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* GallowsHumor: Rainbloom, who was killed by supernatural rats, makes a joke like this at his own expense when appearing from [=SkyClan's=] afterlife to give Leafstar one of her lives. He says the life is "for dodging rat bites", then later clarifies it is for humor.
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* AmazonianBeauty: The Clans consider large and brawny cats attractive, regardless of gender, which automatically makes any molly who is big and/or muscular enough qualify as this trope (especially if she possesses other traits such as colorful markings or prominent scarring).
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* CoveredInScars: One of the Clans' main beauty standards thanks to their battle culture are prominent scars, the more the better. Brightheart and Frostfur are considered to be amongst their clan's most beautiful cats because of that.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Redtail, Hazeltail, Rowanclaw, Tigerheart (who also gets a GenderFlip and is female) and Thunder Storm are transgender now. Gray Wing and Hollylark are nonbinary, or to be more precise, a third gender that exists within the culture of the Clans.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Redtail, Hazeltail, Rowanclaw, Tigerheart (who also gets a GenderFlip and is female) and Thunder Storm are transgender now. Gray Wing and Hollylark are nonbinary, or to be more precise, There is also a third gender that exists within in the culture of the Clans.Clans, the gib or meewa (in clanmew). Meewa cats include Gray Wing, Pebble Heart, Owl Eyes, Goosefeather, Mumblefoot, Larksong, Snowkit, Cinderheart, Poppyfrost, Dovewing, Hollylark, Blackstar, Ratscar, Runningnose, Feathertail, Pebblefoot, Copperwing, Frostpaw, Tree and Skywatcher, and while Iceheart spends much of his life in a culture that does not have this gender, he connects with it when he joins the Clans. [[note]] Most of the cats are referred to by their canon pronouns for simplicity's sake, InUniverse because using a non-gendered pronoun wouldn't be quite accurate to a third gender and clanmew does not use gendered pronouns so the translators tried to approximate, out-of-universe to avoid confusion with the canon books, though "they" or a new pronoun like "xey/xem" is also acceptable. [[/note]] Twigbranch and Finleap don't fit in to any of the three genders; Twigbranch is agender and Finleap is multigender.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze, Toadstep, Thriftear, Plumstone, Sunstrike, Furzepelt, Brushblaze, Sedgecreek, Greenflower, Leafstar, Echosong and Smokefall (Smokefoot originally). There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze, Toadstep, Thriftear, Plumstone, Sunstrike, Furzepelt, Brushblaze, Sedgecreek, Greenflower, Leafstar, Echosong and Smokefall (Smokefoot originally). There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
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* AgainstTheGrain: Dustpelt, a tom loves tasks like construction which are stereotypically done by mollies and generally does not fit gender stereotypes, leading to his interests being discouraged by his Clanmates. To everyone's surprise, Firestar gets the extremely old construction expert One-eye to come out of retirement to train him, allowing him to pursue his goals.
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* ParentsAsPeople: Firestar, who remains the protagonist of the first arc, is a parent figure to Cloudtail (he would fully be considered Cloudtail's father except that, as an outsider to the Clans' culture, he flubbed the Queens' rights by declaring Cloudtail his nephew, so Bluestar compromised and made him his mentor). Firestar isn't always the best parent to him, but it's portrayed as due to his young age and all the stress he's dealing with rather than him just being an obstacle Cloudtail faces.
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* SelfPunishmentOverFailure: After losing his duel with Mudfur, Adderfang asks Pinestar to be given a dishonor title.
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** Although ''A Starless Clan'' has not been rewritten since it is not finished in canon, an explanation for why Nightheart feels pressured by his legacy is already set up. While in canon it is strange that he seems to be the only cat who feels pressured to live up to Firestar's legacy despite half of his Clan being descendants of Firestar and most of them doing nothing significant in their life. In the rewrite, the amount of Firestar descendants is severely cut (with Alderheart and Sparkpelt no longer being Squirrelflight's kits and Sorrelstripe and Spotfur not being Firestar descendants) and most of them did something extraordinary. Squirrelflight is Clan deputy, Leafpool discovered the moonpool, Jayfeather is a cleric who summoned [=StarClan=], Lionblaze is a legendary fighter, Dovewing played a great role in stopping the Dark Forest, Hollyleaf is the vessel of a god, Ivypool was a Light in the Mist, Bristlefrost sacrificed her afterlife to kill the BigBad of ''The Broken Code'' with terrifying powers, Thriftear is a prodigy warrior, and Finchlight played a crucial role in the rebellion against the tyrannical Ashfur. The only exceptions are Hollylark, who died young, Snaptooth and Flywhisker, who left to become kitty pets, and Flipclaw.
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Redtail, Hazeltail, Rowanclaw, Tigerheart (who also gets a GenderFlip and is female) and Thunder Storm are transgender now. Gray Wing is nonbinary, or to be more precise, a third gender that exists within the culture of the Clans.
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Redtail, Hazeltail, Rowanclaw, Tigerheart (who also gets a GenderFlip and is female) and Thunder Storm are transgender now. Gray Wing is nonbinary, or to be more precise, a third gender that exists within the culture of the Clans.
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** Although ''A Starless Clan'' has not been rewritten since it is not finished in canon, an explanation for why Nightheart feels pressured by his legacy is already set up. While in canon it is strange that he seems to be the only cat who feels pressured to live up to Firestar's legacy despite half of his Clan being descendants of Firestar and most of them doing nothing significant in their life. In the rewrite, the amount of Firestar descendants is severely cut (with Alderheart and Sparkpelt no longer being Squirrelflight's kits and Sorrelstripe and Spotfur not being Firestar descendants) and most of them did something extraordinary. Squirrelflight is Clan deputy, Leafpool discovered the moonpool, Jayfeather is a cleric who summoned [=StarClan=], Lionblaze is a legendary fighter, Dovewing played a great role in stopping the Dark Forest, Hollyleaf is the vessel of a god, Ivypool was a Light in the Mist, Bristlefrost sacrificed her afterlife to kill the BigBad of ''The Broken Code'' with terrifying powers, Thriftear is a prodigy warrior, and Finchlight played a crucial role in the rebellion against the tyrannical Ashfur. The only exceptions are Hollylark, who died young, Snaptooth and Flywhisker, who left to become kitty pets, kittypets, and Flipclaw.
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Redtail, Hazeltail, Rowanclaw, Tigerheart (who also gets a GenderFlip and is female) and Thunder Storm are transgender now. Gray Wingis and Hollylark are nonbinary, or to be more precise, a third gender that exists within the culture of the Clans.
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Redtail, Hazeltail, Rowanclaw, Tigerheart (who also gets a GenderFlip and is female) and Thunder Storm are transgender now. Gray Wing
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze, Toadstep, Thriftear, Plumstone, Sunstrike, Furzepelt, Brushblaze, Sedgecreek, Greenflower, Leafstar and Echoing. There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze, Toadstep, Thriftear, Plumstone, Sunstrike, Furzepelt, Brushblaze, Sedgecreek, Greenflower, Leafstar Leafstar, Echosong and Echoing.Smokefall (Smokefoot originally). There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
** Canon Ratscar trained in the Dark Forest but betrayed them in the Great Battle, but this Ratscar sides with them until the end and ends up being killed by Blackstar instead of Redwillow. He is also a fervent Brokenstar supporter.
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** Several names get changed due to OneSteveLimit - Tigerheart's leader name is now Heartstar, Cloudberry (the [=ThunderClan=] cleric who preceded Goosefeather) is Cloudbelly, Frecklewish (the [=SkyClan=] cleric) is Frecklewing, Rainfur (the [=SkyClan=] warrior) is Rainbloom, Mudclaw (Lizardstripe's mate in [=ShadowClan=]) is now Mudfoot, Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury is now Appledapple, Darkstar (the originator of the "leader's word is the Code" law is now Dalestar, Molewhisker from Code of the Clans is now Moletooth, Snaketooth from Code of the Clans is now Snakestream, Shimmerpelt the modern-day warrior is now Shimmerbright, Shadepelt who first appears in ''A Vision of Shadows'' is now Shademuzzle, Emberdawn from ''Leopardstar's Honor'' is now Emberdusk, and Mintfur from [=RiverClan=] is now Mintflower.
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** Several names get changed due to OneSteveLimit - Tigerheart's leader name is now Heartstar, Cloudberry (the [=ThunderClan=] cleric who preceded Goosefeather) is Cloudbelly, Frecklewish (the [=SkyClan=] cleric) is Frecklewing, Rainfur (the [=SkyClan=] warrior) is Rainbloom, Mudclaw (Lizardstripe's mate in [=ShadowClan=]) is now Mudfoot, Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury is now Appledapple, Darkstar (the originator of the "leader's word is the Code" law is now Dalestar, Molewhisker from Code of the Clans is now Moletooth, Snaketooth from Code of the Clans is now Snakestream, Shimmerpelt the modern-day warrior is now Shimmerbright, Shadepelt who first appears in ''A Vision of Shadows'' is now Shademuzzle, Emberdawn from ''Leopardstar's Honor'' is now Emberdusk, and Mintfur from [=RiverClan=] is now Mintflower.Mintflower, the modern [=ShadowClan=] Flowerstem is now Flowerscar, Seedpelt from ''Mapleshade's Vengeance'' is now Seedwhisker, Seedpelt from ''Pinestar's Choice'' is now Seedfall, the [=ThunderClan=] Oatwhisker is now Oatmeal, and [=ThunderClan=] Beechfur is now Beechfeather.
** Smokefoot is now named Smokefall to reflect him being a composite character with Smokepaw, who here survived his fall during the Great Journey.
** Smokefoot is now named Smokefall to reflect him being a composite character with Smokepaw, who here survived his fall during the Great Journey.
* BarredFromTheAfterlife: There is a myth in the Clans that cats who don't believe in [=StarClan=] and thus can't achieve that afterlife will be trapped on earth as roe deer.
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** Smokepaw doesn't die and is now the same cat as Smokefoot.Smokefoot, and he gets the name Smokefall.
** Ratscar is killed by Blackstar in the Great Battle, taking Redwillow's place.
** White-eye here is the name of One-eye's mate rather than being her original name.
** Pinenose's kit who was killed by the Dark Forest was variously named Happykit and Weaselkit by WordOfGod, here both kits exist and are siblings and only Weaselkit dies.
** Pinenose's kit who was killed by the Dark Forest was variously named Happykit and Weaselkit by WordOfGod, here both kits exist and are siblings and only Weaselkit dies.
* FriendlyRivalry: Oakfur, Morningflower and Rosepetal are all known for having trained many apprentices. They see each other at gatherings and have a friendly rivalry over just how many apprentices they have trained.
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* GiverOfLameNames: Bramblestar is considered a bad namer of warriors InUniverse for giving names where, despite fitting the cat in question, the combination of prefix and suffix sound weird (e.g Stemleaf, which implies a plant where a leaf serves as the stem). Ivypool's suffix gets some flak, though not as much as some of the others, due to the "passive-sounding" suffix not fitting her personality and it oddly referencing her controversial biological grandmother Leafpool's honor title. Everyone is also very disappointed that he doesn't give Stormcloud a cool honor title referencing the scars he got from surviving being hit by a car, while Mousewhisker's dishonor title of Stupidhead just sounds funny instead of properly punishing. One of the signs that he is being possessed by Ashfur is that the impostor is actually good at naming with his dishonor titles.
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* GiverOfLameNames: Bramblestar is considered a bad namer of warriors InUniverse for giving names where, despite fitting the cat in question, the combination of prefix and suffix sound weird (e.g Stemleaf, which weird. Blossomfall's litter is considered some of the worst in terms of naming: Stemleaf implies a plant where a leaf serves as the stem).stem, Plumstone doesn't use the same word used for an actual plum stone (the nut in the center of the plum) and just seems to oddly imply something like a plum made of stone or a stone that looks like a plum, and Shellfur oddly pairs a prefix supposed to convey strength and toughness in structure with a suffix that focuses on the beauty and texture of his fur. Ivypool's suffix gets some flak, though not as much as some of the others, due to the "passive-sounding" suffix not fitting her personality and it oddly referencing her controversial biological grandmother Leafpool's honor title. Everyone is also very disappointed that he doesn't give Stormcloud a cool honor title referencing the scars he got from surviving being hit by a car, while Mousewhisker's dishonor title of Stupidhead just sounds funny instead of properly punishing. One of the signs that he is being possessed by Ashfur is that the impostor is actually good at naming with his dishonor titles.
* HomosexualReproduction: Hollylark is a product of Fallenleaf accidentally using her powers as a god to impregnate her mate Cinderheart.
** Mapleshade's name doesn't just refer to the shade created by a single tree but the understory in general, and the prefix actually more accurately refers to a sycamore.
** Mistystar's name specifically refers to the dewy mist in the morning. It references how this mist was present when Oakheart first took the kits from Bluestar.
** Mistystar's name specifically refers to the dewy mist in the morning. It references how this mist was present when Oakheart first took the kits from Bluestar.
* MaliciousMisnaming: Mistystar's Clan name as a warrior was Sooheffepwyyarr, and as a result she was sometimes called by the nickname "Son" by her siblings. Blackclaw, her former mate, also calls her this, though it's meant as an insult, both mocking their former relationship and disrespecting her official title as a leader.
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* MeaningfulRename:MeaningfulRename: Besides the typical changes from kit to apprentice to warrior to leader, there are also name changes made by a cat who joins the Clans and, more commonly, honor titles which are given for some achievement or surviving a serious injury.
** One-eye was originally named Pheasantfeather before getting One-Eye as an Honor Title.
** Rather than Scorchwind being Raggedstar's brother, it is now his original name before he got Raggedpelt as an honor title.
** Rather than Scorchwind being Raggedstar's brother, it is now his original name before he got Raggedpelt as an honor title.
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* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Tawnyspots is now the father of Thrushpelt and Dappletail rather than their brother. Patchpelt is now Willowpelt's [[GenderFlip mother]] rather than her brother. Foxheart is Wolfstep's mother instead of sister. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are now the kits of Rowanberry, Yellowfang's sister, instead of Yellowfang's mother Brightflower. Mallownose and Sneezecloud are cousins instead of siblings, with Pouncetail as Mallownose's new father. Frecklewish and Birchface are Oakstar's niece and nephew instead of his children.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are biologically Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed), though Echosong is still not involved in raising them at all and is just a surrogate. Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are biologically Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed), though Echosong is still not involved in raising them at all and is just a surrogate. Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep.
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* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Tawnyspots is now the father of Thrushpelt and Dappletail rather than their brother. Patchpelt is now Willowpelt's [[GenderFlip mother]] rather than her brother. Foxheart is Wolfstep's mother instead of sister. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are now the kits of Rowanberry, Yellowfang's sister, instead of Yellowfang's mother Brightflower. Mallownose and Sneezecloud are cousins instead of siblings, with Pouncetail as Mallownose's new father. Frecklewish and Birchface are Oakstar's niece and nephew instead of his children.children, with Shinecloud as his sister rather than mate. Halftail is One-eye's son instead of her mate, as One-eye is now [[AgeLift considerably older]] to match with her being portrayed as the oldest elder in the first arc. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kits, Ravenpaw and Dustpelt are now their grandkits, the children of Chestnutkit who survives to become the warrior Chestnutface here.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are biologically Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed), though Echosong is still not involved in raising them at all and is just a surrogate. Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep. While Shinecloud is still Birchface and Frecklewish's mother as per WordOfGod, Beetail is their father instead of Oakstar, and Flowerpot and Nettlebreeze are their half-siblings (Beetail's kits but not Shinecloud's). Squirrelwhisker is Beetail's sister. Seedpelt (''Pinestar's Choice'') is now named Seedfall and is Adderfang's sister.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are biologically Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed), though Echosong is still not involved in raising them at all and is just a surrogate. Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep. While Shinecloud is still Birchface and Frecklewish's mother as per WordOfGod, Beetail is their father instead of Oakstar, and Flowerpot and Nettlebreeze are their half-siblings (Beetail's kits but not Shinecloud's). Squirrelwhisker is Beetail's sister. Seedpelt (''Pinestar's Choice'') is now named Seedfall and is Adderfang's sister.
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** Both Chestnutkit and Tulipkit, Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's first litter named in the official family tree, survive to become the warriors Chestnutface and Tulipflight.
** Redwillow is not killed by Blackstar in the Great Battle, with Ratscar dying this way instead.
** Redwillow is not killed by Blackstar in the Great Battle, with Ratscar dying this way instead.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze, Toadstep, Thriftear, Plumstone, Sunstrike, Furzepelt, Brushblaze, Sedgecreek and Greenflower. There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze, Toadstep, Thriftear, Plumstone, Sunstrike, Furzepelt, Brushblaze, Sedgecreek Sedgecreek, Greenflower, Leafstar and Greenflower.Echoing. There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are biologically Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed). Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are biologically Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed).spayed), though Echosong is still not involved in raising them at all and is just a surrogate. Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are now Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed). Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Redtail and Spottedleaf are now Rosetail's kits instead of Adderfang and Swiftbreeze's. Instead of being Robinwing and Fuzzypelt's kit, Frostfur is the biological daughter of Featherwhisker adopted by Stonepelt and Weedwhisker. Sandstorm and Longtail are siblings and the kits of Redtail and Runningwind. Swiftpaw is Tigerstar's son. Dovewing and Ivypool are Lionblaze and Cinderheart's children (biologically Jayfeather and Poppyfrost's and adopted by them) instead of Whitewing and Birchall's. Sparkpelt and Alderheart are Jessy's kits instead of Squirrelflight's. Onestar no longer has siblings. Graystripe and Darkstripe are Dappletail's kits instead of Willowpelt's. Marigoldkit and Mintkit are Rowanberry's kits instead of Brightflower's. Littlecloud and Rowanclaw are brothers and are Brokenstar's kits. Pebble Heart, Sparrow Fur (now Sparrow Heart) and Owl Eyes are still Turtle Heart (Turtle Tail) and Tom's biological kits adopted by Gray Wing, though Bumble is now also their adoptive mother and Turtle Heart's mate. Hollyleaf, now called Fallenleaf after her ordeal in the tunnels, is now Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and [[CompositeCharacter Hollylark's]] other mother. Rainflower is now the grandchild of Appledusk instead of Shellheart (making Crookedstar still his great grandson), with Duskwater as the kit of Appledusk and Reedshine who becomes Rainflower's mother. Silver Stripe and White Tail are now Sun Shadow's kits instead of Gray Wing and Slate's (Black Ear is now in Rainswept Flower's family). Graystripe is actually Fang/Honeysuckle's father, though neither of them know it. Sparrowpelt and Sandynose are siblings. Quailfeather, Birdwing and Finleap are kits of Sandynose and Egg. Voletooth is the father of Mintfur's kittens. Cherrytail's kits are now biologically Echosong's instead (Cherrytail is spayed). Rockshade is the father of Plumwillow's kittens (which no longer includes Finleap). Rainstorm and Rippletail are the kits of Swallowtail and Rainwhisker. Shell Claw is Acorn Swoop (Acorn Fur) and Red Claw's kit instead of Thunder and Violet Dawn's. Appledapple (a renamed Applefur from Tigerclaw's Fury) is now Snowbird and Ratscar's mother. Aspentail is Darkstar's sister and Perchshine (Perchpaw) is her kit with Splashheart. Greenflower and Duckfur (a WordOfGod-given "missing kit" who here lives to become a warrior) are siblings. She is mates with Sedgecreek and Swallowtail is their daughter (the biological kit of Greenflower and honor sire Loudbelly). Swansong (Graypool and Rippleclaw's son) is now Mosspelt's mate instead of Frogleap and the father of her kits, which include Stonestream in addition to Mosspelt's canon offspring Dawnflower and Willowshine. Stonestream in turn is the father of Mossyfoot and Troutstream. Shadepelt is the mother of Pouncetail and Graymist. Gullswoop is the daughter of Ivytail and Darktail instead of Snowbird and Scorchfur, and Ivytail herself is the daughter of Fernshade and Wolfstep.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze and Toadstep. There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
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* AdaptationalSexuality: While canon Warriors never had any officially gay or bisexual cats due to ExecutiveMeddling (though the Ravenpaw/Barley and Tallstar/Jake pairings were stated to be intentional by WordOfGod), this rewrite features many queer cats who show interest in the same gender (whether exclusively or in addition to the other) like Bluestar, Hollyleaf, Dovewing, Redtail, Runningwind, Stonepelt, Weedwhisker, Tigerheart, Ivypool, Heathertail, Cinderheart, Blackstar, Russetfur, Reedwhisker, Hawkfrost, Violetshine, Lionblaze Lionblaze, Toadstep, Thriftear, Plumstone, Sunstrike, Furzepelt, Brushblaze, Sedgecreek and Toadstep.Greenflower. There are also aromantic cats (Firestar, Blackstar, Rosetail) and both aromantic and asexual cats (Longtail, Rosepetal, Twigbranch).
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* ChangedMyMindKid: Gray Wing initially supports Bumble being kicked out of [=ShadowClan=], but Thunder Storm's insistence that it was unjust inspires them to appear just in time to help Thunder Storm save Bumble from Clear Sky.
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* ConvenientlyTimedDistraction: While Squirrelflight revealing she isn't the Three's biological mother doesn't stop Ashfur from trying to kill them as in canon, it does distract him enough that she is able to land a blow against him.
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** While Tigerstar is the leader of the Dark Forest cats during their plan to overthrow their leadership and take over as the dominant afterlife, it's Hawkfrost who acts as the diplomat able to accomplish the near-impossible task of uniting the Dark Forest cats with [[WeAreStrugglingTogether wildly differing ideologies]] towards a common goal.
** [[CunningLinguist Bumble]] serves as this for ancient [=ThunderClan=], with her outgoing and warm personality and knowledge of three languages allowing her to create diplomatic relations with other groups effectively.
** While Tigerstar is the leader of the Dark Forest cats during their plan to overthrow their leadership and take over as the dominant afterlife, it's Hawkfrost who acts as the diplomat able to accomplish the near-impossible task of uniting the Dark Forest cats with [[WeAreStrugglingTogether wildly differing ideologies]] towards a common goal.
** [[CunningLinguist Bumble]] serves as this for ancient [=ThunderClan=], with her outgoing and warm personality and knowledge of three languages allowing her to create diplomatic relations with other groups effectively.
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* TheGoodTheBadAndTheEvil: Done with the three political factions of the Clans. Fire Alone is the "good" ideology which treats outsiders with respect and is willing to change some of the harsher practices of the Clans that lead to constant battles and xenophobia. Thistle Law is the clearly "evil" ideology, accentuating normal Clan obsession with war and discrimination against outsiders, rejecting some of the more merciful parts of the Code like the Queens' Rights and being the cause of much violence and tragedy throughout the series. Traditionalism represents the "bad" middle ground, still seeing Clan loyalty and Code-following as important in a way that has led to much violence and destruction in itself, but respecting softer parts of the Code and not going as far in its violence as Thistle Law. This dynamic is embodied by the Traditionalist Mistystar, who is responsible for cruel actions of her own in enforcing the Code when the Imposter is in power in the rewritten ''The Broken Code'', but nonetheless recognizes Thistle Law as the enemy and does everything she can to root it out.
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* PositionOfLiteralPower: In addition to the Clan leaders having nine lives like in canon, other groups have powers given to a significant position to show that they are not supernaturally inferior to the Clans. Tribe Stonetellers are immune to illness and consequentially live very long times for a cat (often living 30 years or so), and the Guardians' leaders can sense what is happening in their territory, like the needs of plants or whether a new cat has arrived there.
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* SpikyHair: Lionblaze has a spiky mane, though he goes "bald" after losing his powers.
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* SpikyHair: Lionblaze has a spiky mane, though he goes "bald" after losing his powers.
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* SpikyHair: Lionblaze has a spiky mane, though he goes "bald" StumblingInTheNewForm: Fallenleaf/Hollyleaf walks very awkwardly and unsteadily after losing his powers.taking her body back form Sol, given that she has been a ghost without a physical body for 100 years.
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* NonHeteronormativeSociety: Clan cats have a concept of three genders, with their associated stereotypes that are different from those used by human societies and more reflect real-life cats, and accept same-gender couples and transgender cats just as well as they accept opposite-gender couples and cisgender cats (though they can still pressure cats like Dustpelt who are not transgender but do not fit the stereotypes of the gender they identify as to be more conforming).
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* NonHeteronormativeSociety: Clan cats have a concept of three genders, with their associated stereotypes that are different from those used by human societies and more reflect real-life cats, and accept same-gender couples and transgender cats just as well as they accept opposite-gender couples and cisgender cats (though they can still pressure cats like Dustpelt who are not transgender but do not fit the stereotypes of the gender they identify as to be more conforming). The cultural concept of parenthood also involves a primary parent who does most of the caretaking and secondary parents, a concept which is completely gender-neutral.
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* OneSteveLimit: Whichever is the least important of two characters who originally shared the same name has their name changed. This applies to leaders as well; upon becoming leader Tigerheart becomes Heartstar to avoid being another Tigerstar when there is a previous one in living memory.
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* OneSteveLimit: Whichever is the least important of two characters who originally shared the same name has their name changed. There's a reason for this in-universe - when leaders take apprentices to the Moonstone/Moonpool, they contact [=Starclan=] themselves to ensure the name [[InvokedTrope hasn't already been taken by another cat who is in [=StarClan=]]]. This applies to leaders as well; upon becoming leader Tigerheart becomes Heartstar to avoid being another Tigerstar when there is a previous one in living memory.
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* DeaderThanDead: In addition to it being possible to kill a spirit from [=StarClan=] or the Dark Forest as in canon, removing them from any afterlife, being killed by One-eye destroys the soul so that you don't go to an afterlife.
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* DevourTheDragon: Clear Sky is an important ally for Ashfur in his plan to possess Bramblestar and take over [=StarClan=] to enforce the code, but in the final confrontation Ashfur consumes his spirit to make himself more powerful.
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** Thrushwing dies in the [=WindClan=] massacre instead of her sister Stoneclaw.
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** There are several other male to female gender flips. Spiderstar (to allow for more female leaders), Patchpelt, Shattered Frost (Shattered Ice) and Sandynose are all female.
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** There are several other male to female gender flips. Spiderstar (to allow for more female leaders), Patchpelt, Shattered Frost (Shattered Ice) and Ice), Sandynose and Stoneclaw are all female.
** Stoneclaw is not killed during the [=WindClan=] massacre, with her sister Thrushwing dying instead.
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* WillingChanneler: Harry is happy to become Sol's vessel due to the power it gives him.
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* WillingChanneler: WillingChanneler:
** Harry is happy to become Sol's vessel due to the power it giveshim.him.
** Lion's Roar initially willingly allows himself to be possessed by One-Eye as a mutual alliance to defeat Hollyleaf, though One-Eye refuses to let him go even after they have defeated her.
** Harry is happy to become Sol's vessel due to the power it gives
** Lion's Roar initially willingly allows himself to be possessed by One-Eye as a mutual alliance to defeat Hollyleaf, though One-Eye refuses to let him go even after they have defeated her.
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* VillainProtagonist: Besides Mapleshade's Vengeance being preserved as it is in canon, Brokenstar now takes the POV from Yellowfang in the ''Yellowfang's Secret'' equivalent, ''Brokenstar's Catalysm'', in which he performs villainous actions like killing his father and ending the book by launching a brutal raid on [=WindClan=].
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* VillainProtagonist: Besides Mapleshade's Vengeance being preserved as it is in canon, Brokenstar now takes the POV from Yellowfang in the ''Yellowfang's Secret'' equivalent, ''Brokenstar's Catalysm'', Cataclysm'', in which he performs villainous actions like killing his father and ending the book by launching a brutal raid on [=WindClan=].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Snowtuft ended up in the Dark Forest for killing a whole family including the kits, except for one kit who he stole, during the crusades against the human town. He doesn't get punished for it since it's technically considered acceptable by the code to hurt outsiders, but his Clan isn't happy about it and never looks at him the same way again.
* Runningnose, with Brokenstar's permission, poisons Marigoldkit in order to frame Yellowfang. This allows them to exile her, getting the biggest opponent of their planned attack on [=WindClan=] out of the way.
* Runningnose, with Brokenstar's permission, poisons Marigoldkit in order to frame Yellowfang. This allows them to exile her, getting the biggest opponent of their planned attack on [=WindClan=] out of the way.
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* WouldHurtAChild: WouldHurtAChild:
** Snowtuft ended up in the Dark Forest for killing a whole family including the kits, except for one kit who he stole, during the crusades against the human town. He doesn't get punished for it since it's technically considered acceptable by the code to hurt outsiders, but his Clan isn't happy about it and never looks at him the same way again.
* ** Runningnose, with Brokenstar's permission, poisons Marigoldkit in order to frame Yellowfang. This allows them to exile her, getting the biggest opponent of their planned attack on [=WindClan=] out of the way.
** Snowtuft ended up in the Dark Forest for killing a whole family including the kits, except for one kit who he stole, during the crusades against the human town. He doesn't get punished for it since it's technically considered acceptable by the code to hurt outsiders, but his Clan isn't happy about it and never looks at him the same way again.
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* Runningnose, with Brokenstar's permission, poisons Marigoldkit in order to frame Yellowfang. This allows them to exile her, getting the biggest opponent of their planned attack on [=WindClan=] out of the way.
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* TheWorfEffect: Tigerstar's final battle with Firestar in ''Omen of the Stars'' is set up by him being seemingly unstoppable during the rest of the battle, managing to kill formidable fighters like Hawkfrost, Blackstar and Iceheart (though the last two are [[WorfHadTheFlu quite old by this time]], while Tigerstar as a spirit is physically in the prime of his life). Even before this, he easily brutally mauls Hawkfrost for turning against him, which is impressive due to Hawkfrost being shown to be the strongest fighter in the Dark Forest besides Tigerstar himself.
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* TheWorfEffect: Tigerstar's final battle with Firestar in ''Omen of the Stars'' is set up by him being seemingly unstoppable during the rest of the battle, managing to kill formidable fighters like Hawkfrost, Blackstar and Iceheart (though the last two are [[WorfHadTheFlu quite old by this time]], while Tigerstar as a spirit is physically in the prime of his life). Even before this, he easily brutally mauls Hawkfrost for turning against him, which is impressive due to Hawkfrost being shown to be the strongest fighter in the Dark Forest besides Tigerstar himself.
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* WiseTree: Brokenstar is the AnthropomorphicPersonification of [=SkyClan's=] tree in fourtrees and thus of the pain caused by [=SkyClan's=] exile. While initially a rare evil example of the trope, he ends up transforming into a benevolent guardian tree of [=SkyClan=] at the end of ''Firestar's Quietus''.
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* WiseTree: Brokenstar is the AnthropomorphicPersonification of [=SkyClan's=] tree in fourtrees and thus of the pain caused by [=SkyClan's=] exile. While initially a rare evil example of the trope, villain, he ends up transforming into a benevolent guardian tree of [=SkyClan=] at the end of ''Firestar's Quietus''.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Ashfur believes that killing Hollyleaf, Lionblaze and Jayfeather will protect the Clans due to the danger of having cats more powerful than [=StarClan=], and this and the fact he did not work with Hawkfrost here lead to [=StarClan=] accepting him. However he is still the CrazyJealousGuy he is in canon and is also partially motivated by wanting to cause Squirrelflight pain.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: WellIntentionedExtremist:
** Ashfur believes that killing Hollyleaf, Lionblaze and Jayfeather will protect the Clans due to the danger of having cats more powerful than [=StarClan=], and this and the fact he did not work with Hawkfrost here lead to [=StarClan=] accepting him. However he is still the CrazyJealousGuy he is in canon and is also partially motivated by wanting to cause Squirrelflight pain.
** Ashfur believes that killing Hollyleaf, Lionblaze and Jayfeather will protect the Clans due to the danger of having cats more powerful than [=StarClan=], and this and the fact he did not work with Hawkfrost here lead to [=StarClan=] accepting him. However he is still the CrazyJealousGuy he is in canon and is also partially motivated by wanting to cause Squirrelflight pain.
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* UndeathAlwaysEnds: Firestar, Brokenstar and the reconstituted [=SkyClan=] are ultimately able to defeat the rats and allow the spirits of cats they once were to rest.
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* UndeathAlwaysEnds: [=SkyClan=] is plagued by rats which are actually the spirits of their dead ancestors that, due to [=SkyClan=] being exiled from the other Clans and their ancestors being thus separated from the other Clan's afterlife of [=StarClan=], cannot fade away like normal spirits. Firestar, Brokenstar and the reconstituted [=SkyClan=] SkyClan are ultimately able to defeat the rats and allow the spirits of cats they once were to rest.
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* ThreadOfProphecySevered: Thistleclaw was supposed to become leader and Mosskit was supposed to be the hero who overthrew him. Then Bluestar manages to get Mosskit killed and in the process become deputy instead of Thistleclaw, completely breaking the prophecy.
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* ThreadOfProphecySevered: Thistleclaw was supposed to become leader and Mosskit was supposed to be the hero who overthrew him. Then Bluestar manages to get Mosskit killed and in succeed to the process become deputy instead leader position instead, at the cost of Thistleclaw, Mosskit's life, completely breaking the prophecy.
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** Hawkfrost, despite fighting with Tigerstar for most of the Great Battle, objects to him and turns against him after Tigerstar suggests trying to kill everyone, even the noncombatants, in a VillainLastStand. He gets brutally attacked by Tigerstar for it and, despite Ivypool getting him to the Dark Forest in time to avoid being fully DeaderThanDead, he remains in a. state of flickering half-existence afterwards.
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** Hawkfrost, despite fighting with Tigerstar for most of the Great Battle, objects to him and turns against him after Tigerstar suggests trying to kill everyone, even the noncombatants, in a VillainLastStand.LastVillainStand. He gets brutally attacked by Tigerstar for it and, despite Ivypool getting him to the Dark Forest in time to avoid being fully DeaderThanDead, he remains in a. state of flickering half-existence afterwards.
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* ShownTheirWork: Bonefall has several posts detailing the herbs cats use, created by doing research into what effects various herbs that can be found in northern England have on humans and removing the ones that are toxic to cats. They note you should not use these herbs on your real cats since they aren't actually tested in cats, but it's more research than the authors put into herbs in the canon books.
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* ShownTheirWork: Bonefall has several posts detailing the herbs cats use, created by doing research into what effects various herbs that can be found in northern England have on humans and removing the ones that are toxic to cats. They note you should not use these herbs on your real cats since they aren't actually tested in cats, but it's more research than the authors put into herbs in the canon books. Bonefall also researches the ecology of the areas of northern England that the AU is set in, in contrast to canon's many instances of MisplacedWildlife.
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* SaveTheJerk: While Bramblestar isn't nearly as bad as Ashfur, he is still a very flawed person who is abusive to Squirrelflight, leading to them breaking off their relationship. Nonetheless Squirrelflight is determined to save him when his body gets possessed by Ashfur, because [[AllLovingHero that's what she would do for anyone.]]
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* SaveTheJerk: While Bramblestar isn't nearly is portrayed as bad as Ashfur, he is still a very flawed person cat who is abusive to Squirrelflight, leading to them breaking off their relationship. Nonetheless Squirrelflight is determined to save him when his body gets possessed by Ashfur, [[spoiler:Ashfur]], because [[AllLovingHero that's what she would do for anyone.]]
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* SelfPunishmentOverFailure: Spiderleg offers himself up for punishment by Ashfur/"Bramblestar" due to him siding with the Dark Forest and killing his own son Toadstep.
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* RetiredMonster: Scourge joins [=ThunderClan=], where he lives a peaceful life despite his past as the ruthless leader of [=BloodClan=] (though he is not as cruel as he was in canon).
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* RetiredMonster: RetiredMonster:
** Scourge joins [=ThunderClan=], where he lives a peaceful life despite his past as the ruthless leader of [=BloodClan=] (though he is not as cruel as he was in canon).
** Scourge joins [=ThunderClan=], where he lives a peaceful life despite his past as the ruthless leader of [=BloodClan=] (though he is not as cruel as he was in canon).
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* RebelliousRebel: Tall Shadow breaks off from [=SkyClan=] with a good portion of the Clan due to anger at Clear Sky's actions, and Thunder Storm in turn decides to break off and create a new Clan because Tall Shadow not taking Bumble into the group after Turtle Heart's death makes Thunder Storm see her as no different from Clear Sky.
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* RebelliousRebel: Tall Shadow breaks off from [=SkyClan=] with a good portion of the Clan due to anger at Clear Sky's actions, actions of kicking out cats for their disabilities, and Thunder Storm in turn decides to break off and create a new Clan because Tall Shadow not taking Bumble into the group after Turtle Heart's death due to being a house cat incapable of fighting makes Thunder Storm see her as no different from Clear Sky.
