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* MaliciousSlander: Towards the Shield Hero, the Three Heroes Church actively try to slander the concept of the shield as a devil in disguise. Each time Naofumi were to do genuine heroism for the public, news of his actions would be framed by the church as evil to slow down whatever support he could gain.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Though he is allowed to govern the rest of the Three Heroes Church after the comatose of Pope Balmus, Cromwell is left universally hated by those part of the Three Heroes Church and all outsiders. The hatred Cromwell garnered comes from the sheer cruelty of his actions, [[DidntThinkThisThrough lack of a long term goal to expand the Three Heroes Church]], and the [[TheCorrupter corruption of innocent]] [[ForcedIntoEvil church members forced to be involved]] with the vilest of crimes.
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* BerserkButton: Having to mention Cromwell's name, or any action related to him, Cullen crunches his face up in anger for how Cromwell's cruelty and ambitions ruined everyone.
* EvenMooksHaveLovedOnes: To other members of the church that have a similar rank to him, and lack the same cruelty as those in the higherups like Cromwell, Cullen cares for the safety of his church members and pities them for the grueling work involved with the corruption of the church.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Though on the side of the Three Heroes Church, he is one of the few recognizable members with no villainous deeds attached with his involvement with the organization's crimes, as he places his disgust towards the crimes that the higher ranking members committed. To other innocent church fellows, Cullen pities them with sympathies at the downfall of their lives working for the organization.
* EvenMooksHaveLovedOnes: To other members of the church that have a similar rank to him, and lack the same cruelty as those in the higherups like Cromwell, Cullen cares for the safety of his church members and pities them for the grueling work involved with the corruption of the church.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Though on the side of the Three Heroes Church, he is one of the few recognizable members with no villainous deeds attached with his involvement with the organization's crimes, as he places his disgust towards the crimes that the higher ranking members committed. To other innocent church fellows, Cullen pities them with sympathies at the downfall of their lives working for the organization.
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!!Brother Cullen
!!!'''Debut:''' Chapter 135/Interlude 20: Subterfuge of the Three Heroes
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!!Brother Cullen
!!!'''Debut:''' Chapter 135/Interlude 20: Subterfuge of the Three Heroes
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* DirtyCoward: As soon as trouble in Graile is spurred and she is unable to find suitable evidence to frame Naofumi and Malty as confederates of their real selves, Sister Amelia flees Graile in hopes of avoiding the upstart of a rebellion. When Sister Amelia does return back to Graile in chapter 110, she makes sure to bring an army of the Three Heroes Church as back up to ensure victory and her own safety.
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** As soon as trouble in Graile is spurred and she is unable to find suitable evidence to frame Naofumi and Malty as confederates of their real selves, Sister Amelia flees Graile in hopes of avoiding the upstart of a rebellion. When Sister Amelia does return back to Graile in chapter 110, she makes sure to bring an army of the Three Heroes Church as back up to ensure victory and her ownsafety.safety.
** After getting a lucky arrow shot InTheBack of Malty in chapter 133, Sister Amelia is quick to flee from engaging in more arrow shots out of fear from Malty generating a [Hellfire Ballista] as payback for what had happened. Even when Malty is left tired out after firing her powerful fire spell, Sister Amelia makes no attempts to confront her again, based on the fear of her own life.
** As soon as trouble in Graile is spurred and she is unable to find suitable evidence to frame Naofumi and Malty as confederates of their real selves, Sister Amelia flees Graile in hopes of avoiding the upstart of a rebellion. When Sister Amelia does return back to Graile in chapter 110, she makes sure to bring an army of the Three Heroes Church as back up to ensure victory and her own
** After getting a lucky arrow shot InTheBack of Malty in chapter 133, Sister Amelia is quick to flee from engaging in more arrow shots out of fear from Malty generating a [Hellfire Ballista] as payback for what had happened. Even when Malty is left tired out after firing her powerful fire spell, Sister Amelia makes no attempts to confront her again, based on the fear of her own life.
* InTheBack: Just as Malty charges up a [Hydrosphere] to set out the fire near Zylden's prison cell, Sister Amelia makes her appearance behind Malty's back to fire an arrow to wound her in chapter 133.
* OhCrap: Sister Amelia's face widens into fear and shock from the realization that firing an arrow onto Malty's arm did not weaken her in chapter 133, but instead gave fury to the latter to charge up a [Hellfire Ballista] as retaliation to kill her,
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** Rather than to deal with the rebellion uprising in Graile, she leaves all of her church templars and slave fighters to do the fighting, while she takes her time to flee from all the conflict in chapter109.109.
** Once again in chapter 133, Sister Amelia ditches attempting to engage Mein in more arrow shots out of the fear that the latter could kill her with a dangerous fire spell. Even when Mein is in a HeroicRROD, Sister Amelia is left too afraid to look back and finish Mein in her weakened state.
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** Once again in chapter 133, Sister Amelia ditches attempting to engage Mein in more arrow shots out of the fear that the latter could kill her with a dangerous fire spell. Even when Mein is in a HeroicRROD, Sister Amelia is left too afraid to look back and finish Mein in her weakened state.
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* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Downplayed. On top of her being given an AdaptationalVillainy for her more active role in ''FanFic/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincess'', she gets to have a small PetTheDog moment where she gives a remorseful look at a dead church templar that was unnecessarily killed by Consevatie, while Sister Amelia's canon counterpart had too brief of a screen time to have nice moments.
* AdaptationalJerkass: By ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'', the worst of Sister Amelia was her being smug in denying Naofumi his class upgrade, while the version of her in this fanfic portrays her as a dangerous fanatic that screams for her church allies to fight for their organization's cause to kill the Shield Hero, and has a FantasticRacism disdain near Raphtalia.
* AdaptationalJerkass: By ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'', the worst of Sister Amelia was her being smug in denying Naofumi his class upgrade, while the version of her in this fanfic portrays her as a dangerous fanatic that screams for her church allies to fight for their organization's cause to kill the Shield Hero, and has a FantasticRacism disdain near Raphtalia.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Despite having many guards to watch over Balafon, they slack off on their jobs and instead take casual breaks, since most of the people in Balafon follow their given orders without question or disruption.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Though Sister Amelia was correct on SpottingTheThread of the Shield Hero's involvement with the mountain landslide in chapter 131, her decision to convince Consevatie to send his men to stop Naofumi from crossing over to Siltvelt ends up being a fatal miscalculation that only serves to be self-defeating, even if her advice seemed smart on the surface.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Witnessing Consevatie murder a church templar in chapter 131, Sister Amelia questions if the move Consevatie pulled was wise for both their strategical value and the rest of their remaining allies. Looking at the dead templar, Sister Amelia gives a remorseful look to give respect to his loyalty for Three Heroes Church, and the unnecessary death given to him.
* HumanizingTears: Downplayed. She does not cry, but a glimmer of remorse sparkles in her eyes to signify her standards and respect to a church templar's needless death at the hands of Consevatie in chapter 131.
* HyperCompetentSidekick: Contrast to Consevatie being a complete idiot that leads his knights on the basis that everyone around him is an NPC, Sister Amelia, one of the many allies that stick with him, exhibits better competence for her worries and intellect providing strategic value, rather than a pursuit of blind hedonism like him.
* HyperCompetentSidekick: Contrast to Consevatie being a complete idiot that leads his knights on the basis that everyone around him is an NPC, Sister Amelia, one of the many allies that stick with him, exhibits better competence for her worries and intellect providing strategic value, rather than a pursuit of blind hedonism like him.
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* NeverSpeakIllOfTheDead: Though the church templar displayed no redeeming qualities by his lifetime, his unnecessary death is what spurs Sister Amelia to give out her condolences towards him being a great templar, despite Mein viewing him to be too fanatical for his own good.
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* OnlySaneByComparison: Compared to the many blind zealots in the Three Heroes Church focused only on furthering their beliefs, and Consevatie being too busy fantasizing his false victories at the expense of others, Sister Amelia thinks the clearest out of everyone for the effort and caution she puts in the actions she takes. Though better than most of her church comrades, it does not excuse Sister Amelia in also being a zealot that constantly rages her fanaticism onto others.
* PetTheDog: After spending most of her time acting as a fanatical {{Jerkass}} only interested in the expansion of the Three Heroes Church, she gets to have a redeeming moment in which she has an EvenEvilHasStandards to Consevatie murdering a church templar who was loyal to their cause in chapter 131.
* PetTheDog: After spending most of her time acting as a fanatical {{Jerkass}} only interested in the expansion of the Three Heroes Church, she gets to have a redeeming moment in which she has an EvenEvilHasStandards to Consevatie murdering a church templar who was loyal to their cause in chapter 131.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Even though parts of the information Jackson have to her had plot holes, or that important details were kept away from her in chapter 131, Sister Amelia manages to come into a correct conclusion where the Shield Hero used Bed-Chan's roots to cause mountain landslide that killed most of House Consevatie's knights.
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* SmarterThanYouLook: Being a loud {{Jerkass}} that screams for her fanaticism to fuel the zealots of the Three Heroes Church, she is assumed to be too caught up in her beliefs to have an intellectual mind. By chapter 131, Sister Amelia gets to demonstrate a bit of her intellect by understanding the plot holes to Jackson's message delivered to her, and making a [[RightForTheWrongReasons deduction that summarizes the entire mountain landslide ordeal as an organized plan]].
* SpottingTheThread: Hearing from Jackson of the news regarding a mountain landslide that killed the knights accompanying Lady Ebonheart, Sister Amelia makes an excellent deduction to everything that appears wrong by questioning how Jackson ended up being the only messenger, and the Bed of Chaos having the intelligence to outsmart soldiers.
* TearsOfRemorse: Downplays. Her eyes are nott pushed enough to cry, but they become filled with a remorseful look to give a sign of respect towards a church templar that Consevatie did not need to kill, just so his own superiority is flexed.
* SpottingTheThread: Hearing from Jackson of the news regarding a mountain landslide that killed the knights accompanying Lady Ebonheart, Sister Amelia makes an excellent deduction to everything that appears wrong by questioning how Jackson ended up being the only messenger, and the Bed of Chaos having the intelligence to outsmart soldiers.
* TearsOfRemorse: Downplays. Her eyes are nott pushed enough to cry, but they become filled with a remorseful look to give a sign of respect towards a church templar that Consevatie did not need to kill, just so his own superiority is flexed.
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* CassandraTruth: Despite his claims as a changed man that wants to work with Naofumi to save all the common folks from the Three Heroes Church, his altruism is dismissed completely by Mein, as she thinks his motives lie only on revenge to the people who have wronged him and opportunism to grasp onto powerful figures.
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** Since joining Naofumi's party in chapter 128, Jackson faces distrust of his facts from him and Mein, since they hold suspicion that the provided information is either to manipulate them or is false. However, by slowly interacting with each other and Jackson explaining himself, his provided knowledge of the Three Heroes Church begins to hold water in their eyes.
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** Since joining Naofumi's party in chapter 128, Jackson faces distrust of his facts from him and Mein, since they hold suspicion that the provided information is either to manipulate them or is false. However, by slowly interacting with each other and Jackson explaining himself, his provided knowledge of the Three Heroes Church begins to hold water in their eyes.
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* WeWouldHaveToldYou: Since he has intel related to Consevatie and the conflicts with the Three Heroes Church, Mein questions Jackson in chapter 130 as to why the latter never told the group all of his insider knowledge. To Jackson's defense, he makes it clear that the more secretive information he has is hearsay, and whatever information he has concrete proof of will likely get dismissed because of Mein and Naofumi's distrust.
-->'''Jackson:''' I just wasn't these okay? All I heard are what the servants and guards mumbled to each other in gossip. Hearsay! You people aren't exactly receptive to what I say. Even if I remembered it earlier, you'd all accuse me of trying to lie to you if I said something sooner.
-->'''Jackson:''' I just wasn't these okay? All I heard are what the servants and guards mumbled to each other in gossip. Hearsay! You people aren't exactly receptive to what I say. Even if I remembered it earlier, you'd all accuse me of trying to lie to you if I said something sooner.
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* TheBait: To lure the Three Heroes Church into Naofumi's PitTrap in chapter 129, Jackson is given the role of the FakeDefector to convince the Three Heroes Church into following him to fight off Naofumi's group. Eventually once reinforcements are called, Naofumi would then lure all the soldiers to get themselves killed in an artificial cliffside formed by Bed-Chan's roots.
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* DisneyVillainDeath: Many members of the Three Heroes Church, and House Consevatie's men get killed via falling in chapter 129, due to Naofumi leading them into his PitTrap near the cliffside of Balafon.
* BetrayalInsurance: Due to the Naofumi and Mein's group not trusting him, as they had once experienced first-hand of his BetrayalByInaction back in Lute Village, they implant a fire rune kill-switch onto his chest as a safety precaution to ensure Jackson does not betray them in their plan to lure the Three Heroes Church into a trap in chapter 129.
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** Coming back to rejoin the Three Heroes Church in chapter 129, his old knight commander recognizes him to be a traitor that betrayed the church for Naofumi's party. However, because the old knight lacked physical evidence to provide proof of Jackson's betrayal, other members of the Three Heroes Church are forced to accept Jackson to see how truthful he is in giving information to the Shield Hero.
** Despite his claims as a changed man that wants to work with Naofumi to save all the common folks from the Three Heroes Church, his altruism is dismissed completely by Mein, as she thinks his motives lie only on revenge to the people who have wronged him and opportunism to grasp onto powerful figures.
** Coming back to rejoin the Three Heroes Church in chapter 129, his old knight commander recognizes him to be a traitor that betrayed the church for Naofumi's party. However, because the old knight lacked physical evidence to provide proof of Jackson's betrayal, other members of the Three Heroes Church are forced to accept Jackson to see how truthful he is in giving information to the Shield Hero.
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**CassandraTruth: Despite his claims as a changed man that wants to work with Naofumi to save all the common folks from the Three Heroes Church, his altruism is dismissed completely by Mein, as she thinks his motives lie only on revenge to the people who have wronged him and opportunism to grasp onto powerful figures.
** Coming back to rejoin the Three Heroes Church in chapter 129, his old knight commander recognizes him to be a traitor that betrayed the church for Naofumi's party. However, because the old knight lacked physical evidence to provide proof of Jackson's betrayal, other members of the Three Heroes Church are forced to accept Jackson to see how truthful he is in giving information to the Shield Hero.figures.
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!!Old Knight
!!!'''Debut:''' Chapter 127/Chapter 109: To Boldly Flee
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* BigNo: Once Jackson showed his true allegiance with the Shield Hero in chapter 129, and betrayed the Three Heroes Church by leading them into a trap, the old knight takes the chance to say a BigNo to [[IWarnedYou Mark for not believing his]] CassandraTruth.
* BoomHeadshot: The old knight meets his end by Ren shooting him by the head, causing his fall onto the ground.
* CassandraTruth: Jackson coming back to rejoin the Three Heroes Church in chapter 129, old knight commander recognizes him to be a traitor that betrayed the church for Naofumi's party. However, because the old knight lacked physical evidence to provide proof of Jackson's betrayal, other members of the Three Heroes Church are forced to accept Jackson to see how truthful he is in giving information to the Shield Hero.
* CowardiceCallout: He calls the commoners fearing for their lives as ungrateful and unfaithful to the Three Heroes Church's commands to kill the Shield Hero, until the old knight is KilledMidSentence that shuts down all his further insults.
* IWarnedYou: As Jackson returns back with the Three Heroes Church in chapter 129, the old knight yells out loud to all his church colleagues of Jackson being a traitor that sided with the Shield Hero. Unfortunately for the old knight, he is not believed by anyone, due to lacking concrete evidence. By the time people believed the old knight, most of the armies were dead by the trap Jackson lured everyone into, and the only celebration the old knight can make is the proof of his truth being correct.
* KilledMidSentence: While he does his CowardiceCallout for the commoners of the Three Heroes Church refusing to take action to kill the Shield Hero, the old knight's insults are suddenly cut short by a bullet booming through his head in chapter 129.
* NoNameGiven: Since his introduction, he has only been called the "Old Knight", because nobody had ever said his real name, even when he died to Ren.
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!!!'''Debut:''' Chapter 127/Chapter 109: To Boldly Flee
!!!'''Origin:''' Unknown
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* BigNo: Once Jackson showed his true allegiance with the Shield Hero in chapter 129, and betrayed the Three Heroes Church by leading them into a trap, the old knight takes the chance to say a BigNo to [[IWarnedYou Mark for not believing his]] CassandraTruth.
* BoomHeadshot: The old knight meets his end by Ren shooting him by the head, causing his fall onto the ground.
* CassandraTruth: Jackson coming back to rejoin the Three Heroes Church in chapter 129, old knight commander recognizes him to be a traitor that betrayed the church for Naofumi's party. However, because the old knight lacked physical evidence to provide proof of Jackson's betrayal, other members of the Three Heroes Church are forced to accept Jackson to see how truthful he is in giving information to the Shield Hero.
* CowardiceCallout: He calls the commoners fearing for their lives as ungrateful and unfaithful to the Three Heroes Church's commands to kill the Shield Hero, until the old knight is KilledMidSentence that shuts down all his further insults.
* IWarnedYou: As Jackson returns back with the Three Heroes Church in chapter 129, the old knight yells out loud to all his church colleagues of Jackson being a traitor that sided with the Shield Hero. Unfortunately for the old knight, he is not believed by anyone, due to lacking concrete evidence. By the time people believed the old knight, most of the armies were dead by the trap Jackson lured everyone into, and the only celebration the old knight can make is the proof of his truth being correct.
* KilledMidSentence: While he does his CowardiceCallout for the commoners of the Three Heroes Church refusing to take action to kill the Shield Hero, the old knight's insults are suddenly cut short by a bullet booming through his head in chapter 129.
* NoNameGiven: Since his introduction, he has only been called the "Old Knight", because nobody had ever said his real name, even when he died to Ren.
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