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* CursedWithAwesome: Her skin glows involuntarily, which she has to hide at the risk of becoming an outcast. At the same time, she can blind people and shoot beams of light from her hands.
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* CursedWithAwesome: Her skin glows involuntarily, which she has to hide at the risk of becoming which, once everyone knows her secret, makes her an outcast. At the same time, she can blind people and shoot beams of light from her hands.
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!Spencer Fitzgerald
One of Josie's classmates. He invokes the ire of student and teacher alike, being irreverent, lazy, and unbelievable egotistical.
* AssholeVictim: He and his friends pick a fight with Josie, resulting in a humiliating defeat.
* TheBully: Targeting people practically indiscriminately, outside of his circle of like-minded friends.
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One of Josie's classmates. He invokes the ire of student and teacher alike, being irreverent, lazy, and unbelievable egotistical.
* AssholeVictim: He and his friends pick a fight with Josie, resulting in a humiliating defeat.
* TheBully: Targeting people practically indiscriminately, outside of his circle of like-minded friends.
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!Spencer Fitzgerald
One of Josie's classmates. He invokes the ire of student and teacher alike, being irreverent, lazy, and unbelievable egotistical.
* AssholeVictim: He and his friends pick a fight with Josie, resulting in a humiliating defeat.
* TheBully: Targeting people practically indiscriminately, outside of his circle of like-minded friends.
One of Josie's classmates. He invokes the ire of student and teacher alike, being irreverent, lazy, and unbelievable egotistical.
* AssholeVictim: He and his friends pick a fight with Josie, resulting in a humiliating defeat.
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One of Josie's classmates. He invokes the ire of student and teacher alike, being irreverent, lazy, and unbelievable egotistical.
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One of Josie's classmates. He invokes the ire of student and teacher alike, being irreverent, lazy, and unbelievable egotistical.
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* TheBully: Targeting people practically indiscriminately, outside of his circle of like-minded friends.
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One of Josie's classmates. He invokes the ire of student and teacher alike, being irreverent, lazy, and unbelievable egotistical.
* AssholeVictim: He and his friends pick a fight with Josie, resulting in a humiliating defeat.
* TheBully: Targeting people practically indiscriminately, outside of his circle of like-minded friends.
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Diane's personal assistant and right hand woman.
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Diane's personal assistant and right hand woman.
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Diane's personal assistant and right hand woman.
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* ServileSnarker
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Diane's personal assistant and right hand woman.
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database. He turns out to be [[spoiler:working under a woman named Mrs. King, implanted into the FSRA to prevent them from catching on to her.]]
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At some point, he falls in with a group of mysterious people who tamper with him in ways they probably shouldn't. He appears in the story as an armored Anomaly who appears atop the Space Needle, known at first only by the word etched into his breastplate. Shortly after appearing, he launches an offensive against the Seattle police, prompting Josie to take action.
His FRSA designation is "2017bw."
His FRSA designation is "2017bw."
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At some point, he falls in with a group of mysterious people who tamper with him in ways they probably shouldn't. He appears in the story as an armored Anomaly who appears atop the Space Needle, Seattle in a suit of armor, known at first only by the word etched into his breastplate. Shortly after appearing, he launches an offensive against the Seattle police, prompting Josie to take action.
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A fey woman living in Chelan, Washington, who works for someone known as "Mrs. King." Drew came into contact with her several years before the story begins, and blames her for turning him into the raving lunatic he became. She falls under suspicion from the FSRA following the Godhead crisis.
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* MysticalWhiteHair
* QuirkyCurls
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* UncannyValley: Her body language is slow and smooth, in a way that makes Lee uncomfortable.
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A sociology teacher at Overton Academy. She's known around the school for being Shannon is friendly and offering helpful to help talk students through their problems.
her students, going out of her way to give them advice if they ask for it.
* BlueCollarWarlock: Or, something like it.
* [[spoiler:TheMole: He's in the FSRA to prevent the organization from learning whatever secret Lucinda and Mrs. King are keeping.]]
* OlderThanTheyLook: Josie describes him as being young-looking and handsome, but he's been speaking English for about 45 years.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Josie describes him as being young-looking and handsome, but he's been speaking English for about 45 years.
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A fey woman living in Chelan, Washington, who works for someone known as "Mrs. King." Drew came into contact with her several years before the story begins, and blames her for turning him into the raving lunatic he became. She falls under suspicion from the FSRA following the Godhead crisis.
* QuirkyCurls
* UncannyValley: Her body language is slow and smooth, in a way that makes Lee uncomfortable.
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A fey woman living in Chelan, Washington, who works for someone known as "Mrs. King." Drew came into contact with her several years before the story begins, and blames her for turning him into the raving lunatic he became. She falls under suspicion from the FSRA following the Godhead crisis.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:He dies three chapters after his first appearance]]
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: While Alexander is okay with breaking the rules when necessary, Curtis values his career and doesn't want to risk it.
* TeamDad: He chides his coworkers, including his boss, for a number of things. He means well, though.
* TeamDad: He chides his coworkers, including his boss, for a number of things. He means well, though.
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Shannon's friend and bandmate in high school and college. She was one of the witnesses of the Olympic Highway Demon (known officially as 1992ag). She died sometime before the story begins.
*PosthumousCharacter
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** PsychologistTeacher: She helps Josie with her sleeping problems in the beginning of the story.
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A mysterious armored Anomaly who appears atop the Space Needle, known only by the word etched into his breastplate. Shortly after appearing, he launches an offensive against the Seattle police, prompting Josie to take action.
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A friend of Shannon's from high school.
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