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* ThisIsReality: Tunuva has trained and drilled for decades to be an excellent combatant, but it is a shock to find how ''grueling'' the reality of sustained warfare against the wyrms is. The suffering caused by their attacks and the inability to ever stop fighting does away with the pleasure and satisfaction she had always felt by a fight well fought.
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* AmbiguousEnding: It isn't ''confirmed'' that she is the new Maiden Officiant that Nikeya speaks to. But it's a possibility.
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* AmbiguousEnding: It isn't ''confirmed'' that she is The description of the new Maiden Officiant that Officiant's visit to Nikeya speaks to. But it's a possibility.implies that she is Nikeya, but it isn't confirmed.
* PsychicLink:
** She can speak with dragons and call them from a long (though not infinite) distance through her mind.
** She also shares a mental link with Glorian when they dream. Dumai thinks of her as a dream-sister until Canthe gets in (as Glorian's ancestor) and uses it to deceive her.
** She can speak with dragons and call them from a long (though not infinite) distance through her mind.
** She also shares a mental link with Glorian when they dream. Dumai thinks of her as a dream-sister until Canthe gets in (as Glorian's ancestor) and uses it to deceive her.
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** Nikeya's epilogue suggests that rather than live (and be the cause of continued civil strive in Seiiki) or die on the beach, Dumai chose to return to Ipyeda and become its Maiden Officiant. Maybe.
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** Nikeya's epilogue suggests that rather than live (and be the cause of continued civil strive in Seiiki) or die on the beach, Dumai chose to return to Ipyeda and become its Maiden Officiant. Maybe.
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* TragicVillain: She manipulates Tunuva at every turn, engineers the death of Siyu's lover to drive her out of the Priory, tries to break the trust between Tunuva and Esbar, inflicts a permanent magical injury on Tunuva, and attempts to rob the Priory of the Rising Jewel. Through it all, Canthe also shows genuine empathy for Tunuva's situation as a long-bereaved mother herself and admits that she didn't steal Wulf back because she knew he was happy with the Glenns. Although she can't forgive Canthe, Tunuva does recognize that she is probably the loneliest person in the entire world, and continuing in that state is punishment enough.
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* SelfServingMemory: Her description of her past involves betrayal by her lover and banishment from her homeland. She leaves out the fact that it was her adopted son and he only became her lover because she tricked him into thinking he was the woman he was actually in love with (Galian might have been dishonest, but everyone in the future agrees that he didn't deserve ''that''.)
* ThenLetMeBeEvil: After Tunuva's final rejection, Canthe resolves aloud to become the wicked witch of the woods who is hated by all.
* TragicVillain: She manipulates Tunuva at every turn, engineers the death of Siyu's lover to drive her out of the Priory, tries to break the trust between Tunuva and Esbar,inflicts her plans result in Tunuva incurring a permanent magical injury on Tunuva, injury, and she attempts to rob the Priory of the Rising Jewel. Through it all, Canthe also shows genuine empathy for Tunuva's situation as a long-bereaved mother herself and admits that she didn't steal take Wulf back from the Glenns because she knew saw that he was happy with the Glenns. there. Although she can't forgive Canthe, Tunuva does recognize that she is probably the loneliest person in the entire world, and continuing in that state is punishment enough.enough.
* {{Shapeshifting}}: She's implied to be the female wolf that was guarding baby Armul in the haithwood. She can't do it for most of the novel because her supply of sterren is nearly gone, but the return of the Long-Haired Star replenishes it.
* ThenLetMeBeEvil: After Tunuva's final rejection, Canthe resolves aloud to become the wicked witch of the woods who is hated by all.
* TragicVillain: She manipulates Tunuva at every turn, engineers the death of Siyu's lover to drive her out of the Priory, tries to break the trust between Tunuva and Esbar,
* {{Shapeshifting}}: She's implied to be the female wolf that was guarding baby Armul in the haithwood. She can't do it for most of the novel because her supply of sterren is nearly gone, but the return of the Long-Haired Star replenishes it.
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* ImperiledInPregnancy: The beliefs of Virtudom put her in the unfortunate position of ''having'' to become pregnant as soon as possible and flee from stronghold to stronghold while increasingly hampered by the progress of her daughter's growth. She's forced to give birth in a besieged cave while her soldiers are burned and buried on the plains outside.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: He's faced some suspicion in his life over being a foundling from the haithwood and has learned to keep it secret. Karlsten, one of his lith-brothers, openly despises him for it and in the end Wulfert is forced to kill him.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: He's faced some suspicion in his life over being a foundling from the haithwood and has learned to keep it secret. Karlsten, one of his lith-brothers, openly despises him for it and in it. Bardholt is eventually convinced to send him to the end Wulfert is forced sanctarians for examination just to kill him.put rumor to rest (although the destruction of the fleet prevents it).
* SecretKeeper: He becomes the holder of two precious secrets by the end of the novel. The first is that he is Sabran VII's real father, not Glorian's elderly husband. The second is knowledge of the Priory and the falsity of Virtudom. He knows he will have to take both to his grave.
* SoleSurvivor: When Fýredel attacks the royal fleet, the people who survive the initial fires are killed by the freezing waters of a northern sea in winter. Wulf is the only one who makes it to shore on a piece of flotsam, and even with that he's barely alive when some locals find him.
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* RefugeInAudacity: As a girl, Sabran V goads her by asking if she'd like to be queen. Young Sabran answers that she couldn't unless Sabran V was dead--treasonously speaking of the monarch's death ''to her face'' because her great-grandmother couldn't punish another Berethnet.
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* RefugeInAudacity: As a girl, Sabran V goads her by asking if she'd like to be queen. Young Sabran answers that she couldn't unless Sabran V was dead--treasonously speaking of the monarch's death ''to her face'' because her great-grandmother couldn't punish execute another Berethnet.
* TemptingFate: When arguing with Sabran about Glorian's upbringing, Bardholt says that they could give her the childhood that he and his wife were denied because they're still in their fifties and probably have a good few years left. It isn't long after that when he and Sabran are killed at sea.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Her first appearance (after her birth) is halfway up the Orange Tree. The other sisters consider this a serious act of sacrilege, demonstrating both Siyu's adventerous nature but also her faltering belief in the Priory's purpose.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Her first appearance (after her birth) is halfway up the Orange Tree. The other sisters consider this a serious act of sacrilege, demonstrating both Siyu's adventerous adventurous nature but also her faltering belief in the Priory's purpose.
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* ReformedButRejected: She develops a sense of real loyalty to Dumai before Dumai trusts her fully--Dumai points out that even saving her life could have been a way to put her under the Kuposa's control by indebting her. This causes a rift between them that isn't fully resolved for a number of chapters.
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* ReformedButRejected: ReformedButRejected:
** She develops a sense of real loyalty to Dumai before Dumai trusts her fully--Dumai points out that even saving her life could have been a way to put her under the Kuposa's control by indebting her. This causes a rift between them that isn't fully resolved for a number ofchapters.chapters.
** Played with in the epilogue when the Grand Empress points out how Nikeya managed to turn herself into the dowager queen of Seiiki by marrying Dumai in a secret ceremony. Fortunately, she's also heard the manner in which Dumai cut ties with the River Lord, and that allows the Empress to trust her.
** She develops a sense of real loyalty to Dumai before Dumai trusts her fully--Dumai points out that even saving her life could have been a way to put her under the Kuposa's control by indebting her. This causes a rift between them that isn't fully resolved for a number of
** Played with in the epilogue when the Grand Empress points out how Nikeya managed to turn herself into the dowager queen of Seiiki by marrying Dumai in a secret ceremony. Fortunately, she's also heard the manner in which Dumai cut ties with the River Lord, and that allows the Empress to trust her.
* UnexpectedSuccessor: With the Jorodu and Suzumai dead and the Grand Empress retired, Nikeya is the closest thing to a legitimate successor as the daughter of a noble house who was recognizably married to the last surviving Noziken, Dumai (missing and presumed dead). That makes her the Dowager Queen and the Grand Empress is willing to recognize her as such because Nikeya is a good person and a good politician. Nikeya adjusts her role by declaring herself the first Warlord of Seiiki to symbolize the country's continuing struggle against wyrmkind.
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* NoodleIncident: The way he executed Verthing Bloodblade is infamous but never described by anyone in precise terms, and it took him a week of rumination to decide on that method. Glorian says that Bardholt "gave him wings". That might mean he threw Bloodblade off a cliff--or that he made him a blood eagle.[[note]]a particularly nasty form of ritual execution the Vikings were reputed to have practiced[[/note]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: She lost Sabran (Sabran I of Inys, that is), likely by simply ''outliving'' her as an immortal. It's also likely that Canthe never got to have a relationship with her either, given what we know from ''Priory'' about how she left Inys.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: She lost Sabran (Sabran I of Inys, that is), likely is) by simply ''outliving'' her as an immortal. It's also likely that Canthe never got to have a relationship with her either, given what we know from ''Priory'' about how she left Inys.
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* MysticalPregnancy: Unora imbibes a tear from the dragon Pajati the White and then conceived a child (unwittingly) with a man whose family had an ancient connection with dragons. These two things gave her child a strong connection with magic and the ability to communicate telepathically with dragons.
* UndyingLoyalty: He will follow Dumai anywhere no matter how dangerous it is. In the end he allows himself to die so that she can survive.
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* CruelMercy: When she realizes that her father contracted a form of the plague in order to make his pact with Taugran, Nikeya sits and watches him die in agony rather than give him a quick end.
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* CruelMercy: When she realizes that her father contracted a form of the plague in order to make his pact with Taugran, Nikeya sits and watches him die in agony rather than give him a quick end.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed Dumai is to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against the wyrms, while meanwhile he uses it as an opportunity to keep consolidating power.
* HeroicLineage: Her clan carries a thread of siden-granted power--not much, but enough to use the Rising Jewel and to keep them immune to the plague.
* HeroicLineage: Her clan carries a thread of siden-granted power--not much, but enough to use the Rising Jewel and to keep them immune to the plague.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed the risks Dumai is takes in her efforts to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against protect Seiiki from the wyrms, while meanwhile he uses it as an opportunity to keep consolidating power.
* HeroicLineage: Her clan carries a thread of siden-granted power--not much, but enough to use the Rising Jewel and to keepthem her immune to the plague.
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* ReformedButRejected: She develops a sense of real loyalty to Dumai before Dumai trusts her fully--Dumai points out that even saving her life could have been a way to put her under the Kuposa's control by indebting her. This causes a rift between them that isn't fully resolved for a number of chapters.
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* AbusiveParents: He controlled Nikeya in a "carrot-and-stick" fashion, alternating harsh rebukes with gentleness so that she would carry out his plans in hopes of gaining his affections. He finally goes too far when he insults her late mother.
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* WouldHurtAChild: He trusses up Suzumai in a temple gate as a ritual sacrifice for Taugran. Dumai and Nikeya are unable to save her.
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* AllLovingHero: Tunuva is a deeply empathetic person. She advocates for Canthe within the Priory and goes out of her way to make the other woman feel welcome, she is more open to allowing Anyso to live there, and loves Siyu as a daughter. When Tunuva confesses to kissing Canthe, Esbar forgives her because she doubts Canthe could help falling in love with someone who has so much love for those around her.
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* TraumaButton: Honey. She found the dead father of her child beneath a hive he was collecting from, bleeding into the honey, and her son presumably carried off by a wild lion.
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* TraumaButton: Honey. She found the dead father of her child beneath a hive he was collecting from, bleeding into the honey, and her son presumably carried off by a wild lion. It unbalances her when she's having a contentious discussion with King Kediko and some honeycomb is brought to him.
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* TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed: Like other Berethnet queens, she suffers from "shadows" that evoke clinical depression.
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* TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed: Like other Berethnet queens, she suffers from "shadows" that evoke clinical depression. (Canthe mentions similar "shadows," implying that it's a side-effect of lacking siden.)
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* CallForward: Esbar banishes her from ever setting foot in the Priory again. Canthe points out that if she does ever choose to return, they'll ''never know'' because she can change her appearance--but she does promise not to do so while Tunuva lives. (This accounts for her having visited again under her real name of Kalyba during Ead's youth in ''Literature/ThePrioryOfTheOrangeTree.)
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* CallForward: Esbar banishes her from ever setting foot in the Priory again. Canthe points out that if she does ever choose to return, they'll ''never know'' because she can change her appearance--but she does promise not to do so while Tunuva lives. (This accounts for her having visited again under her real name of Kalyba during Ead's youth in ''Literature/ThePrioryOfTheOrangeTree.''Literature/ThePrioryOfTheOrangeTree''.)
* AChildShallLeadThem: He was maneuvered onto the throne at age nine, but when a man arrived with a bunch of good ideas about irrigation and agricultural management, young Jorodu appointed him the River Lord. (Unfortunately, he was still too young to protect the man--Unora's father--from clan Kuposa's countermoves.)
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* CruelMercy: When she realizes that her father contracted a form of the plague in order to make his pact with Taugran, Nikeya sits and watches him die in agony rather than give him a quick end.
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* SeriouslyScruffy: For most of the story she is impeccably groomed because her beauty is one of her tools. When she turns up in Dumai's "court" after having traveled on foot for days, she's so filthy, thin, and exhausted that Dumai barely even recognizes her.
* ThisIsUnforgiveable: She abandons her father for good when she learns that he was the one who hired Emperor Jorodu's killers.
* ThisIsUnforgiveable: She abandons her father for good when she learns that he was the one who hired Emperor Jorodu's killers.
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* SeriouslyScruffy: For most of the story she is impeccably groomed because her beauty is one of her tools. When she turns up in Dumai's "court" after having traveled on foot for days, she's so filthy, thin, and exhausted that Dumai barely even recognizes her.
*ThisIsUnforgiveable: ThisIsUnforgivable: She abandons her father for good when she learns that he was the one who hired Emperor Jorodu's killers.killers and hid an anti-wyrm weapon that could have saved many lives.
* WhatTheHellHero: She and Dumai fall out during their journey to the North over two matters. One is that Dumai still refuses to trust her even after Nikeya saved her life and they shared a kiss. The other is that Dumai left Seiiki so soon during an especially perilous time over a prophetic dream (which ends in disaster).
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* WhatTheHellHero: She and Dumai fall out during their journey to the North over two matters. One is that Dumai still refuses to trust her even after Nikeya saved her life and they shared a kiss. The other is that Dumai left Seiiki so soon during an especially perilous time over a prophetic dream (which ends in disaster).
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* SkewedPriorities: Dumai soon learns that the previous River Lord--her grandfather--was actually an expert in irrigation and water management. Kuposa doesn't seem to do any of that himself.
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* SkewedPriorities: Dumai soon learns that the previous River Lord--her grandfather--was actually an expert in irrigation and water management. Kuposa doesn't seem to do any of that himself. He's so obsessed with his own power that he steals a new siege weapon sent as a gift by the Lacustrines because having a defense against wyrms would improve Dumai's standing.
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** After her parents' untimely death, Glorian makes a quick marriage to the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda of Yscal (when the original betrothed prince dies) because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys. Most of the court has the grace to feel ashamed that they're asking a girl just of age to marry a man old enough to be her grandfather, but she goes through it anyway after getting an ironclad excuse to back out (namely, evidence that he's a wood-worshipper) because Inys still needs the cash. Fortunately, Guma isn't interested in sleeping with her either and is pleased she's already "arranged" to get pregnant--he just sleeps chastely in her room for one night to give a plausible illusion that he's the father.
* AmbiguouslyGay: It's hinted that she's aromantic and asexual. In a private argument, she tells her mother that she's never wanted a companion (despite having reached the age where she'd start feeling those desires) and expresses no interest in sexual intercourse for its own sake. Though not repulsed by the act, she only seems to engage in it as a matter of dynastic necessity.
* AmbiguouslyGay: It's hinted that she's aromantic and asexual. In a private argument, she tells her mother that she's never wanted a companion (despite having reached the age where she'd start feeling those desires) and expresses no interest in sexual intercourse for its own sake. Though not repulsed by the act, she only seems to engage in it as a matter of dynastic necessity.
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** After her parents' untimely death, Glorian makes a quick marriage to the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda of Yscal (when the original betrothed prince dies) because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys. Most of the court has the grace to feel ashamed that they're asking a girl just of age to marry a man old enough to be her grandfather, but she goes through it anyway after getting an ironclad excuse to back out (namely, evidence that he's a wood-worshipper) because Inys still needs the his cash. Fortunately, Guma isn't interested in sleeping with her either and is pleased she's already "arranged" to get pregnant--he just sleeps chastely in her room for one night to give a plausible illusion that he's the father.
* AmbiguouslyGay: It's hinted that she's aromantic and asexual. In a private argument, she tells her mother that she's never wanted a companion (despite having reached the age where she'd start feeling those desires) and expresses no interest in sexual intercourse for its own sake.Though She finds the thought of the act frightening and repulsive, although she finds it tolerable with a close friend (Wulf) who puts a great deal of effort into making her feel comfortable and calm. Even so, she knows she's not repulsed by the act, she only seems going to engage in want to do it as a matter of dynastic necessity.again.
* AmbiguouslyGay: It's hinted that she's aromantic and asexual. In a private argument, she tells her mother that she's never wanted a companion (despite having reached the age where she'd start feeling those desires) and expresses no interest in sexual intercourse for its own sake.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: She stole Armul (who was raised to be Wulf) from the Priory specifically because she knew that parents and children didn't have close relationships there. When she searches high and low with Tunuva to find him, it isn't ''just'' to get in her good books--it's because she really feels bad about making her think her child was dead.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: She stole Armul (who was raised to be Wulf) from the Priory specifically because she knew that parents and children didn't have close relationships there. When she searches high and low with Tunuva to find him, it isn't ''just'' to get in her good books--it's because she really feels bad about making her think her child was dead.assuming that a mother from the Priory would be less affected by the loss of a child.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: After a year of plague, invasion by wyrmspawn, and associated hardships, he makes a pact with the wyrm Taugran to become a Flesh King and crosses the line no previous Kuposa had--attacking the Nozikens directly. And then he sacrifices his grandniece to Taugran.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: After a year years of plague, poor harvest, invasion by wyrmspawn, and associated hardships, he makes a pact with the wyrm Taugran to become a Flesh King and crosses the line no previous Kuposa had--attacking the Nozikens directly. And then he sacrifices his grandniece to Taugran.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Marries the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys. Thankfully, he is glad that she's already made "arrangements" to get pregnant and simply sleeps in her bedroom one time, chastely, to give the illusion that he's the father.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Marries AltarDiplomacy:
** Her mother dispassionately informs Glorian that she's been betrothed to Mentendon's PrinceCharmless, much to Glorian's dismay. Sabran later undoes this agreement, but it's nothing to do with Glorian's feelings; it's because the diplomatic currents have shifted and the Yscals want the Mentendon connection, so Sabran will reward them with Glorian's hand. When Glorian protests being passed around like a commodity, Sabran informs her that she's going to go through this all with her own daughter one day.
** After her parents' untimely death, Glorian makes a quick marriage to the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda of Yscal (when the original betrothed prince dies) because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys.Thankfully, he is glad Most of the court has the grace to feel ashamed that they're asking a girl just of age to marry a man old enough to be her grandfather, but she goes through it anyway after getting an ironclad excuse to back out (namely, evidence that he's a wood-worshipper) because Inys still needs the cash. Fortunately, Guma isn't interested in sleeping with her either and is pleased she's already made "arrangements" "arranged" to get pregnant and simply pregnant--he just sleeps chastely in her bedroom room for one time, chastely, night to give the a plausible illusion that he's the father.
** Her mother dispassionately informs Glorian that she's been betrothed to Mentendon's PrinceCharmless, much to Glorian's dismay. Sabran later undoes this agreement, but it's nothing to do with Glorian's feelings; it's because the diplomatic currents have shifted and the Yscals want the Mentendon connection, so Sabran will reward them with Glorian's hand. When Glorian protests being passed around like a commodity, Sabran informs her that she's going to go through this all with her own daughter one day.
** After her parents' untimely death, Glorian makes a quick marriage to the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda of Yscal (when the original betrothed prince dies) because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys.
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* AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: He became the king of Hróth by defeating the man who murdered his aunt and persuading other clans to unite against their common foe.
* BoistrousBruiser: He's huge, brawny, and jovial. Wulf says that he never slaps you on the wrist when catching someone at a minor misdeed--he slaps you on the back, and it knocks you over.
* BoistrousBruiser: He's huge, brawny, and jovial. Wulf says that he never slaps you on the wrist when catching someone at a minor misdeed--he slaps you on the back, and it knocks you over.
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* AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: He became the king of Hróth by defeating the man who murdered his aunt and persuading other clans to unite against their common foe.
*BoistrousBruiser: BoisterousBruiser: He's huge, brawny, and jovial. Wulf says that he never slaps you on the wrist when catching someone at a minor misdeed--he slaps you on the back, and it knocks you over.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: She lost Sabran (Sabran I of Inys, that is), likely by simply ''outliving'' her as an immortal. It's also likely that Canthe never got to have a relationship with her either, given what we know from ''Priory'' about how she left Inys.
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* FeelingTheirAge: She's in her fifties and going through menopause. More than once Tunuva laments how her body takes much longer to recover or demands more sleep than it used to.
* NumberTwo: Though unofficial, she is Esbar's closest confidante and adviser. One reason Saghul chose Esbar was knowing that Tunuva was around to temper her.
* StepfordSmiler: She's never fully come to terms with her son's death in infancy and being around childbirth and babies is difficult for her as a result, though she does her best to conceal it from others. Canthe picks up on this and sympathizes, though she also uses it to manipulate.
* TraumaButton: Honey. She found the dead father of her child beneath a hive he was collecting from, bleeding into the honey, and her son presumably carried off by a wild lion.
* TraumaButton: Honey. She found the dead father of her child beneath a hive he was collecting from, bleeding into the honey, and her son presumably carried off by a wild lion.
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* {{Determinator}}: In her youth, she dragged herself from her drought-stricken province to wake a dragon in its shrine.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountain safety and setting an example in the temple's rules, Unora runs out with no gear to pursue the "saltwaker" who leaves and nearly dies of exposure. Dumai has no way to account for it until it becomes clear that Unora was trying to stop the capital from learning of Dumai's existence.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountain safety and setting an example in the temple's rules, Unora runs out with no gear to pursue the "saltwaker" who leaves and nearly dies of exposure. Dumai has no way to account for it until it becomes clear that Unora was trying to stop the capital from learning of Dumai's existence.
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* {{Determinator}}: In EstablishingCharacterMoment: Her first appearance (after her youth, she dragged herself from birth) is halfway up the Orange Tree. The other sisters consider this a serious act of sacrilege, demonstrating both Siyu's adventerous nature but also her drought-stricken province to wake a dragon in its shrine.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountain safety and setting an examplefaltering belief in the temple's rules, Unora runs out Priory's purpose.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Her ichneumeon dies and she (along withno gear to pursue her daughter, Tunuva, and Canthe) escape the "saltwaker" who leaves and nearly dies fiery destruction of exposure. Dumai has no way to account Carmentum by the skin of their teeth. Afterwards, she is deeply remorseful for it until it becomes clear that Unora was trying to stop leaving the capital from learning of Dumai's existence. Priory.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountain safety and setting an example
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Her ichneumeon dies and she (along with
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* HeroicSacrifice: When he ends up dangling over a ledge on the mountain Bhrazat and Dumai lacks the strength to pull him up, Kanifa cuts himself loose so she can survive.
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love with Dumai for years even though he knows she's only attracted to women.
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love with Dumai for years even though he knows she's only attracted to women.
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* HeroicSacrifice: When he ends up dangling over {{Determinator}}: In her youth, she dragged herself from her drought-stricken province to wake a ledge on the dragon in its shrine.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountainBhrazat safety and setting an example in the temple's rules, Unora runs out with no gear to pursue the "saltwaker" who leaves and nearly dies of exposure. Dumai lacks has no way to account for it until it becomes clear that Unora was trying to stop the strength to pull him up, Kanifa cuts himself loose so she can survive.
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love with Dumai for years even though he knows she's only attracted to women.capital from learning of Dumai's existence.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountain
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love with Dumai for years even though he knows she's only attracted to women.
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Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa clan.
Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa clan.
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Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa clan.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River Lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades HeroicSacrifice: When he ends up dangling over a ledge on the Nozikens could trust that mountain Bhrazat and Dumai lacks the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River Lord allies strength to pull him up, Kanifa cuts himself loose so she can survive.
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love withthe wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thoughtDumai for years even though he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: Heknows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly she's only attracted to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.women.
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love with
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought
* PuppetKing: He
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The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa
The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River Lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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[[folder:Lady Kuposa pa Nikeya]]
The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* FishOutOfWater: Just as Dumai is out of her element in court, Nikeya flounders when it comes to the rigors of travel at altitude.
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* FishOutOfWater: Just as Dumai is out of her element in court, Nikeya flounders when it comes to the rigors of travel at altitude.altitude and into dangerous places.
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* SeriouslyScruffy: For most of the story she is impeccably groomed because her beauty is one of her tools. When she turns up in Dumai's "court" after having traveled on foot for days, she's so filthy, thin, and exhausted that Dumai barely even recognizes her.
* ThisIsUnforgiveable: She abandons her father for good when she learns that he was the one who hired Emperor Jorodu's killers.
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[[folder:Kuposa fa Fotaja, the River Lord]]
The power behind the throne of Seiiki and Dumai's chief political foe. As his title indicates, he (nominally) manages the use of rivers throughout the land.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: After a year of plague, invasion by wyrmspawn, and associated hardships, he makes a pact with the wyrm Taugran to become a Flesh King and crosses the line no previous Kuposa had--attacking the Nozikens directly. And then he sacrifices his grandniece to Taugran.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: He is most often referred to just as "the River Lord" rather than by his given or family name.
* SkewedPriorities: Dumai soon learns that the previous River Lord--her grandfather--was actually an expert in irrigation and water management. Kuposa doesn't seem to do any of that himself.
* ThisIsUnforgiveable: She abandons her father for good when she learns that he was the one who hired Emperor Jorodu's killers.
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[[folder:Kuposa fa Fotaja, the River Lord]]
The power behind the throne of Seiiki and Dumai's chief political foe. As his title indicates, he (nominally) manages the use of rivers throughout the land.
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* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: After a year of plague, invasion by wyrmspawn, and associated hardships, he makes a pact with the wyrm Taugran to become a Flesh King and crosses the line no previous Kuposa had--attacking the Nozikens directly. And then he sacrifices his grandniece to Taugran.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: He is most often referred to just as "the River Lord" rather than by his given or family name.
* SkewedPriorities: Dumai soon learns that the previous River Lord--her grandfather--was actually an expert in irrigation and water management. Kuposa doesn't seem to do any of that himself.
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Daughter of Unora, the Maiden Officiant of a mountaintop temple. She is also the illegitimate daughter of the Seiikinese emperor, and this upends her life quickly into the story.
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Daughter of Unora, the Maiden Officiant of a mountaintop temple.the temple on Mount Ipyeda. She is also the illegitimate daughter of the Seiikinese emperor, and this upends her life quickly into the story.
* BrutalHonesty: She tends to respond to Nikeya's manipulations and insinuations with deliberately blunt speech in an effort both to annoy her and demonstrate that Dumai is wise to her games.
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* SpareToTheThrone: She's forced to return to the capital when her father, Emperor Jorodu, discovers her and decides to use her as an heir the Kaposas have no influence over.
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* SpareToTheThrone: She's forced to return to the capital when her father, Emperor Jorodu, discovers her and decides to use her as an heir the Kaposas Kuposas have no influence over.over. She notes in hindsight that it ''was'' odd for a godsinger to be instructed in multiple languages, so her mother must have suspected it would happen despite her efforts to hide Dumai.
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** Nikeya's epilogue suggests that rather than live (and be the cause of continued civil strive in Seiiki) or die on the beach, Dumai chose to return to Ipeyda and become its Maiden Officiant. Maybe.
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** Nikeya's epilogue suggests that rather than live (and be the cause of continued civil strive in Seiiki) or die on the beach, Dumai chose to return to Ipeyda Ipyeda and become its Maiden Officiant. Maybe.
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* HeroicLineage: He learns late in the story that his resistance to plague and cold are because he's the daughter of a mage from the Priory.
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* HeroicLineage: He learns late in the story that his resistance to plague and cold are because he's the daughter son of a mage from the Priory.
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* AffectionateNickname: Bardhold calls her "Ranna" in private.
* TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed: Like other Berethnet queens, she suffers from "shadows" that evoke clinical depression.
* TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed: Like other Berethnet queens, she suffers from "shadows" that evoke clinical depression.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Bardholt illustrates this when he describes Sabran as a warrior to their daughter. She may not
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* SilkHidingSteel: Bardholt illustrates this when he describes Sabran as a warrior to their daughter. She may not wield a sword, but she needs just as much fortitude and resolution to defend her country from threats within and without as he does.
* AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: He became the king of Hróth by defeating the man who murdered his aunt and persuading other clans to unite against their common foe.
* BoistrousBruiser: He's huge, brawny, and jovial. Wulf says that he never slaps you on the wrist when catching someone at a minor misdeed--he slaps you on the back, and it knocks you over.
* BoistrousBruiser: He's huge, brawny, and jovial. Wulf says that he never slaps you on the wrist when catching someone at a minor misdeed--he slaps you on the back, and it knocks you over.
* GeniusBruiser: Bardholt is known most for his prowess in combat, but he's also an extremely canny man. He knows exactly what's going on within his housecarls' lith, how to push and pull his vassals, and the steps he takes against the plague are ruthless but fully aware of the necessity of containment.
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** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of her skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].
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** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of her skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].vitiligo]].
* GoodIsNotNice: She has very little sympathy for Siyu or her lover and believes the right thing to do with him is to kill him.
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[[folder:Emperor Noziken pa Jorodu]]
Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa clan.
Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa clan.
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Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa clan.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River Lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades HeroicSacrifice: When he ends up dangling over a ledge on the Nozikens could trust that mountain Bhrazat and Dumai lacks the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River Lord allies strength to pull him up, Kanifa cuts himself loose so she can survive.
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love withthe wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thoughtDumai for years even though he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: Heknows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly she's only attracted to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.women.
* IncompatibleOrientation: He has been in love with
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought
* PuppetKing: He
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The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by the Kuposa
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River Lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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[[folder:Lady Kuposa pa Nikeya]]
The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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[[folder:Lady Kuposa pa Nikeya]]
The daughter and heir of the River Lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: Her poems to Dumai during the poetry game contain veiled threats against Kanifa.
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[[folder:Prioress Saghul]]
The Prioress at the beginning of the story. Saghul is measured and perceptive.
[[folder:Prioress Saghul]]
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A mysterious woman who arrives at the
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* TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed:
** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of her skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].
** After years of apparent good health, she starts feeling malaise and then goes into a steep decline. Later, the Priory's main healer finds a malignant growth and says that such things can develop for years, but the first symptoms herald a swift death--so it's apparent that Saghul died of stomach cancer.
* LetMeTellYouAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to illustrate her point. When she later does agree, Tuva reminds her of this exchange--Saghul replies "I merely voiced some thoughts on sun wine."
** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of her skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].
** After years of apparent good health, she starts feeling malaise and then goes into a steep decline. Later, the Priory's main healer finds a malignant growth and says that such things can develop for years, but the first symptoms herald a swift death--so it's apparent that Saghul died of stomach cancer.
* LetMeTellYouAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to illustrate her point. When she later does agree, Tuva reminds her of this exchange--Saghul replies "I merely voiced some thoughts on sun wine."
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* TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed:
**CallForward: Esbar banishes her from ever setting foot in the Priory again. Canthe points out that if she does ever choose to return, they'll ''never know'' because she can change her appearance--but she does promise not to do so while Tunuva lives. (This accounts for her having visited again under her real name of Kalyba during Ead's youth in ''Literature/ThePrioryOfTheOrangeTree.)
* MindControl: Althoughnot a ''disease'', the coloration of her skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].
** After years of apparent good health,she starts feeling malaise and then goes into a steep decline. Later, the Priory's main healer finds a malignant growth and says that such things can develop for years, but the first symptoms herald a swift death--so it's apparent that Saghul died of stomach cancer.
* LetMeTellYouAStory: Whentries to use MoreThanMindControl on Tunuva suggests by playing on her sympathies and seducing her, Canthe can't break her sense of duty and eventually just uses brute-force hypnosis to get what she needs from Cleolind's tomb.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: She stole Armul (who was raised to be Wulf) from the Priory specifically because she knew thatSiyu be given an assignment parents and children didn't have close relationships there. When she searches high and low with Tunuva to find him, it isn't ''just'' to get in her good books--it's because she really feels bad about making her think her child was dead.
* TragicVillain: She manipulates Tunuva at every turn, engineers the death of Siyu's lover to drive her out of the Priory, tries to break the trust between Tunuva and Esbar, inflicts a permanent magical injury on Tunuva, and attempts to rob the Priory of the Rising Jewel. Through it all, Canthe also shows genuine empathy for Tunuva's situation as a long-bereaved mother herself and admits that she didn't steal Wulf back because she knew he was happy with the Glenns. Although she can't forgive Canthe, Tunuva does recognize that she is probably the loneliest person in theLasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not entire world, and continuing in that state is punishment enough.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: It's soon clear that outliving everyonecan resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to illustrate everything around her point. When she later does agree, Tuva reminds her of this exchange--Saghul replies "I merely voiced some thoughts on sun wine."has done no favors for Canthe's general happiness.
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* MindControl: Although
** After years of apparent good health,
* LetMeTellYouAStory: When
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: She stole Armul (who was raised to be Wulf) from the Priory specifically because she knew that
* TragicVillain: She manipulates Tunuva at every turn, engineers the death of Siyu's lover to drive her out of the Priory, tries to break the trust between Tunuva and Esbar, inflicts a permanent magical injury on Tunuva, and attempts to rob the Priory of the Rising Jewel. Through it all, Canthe also shows genuine empathy for Tunuva's situation as a long-bereaved mother herself and admits that she didn't steal Wulf back because she knew he was happy with the Glenns. Although she can't forgive Canthe, Tunuva does recognize that she is probably the loneliest person in the
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: It's soon clear that outliving everyone
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Saghul's munguna, or second-in-command and successor. She is also Tunuva's romantic partner.
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[[folder:Prioress Saghul]]
The Prioress at the beginning of the story. Saghul is measured and
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* HotBlooded: Saghul describes her as a fire arrow, sure to reach its mark but heedless of what may be torn in its wake--which is why she needs Tunuva to keep her grounded.
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* HotBlooded: TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed:
** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of her skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].
** After years of apparent good health, she starts feeling malaise and then goes into a steep decline. Later, the Priory's main healer finds a malignant growth and says that such things can develop for years, but the first symptoms herald a swift death--so it's apparent that Saghuldescribes her as a fire arrow, sure to reach its mark but heedless died of what may be torn in its wake--which is why she needs stomach cancer.
* LetMeTellYouAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table tokeep illustrate her grounded.point. When she later does agree, Tuva reminds her of this exchange--Saghul replies "I merely voiced some thoughts on sun wine."
** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of her skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].
** After years of apparent good health, she starts feeling malaise and then goes into a steep decline. Later, the Priory's main healer finds a malignant growth and says that such things can develop for years, but the first symptoms herald a swift death--so it's apparent that Saghul
* LetMeTellYouAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to
[[folder:Munguna Esbar]]
Saghul's munguna, or second-in-command and successor. She is also Tunuva's romantic partner.
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* HotBlooded: Saghul describes her as a fire arrow, sure to reach its mark but heedless of what may be torn in its wake--which is why she needs Tunuva to keep her grounded.
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Saghul's munguna, or second-in-command and successor. She is also Tunuva's romantic partner.
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* HotBlooded: Saghul describes her as a fire arrow, sure to reach its mark but heedless of what may be torn in its wake--which is why she needs Tunuva to keep her grounded.
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Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord River Lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
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The daughter and heir of the River-lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* DaddysLittleVillain: Her mother did her best to raise Nikeya to be a good person, but after her death, the River-lord made his affection conditional on how well Nikeya worked for him.
* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed Dumai is to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against the wyrms, while meanwhile the River-lord uses it as an opportunity to keep consolidating power.
* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed Dumai is to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against the wyrms, while meanwhile the River-lord uses it as an opportunity to keep consolidating power.
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* DaddysLittleVillain: Her mother did her best to raise Nikeya to be a good person, but after her death, the River-lord River Lord made his affection conditional on how well Nikeya worked for him.
him and she responded.
* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed Dumai is to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against the wyrms, while meanwhilethe River-lord he uses it as an opportunity to keep consolidating power.
* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed Dumai is to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against the wyrms, while meanwhile
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* ThatRemindsMeOfAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to illustrate her point. When she later does agree, Tuva reminds her of this exchange--Saghul replies "I merely voiced some thoughts on sun wine."
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* ThatRemindsMeOfAStory: LetMeTellYouAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to illustrate her point. When she later does agree, Tuva reminds her of this exchange--Saghul replies "I merely voiced some thoughts on sun wine."
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* AmbiguouslyGay: She may be asexual. Although she isn't repulsed by the act, she notes that she's never had any real desire for it either and only seems to engage in it for dynastic necessity.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: She may be It's hinted that she's aromantic and asexual. Although In a private argument, she isn't tells her mother that she's never wanted a companion (despite having reached the age where she'd start feeling those desires) and expresses no interest in sexual intercourse for its own sake. Though not repulsed by the act, she notes that she's never had any real desire for it either and only seems to engage in it for as a matter of dynastic necessity.
* ScarsAreForever: Her fingers on one hand are partly severed from a frostbite injury when she was a girl. She's long since learned to adapt, so it doesn't trouble her, but the River Lord wants to use it as a way to discredit her when the plague and its initial symptoms of reddened fingers arrive in Seiiki.
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Dumai's mother. In her youth, she sought the palace to redress the wrong done to her father and conceived a child with Jorodu, but retreated to the safety of Mount Ipyeda to hide her daughter from court.
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* {{Determinator}}: In TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed:
** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of heryouth, skin is described in such a way as to evoke [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vitiligo vitiglio]].
** After years of apparent good health, shedragged herself from starts feeling malaise and then goes into a steep decline. Later, the Priory's main healer finds a malignant growth and says that such things can develop for years, but the first symptoms herald a swift death--so it's apparent that Saghul died of stomach cancer.
* ThatRemindsMeOfAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to illustrate herdrought-stricken province to wake a dragon in its shrine.point. When she later does agree, Tuva reminds her of this exchange--Saghul replies "I merely voiced some thoughts on sun wine."
** Although not a ''disease'', the coloration of her
** After years of apparent good health, she
* ThatRemindsMeOfAStory: When Tunuva suggests that Siyu be given an assignment in the Lasian court, Saghul tells a parable of how not everyone can resist the appeal of sun wine, while some can leave half in the glass, and then tips hers over the table to illustrate her
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up DumaiHotBlooded: Saghul describes her as a ruler who won't fire arrow, sure to reach its mark but heedless of what may be ruled by them.torn in its wake--which is why she needs Tunuva to keep her grounded.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai
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The daughter and heir of the River-lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* {{Determinator}}: In her youth, she dragged herself from her drought-stricken province to wake a dragon in its shrine.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountain safety and setting an example in the temple's rules, Unora runs out with no gear to pursue the "saltwaker" who leaves and nearly dies of exposure. Dumai has no way to account for it until it becomes clear that Unora was trying to stop the capital from learning of Dumai's existence.
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[[folder:Emperor Noziken pa Jorodu]]
Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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[[folder:Lady Kuposa pa Nikeya]]
The daughter and heir of the River-lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: After a lifetime of teaching Dumai about mountain safety and setting an example in the temple's rules, Unora runs out with no gear to pursue the "saltwaker" who leaves and nearly dies of exposure. Dumai has no way to account for it until it becomes clear that Unora was trying to stop the capital from learning of Dumai's existence.
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[[folder:Emperor Noziken pa Jorodu]]
Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and assassinates Jorodu.
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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[[folder:Lady Kuposa pa Nikeya]]
The daughter and heir of the River-lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Marries the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys. Thankfully, he is in agreement that they shouldn't consummate the marriage.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Marries the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys. Thankfully, he is in agreement glad that they shouldn't consummate she's already made "arrangements" to get pregnant and simply sleeps in her bedroom one time, chastely, to give the marriage.illusion that he's the father.
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter: Unlike her descendant Sabran IX, who avoids motherhood due to a fear of irrelevance, Glorian ''wants'' the diminished scrutiny that bearing her child will bring--once she's done that, she can act how she sees fit to defend Inys.
* TheJailBaitWait: For different reasons than usual. After Sabran VI dies, Glorian's court are all counting the days until she turns seventeen and can legally have sex because it's so vital that she have a successor popped out before the wyrms kill her.
* TheJailBaitWait: For different reasons than usual. After Sabran VI dies, Glorian's court are all counting the days until she turns seventeen and can legally have sex because it's so vital that she have a successor popped out before the wyrms kill her.
* AmbiguousEnding: It isn't ''confirmed'' that she is the new Maiden Officiant that Nikeya speaks to. But it's a possibility.
* DragonRider: She bonds with the royal dragon Furtia Stormcaller and rides all over the East on her back to try and shore up support with other rulers, then to form an independent "court" to help the people of Seiiki while the River-lord does nothing.
* DragonRider: She bonds with the royal dragon Furtia Stormcaller and rides all over the East on her back to try and shore up support with other rulers, then to form an independent "court" to help the people of Seiiki while the River-lord does nothing.
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* TakeAThirdOption: After her father is killed, Dumai decides that the best way to deal with the River-lord is to stop trying to play his game. She leaves the capital with Furtia to defend Seiiki's people directly.
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** After her father is killed, Dumaidecides sees that the best way rather than try to deal with outmaneuver the River-lord or submit to him, her best option is to stop trying to play his game. engaging with him entirely. She leaves the capital with Furtia to defend Seiiki's people directly.directly.
** Nikeya's epilogue suggests that rather than live (and be the cause of continued civil strive in Seiiki) or die on the beach, Dumai chose to return to Ipeyda and become its Maiden Officiant. Maybe.
** After her father is killed, Dumai
** Nikeya's epilogue suggests that rather than live (and be the cause of continued civil strive in Seiiki) or die on the beach, Dumai chose to return to Ipeyda and become its Maiden Officiant. Maybe.
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* TheJinx: He fears that he is a curse on the people around him when the dragons return, being the only one to survive Fýredel's attack on the royal ship and subsequent trip through lethally cold seas, the only one who can survive the plague, and eventually being left with only one other person from his lith alive.
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* TheJinx: He fears that he is a curse on the people around him when the dragons return, him, being the only one to survive Fýredel's attack on the royal ship and subsequent trip through lethally cold seas, the only one who can survive the plague, and eventually being left with only one other person from his lith alive.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: He is an eyewitness to Bardholt and Sabran's last moments as Fýredel burns their ship to ashes, then has to swim across a frigid sea dragging his mortally-injured friend with him to shore. Afterwards he finds it very difficult to willingly board a ship again.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: He's afraid of bees and has nightmares about their buzzing. It's a latent memory of being stolen from Lasia while his father was murdered collecting honey.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: He's afraid of bees and has nightmares about their buzzing. It's a latent memory of being stolen from Lasia while his father was murdered collecting honey.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: She's hurt by her mother's lack of affection and hurt more by the realization that her mother fears she'll be a weak ruler. Eventually she tells Sabran V that she will be a queen who is remembered for generations and that she will be enough. Although she regrets this conversation (as it is their last), Sabran VI is pleased to hear her daughter speak so strongly.
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* SpareToTheThrone: She's forced to return to the capital when her father, Emperor Jorondu, discovers her and decides to use her as an heir the Kaposas have no influence over.
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* SpareToTheThrone: She's forced to return to the capital when her father, Emperor Jorondu, Jorodu, discovers her and decides to use her as an heir the Kaposas have no influence over.
* RefugeInAudacity: As a girl, Sabran V goads her by asking if she'd like to be queen. Young Sabran answers that she couldn't unless Sabran V was dead--treasonously speaking of the monarch's death ''to her face'' because her great-grandmother couldn't punish another Berethnet.
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* HeroicLineage: Her clan carries a thread of siden-granted power--not much, but enough to use the Rising Jewel and to keep them immune to the plague.
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!Inys and the West
[[folder:Sabran VI, the Ambitious]]
Daughter of Marian III, or "Marian the Less," Sabran saved her country with a self-sought marriage alliance with Bardholt of Hróth after a century of misrule and discontent.
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* MamaBear: When an assassin comes for Glorian, Sabran shoves him away from her daughter with her own two hands.
* ParentsAsPeople: She loves Glorian, but she doesn't show it. When Bardholt argues with her over being too harsh, Sabran says that she can't allow Glorian to become a weak successor and return to the Century of Discontent.
* PoliticallyActivePrincess: Even as a child, Sabran was constantly working to counter the damage that her great-grandmother did to the country and her family, tries to advise Marian to use her authority more boldly, and sneaks off to propose marriage to Bardholt to forestall a Hróthi conquest of Inys.
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[[folder:King Bardholt Battlebold of Hróth]]
The first man to unite the warring clans of Hróth under a single monarch's rule. He married Sabran and converted to the Six Virtues at her proposal, bringing the North into Virtudom.
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* CrisisOfFaith: He found himself unable to believe in the Northern gods after they did nothing to intervene with the cruelties visited on his family. Sabran uses that to convince him to follow the teachings of Galian and the Six Virtues.
* GoodParents: Unlike Sabran, he treats Glorian with fatherly affection. One of the few arguments he has with his wife is not allowing Glorian the childhood that they were denied themselves.
* TheMagnificent: "Battlebold" is just one of the titles he's earned.
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!The East
[[folder:Unora, the Maiden Officiant]]
Dumai's mother. In her youth, she sought the palace to redress the wrong done to her father and conceived a child with Jorondu, but retreated to the safety of Mount Ipyeda to hide her daughter from court.
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* {{Determinator}}: In her youth, she dragged herself from her drought-stricken province to wake a dragon in its shrine.
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[[folder:Emperor Noziken pa Jorondu]]
Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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[[folder:Lady Kuposa pa Nikeya]]
The daughter and heir of the River-lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* DaddysLittleVillain: Her mother did her best to raise Nikeya to be a good person, but after her death, the River-lord made his affection conditional on how well Nikeya worked for him.
* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed Dumai is to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against the wyrms, while meanwhile the River-lord uses it as an opportunity to keep consolidating power.
* FishOutOfWater: Just as Dumai is out of her element in court, Nikeya flounders when it comes to the rigors of travel at altitude.
* InLoveWithTheMark: Her father ordered her to seduce Dumai, but Nikeya falls in love with her for real.
* ManipulativeBastard: Her nickname illustrates how maneuverable and adaptable she is. It makes it difficult for Dumai to trust her even after Nikeya starts being sincere.
!Inys and the West
[[folder:Sabran VI, the Ambitious]]
Daughter of Marian III, or "Marian the Less," Sabran saved her country with a self-sought marriage alliance with Bardholt of Hróth after a century of misrule and discontent.
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* MamaBear: When an assassin comes for Glorian, Sabran shoves him away from her daughter with her own two hands.
* ParentsAsPeople: She loves Glorian, but she doesn't show it. When Bardholt argues with her over being too harsh, Sabran says that she can't allow Glorian to become a weak successor and return to the Century of Discontent.
* PoliticallyActivePrincess: Even as a child, Sabran was constantly working to counter the damage that her great-grandmother did to the country and her family, tries to advise Marian to use her authority more boldly, and sneaks off to propose marriage to Bardholt to forestall a Hróthi conquest of Inys.
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[[folder:King Bardholt Battlebold of Hróth]]
The first man to unite the warring clans of Hróth under a single monarch's rule. He married Sabran and converted to the Six Virtues at her proposal, bringing the North into Virtudom.
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* CrisisOfFaith: He found himself unable to believe in the Northern gods after they did nothing to intervene with the cruelties visited on his family. Sabran uses that to convince him to follow the teachings of Galian and the Six Virtues.
* GoodParents: Unlike Sabran, he treats Glorian with fatherly affection. One of the few arguments he has with his wife is not allowing Glorian the childhood that they were denied themselves.
* TheMagnificent: "Battlebold" is just one of the titles he's earned.
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!The South
!The East
[[folder:Unora, the Maiden Officiant]]
Dumai's mother. In her youth, she sought the palace to redress the wrong done to her father and conceived a child with Jorondu, but retreated to the safety of Mount Ipyeda to hide her daughter from court.
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* {{Determinator}}: In her youth, she dragged herself from her drought-stricken province to wake a dragon in its shrine.
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[[folder:Emperor Noziken pa Jorondu]]
Dumai's father. He brings her to court in order to have an heir who is not controlled by
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* DidntSeeThatComing: For decades the Nozikens could trust that the Kuposa wouldn't commit actual violence against them for fear of offending the gods. That holds until the current River-lord allies himself with the wyrm Taugran and
-->'''Dumai:''' He thought he was winning and then he died.
* PuppetKing: He knows that the Kuposa clan controls everything and he doesn't like it. He works tirelessly to set up Dumai as a ruler who won't be ruled by them.
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[[folder:Lady Kuposa pa Nikeya]]
The daughter and heir of the River-lord. Known as the "Lady of Faces" in court, she attaches herself to Dumai as a part of her father's plans.
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* DaddysLittleVillain: Her mother did her best to raise Nikeya to be a good person, but after her death, the River-lord made his affection conditional on how well Nikeya worked for him.
* HeelFaceTurn: Nikeya begins to shed her father's influence when she sees just how committed Dumai is to enlisting the help of the dragon-gods against the wyrms, while meanwhile the River-lord uses it as an opportunity to keep consolidating power.
* FishOutOfWater: Just as Dumai is out of her element in court, Nikeya flounders when it comes to the rigors of travel at altitude.
* InLoveWithTheMark: Her father ordered her to seduce Dumai, but Nikeya falls in love with her for real.
* ManipulativeBastard: Her nickname illustrates how maneuverable and adaptable she is. It makes it difficult for Dumai to trust her even after Nikeya starts being sincere.
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* PartingWordsRegret: Her last conversation with her mother is tense, something she regrets after the royal ship is destroyed with all hands.
* BattleCouple: She and Esbar spar frequently and fight alongside each other when the wyrms return.
* LadyOfWar: She is a very accomplished and graceful warrior.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer:AllOfTheOtherReindeer: He's faced some suspicion in his life over being a foundling from the haithwood and has learned to keep it secret. Karlsten, one of his lith-brothers, openly despises him for it and in the end Wulfert is forced to kill him.
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* TheJinx: He fears that he is a curse on the people around him when the dragons return, being the only one to survive Fýredel's attack on the royal ship and subsequent trip through lethally cold seas, the only one who can survive the plague, and eventually being left with only one other person from his lith alive.
* ObliviousToLove: It takes him a while to realize that he and Thrit share a mutual attraction.
* ObliviousToLove: It takes him a while to realize that he and Thrit share a mutual attraction.
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[[folder:Glorian "Shieldheart" Berethnet III]]
The princess of Inys and daughter of Sabran VI. Glorian is fifteen when the story begins and uncertain of her place as the heir of her imposing mother.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Marries the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys. Thankfully, he is in agreement that they shouldn't consummate the marriage.
* AmbiguouslyGay: She may be asexual. Although she isn't repulsed by the act, she notes that she's never had any real desire for it either and only seems to engage in it for dynastic necessity.
* BringMyBrownPants: She wets herself when Fýredel confronts her in Ascalun, but it doesn't stop her from making a declaration of defiance anyway.
* TheMagnificent: Fýredel calls her "shieldheart" to mock her, but her subjects take it up as a rallying cry.
* TraumaCongaLine: She's raised knowing that the queens before her mother were awful and her mother purposely treats her distantly. Then she is abruptly orphaned when Fýredel torches the ship her parents are on. Then he dumps their scorched bones in front of her while torching her capital city. One of her loyal advisers turns out to be a heretic, she has to marry an old man and quickly try to get pregnant by a friend when she's just seventeen, and gives birth practically on a battlefield while her people burn and starve around her.
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[[folder:Noziken pa Dumai]]
Daughter of Unora, the Maiden Officiant of a mountaintop temple. She is also the illegitimate daughter of the Seiikinese emperor, and this upends her life quickly into the story.
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* FishOutOfWater: She was raised in a mountain temple and has no experience of courtly maneuvering.
* SpareToTheThrone: She's forced to return to the capital when her father, Emperor Jorondu, discovers her and decides to use her as an heir the Kaposas have no influence over.
* TakeAThirdOption: After her father is killed, Dumai decides that the best way to deal with the River-lord is to stop trying to play his game. She leaves the capital with Furtia to defend Seiiki's people directly.
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[[folder:Tunuva Melim]]
A sister of the Priory of the Orange Tree and keeper of the Mother's tomb.
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* DeathOfAChild: Her son Armul died when he was still a baby, and it haunts her still.
* ParentalFavoritism: Although she is not Siyu's birth mother, she treats the girl as affectionately as her own daughter.
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[[folder:Wulfert Glenn]]
A housecarl (or personal knight) to King Bardholt Battlebold.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer:
* HeroicLineage: He learns late in the story that his resistance to plague and cold are because he's the daughter of a mage from the Priory.
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[[folder:Glorian "Shieldheart" Berethnet III]]
The princess of Inys and daughter of Sabran VI. Glorian is fifteen when the story begins and uncertain of her place as the heir of her imposing mother.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Marries the seventy-year-old Guma Vetalda because of the wealth he will bring to a badly-battered Inys. Thankfully, he is in agreement that they shouldn't consummate the marriage.
* AmbiguouslyGay: She may be asexual. Although she isn't repulsed by the act, she notes that she's never had any real desire for it either and only seems to engage in it for dynastic necessity.
* BringMyBrownPants: She wets herself when Fýredel confronts her in Ascalun, but it doesn't stop her from making a declaration of defiance anyway.
* TheMagnificent: Fýredel calls her "shieldheart" to mock her, but her subjects take it up as a rallying cry.
* TraumaCongaLine: She's raised knowing that the queens before her mother were awful and her mother purposely treats her distantly. Then she is abruptly orphaned when Fýredel torches the ship her parents are on. Then he dumps their scorched bones in front of her while torching her capital city. One of her loyal advisers turns out to be a heretic, she has to marry an old man and quickly try to get pregnant by a friend when she's just seventeen, and gives birth practically on a battlefield while her people burn and starve around her.
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[[folder:Noziken pa Dumai]]
Daughter of Unora, the Maiden Officiant of a mountaintop temple. She is also the illegitimate daughter of the Seiikinese emperor, and this upends her life quickly into the story.
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* FishOutOfWater: She was raised in a mountain temple and has no experience of courtly maneuvering.
* SpareToTheThrone: She's forced to return to the capital when her father, Emperor Jorondu, discovers her and decides to use her as an heir the Kaposas have no influence over.
* TakeAThirdOption: After her father is killed, Dumai decides that the best way to deal with the River-lord is to stop trying to play his game. She leaves the capital with Furtia to defend Seiiki's people directly.
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[[folder:Tunuva Melim]]
A sister of the Priory of the Orange Tree and keeper of the Mother's tomb.
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* DeathOfAChild: Her son Armul died when he was still a baby, and it haunts her still.
* ParentalFavoritism: Although she is not Siyu's birth mother, she treats the girl as affectionately as her own daughter.
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[[folder:Wulfert Glenn]]
A housecarl (or personal knight) to King Bardholt Battlebold.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer:
* HeroicLineage: He learns late in the story that his resistance to plague and cold are because he's the daughter of a mage from the Priory.
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