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* TheWorfBarrage: Upon emerging from his cultivation and ascending to the Spiritual Realm, one of his first exhibitions of power is trying to dominate Xiulan and her followers with his presence. Despite them only being in the Profound Realm at most, they refuse to be cowed and stalemate him with the combined might of their own Qi.
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* TheWorfBarrage: Upon emerging from his cultivation and ascending to the Spiritual Realm, one of his first exhibitions of power is trying to dominate Xiulan and her followers with his presence. Despite them only being in the Profound Realm at most, they refuse to be cowed and stalemate him with the combined might of their own Qi.Qi (plus some support from Tianlan).
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Pulled this on the previous sectmaster, Xianghua and Bowu's father. The man's harsh methods had saved the sect in the past, but threatened its' future by alienating his children - Xianghua, the most powerful cultivator the sect had in the younger generation, and Bowu, the GadgeteerGenius who created the steam furnaces that allow cultivators to fight like they were a full realm of cultivation higher than they really were. Once the kids show what they can do, Bingwen leads the council in exiling the old sectmaster out of the province.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Pulled this on the previous sectmaster, Xianghua and Bowu's father. The man's harsh methods had saved the sect in the past, but threatened its' its future by alienating his children - Xianghua, the most powerful cultivator the sect had in the younger generation, and Bowu, the GadgeteerGenius who created the steam furnaces that allow cultivators to fight like they were a full realm of cultivation higher than they really were. Once the kids show what they can do, Bingwen leads the council in exiling the old sectmaster out of the province.
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* HonestAdvisor: [[spoiler: Xianghua]] trusts him enough to leave him in charge when [[spoiler: she]] heads out of the sect on business, meaning he's still very close to the top of the pecking order and he doesn't have to deal with the worst responsibilities of the job. As a result, he's quite pleased right where he is, and doesn't aspire to climb any higher in the hierarchy of the sect. He still likes the idea of more power like any cultivator, but there's just nothing there that appeals to him.
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* HonestAdvisor: [[spoiler: Xianghua]] trusts him enough to leave him in charge when [[spoiler: she]] heads out of the sect on business, meaning he's still very close to the top of the pecking order and he doesn't have to deal with the worst responsibilities of the job. As a result, he's quite pleased right where he is, and doesn't aspire to climb any higher in the hierarchy of the sect. He still likes the idea of more power like any cultivator, cultivator on a theoretical level, but there's just nothing there that appeals to him.him in reality.
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* EnlightenedSelfInterest: He enjoys being in charge temporarily, but is canny enough to step aside when [[spoiler: Xianghua]] steps into the role of Sectmaster. The man considered taking the spot for himself, but knew everyone else would turn on him if he tried and he knows [[spoiler: Xianghua]] can [[AsskickingLeadsToLeadership beat him in a straight fight]], and that [[spoiler: her]] leadership is proving very valuable to the sect. Leads to him being a...
* HonestAdvisor: [[spoiler: Xianghua]] trusts him enough to leave him in charge when [[spoiler: she]] heads out of the sect on business, meaning he's still very close to the top of the pecking order and he doesn't have to deal with the worst responsibilities of the job. As a result, he's quite pleased right where he is, and doesn't aspire to climb any higher in the hierarchy of the sect.
* HonestAdvisor: [[spoiler: Xianghua]] trusts him enough to leave him in charge when [[spoiler: she]] heads out of the sect on business, meaning he's still very close to the top of the pecking order and he doesn't have to deal with the worst responsibilities of the job. As a result, he's quite pleased right where he is, and doesn't aspire to climb any higher in the hierarchy of the sect.
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* EnlightenedSelfInterest: He enjoys being in charge temporarily, but is canny enough to step aside when [[spoiler: Xianghua]] steps into the role of Sectmaster. The man considered taking the spot for himself, but knew everyone else would turn on him if he tried and tried, he knows [[spoiler: Xianghua]] can [[AsskickingLeadsToLeadership beat him in a straight fight]], and that [[spoiler: her]] leadership is proving very valuable to the sect. Leads to him being a...
* HonestAdvisor: [[spoiler: Xianghua]] trusts him enough to leave him in charge when [[spoiler: she]] heads out of the sect on business, meaning he's still very close to the top of the pecking order and he doesn't have to deal with the worst responsibilities of the job. As a result, he's quite pleased right where he is, and doesn't aspire to climb any higher in the hierarchy of the sect. He still likes the idea of more power like any cultivator, but there's just nothing there that appeals to him.
* HonestAdvisor: [[spoiler: Xianghua]] trusts him enough to leave him in charge when [[spoiler: she]] heads out of the sect on business, meaning he's still very close to the top of the pecking order and he doesn't have to deal with the worst responsibilities of the job. As a result, he's quite pleased right where he is, and doesn't aspire to climb any higher in the hierarchy of the sect. He still likes the idea of more power like any cultivator, but there's just nothing there that appeals to him.
