the men in the Seishen family are all incredibly tall.
* OhCrap: Like many who've fought Lindon he had this reaction when not only was his sword blocked by someone who was a lower advancement level than him but who could mostly fight him evenly. ThisUnderlord revelation causes him was fear of his father.
* TheAce: Like Naru Huan, he is the only Overlord in his kingdom.
* CombatPragmatist: [[spoiler:Leads his forces in an ambush against the Blackflame contingent to[[TheGlovesComeOff stop holding back]] and really take Lindon seriously.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Onekick them out of the many things Nightwheel Valley, and sets a trap for them when they return]].
* FalseConfession: [[spoiler:When he realizes thathe doesn't like about himself, he would love to stick up for Meira to his father, remaining son has committed treason against the Akura clan, he tries to get him to admit that take the blame instead.]]
* LargeHam: Often laughs at his own jokes whileKiro the strongest of his children that [[ChildProdigy Meira is the strongest Underlord]] in the Seishen Kingdom. He can't though, because it would lessen the respect his father has for him. court laugh weakly.
* RedOniBlueOni: Red Oni to Naru Huan's Blue.
* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: He works extra hard to keep his father from embarrassing their kingdom in front of Akura Charity by interjecting whenever he thinks
* TheChainsOfCommanding: His excuse for attacking a Truegold as an Underlord and his reasoning for not allowing Lindon to surrender when Yerin is in danger. He is a Prince and an Underlord, Lindon is a vassal and a Truegold,
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Has this dynamic with Meira as she is a normal height and the men in the Seishen family are all incredibly tall.
* OhCrap: Like many who've fought Lindon he had this reaction when not only was his sword blocked by someone who was a lower advancement level than him but who could mostly fight him evenly. This
* TheAce: Like Naru Huan, he is the only Overlord in his kingdom.
* CombatPragmatist: [[spoiler:Leads his forces in an ambush against the Blackflame contingent to
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* FalseConfession: [[spoiler:When he realizes that
* LargeHam: Often laughs at his own jokes while
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!!Seishen Daji
->''"A Truegold! He is mine. I will carve the difference between us into his body."''\\\
The Second Prince of the Seishen Kingdom, younger brother of Seishen Kiro. Starts off as the top Truegold of the Seishen Kingdom, later advances to Underlord. Known for being brash and filled with rage.
!!Seishen Daji
->''"A Truegold! He is mine. I will carve the difference between us into his body."''\\\
The Second Prince of the Seishen Kingdom, younger brother of Seishen Kiro. Starts off as the top Truegold of the Seishen Kingdom, later advances to Underlord. Known for being brash and filled with rage.
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->''"A Truegold! He is mine. I will carve the difference between us into his body."''\\\
The Second
The son of Seishen
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* DrivenByEnvy: The main reason he pushes himself so hard and throws himself at every challenge. Daji lives to show up his older brother and prove to his father that he is the better sibling.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro at Lindon's hands Daji will do anything, even put the lives of his father and Meira along with their entire kingdom at risk to achieve this revenge. He attacks Lindon twice while under direct orders from the Akura Clan to not attack their fellow vassal states on the penalty of death. Finally after those attacks fail he directly betrays them by teleporting multiple members of the Akura family, including Mercy, Pride, and Grace directly into a trap set by Reigan Shen. Safe to say he's abandoned all reason by this point.]]
* HateSink: No one likes Seishen Daji, not his subjects, not his teachers, not his peers, and not even his family. They seem to put up with him simply because he is the Second Prince and no other reason. [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro we find out that Seishen Dakata cries himself to sleep each night with the knowledge that Daji is the only son he has left.]]
* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:Even after being told and shown time and again that he is no match for Lindon he keeps trying to fight him. His own allies are forced beat him unconscious to stop him from getting himself killed in one instance. [[AssholeVictim Not that they didn't enjoy it.]]]]
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]], and accuses Lindon of besmirching his honor. Mercy's solution? Trial by combat against Lindon, the Sage of Twin Stars. Lindon gives him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown]]
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* AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: He works extra hard
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro at Lindon's hands Daji will do anything, even put the lives of his father and Meira along with
* HateSink: No one likes Seishen Daji, not his subjects, not his teachers, not his peers, and not even his family. They seem to put up with him simply because he is the Second Prince and no other reason. [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro we find out
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Has this dynamic with Meira as she is
* OhCrap: Like many who've fought Lindon he
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]],
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!!Riyusai Meira
->''"This servant does not dare to address the Akura Sage, but is grateful for the Sage's attention. It is the honor of her life to serve the first prince of the Seishen Kingdom"''\\\
An Underlady who directly serves Prince Seishen Kiro and is acknowledged by him as the star genius of the Seishen Kingdom.
!!Riyusai Meira
->''"This servant does not dare to address the Akura Sage, but is grateful for the Sage's attention. It is the honor of her life to serve the first prince of the Seishen Kingdom"''\\\
An Underlady who directly serves Prince Seishen Kiro and is acknowledged by him as the star genius of the Seishen Kingdom.
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!!Riyusai Meira
->''"This servant does not dare to address the Akura Sage, but is grateful for the Sage's attention. It is the honor of her life to serve the first prince
!!Seishen Daji, Second Prince of the Seishen
An Underlady who directly serves
->''"A Truegold! He is mine. I will carve the difference between us into his body."''\\\
The Second Prince
* DrivenByEnvy: The main reason he pushes himself so hard and throws himself at every challenge. Daji lives to show up his older brother and prove to his father that he is the better sibling.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro at Lindon's hands Daji will do anything, even put the lives of his father and Meira along with their entire kingdom at risk to achieve this revenge. He attacks Lindon twice while under direct orders from the Akura Clan to not attack their fellow vassal states on the penalty of death. Finally after those attacks fail he directly betrays them by teleporting multiple members of the Akura family, including Mercy, Pride, and Grace directly into a trap set by Reigan Shen. Safe to say he's abandoned all reason by this point.]]
* HateSink: No one likes Seishen Daji, not his subjects, not his teachers, not his peers, and not even his family. They seem to put up with him simply because he is the Second Prince and no other reason. [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro we find out that Seishen Dakata cries himself to sleep each night with the knowledge that Daji is the only son he has left.]]
* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:Even after being told and shown time and again that he is no match for Lindon he keeps trying to fight him. His own allies are forced beat him unconscious to stop him from getting himself killed in one instance. [[AssholeVictim Not that they didn't enjoy it.]]]]
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]], and accuses Lindon of besmirching his honor. Mercy's solution? Trial by combat against Lindon, the Sage of Twin Stars. Lindon gives him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown]]
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!!Riyusai Meira
->''"This servant does not dare to address the Akura Sage, but is grateful for the Sage's attention. It is the honor of her life to serve the first prince of the Seishen Kingdom"''\\\
An Underlady who directly serves Prince Seishen Kiro and is acknowledged by him as the star genius of the Seishen Kingdom.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro at Lindon's hands Daji will do anything, even put the lives of his father and Meira along with their entire kingdom at risk to achieve this revenge. He attacks Lindon twice while under direct orders from the Akura Clan to not attack their fellow vassal states on the penalty of death. Finally after those attacks fail he directly betrays them by teleporting multiple members of the Akura family, including Mercy, Pride, and Grace directly into a trap set by Reigan Shen. Safe to say he's abandoned all reason by this point.]]
* HateSink: No one likes Seishen Daji, not his subjects, not his teachers, not his peers, and not even his family. They seem to put up with him simply because he is the Second Prince and no other reason. [[spoiler:After the death of Seishen Kiro we find out that Seishen Dakata cries himself to sleep each night with the knowledge that Daji is the only son he has left.]]
* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:Even after being told and shown time and again that he is no match for Lindon he keeps trying to fight him. His own allies are forced beat him unconscious to stop him from getting himself killed in one instance. [[AssholeVictim Not that they didn't enjoy it.]]]]
* OhCrap: [[spoiler: When the Akura clan puts him on trial for his betrayal, he blithely lies under oath thanks to the protection of [[FauxAffablyEvil Reigan]] [[TheEmperor Shen]], and accuses Lindon of besmirching his honor. Mercy's solution? Trial by combat against Lindon, the Sage of Twin Stars. Lindon gives him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown]]
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[[folder:Meira]]
!!Riyusai Meira
->''"This servant does not dare to address the Akura Sage, but is grateful for the Sage's attention. It is the honor of her life to serve the first prince of the Seishen Kingdom"''\\\
An Underlady who directly serves Prince Seishen Kiro and is acknowledged by him as the star genius of the Seishen Kingdom.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Is hit with this pretty hard in Reaper when he keeps trying to intimidate the main party. He has been a Truegold in a land of Jades, but the main characters are nearly all Underlord/lady or above at this point. The one exception is Ziel, but he was an Archlord previously and is much stronger than any normal Truegold.
* PapaWolf: Since all of the white foxes in Sacred Valley are his descendants, Elder Whisper has banned their hunting, which some members of the Wei clan do in the mistaken belief that eating their meat will be beneficial to their Path. Somewhat subverted because he does allow their hunting on special occasions (most of them aren't sentient).
* PapaWolf: Since all of the white foxes in Sacred Valley are his descendants, Elder Whisper has banned their hunting, which some members of the Wei clan do in the mistaken belief that eating their meat will be beneficial to their Path. Somewhat subverted because he does allow their hunting on special occasions (most of them aren't sentient).
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Is hit with this pretty hard in Reaper when he keeps trying to intimidate the main party. He has been a Truegold in a land of Jades, but the main characters are nearly all Underlord/lady or above at this point. The one exception is Ziel, but he was an Archlord previously and is much stronger than any normal Truegold.\n
* PapaWolf: Since all of the white foxes in Sacred Valley are his descendants, Elder Whisper has banned their hunting, which some members of the Wei clan do in the mistaken belief that eating their meat will be beneficial to their Path. Somewhat subverted because he does allow their hunting on special occasions (most of them aren'tsentient).sapient).
* PapaWolf: Since all of the white foxes in Sacred Valley are his descendants, Elder Whisper has banned their hunting, which some members of the Wei clan do in the mistaken belief that eating their meat will be beneficial to their Path. Somewhat subverted because he does allow their hunting on special occasions (most of them aren't
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* Workaholic: Constantly takes notes or checks scripts in her notebook.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Thinks he can get away with taking over Cradle because he is from there originally, but Suriel catches him in time.
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* TakeOverTheWorld: After taking over Sacred Valley and [[spoiler:the Labyrinth under it]], he plans to take over the world.
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* MirrorCharacter: Lindon looks like a huge warrior but has a weak spirit, and Whitehall looks like a weak child but has a strong (for Sacred Valley) spirit.
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* IllGirl: Her core was horribly damaged in an attack, and most of her madra channels were blocked or ruined. She can barely even breathe. The Jai clan ''could'' fix her, but it's just plain too expensive to bother. [[spoiler:Lindon, with his pure madra and the help of Little Blue, is able to fix her on his own without too much trouble]].
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** Enforced in ''Dreadgod'' [[spoiler:even with all that he's seen since leaving the Sacred Valley he still refuses to treat it as normal even though the other members of his family have.]]
--> [[spoiler: Jaran slowly shut the door.]]
--> [[spoiler: Seisha slid a hand around his waist. “You’ll have to get used to these things sooner or later.”]]
--> [[spoiler: “[[LittleNo No]],” Jaran grumbled.]]
--> [[spoiler: Jaran slowly shut the door.]]
--> [[spoiler: Seisha slid a hand around his waist. “You’ll have to get used to these things sooner or later.”]]
--> [[spoiler: “[[LittleNo No]],” Jaran grumbled.]]
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* {{Kitsune}}: He is a classic five-tailed fox from Japanese mythology.
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* {{Kitsune}}: AsianFoxSpirit: He is a classic five-tailed fox from Japanese mythology.
* AsianFoxSpirit: Her Fox Tail [[MarkOfTheSupernatural goldsign]] and her Path of the White Fox put her in this category. Considering the Elder Whisper has 5 tails it's more than likely that as she advances Kelsa will gain more tails as well.
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* {{Kitsune}}: Her Fox Tail [[MarkOfTheSupernatural goldsign]] and her Path of the White Fox put her in this category. Considering the Elder Whisper has 5 tails it's more than likely that as she advances Kelsa will gain more tails as well.
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* AntiMentor: He tells Lindon that Wei Mon Terims attacking him was Lindon's own fault, because he should have stayed at home where it was safe.
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* AntiMentor: He tells Lindon that Wei Mon Terims Teris attacking him was Lindon's own fault, because he should have stayed at home where it was safe.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Upheld, then subverted. In ''Unsouled'' he is one of the first people to ever defend Lindon and treats him at least like a valuable servant. After Lindon and Yaren rob him and return three years later, he refuses to listen to them just because he doesn't like them.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: On one hand, his refusal to listen to Lindon and Yerin is infuriating. On the other hand, they ''did'' raid the Treasure Hall and betrayed his trust.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Upheld, then subverted. In ''Unsouled'' he is one of the first people to ever defend Lindon and treats him at least like a valuable servant. After Lindon and Yaren rob him and return three years later, he refuses to listen to them just because he doesn't like them.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Upheld, then subverted. In ''Unsouled'' he is one of the first people to ever defend Lindon and treats him at least like a valuable servant. After Lindon and Yaren rob him and return three years later, he refuses to listen to them just because he doesn't like them.
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* BondCreatures: In the attack that crippled her, part of her madra was transformed into a living spirit, much like Jai Long's living forger techniques. It fights her constantly for years, [[spoiler:but once Lindon heals her and puts her spirit back under her control, it becomes a tiny pink dragon who fights for her. She names him [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Fingerling.]] He likes to eat fish.]]
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* BondCreatures: In the attack that crippled her, part of her madra was transformed into a living spirit, much like Jai Long's living forger techniques. It fights her constantly for years, [[spoiler:but once Lindon heals her and puts her spirit back under her control, it becomes a [[ShoulderSizedDragon tiny pink dragon dragon]] who fights for her. She names him [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Fingerling.]] He likes to eat fish.]]
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* MasterOfNone: A variant; most Paths use one or two types of madra, because you have to keep all your madra types balanced. The more different types, the harder they are to balance, the harder it is to find aura, and the harder it is to find compatible advancement resources. Due to her trick with [[spoiler:the Archstone]], Jai Chen ends up with at least ''three'' madra types: Wind from Naru Gwei, and Light and Sword from Jai Long and Jai Daishou. Eithan notes that it is a very good thing that Lindon's Blackflame core was completely empty at the time, says he is very interested in seeing where her Path takes her. It is impossible to find a compatible Remnant to advance her to Gold, so she is forced to advance with elixers and scales instead.
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* MasterOfNone: A variant; most Paths use one or two types of madra, because you have to keep all your madra types balanced. The more different types, the harder they are to balance, the harder it is to find aura, and the harder it is to find compatible advancement resources. Due to her trick with [[spoiler:the Archstone]], Jai Chen ends up with at least ''three'' three madra types: types that don't usually go together: Wind from Naru Gwei, and Light and Sword from Jai Long and Jai Daishou. Eithan notes that it is a very good thing that Lindon's Blackflame core was completely empty at the time, says he and is very interested in seeing where her Path takes her. It is impossible to find a compatible Remnant to advance her to Gold, so she is forced to advance with elixers and scales instead.
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->''"We don't '''have''' to go. We could go west."''\\\
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->''"We don't '''have''' just want a place to go. We could go west.stay for a while."''\\\
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* MasterOfNone: A variant; most Paths use two types of madra, plenty use only one, and occasionally you'll see a Path with as many as three. This is because you have to keep all your madra types balanced. The more different types, the harder they are to balance, the harder it is to find aura, and the harder it is to find compatible advancement resources. Due to her trick with [[spoiler:the Archstone]], Jai Chen ends up with at least ''five'' madra types: Wind from Naru Gwei, Fire and Destruction from Lindon, and Light and Sword from Jai Long and Jai Daishou. And that's assuming she didn't get anything from all the constructs Lindon had scattered around. Eithan says he is very interested in seeing where her Path takes her. It was impossible to find a compatible Remnant to advance her to Gold, so she just had to brute-force it with more power.
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* MasterOfNone: A variant; most Paths use one or two types of madra, plenty use only one, and occasionally you'll see a Path with as many as three. This is because you have to keep all your madra types balanced. The more different types, the harder they are to balance, the harder it is to find aura, and the harder it is to find compatible advancement resources. Due to her trick with [[spoiler:the Archstone]], Jai Chen ends up with at least ''five'' ''three'' madra types: Wind from Naru Gwei, Fire and Destruction from Lindon, and Light and Sword from Jai Long and Jai Daishou. And that's assuming she didn't get anything from all the constructs Lindon had scattered around. Eithan notes that it is a very good thing that Lindon's Blackflame core was completely empty at the time, says he is very interested in seeing where her Path takes her. It was is impossible to find a compatible Remnant to advance her to Gold, so she just had is forced to brute-force it advance with more power.elixers and scales instead.
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* SociallyAwkwardHero: Because he has been treated like a monster since he was fourteen years old, Jai Long has two modes: Icy cool and extreme awkwardness, particularly when someone expresses romantic interest in him.