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Dewicking Kick The Son Of A Bitch
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: In Chapter 18, he secretly slips something into [[HateSink Allocer's]] food that sends him to the toilet to vomit his guts out. Absolutely no one has a problem with this.
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Too fantastical.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when she's sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.
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* DoesNotLikeSpam: It turns out he can't stand raw tomatoes. Sothis outright calls him a child for discarding them from a meal. Bernadetta thinks it's [[CharmPoint endearing]].
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* DoesNotLikeSpam: It turns out he can't stand raw tomatoes. Sothis outright calls him a child for discarding them from a meal. Bernadetta thinks it's [[CharmPoint endearing]].endearing.
