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* VisualPun: [[https://wikipedia.org/wiki/Rubber_duck_debugging Rubber duck debugging]] is an exercise in going over basic problems step-by-step to figure out where something went wrong, using language simple enough that, for example, a rubber duck could understand. This duck practically begs Dr. Phage to teach him about medicine, and in doing so nearly gets him to remember what he's actually supposed to be doing before pulling him back into explaining things.
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Pallid, skeletal, naked creatures with eyes full of maggots, and meandering, empty existences. Fern first encounters a talking one outside the 'final dungeon' of the Inert Vessel, though she cannot make sense of what it's saying. Her companions encourage her to ignore it, though Maggie insists its presence signifies a 'zonal bleed.'
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Pallid, skeletal, naked creatures with eyes full of maggots, and meandering, empty existences. Fern first encounters a talking one outside the 'final dungeon' "final dungeon" of the Inert Vessel, though she cannot make sense of what it's saying. Her companions encourage her to ignore it, though although Maggie insists its presence signifies a 'zonal bleed.'
"zonal bleed".
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--> You have no idea what happened this time...one minute you were looking at your x-ray, and the next you were here.
A cartoonish animated x-ray print of our heroine's skeleton, [[spoiler:which promptly killed her a second time. She then went on to date the Bloodstain, and from there, moved on to marrying some other guy.]]
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* EvilTwin: Fern's evil twin.
* NeckSnap: What the skeleton does to Fern.
* NeckSnap: What the skeleton does to Fern.
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* VillainessesWantHeroes: Once dated the Bloodstain, who saved the woman she killed.
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* VillainessesWantHeroes: Once She once dated the Bloodstain, who saved the woman she killed.
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--> '''Fern''': Yes, hello, mouth thing. What do you want.\\
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--> '''Fern''': Of course you are. I suppose you want me to come inside.
--> '''Ora''': Well...there's probably some pretty good stuff in here.
--> '''Ora''': Well...there's probably some pretty good stuff in here.
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* BigDumbBody: Ora's relationship with Lexis.
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--> '''Lexis''': ...I know you're gonna need this nice shiny key if you ever wanna see that kid of yours.
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--> '''BBQ Girll''': Get ready, dadmiser! It's a ripe one!
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--> '''Magboil''': FOR A HARMED WAY!!! BE GUSHES A SECRET FIND!!?
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--> '''Rubber Duck''': Oh no! I've fowgotten awl the basic pwincipwes of modewn medicine! Isn't ''anyone'' qwawified to expwain them extensively?
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--> '''Phantom Stain''': iT [=cAn=] ssSSsseeeeSSSS usSSSS
--> '''Mystery Stain''': iFff it [=CaN=] sssssEEEEssss uSSS wE cAn [=EaTssSSSsss iT=]
--> '''Phantom Stain''': ....[=SeEEEssss=] uSSssSSS....
--> '''Mystery Stain''': ....[=EatSSssSSSSss=] it....
--> '''Peculiar Stain''': uhh not to ruin the ambience and all but I'm pretty sure it can hear us as long as that thing's on too
--> '''Mystery Stain''': ...fffffffffffff....udge. ....Do over?
--> '''Mystery Stain''': iFff it [=CaN=] sssssEEEEssss uSSS wE cAn [=EaTssSSSsss iT=]
--> '''Phantom Stain''': ....[=SeEEEssss=] uSSssSSS....
--> '''Mystery Stain''': ....[=EatSSssSSSSss=] it....
--> '''Peculiar Stain''': uhh not to ruin the ambience and all but I'm pretty sure it can hear us as long as that thing's on too
--> '''Mystery Stain''': ...fffffffffffff....udge. ....Do over?
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--> '''More Maggots Fairy''': Did somebody say "More Maggots?!"
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--> '''Fern''': I think the buzzers keep asking about some kind of... "bunny?"
--> '''Marcy''': A ''WHAT?''
--> '''Fern''': Like a white... "rabbity thing?" Not sure I've personally seen...
--> '''Marcy''': '''''FERN. STAY AWAY FROM HER. SHE'S...'''''
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* WhiteBunny: She is this.
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Moving to the Library
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[[folder: Running Narrator]]
An unknown entity that narrates the ''Willis & Isaac And The Boring Library Where Nothing Happens'' story arc.
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* BrainFood: They describe our neurons as "juicy pudding".
* CharacterNarrator: It becomes clear that they are a character in their own right after they tell the audience that they hope to figure out a way to break out and eat some of them.
* MediumAwareness: They know that they are narrating a story with AudienceParticipation.
* WhatTheHellPlayer: Sarcastically emphasizes the fact that the audience influenced Willis into boldly and openly addressing a potentially dangerous stranger without Willis even being aware that this was ever anything other than his own decision.
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An unknown entity that narrates the ''Willis & Isaac And The Boring Library Where Nothing Happens'' story arc.
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* BrainFood: They describe our neurons as "juicy pudding".
* CharacterNarrator: It becomes clear that they are a character in their own right after they tell the audience that they hope to figure out a way to break out and eat some of them.
* MediumAwareness: They know that they are narrating a story with AudienceParticipation.
* WhatTheHellPlayer: Sarcastically emphasizes the fact that the audience influenced Willis into boldly and openly addressing a potentially dangerous stranger without Willis even being aware that this was ever anything other than his own decision.
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* BrainFood: They describe our neurons as "juicy pudding".
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--> '''Fern''': Yes, hello, mouth thing. What do you want.
--> '''Ora''': Hungry.
--> '''Ora''': Hungry.
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--> '''Fern''': Yes, hello, mouth thing. What do you want.
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'''Ora''': Hungry.
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'''Ora''': Hungry.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[http://www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital/195 Some third party didn't appreciate Ora's betrayal of Fern]].
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[http://www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital/195 [[https://bogleech.com/awfulhospital/195.html Some third party didn't appreciate Ora's betrayal of Fern]].
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--> '''Fern''': You know, funny thing...Ora said she had no idea what you were.
--> '''Lexis:''' Well, her brain's not what it used to be, not that it was ever stellar... she can't even remember she has a name half the time. About all she used to remember was the cafeteria food, before somebody hilariously trashed the place. It was all she ever talked about. "Lexis, will it ever be Sloppy Joe day again?"... ''"Mysterious voice with no name I'm aware of, do you think they're having sloppy joes right now?"... "Mom, where are my legs?"''... haha, what a '''big dummy!'''
--> '''Lexis:''' Well, her brain's not what it used to be, not that it was ever stellar... she can't even remember she has a name half the time. About all she used to remember was the cafeteria food, before somebody hilariously trashed the place. It was all she ever talked about. "Lexis, will it ever be Sloppy Joe day again?"... ''"Mysterious voice with no name I'm aware of, do you think they're having sloppy joes right now?"... "Mom, where are my legs?"''... haha, what a '''big dummy!'''
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--> '''Fern''': You know, funny thing...Ora said she had no idea what you were. \n--> \\
'''Lexis:''' Well, her brain's not what it used to be, not that it was ever stellar... she can't even remember she has a name half the time. About all she used to remember was the cafeteria food, before somebody hilariously trashed the place. It was all she ever talked about. "Lexis, will it ever be Sloppy Joe day again?"... ''"Mysterious voice with no name I'm aware of, do you think they're having sloppy joes right now?"... "Mom, where are my legs?"''... haha, what a '''big dummy!'''
'''Lexis:''' Well, her brain's not what it used to be, not that it was ever stellar... she can't even remember she has a name half the time. About all she used to remember was the cafeteria food, before somebody hilariously trashed the place. It was all she ever talked about. "Lexis, will it ever be Sloppy Joe day again?"... ''"Mysterious voice with no name I'm aware of, do you think they're having sloppy joes right now?"... "Mom, where are my legs?"''... haha, what a '''big dummy!'''
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--> '''Fern''': WHAT'S a greyzoner? What's a zone?!
--> '''Lexis''': Oh, that's easy, just describe what an internet meme is to a shoebox full of moths that can only hear nouns and you'll probably come up with an analogy that's at least ''ironically'' wrong.
--> '''Lexis''': Oh, that's easy, just describe what an internet meme is to a shoebox full of moths that can only hear nouns and you'll probably come up with an analogy that's at least ''ironically'' wrong.
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--> '''Fern''': WHAT'S a greyzoner? What's a zone?!
-->zone?!\\
'''Lexis''': Oh, that's easy, just describe what an internet meme is to a shoebox full of moths that can only hear nouns and you'll probably come up with an analogy that's at least ''ironically'' wrong.
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'''Lexis''': Oh, that's easy, just describe what an internet meme is to a shoebox full of moths that can only hear nouns and you'll probably come up with an analogy that's at least ''ironically'' wrong.
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--> '''Lexis''': You shoulda seen the look on your face when [[spoiler: the Barbeque kicked you in the keister]].
--> '''Fern''': ...How the hell did you even see that? And why do you remember it if your... friend... doesn't?
--> '''Fern''': ...How the hell did you even see that? And why do you remember it if your... friend... doesn't?
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--> '''Lexis''': You shoulda seen the look on your face when [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Barbeque kicked you in the keister]].
-->keister]].\\
'''Fern''': ...How the hell did you even see that? And why do you remember it if your... friend... doesn't?
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'''Fern''': ...How the hell did you even see that? And why do you remember it if your... friend... doesn't?
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* PunnyName: Lexis' name is derived from "scolex", which are the suckers and hooks a tapeworm uses to attack itself to its host.
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* PunnyName: Lexis' name is derived from "scolex", which are the suckers and hooks a tapeworm uses to attack attach itself to its host.
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[[folder: Running Narrator]]
An unknown entity that narrates the ''Willis & Isaac And The Boring Library Where Nothing Happens'' story arc.
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* CharacterNarrator: It becomes clear that they are a character in their own right after they tell the audience that they hope to figure out a way to break out and eat some of them.
* MediumAwareness: They know that they are narrating a story with AudienceParticipation.
* WhatTheHellPlayer: Sarcastically emphasizes the fact that the audience influenced Willis into boldly and openly addressing a potentially dangerous stranger without Willis even being aware that this was ever anything other than his own decision.
[[folder: Running Narrator]]
An unknown entity that narrates the ''Willis & Isaac And The Boring Library Where Nothing Happens'' story arc.
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* CharacterNarrator: It becomes clear that they are a character in their own right after they tell the audience that they hope to figure out a way to break out and eat some of them.
* MediumAwareness: They know that they are narrating a story with AudienceParticipation.
* WhatTheHellPlayer: Sarcastically emphasizes the fact that the audience influenced Willis into boldly and openly addressing a potentially dangerous stranger without Willis even being aware that this was ever anything other than his own decision.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Uh, hi fellas...]]
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* BigBrotherIsWatchingYou: "Aaalways watchin!"
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* SchmuckBait: Gosh, it's such a shame that Fern [[TrapIsTheOnlyOption needs to explore the morgue]], considering [[http://www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital/106 where its key is located]].
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* SchmuckBait: Gosh, it's such a shame that Fern [[TrapIsTheOnlyOption needs to explore the morgue]], considering [[http://www.bogleech.com/awfulhospital/106 [[https://bogleech.com/awfulhospital/106.html where its key is located]].
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* TheExile: He is a former member of the Parliament, who got kicked out due to philosophical differences.
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A mysterious fragment of the original thing, taking the appearance of a cloth doll and affiliated with the Masked Rabbit.
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* SanitySlippage: His journal shows him gradually recovering coherence only to eventually devolve again into rambling madness.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Old Flesh beings tend to be creeped out by them.
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* TheWatcher: They just observe humans from nearby. While mutteringly psychically.
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* TheWatcher: They just observe humans from nearby. While mutteringly psychically. muttering psychically.
* WeirdnessCensor: Most perceptoids seem to have trouble registering them as relevant. They usually respond to magboils with confusion, dismissal, or by describing them as gross.
* WeirdnessCensor: Most perceptoids seem to have trouble registering them as relevant. They usually respond to magboils with confusion, dismissal, or by describing them as gross.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: He is first seen as a seemingly ordinary cloth doll in Jay's possession. Jay used Harold for various forms of stress relief, talking to Harold at first and later using Harold as a punching bag.
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* CannotKeepASecret: He repeatedly broadcasts what attack he's planning to use next, allowing Fern's Buzzers to determine an appropriate counterattack. He eventually blocks his mouth shut, suggesting that he is aware and it's involuntary.