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* SuccesfulSiblingSyndrome: She is constantly compared to Nick's potential as a crime lord in the making, causing her to be deeply envious and resentful of her brother despite never meeting him.
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* SuccesfulSiblingSyndrome: SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome: She is constantly compared to Nick's potential as a crime lord in the making, causing her to be deeply envious and resentful of her brother despite never meeting him.
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* AllLovingHero: Finds himself unable to hold anything against Vexey despite everything she's put him through, only wishing her the best.
* ApologeticAttacker: Gets on Vexey's nerves by being one, even when Vexey accidentally attacks ''herself''.
* ApologeticAttacker: Gets on Vexey's nerves by being one, even when Vexey accidentally attacks ''herself''.
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* AmbiguousSituation: In the end, it's never fully confirmed whether or not he truly was a ManchurianAgent. Simon makes a pretty good case that he was, but Karen brings up the possibility that he could have simply induced his own FakeMemories through trauma rather than brainwashing. Simon can't really refute that, and it becomes moot as Timothy dies shortly thereafter before they could find out for sure.
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* AmbiguousSituation: In the end, it's never fully confirmed whether or not he truly was a ManchurianAgent. Simon makes a pretty good case that he was, but Karen brings up the possibility that he could have simply induced his own FakeMemories through trauma rather than brainwashing. Simon can't really refute that, and it becomes moot anyway as Timothy dies shortly thereafter before they could find out for sure.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Was a victim of this, fittingly enough during the Cold-Blooded War.
* GreatEscape: He believes he made one from the Sauriet prison he was trapped in.
* PrisonerExchange: What ''actually'' happened, according to Simon.
* ShellShockedVeteran: The reason he's going to counseling in the first place.
* ShoutOut: His supposed escape involved covering himself in ketchup and playing dead until a guard came in to check on him, which is a method Snake can use to escape his own cell in the original VideoGame/MetalGearSolid. Continuing the theme of the Cold-Blooded War being one giant Metal Gear reference, Timothy's mission is also referred to as ''Operation Intrude E404''.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Was a victim of this, fittingly enough during the Cold-Blooded War.
* GreatEscape: He believes he made one from the Sauriet prison he was trapped in.
* PrisonerExchange: What ''actually'' happened, according to Simon.
* ShellShockedVeteran: The reason he's going to counseling in the first place.
* ShoutOut: His supposed escape involved covering himself in ketchup and playing dead until a guard came in to check on him, which is a method Snake can use to escape his own cell in the original VideoGame/MetalGearSolid. Continuing the theme of the Cold-Blooded War being one giant Metal Gear reference, Timothy's mission is also referred to as ''Operation Intrude E404''.
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A former member of Delta Fox that Simon knew from the Cold-Blooded War. He ends up attending the same PTSD meeting as him later down the road.
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A former member of Delta Fox that Simon knew from the Cold-Blooded War. He ends up attending the same PTSD meeting as him later down the road.
road, with dire consequences.
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[[folder: Timothy Houndsworthy]]
->''"Whoa, wait a minute, you don't mean'' Karen ''[=VanDal=], do you? Krazy Karen? You'' married ''her?"''\\\
A former member of Delta Fox that Simon knew from the Cold-Blooded War. He ends up attending the same PTSD meeting as him later down the road.
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[[folder: Timothy Houndsworthy]]
->''"Whoa, wait a minute, you don't mean'' Karen ''[=VanDal=], do you? Krazy Karen? You'' married ''her?"''\\\
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* GreaterScopeVillain: In the space of a single drabble, they manage to eclipse Count Reynard himself in potential threat level, yet they have very little impact on the plot of ''Born to Be Wilde'', mostly amounting to how they've influenced Simon's actions.
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* TheGhost: As they operate entirely through mammalian proxies, no actual member of Crypsis has been seen or heard from thus far. The closest they've come is a message implanted into Reina that she recites on their behalf.
* GreaterScopeVillain: In the space of a single drabble, they manage to eclipse Count Reynard himself in potential threat level, yet they have very little impact on the plot of ''Born to Be Wilde'', mostly amounting to how they've influenced Simon'sactions.actions and the premature activation of Koslov during the finale.
* GreaterScopeVillain: In the space of a single drabble, they manage to eclipse Count Reynard himself in potential threat level, yet they have very little impact on the plot of ''Born to Be Wilde'', mostly amounting to how they've influenced Simon's
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* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: A villainous faction of reptiles who use brainwashed mammals to do their bidding.
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* TriggerPhrase: Played with. Their sleeper agents are fully activated by the phrase "A camouflage undone. A venom that spreads as one.", but their programming still influences them beforehand; it's just much more subtle.
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* TriggerPhrase: Played with. Their sleeper agents are fully activated by the phrase "A camouflage undone. A venom that spreads as one.", but their programming still influences them beforehand; it's just much in more subtle.
subtle ways.
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* TriggerPhrase: Played with. Their sleeper agents are fully activated by the phrase "A camouflage undone. A venom that spreads as one.", but their programming still influences them beforehand; it's just much more subtle.
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* TheDreaded: Anyone who knows of them is rightly terrified of what they're capable of, including hardened badass Simon [=VanDal=].
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* HeWhoMustNotBeNamed: For security purposes, the [=VanDal's=] and their associates refer to them as "our mutual friends" when speaking to each other. This is indeed the only way they've been referenced in the main fic.
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* HeWhoMustNotBeNamed: For security purposes, the [=VanDal's=] [=VanDals=] and their associates refer to them as "our mutual friends" when speaking to each other. This is indeed the only way they've been referenced in the main fic.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: What they've done to the mammals under their control, turning them into sleeper agents who are perfectly willing to get their paws dirty if programmed to.
* HeWhoMustNotBeNamed: For security purposes, the [=VanDal's=] and their associates refer to them as "our mutual friends" when speaking to each other. This is indeed the only way they've been referenced in the main fic.
* HeWhoMustNotBeNamed: For security purposes, the [=VanDal's=] and their associates refer to them as "our mutual friends" when speaking to each other. This is indeed the only way they've been referenced in the main fic.
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* LongGame: They lost the Cold-Blooded War about thirty years prior to the main story and have since spent their time planting sleeper agents in Zootopia for an eventual strike in the indeterminate future.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Upon their introduction, they quickly turn a lighthearted drabble about Simon playing games with his son into one of the darkest of the entire series.
* LongGame: They lost the Cold-Blooded War about thirty years prior to the main story and have since spent their time planting sleeper agents in Zootopia for an eventual strike in the indeterminatefuture. future.
* ManchurianAgent: They've planted an unknown number of these in Zootopia, just waiting to be activated.
* LongGame: They lost the Cold-Blooded War about thirty years prior to the main story and have since spent their time planting sleeper agents in Zootopia for an eventual strike in the indeterminate
* ManchurianAgent: They've planted an unknown number of these in Zootopia, just waiting to be activated.
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* ParanoiaGambit: They admit that the reason they even let Simon know what they were up to was just to drive him mad with the knowledge of fighting an enemy that could be literally anyone. Considering he later jumps to conclusions and causes all kinds of harm under Reynard when his son disappears, they were on the right track.
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[[folder: Crypsis]]
->''"Try as you might, but you will not find us. You will not expose us. You will not stop us. You will spend the rest of your life looking over your shoulder and jumping at shadows, knowing that your end is coming but not knowing when. Not until the day you die, or the day Zootopia dies. As far as revenge goes, that will suffice."''\\\
A mysterious and powerful intelligence agency based in the Sauriet Union. Since the reptiles' defeat in the Cold-Blooded War, they've been plotting their revenge and waiting very patiently to attain it.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: In the space of a single drabble, they manage to eclipse Count Reynard himself in potential threat level, yet they have very little impact on the plot of ''Born to Be Wilde'', mostly amounting to how they've influenced Simon's actions.
* LongGame: They lost the Cold-Blooded War about thirty years prior to the main story and have since spent their time planting sleeper agents in Zootopia for an eventual strike in the indeterminate future.
* NotSoHarmlessVillain: For the Sauriet Union as a whole, who were mostly treated as joke villains up until Crypsis was introduced and immediately made them a much bigger threat.
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->''"Try as you might, but you will not find us. You will not expose us. You will not stop us. You will spend the rest of your life looking over your shoulder and jumping at shadows, knowing that your end is coming but not knowing when. Not until the day you die, or the day Zootopia dies. As far as revenge goes, that will suffice."''\\\
A mysterious and powerful intelligence agency based in the Sauriet Union. Since the reptiles' defeat in the Cold-Blooded War, they've been plotting their revenge and waiting very patiently to attain it.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: In the space of a single drabble, they manage to eclipse Count Reynard himself in potential threat level, yet they have very little impact on the plot of ''Born to Be Wilde'', mostly amounting to how they've influenced Simon's actions.
* LongGame: They lost the Cold-Blooded War about thirty years prior to the main story and have since spent their time planting sleeper agents in Zootopia for an eventual strike in the indeterminate future.
* NotSoHarmlessVillain: For the Sauriet Union as a whole, who were mostly treated as joke villains up until Crypsis was introduced and immediately made them a much bigger threat.
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: With the likes of Nick and Judy currently occupied, Gideon effectively becomes the main protagonist of the Vexey arc. He even gets his own rabbit partner in the form of Sunny.
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[[caption-width-right:300:The In-Over-His-Head Baker of Bread]]
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[[folder: Vladzotz's Family]]
->'''Vladzotz:''' ''"Lucy, I just explained to you in-depth why I left the Nocturnal District and came here, and about the fire as well. Don't you think I would have mentioned something as dire as losing my family?"''
->'''Lucy:''' ''"That makes sense. Just...assumptions were made, I guess."''\\\
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->'''Vladzotz:''' ''"Lucy, I just explained to you in-depth why I left the Nocturnal District and came here, and about the fire as well. Don't you think I would have mentioned something as dire as losing my family?"''
->'''Lucy:''' ''"That makes sense. Just...assumptions were made, I guess."''\\\
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[[folder: Vladzotz's Family]]
->'''Vladzotz:''' ''"Lucy, I just explained to you in-depth why I leftThe Barks & The Pets]]
->'''Pet Leader:''' ''"ACKNOWLEDGE US!"''
->'''Bark Leader:''' ''"NO!"''\\\
Two opposing gangs at war with each other in the NocturnalDistrict and came here, and about the fire as well. Don't you think I would have mentioned something as dire as losing my family?"''
->'''Lucy:''' ''"That makes sense. Just...assumptions were made, I guess."''\\\
Camilla, Vasila, and Vasile Fangpyre, Vlad's wife and kids respectively. Things are more favorable forDistrict. The Pets represent domesticated dogs, seeking validation. The Barks just want them in this verse.
to get lost.
->'''Vladzotz:''' ''"Lucy, I just explained to you in-depth why I left
->'''Pet Leader:''' ''"ACKNOWLEDGE US!"''
->'''Bark Leader:''' ''"NO!"''\\\
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->'''Lucy:''' ''"That makes sense. Just...assumptions were made, I guess."''\\\
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: The Pets for domesticated dogs as a whole, which are a rare sight in the fandom. The Barks would prefer they stay that way.
* ShoutOut: To the Sharks and the Jets from ''Theatre/WestSideStory''.
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[[folder: Vladzotz's Family]]
->'''Vladzotz:''' ''"Lucy, I just explained to you in-depth why I left the Nocturnal District and came here, and about the fire as well. Don't you think I would have mentioned something as dire as losing my family?"''
->'''Lucy:''' ''"That makes sense. Just...assumptions were made, I guess."''\\\
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* FantasticRacism: Both gangs, towards each other, but more pronounced on the Bark side.
* SeldomSeenSpecies: The Pets for domesticated dogs as a whole, which are a rare sight in the fandom. The Barks would prefer they stay that way.
* ShoutOut: To the Sharks and the Jets from ''Theatre/WestSideStory''.
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[[folder: Vladzotz's Family]]
->'''Vladzotz:''' ''"Lucy, I just explained to you in-depth why I left the Nocturnal District and came here, and about the fire as well. Don't you think I would have mentioned something as dire as losing my family?"''
->'''Lucy:''' ''"That makes sense. Just...assumptions were made, I guess."''\\\
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->'''Casey:''' ''"Do you think he's going to die?"''
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->'''Dea:''' ''"Not quickly."''\\\
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->''"You're alright, Miss! Uh, guess I won't stab you guys today."''\\\
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->''"I might not have a lot of ambition, but I'' do ''care about helping others, and these savages pose a huge risk to innocent lives. I want to do my part to stop them."''\\\
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->''"Made my bag part of my costume this year!"''\\\
->''"Wonderful! Then I feel much better about leaving such a project in your capable paws, Mr. Reynard."''\\\
->'''Henry:''' ''"I see Jimbo's been telling you girls about his funny adventures. He's given us some real knockers ever since he joined the ZPD."''\\
->'''Abigail:''' ''"Oh, I can't stay mad at you. Such a colorful imagination should be nurtured, not punished."''\\\
->'''Abigail:''' ''"Oh, I can't stay mad at you. Such a colorful imagination should be nurtured, not punished."''\\\
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* GoodParents: They come off as incredibly nice and caring to their son, albeit though perhaps not taking his "funny adventures" as seriously as they should.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Mocks Felix for keeping his "wild side" suppressed, then ends up losing his status in the Lang Family as a result of letting said "wild side" get out of control and cause him to break honor duel code.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Mocks Felix for keeping his "wild side" suppressed, then ends up losing his status place in the Lang Family as a result of letting said "wild side" get out of control and cause him to break honor duel code.
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->'''Paxton:''' ''"Boy, you're outta your league. I've gotten worse beatings than that from my own folks."''
->'''Felix:''' ''"So have I."''
->'''Paxton:''' ''"I know. But the difference between you and I? You had to wait for Momma to come and save ya. Me?'' '''I saved myself!"'''\\\
->'''Felix:''' ''"So have I."''
->'''Paxton:''' ''"I know. But the difference between you and I? You had to wait for Momma to come and save ya. Me?'' '''I saved myself!"'''\\\
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->''"I warn you, some of the things you will see, and smell, will be troubling."''\\\
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->''"I'm a drug runner. Name something that's big, hot, and spreading like wildfire, and I'm probably controlling it."''\\\
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->''"I am in charge of Zootopia's largest gambling ring, and owner of the Oasis Casino in the Grand Palms Hotel. Well, I own pretty much the entire hotel actually, but not publically."''\\\
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->''"So you finally made it, Maskovich! Behold, the unstoppable Metal Shell!"''\\\
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->"That ''is how it is'' done! ''No weight can hold back the strength of Ivar the Great! Haha!"''\\\
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->''"If it's too much trouble,'' I ''could watch over them."''\\\
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* TheRival: Is implied to have been Simon's for most of the Cold-Blooded War. Simon finally ends that rivalry in Drabble 4.
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->''"What do you require, Miss Sang?"''\\\
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->''"Simon'' Maskovich, ''we meet'' again ''on the'' battlefield."\\\
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* RedHerring: He bites Simon in his left leg at the end of their fight, making it look seem like he's the culprit behind his missing limb. But then Simon uses his antivenom.antivenin.
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->'''Felix:''' ''"I...you...shot them…"''
->'''Lady Lang:''' ''"Yes, I did. I had to. Scum such as them have no place in the pack."''\\\
->'''Lady Lang:''' ''"Yes, I did. I had to. Scum such as them have no place in the pack."''\\\
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->'''Bonnie:''' ''"I think you did just fine on your own."''
->'''Vexey:''' ''"Really?"''
->'''Stu:''' ''"Yeah! That vat of acid thing is so overdone anyway. You found a creative alternative to serve a similar purpose and that deserves some recognition."''\\\
->'''Vexey:''' ''"Really?"''
->'''Stu:''' ''"Yeah! That vat of acid thing is so overdone anyway. You found a creative alternative to serve a similar purpose and that deserves some recognition."''\\\
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->''"Well, good luck with that. I think I'm gonna just buy a few pastries for the office and head on back with my, er, report. Got any donuts?"''\\\
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->''"What is that boy doing? Is he...''hugging ''the enemy?!"''\\\
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->''"Sorry...got kinda rambly there. My mouth moves as fast as my feet sometimes."''\\\
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* MotorMouth: He acknowledges this, saying that his mouth moves as fast as his feet sometimes.much. See the above quote.
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->''"I swear, these mosquitoes are getting bigger every year. Why does my blood have to be so delicious?"''\\\
